RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 2:07 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 1:39 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: I'm just gonna be that one guy who says he's never heard of him... Because I haven't and I don't get the joke ? For what? Harold or He Who Must Not Be Named?
Dang it I missed a period and a capital letter in my story. That’ll be a bad thing if I want my story to win.
Both
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 2:40 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 2:07 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: For what? Harold or He Who Must Not Be Named?
Dang it I missed a period and a capital letter in my story. That’ll be a bad thing if I want my story to win.
Both Harold has a purple crayon. Harold and the Purple Crayon? The children’s book we used to love as eensy weeny kids? I’ll PM you about the other one.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 3:13 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 2:40 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: Both Harold has a purple crayon. Harold and the Purple Crayon? The children’s book we used to love as eensy weeny kids? I’ll PM you about the other one.
Yeeeeeeaaaahhhhhh never heard of him
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 3:42 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 3:13 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Harold has a purple crayon. Harold and the Purple Crayon? The children’s book we used to love as eensy weeny kids? I’ll PM you about the other one.
Yeeeeeeaaaahhhhhh never heard of him Search up “Harold and the Purple Crayon” online.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 03, 2019
Heres a story that I did for school a few years ago, it's a little hard to understand because I was nine when I wrote it
Never What it Seems?
It was a normal night in the dark dungeon. Unlike normal dungeons,
this one was not so normal as it seems. In every corner of the dungeon
things were not as they seem. The earnest knight was gradually walking through the dungeon. The dungeon was enclosed with cold, hard stone. “We need to make provisions to make sure everything is enclosed well and nobody can escape.’’ The guard was thinking about his worst enemy who is a master of magic. He wanted to make sure the walls were made of bedrock. He was thinking of the best day of his life when he falsely convicted Strider of respecting the seed pod which they were about to destroy. He escaped with that seed pod but he was caught and sent to the dungeon. Strider was a master of magic. He could summon a dragon to assist him in battle. The knight was walking past where Strider is in the dungeon but he was not there. He had escaped! Strider was running through the mountains where he was grumbling. It was very cold. He had his best friend a little seed pod with eyes. He nourished that seed pod. This land that he walked in was so strange everything was huge. Finally, he finished his tent and went to sleep. After a while, he met a cat named jazz. He had 3 kittens named fire, ice, and lighting. His seed pod was named Greeny. Greeny the seed pod was not acting normal. It started blowing wind, Then it turned into a giant dragon. He kept rode his dragon to a tall mountain but he had to stop in the middle because he found an old treaty that said weird things: To end the war, here is a Treaty of peace and order; This treaty says that there will be no more war and signal that this war is over. Signed-Gandalf. He realized something big. His grandfather was the king of the kingdom that is in front of them. But everything is never what it seems. There was a letter blown in the wind from Strider’s worst enemy saying that they should stop fighting over stupid things. Gandalf is nicknamed the knight There is no kingdom in front of them only a jagged mountain. With no castles nearby or even in the land. Strider was stuck in a cave for years. He got stuck in there when he saw a seed pod was stuck in there about to fall in the water. Water could kill the seed pod. There just happened to be Strider’s worst enemy outside grumbling about discipline and hoping that this place would be better enclosed. There was a hole in the roof where Strider was in the cave. It seems seed pods with branches make goos flying tools. It seems the world is magic and sometimes strange in the point of view of a cat.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:27 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: Heres a story that I did for school a few years ago, it's a little hard to understand because I was nine when I wrote it
Never What it Seems?
It was a normal night in the dark dungeon. Unlike normal dungeons,
this one was not so normal as it seems. In every corner of the dungeon
things were not as they seem. The earnest knight was gradually walking through the dungeon. The dungeon was enclosed with cold, hard stone. “We need to make provisions to make sure everything is enclosed well and nobody can escape.’’ The guard was thinking about his worst enemy who is a master of magic. He wanted to make sure the walls were made of bedrock. He was thinking of the best day of his life when he falsely convicted Strider of respecting the seed pod which they were about to destroy. He escaped with that seed pod but he was caught and sent to the dungeon. Strider was a master of magic. He could summon a dragon to assist him in battle. The knight was walking past where Strider is in the dungeon but he was not there. He had escaped! Strider was running through the mountains where he was grumbling. It was very cold. He had his best friend a little seed pod with eyes. He nourished that seed pod. This land that he walked in was so strange everything was huge. Finally, he finished his tent and went to sleep. After a while, he met a cat named jazz. He had 3 kittens named fire, ice, and lighting. His seed pod was named Greeny. Greeny the seed pod was not acting normal. It started blowing wind, Then it turned into a giant dragon. He kept rode his dragon to a tall mountain but he had to stop in the middle because he found an old treaty that said weird things: To end the war, here is a Treaty of peace and order; This treaty says that there will be no more war and signal that this war is over. Signed-Gandalf. He realized something big. His grandfather was the king of the kingdom that is in front of them. But everything is never what it seems. There was a letter blown in the wind from Strider’s worst enemy saying that they should stop fighting over stupid things. Gandalf is nicknamed the knight There is no kingdom in front of them only a jagged mountain. With no castles nearby or even in the land. Strider was stuck in a cave for years. He got stuck in there when he saw a seed pod was stuck in there about to fall in the water. Water could kill the seed pod. There just happened to be Strider’s worst enemy outside grumbling about discipline and hoping that this place would be better enclosed. There was a hole in the roof where Strider was in the cave. It seems seed pods with branches make goos flying tools. It seems the world is magic and sometimes strange in the point of view of a cat. Is the guy named after your cat?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:29 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 4:27 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: Heres a story that I did for school a few years ago, it's a little hard to understand because I was nine when I wrote it
Never What it Seems?
It was a normal night in the dark dungeon. Unlike normal dungeons,
this one was not so normal as it seems. In every corner of the dungeon
things were not as they seem. The earnest knight was gradually walking through the dungeon. The dungeon was enclosed with cold, hard stone. “We need to make provisions to make sure everything is enclosed well and nobody can escape.’’ The guard was thinking about his worst enemy who is a master of magic. He wanted to make sure the walls were made of bedrock. He was thinking of the best day of his life when he falsely convicted Strider of respecting the seed pod which they were about to destroy. He escaped with that seed pod but he was caught and sent to the dungeon. Strider was a master of magic. He could summon a dragon to assist him in battle. The knight was walking past where Strider is in the dungeon but he was not there. He had escaped! Strider was running through the mountains where he was grumbling. It was very cold. He had his best friend a little seed pod with eyes. He nourished that seed pod. This land that he walked in was so strange everything was huge. Finally, he finished his tent and went to sleep. After a while, he met a cat named jazz. He had 3 kittens named fire, ice, and lighting. His seed pod was named Greeny. Greeny the seed pod was not acting normal. It started blowing wind, Then it turned into a giant dragon. He kept rode his dragon to a tall mountain but he had to stop in the middle because he found an old treaty that said weird things: To end the war, here is a Treaty of peace and order; This treaty says that there will be no more war and signal that this war is over. Signed-Gandalf. He realized something big. His grandfather was the king of the kingdom that is in front of them. But everything is never what it seems. There was a letter blown in the wind from Strider’s worst enemy saying that they should stop fighting over stupid things. Gandalf is nicknamed the knight There is no kingdom in front of them only a jagged mountain. With no castles nearby or even in the land. Strider was stuck in a cave for years. He got stuck in there when he saw a seed pod was stuck in there about to fall in the water. Water could kill the seed pod. There just happened to be Strider’s worst enemy outside grumbling about discipline and hoping that this place would be better enclosed. There was a hole in the roof where Strider was in the cave. It seems seed pods with branches make goos flying tools. It seems the world is magic and sometimes strange in the point of view of a cat. Is the guy named after your cat?
Yeah. I've written literally hundreds of stories about him.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:30 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 4:29 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Is the guy named after your cat?
Yeah. I've written literally hundreds of stories about him. Your YouTube channel is literally named after him.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:31 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 4:30 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: Yeah. I've written literally hundreds of stories about him. Your YouTube channel is literally named after him.
It was originally for him. Now that he's dead it's my channel.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:34 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 4:31 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Your YouTube channel is literally named after him.
It was originally for him. Now that he's dead it's my channel. I have a cat.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 4:34 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2019 4:34 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: It was originally for him. Now that he's dead it's my channel. I have a cat.
Cool!
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - bekfastblader - Aug. 03, 2019
I'm flipping entering
Revolution Ghost!
Rai Ghasp woke up and slowly opened his eyes. He looked to his left and on his bedside table there was his new bey's layer! He screamed with excitement: "I got my new bey! I will name it Revolution Ghost!" He went to the bey shop to buy some parts. There he saw his friend Levin and it seemed he had a new bey too! Rai went up to him and tapped on his shoulder. Levin turned around and smiled at his friend. " Hi , did you get a new bey too?" he said. "Yes" said Rai. "What parts are you buying?" "Well, my Rocketing Lion needs some attack parts so I'm getting 10, Cross and Merge'" "I'm getting 00', Spine and Control" Control is just an upgraded Xtend+. It had six modes. Both boys went to the counter and paid for their parts. As they assembled their beys walking out of the shop, they heard some mean laughter coming from a nearby park. Both boys took out their launchers simultaneously and said: "Let's go" They walked up to the stadium inside the park and said "What do you think your doing?" "HaHAhA!" I am Ki and this is my bey Death Kerbeus! I challenge you!" Both boys accepted and went to the stadium. Levin went up first. "This is my bey Rocketing Lion!" he said. They put their beys on their launchers and yelled: 3,2,1 LET IT RIP! Both beys flew into the stadium with graceful landing Both beys rocketed around the edge of the stadium. Lion was the first to take the centre. Levin yelled: " Rocket Defence!" Lion gained a energy shield and Death Kerbeus went in for the attack "Now, DEATH WHIP!" he yelled Kerbeus rushed towards Lion and burst it with a single hit! "What! No way!" Levin said. Rai was up next. 3,2,1, LET IT RIP! Both beys rocketed into the stadium. Revolution Ghost quickly took the centre. ( Control was in Ultimate Defence Mode ) and Rai yelled: "Revolution Defence!" The unknown mysterious blader yelled: "Counter it! DEATH WHIP!" Kerbeus went in for the attack that had blown Lion to bits. But this time, it only knocked the armour off "ARRGGGH!" yelled Rai as his avatar, a transparent ghost with a sword formed around his bey "Revolution Stinger!" The armour of Revolution Ghost flew down onto to Death Kerbeus, bursting it. "Yes! We won!" Rai said. As Ki left the park he took out a evil laser and pointed it a Rocketing Lion. He fired it and soon Rocketing Lion was turning evil. As they walked to Rai's house from the park Levin seemed to be daydreaming a lot. Rai didn't notice this but Levin was slowly turning evil....
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 04, 2019
I wonder what if people vote for themselves
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 2:17 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: I wonder what if people vote for themselves
Haha, there’ll be an option to do that, and to vote for others. 
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 04, 2019
Is bribing an automatic disqualification? I remember most voting thingies having a ban on that xD
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 2:56 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Is bribing an automatic disqualification? I remember most voting thingies having a ban on that xD
Haha, yes.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 04, 2019
CheetoBlader , am I in the contest?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 3:09 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: CheetoBlader , am I in the contest?
Yes, I just have to add you into the first post.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 3:10 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2019 3:09 AM)UltimateMaster Wrote: CheetoBlader , am I in the contest?
Yes, I just have to add you into the first post.
K, thanks for letting me know
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 04, 2019
Everyone that entered is now in the first post 
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dt20000 - Aug. 04, 2019
My story is a preview of my next story:
Tyler Minerva was running. He was not on a run for fun or exercise. He was running from his worst nightmare: the Phengou. Tyler was a tall, lean thirteen-year-old, who was currently barefoot, and wore only a grey tunic and grey shorts made of a leathery material. The Phengou was a huge black furred beast with a short snout, large green eyes, and rows of jagged teeth.
Tyler could see the village coming up. He was almost there when the Phengou pounced, pointed claws slicing through his tunic and plunging into his skin, pinning him to the ground. The black-haired boy cried out in pain, alerting Silver Leaf Village to his predicament. Immediately, his father ran out of the village, recognizing his scream.
Tyler’s dad smacked the huge beast with a staff, and it relented, releasing an almost human scream. The older man struck it in the eye again, and it raced away, still on all fours. Tyler’s father carried him into the clinic and set him on a bed. “Are you okay?”
Tyler breathed in deeply. “Yeah, its only a flesh wound.”
Tyler’s mom, the nurse, walked up. “It is not only a flesh wound! I need to stitch that up. What were you doing out there?”
He sighed. “I was berry picking, and that stupid beast jumped out at me! I abandoned the berries aAAAAAAAND III STTtarted runnNNING HOME!” Tyler’s voice jumped up in note as she sewed the skin shut.
Tyler’s mouth filled with the metallic taste of blood as he bit his tongue. “I NEED SOMething to cHEW ON!”
His mom handed him a Woodnut, a huge, fruit-like nut that was commonly used in surgical procedures to prevent patients biting their tongue. He shoved it in his mouth and bit down hard. After a couple of hours, the sewing was done, and he was fine, left only with a couple of small scars. Tyler walked home with his dad.
The next day, Tyler went to pick up the berries he had abandoned, hoping that the Phengou wasn’t there again. The Phengou was, and as soon as he picked up the basket, the huge beast leapt at him. Tyler instinctively smashed the basket into its jaw, knocking it to the side and buying him enough time to run home.
As he neared the village, the Phengou drew closer and pounced, landing atop him right outside the village, pinning him to the ground. “HELP!”
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 4:41 AM)YDt20000 Wrote: My story is a preview of my next story:
Tyler Minerva was running. He was not on a run for fun or exercise. He was running from his worst nightmare: the Phengou. Tyler was a tall, lean thirteen-year-old, who was currently barefoot, and wore only a grey tunic and grey shorts made of a leathery material. The Phengou was a huge black furred beast with a short snout, large green eyes, and rows of jagged teeth.
Tyler could see the village coming up. He was almost there when the Phengou pounced, pointed claws slicing through his tunic and plunging into his skin, pinning him to the ground. The black-haired boy cried out in pain, alerting Silver Leaf Village to his predicament. Immediately, his father ran out of the village, recognizing his scream.
Tyler’s dad smacked the huge beast with a staff, and it relented, releasing an almost human scream. The older man struck it in the eye again, and it raced away, still on all fours. Tyler’s father carried him into the clinic and set him on a bed. “Are you okay?”
Tyler breathed in deeply. “Yeah, its only a flesh wound.”
Tyler’s mom, the nurse, walked up. “It is not only a flesh wound! I need to stitch that up. What were you doing out there?”
He sighed. “I was berry picking, and that stupid beast jumped out at me! I abandoned the berries aAAAAAAAND III STTtarted runnNNING HOME!” Tyler’s voice jumped up in note as she sewed the skin shut.
Tyler’s mouth filled with the metallic taste of blood as he bit his tongue. “I NEED SOMething to cHEW ON!”
His mom handed him a Woodnut, a huge, fruit-like nut that was commonly used in surgical procedures to prevent patients biting their tongue. He shoved it in his mouth and bit down hard. After a couple of hours, the sewing was done, and he was fine, left only with a couple of small scars. Tyler walked home with his dad.
The next day, Tyler went to pick up the berries he had abandoned, hoping that the Phengou wasn’t there again. The Phengou was, and as soon as he picked up the basket, the huge beast leapt at him. Tyler instinctively smashed the basket into its jaw, knocking it to the side and buying him enough time to run home.
As he neared the village, the Phengou drew closer and pounced, landing atop him right outside the village, pinning him to the ground. “HELP!” Is this a Naruto story? Because Silver Leaf Village sounds like Hidden Leaf Village.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dt20000 - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 5:03 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2019 4:41 AM)YDt20000 Wrote: My story is a preview of my next story:
Tyler Minerva was running. He was not on a run for fun or exercise. He was running from his worst nightmare: the Phengou. Tyler was a tall, lean thirteen-year-old, who was currently barefoot, and wore only a grey tunic and grey shorts made of a leathery material. The Phengou was a huge black furred beast with a short snout, large green eyes, and rows of jagged teeth.
Tyler could see the village coming up. He was almost there when the Phengou pounced, pointed claws slicing through his tunic and plunging into his skin, pinning him to the ground. The black-haired boy cried out in pain, alerting Silver Leaf Village to his predicament. Immediately, his father ran out of the village, recognizing his scream.
Tyler’s dad smacked the huge beast with a staff, and it relented, releasing an almost human scream. The older man struck it in the eye again, and it raced away, still on all fours. Tyler’s father carried him into the clinic and set him on a bed. “Are you okay?”
Tyler breathed in deeply. “Yeah, its only a flesh wound.”
Tyler’s mom, the nurse, walked up. “It is not only a flesh wound! I need to stitch that up. What were you doing out there?”
He sighed. “I was berry picking, and that stupid beast jumped out at me! I abandoned the berries aAAAAAAAND III STTtarted runnNNING HOME!” Tyler’s voice jumped up in note as she sewed the skin shut.
Tyler’s mouth filled with the metallic taste of blood as he bit his tongue. “I NEED SOMething to cHEW ON!”
His mom handed him a Woodnut, a huge, fruit-like nut that was commonly used in surgical procedures to prevent patients biting their tongue. He shoved it in his mouth and bit down hard. After a couple of hours, the sewing was done, and he was fine, left only with a couple of small scars. Tyler walked home with his dad.
The next day, Tyler went to pick up the berries he had abandoned, hoping that the Phengou wasn’t there again. The Phengou was, and as soon as he picked up the basket, the huge beast leapt at him. Tyler instinctively smashed the basket into its jaw, knocking it to the side and buying him enough time to run home.
As he neared the village, the Phengou drew closer and pounced, landing atop him right outside the village, pinning him to the ground. “HELP!” Is this a Naruto story? Because Silver Leaf Village sounds like Hidden Leaf Village.
No, it’s an original. It was slightly inspired by something, but the inspiration should be obvious when I actually write it
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 04, 2019
(Aug. 04, 2019 5:14 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2019 5:03 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Is this a Naruto story? Because Silver Leaf Village sounds like Hidden Leaf Village.
No, it’s an original. It was slightly inspired by something, but the inspiration should be obvious when I actually write it Can’t wait!
(Aug. 04, 2019 5:14 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2019 5:03 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Is this a Naruto story? Because Silver Leaf Village sounds like Hidden Leaf Village.
No, it’s an original. It was slightly inspired by something, but the inspiration should be obvious when I actually write it Can’t wait!
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Spriggan 2.0 - Aug. 08, 2019
Time to enter  Andrew walked through the forest, hand on his sword hilt. He walked cautiously and kept glancing around, looking for a potential threat.
His destination was a cave, a cave that held the treasure that he had wanted his entire life. He stopped and looked around and decided to camp underneath a tree for the night.
The cave he seeked was not far from here. He hoped to rest and face whatever test he might have to pass tomorrow. Andrew took out his sleeping bag and got into it. He looked up at the stars and went to sleep.
Rrroooaarrrrrr! Andrew woke with a shock. He had heard a roar. He unsheathed his sword and looked around for the source of the sound. He spotted a lion that was preying on a deer a fair distance away.
Andrew thought of confronting it but instead he decided to stay out of its way and run for the cave. He left his sleeping bag, sheathed his sword and ran.
After 10 minutes of running, he found the entrance to the cave. Rooooaaarrr! The sound was close. Andrew ran for the cave. He made it in and ran deeper. He heard footsteps coming towards him. ‘Show yourself!’ he yelled.
Torches flickered on. Standing a few feet away from him was a 30 year old man.
‘I am the keeper of the treasure. If you seek to claim the treasure you must defeat me.................. in a bey battle!’ the man pulled out a bey.
Andrew looked at and gasped. It was a metal bey. It was Storm Pegasus.
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