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Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Jul. 30, 2020 the new Fanfic this Fanfic is off course on my fanfics (all of them) Synopsis-WIP -Characters- Keishi Ichisuno Bey:Beam Kirin Pentagon Swipe Mikazuki Kageyama Bey:Monster Manticore Armed Zephyr Emily Hagakure Bey:Exceed Evipero Nine Orbit Returning Characters Valt Aoi-Vast Valkryie Boost Xcelarator Shu Kurenai-Stain Spriggan Knuckle Liner Rantaro Kiyama-Rake Ragnaruk Duo Revolve Daigo Kurogami-Destroyer Deathscizor Force Jaggy Wakiya Murasaki-Wrath Wyvern Vertical Ball Kensuke Midori-Kage Kerbeus Limited Orbit Zack Kaneguro-Spark Zeus Infinity Weight Lui Shirosagi-Lance Longinus Nine Spiral Villain Bast Basilik ?? ?? Episode count:27 or 28 RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - Needforspeed - Jul. 30, 2020 Nice im really exited for this fanfic RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Jul. 30, 2020 Drawings of the main cast [Image: 34ZCkRQ] guide: Keishi Ichisuno (middle) Emily Hagakure (right) Mikazuki Kageyama (left) Episode list 1-5 Ep 1-Super Fast Start! Ep 2-Speed! Valt Aoi Ep 3-Axe Vs Horn! Shu Ep 4-Duo Beast attack! Ep 5-Grim Attack! RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Jul. 31, 2020 Ep 1-Super Fast Start! *2 Beys Clashes each other, making sparks and the 2 beys Clashes and hits very hard that it lighted up everything* Today Audience:3! 2! 1! Valt and Blader:LET IT RIP!!!!!!! *Beys lands on the stadium* Valt:GOOO!!!! VALTRYEK!!! *Valtryek's Xcelarator becomes flat* *Valtryek zooms through the stadium and burst the bey* Hours later Emily:Keichi! Keichi! Keishi:Huh? Emily:your daydreaming again?? Keishi:Ah sorry! Emily:jeez, i was thinking that your a zombie Keishi:...... Keishi:gahhhhhh……….. Kirin what do you think should i do? *Keishi holds Kirin* *Kirin shines very bright* *at cafeteria* Mikazuki:Yo Keishi, what do you think do you want to do? Keishi:ah….. being the best blader in town Mikazuki:*spits juice*Hah?????? ohhhh……. im so jealous of you! Emily:*does a karate chop on Mikazuki's Head* Shut your trap Mikazuki:OOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU! THAT HURTS! Emily:Shut up if you don't want my Hagakure Bloodline Chop! Keishi:what a weird name *Emily spin kicks them* Emily:EMILY LEG SPIN! *later* Girl:*annoyingly fangirls* BYAKUYA IS BACK!!!! Some Jock:tsk, that guy again! i wanna beat him to Paste Another Jock:*sips Energy drink like a british person drinking tea* Emily, Keishi, and Mikazuki:oh well, the rich but Eyesore Student is back Byakuya:Bonjour mesdames! (Hello there ladies!) *all of the girls in Byakuya's Vicinity Just Fangirled* Some random teacher:SHUT THE TRAP OR I WILL EXPEL YOU ALL! *Slams door* Mikazuki:*tries to hide his giggles* *Emily and Keishi looked liked confused* *at gym* Byakuya:Ah…… de quoi as-tu besoin jeune Keishi? (what do you need young keishi?) Keishi:SHUT UP TALKING SPAGHETTI!!!!! Byakuya:alright, alright, alright…… but yeah Keishi:Lets battle! Byakuya:ah…….it's been a while since Byakko Battled, he was too bored, alright then, entertain me! Byakuya:ready set! Byakuya and Keishi:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!! *Both beys lands on the stadium* Byakuya:SPLENDID! BYAKKO! *Byakko takes the center* Keishi:Kirin! Destroy him! *Kirin does an barrage of attacks but it doesn't affect Byakko* Keishi:grrr……. Byakuya:my turn! BYAKKO! FLASH ASSAULT!!! *Byakko turns white and blasts an very big amount of energy* *The blast made Kirin being blasted away and hitting the wall, losing lots of stamina* Keishi:Kirin! *Kirin looses stamina and falls* Keishi:no way….. Byakko:YES!!!!!!! WAY!!!!!! Keishi:looks like i lost Byakuya:oh no no no no! Byakuya:im not done! Byakuya:That was just a Survivor Finish! A burst Finish would have made me win, lucky you! Keishi:looks like my payday is Wasted Byakuya:deuxième bataille! (second Battle!) Keishi and Byakuya:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!!!! *both beys lands on the stadium* Byakuya:BYAKKO! TIME TO UNLEASH!!!! *Byakko is picking up lots of wind* Keishi:nani? *Byakko is surrounded with a mini tornado* Byakuya:I CALL THIS ONE! TORNADO WALL!!!!! Keishi:KIRIN!!!!!! TRY TO DESTROY IT'S DEFENSE!!!!!! *Kirin does an Barrage of attacks but bounces off alot* Keishi:Since i have no choice….. KIRIN!!!!! KI SLAM!!!!!!! *Kirin's avatar appears and the Horns of Kirin's contact points flashes* Keishi:CHARGE!!!!! *Kirin Goes down and Hits Byakko with it's Contact points* *Byakko bursts* Byakuya:gah……….. By-By-Byakko……. mymy ultimate creation…. Byakuya:NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! *Byakuya Acted dramatic* Keishi:Get Noscoped!, Spoiled 2 Year old! *Byakuya Lost consciousness* Keishi:and there goes his dramatic scene A Random Girl:AHHHHH!!!! BYAKUYA IS DEAD Keishi:*gets Angry* Hol up? Another Girl:HOW DARE YOU KILL OUR KING Keishi:*in mind* was i the one who got pwned??????? A Girl:let us leave before he kills him! Keishi:*Overheats and Releases a Dark Aura* Emily:Hey….. Kei----OH MY GOD!!!! Keishi:*loud*BYAKUYA!!!!!!!!!! COME BACK HERE YOU CROOKED MICROBE!!! *the end* RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - DeltaZakuro - Jul. 31, 2020 If this doesn't deserve an award i dont know what does! This was a masterpiece! RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Jul. 31, 2020 Character Overview Keishi Ichisuno Age:11 Hair Color:White Eye color:Green Beyblade-Beam Kirin Pentagon Swipe Special Moves:Ki Slam, Bursting Discharge, Horn Whip, Ki Burst, Flashing Volley, Monster Tag Personality-Keishi is a Mature but Funny Blaser, despite, he had A Bad Back story, But He forgets the past to get along with his friends -Relationships- Mikazuki Kageyama-he was a friend and Neighbor of him, They were friends since Grade school and Did some pranks to people and teachers, but after 6th Grade, they became matured but still the best class clowns Emily Hagakure-he and Mikazuki found her at the Playground, she was crying because of not getting accepted by the girls because she was always called tomboy, but the both of the boys accepted her and says that no matter what you'r ideals are, they will let you in their gang, and thus the gang became infamous for pranks Byakuya Shirotora-Byakuya Sees Keishi an Crooked gem but After 2 Losses (1 in the 1st ep and the 2nd is from the Swordflame Training arc), he gains respect to Keishi Valt Aoi-Valt Trains the three to be stronger in Future tournaments and Helps them in a Battle on the mysterious blader Shu Kurenai-Keishi met Shu in 3rd grade but were rivals after 2 years on reunion. Bonnie Ziggurat-Bonnie Says he has to save him for last so that he will be worth destroying. Second wave of beys Tank Xcalius Triple Xtreme Burst Byakko Oval Shift ??????????????????????? Peak Yeti Oval Miracle Inferno Ifritor Nine Hop so if you didn't knew about the mystery bey, it will be an Secret character revealed later episodes (about episodes 9, 14 and 20) Can you guess it? Plus-Character submissions Rules-P.M or Anything, it doesn't matter RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 01, 2020 Ep 2-Fast! Valt Aoi *At Beigoma* Wakiya:I'll make sure you won't win this! Valt:Keep Talking Wakiya! Wakiya:my new wrath Wyvron will dominate your piece of spinning tin can *Battle Stances* Wakiya and Valt:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!!! *Both beys lands on the stadium* Wakiya:Wyvron! Take the center! *Wyvron take the center* Valt:VALTRYEK!!!!!!! GO RUSH RUSH LAUNCH!!!!! *The Xcelarator Driver becomes Flat and Lets loose* Wakiya:MUDA!!! *Valtryek does a flurry of attacks but bounces off* Valt:NOOOOO!!!!!!! Rantaro:Atta Boy!!!! Valt:VALTRYEK!!!!!! I BELIEVE IN YOU PARTNER!!!!! *Valtryek Powers up as it Goes to the sides of the stadium* Valt:ULTRA FLASH LAUNCH!!!!!! *Valtryek Boosts on the rails* Valt:GOOOOO!!!!!! PARTNER!!!!! *Valtryek and Wyvron Clashes* *At school* Emily:Any ideas to Do? Mikazuki:nope…… Keishi:nothing either Mikazuki:Maybe Sign up For an Underground Tournament…… Emily:NO WAY!!! we might get arrested for that Keishi:Emily has an point….. Emily:That's it! Keishi:huh? Emily:Sign up for an District tournament! Keishi:oh…… okay….. Valt:Um hello? Keishi, Emily, Mikazuki:................ Keishi:AHHHHH!!!!!!!!! BLUE! Valt:? Keishi:Who are you? Valt:im……. Valt Aoi? Mikazuki:You mean that Guy who Defeated Byakuya? Valt:Yep i am! Keishi:THIS IS AN COINCIDENCE!!!!!! Emily:pure one…… Valt:Lets battle! Emily:Ok 3v1, don't cry when we corner you! Valt:*nods* *at stadium* Valt:Ready set! Everyone:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!!!! *all of the beys lands on the stadium* Emily:Take the Stadium! Evipero!! *Evipero takes the stadium* Mikazuki:Manticore! CORNER IT!!!!!! *Manticore charges into Valtryek but missed* Mikazuki:NANI?????? Valt:*grins* Keishi:Kirin! Goooooo!!!!!!!! Ki Slam!! *The 2 horns of Kirin lights up and Charges into Valtryek and successful Knockbacks it* Keishi:Yes!! Emily:Way to go Keishi!!!!!!! *Valtryek Recovers* Emily, Keishi and Mikazuki:Nani???? Valt:GO VALTRYEK!!!!!!! XCELARATOR BOOST!!!!!! *Xcelerator becomes very flat ad tries to charge into Evipero* Emily:eekk!!!!! Evipero! Optic Impact! *Evipero's Avatar Appears and The Contact points Lights up like red* Emily:Evipero, now! *Valtryek clashes to Evipero and bursts it* Emily:Nani? *Evipero's parts Gets blown out of the stadium* Mikazuki:Emily! tsk……… Go!!!!!!! MANTICORE!!!! STINGER RICOCHET!!!!!!! *Manticore's avatar appears and starts Ricocheting everywhere and finally hits Valtryek but bursts* Mikazuki:what the???? Valt:GOOOO!!!!!!!! VALTRYEK!!!!! *Valtryek's Avatar appears and heads towards Kirin* Keishi:Kirin!!!!! KI SLAM!!!!!! *Kirin Stops and Heads towards Valtryek while Kirin activates it's avatar and The horns of kirin lights up* Kirin:This is your end! Valt:I don't think so! *Kirin and Valtryek Clashes and Clashes until they Light up* Mikazuki:nani? Kirin:GOOOOO!!!!!!!!! KIRIN!!!!! *Kirin powers up and Slashes Valtryek but Bursts* Keishi:nani? *Valtryek Bursts the second* Valt:? Keishi:? Emily:what was that just now? Valt:I WON!!!!! Keishi:GAHHHH!!!! *faceplams* Emily and Mikazuki:*Shocked anime faces* Valt:That was good! GG! Keishi:I wanna Rematch! Valt:maybe not Keishi:*4ever alone face* Valt:But I'll train you the fundamentals! Keishi and the gang:eh? Valt:I'll just teach you The basics……. The Gang:Cool! Valt:*giggles* *The end* RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - kai edits - Aug. 02, 2020 (Aug. 01, 2020 9:29 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Ep 2-Fast! Valt Aoi Can I request a character? RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 02, 2020 (Aug. 02, 2020 2:16 AM)kai edits Wrote:(Aug. 01, 2020 9:29 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Ep 2-Fast! Valt Aoi you already did note:Bonnie is Chaotic Neutral Ep 3-Axe Vs Horn! Shu! *after yesterday* Valt:Alright 10 Push Ups! *Montage of Training scenes* 4 Hours later The Gang:*Pants* Keishi:How are you not yet out of stamina!?? Keishi:Valt? *Keishi Stands up* KeishiYou :? *Keishi sees Valt talking to someone* Valt:oh wait Shu:What? Valt:Forget to introduce to you, This is Keishi and His Gang Shu:Keishi? Keishi:Ay Shu, long time no see Valt:You Know Each other? Shu:when i was 3rd Grade, I Saw Him Getting Beaten by Bullies, and Became Bit of friends, but after moving schools and houses, i never met him Valt:Huuuuhhhhh???????? i didn't know that you each other? Shu:*laughs* Shu:wanna battle? Keishi:I'm always up for an battle *at stadium* Emily:i will be Referee Emily:Ready, Set! Everyone:3! 2! 1! Keishi and Shu:LET IT RIP!!!!!!! *both beys land on the stadium* Keishi:atta boy! *Kirin does an Barrage of attacks* Shu:SPRYZEN! NOW! *Spryzen Attacks Kirin* Keishi:I'm not going to lose! Shu:That's useless! *Spryzen Hits Kirin alot and Finally Kirin Flinches by Losing grip to the stadium, But Recovers* Keishi:KI SLAM!!!!!! *Kirin Hits Spryzen Very Hard with it's Glowing Horn Blades* Shu:Nani? Kirin:GOOOOO!!!!!!! *Spryzen is hopelessly Cornered by Kirin But Because of the Damage Spryzen dealt to Kirin, Kirin Bursts easily* Kirin:No way……. *Kirin's parts Falls out of the stadium* Emily:Shu Wins the Battle by a Burst Finish! Kirin:Aw man! Shu:Your still have a long way To Go Keishi:Now How do i even win Valt:talk to your bey! Keishi:*Gets Grossed out* Keishi:are you delirious! Valt:it's easy, think of……… do you wanna win? and there Keishi:*holds Kirin and it Shines* oh yeah…….. Valt:it works right? Keishi:now i have a perfect bond with him….. Shu:the more you are connected, the more strong your bond is Keishi:ok…… Valt:Alright More traini- Valt:Guys Mikazuki:my mom Needs me at 5am Emily:and its 4:57,almost 5 plus……… My Parents are strict all about Time because, they are Superior than me! Shu:*oof face* *Emily and Mikazuki Runs away* Valt:*points to Keishi while he was sneaking*you! Keishi:*Scared Gulp* Shu and Valt:Remember not to cry! Keishi:*incoherent enchanted table screaming* Shu:COME BACK HERE YOU COWARD!!!!!! *To Be Continued* Villain Bio:Bonnie Ziggurat Age:13 Eye Color:Red Hair Color:Dark Maroon Bey-Bast Basilik Nine Reverse Personality-Bonnie is Very Evil And Dark but picky when it comes to choosing bladers, he likes stronger like Lui, Valt, Shu, Xander, Zach, Etc. Relationships The Supreme 4-He wants to challenge the 4,especially the one who Broke His Bey Keishi Ichisuno-Bonnie Thinks he is a dangerous opponent in rhe future, because he sees potential Byakuya Shiratora-They Both are Once Part of a bey team but was disbanded after the Team Tournament RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - SunBlader98 - Aug. 02, 2020 Krape Kapu koekoual spin Stamina type Gravity Claw 4 Wings 2 Go in 2 go out Orange black and Green see pokemon Kapu koeko Owener:,Kyle Roadling(Frindly Annoying Happy a lot like A kit and Valt fusion) Frindsmilly (Your Charahcter) Valt :His teacher Daigo:Best freind Shu:Also Teacher RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - skymo34 - Aug. 03, 2020 (Aug. 02, 2020 1:17 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Krape Kapu koekoual spin Stamina type Gravity Claw 4 Wings 2 Go in 2 go out Orange black and Green see pokemon Kapu koeko May I request a character RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 03, 2020 Ep-4 Duo Beast Attack *Today* Valt:alright another round? Mikazuki and Emily:*nods* Everyone:LET IT R-------- Mikazuki:GAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! KEISHI IS A ZOMBIE!!!!!!!! Keishi:*groans like a zombie* Emily:*Laughs* Keishi:*cries*DANG IT VALT!!!!!!! DO I LOOK LIKE I HAVE A DEATH WISH!!!!!!!! Keishi:*In Mind*all because of my dumb sister! if she didn't became Karate black belt *flashback* Keishi's Sister:HIYYYYAAAAAA!!!!!! *Keishi gets roundhouse kicked* Keishi:Good thing it wasn't at the middle…… *gulps nervously* Emily:KEISHI!!!!!!!! Keishi:loud and clear….. Emily:alright Emily:Valt let's battle Shu:How about a 2v2,me and Shu and…… Mikazuki:Me! Keishi:I'm free why not? Valt:Good! *at stadium* Emily:i will be referee *Everyone battle stanced except for Emily* Emily:Ready set!! Everyone:3! 2! 1! Shu,Valt,Keishi and Mikazuki:LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *4 beys lands on the stadium* Shu:Now! *Spryzen stays at the stadium* Valt:PARTNER!!!!!!!! *Valtryek Hits Manticore* Mikazuki:NOOO!!!!!!! *Manticore recovers* Mikazuki:Phew! Keishi:KIRIN!!!!!!! LET'S DO OUR NEW MOVE! FLASHING VOLLEY!!!!!!! *Kirin does an Flurry of attacks to Spryzen* Shu:COUNTER BREAK! *Shu does counter break and Hits Kirin fast and Hard* Valt:Woah! Keishi:WHAT WAS THAT NOW????? Shu:*in mind*I've practiced a lot to perfect this, and there is no way i will lose this Keishi:GOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KIRIN! *Kirin Recovers and Becomes more aggressive than ever* Emily:But How? *Kirin becomes normal again and retains* Shu:you are no Blader I've met……. Mikazuki:*in mind*If Keishi's bey becomes aggressive, didn't the tip became flat, wait mix that with my Slither Launch while we are at sync, I'm doing waves while he goes straight, we could make an tag team attack! , we could beat this guys! THAT'S IT! Mikazuki:Keishi! lose this purposely, and don't burst Keishi:but why? Mikazuki:I'll explain later! Keishi:Alright Shu:what are they planning? Shu:no wait! SPRYZEN! UPPER LAUNCH!!!!!!! *Spryzen Uppercuts Kirin and sends out of the stadium* Keishi:ok! Valt:FLASH LAUNCH! *Valtryek hits Manticore and Bounces it off out of the stadium* Mikazuki:Time out! Emily:*nods* Time out! Mikazuki:all right! here is the plan *they whisper* Shu:*in mind*What are they doing? Looks like a tactic but, if this tactic is a waste, then we blow them away easy and peasy Keishi:*nods* lets do this! *At stadium* Emily:2nd battle! Ready set! Everyone:3! 2! 1! Shu, Valt, Keishi and Mikazuki:LET IT RIP!!!!!!!! *both beys land on the stadium* Keishi:KNOW! *Kirin Does a critical hit to Valtryek* Valt:GAHHH!!!!!! *Valtryek gets teamed by Manticore and Kirin* Emily:Just like a beast feeding on it's own prey *Kirin and Manticore bursts Valtryek because getting compressed by the 2 beys* Valt:Gah! Valt:Aw Man! Keishi and Mikazuki:Alright, let's do this! Shu:Nani? *Manticore does an wave like trajectory while Kirin is Straightly Picking up speed in sync* Mikazuki and Keishi:GOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! MANTICORE AND KIRIN!!!!!!! MONSTER TAG!!!!!!!!!!! *Spryzen gets hit by the deadly attack by Kirin and Manticore* Shu:SPRYZEN! GET OUT OF TH---- Shu:nani? *Spryzen is teamed and Compressed by Manticore and Kirin very hard that it bursts* Shu:*shocked* Emily:Keishi and Mikazuki wins this battle with a burst finish, therefore they are the winner! Mikazuki and Keishi:*celebrates Very Happily*WE DID IT*does their hand shake Valt:So sweet! I wanna see that again Shu:not bad, I've seen enough Emily:Guys that was awsome! *The Gang Celebrates* After *insert Manticore and Kirin bursts* Keishi:A Draw! Come on! Mikazuki:Maybe the battle made us power equal Emily:So what? it's almost- Emily:OH NO!!!!!!!! Mikazuki:IT'S ALMOST CURFEW!!!!!!! Keishi:LETS BETTER RUN BEFORE WE GET WHOOPED!!!!!!!! *the whole gang runs* ???:interesting, the trio is growing ???:i wonder how well will they plan ???:Wait for their, Till the Fruit has riped *The End* (Aug. 03, 2020 9:19 AM)skymo34 Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2020 1:17 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Krape Kapu koeko:Dual spin Stamina type Gravity Claw 4 Wings 2 Go in 2 go out Orange black and Green see pokemon Kapu koeko yes you can Character Submissions List Kai edits Akira Valhalla and Maiden Lucifer SunBlader98 Kyle Roadling and Krape Kapu koeko RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - skymo34 - Aug. 03, 2020 (Aug. 03, 2020 11:50 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Ep-4 Duo Beast Attack Robin kurenai Gender female Sex bisexual Bey:heaven dranzer backstory:parents died in a car crash and was raised by free and akira Valhalla Parents Akira Valhalla Free Step brother lane Gimmicks of dead dranzer Unknown Special moves Flaming inferno Blazing spear Darkness burst RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 03, 2020 (Aug. 03, 2020 12:00 PM)skymo34 Wrote:(Aug. 03, 2020 11:50 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Ep-4 Duo Beast Attack um this actually the dual Layer era, not the superking or the God layer era, Lane is 5 seasons too early to apear, Akira is good, Free is 1 season too early to appear so make some other characters, like Gabe, Jin, Naoki, Wakiya, and other bois some backstory of Bonnie no spoiler im going to skip every detail like how Byakuya and Bonnie Disbanded from a team, who was one of the members of The Supreme 4 on Bonnie's Radar, etc. So Bonnie was just an ordinary blader who wanted to be top (Skip Timeline no spoilers) Bonnie is Different from any other villain, Like Zenos, Tyrant (the next characters are not mine shoutout to DeltaZakuro,Courtesy and Ownership of The characters owns to him not mine, remember this is just a Example), Vallery, Cole, And Nova, and etc. Who sees the main character as a pain in the neck, He is much more of an Hisoka type villain, Who Saves some bladers for the last so that they will be worthy Destroying the blader, That's the case for (spoiler). So yeah, Bonnie won't be very savage, he is Chaotic Neutral. RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - skymo34 - Aug. 03, 2020 (Aug. 03, 2020 3:37 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote:(Aug. 03, 2020 12:00 PM)skymo34 Wrote: Robin kurenai Ok then raised by shu and akira And dranzer gimmicks are spin stealing and metal RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 03, 2020 (Aug. 03, 2020 3:37 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote:Thanks for the shoutout my guy, but uh Zaida isnt the villain of her series, Vallery is.(Aug. 03, 2020 12:00 PM)skymo34 Wrote: Robin kurenai RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 04, 2020 (Aug. 03, 2020 6:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Aug. 03, 2020 3:37 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: um this actually the dual Layer era, not the superking or the God layer era, Lane is 5 seasons too early to apear, Akira is good, Free is 1 season too early to appear so make some other characters, like Gabe, Jin, Naoki, Wakiya, and other boisThanks for the shoutout my guy, but uh Zaida isnt the villain of her series, Vallery is. oh wait sory I'll correct it Synopsis-This takes place on the events of Burst 1st season, Trio buddies, Keishi Ichisuno, Mikazuki Kageyama and Emily Hagakure are Normal Bladers until they meet a dramatic Stage player kid, a Serious blader with a Darker past and a whacky Foreign Russian-Japanese Exchange student, They also met the Beigoma Kids and try to fight them but little did they know that an Dangerous Blader with a strong blader trys to lock on to Keishi, This is an adventure of friendship, Rivalry, Alliance and Comedy where they meet familiar faces and Brand new ones Ep-5 Grim Attack! *At School* Emily:Why are you here? Byakuya:Oh I Hereby Tell Something to Keishi Ichisuno! Emily:*becomes Irritated* the only reason your here is to Trap us Again like what you did to Keish Byakuya:oh no no no……. we are alone promise Mikazuki:Proof? Byakuya:The girls did not notice me……. *Points at the Schoolyard where all girls are* Mikazuki:ok spit it out Byakuya:Well remember When you Defeated Valt and Shu? Mikazuki:HEY HOW DI----- *Emily stops Mikazuki* Emily:*dark aura activates*don't get us teamed….. Mikazuki:I'm terribly sorry Byakuya:no need, but one of their Club members has a bounty to you three. *dramatic Suspense Scene* The Three:Nani? Byakuya:that kid is no way to be trifled or take too lightly, he is called *later* Emily:who Keishi:is Mikazuki:Daigo? Emily:but anyways, he left us a clue on his bey Keishi:he said….. *Flashbacks* Byakuya:i will give a clue to his bey, he is one who appears when you die, He wears a hood with a cape covering his body, a face of a human skeleton and holds a tool, a big tool, he is the one reason in European mythology people feared him* *Flashbacks ends* Emily:I don't know what he meant? Keishi:lets see……. he has a hood, a cape that covers his body, A face of a skeleton, and, Everyone:! Mikazuki:*gulps*DON'T TELL ME…….. Emily:Y-y-your kidding!!!!! Keishi:*grim Terrified face*Nope he wasn't…… really wasn't the three:a grim reaper????? ???:correct…. Keishi:? Emily:? Mikazuki:? Daigo:yo, my name is Daigo Kurogami! Keishi:! Keishi:BINGO! DEATH!!!!!! Daigo:? Emily:Eh????? Mikazuki:Nani????? Daigo:yes….. Daigo:I was hoping that you were thrilling but I just met a bunch of Immature Simpletons! Keishi:PUNK! REPEAT THAT AGAI---- Daigo:my bey will make your beys dig their graves Daigo:Meet your demise! Destroyer Doomscizor! *later* Byakuya:His name is Daigo? i know that name, Emily:then who was that freak? Byakuya:he's a member of Beigoma The Trio:Beigoma? Byakuya:it's a prestigious school actually, that's where legend Valt Aoi Study and the Supreme 4 Shu also Keishi:never thought someone from a different school would send an Hitman Byakuya:he is no hitman, He is a Grim reaper….. Keishi:we know! Keishi:but now what? we don't the power of his bey, He looks strong but how strong is he? Byakuya:That is what I'm wondering about….. Mikazuki:but it looks like he has some Type of Scythe in one of his blades….. Keishi:good idea, but that might be design Mikazuki:good point *later* Daigo:so you have Came? took you so long Keishi:I came how you promised Daigo:then let's duel? *Battle stance* Daigo:Ready set! Daigo and Keishi:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!! *both Beys lands on the stadium* Daigo:DOOMSCIZOR! *Doomscizor's Scythe Shines and hits Kirin very hard* Keishi:Woah Hey there bud…… Keishi:That was an attack but not enough! *Kirin recovers and Hits Doomscizor* Daigo:*grins*you thought you could Loose me then think again!! Daigo:GO DOOMSCIZOR! QUAKE LAUNCH!!!!! *Doomscizor makes an After images and unpredictably Hits Kirin* Keishi:After images???? *Kirin Recovers* Keishi:*in mind*I'll have to Do something like a special Move, but how? *Flashbacks* Shu:the more you are connected, the more stronger your bond is…. *Flashback ends* Keishi:Shu, thank you for the reminder Keishi:hey, Kirin! need some assistance here! *Kirin's layer shines* Keishi:Now! KI SLAM SECOND VARIANT:BURSTING DISCHARGE!!!!!! *Kirin's avatar appears and speeds up and channels all its energy to the big blades* Daigo:NOT LETTING YOU! DOOMSCIZOR!!!!!! HUNT LAUNCH!!!!!! *Doomscizor Utilizes Jaggy and heads towards Kirin* the both:AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *both clashes and Doomscizor bursts* Daigo:Gah….. *Doomscizor's parts flies away out of the stadium* Keishi:yeah get noscoped! Daigo:I respect you, Nevermind i change my mind to you…. Keishi:Too embarrassing, just say good game…. Daigo:but that was not the last of me Keishi:sound like your preparing malicious Purposes Daigo:you said now bye…… *Later* Daigo:*Pats Valt in the shoulders* be careful when teaching that twerp. Valt:don't worry I'll be careful next time Daigo:*huffs*lets go ???:they are also aware that he is evolving ???:not now, my bey, we will battle when the time comes *the end* now some additional rule when creating your characters ALL parts, characters, Story MUST BE in the DUAL LAYER SYSTEM ERA, Characters like Free, Lane, Fubuki, Aiger, Silas, etc. IS NOT ALLOWED IN THE FRIENDS OR RELATIONSHIPS LIST, Parts like Chassis like 1A, 2D, 2A, 1D, Mobius, Number coded discs (such as 10,11,4,12,3,6),and other parts not in the Burst Era IS NOT Allowed also AND ALSO ALL CHARACTERS MUST BE IN THE 1ST SEASON, NOT SECOND OR ANYTHING, JUST THE 1ST SEASON also The submissions will be closed tomorrow Episode List 2 (6-10) (the Tournament arc) 6-Red, Hot Flaming Demon 7-Apocalypse? Now! 8-Legendary Snowing Bigfoot 9-Dog Guard from the Underworld 10-Finals! Handless dragon RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 05, 2020 all personalities of every character Keishi-Bit Matured, Funny Mikazuki-bit strategic and whacky Emily-Little tomboy-ish and Responsible Byakuya-overdramatic and Handsome Ishida-Serious, savage, cold hearted, honest, mature and responsible but sometimes a bit open Yamasu-Indifferent Bonnie-Neutrally evil and good RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - Jdog757 - Aug. 05, 2020 These are awesome, keep up the good work RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 06, 2020 Submissions are closed right now! Sorry for no uploads So that means you cannot post another character RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - kai edits - Aug. 07, 2020 (Aug. 06, 2020 9:24 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Submissions are closed right now!Is akira Valhalla gonna appear soon in this fanfic I changed her combo around. It's maiden Lucifer jerk ultimate variable(ultimate variable is a super worn down variable driver) RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 07, 2020 about episode 20 or 25 RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - kai edits - Aug. 07, 2020 (Aug. 07, 2020 3:33 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: about episode 20 or 25Can she randomly join the battle like lean in the episode where lui vs red head brother from sparking RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - daheavydl3 - Aug. 07, 2020 (Aug. 07, 2020 3:35 AM)kai edits Wrote:(Aug. 07, 2020 3:33 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote: about episode 20 or 25Can she randomly join the battle like lean in the episode where lui vs red head brother from sparking nope, it will be an episode about her plus i cannot reveal. more RE: Beyblade Burst:AltεrNαte - kai edits - Aug. 07, 2020 (Aug. 07, 2020 3:37 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote:i wanted her to interrupting someone battling it will build up more hype for the next episode(Aug. 07, 2020 3:35 AM)kai edits Wrote: Can she randomly join the battle like lean in the episode where lui vs red head brother from sparking |