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CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 Vote now! - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
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Title: Wrong Fandom
Summary: Daigo experiences a chaotic occurence in his universe. And it all started with trying to walk to school.
For once, Daigo's tiresome eyes were met with dawnlight. Walking outside in the dark had never been safe, especially since his eyes were still recovering from sleep. He just gave it a slide because he could see the sun poking out from the horizon, and that the stars were fading away. Not everyone sentient being was awake right now, and the streets were quiet. In a way like the world didn't want to disturb Daigo at all.
On a school day, he had never been up this early. But it was by accident that his eyes snapped awake in his bed, and he had no idea what to do except go outside. After all, Shu advised that going outside was relaxing for some. And Daigo had told his mom he wanted to go to school early (and for some reason, she accepted. What a good mom).
And no, it was not a lie. He thought that it would be best to go to school a little early, since Daigo had woken up late many times now. Poor Daigo. He thought that everything was fine when he first came out; his poor head thought that waking up early might be a good thing after all.
Until something fell onto his head, straight from the sky. It then bounced off, and landed onto the cement sidewalk with a clack. What the?
The raven-haired boy gave a quiet gasp, and his eyes gazed at all directions before looking down. On the ground was some spherical ball, red in hue with yellow accents. And it wasn't like any small spherical object; he thought it might be rubber, until he noted the plastic-like sound it gave off. It was something... strange. Whatever that is, his entire brain knew that he had never seen such thing.
Another object hit his head, with the same feeling he received from the red and yellow ball.
This time, it had purple and black accents on it, similar to the color scheme of his own Bey.
And that's when Daigo's head perked up. Look up, me.
And he did.
That's when he noticed that cards were falling from the dawn sky. In fact, all sorts of cards. Green and black cards that seemed stiff; brownish orange cards with all sorts of creatures and pictures on them; gray-toned cards similar to the last, but with realistic images; and all sorts of other cards.
That's when Daigo opened up his mouth.
"Ahh!!" he couldn't believe the volume at which he had screeched, before he decided to run away. Who cares about bothering the people behind the buildings? He was running away from falling balls and cards!
His feet lifted him as fast as they could, helping him accelerate and evade the chaos that suddenly started. The emo-like boy definitely had no explanation for falling cards and objects in general.
Had the world suddenly spun into chaos? Is there anyone out there who can explain this to him? Or at least, save him?
"Oof!" Daigo felt himself running into a body, and also felt the last card scrape against his face. One: Did the cards suddenly stop falling? Two: Someone was out here to save him! Finally!
He backed away for a moment, and looked ahead. There was a boy on front of him, with normal-looking clothes and a vest on top. His hair was black and spiked out in one direction, and he wore a white and green cap. This boy seemed to be around his age, which was slightly comforting.
Daigo blinked for a moment, before saying to the boy, "Hey." somehow, his insides still felt a little queasy and sick. He felt like something else might fall down on him, ack.
The boy gave a blink, and responded with a, "Hey. I just have a question. Have you seen my Pikachu anywhere?"
"Um, a Pikachu?" Daigo scratched his head a little, almost bashfully. For some reason, he had never heard of a Pikachu before. Was that some sort of unreleased Beyblade, or something that was exclusive outside Japan? "I don't think— AHHH!"
Something fell onto his head, almost hitting him so hard. Daigo's vision blacked out, and he realized he was twirling in so many directions. ‘What is going on? Why can't I see? Why does it feel like something is on top of my head?’
"Pika!" Daigo heard a squeak as he was shaking uncontrollably. His hands were trying to get something fuzzy on top of him. "Piikaaa!!"
Suddenly, Daigo felt a hand brush over his hands, and managed to pull away the fallen thing. And the same boy cried out, "There you are. Falling out of the sky like that, buddy." he gasped out for a moment, before his voice turning mellow again. "Hey, kid? Are you alright?"
Forget this. Daigo almost wanted to scream, rather than answering the mysterious boy. ‘I should just go.’
And in no time, Daigo shot past the boy and... whatever fuzzy that had fallen out of the sky. He fled rather quickly and with adrenaline, without any care to look back. Whatever just happened, maybe he shouldn't look back; he felt like his insides might barf out if he screamed, anyway.
"Hey! You didn't tell me your name!" in the distance behind him, Daigo heard the faint shouting from the boy.
"This is getting whack," he muttered to himself as he ran faster, his background hitting gently against his back. Within his peripheral vision, he could see small and colorful creatures also falling down the sky. Some of them landing harmlessly onto the ground, or just fluttering in the air.
The only Daigo knew now was that, he better not stop until he gets to his destination. And this fact gave him some sort of horror story vibes:
‘You better not look at your surroundings.’
‘JUST RUN.’
‘Do not talk to whatever tries to talk to you.’
And Daigo figured that he could listen to these tips for a short while. The school wasn't very far away now, so maybe he can get safety within the school's property... unless the same chaotic 'things' are also behind the school gates. Daigo might as well think he's cursed to an extent.
He ran past multiple things he didn't care to look at or talk to. At one point, someone white and blue had noted, "You look like you just had a bad time." And at another point, someone tried to advertise a pizza chain, Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria, to him. And somewhere out in the distance, he thought he saw two kaiju-like figures fighting in the distance. There were a lot more oddities he saw, but he rather forget about them than keep them in mind.
Not to mention, even the background noises were pretty questionable.
"Hey! Who's idea it is to go to Japan for safety? There's still walkers here," he heard a voice behind him, followed by whirring noises. And that only made Daigo run even faster.
A feminine voice sighed out. "It just happens that we ended up here, Daryl."
"Dang"
Daigo had to dodge a zombie here and there, often by juking them or tripping them. Unlike most people, Daigo happened to be unfazed by horror creatures; what do you expect from a guy with a grim reaper Beyblade? Not to mention, zombies weren't abnormal as objects and animals falling down the sky.
Phew. And he's almost at school. Hopefully this mess didn't make him late for school, despite him waking up too early.
"Hey! Do you want to buy some Beyblades?" there was a kid near the school grounds, at a table. Daigo noticed how the Beyblades seemed a lot thicker than the ones he's used to seeing; and in fact, most of the, had metal rings around them. "All cheap and affordable! There's even a Pegasus and a Leone for sale!"
Daigo shouted to the kid selling the Beyblades. "Sorry! Not in the mood!" he panted as he looked back for a moment.
FINALLY.
Daigo almost ran past the entrance to the school grounds, and then he turned in order to enter. He went to his knees in sudden fatigue, panting even harder and placing his hands onto the ground. And then his own face lit up from the sun now showing itself, showing his black eyes proud and accomplished.
I think I'm safe now. Daigo decided to roll onto to floor for a moment, and he slung his backpack aside. Finally. I think I won't be terrorized anymore.
And of course, the final step was to go inside the school itself. Hopefully, the school should be accepting students at this time; and would let them wait until class hours start.
Little did Daigo know, he was far from safe.
"Oh hi!" The door flung open, and he noticed a tall male wearing a green sweater ahead of him. The adult seemed rather bright, and the fact that he's bald and has red lips doesn't make this any better. "Welcome to my schoolhouse!"
"AHHH!!!!"
Summary: Daigo experiences a chaotic occurence in his universe. And it all started with trying to walk to school.
Spoiler (Click to View)
For once, Daigo's tiresome eyes were met with dawnlight. Walking outside in the dark had never been safe, especially since his eyes were still recovering from sleep. He just gave it a slide because he could see the sun poking out from the horizon, and that the stars were fading away. Not everyone sentient being was awake right now, and the streets were quiet. In a way like the world didn't want to disturb Daigo at all.
On a school day, he had never been up this early. But it was by accident that his eyes snapped awake in his bed, and he had no idea what to do except go outside. After all, Shu advised that going outside was relaxing for some. And Daigo had told his mom he wanted to go to school early (and for some reason, she accepted. What a good mom).
And no, it was not a lie. He thought that it would be best to go to school a little early, since Daigo had woken up late many times now. Poor Daigo. He thought that everything was fine when he first came out; his poor head thought that waking up early might be a good thing after all.
Until something fell onto his head, straight from the sky. It then bounced off, and landed onto the cement sidewalk with a clack. What the?
The raven-haired boy gave a quiet gasp, and his eyes gazed at all directions before looking down. On the ground was some spherical ball, red in hue with yellow accents. And it wasn't like any small spherical object; he thought it might be rubber, until he noted the plastic-like sound it gave off. It was something... strange. Whatever that is, his entire brain knew that he had never seen such thing.
Another object hit his head, with the same feeling he received from the red and yellow ball.
This time, it had purple and black accents on it, similar to the color scheme of his own Bey.
And that's when Daigo's head perked up. Look up, me.
And he did.
That's when he noticed that cards were falling from the dawn sky. In fact, all sorts of cards. Green and black cards that seemed stiff; brownish orange cards with all sorts of creatures and pictures on them; gray-toned cards similar to the last, but with realistic images; and all sorts of other cards.
That's when Daigo opened up his mouth.
"Ahh!!" he couldn't believe the volume at which he had screeched, before he decided to run away. Who cares about bothering the people behind the buildings? He was running away from falling balls and cards!
His feet lifted him as fast as they could, helping him accelerate and evade the chaos that suddenly started. The emo-like boy definitely had no explanation for falling cards and objects in general.
Had the world suddenly spun into chaos? Is there anyone out there who can explain this to him? Or at least, save him?
"Oof!" Daigo felt himself running into a body, and also felt the last card scrape against his face. One: Did the cards suddenly stop falling? Two: Someone was out here to save him! Finally!
He backed away for a moment, and looked ahead. There was a boy on front of him, with normal-looking clothes and a vest on top. His hair was black and spiked out in one direction, and he wore a white and green cap. This boy seemed to be around his age, which was slightly comforting.
Daigo blinked for a moment, before saying to the boy, "Hey." somehow, his insides still felt a little queasy and sick. He felt like something else might fall down on him, ack.
The boy gave a blink, and responded with a, "Hey. I just have a question. Have you seen my Pikachu anywhere?"
"Um, a Pikachu?" Daigo scratched his head a little, almost bashfully. For some reason, he had never heard of a Pikachu before. Was that some sort of unreleased Beyblade, or something that was exclusive outside Japan? "I don't think— AHHH!"
Something fell onto his head, almost hitting him so hard. Daigo's vision blacked out, and he realized he was twirling in so many directions. ‘What is going on? Why can't I see? Why does it feel like something is on top of my head?’
"Pika!" Daigo heard a squeak as he was shaking uncontrollably. His hands were trying to get something fuzzy on top of him. "Piikaaa!!"
Suddenly, Daigo felt a hand brush over his hands, and managed to pull away the fallen thing. And the same boy cried out, "There you are. Falling out of the sky like that, buddy." he gasped out for a moment, before his voice turning mellow again. "Hey, kid? Are you alright?"
Forget this. Daigo almost wanted to scream, rather than answering the mysterious boy. ‘I should just go.’
And in no time, Daigo shot past the boy and... whatever fuzzy that had fallen out of the sky. He fled rather quickly and with adrenaline, without any care to look back. Whatever just happened, maybe he shouldn't look back; he felt like his insides might barf out if he screamed, anyway.
"Hey! You didn't tell me your name!" in the distance behind him, Daigo heard the faint shouting from the boy.
"This is getting whack," he muttered to himself as he ran faster, his background hitting gently against his back. Within his peripheral vision, he could see small and colorful creatures also falling down the sky. Some of them landing harmlessly onto the ground, or just fluttering in the air.
The only Daigo knew now was that, he better not stop until he gets to his destination. And this fact gave him some sort of horror story vibes:
‘You better not look at your surroundings.’
‘JUST RUN.’
‘Do not talk to whatever tries to talk to you.’
And Daigo figured that he could listen to these tips for a short while. The school wasn't very far away now, so maybe he can get safety within the school's property... unless the same chaotic 'things' are also behind the school gates. Daigo might as well think he's cursed to an extent.
He ran past multiple things he didn't care to look at or talk to. At one point, someone white and blue had noted, "You look like you just had a bad time." And at another point, someone tried to advertise a pizza chain, Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria, to him. And somewhere out in the distance, he thought he saw two kaiju-like figures fighting in the distance. There were a lot more oddities he saw, but he rather forget about them than keep them in mind.
Not to mention, even the background noises were pretty questionable.
"Hey! Who's idea it is to go to Japan for safety? There's still walkers here," he heard a voice behind him, followed by whirring noises. And that only made Daigo run even faster.
A feminine voice sighed out. "It just happens that we ended up here, Daryl."
"Dang"
Daigo had to dodge a zombie here and there, often by juking them or tripping them. Unlike most people, Daigo happened to be unfazed by horror creatures; what do you expect from a guy with a grim reaper Beyblade? Not to mention, zombies weren't abnormal as objects and animals falling down the sky.
Phew. And he's almost at school. Hopefully this mess didn't make him late for school, despite him waking up too early.
"Hey! Do you want to buy some Beyblades?" there was a kid near the school grounds, at a table. Daigo noticed how the Beyblades seemed a lot thicker than the ones he's used to seeing; and in fact, most of the, had metal rings around them. "All cheap and affordable! There's even a Pegasus and a Leone for sale!"
Daigo shouted to the kid selling the Beyblades. "Sorry! Not in the mood!" he panted as he looked back for a moment.
FINALLY.
Daigo almost ran past the entrance to the school grounds, and then he turned in order to enter. He went to his knees in sudden fatigue, panting even harder and placing his hands onto the ground. And then his own face lit up from the sun now showing itself, showing his black eyes proud and accomplished.
I think I'm safe now. Daigo decided to roll onto to floor for a moment, and he slung his backpack aside. Finally. I think I won't be terrorized anymore.
And of course, the final step was to go inside the school itself. Hopefully, the school should be accepting students at this time; and would let them wait until class hours start.
Little did Daigo know, he was far from safe.
"Oh hi!" The door flung open, and he noticed a tall male wearing a green sweater ahead of him. The adult seemed rather bright, and the fact that he's bald and has red lips doesn't make this any better. "Welcome to my schoolhouse!"
"AHHH!!!!"
Dash Driver’s Story (Click to View)
My Story for the Contest!
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Harold loved beyblade. He was going to a tournament at his friend’s house. After much research, he decided on Judgement Valkyrie 00Cross Destroy’ Zan. The 00 was painted so it would be tight. He wasn’t certain he would win, though...
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
UltimateMaster’s Story (Click to View)
Heres a story that I did for school a few years ago, it's a little hard to understand because I was nine when I wrote it
Never What it Seems?
It was a normal night in the dark dungeon. Unlike normal dungeons,
this one was not so normal as it seems. In every corner of the dungeon
things were not as they seem. The earnest knight was gradually walking through the dungeon. The dungeon was enclosed with cold, hard stone. “We need to make provisions to make sure everything is enclosed well and nobody can escape.’’ The guard was thinking about his worst enemy who is a master of magic. He wanted to make sure the walls were made of bedrock. He was thinking of the best day of his life when he falsely convicted Strider of respecting the seed pod which they were about to destroy. He escaped with that seed pod but he was caught and sent to the dungeon. Strider was a master of magic. He could summon a dragon to assist him in battle. The knight was walking past where Strider is in the dungeon but he was not there. He had escaped! Strider was running through the mountains where he was grumbling. It was very cold. He had his best friend a little seed pod with eyes. He nourished that seed pod. This land that he walked in was so strange everything was huge. Finally, he finished his tent and went to sleep. After a while, he met a cat named jazz. He had 3 kittens named fire, ice, and lighting. His seed pod was named Greeny. Greeny the seed pod was not acting normal. It started blowing wind, Then it turned into a giant dragon. He kept rode his dragon to a tall mountain but he had to stop in the middle because he found an old treaty that said weird things: To end the war, here is a Treaty of peace and order; This treaty says that there will be no more war and signal that this war is over. Signed-Gandalf. He realized something big. His grandfather was the king of the kingdom that is in front of them. But everything is never what it seems. There was a letter blown in the wind from Strider’s worst enemy saying that they should stop fighting over stupid things. Gandalf is nicknamed the knight There is no kingdom in front of them only a jagged mountain. With no castles nearby or even in the land. Strider was stuck in a cave for years. He got stuck in there when he saw a seed pod was stuck in there about to fall in the water. Water could kill the seed pod. There just happened to be Strider’s worst enemy outside grumbling about discipline and hoping that this place would be better enclosed. There was a hole in the roof where Strider was in the cave. It seems seed pods with branches make goos flying tools. It seems the world is magic and sometimes strange in the point of view of a cat.
Never What it Seems?
Spoiler (Click to View)
It was a normal night in the dark dungeon. Unlike normal dungeons,
this one was not so normal as it seems. In every corner of the dungeon
things were not as they seem. The earnest knight was gradually walking through the dungeon. The dungeon was enclosed with cold, hard stone. “We need to make provisions to make sure everything is enclosed well and nobody can escape.’’ The guard was thinking about his worst enemy who is a master of magic. He wanted to make sure the walls were made of bedrock. He was thinking of the best day of his life when he falsely convicted Strider of respecting the seed pod which they were about to destroy. He escaped with that seed pod but he was caught and sent to the dungeon. Strider was a master of magic. He could summon a dragon to assist him in battle. The knight was walking past where Strider is in the dungeon but he was not there. He had escaped! Strider was running through the mountains where he was grumbling. It was very cold. He had his best friend a little seed pod with eyes. He nourished that seed pod. This land that he walked in was so strange everything was huge. Finally, he finished his tent and went to sleep. After a while, he met a cat named jazz. He had 3 kittens named fire, ice, and lighting. His seed pod was named Greeny. Greeny the seed pod was not acting normal. It started blowing wind, Then it turned into a giant dragon. He kept rode his dragon to a tall mountain but he had to stop in the middle because he found an old treaty that said weird things: To end the war, here is a Treaty of peace and order; This treaty says that there will be no more war and signal that this war is over. Signed-Gandalf. He realized something big. His grandfather was the king of the kingdom that is in front of them. But everything is never what it seems. There was a letter blown in the wind from Strider’s worst enemy saying that they should stop fighting over stupid things. Gandalf is nicknamed the knight There is no kingdom in front of them only a jagged mountain. With no castles nearby or even in the land. Strider was stuck in a cave for years. He got stuck in there when he saw a seed pod was stuck in there about to fall in the water. Water could kill the seed pod. There just happened to be Strider’s worst enemy outside grumbling about discipline and hoping that this place would be better enclosed. There was a hole in the roof where Strider was in the cave. It seems seed pods with branches make goos flying tools. It seems the world is magic and sometimes strange in the point of view of a cat.
bekfastblader’s Story (Click to View)
I'm flipping entering
Spoiler (Click to View)
Revolution Ghost!
Rai Ghasp woke up and slowly opened his eyes. He looked to his left and on his bedside table there was his new bey's layer! He screamed with excitement: "I got my new bey! I will name it Revolution Ghost!" He went to the bey shop to buy some parts. There he saw his friend Levin and it seemed he had a new bey too! Rai went up to him and tapped on his shoulder. Levin turned around and smiled at his friend. " Hi , did you get a new bey too?" he said. "Yes" said Rai. "What parts are you buying?" "Well, my Rocketing Lion needs some attack parts so I'm getting 10, Cross and Merge'" "I'm getting 00', Spine and Control" Control is just an upgraded Xtend+. It had six modes. Both boys went to the counter and paid for their parts. As they assembled their beys walking out of the shop, they heard some mean laughter coming from a nearby park. Both boys took out their launchers simultaneously and said: "Let's go" They walked up to the stadium inside the park and said "What do you think your doing?" "HaHAhA!" I am Ki and this is my bey Death Kerbeus! I challenge you!" Both boys accepted and went to the stadium. Levin went up first. "This is my bey Rocketing Lion!" he said. They put their beys on their launchers and yelled: 3,2,1 LET IT RIP! Both beys flew into the stadium with graceful landing Both beys rocketed around the edge of the stadium. Lion was the first to take the centre. Levin yelled: " Rocket Defence!" Lion gained a energy shield and Death Kerbeus went in for the attack "Now, DEATH WHIP!" he yelled Kerbeus rushed towards Lion and burst it with a single hit! "What! No way!" Levin said. Rai was up next. 3,2,1, LET IT RIP! Both beys rocketed into the stadium. Revolution Ghost quickly took the centre. ( Control was in Ultimate Defence Mode ) and Rai yelled: "Revolution Defence!" The unknown mysterious blader yelled: "Counter it! DEATH WHIP!" Kerbeus went in for the attack that had blown Lion to bits. But this time, it only knocked the armour off "ARRGGGH!" yelled Rai as his avatar, a transparent ghost with a sword formed around his bey "Revolution Stinger!" The armour of Revolution Ghost flew down onto to Death Kerbeus, bursting it. "Yes! We won!" Rai said. As Ki left the park he took out a evil laser and pointed it a Rocketing Lion. He fired it and soon Rocketing Lion was turning evil. As they walked to Rai's house from the park Levin seemed to be daydreaming a lot. Rai didn't notice this but Levin was slowly turning evil....
Rai Ghasp woke up and slowly opened his eyes. He looked to his left and on his bedside table there was his new bey's layer! He screamed with excitement: "I got my new bey! I will name it Revolution Ghost!" He went to the bey shop to buy some parts. There he saw his friend Levin and it seemed he had a new bey too! Rai went up to him and tapped on his shoulder. Levin turned around and smiled at his friend. " Hi , did you get a new bey too?" he said. "Yes" said Rai. "What parts are you buying?" "Well, my Rocketing Lion needs some attack parts so I'm getting 10, Cross and Merge'" "I'm getting 00', Spine and Control" Control is just an upgraded Xtend+. It had six modes. Both boys went to the counter and paid for their parts. As they assembled their beys walking out of the shop, they heard some mean laughter coming from a nearby park. Both boys took out their launchers simultaneously and said: "Let's go" They walked up to the stadium inside the park and said "What do you think your doing?" "HaHAhA!" I am Ki and this is my bey Death Kerbeus! I challenge you!" Both boys accepted and went to the stadium. Levin went up first. "This is my bey Rocketing Lion!" he said. They put their beys on their launchers and yelled: 3,2,1 LET IT RIP! Both beys flew into the stadium with graceful landing Both beys rocketed around the edge of the stadium. Lion was the first to take the centre. Levin yelled: " Rocket Defence!" Lion gained a energy shield and Death Kerbeus went in for the attack "Now, DEATH WHIP!" he yelled Kerbeus rushed towards Lion and burst it with a single hit! "What! No way!" Levin said. Rai was up next. 3,2,1, LET IT RIP! Both beys rocketed into the stadium. Revolution Ghost quickly took the centre. ( Control was in Ultimate Defence Mode ) and Rai yelled: "Revolution Defence!" The unknown mysterious blader yelled: "Counter it! DEATH WHIP!" Kerbeus went in for the attack that had blown Lion to bits. But this time, it only knocked the armour off "ARRGGGH!" yelled Rai as his avatar, a transparent ghost with a sword formed around his bey "Revolution Stinger!" The armour of Revolution Ghost flew down onto to Death Kerbeus, bursting it. "Yes! We won!" Rai said. As Ki left the park he took out a evil laser and pointed it a Rocketing Lion. He fired it and soon Rocketing Lion was turning evil. As they walked to Rai's house from the park Levin seemed to be daydreaming a lot. Rai didn't notice this but Levin was slowly turning evil....
Dt20000’s Story (Click to View)
My story is a preview of my next story:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Tyler Minerva was running. He was not on a run for fun or exercise. He was running from his worst nightmare: the Phengou. Tyler was a tall, lean thirteen-year-old, who was currently barefoot, and wore only a grey tunic and grey shorts made of a leathery material. The Phengou was a huge black furred beast with a short snout, large green eyes, and rows of jagged teeth.
Tyler could see the village coming up. He was almost there when the Phengou pounced, pointed claws slicing through his tunic and plunging into his skin, pinning him to the ground. The black-haired boy cried out in pain, alerting Silver Leaf Village to his predicament. Immediately, his father ran out of the village, recognizing his scream.
Tyler’s dad smacked the huge beast with a staff, and it relented, releasing an almost human scream. The older man struck it in the eye again, and it raced away, still on all fours. Tyler’s father carried him into the clinic and set him on a bed. “Are you okay?”
Tyler breathed in deeply. “Yeah, its only a flesh wound.”
Tyler’s mom, the nurse, walked up. “It is not only a flesh wound! I need to stitch that up. What were you doing out there?”
He sighed. “I was berry picking, and that stupid beast jumped out at me! I abandoned the berries aAAAAAAAND III STTtarted runnNNING HOME!” Tyler’s voice jumped up in note as she sewed the skin shut.
Tyler’s mouth filled with the metallic taste of blood as he bit his tongue. “I NEED SOMething to cHEW ON!”
His mom handed him a Woodnut, a huge, fruit-like nut that was commonly used in surgical procedures to prevent patients biting their tongue. He shoved it in his mouth and bit down hard. After a couple of hours, the sewing was done, and he was fine, left only with a couple of small scars. Tyler walked home with his dad.
The next day, Tyler went to pick up the berries he had abandoned, hoping that the Phengou wasn’t there again. The Phengou was, and as soon as he picked up the basket, the huge beast leapt at him. Tyler instinctively smashed the basket into its jaw, knocking it to the side and buying him enough time to run home.
As he neared the village, the Phengou drew closer and pounced, landing atop him right outside the village, pinning him to the ground. “HELP!”
Tyler could see the village coming up. He was almost there when the Phengou pounced, pointed claws slicing through his tunic and plunging into his skin, pinning him to the ground. The black-haired boy cried out in pain, alerting Silver Leaf Village to his predicament. Immediately, his father ran out of the village, recognizing his scream.
Tyler’s dad smacked the huge beast with a staff, and it relented, releasing an almost human scream. The older man struck it in the eye again, and it raced away, still on all fours. Tyler’s father carried him into the clinic and set him on a bed. “Are you okay?”
Tyler breathed in deeply. “Yeah, its only a flesh wound.”
Tyler’s mom, the nurse, walked up. “It is not only a flesh wound! I need to stitch that up. What were you doing out there?”
He sighed. “I was berry picking, and that stupid beast jumped out at me! I abandoned the berries aAAAAAAAND III STTtarted runnNNING HOME!” Tyler’s voice jumped up in note as she sewed the skin shut.
Tyler’s mouth filled with the metallic taste of blood as he bit his tongue. “I NEED SOMething to cHEW ON!”
His mom handed him a Woodnut, a huge, fruit-like nut that was commonly used in surgical procedures to prevent patients biting their tongue. He shoved it in his mouth and bit down hard. After a couple of hours, the sewing was done, and he was fine, left only with a couple of small scars. Tyler walked home with his dad.
The next day, Tyler went to pick up the berries he had abandoned, hoping that the Phengou wasn’t there again. The Phengou was, and as soon as he picked up the basket, the huge beast leapt at him. Tyler instinctively smashed the basket into its jaw, knocking it to the side and buying him enough time to run home.
As he neared the village, the Phengou drew closer and pounced, landing atop him right outside the village, pinning him to the ground. “HELP!”
Spriggan 2.0’s Story (Click to View)
Time to enter ;)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Andrew walked through the forest, hand on his sword hilt. He walked cautiously and kept glancing around, looking for a potential threat.
His destination was a cave, a cave that held the treasure that he had wanted his entire life. He stopped and looked around and decided to camp underneath a tree for the night.
The cave he seeked was not far from here. He hoped to rest and face whatever test he might have to pass tomorrow. Andrew took out his sleeping bag and got into it. He looked up at the stars and went to sleep.
Rrroooaarrrrrr! Andrew woke with a shock. He had heard a roar. He unsheathed his sword and looked around for the source of the sound. He spotted a lion that was preying on a deer a fair distance away.
Andrew thought of confronting it but instead he decided to stay out of its way and run for the cave. He left his sleeping bag, sheathed his sword and ran.
After 10 minutes of running, he found the entrance to the cave. Rooooaaarrr! The sound was close. Andrew ran for the cave. He made it in and ran deeper. He heard footsteps coming towards him. ‘Show yourself!’ he yelled.
Torches flickered on. Standing a few feet away from him was a 30 year old man.
‘I am the keeper of the treasure. If you seek to claim the treasure you must defeat me.................. in a bey battle!’ the man pulled out a bey.
Andrew looked at and gasped. It was a metal bey. It was Storm Pegasus.
His destination was a cave, a cave that held the treasure that he had wanted his entire life. He stopped and looked around and decided to camp underneath a tree for the night.
The cave he seeked was not far from here. He hoped to rest and face whatever test he might have to pass tomorrow. Andrew took out his sleeping bag and got into it. He looked up at the stars and went to sleep.
Rrroooaarrrrrr! Andrew woke with a shock. He had heard a roar. He unsheathed his sword and looked around for the source of the sound. He spotted a lion that was preying on a deer a fair distance away.
Andrew thought of confronting it but instead he decided to stay out of its way and run for the cave. He left his sleeping bag, sheathed his sword and ran.
After 10 minutes of running, he found the entrance to the cave. Rooooaaarrr! The sound was close. Andrew ran for the cave. He made it in and ran deeper. He heard footsteps coming towards him. ‘Show yourself!’ he yelled.
Torches flickered on. Standing a few feet away from him was a 30 year old man.
‘I am the keeper of the treasure. If you seek to claim the treasure you must defeat me.................. in a bey battle!’ the man pulled out a bey.
Andrew looked at and gasped. It was a metal bey. It was Storm Pegasus.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 02, 2019
Can I post my Chuunibyou x Beyblade crossover again?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 3:43 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: Can I post my Chuunibyou x Beyblade crossover again?Sure.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 02, 2019
https://www.wattpad.com/669578584-beyblade-x-chuunibyou-crossover-returning-shogun
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
Im hecking entering
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 4:47 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Im hecking entering
Battle of the wattpaders
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - UltimateMaster - Aug. 02, 2019
I could probably dig up one of the old stories I wrote
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Spriggan 2.0 - Aug. 02, 2019
Hmmmm. Maybe I'll enter with a new idea. I have a Wattpad account but I'll probably pm you if I enter.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 02, 2019
Can I join? I’ll probably lose because my writing is always on the spot.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 12:47 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: Can I join? I’ll probably lose because my writing is always on the spot.
Anyone can join
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RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
Title: Wrong Fandom
Summary: Daigo experiences a chaotic occurence in his universe. And it all started with trying to walk to school.
Spoiler (Click to View)
For once, Daigo's tiresome eyes were met with dawnlight. Walking outside in the dark had never been safe, especially since his eyes were still recovering from sleep. He just gave it a slide because he could see the sun poking out from the horizon, and that the stars were fading away. Not everyone sentient being was awake right now, and the streets were quiet. In a way like the world didn't want to disturb Daigo at all.
On a school day, he had never been up this early. But it was by accident that his eyes snapped awake in his bed, and he had no idea what to do except go outside. After all, Shu advised that going outside was relaxing for some. And Daigo had told his mom he wanted to go to school early (and for some reason, she accepted. What a good mom).
And no, it was not a lie. He thought that it would be best to go to school a little early, since Daigo had woken up late many times now. Poor Daigo. He thought that everything was fine when he first came out; his poor head thought that waking up early might be a good thing after all.
Until something fell onto his head, straight from the sky. It then bounced off, and landed onto the cement sidewalk with a clack. What the?
The raven-haired boy gave a quiet gasp, and his eyes gazed at all directions before looking down. On the ground was some spherical ball, red in hue with yellow accents. And it wasn't like any small spherical object; he thought it might be rubber, until he noted the plastic-like sound it gave off. It was something... strange. Whatever that is, his entire brain knew that he had never seen such thing.
Another object hit his head, with the same feeling he received from the red and yellow ball.
This time, it had purple and black accents on it, similar to the color scheme of his own Bey.
And that's when Daigo's head perked up. Look up, me.
And he did.
That's when he noticed that cards were falling from the dawn sky. In fact, all sorts of cards. Green and black cards that seemed stiff; brownish orange cards with all sorts of creatures and pictures on them; gray-toned cards similar to the last, but with realistic images; and all sorts of other cards.
That's when Daigo opened up his mouth.
"Ahh!!" he couldn't believe the volume at which he had screeched, before he decided to run away. Who cares about bothering the people behind the buildings? He was running away from falling balls and cards!
His feet lifted him as fast as they could, helping him accelerate and evade the chaos that suddenly started. The emo-like boy definitely had no explanation for falling cards and objects in general.
Had the world suddenly spun into chaos? Is there anyone out there who can explain this to him? Or at least, save him?
"Oof!" Daigo felt himself running into a body, and also felt the last card scrape against his face. One: Did the cards suddenly stop falling? Two: Someone was out here to save him! Finally!
He backed away for a moment, and looked ahead. There was a boy on front of him, with normal-looking clothes and a vest on top. His hair was black and spiked out in one direction, and he wore a white and green cap. This boy seemed to be around his age, which was slightly comforting.
Daigo blinked for a moment, before saying to the boy, "Hey." somehow, his insides still felt a little queasy and sick. He felt like something else might fall down on him, ack.
The boy gave a blink, and responded with a, "Hey. I just have a question. Have you seen my Pikachu anywhere?"
"Um, a Pikachu?" Daigo scratched his head a little, almost bashfully. For some reason, he had never heard of a Pikachu before. Was that some sort of unreleased Beyblade, or something that was exclusive outside Japan? "I don't think— AHHH!"
Something fell onto his head, almost hitting him so hard. Daigo's vision blacked out, and he realized he was twirling in so many directions. ‘What is going on? Why can't I see? Why does it feel like something is on top of my head?’
"Pika!" Daigo heard a squeak as he was shaking uncontrollably. His hands were trying to get something fuzzy on top of him. "Piikaaa!!"
Suddenly, Daigo felt a hand brush over his hands, and managed to pull away the fallen thing. And the same boy cried out, "There you are. Falling out of the sky like that, buddy." he gasped out for a moment, before his voice turning mellow again. "Hey, kid? Are you alright?"
Forget this. Daigo almost wanted to scream, rather than answering the mysterious boy. ‘I should just go.’
And in no time, Daigo shot past the boy and... whatever fuzzy that had fallen out of the sky. He fled rather quickly and with adrenaline, without any care to look back. Whatever just happened, maybe he shouldn't look back; he felt like his insides might barf out if he screamed, anyway.
"Hey! You didn't tell me your name!" in the distance behind him, Daigo heard the faint shouting from the boy.
"This is getting whack," he muttered to himself as he ran faster, his background hitting gently against his back. Within his peripheral vision, he could see small and colorful creatures also falling down the sky. Some of them landing harmlessly onto the ground, or just fluttering in the air.
The only Daigo knew now was that, he better not stop until he gets to his destination. And this fact gave him some sort of horror story vibes:
‘You better not look at your surroundings.’
‘JUST RUN.’
‘Do not talk to whatever tries to talk to you.’
And Daigo figured that he could listen to these tips for a short while. The school wasn't very far away now, so maybe he can get safety within the school's property... unless the same chaotic 'things' are also behind the school gates. Daigo might as well think he's cursed to an extent.
He ran past multiple things he didn't care to look at or talk to. At one point, someone white and blue had noted, "You look like you just had a bad time." And at another point, someone tried to advertise a pizza chain, Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria, to him. And somewhere out in the distance, he thought he saw two kaiju-like figures fighting in the distance. There were a lot more oddities he saw, but he rather forget about them than keep them in mind.
Not to mention, even the background noises were pretty questionable.
"Hey! Who's idea it is to go to Japan for safety? There's still walkers here," he heard a voice behind him, followed by whirring noises. And that only made Daigo run even faster.
A feminine voice sighed out. "It just happens that we ended up here, Daryl."
"Dang"
Daigo had to dodge a zombie here and there, often by juking them or tripping them. Unlike most people, Daigo happened to be unfazed by horror creatures; what do you expect from a guy with a grim reaper Beyblade? Not to mention, zombies weren't abnormal as objects and animals falling down the sky.
Phew. And he's almost at school. Hopefully this mess didn't make him late for school, despite him waking up too early.
"Hey! Do you want to buy some Beyblades?" there was a kid near the school grounds, at a table. Daigo noticed how the Beyblades seemed a lot thicker than the ones he's used to seeing; and in fact, most of the, had metal rings around them. "All cheap and affordable! There's even a Pegasus and a Leone for sale!"
Daigo shouted to the kid selling the Beyblades. "Sorry! Not in the mood!" he panted as he looked back for a moment.
FINALLY.
Daigo almost ran past the entrance to the school grounds, and then he turned in order to enter. He went to his knees in sudden fatigue, panting even harder and placing his hands onto the ground. And then his own face lit up from the sun now showing itself, showing his black eyes proud and accomplished.
I think I'm safe now. Daigo decided to roll onto to floor for a moment, and he slung his backpack aside. Finally. I think I won't be terrorized anymore.
And of course, the final step was to go inside the school itself. Hopefully, the school should be accepting students at this time; and would let them wait until class hours start.
Little did Daigo know, he was far from safe.
"Oh hi!" The door flung open, and he noticed a tall male wearing a green sweater ahead of him. The adult seemed rather bright, and the fact that he's bald and has red lips doesn't make this any better. "Welcome to my schoolhouse!"
"AHHH!!!!"
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 4:54 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Title: Wrong Fandom
Summary: Daigo experiences a chaotic occurence in his universe. And it all started with trying to walk to school.
Spoiler (Click to View)
For once, Daigo's tiresome eyes were met with dawnlight. Walking outside in the dark had never been safe, especially since his eyes were still recovering from sleep. He just gave it a slide because he could see the sun poking out from the horizon, and that the stars were fading away. Not everyone sentient being was awake right now, and the streets were quiet. In a way like the world didn't want to disturb Daigo at all.
On a school day, he had never been up this early. But it was by accident that his eyes snapped awake in his bed, and he had no idea what to do except go outside. After all, Shu advised that going outside was relaxing for some. And Daigo had told his mom he wanted to go to school early (and for some reason, she accepted. What a good mom).
And no, it was not a lie. He thought that it would be best to go to school a little early, since Daigo had woken up late many times now. Poor Daigo. He thought that everything was fine when he first came out; his poor head thought that waking up early might be a good thing after all.
Until something fell onto his head, straight from the sky. It then bounced off, and landed onto the cement sidewalk with a clack. What the?
The raven-haired boy gave a quiet gasp, and his eyes gazed at all directions before looking down. On the ground was some spherical ball, red in hue with yellow accents. And it wasn't like any small spherical object; he thought it might be rubber, until he noted the plastic-like sound it gave off. It was something... strange. Whatever that is, his entire brain knew that he had never seen such thing.
Another object hit his head, with the same feeling he received from the red and yellow ball.
This time, it had purple and black accents on it, similar to the color scheme of his own Bey.
And that's when Daigo's head perked up. Look up, me.
And he did.
That's when he noticed that cards were falling from the dawn sky. In fact, all sorts of cards. Green and black cards that seemed stiff; brownish orange cards with all sorts of creatures and pictures on them; gray-toned cards similar to the last, but with realistic images; and all sorts of other cards.
That's when Daigo opened up his mouth.
"Ahh!!" he couldn't believe the volume at which he had screeched, before he decided to run away. Who cares about bothering the people behind the buildings? He was running away from falling balls and cards!
His feet lifted him as fast as they could, helping him accelerate and evade the chaos that suddenly started. The emo-like boy definitely had no explanation for falling cards and objects in general.
Had the world suddenly spun into chaos? Is there anyone out there who can explain this to him? Or at least, save him?
"Oof!" Daigo felt himself running into a body, and also felt the last card scrape against his face. One: Did the cards suddenly stop falling? Two: Someone was out here to save him! Finally!
He backed away for a moment, and looked ahead. There was a boy on front of him, with normal-looking clothes and a vest on top. His hair was black and spiked out in one direction, and he wore a white and green cap. This boy seemed to be around his age, which was slightly comforting.
Daigo blinked for a moment, before saying to the boy, "Hey." somehow, his insides still felt a little queasy and sick. He felt like something else might fall down on him, ack.
The boy gave a blink, and responded with a, "Hey. I just have a question. Have you seen my Pikachu anywhere?"
"Um, a Pikachu?" Daigo scratched his head a little, almost bashfully. For some reason, he had never heard of a Pikachu before. Was that some sort of unreleased Beyblade, or something that was exclusive outside Japan? "I don't think— AHHH!"
Something fell onto his head, almost hitting him so hard. Daigo's vision blacked out, and he realized he was twirling in so many directions. ‘What is going on? Why can't I see? Why does it feel like something is on top of my head?’
"Pika!" Daigo heard a squeak as he was shaking uncontrollably. His hands were trying to get something fuzzy on top of him. "Piikaaa!!"
Suddenly, Daigo felt a hand brush over his hands, and managed to pull away the fallen thing. And the same boy cried out, "There you are. Falling out of the sky like that, buddy." he gasped out for a moment, before his voice turning mellow again. "Hey, kid? Are you alright?"
Forget this. Daigo almost wanted to scream, rather than answering the mysterious boy. ‘I should just go.’
And in no time, Daigo shot past the boy and... whatever fuzzy that had fallen out of the sky. He fled rather quickly and with adrenaline, without any care to look back. Whatever just happened, maybe he shouldn't look back; he felt like his insides might barf out if he screamed, anyway.
"Hey! You didn't tell me your name!" in the distance behind him, Daigo heard the faint shouting from the boy.
"This is getting whack," he muttered to himself as he ran faster, his background hitting gently against his back. Within his peripheral vision, he could see small and colorful creatures also falling down the sky. Some of them landing harmlessly onto the ground, or just fluttering in the air.
The only Daigo knew now was that, he better not stop until he gets to his destination. And this fact gave him some sort of horror story vibes:
‘You better not look at your surroundings.’
‘JUST RUN.’
‘Do not talk to whatever tries to talk to you.’
And Daigo figured that he could listen to these tips for a short while. The school wasn't very far away now, so maybe he can get safety within the school's property... unless the same chaotic 'things' are also behind the school gates. Daigo might as well think he's cursed to an extent.
He ran past multiple things he didn't care to look at or talk to. At one point, someone white and blue had noted, "You look like you just had a bad time." And at another point, someone tried to advertise a pizza chain, Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria, to him. And somewhere out in the distance, he thought he saw two kaiju-like figures fighting in the distance. There were a lot more oddities he saw, but he rather forget about them than keep them in mind.
Not to mention, even the background noises were pretty questionable.
"Hey! Who's idea it is to go to Japan for safety? There's still walkers here," he heard a voice behind him, followed by whirring noises. And that only made Daigo run even faster.
A feminine voice sighed out. "It just happens that we ended up here, Daryl."
"Dang"
Daigo had to dodge a zombie here and there, often by juking them or tripping them. Unlike most people, Daigo happened to be unfazed by horror creatures; what do you expect from a guy with a grim reaper Beyblade? Not to mention, zombies weren't abnormal as objects and animals falling down the sky.
Phew. And he's almost at school. Hopefully this mess didn't make him late for school, despite him waking up too early.
"Hey! Do you want to buy some Beyblades?" there was a kid near the school grounds, at a table. Daigo noticed how the Beyblades seemed a lot thicker than the ones he's used to seeing; and in fact, most of the, had metal rings around them. "All cheap and affordable! There's even a Pegasus and a Leone for sale!"
Daigo shouted to the kid selling the Beyblades. "Sorry! Not in the mood!" he panted as he looked back for a moment.
FINALLY.
Daigo almost ran past the entrance to the school grounds, and then he turned in order to enter. He went to his knees in sudden fatigue, panting even harder and placing his hands onto the ground. And then his own face lit up from the sun now showing itself, showing his black eyes proud and accomplished.
I think I'm safe now. Daigo decided to roll onto to floor for a moment, and he slung his backpack aside. Finally. I think I won't be terrorized anymore.
And of course, the final step was to go inside the school itself. Hopefully, the school should be accepting students at this time; and would let them wait until class hours start.
Little did Daigo know, he was far from safe.
"Oh hi!" The door flung open, and he noticed a tall male wearing a green sweater ahead of him. The adult seemed rather bright, and the fact that he's bald and has red lips doesn't make this any better. "Welcome to my schoolhouse!"
"AHHH!!!!"
That was amazing. That’s exactly what I’d imagine Daigo/Diana would do
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RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 5:06 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2019 4:54 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Title: Wrong Fandom
Summary: Daigo experiences a chaotic occurence in his universe. And it all started with trying to walk to school.
Spoiler (Click to View)
For once, Daigo's tiresome eyes were met with dawnlight. Walking outside in the dark had never been safe, especially since his eyes were still recovering from sleep. He just gave it a slide because he could see the sun poking out from the horizon, and that the stars were fading away. Not everyone sentient being was awake right now, and the streets were quiet. In a way like the world didn't want to disturb Daigo at all.
On a school day, he had never been up this early. But it was by accident that his eyes snapped awake in his bed, and he had no idea what to do except go outside. After all, Shu advised that going outside was relaxing for some. And Daigo had told his mom he wanted to go to school early (and for some reason, she accepted. What a good mom).
And no, it was not a lie. He thought that it would be best to go to school a little early, since Daigo had woken up late many times now. Poor Daigo. He thought that everything was fine when he first came out; his poor head thought that waking up early might be a good thing after all.
Until something fell onto his head, straight from the sky. It then bounced off, and landed onto the cement sidewalk with a clack. What the?
The raven-haired boy gave a quiet gasp, and his eyes gazed at all directions before looking down. On the ground was some spherical ball, red in hue with yellow accents. And it wasn't like any small spherical object; he thought it might be rubber, until he noted the plastic-like sound it gave off. It was something... strange. Whatever that is, his entire brain knew that he had never seen such thing.
Another object hit his head, with the same feeling he received from the red and yellow ball.
This time, it had purple and black accents on it, similar to the color scheme of his own Bey.
And that's when Daigo's head perked up. Look up, me.
And he did.
That's when he noticed that cards were falling from the dawn sky. In fact, all sorts of cards. Green and black cards that seemed stiff; brownish orange cards with all sorts of creatures and pictures on them; gray-toned cards similar to the last, but with realistic images; and all sorts of other cards.
That's when Daigo opened up his mouth.
"Ahh!!" he couldn't believe the volume at which he had screeched, before he decided to run away. Who cares about bothering the people behind the buildings? He was running away from falling balls and cards!
His feet lifted him as fast as they could, helping him accelerate and evade the chaos that suddenly started. The emo-like boy definitely had no explanation for falling cards and objects in general.
Had the world suddenly spun into chaos? Is there anyone out there who can explain this to him? Or at least, save him?
"Oof!" Daigo felt himself running into a body, and also felt the last card scrape against his face. One: Did the cards suddenly stop falling? Two: Someone was out here to save him! Finally!
He backed away for a moment, and looked ahead. There was a boy on front of him, with normal-looking clothes and a vest on top. His hair was black and spiked out in one direction, and he wore a white and green cap. This boy seemed to be around his age, which was slightly comforting.
Daigo blinked for a moment, before saying to the boy, "Hey." somehow, his insides still felt a little queasy and sick. He felt like something else might fall down on him, ack.
The boy gave a blink, and responded with a, "Hey. I just have a question. Have you seen my Pikachu anywhere?"
"Um, a Pikachu?" Daigo scratched his head a little, almost bashfully. For some reason, he had never heard of a Pikachu before. Was that some sort of unreleased Beyblade, or something that was exclusive outside Japan? "I don't think— AHHH!"
Something fell onto his head, almost hitting him so hard. Daigo's vision blacked out, and he realized he was twirling in so many directions. ‘What is going on? Why can't I see? Why does it feel like something is on top of my head?’
"Pika!" Daigo heard a squeak as he was shaking uncontrollably. His hands were trying to get something fuzzy on top of him. "Piikaaa!!"
Suddenly, Daigo felt a hand brush over his hands, and managed to pull away the fallen thing. And the same boy cried out, "There you are. Falling out of the sky like that, buddy." he gasped out for a moment, before his voice turning mellow again. "Hey, kid? Are you alright?"
Forget this. Daigo almost wanted to scream, rather than answering the mysterious boy. ‘I should just go.’
And in no time, Daigo shot past the boy and... whatever fuzzy that had fallen out of the sky. He fled rather quickly and with adrenaline, without any care to look back. Whatever just happened, maybe he shouldn't look back; he felt like his insides might barf out if he screamed, anyway.
"Hey! You didn't tell me your name!" in the distance behind him, Daigo heard the faint shouting from the boy.
"This is getting whack," he muttered to himself as he ran faster, his background hitting gently against his back. Within his peripheral vision, he could see small and colorful creatures also falling down the sky. Some of them landing harmlessly onto the ground, or just fluttering in the air.
The only Daigo knew now was that, he better not stop until he gets to his destination. And this fact gave him some sort of horror story vibes:
‘You better not look at your surroundings.’
‘JUST RUN.’
‘Do not talk to whatever tries to talk to you.’
And Daigo figured that he could listen to these tips for a short while. The school wasn't very far away now, so maybe he can get safety within the school's property... unless the same chaotic 'things' are also behind the school gates. Daigo might as well think he's cursed to an extent.
He ran past multiple things he didn't care to look at or talk to. At one point, someone white and blue had noted, "You look like you just had a bad time." And at another point, someone tried to advertise a pizza chain, Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria, to him. And somewhere out in the distance, he thought he saw two kaiju-like figures fighting in the distance. There were a lot more oddities he saw, but he rather forget about them than keep them in mind.
Not to mention, even the background noises were pretty questionable.
"Hey! Who's idea it is to go to Japan for safety? There's still walkers here," he heard a voice behind him, followed by whirring noises. And that only made Daigo run even faster.
A feminine voice sighed out. "It just happens that we ended up here, Daryl."
"Dang"
Daigo had to dodge a zombie here and there, often by juking them or tripping them. Unlike most people, Daigo happened to be unfazed by horror creatures; what do you expect from a guy with a grim reaper Beyblade? Not to mention, zombies weren't abnormal as objects and animals falling down the sky.
Phew. And he's almost at school. Hopefully this mess didn't make him late for school, despite him waking up too early.
"Hey! Do you want to buy some Beyblades?" there was a kid near the school grounds, at a table. Daigo noticed how the Beyblades seemed a lot thicker than the ones he's used to seeing; and in fact, most of the, had metal rings around them. "All cheap and affordable! There's even a Pegasus and a Leone for sale!"
Daigo shouted to the kid selling the Beyblades. "Sorry! Not in the mood!" he panted as he looked back for a moment.
FINALLY.
Daigo almost ran past the entrance to the school grounds, and then he turned in order to enter. He went to his knees in sudden fatigue, panting even harder and placing his hands onto the ground. And then his own face lit up from the sun now showing itself, showing his black eyes proud and accomplished.
I think I'm safe now. Daigo decided to roll onto to floor for a moment, and he slung his backpack aside. Finally. I think I won't be terrorized anymore.
And of course, the final step was to go inside the school itself. Hopefully, the school should be accepting students at this time; and would let them wait until class hours start.
Little did Daigo know, he was far from safe.
"Oh hi!" The door flung open, and he noticed a tall male wearing a green sweater ahead of him. The adult seemed rather bright, and the fact that he's bald and has red lips doesn't make this any better. "Welcome to my schoolhouse!"
"AHHH!!!!"
That was amazing. That’s exactly what I’d imagine Daigo/Diana would do
Thanks! Now we all know why hes shown running to school pretty late
He would rather not see that ever again, haha
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 5:09 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2019 5:06 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: That was amazing. That’s exactly what I’d imagine Daigo/Diana would do
Thanks! Now we all know why hes shown running to school pretty late
He would rather not see that ever again, haha
I see you included Baldi's Basics in Education and Learning in your story lol
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
Some questions:
- Can the prizes by “chosen?” Like, can winners choose a prize?
- Are there places and rankings?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 6:01 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Some questions:
- Can the prizes by “chosen?” Like, can winners choose a prize?
- Are there places and rankings?
Yeah, winners pick. What do you mean?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 6:04 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2019 6:01 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Some questions:
- Can the prizes by “chosen?” Like, can winners choose a prize?
- Are there places and rankings?
Yeah, winners pick. What do you mean?
Stuff like first place, second place, etc
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 6:14 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:Top 3.(Aug. 02, 2019 6:04 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yeah, winners pick. What do you mean?
Stuff like first place, second place, etc
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 02, 2019
My Story for the Contest!
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Harold loved beyblade. He was going to a tournament at his friend’s house. After much research, he decided on Judgement Valkyrie 00Cross Destroy’ Zan. The 00 was painted so it would be tight. He wasn’t certain he would win, though...
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - CheetoBlader - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 9:20 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: My Story for the Contest!It was good! Harold… that sound familiar
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
Did you like it Cheeto?Spoiler (Click to View)Harold loved beyblade. He was going to a tournament at his friend’s house. After much research, he decided on Judgement Valkyrie 00Cross Destroy’ Zan. The 00 was painted so it would be tight. He wasn’t certain he would win, though...
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
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RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 10:04 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:Plus the purple crayon... Harold and the Purple Crayon, now where have I heard of that before?(Aug. 02, 2019 9:20 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: My Story for the Contest!It was good! Harold… that sound familiar
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
Did you like it Cheeto?Spoiler (Click to View)Harold loved beyblade. He was going to a tournament at his friend’s house. After much research, he decided on Judgement Valkyrie 00Cross Destroy’ Zan. The 00 was painted so it would be tight. He wasn’t certain he would win, though...
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - BurningSands - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 10:04 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2019 9:20 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: My Story for the Contest!It was good! Harold… that sound familiar
My 1st tournament is coming up so I decided to write about someone who’s going to their 1st tournament(not WBO). This is IRL, not in the anime.
Did you like it Cheeto?Spoiler (Click to View)Harold loved beyblade. He was going to a tournament at his friend’s house. After much research, he decided on Judgement Valkyrie 00Cross Destroy’ Zan. The 00 was painted so it would be tight. He wasn’t certain he would win, though...
Every day Harold thought about his upcoming beyblade tournament. As he stressed his mind thinking, he drew pictures of his victory with a purple crayon. At night, he tossed and turned, anxious for the tournament.
Finally the day of the tournament came. Harold biked to his friend’s house and rang the doorbell. His friend opened it and welcomed him in, saying, “You’re just in time! We’re starting in a minute!”
Harold surveyed the group of people. He noticed confident looks on their faces and grew even more nervous. Finally, the tournament started. The 1st battle went over quickly with a burst finish. 1 person eliminated. Then 2. Then 3. Then 4. Up until there were 2 people left. Harold was one. He was surprised he didn’t lose any battles but was getting more confident. His opponent was a kid named Clark with Bushin Dragon 00Proof Xtend+ Zan. Clark’s bey always outspun the opposing bey, but Harold felt confident that he would easily win. The two bladers got ready to battle, standing on opposite ends of the stadium. They were both determined to win the battle. “3, 2, 1, go SHOOT!”
Bushin Dragon went in the center, Harolds’s jV combo catching the tornado ridge and stalling. Valkyrie began making its way to the center, but took so long that by the time it hit Dragon, it was wobbling a lot. A few puny hits were the only thing Valkyrie did before rolling to a halt.
As Clark rejoiced, all of Harold’s confidence melted away. He realized how he might not walk away the winner. Remembering something he read about called a sliding shoot, Harold decided that a new launch would be key.
When they launched again during the second battle, Harold knew what to do he managed to pull of a decent sliding shoot, his bey constantly attacking Clark’s bD combo. Finally, Bushin Dragon bursted! Harold was absolutely ecstatic when he realized he won. His jV combo had won him a tournament!
After that day, Harold heard about the WBO. He joined it and instantly started battling in tournaments, both Burst and MFB, ending Kei’s and 1234beyblade’s reign as the number one bladers in Burst and Metal Fight, respectively.
Hmm. I wonder where as well, haha
hehe
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
Oh yeah He Who Must Not Be Named(WBO not Harry Potter) gets all of his beys destroyed by Harold.
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - boigamer25 - Aug. 03, 2019
I'm just gonna be that one guy who says he's never heard of him... Because I haven't and I don't get the joke ?
RE: CheetoBlader’s Story Challenge #2 - Dash Driver - Aug. 03, 2019
(Aug. 03, 2019 1:39 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: I'm just gonna be that one guy who says he's never heard of him... Because I haven't and I don't get the joke ?For what? Harold or He Who Must Not Be Named?
Dang it I missed a period and a capital letter in my story. That’ll be a bad thing if I want my story to win.