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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - beykid44 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:25 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: opening post has been updated with new beys for Season 2. (Some names are subject to change)

reeeeee theyve been inffected by changing mc every season


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - EarthHelios - Nov. 11, 2020

When will the next chapter be out


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:30 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: When will the next chapter be out

doing last minute homework right now (this is what happens when you procrastinate) but i might try to work on it some before i go to bed tonight.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - EarthHelios - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:33 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 11, 2020  12:30 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: When will the next chapter be out

doing last minute homework right now (this is what happens when you procrastinate) but i might try to work on it some before i go to bed tonight.

oh ok


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - beykid44 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:33 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 11, 2020  12:30 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: When will the next chapter be out

doing last minute homework right now (this is what happens when you procrastinate) but i might try to work on it some before i go to bed tonight.

my fanfic is ded it was forgotten Unhappy


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So after hours of deciding, we have ourselves a winner!!


OH MY GOD!!! THANK YOU!!!

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:03 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Nov. 11, 2020  12:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So after hours of deciding, we have ourselves a winner!!


pain


Cthulhu, the mythical creature I based my Bey off, looks like a kraken.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - beykid44 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  1:15 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 11, 2020  12:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So after hours of deciding, we have ourselves a winner!!


OH MY GOD!!! THANK YOU!!!

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:03 AM)beykid44 Wrote: pain


Cthulhu, the mythical creature I based my Bey off, looks like a kraken.

ik i played a game called call of cthullu dark corners of the earth its good


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  12:33 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 11, 2020  12:30 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: When will the next chapter be out

doing last minute homework right now (this is what happens when you procrastinate) but i might try to work on it some before i go to bed tonight.

You don't procrastinate, you wait until the last minute to do things because you will be older, and therefore, wiser.
[Image: tenor.gif]


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 11, 2020

Blader name of Lunatic Cthulhu will be Chiki Sakurai


Name: Chiki Sakurai

Age: 12

Hair Color: Pink

Eye Color: Pinkish Red

Bey: Lunatic Cthulhu Wh Pm' 1S

Special Moves: Lunatic Rip, Cthulhu Force, Lunatic Maelstrom

First Appearance: Episode 39 - United By Friendship! Athena and Aiga Vs Drum And Valt!


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 11, 2020

(Nov. 11, 2020  3:10 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Blader name of Lunatic Cthulhu will be Chiki Sakurai


Name: Chiki Sakurai

Age: 12

Hair Color: Pink

Eye Color: Pinkish Red

Bey: Lunatic Cthulhu Wh Pm' 1S

Special Moves: Lunatic Rip, Cthulhu Force, Lunatic Maelstrom

First Appearance: Episode 39 - United By Friendship! Athena and Aiga Vs Drum And Valt!

You're using the moves I made as well? Awesome!


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 11, 2020

It would appear as if I can’t win anything. Tough luck.

Aiga better whoop Valkyrie with Achilles.

Will there be another Beyblade contest?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 11, 2020

Special Moves used in the next episode.

(Nov. 11, 2020  3:25 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: It would appear as if I can’t win anything. Tough luck.

Aiga better whoop Valkyrie with Achilles.

Will there be another Beyblade contest?

sorry you didnt win.

for season 2 there might be.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 12, 2020

Themes For Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena

Battle Theme: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI

Main Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Pascal

Battle Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Main Theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8


Chiki

Main Theme:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 12, 2020

(Nov. 12, 2020  9:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Themes For The Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI

Pascal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Chiki: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU

Here are my alternatives:
Athena: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Chiki: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rW7OB_HDCGQ

Pascal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8

I can find the perfect theme for anything


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 12, 2020

(Nov. 12, 2020  10:22 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 12, 2020  9:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Themes For The Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI

Pascal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Chiki: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU

Here are my alternatives:
Athena: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Chiki: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rW7OB_HDCGQ

Pascal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8

went ahead and added those except Chiki's alt theme

Chiki has a more ominous vibe despite not being a villain


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 12, 2020

(Nov. 12, 2020  10:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 12, 2020  10:22 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Here are my alternatives:
Athena: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Chiki: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rW7OB_HDCGQ

Pascal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8

went ahead and added those except Chiki's alt theme

I selected the first theme because of it’s meaning. It says come home soon in the first line just like how Athena wants Lane to come back to her, so yeah the meaning resonates perfectly with what Athena wants. As for Pascal I choose something with a dangerous sound, and I found an even more dangerous sounding themes if you believe it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SI2nXIjz1sk


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 12, 2020  9:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Themes For Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena

Battle Theme: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI  

Main Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Pascal

Battle Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Main Theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8


Chiki

Main Theme:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU

I reckon this would suit Chiki really well, as I designed Cthulhu to give a menacing vibe:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5daGZ96QGU
Also, I see you made her last name Sakurai. I see you are a fellow Smash player...


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 13, 2020

The main themes were provided by suprised piplup himself (except for chiki)

Do let me know if you need anymore themes. Piplup likes helping people.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 12, 2020  9:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Themes For Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena

Battle Theme: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI  

Main Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Pascal

Battle Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Main Theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8


Chiki

Main Theme:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU

I reckon this would suit Chiki really well, as I designed Cthulhu to give a menacing vibe:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5daGZ96QGU
Also, I see you made her last name Sakurai. I see you are a fellow Smash player...

Im actually not a smash player. I didn't even know Sakurai was a Smash Reference.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 12, 2020  9:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Themes For Athena, Pascal and Chiki

Athena

Battle Theme: https://youtu.be/r_WxpjhzKHI  

Main Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC-60BeGrLM

Pascal

Battle Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZaVi16GSK-k

Main Theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoCDlOLN9Y8


Chiki

Main Theme:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp-HxvGi5NU

I reckon this would suit Chiki really well, as I designed Cthulhu to give a menacing vibe:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5daGZ96QGU
Also, I see you made her last name Sakurai. I see you are a fellow Smash player...

Megalovania, although a good song, isn’t all that menacing.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: I reckon this would suit Chiki really well, as I designed Cthulhu to give a menacing vibe:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5daGZ96QGU
Also, I see you made her last name Sakurai. I see you are a fellow Smash player...

Im actually not a smash player. I didn't even know Sakurai was a Smash Reference.

That's a pretty funny coincidence. Masahiro Sakurai is the creator and developer of Super Smash Bros, and my favourite Nintendo Developer. Here's a picture of him:
[Image: Sakurai_745.jpg]
BTW, what do you think of Megalovania as Chiki's theme?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  5:10 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 13, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Im actually not a smash player. I didn't even know Sakurai was a Smash Reference.

That's a pretty funny coincidence. Masahiro Sakurai is the creator and developer of Super Smash Bros, and my favourite Nintendo Developer. Here's a picture of him:
[Image: Sakurai_745.jpg]
BTW, what do you think of Megalovania as Chiki's theme?

As I said, you want menacing, but the theme calls for something rather triumphant. Megalovania doesn’t fit the theme of the music for both you and DeltaZakuro as it’s rather a hype song.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  5:09 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: I reckon this would suit Chiki really well, as I designed Cthulhu to give a menacing vibe:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5daGZ96QGU
Also, I see you made her last name Sakurai. I see you are a fellow Smash player...

Megalovania, although a good song, isn’t all that menacing.

To me, it is. But there are other variations, like the Homestuck version (MeGaLoVania) and other remixes that could fit the bill of "menacing".


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  5:14 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 13, 2020  5:09 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Megalovania, although a good song, isn’t all that menacing.

To me, it is. But there are other variations, like the Homestuck version (MeGaLoVania) and other remixes that could fit the bill of "menacing".

This here is menacing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4vLsgb4tRk there’s a big difference in the tone of the two


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 13, 2020

(Nov. 13, 2020  5:16 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 13, 2020  5:14 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: To me, it is. But there are other variations, like the Homestuck version (MeGaLoVania) and other remixes that could fit the bill of "menacing".

This here is menacing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4vLsgb4tRk there’s a big difference in the tone of the two

That's just... wow...
That DOES sound menacing.
I was only suggesting Megalovania because to me, it fits the description. But everyone has their preferences. I guess it's just up to DeltaZakuro what they like better.