RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - PinkRose - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings
On here? Definitely Beyblade Burst Densetsu. The worldbuilding, character work and battles are pretty dang cool.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings
My fav is Lane's sister Athena (Sparking OC)
The battles are cool and story is unique too.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Demon Belial - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 4:02 PM)PinkRose Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings
On here? Definitely Beyblade Burst Densetsu. The worldbuilding, character work and battles are pretty dang cool. I just checked it out. But... Im not really fan of writing style he used. But I'll add it to my reading list as you said it's good.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 11:55 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: By the way which fan fic is your fav? Not taking about rankings
Hmm Infinty Warroirs
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - GenesisBlader - Jul. 31, 2021
my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
None taken.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 5:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial
(Some Taken)  Jk I'm cool with it, I just want people to read what I write lol.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - BurningSands - Jul. 31, 2021
I personally dont have a favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 5:22 PM)BurningSands Wrote: I personally don't have favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing
That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Nitrogenic - Jul. 31, 2021
I wonder if I should necropost the story I kinda stopped writing here a while ago and continue with it or create a new one that revolves around MHA but Beyblade. What would you guys suggest?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 5:01 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: my fav fanfic is Beyblade Burst: Viking Showdown (no offense LegendJustice and UnseenBurst and Demon Belial
Oh really... Thanks, I appreciate that!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - BurningSands - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 5:26 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: I wonder if I should necropost the story I kinda stopped writing here a while ago and continue with it or create a new one that revolves around MHA but Beyblade. What would you guys suggest?
I suggest you go with what your heart desires. I know, that sounds really basic — but theres no right way to write stories and theres infinite paths. Its only a fanfic and not an actual paid story, so it doesnt hurt to go for what you like best
Treading carefully here, as I dont know whats the rule regarding self-necroposting your own thread: If you feel ready to start on the story again, you may do that. I necroposted my own art thread and it wasnt a problem. But the MHA crossover sounds interesting, too
Overall, both plans are good. I suggest going with one that you like more and is sure youll stick through
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 5:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 5:22 PM)BurningSands Wrote: I personally don't have favorite fanfic on the WBO. However, I like stories with good grammar and writing the best (with a decent amount of words and good characterization). I occasionally read joke fics too. I cannot bear stories that have poor grammar and writing
That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly
I do agree with you, but idc as much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase")
Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 5:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: That's why I use Grammarly, even when I'm posting I use Grammarly, becuase I know some people like good grammar so that's why I try my best and use Grammarly
I do agree with you, but idc really much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase")
Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.
You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:05 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 6:01 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I do agree with you, but idc really much to my grammar as you may have noticed... (The funny part is that you wrote "becuase")
Anyways I don't have a fav. fanfic, mostly because I like most of them.
You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!
It's garanteed that I'll do, but Idk when (you don't mind if I pm you right?)
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - UnseenBurst - Jul. 31, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:11 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 31, 2021 6:05 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You should make one, your really good at rating them and talking about them, I'm sure you'd be an awesome writer!
It's garanteed that I'll do, but Idk when (you don't mind if I pm you right?)
Yeah, you can PM Me just give me 5 mins to turn it on
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Instarez - Jul. 31, 2021
I see lots of stories that also only dedicate 1 or 2 chapters to a single Beyblade. What do you guys think are the pros and cons compared to the traditional anime style of 3-4 episodes (chapters in this case) for one bey. This also begs the question of quantity. Lots of character seem to come and go, like they're just there to show of a bey and then leave the story essentially. This would be a pretty big problem for the 1 chapter 1 bey format. Also, lots of chapters means lots of beys and bladers, meaning there will inevitably be at least a few underused characters and Beyblades, another problem.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - PinkRose - Aug. 01, 2021
(Jul. 31, 2021 6:45 PM)Instarez Wrote: I see lots of stories that also only dedicate 1 or 2 chapters to a single Beyblade. What do you guys think are the pros and cons compared to the traditional anime style of 3-4 episodes (chapters in this case) for one bey. This also begs the question of quantity. Lots of character seem to come and go, like they're just there to show of a bey and then leave the story essentially. This would be a pretty big problem for the 1 chapter 1 bey format. Also, lots of chapters means lots of beys and bladers, meaning there will inevitably be at least a few underused characters and Beyblades, another problem.
Here's my simple take on that.
Pros: Having more Beys in the season/story means more Blader and characters, and that increases diversity in the cast, playstyles, gimmicks and battles.
Cons: Like you said, some characters and their Beys would get really underused if the cast is too big and there are too many Beys introduced in a short time frame, and that is an issue a lot of stories suffer.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Instarez - Aug. 01, 2021
How do you guys like this system?
Gear Core: A Circle emblem with an icon that represents the bey.
Gear Layer: What the Core locks into. Thing with blades that outlines the general shape of the Bey.
Gear Switch: A Bulky Chassis like piece that goes under the Layer. It has Metal, Rubber, and Layer Gimmicks.
Gear Drive Ring: Optional piece that attaches to the Drive. You can ad Rubber so if the Bey tilts, it could speed up.
Gear Drive: A Bulky Half Sphere like piece. Has various things that help the Bey regarding weight, and sometimes speed (Motors).
Gear Tip: The tip that goes onto the Drive. Determines Stability.
Example:
Magnum Vulcan Hyper-Drive Mass Re:Crash G
Gear Core Vulcan: The Emblem of the Bey.
Gear Layer Magnum: A round but jagged 8 bladed Layer.
Gear Switch Hyper-Drive: Connected directly to the Drive. When the Drive activates, Blade rapidly and continuously shift and spin.
Gear Drive Ring Mass: A Metal Ring that equally distributes weight
Gear Drive Re:Crash: When the bey significantly angles itself, a Lever within will activate, causing the Tip to retract which speeds up the bey.
Gear Tip G: A Gear shape tip with a point at the bottom. The Gears around the base can stabilize the bey if it goes off balance.
Mainly inspired by the Generation 1 Beyblade Systems. I think it's interesting and diverse, but it also might have to much things going on, so I wanted to get opinions in that area.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Lucha Burst - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 8:23 PM)Instarez Wrote: How do you guys like this system?
Gear Core: A Circle emblem with an icon that represents the bey.
Gear Layer: What the Core locks into. Thing with blades that outlines the general shape of the Bey.
Gear Switch: A Bulky Chassis like piece that goes under the Layer. It has Metal, Rubber, and Layer Gimmicks.
Gear Drive Ring: Optional piece that attaches to the Drive. You can ad Rubber so if the Bey tilts, it could speed up.
Gear Drive: A Bulky Half Sphere like piece. Has various things that help the Bey regarding weight, and sometimes speed (Motors).
Gear Tip: The tip that goes onto the Drive. Determines Stability.
Example:
Magnum Vulcan Hyper-Drive Mass Re:Crash G
Gear Core Vulcan: The Emblem of the Bey.
Gear Layer Magnum: A round but jagged 8 bladed Layer.
Gear Switch Hyper-Drive: Connected directly to the Drive. When the Drive activates, Blade rapidly and continuously shift and spin.
Gear Drive Ring Mass: A Metal Ring that equally distributes weight
Gear Drive Re:Crash: When the bey significantly angles itself, a Lever within will activate, causing the Tip to retract which speeds up the bey.
Gear Tip G: A Gear shape tip with a point at the bottom. The Gears around the base can stabilize the bey if it goes off balance.
Mainly inspired by the Generation 1 Beyblade Systems. I think it's interesting and diverse, but it also might have to much things going on, so I wanted to get opinions in that area.
It's a little complicated but I like it
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
Ranking so Far! My opinion
(1) Beyblade Burst: Infinity Warriors (By DeltaZakuro)
(2) Beyblade Burst Dynachi (By UnseenBurst)
(3) Beyblade Burst Matrix (By BladeKingX)
(4) Beyblade Burst VS! (By Kiryu Kazuma)
(5) Beyblade Burst BeyJitzu (By UnseenBurst)
(6) Beyblade Burst Sonic Clash (By LuchaBurst
(7) Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! (By LegendJustice)
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - CheetoBlader - Aug. 01, 2021
A bit bored right now, so just reply here if you want me to review your fanfic.
Preferable if chapters were all in one post.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LJ-Blader - Aug. 01, 2021
Here is Prologue through Chapter Nine of Beyblade Burst Demonic (Just ignore chapter 3, also my writing style improved so it changes little by little)
Prologue:
Blake: Why is my bey not ready!!
*Blake’s flare starts to engulf him and his throne where a tv sits a little further off*
Dusk: There is not enough dark energy master...
Dawn: Yeah, we were just about to go collect some.
Blake: There has to be a better way to collect some!!!! This is taking to long! GO FIND A FASTER WAY! BEAST MUST BE AWOKEN!
*Blake’s Flare starts to actually burn the twins*
Dusk/Dawn: Yes Master!
*They grab there beys and run out*
*Blake starts to laugh evilly*
Blake: Soon my partner, we will feast on this world!
Episode 1
Awaken, Demons Beys!
*At the Beyblade youth center*
Bell: Belial! Finish it!
Ref: Bell with a burst finish... again
Bell: Ha! No one can beat me and Belial
Tyler: Oh really, than is it all right if I challenge you?
Bell: Sure, just don’t be sad when you lose!
*Bell sticks his tongue out at Tyler as Belial stands behind him*
3,2,1 Let it rip!
Tyler: Attack, Titan!
*Titan slams into Belial*
Bell: Belial, don’t let him get away for that. Dynamite Bomber!
Bell: Wait... that is a Dynamite bey, how do you have one?!?
Tyler: You don’t remember when we were little and you designed it?
*Bell looks in shock as a flash back begins*
Bell: Look at this new type of beyblade! I call it a Dynamite bey!
Tyler: Cool! Too bad I won’t be here to see you make it, I am moving.
Bell: Aww man.
Tyler’s Mom: Hurry up saying goodbye Tyler!
Tyler: Bye Bell.
*Bell sniffles and flash back ends*
Bell: Tyler? You made a Dynamite Bey!
Tyler: Yep! My parter is a Demonic Dragon! Enter, Titan!
*Titan’s avatar is a dragon with two sets of small wings by his shoulders, he stands on two legs, has sharp claws, is black and red, has a tail, and two horns that has red fire in them*
Titan: Roar!
Bell: Belial! Tear them to shreds! Dynamite Wing!
*Belial’s Avatar rises as the wings on Dynamite glow red*
Tyler: Titan! Now! Flame Claw!
*The triangular parts on Darkflame glow dark red*
Bell/Tyler: AAAAAAGGGGHHHHHH! Finish it!
*Both beys charge at each other*
*Belial hits the ground a second later than Titan*
Ref: Winner Bell and Belial!
Bell: Good match, you have to come to my mansion!
Episode 2
Invite! The Tournament of Guilds!
Bell: When did you get back, Butler!
Tyler: This morning, and so I came to our old hang out!
Bell: Sweet, orange juice or lemonade?
Tyler: Lemonade, want to see my bey?
Bell: Sure!
*Bell pulls out his iPad*
Voice: Darkflame Titan Link Drive’ -6’
Darkflame - Three swords (like unions but filed in) and two spikes in between the swords (edges of 2S)
Titan - Dragon Skull with two horns, eyes glow red and black with resonance
Link - Nexus with all blades flat, giving lots of lad like wheel
Drive’ - Drift with rubber in the creases and a gimmick like ultimate reboot with a rubber tip, rubber in the lines, and metal base
-6’ - Six with 2’s design
Bell: Woah! I like it!
Tyler: Want to battle again?
Bell: Sure!
Butler: One minute Master Bell... I have just got an invitation for you.
Bell: Sweet!
*Bell quickly reads it*
Bell: I have been invited to the Tournament of Guilds! Top eight Bladers from around the world are invited! It starts this weekend!
Tyler: That is so cool! I want to see if I got one!
*Tyler quickly runs home without saying by to Bell*
Bell: Rude...
Episode 3
Enter the Demon Queen! Athena Valhalla!
Bell: Humph.
Tyler: I got an Invite!!
Bell: Oh, cool.
Tyler: Ugg! Don’t be like that! I had to go check. You would have done it too.
*Tyler gives Bell the side eye and they both start laughing*
Tyler: This is so exciting!
Mysterious Girl: Bell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tyler: ?
*The mysterious girl trips and falls*
Mysterious Girl: Aggh!
*Bell rushes over and helps her up*
Bell: Athena! Good to see you!
*Athena hugs Bell*
Athena: Bell! Who is your friend...
*She starts to back off*
Bell: This is my old friend Tyler! He helped me create my DB system.
Athena: Like the one you are going to make me?!?
Tyler: Yep! Here is my bey, Darkflam-.
*Bell sneaks around behind them*
Bell: Boo.
Tyler/Athena: AAAAAAGGGGGH! Bell! Not funny!
*All three start laughing*
Athena: Nice to meet you Tyler!
Bell: Come on, lets move off the street. We are getting stares.
Random Stranger 1: Look it is the Demon King.
Random Stranger 2: And Queen!
*Athena gets nervous and they go to the bey club*
Athena: Did I hear that you guys are in the Tournament of Guilds?
Bell: Yep, you are as well?
Athena: Yes! But I need my new bey...
Bell: Right, Let’s get right on it!
*After working for a while*
Athena: Done! Soul Adeona Nexus Infernal -4!
*Bell pulls out his iPad*
Voice: Soul Adeona Nexus Infernal -4
Soul - First but more circular
Adeona - Uranus as a DB Core
Nexus
Infernal - Destroy without the free spin plate
-4 - 2 put with four points
Bell: Want to battle?
Athena: You know it!
3,2,1 Let it rip!
Athena: Attack Adeona!
Bell: Don’t hold back Belial! Dynamite Wing!
*Adeona is sent flying back*
Athena: Don’t give up! Soul Blade!
*Adeona’s blades glow purple and hit Belial*
Bell: Agggghhhhh!
*Bell’s diamonds glow as he resonates with Belial*
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!
*Big explosion*
Tyler: Belial with a ring out finish, the winner is Bell!
Bell: Good battle.
Athena: Thanks, but next time I am going to win!
Episode 4
Legendary Training! Fight to Survive!
Bell: *yawn* Good morning!
Butler: Here is Belial!
Bell: Today I have got to prepare! I am going to get Tyler!
*Bell sneaks to Tyler’s house and he climbs up to Tyler’s bedroom*
Bell: *Taps Tyler* Boo.
Tyler: AAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!
*Steam comes out of Tyler’s head*
Tyler: Bell!!!
Bell: *Laughs* We have to train! To the bey club!
Tyler: I just woke up...
Bell: Get going!
*5 Minutes later Bell and Tyler are at the bey club*
Rantaro: Heard you guys need a trainer!
Bell: Rantaro Kiyama?
Tyler: Who?
Bell: The eighth best Blader in the world. An easy opponent.
Rantaro: Oh really?!?
Bell: Yep, if only his brother was here, than we could tag team.
Tyler: Is that him?
Bell: Broom Head!
Ranjiro: It is not a Broom!
Rantaro: Okay! Double battle!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Ranjiro: Circle my brother! Ragnaruk!
*Both Ragnaruks head to the center*
Rantaro: Try to beat me now. Cyclone Winds!
*Wind starts blowing in a circular formation around Ragnaruk*
Bell: Belial Attack!
*Belial attacks but to no avail*
Tyler: Urgg, the winds are strong! Titan! Flame Punch!
*Titan takes a right hand turn and is surrounded by flames and nails Ranjiro’s Ragnaruk*
Ranjiro: Really? Cyclone Flame!
*A slash of fire hits Titan sending it flying*
Rantaro: You two are no match for us! Beating Lui was a fluke!
Bell: You did not just say that. Well, BELIAL! Dynamite Wing!
*Belial’s wings glow red as his avatar rises and he hits Rantaro’s Ragnaruk sending it flying as well as bursting it*
Rantaro: What?!?
Ranjiro: Haha! I am still in!
Tyler: Not for long! Titan! Flame Claw!
*Titan rises and claws Ragnaruk #2 and he burst on contact*
Bell: You were saying...
Tyler: Too bad, you guys lost.
Rantaro: *in his mind* There are marks on the stadium. It is like their avatars came to life!
Ranjiro: *Stopping his foot* Awww man.
Rantaro: I’ll admit, you guys are good. But you will have to get better if you guys are going win the Tournament of Guilds!
Bell: Don’t worry we plan to win!
Tyler: Yeah!
*Bell sneaks behind Ranjiro*
Bell: Boo.
Ranjiro: AGGGGHHHH!
Tyler: *smirks*
Episode 5
The Tournament Begins! Show your True Self!
Tyler: I am so pumped! Bell was supposed to meet me here, he is probably trying to scare me.
*Tyler starts looking around as Bell just walks up*
Bell: No I am not.
Tyler: AGH! Really, will that ever get old.
Bell: *With a smirk* No, no it does not.
Athena: Hey guys!
Tyler: Hi Athena!
Athena: I am so excited! All the best bladers from America will be here!
Bell: Yep!
Tyler: Let’s go!
*All three head in to the Arena*
Athena: I heard Valt is coming!
Bell: That’s just a rumor.
*Valt rises out of the stadium floor*
Tyler: Hahah-
Bell: Oh shush it.
Valt: Welcome to the American Tournament of Guilds! I am traveling to all coutures to start the Tournament of Guilds! The Top 32 Bladers in North America are here today and we will see who is the best! We will welcome Top 12 Bladers from around the world to join a guild! The winner will be invited instantly to the guilds while the others will be selected by certain criteria. Today we will start out with a exhibition match! Anyone want to challenge me?
*Almost all the bladers stand up*
Valt: How about...
*The spotlights started shining around the stands*
Valt: You
*The spotlights stop on Tyler*
Tyler: Sweet!
*Tyler runs as fast as he can to the arena*
Tyler: I plan on winning!
Valt: *In his head* This is one of the kids Rantaro told me about. The one who easily burst Ranjiro.
Valt: Well I don’t plan on loosing!
Hanami: Okay Bey fans! Today we will start the tournament with an exhibition between our Champion Valt Aoi and the new comer Tyler!
Ref: Ready and Set.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
*Valkyrie presses down on his power driver and speeds up circling the outside while Titan is catching up to him*
Valt: Valkyrie don’t let him catch you!
*Valkyrie speeds up by pressing down on his power driver*
Tyler: *grunts* Titan! Attack!
*Titan crosses the stadium and hits Valkyrie into the wall*
Valt: You’re pretty good! But Valkyrie is not going to let me down! Go! Attack as well!
*The two beys clash around the stadiums as the crowd goes wild*
Bell: Go Titan!
Tyler: Titan! Finish it!
Valt: Valkyrie! Heroic Sword!
*Valkyrie’s rubber glows red while his metal glows blue than Valkyrie crashes into Titan*
Tyler: So strong...
Valt: *In his mind* I am surprised he didn’t burst.
Hanami: Holy cow! One of Valkyrie’s signature moves blows Titan right out of the stadium!
Ref: Valkyrie with a ring out finish. 1-0
Tyler: He sent Titan flying like it was nothing.
*Tyler is transported to the avatar world*
Titan: Tyler, do you want win?
Tyler: More than anything.
Titan: Okay. Let’s do this!
Tyler: Yeah!
*Tyler is transported back to the real world*
Valt: Your pretty good, but I won’t let you beat me!
Ref: Second Battle. Ready, Set
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Valt: Attack Valkyrie!
*Valkyrie Speeds up again*
Tyler: Titan!
*The beys clash and sparks go everywhere*
Bell: Tyler! Finish it!
*Valkyrie speeds around Titan*
Valt: AAGGGGGHHHH! Heroic Sword!
*Valkyrie charges at Titan*
Tyler: *In his mind* Not again, Not again!
Tyler: TITAN!!
*Heroic Sword sends Titan flying but Titan hits the wall and changes from claw mode to sword mode*
Bell: Something about Titan changed.
Tyler: Woah! I didn’t know I had this mode! Go! Flaming Swords!
*Titan’s avatar appears as the swords on Darkflame glow red as two other swords fall on Valkyrie all three hitting Valkyrie at once and leaving a giant in the stadium*
Ref: Titan with a ring out finish! Score: 1-1
Hanami: After getting blow back Titan unleashes a destructive move and alliterates the stadium ending the match.
*The crowd cheers wildly after that exciting battle*
Valt: *In his head* Rantaro was right, it is like his avatar came to life!
Valt: I admit, you are really good!
Tyler: Thanks! I never used this mode before. I didn’t even realize I made it this way!
Hanami: That is all for the opening ceremony! See you all tomorrow for the tourney!
Episode 6
Round Robin! Win More than Six!
Hanami: Okay Bey Fans! Welcome to the second day of the tournament and today we will bring thirty two down to eight! Each Blader will battle in 5 matches! The f they win 3 or more they move on! Who is ready 3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Tyler and Bell are standing in the arena waiting to battle*
Tyler: I don’t battle you today.
Bell: Yeah too bad, at least you are not guaranteed a lost.
Tyler: Think you can be me O cocky one?
Bell: Yeah, with a burst!
Tyler: Oh real-
*Tyler’s phone dings*
Tyler: Looks like I am going to battle.
*Bell’s phone dings*
Bell: Same, good luck!
*The friends fist bump*
Ref: First battle Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip
Random Kid: Go Infinite Deathscyther! Universe Drift!
*Titan gets sent flying*
Tyler: Go! Flame Claw!
Ref: Titan with a Burst Finish! Winner Tyler!
*Tyler and Bell won there first two battles*
Tyler: Next up for me is someone who has won two battles as well.
Bell: Lucky. I face a nobody.
*Tyler’s phone dings*
Tyler: I’m up.
*Tyler heads to the arena and sees his competition*
Katie: Yeah battle time! But what if I lose. You better not make me lose! Kitsune will destroy you!
Tyler: *Confused* Uhh, okay. You umm... sure.
Ref: First Battle, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Tyler: Titan! Attack! Show no mercy!
Katie: I WILL NOT LOSE! Kitsune!
Tyler:*In his head* Someone is a hot head. It looks like Kitsune is a left spin attack type.
*Kitsune and Titan clash head on*
Katie: Kitsune don’t let up! Kasai Flame!
*Kitsune slashes Titan and sends it flying*
Tyler: Oh really!?! Flaming Claw!
*Titan takes his turn and sends Kitsune flying*
Katie: THAT ISN’T FAIR!
Tyler: Umm... that is how a battle works.
Katie: Kasai Claw!
*Titan flies around and barely hits the edge of the stadium losing most of his stamina*
Ref: Kitsune with a stamina finish. Score 1-0
Tyler: Ug. She is strong. Cmon Titan, we got it.
Katie: That was so fun!!!!!!! Let’s do it again!!!!
Tyler: Umm... Yeah! You’re right!
Ref: Second Battle! Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Kitsune heads for the center as Titan circles around the stadium*
Katie: I don’t just attack. I spin!! Umi Waves!
Tyler: It also has a stamina mode!?!
*Waves start pushing Kitsune to the left increasing stamina*
Tyler: This is like a whole new bey!
Katie: Yep! My DB bey has 6 layers!
Bell: Wait, did she say DB bey?
Tyler: We are going to win no matter what system you use! Flame Claw!
*Titan charges in and knocks Kitsune back*
Katie: Kitsune! Umi Splash!
*Kitsune appears and is a small girl with a fox mask three tails a short dress and an innocent look. Water is splashing around her and she brings some down on Titan*
Tyler: Titan!
*Titan is thrown back like before loosing his stamina again*
Tyler: Titan! We will not lose! No matter what! Flame Drive!
*Titan’s driver shifts like Ultimate Reboot giving Titan a boost of speed and a fire trail*
Katie: How did you gain speed?!?
Tyler: Finish it! Titan!
*Titan’s avatar appears*
Katie: Kitsune! Umi Splash!
*The two beys clash and Titan speeds through Kitsune*
Ref: Titan with a burst finish! With a score of 2-1 Tyler wins!
Katie: That was an awesome battle! We have to do it again!
Tyler: Definitely!
*The two bladers high five*
Tyler: I am moving in to the finals!.
Episode 7
Elite Eight! Fight on my Partner!
*Bell and Tyler stand there talking excitedly*
Tyler: This is going to be awesome! I can’t wait to see who I battle!
Bell: Well I am in the B bracket so will I see you in the finals?
Tyler: No doubt about it!
*The two friends fist bump as Hanami starts announcing*
Hanami: Welcome Bey Fans! Welcome to the third day of the Tournament! Today four battles will happen! Here our the bladers! Bell, Katie, Toko, Ryota, Athena, Shawn, Tyler, and Ranzo! So know let’s announce the brackets!
*On the screen First battle is Shawn vs Ryota, the second battle is Bell vs Toko, third is Athena vs Katie and finally is Tyler vs Ranzo*
*Bell and Tyler continue taking*
Bell: Huh, I neither of us battle in the first round. To bad. Any idea who either of those people are?
Tyler: I don’t know Shawn but Ryota is Daigo’s little brother. I wonder how he blades.
*Athena comes up behind them and trips on the stairs*
Athena: Whoops! I don’t know much but I heard Shawn uses a DB bey!
Tyler: Hi Athena, how did everybody get the DB bey plans?
Bell: Probably my Grandfather, he loves helping people.
Tyler: *Teasingly* Just like you?
Bell: *Annoyed* I am a stone cold demon.
Athena: Sure...
*From out side*
Hanami: Let the first battle begin!
Tyler: C’mon! Let’s go watch!
*The trio runs to the stands*
*Back at the stadium*
Hanami: Okay guys! The first battle is between the Shawn and Ryota!
Ryota: My brother taught me everything he knows! You won’t beat my Hollow Valkyrie!
*Ryota shows his bey it is the green Hollow Valkyrie 4A 10Vortex Zephyr*
Shawn: So you are Daigo’s brother? This should be fun!
*Both bladers stand at the ready*
Ref: First battle, Ready Set
3,2,1 Let it rip!
*Valkyrie and Storm circle the stadium at even speeds*
Shawn: Today I prove my skill to the world!
Hanami: Shawn appeared out of no where in this tournament and has destroyed the competition!
Shawn: Storm Attack! Storm Breaker!
*Storm flashed rainbow and charges across the stadium and slammed into Hollow Valkyrie ringing him out*
Ref: Storm with a over finish! The score is now one to zero!
Hanami: With a great show of force Hollow Valkyrie is sent flying out of the stadium!
Shawn: No chance you are going to win! I will crush you!
Ryota: *Still in shock* Wha.. What?!?
*Both bladers get ready again*
Ref: Second Battle! Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Shawn: Go attack!
*Storm speeds up inching closer to Hollow Valkyrie*
Ryota: Don’t lose! Hollow Scythe!
*Hollow hits Storm as it approached sending it flying into the stadium wall*
Shawn: Urrg, Storm! Do it again! Storm Breaker!
*Storm charged at Hollow Valkyrie once again*
Ryota: Not Again! Hollow Upper Cut!
*Hollow tilted on his side and slashed Storm up in the air*
Ryota: Ha! You have no chance, you are going to lose all your spin!
Shawn: Or not! Finish it! Star Storm Crusher!
*Storm’s avatar appears and starts dive bombing*
Shawn: AAAAGGGGGHHHH!
*Storm started tilting like crazy mid air become like a round shape and crashed into Hollow Valkyrie from above bursting it on impact*
Ref: Storm with a Burst Finish! Shawn wins with a score of three to one!
Hanami: What an impressive move! Shawn is definitely one to keep your eyes on! Out next battle is between Bell and Toko Aoi!
*Back with the Bell, Athena, and Tyler in the stands*
Tyler: You are facing Valt’s brother! So lucky! I heard he also has a DB bey!
Athena: Don’t lose Bell I plan on beating you in the finals!
Tyler: Yeah, but you won’t be able to get past me!
*A little while later Athena and Tyler are in the stands while Bell is waiting to enter*
Hanami: Welcome again to the second battle of today! On the right we have the demon king! Bell!
*Tyler and Athena go wild*
Tyler: Go Bell!!
Athena: Yeah Destroy your opponent!!
Bell: Why are you guys so embarrassing...
Hanami: And on the left enters The Wonder boy 2.0 Toko Aoi!
Toko: So you are one of the ones who my brother is watching, show me what you got!
Bell: No problem! Belial and I will end you.
*Both bladers get ready*
Ref: First Battle, ready set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Trident heads to the center as Belial does Venture Shoot*
Bell: Attack! Don’t hold back Belial!
Toko: Trident! Take the center! Corkscrew Spin!
*Trident started spinning so fast that it levels the stadium making the center more flat*
Bell: Nice move! But you won’t be able to beat my Dynamite Wing!
*Belial charges into Trident but is just sent flying from the speed*
Bell: Urgg, Again Belial!
*Belial continues to use dynamite wing*
Toko: Trident will never stop spinning, but it is time to end this!
*Belial goes in for another strike*
Bell: AAAGGGHHHH! ATTACK!
Toko: Go! Pressure Release!
*When Belial strikes Trident all the tension is released from Tridents wings and Belial is sent flying*
Ref: Trident with a Over Finish! The score is one to zero!
Bell: What was that move!?!
Toko: A special move that can repel attack types! You don’t stand a chance.
Hanami: After a crazy first battle Toko is leading!
*Both bladers ready themselves*
*Bell gets taken to the avatar world*
Bell: Belial we will crush Toko!
Belial: Yes but we need a plan...
Bell: If I switch to high mode then the rubber can’t hit anything!
Belial: Go out there and win.
*Back in the real world*
Bell: He, He
*Belial is switched to high mode*
Ref: Second Battle, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Bell: Belial Attack!
Hanami: Belial looks taller then before! What is Bell planning?
Toko: Trident! Corkscrew Spin!
Bell: AAAGGGHHH Venture Shoot!
*Bell stars attacking Trident*
Toko: Don’t stop Spinning!
*Trident Levels even more of the stadium*
Bell: Belial! Circle the edge!
*Belial circles the edge, it is now a battle of stamina*
Toko: Really, using all your stamina? Not smart Bell!
Bell: You really think I would waste my stamina?
*Toko looks and Belial is speeding up using his Venture driver*
Bell: Belial! Dynamite Wing!
Toko: Do you really think that will work? Did you not learn? Trident!! Pressure Release!
*Trident appears and slams down his trident as Belial hits the bey*
Toko: Ha! Just like before! I am going to win!
*Belial is sent flying straight up instead of out*
Bell: Belial!! Dynamite Bomber!
*Belial’s avatar appears and the bey rains down and hits Trident sending it flying up in the air also Belial’s claw leaves a mark the stadium*
Hanami: now the roles have reversed Trident is in the sky while Belial is circling the stadium!
Toko: C’mon Trident!
*Trident is falling and lands in Belial’s crack*
Bell: Belial! End them! Dynamite Wing!
*Belial hits Trident bursting him*
Ref: Bell wins with a score of 2-1!
Hanami: What an incredible move! Belial and Bell show no mercy to Toko! What an incredible battle!
*Back in the locker room*
Athena: That was amazing! Dynamite Bomber is so cool!
Tyler: It was like, Zoom Zoom then Crash then Bang then BOOM!
Bell: Yep! Know I am closer to the finals then either of you!
Tyler: Well you won’t be for long!
Episode 8
Fight, Fight, Fight!
Hanami: Ladies and Gentlemen! For the third battle of today we have Tyler vs Ranzo! Who will win this fight and move to the semi finals!
*The bladers approach the stage*
Ranzo: Amigo!!!!!
Tyler: Ha! I beat your cousin, you should be no problem!
Ranzo: Oh really? My Ragnaruk will show you power like never before!
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Tyler: Go!
Tyler: *Thinking* Time to put my skills to the test!*
Tyler: Flame Shoot!
*Titan does Rush Launch but with a Star pattern*
Ranzo: Go! Keep on spinning! Ragnaruk!
Tyler: Attack! Flame Claw!
*Titan charges attack Ragnaruk but Ragnaruk is not phased*
Ranzo: You really think that pitiful attack will work! Time to end you! Ragnaruk! My Amigo! Double Wing Cyclone!
*A huge cyclone appears as well as Ragnaruk’s avatar*
Tyler: Woah! That is strong! Flame Claw! Again!
*Titan’s attack can’t connect and is thrown up into the air and is tossed out of the cyclone then Titan hits the edge of the stadium*
Tyler: Titan, Go! Flame Drive!
*Titan speeds up significantly*
Ranzo: That speed boost won’t effect me! Go finish it!
*Titan heads straight for the center but is thrown out of the stadium by Ragnaruk*
Ref: Ragnaruk with an over finish, score is 0-1
Bell *Whispering to himself*: Cmon Tyler, pull this off.
Tyler *Thinking*: We have got to win!
*Tyler is pulled into the avatar world*
Tyler: Titan! We must win! But how…
Titan: Think about it, you got this.
*Tyler is back in the real world*
Ranzo: Amigo! Let’s have a fun battle!
Tyler: Yeah!
Ref: Ready, Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
*Both beys head toward the center*
Ranzo: Why you trying to control the center? Huh?
Tyler: You’ll see! Go! Flame Claw!
*Titan gets to the center first and hits Ragnaruk back*
Ranzo: Oh really? Go Never Winds!
*Ragnaruk sends a gust of winds under Titan and throws it to the outskirts the stadium, now both beys are on the outside*
Tyler: Ha! Just like I wanted! Now Titan! Tactic Bermuda Fire!
*Titan starts traveling in a triangle not letting Ragnaruk in*
Ranzo: What is this!?!
Hanami: Woah! Tyler used a planned set of moves called a tactic! It looks like this one is meant to counter stamina types!
Ranzo: This might be a problem amigos…
*Ragnaruk was losing stamina fast*
Tyler: Agg!
*Titan hits the wall changing it to blade mode and releasing his avatar*
Tyler: Now! Dark Flame Sword!
*Titan slashed with his sword sending Ragnaruk flying and leaving a gash in the side of the arena*
Ref: The score is now two to one, Tyler wins!
Hanami: What an impressive show of force! Tyler will be moving on to the next round!
*Back in the stands*
Bell: Hmm, tactics. I will have to make one as well…
Athena: That was awesome! I am so ready to battle! Adeona we’re going to rock this!
*Athena resonates with Adeona as she heads down to the stadium, on her way down she bumps into Tyler*
Athe: Oops- Oh hi Tyler! Be ready, I am gonna beat you next round!
Tyler: First beat Katie, she is no push over…
Athena: Don’t worry, I got this!
Hanami: Okay bey fans! Welcome to the the fourth and last battle of the day! Two bladers showing off some serious girl power! Athena vs Katie!
*The girls walk up to the stage*
Katie: Hah! Adeona doesn’t stand a chance against my Kitsune! We will cover your light in Darkness!
Athena: Oh really? Let’s see!
*Athena is transported to the spirit world*
Athena: Adeona, I am nervous… Katie seems strong.
Adeona: Do you believe you can win…
Athena: I don’t know, maybe?
Adeona: Believe as I believe in you and it will come to you.
*Athena is transported back more confident*
Ref: First match, Ready Set!
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Katie: Kitsune take the center! Kukan Guard!
Athena *thoughts*: So she is going defensive… I am going to have to try harder to get in the semifinals!
Athena: Go Soul Shoot!
*Adeona does a rush shoot but it barely hits Kitsune*
Hanami: This battle is heating up! Who will win?
Katie: Me! Now Darkness Crash!
*Kitsune moves after being hit by Adeona and does shield crash*
*Adeona is sent flying back and hits a wall*
Katie: Burst!
Athena: No chance! Go! Soul Blade!
*Adeona charges at Kitsune but on impact Adeona loses all stamina*
Ref: Kitsune with a spin finish
Katie: Oh yeah! Let’s do that again Kitsune!
Athena: What did I do wrong? What can I do?
*Flashback*
Bell: You might want to know how to do this… Take it like this… then do that and you have high mode!
Athena: Oh cool! Thanks Bell
*Athena hugs Bell*
Bell: (Embarrassed) Yeah, well no prob
*Flashback ends and Athena changes Adeona to high mode*
Athena: Check this out!
Ref: Ready, Set
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
Athena: Go Adeona! Soul Shoot!
Katie: This again? Kukan Guard.
Athena: (Thoughts) You wish…
Athena: Now!
Katie: Darkness Crash, wait what?
*Kitsune did shield crash and missed and the blade hit in the crack between the ring and the disk*
Athena: Infernal Sword!
*Soul’s blade glow purple and tilt down to hit Kitsune*
Ref: Adeona with a burst finish! Athena wins 2-1
*Athena looks around at the crowd and gets nervous*
Athena: Uhh, I gota go…
*She runs back in and trips on her way*
*Adeona glows warm at Athena, proud of what she did*
Episode 9: Final Four! Don’t let Up!
“Ladies and Gents!” Hanami cried. “Welcome to the semifinals! Today we have two exciting matches, First! The Demon king vs The Conquer! Then Tyler vs the Demon Queen!Today is very exciting!”
“Wooo hooo!” Yelled Tyler as he jumped in enthusiasm. “Athena, you are going down!”
“I don’t know about that” said Athena coming up from behind.
“We all know that I am going to win right?” Bell said scaring his two friends. “
Really Bell?!” Said Athena in a motherly tone, “you have got to stopped doing that.” Bell responded with a smirk and walked ahead.
“He is such a child,” thought Tyler, as he and Athena followed Bell in.
“For the first battle of the day, we have the Demon King vs. The Conquer! Who will win this exciting match up?” Said Hanami from his announcers booth.
Bell and Shawn then walk up to the stadium.
“So, think you can me take down?” Said Shawn, “You don’t stand a chance…”
“We’ll see” says Bell with a mischievous smirk on his face.
“Ready, Set” the Ref said,
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
Storm and Belial circle the outskirts of the stadium.
“Go! Attack with all your might! Belial!” Cries Bell as he flings his cape.
“Storm! Hit him harder!” Yells Shawn.
The two beys clash around the edge of the stadium and sparks fly around them.
“This kid isn’t to shabby” Thinks Bell, “But, I said I would win to battle Tyler. So loosing isn’t an option!”
“Go Dynamite Wing!” Said Bell as he points at Storm.
Belial catches up to Storm.
“That old move? It doesn’t stand a chance against me! Go Storm Breaker!” Said Shawn as his aura flared.
Storm slows down and the two beys continuously collide causing sparks to go everywhere.
“Belial, pass through this kid! Demonic Dynamite! Cries Bell.
Belial then charges forward and passes through Storm creating and explosion that sends Storm flying up.
“So either you didn’t watch my match, or you didn’t learn. Go Star Storm Crusher! Exclaims Shawn as Storm uses his special move and his avatar is released.
“Maybe I did, maybe I didn’t. Now, Belial!!!!!! Screams Bell as his cape flows in the wind.
Belial’s avatar is released as Belial circles the stadium a couple of times and then heads to the spot where Storm is aiming.
“That was useless! Your heading straight to your doom! Finish this Storm! Screams Shawn and Storm heads straight for Belial.
“Now Belial! Tactics! Demonic Grasp! Says Bell calm cool and collected.
Right when Storm was about to hit Belial, the spot where Belial was circling a demon hand shot up and grabbed Storm. Pinning it against the stadium.
“What the heck! Is that legal? Says Shawn as Bell smirks.
“Now! Burst him to pieces! Dynamite Crunch!” Screams Bell in a demonic tone!
Belial brings its claws around Storm while Storm’s layer cracks and burst. This also leaves a big gash in the stadium.
A stunning silence fills the arena.
“Uhh… right, Belial with a burst finish, Bell wins two to zero!” The ref calls in a stunned tone.
“What an impressive tactic by Bell! This really shows why he is the Demon King!” Hanami declares.
“Ha! That was fun!” Says Bell as he walks off with Belial standing behind him.
Back in the stand as Athena and Tyler are talking.
“I have never seen Bell so scary…” Whispers Athena.
“Same here, he is normally is so light hearted” Tyler response.
“Bell what have you done?” Tyler thinks as he’s and Athena head to their battle.
“Did you really have to go so hard on him?” Tyler asked as he past Bell on his way to the arena.
“He was just a appetizer, you will be the main course!” Bell said as he flipped his cape in a demonic tone and walked past Tyler.
“What’s wrong with him?” Thought Tyler as he made his way to the arena where Athena was waiting.
“Ready?” Athena asked as she bounced with bubbly enthusiasm.
“Yeah! “ Tyler responded in a distracted tone as he put his bey on his launcher.
“Ready, Set!” Said the Ref.
3,2,1 Let it Rip!
“Go! Soul Shoot!” Says Athena as Adeona does a rush shoot.
“C’mon Titan!” Says Tyler as he quickly looks away from the battle.
“Adeona! Now! Soul Sla- Tyler?” Asked Athena mid sentence.
“Adeona with an Over Finish! Score is 1-0” Says the Ref all of the sudden as Tyler looks down in surprise and picks up Titan.
Tyler is than transported to the avatar world.
“I hope Bell is okay…” says Tyler not even noticing Athena, Adeona, and Titan glaring at him.
“What was that trash?” Asked Titan as walked towards Tyler.
I know your worried about Bell, I am too.” Says Athena. “But we have a battle on our hands!”
Tyler than looks up a realizes how distracted he was.
“Your right, I got to put everything I have into this battle!” Says Tyler as he pumps his fist and everyone is sent back to the real world.
“That was a very underwhelming battle, let’s hope this next one is much more exciting!” Says Hanami
“Oh don’t worry…” Thinks Tyler as he puts
Titan on his launcher. “This will be good!”
“Ready, set!” Says the Ref
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
“Go again! Soul Shoot!” Says Athena as she shoots both hands out.
“Titan! Flame Shoot!” Yells Tyler as both beys clash in the middle.
“Wow! Watch the sparks fly off these two attack types!” Yells Hanami to the crowd.
“You can’t stop me now! Titan! Fire Claw!” Exclaims Tyles as Titan hits Adeona to the edge of the stadium.
“Adeona! Don’t let them push you around! Go Soul Sword!” Says Athena as Adeona and Titan’s special moves clash.
Both beys are slowing down as they constantly counter each other.
“Ready?” Asked Tyler in a mischievous tone. “Flame Drive!” Titan’s driver activates giving it a burst of speed. “End this!” Says Tyler’s as Titan knocks Adeona out of the stadium.
“Titan with an over finish! The score is now 1-1!”
“Looks like we are going to an exciting third match!” Says Hanami as the crowd goes wild.
“Tyler is tough,” Thinks Athena as she switches to high mode. “This should do.”
“Ready, Set!” Calls the ref.
3,2,1 Go Shoot!
“Go Infernal Shoot!” Says Athena unleashing her new move trying to stall Titan out.”
“So, you think high mode can help you?” Go Fire Claw!”
Titan pushes Adeona against the wall, activating his blade mode.
“That won’t do anything! High mode protects me! Now! Infernal Sword! Says Athena as Adeona presses down on Titan activating his driver.
The two beys clash against the wall.
“Just like last time! Go! Flame Drive!” Yells Tyler at the top of his lungs. Sending Titan spiraling in the inside of the stadium.
“Who will win this? Tyler’s Strength or Athena’s strategy?” Says Hanami as the two beys close in on each other.
“Adeona! We won’t lose!” Says Athena confidently as Adeona’s avatar appears.
“Titan,” Tyler thinks. “I won’t let you down again!”
“Go! “Screams Tyler “Flaming Sword! Says Tyler as he hits Adeona into the wall as two more swords come down from above and Titan’s avatar appears.
The two avatars clash as two flaming swords come down and hit Adeona out of the stadium. As well as shattering the edge and floor of the of the stadium. Both beys fall touching the ground almost at the same time.
“With a score of 2-1, Tyler wins!” The Ref says as the crowd goes wild!
“Well that was exciting! But the breaks in the stadium will post pone the final till tomorrow. I apologize for the inconvenience.
Back at the stadium the friends shake hands.
“That was a good battle!” Says Athena full of energy.
“Yeah! Thanks for knocking me into my senses. Now we need to focus on bring Bell back to himself.”
“Defiantly!” Says Athena confidently.
As the friends walk away Tyler mutters something about a promise.
Chapter 10 Preview
“C’mon Bell! We promised each other!” Yells Tyler as Bell walks out.
“Whatever, convince me in the tournament.” Says Bell as he flips his cape.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
@"LJ-Blader try spacing it! and I saw some grammar problems tho...
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - LJ-Blader - Aug. 01, 2021
I changed my writing style… the later episodes are spaced.
And I try to do grammar checks, but I am not perfect. 
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