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Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Jun. 28, 2019

Beyblade Burst Eternals
Chapter 1: The Soaring Beast! Wind Pegasus


Chapter 2: Sekhmet’s Blazing Defense! Fire Burst!


Chapter 3: The Black Knight! Negative Perseus!


Chapter 4: The Scarlet Surprise! Shu Kurenai!



RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - CheetoBlader - Jun. 28, 2019

(Jun. 28, 2019  3:28 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Beyblade Burst Eternals
Chapter 1: The Soaring Beast! Wind Pegasus
It’s a little confusing at times but otherwise it’s mostly good!


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - BurningSands - Jun. 28, 2019

Amazing start! Its pretty cool to see that this makes Metal and Burst in one universe. The original Bit Beast designs are pretty interesting! I especially like Sekhmet


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Jul. 03, 2019

Chapter 2: Sekhmet’s Blazing Defense! Fire Burst!

(Jun. 28, 2019  3:45 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Amazing start! Its pretty cool to see that this makes Metal and Burst in one universe. The original Bit Beast designs are pretty interesting! I especially like Sekhmet

Technically, Multiverse. Characters from Burst may pop in occasionally


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dash Driver - Jul. 05, 2019

I like this story!


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dash Driver - Jul. 12, 2019

So are you continuing this story?


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Jul. 12, 2019

(Jul. 12, 2019  9:11 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: So are you continuing this story?

Yep. Chapters just take a while to write


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - UltimateMaster - Jul. 12, 2019

Awesome Story!


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dash Driver - Jul. 13, 2019

(Jul. 12, 2019  10:07 PM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jul. 12, 2019  9:11 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: So are you continuing this story?

Yep. Chapters just take a while to write
Thanks! Also sorry for being sorta impatient.


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Aug. 02, 2019

Chapter 3: The Black Knight! Negative Perseus!

Also, here's some food for thought:

The next chapter is called: 'The Crimson Conclusion! Shu Kurenai!'


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Aug. 12, 2019

Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - CheetoBlader - Aug. 12, 2019

(Aug. 12, 2019  5:38 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?

Whatever makes you happier.


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - BurningSands - Aug. 12, 2019

(Aug. 12, 2019  5:38 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?

Depends what you want and what makes you feel better. It also depends on how much time you have, too


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Aug. 12, 2019

Okay, chapters will be shorter Smile


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Sep. 13, 2019

This story is not dead, I won’t let another story slip away so quick, but it is on indefinite hiatus, sorry


RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Dt20000 - Nov. 05, 2019

Chapter 4: The Scarlet Surprise! Shu Kurenai!



RE: Beyblade Burst Eternals - Ryuga's Son - May. 12, 2021

Dt20000, did you quit this fan fic? I rather enjoyed this a lot.