Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 05, 2019
Chapter 1: Marty vs Jake
For the past 3 years, Marty (16) has been the world champion with his bey Cho-Z Valkyrie.Blitz.Ultimate Reboot but now a new generation of bladers join the fight and this is the story of The New Generation.
In America, Marty walked up to the bey stadium.
“Boys and Girl, It is the Beyblade World Champion Marty Alpha, today his opponent will be Jake Omega(15).” Said the Announcer Jake walked up to the stadium and smiled at Marty. “Marty will his Cho-Z Valkyrie.Bl.Ul vs Jake with his Cho-Z Achilles.4Turn.Xt, will Jake be able to defeat Marty. “You’re going down,” said Jake as he put Achilles on his launcher. Marty smiled as he put Valkryie on his. “Jake you can beat him” yelled Takio, Jake’s little brother who was 13. Jake sighed
The ref said “Ready Set” Marty and Jake both said “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Valkyrie and
Achilles flew into the stadium. They Circled each other.
“Achilles, show them what we got, Cho-Z Sword” Achilles glowed a bright red.
“Valkyrie, time for Cho-Z Blade” Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and the clashed into each other.
Valkyrie’s and Achilles avatar clashed Swords. Achilles was sent flying back in the wall.
“We’re not done here Achilles, Cho-Z Slash. Achilles rashed after, Valkyrie.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Flash Shoot” Valkyrie hit the tornado rim and speed up. And chased after Achilles.
“Achilles, Cho-Z Shield” Achilles took the center as its shields on the layer glowed yellow.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Blade” The points on blitz came up and Ul activated and Valkyrie zoom towards the middle. Valkyrie crashed into Achilles. A huge surge of power came of them
“Don’t give up Achilles, show them how strong our Defense is” Yelled Jake Achilles avatar was holding up and shield and Valkyrie’s avatar was hitting the shield with his sword. Achilles layer cracked as it was sent flying out of the stadium.
“One Point to Marty for an over finish. Jake picked up Achilles and up it on his launcher not seeing the crack.
“Come on Brother beat him, you and Achilles are stronger than them, keep your promise to me” yelled Takio.
“I will,” said Jake as he looks at Marty, Marty could see Achilles standing behind him. Marty smiled. “Yes let's finish this”
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - Dt20000 - Apr. 05, 2019
(Apr. 05, 2019 9:31 PM)NobodyBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: Marty and Jake [Spoilers=]
For the past 3 years, Marty (16) has been the world champion with his bey Cho-Z Valkyrie.Blitz.Ultimate Reboot but now a new generation of bladers join the fight and this is the story of The New Generation.
In America, Marty walked up to the bey stadium.
“Boys and Girl, It is the Beyblade World Champion Marty Alpha, today his opponent will be Jake Omega(15).” Said the Announcer Jake walked up to the stadium and smiled at Marty. “Marty will his Cho-Z Valkyrie.Bl.Ul vs Jake with his Cho-Z Achilles.4Turn.Xt, will Jake be able to defeat Marty. “You’re going down,” said Jake as he put Achilles on his launcher. Marty smiled as he put Valkryie on his. “Jake you can beat him” yelled Takio, Jake’s little brother who was 13. Jake sighed
The ref said “Ready Set” Marty and Jake both said “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Valkyrie and
Achilles flew into the stadium. They Circled each other.
“Achilles, show them what we got, Cho-Z Sword” Achilles glowed a bright red.
“Valkyrie, time for Cho-Z Blade” Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and the clashed into each other.
Valkyrie’s and Achilles avatar clashed Swords. Achilles was sent flying back in the wall.
“We’re not done here Achilles, Cho-Z Slash. Achilles rashed after, Valkyrie.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Flash Shoot” Valkyrie hit the tornado rim and speed up. And chased after Achilles.
“Achilles, Cho-Z Shield” Achilles took the center as its shields on the layer glowed yellow.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Blade” The points on blitz came up and Ul activated and Valkyrie zoom towards the middle. Valkyrie crashed into Achilles. A huge surge of power came of them
“Don’t give up Achilles, show them how strong our Defense is” Yelled Jake Achilles avatar was holding up and shield and Valkyrie’s avatar was hitting the shield with his sword. Achilles layer cracked as it was sent flying out of the stadium.
“One Point to Marty for an over finish. Jake picked up Achilles and up it on his launcher not seeing the crack.
“Come on Brother beat him, you and Achilles are stronger than them, keep your promise to me” yelled Takio.
“I will,” said Jake as he looks at Marty, Marty could see Achilles standing behind him. Marty smiled. “Yes let's finish this” [/Spoilers]
So what do you guys think, I'm open to characters to add to the story,
Replace Spoilers with spoiler, no plural
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 05, 2019
(Apr. 05, 2019 9:33 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Apr. 05, 2019 9:31 PM)NobodyBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: Marty and Jake
For the past 3 years, Marty (16) has been the world champion with his bey Cho-Z Valkyrie.Blitz.Ultimate Reboot but now a new generation of bladers join the fight and this is the story of The New Generation.
In America, Marty walked up to the bey stadium.
“Boys and Girl, It is the Beyblade World Champion Marty Alpha, today his opponent will be Jake Omega(15).” Said the Announcer Jake walked up to the stadium and smiled at Marty. “Marty will his Cho-Z Valkyrie.Bl.Ul vs Jake with his Cho-Z Achilles.4Turn.Xt, will Jake be able to defeat Marty. “You’re going down,” said Jake as he put Achilles on his launcher. Marty smiled as he put Valkryie on his. “Jake you can beat him” yelled Takio, Jake’s little brother who was 13. Jake sighed
The ref said “Ready Set” Marty and Jake both said “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Valkyrie and
Achilles flew into the stadium. They Circled each other.
“Achilles, show them what we got, Cho-Z Sword” Achilles glowed a bright red.
“Valkyrie, time for Cho-Z Blade” Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and the clashed into each other.
Valkyrie’s and Achilles avatar clashed Swords. Achilles was sent flying back in the wall.
“We’re not done here Achilles, Cho-Z Slash. Achilles rashed after, Valkyrie.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Flash Shoot” Valkyrie hit the tornado rim and speed up. And chased after Achilles.
“Achilles, Cho-Z Shield” Achilles took the center as its shields on the layer glowed yellow.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Blade” The points on blitz came up and Ul activated and Valkyrie zoom towards the middle. Valkyrie crashed into Achilles. A huge surge of power came of them
“Don’t give up Achilles, show them how strong our Defense is” Yelled Jake Achilles avatar was holding up and shield and Valkyrie’s avatar was hitting the shield with his sword. Achilles layer cracked as it was sent flying out of the stadium.
“One Point to Marty for an over finish. Jake picked up Achilles and up it on his launcher not seeing the crack.
“Come on Brother beat him, you and Achilles are stronger than them, keep your promise to me” yelled Takio.
“I will,” said Jake as he looks at Marty, Marty could see Achilles standing behind him. Marty smiled. “Yes let's finish this”
So what do you guys think, I'm open to characters to add to the story,
Replace Spoilers with spoiler, no plural
Thanks, so what do you think so far?
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - Dt20000 - Apr. 05, 2019
(Apr. 05, 2019 9:34 PM)NobodyBlader Wrote: (Apr. 05, 2019 9:33 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Replace Spoilers with spoiler, no plural
Thanks, so what do you think so far?
I like it
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - UltimateMaster - Apr. 05, 2019
Great Story! Thanks for Sharing,
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - CheetoBlader - Apr. 06, 2019
(Apr. 05, 2019 9:31 PM)NobodyBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: Marty vs Jake
For the past 3 years, Marty (16) has been the world champion with his bey Cho-Z Valkyrie.Blitz.Ultimate Reboot but now a new generation of bladers join the fight and this is the story of The New Generation.
In America, Marty walked up to the bey stadium.
“Boys and Girl, It is the Beyblade World Champion Marty Alpha, today his opponent will be Jake Omega(15).” Said the Announcer Jake walked up to the stadium and smiled at Marty. “Marty will his Cho-Z Valkyrie.Bl.Ul vs Jake with his Cho-Z Achilles.4Turn.Xt, will Jake be able to defeat Marty. “You’re going down,” said Jake as he put Achilles on his launcher. Marty smiled as he put Valkryie on his. “Jake you can beat him” yelled Takio, Jake’s little brother who was 13. Jake sighed
The ref said “Ready Set” Marty and Jake both said “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Valkyrie and
Achilles flew into the stadium. They Circled each other.
“Achilles, show them what we got, Cho-Z Sword” Achilles glowed a bright red.
“Valkyrie, time for Cho-Z Blade” Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and the clashed into each other.
Valkyrie’s and Achilles avatar clashed Swords. Achilles was sent flying back in the wall.
“We’re not done here Achilles, Cho-Z Slash. Achilles rashed after, Valkyrie.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Flash Shoot” Valkyrie hit the tornado rim and speed up. And chased after Achilles.
“Achilles, Cho-Z Shield” Achilles took the center as its shields on the layer glowed yellow.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Blade” The points on blitz came up and Ul activated and Valkyrie zoom towards the middle. Valkyrie crashed into Achilles. A huge surge of power came of them
“Don’t give up Achilles, show them how strong our Defense is” Yelled Jake Achilles avatar was holding up and shield and Valkyrie’s avatar was hitting the shield with his sword. Achilles layer cracked as it was sent flying out of the stadium.
“One Point to Marty for an over finish. Jake picked up Achilles and up it on his launcher not seeing the crack.
“Come on Brother beat him, you and Achilles are stronger than them, keep your promise to me” yelled Takio.
“I will,” said Jake as he looks at Marty, Marty could see Achilles standing behind him. Marty smiled. “Yes let's finish this” Nice story! I think Achilles will break then Jake will get a new non-generic BEYBLADE!
Also Can you put Roan in the story?
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 06, 2019
(Apr. 06, 2019 2:52 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Apr. 05, 2019 9:31 PM)NobodyBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: Marty vs Jake
For the past 3 years, Marty (16) has been the world champion with his bey Cho-Z Valkyrie.Blitz.Ultimate Reboot but now a new generation of bladers join the fight and this is the story of The New Generation.
In America, Marty walked up to the bey stadium.
“Boys and Girl, It is the Beyblade World Champion Marty Alpha, today his opponent will be Jake Omega(15).” Said the Announcer Jake walked up to the stadium and smiled at Marty. “Marty will his Cho-Z Valkyrie.Bl.Ul vs Jake with his Cho-Z Achilles.4Turn.Xt, will Jake be able to defeat Marty. “You’re going down,” said Jake as he put Achilles on his launcher. Marty smiled as he put Valkryie on his. “Jake you can beat him” yelled Takio, Jake’s little brother who was 13. Jake sighed
The ref said “Ready Set” Marty and Jake both said “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Valkyrie and
Achilles flew into the stadium. They Circled each other.
“Achilles, show them what we got, Cho-Z Sword” Achilles glowed a bright red.
“Valkyrie, time for Cho-Z Blade” Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and the clashed into each other.
Valkyrie’s and Achilles avatar clashed Swords. Achilles was sent flying back in the wall.
“We’re not done here Achilles, Cho-Z Slash. Achilles rashed after, Valkyrie.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Flash Shoot” Valkyrie hit the tornado rim and speed up. And chased after Achilles.
“Achilles, Cho-Z Shield” Achilles took the center as its shields on the layer glowed yellow.
“Valkyrie, Cho-Z Blade” The points on blitz came up and Ul activated and Valkyrie zoom towards the middle. Valkyrie crashed into Achilles. A huge surge of power came of them
“Don’t give up Achilles, show them how strong our Defense is” Yelled Jake Achilles avatar was holding up and shield and Valkyrie’s avatar was hitting the shield with his sword. Achilles layer cracked as it was sent flying out of the stadium.
“One Point to Marty for an over finish. Jake picked up Achilles and up it on his launcher not seeing the crack.
“Come on Brother beat him, you and Achilles are stronger than them, keep your promise to me” yelled Takio.
“I will,” said Jake as he looks at Marty, Marty could see Achilles standing behind him. Marty smiled. “Yes let's finish this” Nice story! I think Achilles will break then Jake will get a new non-generic BEYBLADE!
Also Can you put Roan in the story?
I hate to ask, but who is Roan? And if I did add him, would you be fine if he had Bloody Longnuis?
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 09, 2019
Chapter 2
Jake and Marty smiled at each other. Marty put Valkyrie on the launcher. Jake switched Turn from defense to attack. Marty noticed this and tilted his launcher.
The ref said, “Ready set” In sync Marty and Jaked yelled “3,2,1 Go Shoot” Achilles and Valkyrie flew into the stadium. Both beys Cho-Z wings came out
“Don’t hold back Achilles end this now, Achilles' Blade” Achilles rushed towards Valkyrie, Valkyrie was in a flower pattern, and dodged Achilles attacks. “How?” asked Jake, “You
still, have so much to learn,” said Marty.
“I’ll show you what we can do, Cho-Z Counter” Achilles use Xtend to change its direction and crashed into Valkyrie. Valkyrie was sent flying into the wall of the stadium, Achilles started to break more. A cloaked figure in the crowd smiled and said “Just as planned”
“Mhm, It's going to take more to beat me than just that, Valkyrie Cho-Z Sword” Blitz’s points came up and Valkyrie glowed a bright blue and then rushed at Achilles.
“Achilles’ Shield” Achilles’s layers glowed yellow. They two beys clashed. Massive power came off of them. Achilles and Valkyrie slammed into the wall and then both headed towards the center again. They clashed again.
“Achilles, Hang in there” Yelled Jake as he tried not to be sent flying back.
“Valkyrie, show Achilles how strong you are” Yelled Marty.
Due to the massive power of the beys, the beys were sent flying up in the air after they destroyed the stadium. While in the air Achilles crack spread even more and then the layer broke in half. Jakes' eyes widen, Achilles’ avatar shattered. Jakes fell to the ground. Marty stood there in shock, Valkyrie landed in the destroyed stadium. All of the Cho-Z wings were pushed it. Marty grabbed Valkyrie. “2 Points Burst Finish, Marty Alpha is the winner” said the ref. Jake Picked up the broken parts of Achilles and walked off. Takio watched his brother slowly walked away. Takio pulled out Z Achilles.2D.Mr’ and looked at it “ I swear Achilles, we will avenge Cho-Z Achilles and older brother by beating Marty Alpha” Achilles growed a dark red.
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - CheetoBlader - Apr. 10, 2019
(Apr. 06, 2019 5:08 AM)NobodyBlader Wrote: (Apr. 06, 2019 2:52 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Nice story! I think Achilles will break then Jake will get a new non-generic BEYBLADE!
Also Can you put Roan in the story?
I hate to ask, but who is Roan? And if I did add him, would you be fine if he had Bloody Longnuis?
Roan is the MC of my story. (In my Signature).
Also I would prefer if he had his BEYBLADE but I don’t care too much. 
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 10, 2019
(Apr. 10, 2019 12:59 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Apr. 06, 2019 5:08 AM)NobodyBlader Wrote: I hate to ask, but who is Roan? And if I did add him, would you be fine if he had Bloody Longnuis?
Roan is the MC of my story. (In my Signature).
Also I would prefer if he had his BEYBLADE but I don’t care too much.
Well the thing is I don’t want fan beys no offense
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - CheetoBlader - Apr. 10, 2019
(Apr. 10, 2019 1:38 AM)NobodyBlader Wrote: (Apr. 10, 2019 12:59 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Roan is the MC of my story. (In my Signature).
Also I would prefer if he had his BEYBLADE but I don’t care too much.
Well the thing is I don’t want fan beys no offense Okay that’s good!
RE: Beybalde Burst Turbo-Z - NobodyBlader - Apr. 23, 2019
Chapter 3
8 months later
Takio walked up to a stage, it was dark as a light turned on and there was Girl standing there she had no emotion on her face, then she said “Welcome all to this tournament, you peasants will show me who is the strongest and will battle me and my Dead Heads.00G.F’, now lets go to the elimination round the top 4 bladers with the highest points will go on to the first round.
Takio opponent was a boy named Eric and challenged him to a battle, he had mG.6F.Lp
“3,2,1 go Shoot” mG landed into the stadium and went for the center.
“Achilles, Z Blade” Achilles used its blade on the layer and slammed into mG and bursted it. Eric slammed his hand onto the ground, as Takio walked away a cloaked figure walked up to him and said “Let me give some more strength” as he picked up mG and walked off
Takio kept running around winning points left and right. “Time is up, now let us see which bladers made it to the first round, Takio Omega, Devoe Delta, Cross Trip, and Eric Noir.
The First round will be Takio vs Eric, then Devoe vs Cross now let's see who is the strongest blader you have a week to prepare” she walked off, she thought to herself “you better not prove me wrong, Devoe” Takio was training in the bey park as a boy walked up to him, “Good job on making it to the 1st round” Takio looked at him. The boy had a creepy smile on his face. “Now lets battle” He held up Hazard Kerbeus.6P.Gr
Takio smiled as he put Z Achilles on his launcher, the boy smiled as he said “by the why my name is Emerald”, Takio smiled “The names Takio Omega” “I know who you are you’re just a weak blader.” Takio got mad and yelled “we’ll see you will win this battle”
“3,2,1 go Shoot” Kerbeus went for the center as Achilles zoomed around the stadium,
“Z rush shoot” Achilles hit Kerbeus with a barrage of attacks. “Keep attacking”
“It’s useless, to Attack, Gaurd Gate Kerbeus” Kerbeus glowed a dark green
“Z Blade” Achilles slammed into Kerbeus and Achilles was sent back flying into the wall.
“Once again, I told you it is useless to attack” laughed Emerald, Achilles ran out of spin.
Takio grabbed Achilles and yelled “lets go again” Emerald walked off and said “No thanks I got all I needed
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