Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Sep. 19, 2020
A rewrite of Beyblade Burst to be more faithful to the manga!
Episodes:
Let's Go, Partner! Valtryek!
*A group of kids are standing around a beystadium at the gym of their school*
Valt: This time I'm going to send you flying Rantaro!
Valt (narrating): Valt: My names Valt Aoi, and together me and my partner Valtryek are unbeatable!
Rantaro: Don’t get cocky kid! My Rocktavor will blow you away!
Boy: Who do you think will win? Girl: Rantaro of course! Valt hasn't one once!
Valt (thinking): Alright...are you ready Valtryek! *bladers go into launching positions*
Referee: Ready?....Set! Everyone: 3,2,1 Let It Rip! *Valtryek landed in the stadium, wobbling around and crash into walls*
*Roktavor was holding down the center* Rantaro: Hah! This is honestly sad!
Valt: Now Valtryek! Attack! *Valtryek bounced off a wall and flew out of the stadium*
Crowd: Waaah! *All the kids rushed out the way* *Valtryek broke through a few windows and broke the state of the owner outside*
*Everyone went outside* Valt: Buddy! You ok? *Valt picked up Valtryek*
*The PE teacher rushed outside* PE teacher: What is going on here?
*Valt kicks the broken statue pieces* Valt: Stupid statue! Why do you always get in the way!
PE Teacher: Young man, stop that this instant! *fast forward to Valt and Rantaro sitting outside the principal's office*
Valt (crying): I....I cant believe they took our beys away! Rantaro: Quiet down! You're the one who dragged me into this!
Valt: Well if I properly had my bey, I would easily beat you!
Rantaro: Beat me, you dont even know the basics! Valt: What do you mean? You just pull it like this and bammo!
*Valt showed a launching motions* Rantaro: You idiot! That isnt even close!
*The PE Teacher came out of the office* Valt: Hey! Give our beys back!
PE Teacher: No way Im letting you use these things again! Valt: If you dont I'll never stop asking! I steal your food and break into your house!
PE Teacher: ........ Fine just stop with the crazy antics! *He hands their beyblades back*
Valt: Aw yeah! We got them back! Rantaro: ..... We sure did I guess
*Rantaro and Valt se a TV In a nearby room* Valt: Woah! Beyblade on TV!
Announcer: Here we have the Boy genius, Shu Kurenai!
Announcer: He's already one of the top bladers in Japan despite being 11 years old! Valt: Shu is so cool! Rantaro: Meh... I could beat him easily
Valt: Sure you could! *The TV shows the stands, and Shu fan girls loudly cheer* Rantaro: So annoying!
Valt: Whatever! Lets have our rematch now! Rantaro: No way! I gotta prepare for the District Tournament!
Valt: The Distick waaa? Rantaro: When you win that, you can go on to the Nationals! Then if you win, you become the best blader in Japan!
Valt: The best blader.... *fast forward to the evening where Valt's training in an open yard* * boy rides up to him on a bike*
Valt: Gotta learn these basics! *huff huff....* Then I can win the tournament! Shu: Whats going on Valt?
Valt: Shu! I saw you own TV, you where so cool! Shu: Heh heh, Im flattered Valt: Anyways, you going to the Districk thingy! I'm gonna go their and win!
Shu: Of course I am. Well... See you in the finals Valt: Yeah! See you in the finals! *the next day*
Hanami: Alright everyone welcome to the District Tournament! Scan in your Bey Loggers and wait your turn!
Valt: Oh man....So many strong bladers here! *Valt steps up to the podium and scans his beylogger. It takes a picture of him and he bites his tongue out of nervousness*
Valt: Aaaah! My tongue! *later* Hanami: OK Boys and Girls, our first contestants please step up to the stage! *Valt looks up at the big screen and sees his face*
Valt: Oh I'm going! *Valt notices everyone watching him and nervously goes to the stadium. He trips into a boy* Rantaro: Hey watch it! Valt: Ooh hi Rantaro!
Valt: Did you come to cheer me on! Rantaro: No, I'm your opponent! Read the screen and Weep! Valt: Oh you are! Well, I'm not losing this time!
Referee: Ready, Set! Bladers: 3,2,1 Let It Rip! *The beyblades land in the stadium. Rocktavor steals the center as Valtryek circles around it*
Rantaro: Woah, a steady launch for once! Not have bad. Valt: We're just getting started! *Valtryek dives down to attack, but Rocktavor isnt shaken*
Valt: Again Valtryek! *Valtryek attacks to the same result* Rantaro: You haven't noticed? Rocktavor's flames deflect any and all attacks! Just try and beat me!
*As Valtryek goes for another attack flames surround Roktavor as a Sihhloutte of a beast rises above them* Rantaro: Rocktavor Zone!
*Valtryek is blasted out of the stadium* Referee: Ring Out Finish! Rantaro Kiyama gains 1 point! Hanami: Oh Yeah! Starting out strong with a Rocktavor Zone!
Valt: Aww man...that was super cool! But me and my partner aren't giving up! Right buddy! *Valtryek's eye gleams, and suddenly Valt feels the presence of a being behind him*
*It lowered its sword, and Valt unconsciously slanted his launcher to match it* Valt: Huh? Well, whatever you choose buddy!
Bladers: Let It Rip! *Valtryek goes in for an attack* Rantaro: Have you already forgotten! You got short term memory loss or something?
*Valtryek circles around and attacks repeatedly, creating a flower formation* *Little by little Rocktavor starts shifting and wobbling*
Valt: Check it out! I'm not losing this again! RUSH LAUNCH! Rantaro: No way we're going down! Rocktavor!
*The avatar of Rocktavor appeared above its beyblade and created a fiery tornado* Valt: I believe in you Valtryek, now lets burst through them!
*The avatar of Valtryek appears and slashed it sword through the tornado* *Valtryek's blades make contact with a space in between Rocktavor's flames and bursts Rocktavor*
Rantaro: No way....this can't be happening! Referee: Valt Aoi, Burst Finish. With a score of 2 to 1, he wins the match!
Hanami: Oh my gosh! In an unexpected turn of events, Valtryek wrecks Roktavor and lives to fight again!
*The crowd cheers* Rantaro: Aww man..I messed up big time... Valt: Don't worry Rantaro, we can always battle outside the stadium!
Rantaro: Right, but next time I'm totally winning! *The 2 friends fist bump* Valt: Alright Valtryek. First these bladers...then Shu!
*Valtryek shines a reassuring glow*
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Sep. 22, 2020
First few episode names
Episode 1-Let’s Go, Partner! Valtryek!
Episode 2-Challenge of Kerbeus, Stalwart Watchdog
Episode 3-Jet Black Attacker, Doomscizor’s Assualt
Episode 4-Fire Dragon Wyvron’s Explosive Winged Walls!
Episode 5-Crimson Warrior Spryzen’s Crushing Blow
Episode 1 preview
Valt: My names Valt Aoi, and together me and my partner Valtryek are unbeatable!
Rantaro: Don’t get cocky kid! My Rocktavor will blow you away!
Announcer: Here we have the Boy genius, Shu Kurenai
Valt:Let’s do this Valtryek! Rush Launch!
Episode 2 preview
Valt: As you can see, I’m the best blader around
Shu: One more time... we gotta get stronger Spryzen!
*A boy holds out a puppet with a bey* ????: Check it out! This Kerbeus will leave you in the dust!
Rantaro: Pull it together Valt! *Valt is mad and can’t hear him*
Valt: I’m sorry Valtryek.......
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - SunBlader98 - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:35 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: First few episode names
Episode 1-Speed up Valtryek! Enter Valt Aoi!
Episode 2-Chains of Hades! Guard Dog Kerbeus!
Episode 3-Scythe of Mystery! The Reaper of Darkness!
Episode 4-The Immortal Wyvern! Training With Shu!
Would you like me to send you manga scans of Vol.1 I have them
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:55 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: (Sep. 22, 2020 8:35 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: First few episode names
Episode 1-Speed up Valtryek! Enter Valt Aoi!
Episode 2-Chains of Hades! Guard Dog Kerbeus!
Episode 3-Scythe of Mystery! The Reaper of Darkness!
Episode 4-The Immortal Wyvern! Training With Shu!
Would you like me to send you manga scans of Vol.1 I have them I actually have volume 1 physically so no thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - SunBlader98 - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:56 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: (Sep. 22, 2020 8:55 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Would you like me to send you manga scans of Vol.1 I have them I actually have volume 1 physically so no thanks!
What bout Volume 2
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:57 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: (Sep. 22, 2020 8:56 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: I actually have volume 1 physically so no thanks!
What bout Volume 2
Don’t have that one, but am getting it soon, by the time I get it episode 5 I should have it
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - The Blacknight - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:57 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: (Sep. 22, 2020 8:56 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: I actually have volume 1 physically so no thanks!
What bout Volume 2
he prob has up 2 at least 4, as he planned 4 4
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - SunBlader98 - Sep. 22, 2020
(Sep. 22, 2020 8:58 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: (Sep. 22, 2020 8:57 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: What bout Volume 2
Don’t have that one, but am getting it soon, by the time I get it episode 5 I should have it
Np
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Oct. 04, 2020
Episode 1 is coming in a few days
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Oct. 07, 2020
Let's Go, Partner! Valtryek!
*A group of kids are standing around a beystadium at the gym of their school*
Valt: This time I'm going to send you flying Rantaro!
Valt (narrating): Valt: My names Valt Aoi, and together me and my partner Valtryek are unbeatable!
Rantaro: Don’t get cocky kid! My Rocktavor will blow you away!
Boy: Who do you think will win? Girl: Rantaro of course! Valt hasn't one once!
Valt (thinking): Alright...are you ready Valtryek! *bladers go into launching positions*
Referee: Ready?....Set! Everyone: 3,2,1 Let It Rip! *Valtryek landed in the stadium, wobbling around and crash into walls*
*Roktavor was holding down the center* Rantaro: Hah! This is honestly sad!
Valt: Now Valtryek! Attack! *Valtryek bounced off a wall and flew out of the stadium*
Crowd: Waaah! *All the kids rushed out the way* *Valtryek broke through a few windows and broke the state of the owner outside*
*Everyone went outside* Valt: Buddy! You ok? *Valt picked up Valtryek*
*The PE teacher rushed outside* PE teacher: What is going on here?
*Valt kicks the broken statue pieces* Valt: Stupid statue! Why do you always get in the way!
PE Teacher: Young man, stop that this instant! *fast forward to Valt and Rantaro sitting outside the principal's office*
Valt (crying): I....I cant believe they took our beys away! Rantaro: Quiet down! You're the one who dragged me into this!
Valt: Well if I properly had my bey, I would easily beat you!
Rantaro: Beat me, you dont even know the basics! Valt: What do you mean? You just pull it like this and bammo!
*Valt showed a launching motions* Rantaro: You idiot! That isnt even close!
*The PE Teacher came out of the office* Valt: Hey! Give our beys back!
PE Teacher: No way Im letting you use these things again! Valt: If you dont I'll never stop asking! I steal your food and break into your house!
PE Teacher: ........ Fine just stop with the crazy antics! *He hands their beyblades back*
Valt: Aw yeah! We got them back! Rantaro: ..... We sure did I guess
*Rantaro and Valt se a TV In a nearby room* Valt: Woah! Beyblade on TV!
Announcer: Here we have the Boy genius, Shu Kurenai!
Announcer: He's already one of the top bladers in Japan despite being 11 years old! Valt: Shu is so cool! Rantaro: Meh... I could beat him easily
Valt: Sure you could! *The TV shows the stands, and Shu fan girls loudly cheer* Rantaro: So annoying!
Valt: Whatever! Lets have our rematch now! Rantaro: No way! I gotta prepare for the District Tournament!
Valt: The Distick waaa? Rantaro: When you win that, you can go on to the Nationals! Then if you win, you become the best blader in Japan!
Valt: The best blader.... *fast forward to the evening where Valt's training in an open yard* * boy rides up to him on a bike*
Valt: Gotta learn these basics! *huff huff....* Then I can win the tournament! Shu: Whats going on Valt?
Valt: Shu! I saw you own TV, you where so cool! Shu: Heh heh, Im flattered Valt: Anyways, you going to the Districk thingy! I'm gonna go their and win!
Shu: Of course I am. Well... See you in the finals Valt: Yeah! See you in the finals! *the next day*
Hanami: Alright everyone welcome to the District Tournament! Scan in your Bey Loggers and wait your turn!
Valt: Oh man....So many strong bladers here! *Valt steps up to the podium and scans his beylogger. It takes a picture of him and he bites his tongue out of nervousness*
Valt: Aaaah! My tongue! *later* Hanami: OK Boys and Girls, our first contestants please step up to the stage! *Valt looks up at the big screen and sees his face*
Valt: Oh I'm going! *Valt notices everyone watching him and nervously goes to the stadium. He trips into a boy* Rantaro: Hey watch it! Valt: Ooh hi Rantaro!
Valt: Did you come to cheer me on! Rantaro: No, I'm your opponent! Read the screen and Weep! Valt: Oh you are! Well, I'm not losing this time!
Referee: Ready, Set! Bladers: 3,2,1 Let It Rip! *The beyblades land in the stadium. Rocktavor steals the center as Valtryek circles around it*
Rantaro: Woah, a steady launch for once! Not have bad. Valt: We're just getting started! *Valtryek dives down to attack, but Rocktavor isnt shaken*
Valt: Again Valtryek! *Valtryek attacks to the same result* Rantaro: You haven't noticed? Rocktavor's flames deflect any and all attacks! Just try and beat me!
*As Valtryek goes for another attack flames surround Roktavor as a Sihhloutte of a beast rises above them* Rantaro: Rocktavor Zone!
*Valtryek is blasted out of the stadium* Referee: Ring Out Finish! Rantaro Kiyama gains 1 point! Hanami: Oh Yeah! Starting out strong with a Rocktavor Zone!
Valt: Aww man...that was super cool! But me and my partner aren't giving up! Right buddy! *Valtryek's eye gleams, and suddenly Valt feels the presence of a being behind him*
*It lowered its sword, and Valt unconsciously slanted his launcher to match it* Valt: Huh? Well, whatever you choose buddy!
Bladers: Let It Rip! *Valtryek goes in for an attack* Rantaro: Have you already forgotten! You got short term memory loss or something?
*Valtryek circles around and attacks repeatedly, creating a flower formation* *Little by little Rocktavor starts shifting and wobbling*
Valt: Check it out! I'm not losing this again! RUSH LAUNCH! Rantaro: No way we're going down! Rocktavor!
*The avatar of Rocktavor appeared above its beyblade and created a fiery tornado* Valt: I believe in you Valtryek, now lets burst through them!
*The avatar of Valtryek appears and slashed it sword through the tornado* *Valtryek's blades make contact with a space in between Rocktavor's flames and bursts Rocktavor*
Rantaro: No way....this can't be happening! Referee: Valt Aoi, Burst Finish. With a score of 2 to 1, he wins the match!
Hanami: Oh my gosh! In an unexpected turn of events, Valtryek wrecks Roktavor and lives to fight again!
*The crowd cheers* Rantaro: Aww man..I messed up big time... Valt: Don't worry Rantaro, we can always battle outside the stadium!
Rantaro: Right, but next time I'm totally winning! *The 2 friends fist bump* Valt: Alright Valtryek. First these bladers...then Shu!
*Valtryek shines a reassuring glow*
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Beyblade Stars - Oct. 07, 2020
Nice great job
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Oct. 18, 2020
(Oct. 18, 2020 1:41 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Taking a break form the WBO, will be returning in January
I will continue this story when my break ends
RE: Beyblade Burst Rewrite - Eclipse Force - Nov. 11, 2020
Unfortunately I’ve been in a serious writers block for this series and just been not inspired to write it, so it’s getting cancelled. Sorry guys  I’d rather cancel the content and deliver rushed, bad content. Hope you understand.
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