The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 18, 2019
Sup Everyone! This is the Adventures of Roan Part 2 which is a collab between me and CheetoBlader (which he has agreed to) and like the previous Adventures of Roan it mainly focuses on Roan as its main character who is now going into the Worldleague where he's gonna battle a bunch of a new bladers and it's also focuses on Avery (myself) and his friends (mainly his two best friends) as the series main antagonists it also has characters from the anime series as supporting characters such as Kyle (who's a supporting antagonist), Suoh, Aiger, Phi, remaining members of the snake pit, Valt, Ben, Toko, Nika, and more. Also some characters in this story are based on real people but not actual events. Well now let the story begin!
Character description (there's one of these before every chapter either describing characters who haven't been described yet that I either made up or are based on actual people)
Avery (myself): Avery is a 15 year old rocker.... Well if you read my bio you know the rest.
He (I) has brown hair with bangs that sweep of to the side (as you can tell from my profile pic) and he (I) wears a purple shirt with the sleeves ripped off with a skull on it, black and white plaid shorts, a silver bracelet with studs, a black bracelet with a guitar pick attached to it, and ablack studded choker collar. (My bey is mentioned in my bio.) Avery (I) has a confident, ego driven, firy, passionate, independent (but at the same time social), ambitious, and most of all LOUD personality. Even though he (I) may seem stand offish and rude (especially towards Roan in the story) but he deeply cares about his friends and would do anything for them.
Micah: Micah is one of my two BFFs (not BFs I have 7 of those) Micah is 13 and a half years old and is known for being the comic relief in any situation (even though some of his jokes can be pretty bad but then again some of them can be pretty good.) Micah also survived cancer (which he sometime uses to get what he wants) which Avery stood by his side through the whole time giving them a very strong friendship. Micah has brown curly hair, has braces, wears a green tank top, orange and brown plaid shorts, and orange and green mismatched flip flops.
-Avery
Prologue:
"Well done Anubis! You fought that battle well. Anubis, I think your ready to become the unstoppable bey!" Said a young voice. The young voice was from a teen named Avery and he just won battle (which is saying something considering that he doesn't beyblade much.) Avery began to unscrew the top half of Anubis' energy layer off and put it in a black case. "Now Shining Amaterios our time has come to rise to the top!" Said Avery while pulling out his bey Shining Amaterios. "And no one's gonna get in our way!" Then Avery put up Amaterios and the black case and pulled out a keytar and an amp. "Well! Now that I'm done with that now I can actually do something that I wanna do!" Then Avery began to play rock/metal song that he had been working on, on his keytar (which since it was plugged into an amp it had a unique distorted sound.) Then all of the sudden he had to stop working on his song cause he had an incoming Skype call on his tablet. "Now who could that be?" Questioned Avery. He went over to the tablet to check who was Skyping him, it was his BFF Micah. "Helooooo Avery," said Micah. "Oh sup Micah!" Said Avery. "Hey Avery I need to ask for a little favor...." "OK what is it Micah?" " Can you come to the bey tournament in Memphis with me?" "What?! Sorry dude but no! Look, I got loads of songs to work on for my band, and Micah, and I don't need something like a beytournament to get in the way!" "Come on Avery pleassssse after all I'm your best friend and I could not be here right now I'm mean what if I was dead and wasn't here right now? Huh? What if I died of cancer?! Should you be happy so you wouldn't have someone to waste your time?!" Micah always did this but yet Avery always fell for it. "No, Micah nothing you ever wanna do is a waste of time! I'll go with you OK?" Said Avery. "Great," said Micah. "Byyyyyyeeeee!," said Micah. "Rock on Micah," said Avery. Avery then closed the Skype call, "Well I guess my music will have to wait," said Avery.
The next day Avery went out of Michigan (the state he was living in at the time) and began to go to Memphis, Tennessee. Then Avery made it to Micah's house. "Avery you made it!" Said Micah as Avery walked inside of his house. "Sup Micah!" Said Avery. "I knew you would make it Avery I knew my BFF wouldn't let me down!" "Yeah, yeah but I have one quick question Micah. Can we please stop by the Elvis gift shop here? I have saved up all my money and I would really like to get something there." "No problem Avery!" Said Micah.
Then they not headed off to team tournament. In the tournament Avery and Micah won without a single loss! And later went in more team tournaments together and alspo won them without a single loss. Then there was a singles tournament that came up and Micah and Avery thought that this would be a great chance to break each other's winning streaks. They made it to the finals in that tournament (again without a single loss.) And then battled each other in an unbelievably close fight but however Avery won the fight. Then there was another singles tournament that they got into and just like last time they made it to the finals without a single loss. And just like last time they battled each other in an unbelievably close match but unlike last time, Micah won! Avery shrugged it off and congratulated his friend. After that Avery and Micah became known as some of the world's best bladers! Then after that for some time Micah stopped asking Avery to go to tournaments and Avery got to spend more time writing music.
Now chapter 1 is coming up next!
P.S. Sorry if there were any typos.
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - BurningSands - Feb. 18, 2019
As a note, maybe use a spoiler tag if the chapter gets really long. The story seems good so far, but a little hard for my eyes to read
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 18, 2019
Chapter 1
Gateway to the top!
Avery was just sitting there on his bed trying to come up with some ideas for lyrics to his music when all of the sudden he got a Skype call from Micah. "Helooooo!" Said Micah with a big grin. "Oh sup Micah!" Said Avery. "Hey Avery you know how you're going to see Chai tomorrow in British Columbia, Canada?" Said Micah. "Yeah?" Said Avery. "Well Avery there's this huuuuge beytournament there that you need 2-4 people to enter and....." "I'm sorry Micah but no! Me and Chai plan to work on our music for our band and do fun vacation stuff like scuba diving and sightseeing and a bunch of other stuff that doesn't involve beyblade tournaments!" Said Avery cutting Micah off.
"But Avery whoever wins this tournament wins a trip to Japan to be in the World League entrance tournament!" Said Micah. "The World League you say?" Said Avery. Even though Avery was busy writing music he still liked beyblade and a tournament like a World League entrance tournament is pretty big also not to mention the free trip to Japan and that's something Avery couldn't just simply pass up! "And also Avery what of I died of cancer would you be....." "Be happy that you were gone so I could do what I wanna do no I wouldn't and also I'm going to that tournament with you!" Said Avery. "You mean it Avery?" "I mean it Micah!" "Great Avery well see you there! Byyyyyyeeee!" Said Micah. "Rock on," said Avery. Then Avery picked up his beyblade partner Amaterios and said to it, "Amaterios, time to put on the greatest show on earth!" And the bey gleamed back. The next day Avery got onto the airplane to British Columbia and said goodbye (more like rock on of you know Avery) to all his friends and loved ones in Michigan. And then the plane took off and Avery began to fly to Canada. When the plane landed Avery showed a taxi driver Chai's address and the taxi driver drove him over there. When Avery got to Chao's beach house he went to the room him and Chai were sharing and collapsed onto the bed Avery was given and fell asleep, dreaming of his journey to the World League ahead.
P.S. Sorry of there were some typos.
(Feb. 18, 2019 5:25 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: As a note, maybe use a spoiler tag if the chapter gets really long. The story seems good so far, but a little hard for my eyes to read
I probably will after I finish chapter 2. But thanks for the reminder. -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - blasterboy1995 - Feb. 18, 2019
Interesting story idea. Are we allowed to submit our own custom characters and Beyblades? Because I have at least 5 or 6 characters in mind that I made up.
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 18, 2019
(Feb. 18, 2019 5:59 PM)blasterboy1995 Wrote: Interesting story idea. Are we allowed to submit our own custom characters and Beyblades? Because I have at least 5 or 6 characters in mind that I made up. First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
(Feb. 18, 2019 7:51 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: (Feb. 18, 2019 5:59 PM)blasterboy1995 Wrote: Interesting story idea. Are we allowed to submit our own custom characters and Beyblades? Because I have at least 5 or 6 characters in mind that I made up. First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
I mean too, stupid typos!
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 18, 2019
(Feb. 18, 2019 5:03 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Sup Everyone! This is the Adventures of Roan Part 2 which is a collab between me and CheetoBlader (which he has agreed to) and like the previous Adventures of Roan it mainly focuses on Roan as its main character who is now going into the Worldleague where he's gonna battle a bunch of a new bladers and it's also focuses on Avery (myself) and his friends (mainly his two best friends) as the series main antagonists it also has characters from the anime series as supporting characters such as Kyle (who's a supporting antagonist), Suoh, Aiger, Phi, remaining members of the snake pit, Valt, Ben, Toko, Nika, and more. Also some characters in this story are based on real people but not actual events. Well now let the story begin!
Character description (there's one of these before every chapter either describing characters who haven't been described yet that I either made up or are based on actual people)
Avery (myself): Avery is a 15 year old rocker.... Well if you read my bio you know the rest.
He (I) has brown hair with bangs that sweep of to the side (as you can tell from my profile pic) and he (I) wears a purple shirt with the sleeves ripped off with a skull on it, black and white plaid shorts, a silver bracelet with studs, a black bracelet with a guitar pick attached to it, and ablack studded choker collar. (My bey is mentioned in my bio.) Avery (I) has a confident, ego driven, firy, passionate, independent (but at the same time social), ambitious, and most of all LOUD personality. Even though he (I) may seem stand offish and rude (especially towards Roan in the story) but he deeply cares about his friends and would do anything for them.
Micah: Micah is one of my two BFFs (not BFs I have 7 of those) Micah is 13 and a half years old and is known for being the comic relief in any situation (even though some of his jokes can be pretty bad but then again some of them can be pretty good.) Micah also survived cancer (which he sometime uses to get what he wants) which Avery stood by his side through the whole time giving them a very strong friendship. Micah has brown curly hair, has braces, wears a green tank top, orange and brown plaid shorts, and orange and green mismatched flip flops.
-Avery
Prologue:
"Well done Anubis! You fought that battle well. Anubis, I think your ready to become the unstoppable bey!" Said a young voice. The young voice was from a teen named Avery and he just won battle (which is saying something considering that he doesn't beyblade much.) Avery began to unscrew the top half of Anubis' energy layer off and put it in a black case. "Now Shining Amaterios our time has come to rise to the top!" Said Avery while pulling out his bey Shining Amaterios. "And no one's gonna get in our way!" Then Avery put up Amaterios and the black case and pulled out a keytar and an amp. "Well! Now that I'm done with that now I can actually do something that I wanna do!" Then Avery began to play rock/metal song that he had been working on, on his keytar (which since it was plugged into an amp it had a unique distorted sound.) Then all of the sudden he had to stop working on his song cause he had an incoming Skype call on his tablet. "Now who could that be?" Questioned Avery. He went over to the tablet to check who was Skyping him, it was his BFF Micah. "Helooooo Avery," said Micah. "Oh sup Micah!" Said Avery. "Hey Avery I need to ask for a little favor...." "OK what is it Micah?" " Can you come to the bey tournament in Memphis with me?" "What?! Sorry dude but no! Look, I got loads of songs to work on for my band, and Micah, and I don't need something like a beytournament to get in the way!" "Come on Avery pleassssse after all I'm your best friend and I could not be here right now I'm mean what if I was dead and wasn't here right now? Huh? What if I died of cancer?! Should you be happy so you wouldn't have someone to waste your time?!" Micah always did this but yet Avery always fell for it. "No, Micah nothing you ever wanna do is a waste of time! I'll go with you OK?" Said Avery. "Great," said Micah. "Byyyyyyeeeee!," said Micah. "Rock on Micah," said Avery. Avery then closed the Skype call, "Well I guess my music will have to wait," said Avery.
The next day Avery went out of Michigan (the state he was living in at the time) and began to go to Memphis, Tennessee. Then Avery made it to Micah's house. "Avery you made it!" Said Micah as Avery walked inside of his house. "Sup Micah!" Said Avery. "I knew you would make it Avery I knew my BFF wouldn't let me down!" "Yeah, yeah but I have one quick question Micah. Can we please stop by the Elvis gift shop here? I have saved up all my money and I would really like to get something there." "No problem Avery!" Said Micah.
Then they not headed off to team tournament. In the tournament Avery and Micah won without a single loss! And later went in more team tournaments together and alspo won them without a single loss. Then there was a singles tournament that came up and Micah and Avery thought that this would be a great chance to break each other's winning streaks. They made it to the finals in that tournament (again without a single loss.) And then battled each other in an unbelievably close fight but however Avery won the fight. Then there was another singles tournament that they got into and just like last time they made it to the finals without a single loss. And just like last time they battled each other in an unbelievably close match but unlike last time, Micah won! Avery shrugged it off and congratulated his friend. After that Avery and Micah became known as some of the world's best bladers! Then after that for some time Micah stopped asking Avery to go to tournaments and Avery got to spend more time writing music. -Avery
Now chapter 1 is coming up next!
P.S. Sorry if there were any typos.
Not a Collab! Just a deal so you stop invading my thread! But any ways don’t make Roan look too bad! 
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - blasterboy1995 - Feb. 18, 2019
(Feb. 18, 2019 7:51 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: (Feb. 18, 2019 5:59 PM)blasterboy1995 Wrote: Interesting story idea. Are we allowed to submit our own custom characters and Beyblades? Because I have at least 5 or 6 characters in mind that I made up. First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
(Feb. 18, 2019 7:51 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
I mean too, stupid typos!
Okay thank you.
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 19, 2019
(Feb. 18, 2019 9:59 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 18, 2019 5:03 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Sup Everyone! This is the Adventures of Roan Part 2 which is a collab between me and CheetoBlader (which he has agreed to) and like the previous Adventures of Roan it mainly focuses on Roan as its main character who is now going into the Worldleague where he's gonna battle a bunch of a new bladers and it's also focuses on Avery (myself) and his friends (mainly his two best friends) as the series main antagonists it also has characters from the anime series as supporting characters such as Kyle (who's a supporting antagonist), Suoh, Aiger, Phi, remaining members of the snake pit, Valt, Ben, Toko, Nika, and more. Also some characters in this story are based on real people but not actual events. Well now let the story begin!
Character description (there's one of these before every chapter either describing characters who haven't been described yet that I either made up or are based on actual people)
Avery (myself): Avery is a 15 year old rocker.... Well if you read my bio you know the rest.
He (I) has brown hair with bangs that sweep of to the side (as you can tell from my profile pic) and he (I) wears a purple shirt with the sleeves ripped off with a skull on it, black and white plaid shorts, a silver bracelet with studs, a black bracelet with a guitar pick attached to it, and ablack studded choker collar. (My bey is mentioned in my bio.) Avery (I) has a confident, ego driven, firy, passionate, independent (but at the same time social), ambitious, and most of all LOUD personality. Even though he (I) may seem stand offish and rude (especially towards Roan in the story) but he deeply cares about his friends and would do anything for them.
Micah: Micah is one of my two BFFs (not BFs I have 7 of those) Micah is 13 and a half years old and is known for being the comic relief in any situation (even though some of his jokes can be pretty bad but then again some of them can be pretty good.) Micah also survived cancer (which he sometime uses to get what he wants) which Avery stood by his side through the whole time giving them a very strong friendship. Micah has brown curly hair, has braces, wears a green tank top, orange and brown plaid shorts, and orange and green mismatched flip flops.
-Avery
Prologue:
"Well done Anubis! You fought that battle well. Anubis, I think your ready to become the unstoppable bey!" Said a young voice. The young voice was from a teen named Avery and he just won battle (which is saying something considering that he doesn't beyblade much.) Avery began to unscrew the top half of Anubis' energy layer off and put it in a black case. "Now Shining Amaterios our time has come to rise to the top!" Said Avery while pulling out his bey Shining Amaterios. "And no one's gonna get in our way!" Then Avery put up Amaterios and the black case and pulled out a keytar and an amp. "Well! Now that I'm done with that now I can actually do something that I wanna do!" Then Avery began to play rock/metal song that he had been working on, on his keytar (which since it was plugged into an amp it had a unique distorted sound.) Then all of the sudden he had to stop working on his song cause he had an incoming Skype call on his tablet. "Now who could that be?" Questioned Avery. He went over to the tablet to check who was Skyping him, it was his BFF Micah. "Helooooo Avery," said Micah. "Oh sup Micah!" Said Avery. "Hey Avery I need to ask for a little favor...." "OK what is it Micah?" " Can you come to the bey tournament in Memphis with me?" "What?! Sorry dude but no! Look, I got loads of songs to work on for my band, and Micah, and I don't need something like a beytournament to get in the way!" "Come on Avery pleassssse after all I'm your best friend and I could not be here right now I'm mean what if I was dead and wasn't here right now? Huh? What if I died of cancer?! Should you be happy so you wouldn't have someone to waste your time?!" Micah always did this but yet Avery always fell for it. "No, Micah nothing you ever wanna do is a waste of time! I'll go with you OK?" Said Avery. "Great," said Micah. "Byyyyyyeeeee!," said Micah. "Rock on Micah," said Avery. Avery then closed the Skype call, "Well I guess my music will have to wait," said Avery.
The next day Avery went out of Michigan (the state he was living in at the time) and began to go to Memphis, Tennessee. Then Avery made it to Micah's house. "Avery you made it!" Said Micah as Avery walked inside of his house. "Sup Micah!" Said Avery. "I knew you would make it Avery I knew my BFF wouldn't let me down!" "Yeah, yeah but I have one quick question Micah. Can we please stop by the Elvis gift shop here? I have saved up all my money and I would really like to get something there." "No problem Avery!" Said Micah.
Then they not headed off to team tournament. In the tournament Avery and Micah won without a single loss! And later went in more team tournaments together and alspo won them without a single loss. Then there was a singles tournament that came up and Micah and Avery thought that this would be a great chance to break each other's winning streaks. They made it to the finals in that tournament (again without a single loss.) And then battled each other in an unbelievably close fight but however Avery won the fight. Then there was another singles tournament that they got into and just like last time they made it to the finals without a single loss. And just like last time they battled each other in an unbelievably close match but unlike last time, Micah won! Avery shrugged it off and congratulated his friend. After that Avery and Micah became known as some of the world's best bladers! Then after that for some time Micah stopped asking Avery to go to tournaments and Avery got to spend more time writing music. -Avery
Now chapter 1 is coming up next!
P.S. Sorry if there were any typos.
Not a Collab! Just a deal so you stop invading my thread! But any ways don’t make Roan look too bad!
Same thing! And trust me I won't. -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 19, 2019
(Feb. 19, 2019 12:11 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: (Feb. 18, 2019 9:59 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Not a Collab! Just a deal so you stop invading my thread! But any ways don’t make Roan look too bad!
Same thing! And trust me I won't. -Avery Okay thanks
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 19, 2019
Character Introductions:
Chai: Chai is a 16 year old fashionista who dreams of becoming a fashion designer, he has a slim, skinny build (similar to Avery, me,) he has long blonde hair (either a little longer or a little shorter than Zac the Sunrise's, and a valley boy accent (even though he's Canadian.) He wears a turquoise tank top, a pair of red sunglasses that always sit on top of his head, a gold necklace, a pair of white slip on shoes, and rolled up jean shorts. Chai uses a very mysterious bey known as realm Cthulu (which is based off the Lovecraftian mythos character) and its energy layer has Cthulu's face in the middle, its wings around the face (giving it a similar shape to Quetziko or Khalzar) and under the wings are foldable blades, that can either fold up like a shield or unfold into blades that make it look like Cthulu's wings are opened. Like Micah, Chai is part of the elite group of bladers known as the Trinity of Destruction and also like Micah Chai is also one of Avery's two BFFs.
Chapter 2: Call of Cthulu
On the sunny, quiet coast of British Columbia Canada, there's a beautiful Victorian styled beach house, a 2 story beach house with a balcony overlooking the sea and behind the balcony is a two bed bedroom home to 2 brothers named Zach and Chai however Zach's not in the house right now cause he's off on a sports tournament. In the downstairs area of the house there's a master bedroom, a kitchen, and a living/game room. Outside there's a beautiful Victorian styled garden and a garage right next to the house the silence is broken by the sound of rock! Two friends named Avery and Chai r busy practicing there instruments that r in their rock band "Avery lets like stop practicing already," said Chai. "Oh come on we need to do this if we hope to get any better with our band!" Said Avery. "That's like the problem though! The whole band isn't here Avery. We r down a bassist and a guitarist and a keytar, even if its plugged into an amp making it sound distorted, and like a pair of drums can't make a good sounding band no matter how good they sound!" "Ugh fine!" Avery set down his keytar and unplugged it from the amp and turned it off. Avery looked disappointed about stopping band practice, created rock/metal music is his fav thing. "Come on Avery there's like a millions of other things we can do I mean we have like the whole house to ourselves we can do like whateve!" "Oh yeah speaking of the beach house thank u so much Chai for letting me come here, I'm so glad that your parents were cool with it!" " Hey anything for my BFF!" "Aw! Thanks Chai!" "No prob Avery! Now what to do......" "What to do." Both of the BFFs sat there bored until something caught Avery's eye, it was his Beyblade Shining Amaterios , Avery picked it up and said "Hey Chai u wanna battle! Amaterios is hungry for its next victim!" "Um OK!" Said Chai. Avery got out Chai's beystadium and Chai got out his bey which was blue version of Emperor Forneus. Avery put his bey in his purple launcher with a black and white handle and Chai put his bey in his blue left/right launcher with a golden beygrip handle. And both of them said "3 2 1 let it rip!" When Avery launched his bey he did his signature headbang. Both beys landed into the stadium and Chai's bey took the center. "Ur bey took the center, not bad.... But that won't save I from Amaterios' burning rage!!! Spirit Launch!" Amaterios tip with red edges hit the edge of the stadium propelling it so fast that it looked like a spirit. "Hang in there!" Said Chai. Amaterios charged towards Chai's bey with its spirit launch then Avery said "This ends here! Solar Flare! Then one of Amaterios red hidden blades came out and struck Chai's bey down. The strike was so strong that it sent a huge gust of wind and sent Chai's bey flying where it bursted in mid air! "Come on lets like go again Avery!" Said Chai. "Ok then!" They battled 5 times and every single one Avery won with a burst finish. "Come on Chai if ur always that bad you'll never be apart of me and Micah's posse." Avery joked. "Ha ha, very funny Avery" said Chai. "OK but let's be for real now Chai, the problem isn't that u aren't a good blader the problem is that u need more practice and a new bey. I mean the bey picks u, u don't pick the bey." "Huh.... Speaking of Micah how's he doing? Is he still winning all of those tournaments?" "Yeah u know Micah, but his undefeated streak just got broken!" Said Avery. "What?! By like who?" Said Chai. "Ur looking at him!" "You! Avery you like beat Micah?!" "You bet! But my undefeated streak just got broken too!" "You too! By....." "By like who? I'll tell you who, Micah!" "So the 2 best friends beat each other's undefeated streaks?!"
"Yep!" They both laughed at the ironic situation. After they stopped laughing Chai said "Hey Avery wanna go scuba diving?" "Sure! But I know this from back when I lived in Florida....." "U live in Michigan now right?" Chai said.
"Yeah, I love it there, but anyways from living in Florida I learned that at night is when predators go out to hunt so before the sun sets we better get back on land!" Avery said. "Right!" said Chai. They put on there wetsuits and then Avery said, "Why is your wetsuit turquoise?" "What? Turquoise is really in right now?" Said Chai."OK Mr. Fashionista!" Avery joked.
Chai laughed at Avery's joke and then they both went diving into the beautiful water. They swam near a coral reef where they saw tons of different kinds of fish. They swam around for about an hour but then it started to get dark and they began to swim back but then something caught Chai's eye. It was a sunken ship. The ship looked like it was from the early 1900's like before World War 2 but it wasn't a battleship it was a simple fishing boat. Chai started to swim towards it almost like he was in some sort of trance. "Chai what are you doing?!" Said Avery. But Chai said nothing. "Chai!" Avery yelled, but Chai said nothing. Avery swam after Chai but Chai swam down into the fishing boat. "Chai you're gonna get us both kille!" said Avery. Avery also swam into the fishing boat. "Wow look at this place! This place looks like its been in here for decades maybe even a century!" Said Avery. "Chai! There you are! What the fff....." "Avery! Look at this!" said Chai cutting Avery off. Chai found and old chest that was left unlocked and he pulled something out of it that looked like it was part of a locket on a necklace, it looked like an emblem of an octopus but to the side there were bat wings that were off to the side. "Woah look at that! It looks like some sort of emblem!" Said Avery. Chai continued staring at the emblem and nodded to what Avery said. Avery looked out the window and saw a pack of reef sharks not to far away. "Come on Chai we gotta go!" Said Avery. "But what about the amulet?!" Said Chai. "Forget about the amulet lets go!" Avery grabbed Chai's wrist and swam with him back up to the surface. After that Avery and Chai got ready for bed and after only five minutes Avery was out cold. But Chai was wide awake and at midnight he put back on his wetsuit and filled up his scuba air tank with air and went diving back into the abyss. Reef sharks were still on the prowl but since it was later at night jellyfish were on the prowl too. Chai avoided the reef sharks who were to busy hunting small fish and he dodged most of the jellies without getting stung (not that it would do anything most wetsuits are sting proof.) And swam back into the sunken boat and took the amulet and swam back up to the surface unharmed. The next day Avery was off practicing his keytar (plugged into an amp giving it a distorted sound of course) when an older man with a white moustache, a combover and a fat sturdy build came up to Avery and said "Turn that down L..... Oh it's you."
"Dudenwhat are you doing here?" Said Avery to the old man. "I have a name you know!" Snapped the old man.
"Yeah I just don't care!" Snapped back Avery. "Look I don't have time for your sass I'm just telling you to turn that down or I'm calling the police!" Chai, who was sleeping in woke up the sound of their arguing. "If you were my age how would you like it if when you were trying to enjoy a quiet morning and you were interrupted my loudness!" Said the old man . "Well at least when I'm your age I'll have all my hair!" Said Avery.
The old man gasped and covered up his combover then Chai walked up and said "Stop that both of you! Or I'll call the police on both of you!" Said Chai. "Chai are you feeling OK?" Said Avery. Chai walked off back into his room. "That was highly unlike him..." said Avery "Yeah last night he went scuba diving and came back up with some weird amulet thing. "
Said the old man. "Wait last night he seemed highly interested in that amulet but I told him that it was to dangerous for him to swim back and get it cause of predators. But he went back and got it anyways in despite of what I said?" "Yeah if I were you I'd go and check it out." Said the old man. "I will," said Avery. "Great now I can continue what I was doing." Said the old man as he kicked back in his lawn chair and began watching some Mexican Drama. Chai, who was sitting on his bed stared at the emblem and said "Now what am I gonna do with you?" Said Chai. "Should I make you into a necklace? Nah! To tacky. A belt buckle maybe? Wait!" Said Chai brainstorming out loud. Chai began to remember what Avery said about Beyblades "I mean the bey picks you, you don't pick the bey." "That's it!" Said Chai. I'll make it into a Beyblade but what kind of Beyblade? At around this time Avery walked into the room "Chai what are you doing?" Said Avery.
"Um nothing!" Said Chai while putting the emblem behind his back. "I just have a quick question for you Avery," said Chai. "OK shoot," said Avery. "What's the name of that song you were practicing earlier?" "Oh you mean Call of Ktulu? Oh it's a song by Metallica that......" "Great!" Interrupted Chai. "And that book you borrowed from your emo/goth friend Jeremiah?" Questioned Chai. "Oh you mean Call of Cthulu? Yeah I borrowed that book cause that book is what Metallica based their song off of!" Answered Avery. "Can I borrow that book Avery?" "Sure Chai! I already finished the book and I'm sot much of a reader anyways." "Great!" Chai grabbed the book and began to read. The book told of a powerful monster that could control the very fabric of reality and embodied everything man feared about the sea. Then the monster would lead ppl out to sea where it would consume them as his meal. "Woah that sounds like powerful," said Chai to himself. He began to look at the amulet and noticed how similar it looked to Cthulu. "I thought I like saw this symbol like somewhere! " Said Chai. Chai went down into the basement of his house where he built his bey. He put the face in the center of his bey and then adorn the wings around the face and gave it a similar shape to the Beyblades Quetziko and Khalzar and he made it where under the wings there were foldable blades that could fold where they were like a shield and unfold like they were blades. Chai bought a tip and a forge disc that he thought would be good for his bey and finally completed it. When Chai finished his bey he invisioned Cthulu himself coming out of the bey and saying "Mortal you have been chosen to wield my almighty power! Now time for us to show our power to the world!" "I will," said Chai. And what he invisioned ended and then he walked up to Avery and said "I would like a battle Avery." And he showed Avery his bey "Wait! You used that emblem from that ship to make a Beyblade? I thought you were gonna use it to make like clothes or something weirre.... I mean awesome like that! " Said Avery. "Avery the reason I built this is because of what you said and that you and Micah do this and I would be willing to risk life and limb to spend like more time with you guys." Said Chai. "Aw that's so sweet of you Chai! Crazy but sweet! So you said you wanna battle? Said Avery. " Like ya!" Said Chai. "So let's battle then!" Said Avery.
They got near the stadium and said "3 2 1 let it rip!" Avery did his signature headbang when he launched his Beyblade and Chai launched his at the same time.
Chai's bey was switched to ultra defense mode like last time. Chai's bey took the center. "Your bey took the center again. Well that won't save you now!" Said Avery. "Spirit launch!" Said Avery. The rubber edges of Amaterios hit the stadium walls causing Amaterios to propel from the stadium walls making it move so fast that it looked like a spirit. "Now Amaterios Solar flare!" Said Avery. Amaterios charged towards Chai's bey and hit Cthulu with one of its red hidden blades. "Looks like history is gonna repeat itself Chai!" "Avery, like look again!" Said Chai. "Cthulu Reflect!" Then Cthul's wing made a vibrating motion and hit Amaterios into the air and out of the stadium giving Chai one point for a ring out finish. "I have to say Chai you have gotten better but not good enough!" Said Avery. "We'll see about that," said Chai. Chai changed the mode of his bey to ultra attack mode. Round 2 began, and they both said "3 2 1 let it rip!" Right before Avery launched his bey he changed the angle of his launch where it was angled to make a direct hit at Cthulu. They both launched their beys and Avery did his signature headbang when he launched his. Avery then noticed that Chai's bey was a balance type bey that could switch between ultra attack mode and ultra defense mode. "Mystery wing launch" Said Chai.Cthulu's winged blades hit the stadium causing Cthulu to propel itself straight at Amaterios. "Who's like the Champion now?!" Said Chai. "Still me," said Avery. All of the sudden Amaterios changed its direction causing Cthulu to head right for the stadium walls. "Solar flash launch!" Then Amaterios went around the edge of the stadium extremely fast and started to get close to Cthulu. "Now Amaterios time for our most powerful move! Solar Scream!!!!!!! Then Amaterios hit Cthulu head on and released all of its hidden blades when it hit Cthulu causing Cthulu to burst. " Well That's that Chai I won ." Said Avery. "Wait Avery," said Chai. "What is it Chai?" "Can we please have just one more fight Avery?" Avery smirked. "OK but just one more fight OK Chai?" Said Avery. "OK," said Chai. The two of them got ready to launch and said,"3 2 1 let it rip!" Avery did his signature headbang when he launched and Chai switched his Bey to ultra defense mode. Both beys got into the stadium and Cthulu took the center. "Just as I predicted, now Amaterios Solar flash launch!" Said Avery. Amaterios began to charge at mind blowing speeds at Cthulu. "Block it Cthulu!" Said Chai. "That won't do any good against our Solar Scream!!!!!" When Amaterios charged at Cthulu with its Solar flash launch it then hit it directly causing all of its hidden blades to come out and hit Cthulu directly with them causing some massive damage to Cthulu. When Amaterios used its Solar Sceam its attack was so strong that it sent a huge gust a wind and the attack knocked Cthulu into the wall causing it to stop spinning giving Avery one point for a survivor finish. Then Avery thought "Looks like Realm Cthulu is stronger than I thought. No bey has ever not bursted when I hit it with Solar Scream.... But even though I might not end the match with a burst doesn't mean I won't win. Perhaps a ring out or survivor Finnish is all I need." Then Chai began to think as well, "It was more than a mere miracle for my bey to survive that attack and not end in a burst. That Solar Scream is definitely Amaterios' most powerful move well then maybe we'll have to use our most like powerful move!" Then Chai began to have a flashback from earlier that day when he first began to train with Cthulu. The flashback showed Chai launching his bey into his stadium that he moved down into the basement. Then he remembered in one particular launch when his bey was on ultra attack mode it rammed against the stadium walls but instead of propelling it forward it caused it to go up into the air and then his bey leaned forward and its blades hit the center of the stadium leaving a big scratch mark at the center of the stadium. "That's it!" Said Chai "What's it?" Said Avery. "Um nothing!" Said Chai. Avery just looked at Chai like he was crazy. Round 2 began, "3 2 1 let it rip!" They both said. Cthulu was using ultra attack mode and Avery changed his launch and launched with his signature headbang. "Now Amaterios Spirit launch!" Said Avery. The rubber edges of Amaterios' tip rammed against the stadium wall and propelled it so fast that it looked like a spirit. Amaterios Solar flare! One of Amaterios' hidden blades hit Cthulu but then Amaterios went past Cthulu after its attack and charged towards another launch and did another Spirit Launch. "Perfect Amaterios another Spirit Launch. Now let's end it with Solar Scream!!!" Said Avery. Amaterios' avatar appeared out of the bey almost like it was running at Cthulu and then Amaterios hit Cthulu with all of its hidden blades causing a huge gust of wind and massive damage and a huge gust of wind. The Solar Scream caused Cthulu to be hit in the air and it hit the stadium walls. "Cthulu Awaken!" Said Chai. Then Cthulu's avatar (which was Cthulu just like Amaterios avatar is Amaterios) appeared. Then Cthulu's bladed wings hit the stadium wall propelling it into the air! "Now time for our most powerful move! Call of Cthulu!!!" Said Chai. Then Cthulu began to lean forward in mid air and then its bladed wings hit Amaterios directly. Cause of the power of the attack Amaterios bursted making Chai the winner. Avery picked up his bursted bey and said "Well done Chai! I guess it's fitting that my 2 best friends broke my winning streak!" "Thanks!" Said Chai. "Oh and one more thing Chai," said Avery. "What?" said Chai. "Micah has sorta forced me to go to this Beyblade tournament with him tomorrow since it's a team tournament and 2-4 are allowed in each team if you want would you like to join us?" Said Avery. "Sure!" Said Chai. "Time for me to show Realm Cthulu's power to the world! " Later that day Avery walked to a blacksmith shop with a black case. "Did you bring it?" The blacksmith asked. "Yeah it's right Jere said Avery." Avery opened the case and inside of it was part of a bey. "Now increst this part in metal and add this symbol right here, "said Avery pointing to random parts of the bey. " No problem," said the blacksmith. After a while the blacksmith handed back the completed part. "Thank you it's perfect!" Said Avery. Then Avery walked outside of the blacksmith shop and said to himself. "Soon I'm gonna have the most powerful Beyblade there ever was!"
P.S. Sorry if there's some typos I
P.P.S. These characters are based on real people but this story is not based on true events.
-Avery
(Feb. 19, 2019 12:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 19, 2019 12:11 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Same thing! And trust me I won't. -Avery Okay thanks
You're welcome! -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 19, 2019
(Feb. 19, 2019 12:22 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: *large quote removed* Where’s Roan?
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - BurningSands - Feb. 19, 2019
...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 19, 2019 3:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: ...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
Yeah if Avery doesn’t include Roan in the next chapter I will remove Roan from this story
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - BurningSands - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 2:43 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 19, 2019 3:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: ...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
Yeah if Avery doesn’t include Roan in the next chapter I will remove Roan from this story
Hopefully Avery will add in Roan soon. Otherwise, this might make this look like a "supported" story fishing reads from the "Cheeto Approves!" vibes
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 2:45 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: (Feb. 20, 2019 2:43 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yeah if Avery doesn’t include Roan in the next chapter I will remove Roan from this story
Hopefully Avery will add in Roan soon. Otherwise, this might make this look like a "supported" story fishing reads from the "Cheeto Approves!" vibes Yeah if that happens then I’ll do this: Say that I don’t approve and remove Roan.
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - #Fafnir - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 2:43 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 19, 2019 3:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: ...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
Yeah if Avery doesn’t include Roan in the next chapter I will remove Roan from this story
I agree with @[CheetoBlader] .The story is literally calledThe Adventures of Roan Part 2 and with Roan not in it, It might as well be called The Adventures of Avery.
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 2:49 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: (Feb. 20, 2019 2:43 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yeah if Avery doesn’t include Roan in the next chapter I will remove Roan from this story
I agree with @[CheetoBlader] .The story is literally calledThe Adventures of Roan Part 2 and with Roan not in it, It might as well be called The Adventures of Avery. I agree! @[Avery Purple999] if you don’t put Roan in the next chapter the deal is over!
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - BurningSands - Feb. 20, 2019
Exactly. I do not want to be the victim of clickbait and trying to “help” this person become popular. Im interested in seeing Roan sooner or later, althought the POV is clearly Avery and her pals
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 3:22 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Exactly. I do not want to be the victim of clickbait and trying to “help” this person become popular. Im interested in seeing Roan sooner or later, althought the POV is clearly Avery and her pals
Exactly!
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 20, 2019
(Feb. 19, 2019 3:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: ...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
Roan's gonna make his first appearance in Chapter 3 and then the rest of the story mostly revolves around him, cause he's the protagonist, I'm just giving you q good intro of all my characters first though. -Avery
(Feb. 20, 2019 3:22 AM)XSabxManiacXh Wrote: Exactly. I do not want to be the victim of clickbait and trying to “help” this person become popular. Im interested in seeing Roan sooner or later, althought the POV is clearly Avery and her pals
I'm a he dude! -Avery
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(Feb. 20, 2019 2:52 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 20, 2019 2:49 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: I agree with @[CheetoBlader] .The story is literally calledThe Adventures of Roan Part 2 and with Roan not in it, It might as well be called The Adventures of Avery. I agree! @[Avery Purple999] if you don’t put Roan in the next chapter the deal is over!
Alright I've already said he's gonna be in chapter 3! -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - BurningSands - Feb. 21, 2019
(Feb. 20, 2019 11:58 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: (Feb. 19, 2019 3:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: ...Yeah. I was wondering for awhile now. I thought Roan would appear sooner or later, but this seems to center around YOUR characters. Please, at least feature Roan
Roan's gonna make his first appearance in Chapter 3 and then the rest of the story mostly revolves around him, cause he's the protagonist, I'm just giving you q good intro of all my characters first though. -Avery
(Feb. 20, 2019 3:22 AM)XSabxManiacXh Wrote: Exactly. I do not want to be the victim of clickbait and trying to “help” this person become popular. Im interested in seeing Roan sooner or later, althought the POV is clearly Avery and her pals
I'm a he dude! -Avery
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(Feb. 20, 2019 2:52 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I agree! @[Avery Purple999] if you don’t put Roan in the next chapter the deal is over!
Alright I've already said he's gonna be in chapter 3! -Avery
Sorry about that, but thank you for adding Roan in. The title is misleading and makes it sound like the majority of it is about Roan (you might wanna fix that)
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Feb. 21, 2019
Chapter 3: The Tournament
"Let it rip!" Said a young voice. The voice belonged to a young bladed named Roan who was practicing with his beyblade for the World League. After his beyblade stopped spinning he picked up and started to talk to it, "Well done Revenge at this rate we'll for sure rank in the Worldleague!" Roan then started to have a flashback of winning the World League entrance tournament in his hometown. "And the winner is Roan!" Said the announcer. "Now that he has won this he's going off to the Worldleague tournament in London, England! What a win for young Roan! A promising beyblading career is ahead for him indeed!" Said the announcer. His flashback ended. "The Worldleague....." Said Roan."Roan!" Said another young voice. It was Roan's sometimes friend and sometimes enemy (frenemy) Jomeii. "What is it Jomeii? And if you wanna use my stadium! The answer is no!" Said Roan. "It's not that I just am here to tell you that the Entrance tournament to the Worldleague entrance tournament is coming on in a hour!" So if you wanna catch it on TV you gotta hurry!" Said Jomeii. "Dah! You're right! I don't wanna miss this!" Said Roan. Roan grabbed his bey and ran to his house.
Meanwhile at Chai's beach house......
A slick limousine with the WBBA logo on it drove in to the beach house's driveway and parked there. Out of the limo a familiar face stepped out. It was Micah. "Micah! Oh it's soooo good to see ya!" Said Avery while going out to greet him. Chain stepped out to greet Micah too. "Micah! How have things like been going?" Said Chai. "Oh things have been great but no time to talk about that! Avery we need to head to tournament ASAP! It begins in only an hour!" Said Micah while grabbing Avery's wrist."Wait Micah! Chai just found his perfect bey and is now really good blader! And I was kinda wondering if we could add him to our team?" Said Avery. "OK, but first he'll have to do two battles against me. If he wins one of them he can be in the team." Said Micah. "But Micah we might be late!" Said the limo driver. "Don't worry this is gonna be quick. After all Minoboros has been waiting for a challenge!" Said Micah while pulling out Minoboros and his gold launcher. Chai and Micah did two quick beybattles one of them Chai won and one of them Micah won. "Wow I'm impressed! The only person besides you who has ever been able to defeat me was Avery! So I guess the only thing to say is welcome to the club!" Said Micah. "Well if we're gonna make this we have to leave now!" Said the limo driver. "Right!" Said Micah.
"Everyone into the limo!" Said Chai. Then everyone grabbed their beys and launchers and hopped into the limo. "Alright now that we're all a team what are we gonna call ourselves?" Said Micah. "How about Fashion Forward!" Said Chai. "We're a beyblading trio not a trio of models Chai." Said Avery. "OK it's just an idea." Said Chai. "How about Tres Leches? Eh eh eh get it!" Said Micah. Chai and Avery just facepalmed at Micah's suggestion. "What? It's hilarious!" Said Micah. "Yeah sorry Micah but that joke sucked." Said Chai. But right before them two could break out in a fight Avery said, "How about the Trinity of Destruction!" "Ooooooo I like the sound of that," said Micah. "Yeah its intimidating and like awesome!" Said Chai. "Well then let's do it! From now on we're the Trinity of Destruction!" Said Avery. "Yeah!" They all said. "We're here!" Said the limo driver. "OK now ready set!" Said Chai while all three of them put their hands together and ran out of the limo.
"DARN IT we didn't make it in time." Said Jomeii. "Hey there's still a little bit of the tournament left for us to watch." "Right!" Said Jomeii. The two of them ran inside Roan's house and turned on the TV to the tournament. "OK now it's the final battle between the top two teams! Whoever wins this battle wins a free trip to Japan to participate in the Worldleague entrance tournament!" Said the announcer on the TV. "Top two? Ugh there's hardly any of it left!" Said Jomeii. "Well at least we'll see who wins!" Said Roan. "Alright here are your two teams. In the Red cornerner, Hailing from Mexico city it's the Street Serpents led by former Snake Pit member Boa Alkazowa and his bey Arch Balkesh!" Said the announcer on TV. "Woah Boa! I've heard that he battled against Valt Aoi!" Said Jomeii. "No kidding!" Said Roan. "And in the Blue Corner the Trinity of Destruction! Featuring the two bladers with the unbreakable winning streaks Avery McKeithen and Micah Winkle! With their beys Shining Amaterios and Thorns X Minoboros! And also the newcomer who has proven to be just as good at beyblading as Avery and Micah. It's Chai Jennings and his bey Realm Cthulu!" Said the announcer. "Avery? Wait didn't you battle him that one time?" Said Jomeii. "Yeah but then he had a different bey! Something not right is going on here...." Said Roan.
"I'll go first," said one of Boa's teammates. "OK," said Boa. "Alright Chai we want you to go," said Avery. "Right!" Said Chai. The two of them went near the stadium and prepared to battle and Chai switched his bey to ultra attack mode. "3 2 1 let it rip!" They both said. The bey went into the arena, and Chai's bey Realm Cthulu took the center. "That's not gonna happen here today now charge at it my bey!" Said Boa's teammate. The bey hit Cthulu out of the center and rammed it straight into the stadium wall. "Now it looks like one of Boa's teammates has the center! Can Chai make a comeback from this?!" Said the announcer. "Like ya we can! Now Cthulu Mystery Wing Launch!" Said Chai. Then Cthulu's bladed wings rammed into the stadium wall propelling it straight into its opponent's bey and bursting it! "Unbelievable! Chai has just won the match and has given his team 2 points. " I'm sorry I failed Boa," said the bladed. "It's OK but I'm taking this one OK?" Said Boa. "OK," said his teammate. "Micah I want you to go next! You care about beyblading more than anyone else I know so it's fitting that you finish the match for us!" Said Avery. "I will," said Micah. The two of them walked up to the stadium and prepared to launch. "3 2 1 let it rip!" Said them both. Balkesh took the center and Minoboros began to charge at it. But all that was doing was making its shields stronger. "That's it Balkesh! Reflect its every blow!" Said Boa! "Time to end this with a burst! Now Minoboros. Nature's Rampage!" Then Minoboros leaned forward while it was spinning making itself look like a bull charging at its victim. Minoboros rammed into Balkesh while pushing into the stadium wall making Balkesh burst. "And there you have it the Trinity of Destruction has won the match! Now there going off to Japan! Well that's all so goodnight!" Said the announcer. "Woah it looks like Avery has gotten better but either way I'm gonna beat him!" Said Roan. -Avery
P.S. Sorry about the typos.
(Feb. 21, 2019 1:04 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: (Feb. 20, 2019 11:58 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Roan's gonna make his first appearance in Chapter 3 and then the rest of the story mostly revolves around him, cause he's the protagonist, I'm just giving you q good intro of all my characters first though. -Avery
I'm a he dude! -Avery
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Alright I've already said he's gonna be in chapter 3!
Sorry about that, but thank you for adding Roan in. The title is misleading and makes it sound like the majority of it is about Roan (you might wanna fix that)
Oh well it's gonna be! I'm just giving the readers a good intro of Avery's (my) friends and myself though before that happens. -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - CheetoBlader - Feb. 23, 2019
(Feb. 21, 2019 2:05 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Chapter 3: The Tournament
"Let it rip!" Said a young voice. The voice belonged to a young bladed named Roan who was practicing with his beyblade for the World League. After his beyblade stopped spinning he picked up and started to talk to it, "Well done Revenge at this rate we'll for sure rank in the Worldleague!" Roan then started to have a flashback of winning the World League entrance tournament in his hometown. "And the winner is Roan!" Said the announcer. "Now that he has won this he's going off to the Worldleague tournament in London, England! What a win for young Roan! A promising beyblading career is ahead for him indeed!" Said the announcer. His flashback ended. "The Worldleague....." Said Roan."Roan!" Said another young voice. It was Roan's sometimes friend and sometimes enemy (frenemy) Jomeii. "What is it Jomeii? And if you wanna use my stadium! The answer is no!" Said Roan. "It's not that I just am here to tell you that the Entrance tournament to the Worldleague entrance tournament is coming on in a hour!" So if you wanna catch it on TV you gotta hurry!" Said Jomeii. "Dah! You're right! I don't wanna miss this!" Said Roan. Roan grabbed his bey and ran to his house.
Meanwhile at Chai's beach house......
A slick limousine with the WBBA logo on it drove in to the beach house's driveway and parked there. Out of the limo a familiar face stepped out. It was Micah. "Micah! Oh it's soooo good to see ya!" Said Avery while going out to greet him. Chain stepped out to greet Micah too. "Micah! How have things like been going?" Said Chai. "Oh things have been great but no time to talk about that! Avery we need to head to tournament ASAP! It begins in only an hour!" Said Micah while grabbing Avery's wrist."Wait Micah! Chai just found his perfect bey and is now really good blader! And I was kinda wondering if we could add him to our team?" Said Avery. "OK, but first he'll have to do two battles against me. If he wins one of them he can be in the team." Said Micah. "But Micah we might be late!" Said the limo driver. "Don't worry this is gonna be quick. After all Minoboros has been waiting for a challenge!" Said Micah while pulling out Minoboros and his gold launcher. Chai and Micah did two quick beybattles one of them Chai won and one of them Micah won. "Wow I'm impressed! The only person besides you who has ever been able to defeat me was Avery! So I guess the only thing to say is welcome to the club!" Said Micah. "Well if we're gonna make this we have to leave now!" Said the limo driver. "Right!" Said Micah.
"Everyone into the limo!" Said Chai. Then everyone grabbed their beys and launchers and hopped into the limo. "Alright now that we're all a team what are we gonna call ourselves?" Said Micah. "How about Fashion Forward!" Said Chai. "We're a beyblading trio not a trio of models Chai." Said Avery. "OK it's just an idea." Said Chai. "How about Tres Leches? Eh eh eh get it!" Said Micah. Chai and Avery just facepalmed at Micah's suggestion. "What? It's hilarious!" Said Micah. "Yeah sorry Micah but that joke sucked." Said Chai. But right before them two could break out in a fight Avery said, "How about the Trinity of Destruction!" "Ooooooo I like the sound of that," said Micah. "Yeah its intimidating and like awesome!" Said Chai. "Well then let's do it! From now on we're the Trinity of Destruction!" Said Avery. "Yeah!" They all said. "We're here!" Said the limo driver. "OK now ready set!" Said Chai while all three of them put their hands together and ran out of the limo.
"DARN IT we didn't make it in time." Said Jomeii. "Hey there's still a little bit of the tournament left for us to watch." "Right!" Said Jomeii. The two of them ran inside Roan's house and turned on the TV to the tournament. "OK now it's the final battle between the top two teams! Whoever wins this battle wins a free trip to Japan to participate in the Worldleague entrance tournament!" Said the announcer on the TV. "Top two? Ugh there's hardly any of it left!" Said Jomeii. "Well at least we'll see who wins!" Said Roan. "Alright here are your two teams. In the Red cornerner, Hailing from Mexico city it's the Street Serpents led by former Snake Pit member Boa Alkazowa and his bey Arch Balkesh!" Said the announcer on TV. "Woah Boa! I've heard that he battled against Valt Aoi!" Said Jomeii. "No kidding!" Said Roan. "And in the Blue Corner the Trinity of Destruction! Featuring the two bladers with the unbreakable winning streaks Avery McKeithen and Micah Winkle! With their beys Shining Amaterios and Thorns X Minoboros! And also the newcomer who has proven to be just as good at beyblading as Avery and Micah. It's Chai Jennings and his bey Realm Cthulu!" Said the announcer. "Avery? Wait didn't you battle him that one time?" Said Jomeii. "Yeah but then he had a different bey! Something not right is going on here...." Said Roan.
"I'll go first," said one of Boa's teammates. "OK," said Boa. "Alright Chai we want you to go," said Avery. "Right!" Said Chai. The two of them went near the stadium and prepared to battle and Chai switched his bey to ultra attack mode. "3 2 1 let it rip!" They both said. The bey went into the arena, and Chai's bey Realm Cthulu took the center. "That's not gonna happen here today now charge at it my bey!" Said Boa's teammate. The bey hit Cthulu out of the center and rammed it straight into the stadium wall. "Now it looks like one of Boa's teammates has the center! Can Chai make a comeback from this?!" Said the announcer. "Like ya we can! Now Cthulu Mystery Wing Launch!" Said Chai. Then Cthulu's bladed wings rammed into the stadium wall propelling it straight into its opponent's bey and bursting it! "Unbelievable! Chai has just won the match and has given his team 2 points. " I'm sorry I failed Boa," said the bladed. "It's OK but I'm taking this one OK?" Said Boa. "OK," said his teammate. "Micah I want you to go next! You care about beyblading more than anyone else I know so it's fitting that you finish the match for us!" Said Avery. "I will," said Micah. The two of them walked up to the stadium and prepared to launch. "3 2 1 let it rip!" Said them both. Balkesh took the center and Minoboros began to charge at it. But all that was doing was making its shields stronger. "That's it Balkesh! Reflect its every blow!" Said Boa! "Time to end this with a burst! Now Minoboros. Nature's Rampage!" Then Minoboros leaned forward while it was spinning making itself look like a bull charging at its victim. Minoboros rammed into Balkesh while pushing into the stadium wall making Balkesh burst. "And there you have it the Trinity of Destruction has won the match! Now there going off to Japan! Well that's all so goodnight!" Said the announcer. "Woah it looks like Avery has gotten better but either way I'm gonna beat him!" Said Roan. -Avery
P.S. Sorry about the typos.
(Feb. 21, 2019 1:04 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Sorry about that, but thank you for adding Roan in. The title is misleading and makes it sound like the majority of it is about Roan (you might wanna fix that)
Oh well it's gonna be! I'm just giving the readers a good intro of Avery's (my) friends and myself though before that happens. -Avery Is the story still on?
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Avery Purple999 - Mar. 01, 2019
Yeah the story is still on. -Avery
RE: The Adventures of Roan Part 2: Rise of the Unbeatable - Ntruder19 - Mar. 04, 2019
(Feb. 18, 2019 7:51 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: (Feb. 18, 2019 5:59 PM)blasterboy1995 Wrote: Interesting story idea. Are we allowed to submit our own custom characters and Beyblades? Because I have at least 5 or 6 characters in mind that I made up. First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
(Feb. 18, 2019 7:51 PM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: First I'd like you tqo send me some private messages about these characters and if I like it I'll probably feature one of your characters in a chapter (or chapters of my/CheetoBlader's story) -Avery
I mean too, stupid typos!
You meant “to”, stupid bad grammar.
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