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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:08 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  7:56 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I wonder if Athena will be affected by lane's flare

possibly.

No worries if it that happens just in case Harry can take care of Lane


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  8:08 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: possibly.

No worries if it that happens just in case Harry can take care of Lane




RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:21 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  8:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: No worries if it that happens just in case Harry can take care of Lane


lol


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - TwistedWerewolf - Nov. 04, 2020

How do you do that spoiler thing


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:48 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: How do you do that spoiler thing

(spoiler) *insert text* (/spoiler)

replace the () with []


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020




RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - TwistedWerewolf - Nov. 04, 2020


(Nov. 04, 2020  8:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  8:48 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: How do you do that spoiler thing

(spoiler) *insert text* (/spoiler)

replace the () with []

thanks


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:50 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote:

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (spoiler) *insert text* (/spoiler)

replace the () with []

thanks

I see you have Aiger in your signature


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

What does Athena look like?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - TwistedWerewolf - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  8:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  8:50 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote:


thanks

I see you have Aiger in your signature

I see you have Ryuga


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  9:03 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  8:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I see you have Aiger in your signature

I see you have Ryuga

lol. Imma change it


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - TwistedWerewolf - Nov. 04, 2020

https://a.wattpad.com/cover/236987327-288-k485197.jpg He said thats what she looks like


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 05, 2020

you have about 6 days left to enter the Bey Contest

deadline is November 9th and i announce winner on the 10th (the day after)

enter while you still can.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  4:11 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: you have about 6 days left to enter the Bey Contest

deadline is November 9th and i announce winner on the 10th (the day after)

enter while you still can.

Can you enter more than one Bey?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  4:17 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2020  4:11 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: you have about 6 days left to enter the Bey Contest

deadline is November 9th and i announce winner on the 10th (the day after)

enter while you still can.

Can you enter more than one Bey?

unfortunately no.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - BeybladeManiac0 - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  4:18 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2020  4:17 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: Can you enter more than one Bey?

unfortunately no.

OK.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - BladerUmar - Nov. 05, 2020

i want request a charcter and bey

Kei Asaki
Aura Dragonis 1B' Zone

and

Dante Asaki
Aura Dragon 1A' Storm

Evolutions

Kei Asaki
Legacy Dragonis 2B+ Zoned Z

Dante Asaki
Cosmic Dragon 2A+ Stormed X


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  4:10 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: i want request a charcter and bey

Kei Asaki
Aura Dragonis 1B' Zone

and

Dante Asaki
Aura Dragon 1A' Storm

Evolutions

Kei Asaki
Legacy Dragonis 2B+ Zoned Z

Dante Asaki
Cosmic Dragon 2A+ Stormed X

It’s one character not two


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - BladerUmar - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  5:03 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2020  4:10 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: i want request a charcter and bey

Kei Asaki
Aura Dragonis 1B' Zone

and

Dante Asaki
Aura Dragon 1A' Storm

Evolutions

Kei Asaki
Legacy Dragonis 2B+ Zoned Z

Dante Asaki
Cosmic Dragon 2A+ Stormed X

It’s one character not two
ok just kei asakis beys ok


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 05, 2020

I forgot to mention that my bey is an balance type (despite the chassis).


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - SacredXcalibur - Nov. 05, 2020

My Contest entry

Midnight Erebus 2b wave'

( Erebus is the greek god of shadows)

(Sep. 30, 2020  4:01 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Last Fan-Fiction posted to WBO)

[font="Source Sans Pro","Helvetica Neue",Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif]Athena, a 10 year old girl who happens to be the younger sister of Lane Valhalla. Once obtaining Lucifer, Lane abandoned everything, his mentor Shu and his little sister Athena. Worried that his flare would eventually destroy him, Athena takes it upon herself to bring an end to the Black Sun that is her brother, Lane. A new tournament begins and Lane was confirmed to enter but with Destruction on his mind. Now trying to prevent him from wreaking havoc in the tournament, Lane's life is now in Athenas hands. [/font]


Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Episode Count - 51 + 2 Bonus Chapters (PM me saying OOF to get all 51 chapter titles)

all beys

Guide/Angelic Adeona Ch' 4A -> Adeona Heaven/Royal Ou Cm'
Variant Lucifer Mb 2D -> Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb'
Super Hyperion Xc 1A -> Hyperion Burn Cho Xc' X
King Helios Zn 1B - Helios Volcano Ou Zn' Z
Brave Valkyrie Ev' 2A
World Spriggan U' 2B
Infinite Achilles Dm' 1B
Tempest Dragon Cm 1A
Glide Ragnaruk Wh R 1S
Curse Satan Hr Un 1D
Rage Longinus Ds' 3A
Mirage Fafnir Nt 2S
Death/Abyss Diabolos Bl' 1B
Zone Xcalibur 1'D Ir' 5A
Formula Genesis Hy 1D
Pulse Wyvern Hr Om 1D
Unknown Pluto Ym 3D
Request Bey

Design Contest Rules

~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~

~must be a SuperKing bey (No Limit Break System Beys)

~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~

~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "Athena's Story Bey Request"~

~No OP Beys~

~User Will Be Decided By Me~

~Deadline is November 9th~

~Winner will be announced on November 10th 7:00PM CST~




Contest Participants

Master_chanter0 - Flare Ra Mobius 2B
beykid44 - Aquos Kraken Switch 3S
Valtryek Aoi - Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 7A
EarthHelios - Raider Dragoon Destroy' 6A
Gurjaan - Fusion Pyrus Haos 1F
6Jupiter5 - Forbidden Ares Hurricane' Speed' 8D
BeybladeManiac0 - Lunatic Cthulhu Wheel Prevail Metal' 1S
LJ-Blader - Disaster Khaos Havoc 6A
The Blacknight - Shock Thor V+G/D EleXceed
Cardboardtank - Seraph Satanael Rise 2S
TwistedWerewolf - Blasted Werewolf Growl 3B
@BladerUmarWBO - Aura Dragonis Zn 1B'

can you add me?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 05, 2020

(Nov. 05, 2020  5:03 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2020  4:10 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: i want request a charcter and bey

Kei Asaki
Aura Dragonis 1B' Zone

and

Dante Asaki
Aura Dragon 1A' Storm

Evolutions

Kei Asaki
Legacy Dragonis 2B+ Zoned Z

Dante Asaki
Cosmic Dragon 2A+ Stormed X

It’s one character not two

Its supposed to be just beys not characters as im deciding those.

@BladerUmarWBO your bey has been added to the list but the user will decided by me. Sorry.

(Nov. 05, 2020  6:39 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: My Contest entry

Midnight Erebus 2b wave'

( Erebus is the greek god of shadows)

(Sep. 30, 2020  4:01 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Last Fan-Fiction posted to WBO)

[font="Source Sans Pro","Helvetica Neue",Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif]Athena, a 10 year old girl who happens to be the younger sister of Lane Valhalla. Once obtaining Lucifer, Lane abandoned everything, his mentor Shu and his little sister Athena. Worried that his flare would eventually destroy him, Athena takes it upon herself to bring an end to the Black Sun that is her brother, Lane. A new tournament begins and Lane was confirmed to enter but with Destruction on his mind. Now trying to prevent him from wreaking havoc in the tournament, Lane's life is now in Athenas hands. [/font]


Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Episode Count - 51 + 2 Bonus Chapters (PM me saying OOF to get all 51 chapter titles)

all beys

Guide/Angelic Adeona Ch' 4A -> Adeona Heaven/Royal Ou Cm'
Variant Lucifer Mb 2D -> Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb'
Super Hyperion Xc 1A -> Hyperion Burn Cho Xc' X
King Helios Zn 1B - Helios Volcano Ou Zn' Z
Brave Valkyrie Ev' 2A
World Spriggan U' 2B
Infinite Achilles Dm' 1B
Tempest Dragon Cm 1A
Glide Ragnaruk Wh R 1S
Curse Satan Hr Un 1D
Rage Longinus Ds' 3A
Mirage Fafnir Nt 2S
Death/Abyss Diabolos Bl' 1B
Zone Xcalibur 1'D Ir' 5A
Formula Genesis Hy 1D
Pulse Wyvern Hr Om 1D
Unknown Pluto Ym 3D
Request Bey

Design Contest Rules

~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~

~must be a SuperKing bey (No Limit Break System Beys)

~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~

~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "Athena's Story Bey Request"~

~No OP Beys~

~User Will Be Decided By Me~

~Deadline is November 9th~

~Winner will be announced on November 10th 7:00PM CST~




Contest Participants

Master_chanter0 - Flare Ra Mobius 2B
beykid44 - Aquos Kraken Switch 3S
Valtryek Aoi - Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 7A
EarthHelios - Raider Dragoon Destroy' 6A
Gurjaan - Fusion Pyrus Haos 1F
6Jupiter5 - Forbidden Ares Hurricane' Speed' 8D
BeybladeManiac0 - Lunatic Cthulhu Wheel Prevail Metal' 1S
LJ-Blader - Disaster Khaos Havoc 6A
The Blacknight - Shock Thor V+G/D EleXceed
Cardboardtank - Seraph Satanael Rise 2S
TwistedWerewolf - Blasted Werewolf Growl 3B
@BladerUmarWBO - Aura Dragonis Zn 1B'

can you add me?
Yep, you have been added


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 06, 2020

3 Days Left to Enter The Bey Contest! Rules Are In The Opening Post!


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 06, 2020

(Nov. 06, 2020  8:29 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: 3 Days Left to Enter The Bey Contest! Rules Are In The Opening Post!

Proceeds to enter in with Ultimate Michael.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 06, 2020

This is gonna be good