RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 15, 2019
(Jan. 15, 2019 11:54 PM)#Fafnir Wrote: (Jan. 15, 2019 11:52 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Yep! If anybody wants to know the parts of each Bey, I have a list ready!
I think it would be cool if you made 3D models of the beyblades and parts.
Nah, I don’t have enough time and there are too many.
(Jan. 15, 2019 11:54 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: (Jan. 15, 2019 11:52 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Yep! If anybody wants to know the parts of each Bey, I have a list ready!
Seems interesting. Im up for it
01: Hydro Trident Outer Drift
02: Victor Nyke Zenith Beatdown
03: Electric Valkyrie 12’Knight Beatdown
04: Assassin Deathscyther 1Dagger Jolt
05: Chain Kerbeus 0’Wall Deflect
06: Screech Cockatris 11 Gust
07: Serpent Hydra 12 Ultimate Reboot
08: Gear Chronos 100Bump Zeta’
09: Thunderbolt Xcalibur -1Saber Cutlass
10: Mist Chaos 11Grace Float
11: Heaven Ouranous 10Flight Friction
12: Primal Behemoth 9’Fang Overdrive
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 17, 2019
Collab Chapter 2 w/ @[CheetoBlader]: The Bitter Taste of Revenge!
Revenge began to hop around the stadium, while Trident quickly took the center. “Trident! Take the center and use Hydro Twist!” Trident’s wave-like protrusions glowed blue as it locked down the center, prepared to absorb an attack. And it was quite an attack. Revenge went flying towards Trident.
It smashed into Trident at an angle, spinning the wave blade and bouncing off. Trident kept the center locked down, even through Revenge’s constant attacks. “Go, Revenge! Use Revenge Crush!” Revenge slammed into Trident from above, where it could not defend.
“Trident, use Hydro Counter!” Trident leaned to the side, causing it to strike Revenge with the blades, sending Revenge flying straight up.
“End this! Strike from above with our Ultra Revenge Slash!” One of Revenge’s blades glowed as it smashed down upon Trident, channeling all of its remaining energy in one strike with one blade.
Trident and Revenge both burst almost simultaneously, but Revenge burst slightly beforehand. “Dang it, how did you beat me?!” Roan cried out.
Suddenly, they noticed two people coming towards the stadium. One of them wore a bright blue shirt and a puffy white jacket and a thin white scarf. His blazing blue hair seemed to move. The other one had white hair that covered up his right eye, and he wore a thin black jacket over a deep red shirt.
“Hey, move out of the way! This is our stadium!” The blue one said. The other remained silent. Toko noticed a red tattoo on the silent one’s face that he was certain hadn’t been there before.
“Our names are Roan and Toko, and we have as much of a right to blade here as you! Who are you anyways?”
The blue one spoke up again. “My name is Lui and this is Suoh. Now scram, we don’t battle against the weak!”
Toko stood up. “Well your lucky that we aren’t weak then! Let’s begin this match! Three! Two! One! Let it…
Rip!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - BurningSands - Jan. 18, 2019
Wow. Lui and Suoh finally appears!! Cant wait for how the characters will solve this C:
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 18, 2019
(Jan. 18, 2019 1:09 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Wow. Lui and Suoh finally appears!! Cant wait for how the characters will solve this C:
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 23, 2019
Chapter 14: The Sibling Showdown! Part 1!
Nika yawned as she woke up. Her alarm clock had reminded her that she was about to battle against Toko. She sighed as she got up, preparing to battle him. A few minutes later, she was heading to the building.
Meanwhile, Toko was preparing, enthusiastic about his battle against Nika. When he was ready, he left, closely behind Nika.
About ten minutes later, Toko and Nika were at the tournament building, prepared to battle. “Nika, good luck.”
Nika grinned. “Thanks, but I don’t need luck! I have skill!”
They prepared for launch. “Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Nyke began to rocket around the stadium at full speed. Trident quickly took the center. “Trident, use Hydro Twist! Block out Nyke’s attacks!”
Nika grinned. “You’ll have to make a stronger defense than that to block us! Now Nyke, attack with the Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed with golden electricity.
Then, moving so fast it became a blur, Nyke smashed straight into Toko.
Trident went flying into the air, clinking gently as it hit the ground. Toko remained staring into space for a moment until he realized that he had lost the first round.
He leaned down, picked up Trident, and prepared for battle. “That was a fluke, Nika! This time Trident and I will defeat you!” Toko lifted Trident up to eye level and then removed the tip, switching another tip with it. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” The world went silent. Nika found herself in a blank wide space, alone. “Where am I?” She thought aloud.
Curled up in a ball was a small, hideous and misshapen creature. Another creature, a feminine humanoid wearing lightweight golden armor. “Welcome to your mind. I am Nyke, the spirit within your bey. We have a strong bond, you and I, and you have finally let me in.”
“B-but the battle!”
“Time is stopped while we are, I guess, thinking.”
“Well, what is that-that-that abomination?!”
Nyke very carefully lifted the creature up and stroked its back. “This ‘abomination’ is a being of your emotions. You have been suppressing your emotions and forcing them back. And this is what happened.”
“S-so if I try not to suppress my emotions, or if I try to release them, my mind and emotional status will strengthen?”
Nyke nodded. “Help your emotions flower and grow and you will do the same! Now get out there and we will annihilate him!”
Nika channeled all of her emotions into her launch, letting that odd creature free. “RIP!” She roared as Nyke hit the stadium and became a golden blur, forming a golden circle around the rim of the stadium. “Nyke! Use your Ultra Victory Annihilation!” She bellowed. Nyke’s circle quickly shrank until it was grinding against Trident, pushing the layer sideways. “Trident, hang on! Tsunami Shot!” Trident was sent flying straight up.
Then it smashed down on top of Nyke. Nyke’s speed and force easily sent it flying out of the stadium. Nika grinned. And somewhere in her mind, a small shivering being was awakened and became strong.
*sighs*
I forgot about the dang Collab. I’ll get to it soon.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - CheetoBlader - Jan. 23, 2019
(Jan. 23, 2019 4:27 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 14: The Sibling Showdown! Part 1!
Nika yawned as she woke up. Her alarm clock had reminded her that she was about to battle against Toko. She sighed as she got up, preparing to battle him. A few minutes later, she was heading to the building.
Meanwhile, Toko was preparing, enthusiastic about his battle against Nika. When he was ready, he left, closely behind Nika.
About ten minutes later, Toko and Nika were at the tournament building, prepared to battle. “Nika, good luck.”
Nika grinned. “Thanks, but I don’t need luck! I have skill!”
They prepared for launch. “Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Nyke began to rocket around the stadium at full speed. Trident quickly took the center. “Trident, use Hydro Twist! Block out Nyke’s attacks!”
Nika grinned. “You’ll have to make a stronger defense than that to block us! Now Nyke, attack with the Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed with golden electricity.
Then, moving so fast it became a blur, Nyke smashed straight into Toko.
Trident went flying into the air, clinking gently as it hit the ground. Toko remained staring into space for a moment until he realized that he had lost the first round.
He leaned down, picked up Trident, and prepared for battle. “That was a fluke, Nika! This time Trident and I will defeat you!” Toko lifted Trident up to eye level and then removed the tip, switching another tip with it. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” The world went silent. Nika found herself in a blank wide space, alone. “Where am I?” She thought aloud.
Curled up in a ball was a small, hideous and misshapen creature. Another creature, a feminine humanoid wearing lightweight golden armor. “Welcome to your mind. I am Nyke, the spirit within your bey. We have a strong bond, you and I, and you have finally let me in.”
“B-but the battle!”
“Time is stopped while we are, I guess, thinking.”
“Well, what is that-that-that abomination?!”
Nyke very carefully lifted the creature up and stroked its back. “This ‘abomination’ is a being of your emotions. You have been suppressing your emotions and forcing them back. And this is what happened.”
“S-so if I try not to suppress my emotions, or if I try to release them, my mind and emotional status will strengthen?”
Nyke nodded. “Help your emotions flower and grow and you will do the same! Now get out there and we will annihilate him!”
Nika channeled all of her emotions into her launch, letting that odd creature free. “RIP!” She roared as Nyke hit the stadium and became a golden blur, forming a golden circle around the rim of the stadium. “Nyke! Use your Ultra Victory Annihilation!” She bellowed. Nyke’s circle quickly shrank until it was grinding against Trident, pushing the layer sideways. “Trident, hang on! Tsunami Shot!” Trident was sent flying straight up.
Then it smashed down on top of Nyke. Nyke’s speed and force easily sent it flying out of the stadium. Nika grinned. And somewhere in her mind, a small shivering being was awakened and became strong.
*sighs*
I forgot about the dang Collab. I’ll get to it soon. That was amazing!
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 23, 2019
(Jan. 23, 2019 4:30 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 23, 2019 4:27 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 14: The Sibling Showdown! Part 1!
Nika yawned as she woke up. Her alarm clock had reminded her that she was about to battle against Toko. She sighed as she got up, preparing to battle him. A few minutes later, she was heading to the building.
Meanwhile, Toko was preparing, enthusiastic about his battle against Nika. When he was ready, he left, closely behind Nika.
About ten minutes later, Toko and Nika were at the tournament building, prepared to battle. “Nika, good luck.”
Nika grinned. “Thanks, but I don’t need luck! I have skill!”
They prepared for launch. “Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Nyke began to rocket around the stadium at full speed. Trident quickly took the center. “Trident, use Hydro Twist! Block out Nyke’s attacks!”
Nika grinned. “You’ll have to make a stronger defense than that to block us! Now Nyke, attack with the Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed with golden electricity.
Then, moving so fast it became a blur, Nyke smashed straight into Toko.
Trident went flying into the air, clinking gently as it hit the ground. Toko remained staring into space for a moment until he realized that he had lost the first round.
He leaned down, picked up Trident, and prepared for battle. “That was a fluke, Nika! This time Trident and I will defeat you!” Toko lifted Trident up to eye level and then removed the tip, switching another tip with it. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” The world went silent. Nika found herself in a blank wide space, alone. “Where am I?” She thought aloud.
Curled up in a ball was a small, hideous and misshapen creature. Another creature, a feminine humanoid wearing lightweight golden armor. “Welcome to your mind. I am Nyke, the spirit within your bey. We have a strong bond, you and I, and you have finally let me in.”
“B-but the battle!”
“Time is stopped while we are, I guess, thinking.”
“Well, what is that-that-that abomination?!”
Nyke very carefully lifted the creature up and stroked its back. “This ‘abomination’ is a being of your emotions. You have been suppressing your emotions and forcing them back. And this is what happened.”
“S-so if I try not to suppress my emotions, or if I try to release them, my mind and emotional status will strengthen?”
Nyke nodded. “Help your emotions flower and grow and you will do the same! Now get out there and we will annihilate him!”
Nika channeled all of her emotions into her launch, letting that odd creature free. “RIP!” She roared as Nyke hit the stadium and became a golden blur, forming a golden circle around the rim of the stadium. “Nyke! Use your Ultra Victory Annihilation!” She bellowed. Nyke’s circle quickly shrank until it was grinding against Trident, pushing the layer sideways. “Trident, hang on! Tsunami Shot!” Trident was sent flying straight up.
Then it smashed down on top of Nyke. Nyke’s speed and force easily sent it flying out of the stadium. Nika grinned. And somewhere in her mind, a small shivering being was awakened and became strong.
*sighs*
I forgot about the dang Collab. I’ll get to it soon. That was amazing!
Thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - CheetoBlader - Jan. 23, 2019
(Jan. 23, 2019 4:45 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 23, 2019 4:30 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: That was amazing!
Thanks Also I forgot about the Collab for awhile. :p
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Grimlock_Ollie - Jan. 23, 2019
Man, that reminds me, I have a story of my own that me and my friend are adding onto... it starts off RIGHT after BC Sol wins the world tornement. I put myself into the story to make valt not know who Red Eye was, but my friend asked to be in it.
We made our own bey combo to simulate our imagination and rekt every god bey exept for Balkesh and Nemesis upper (We did not have Appolo, Artimes, Eclipse; any turbo beys at the time (they weren't made yet); Gardian Kerbeus; Spiral Treptune; Drain Fafnir (oh, i got giest one day and our beys wiped the title of him clean off); Legend Spryzen (But we had requium. Imagine requium vs Valtriek but with valtriek as single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and the Orlialcums) I had single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and my friend had Krusher Doomsisor, 8V, Atomic. When we faced off, I kept using the edges of the stadium like the sling shock and won 2-1 (Survivor for me, tie, tie, ring out for my friend, ring out for me)
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 23, 2019
(Jan. 23, 2019 9:11 AM)Grimlock_Ollie Wrote: Man, that reminds me, I have a story of my own that me and my friend are adding onto... it starts off RIGHT after BC Sol wins the world tornement. I put myself into the story to make valt not know who Red Eye was, but my friend asked to be in it.
We made our own bey combo to simulate our imagination and rekt every god bey exept for Balkesh and Nemesis upper (We did not have Appolo, Artimes, Eclipse; any turbo beys at the time (they weren't made yet); Gardian Kerbeus; Spiral Treptune; Drain Fafnir (oh, i got giest one day and our beys wiped the title of him clean off); Legend Spryzen (But we had requium. Imagine requium vs Valtriek but with valtriek as single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and the Orlialcums) I had single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and my friend had Krusher Doomsisor, 8V, Atomic. When we faced off, I kept using the edges of the stadium like the sling shock and won 2-1 (Survivor for me, tie, tie, ring out for my friend, ring out for me)
That sounds like fun!
Collab Chapter 4 w/ @[CheetoBlader]: The Beast’s Burning Attack! Corrupted Salamander!
Suoh’s eye glowed as it turned red. “Salamander, drain Lui’s power!” Salamander was wrapped in a dark purple-red aura as it struck Longinus.
Longinus’ blue aura seemed to weaken as Salamander’s grew stronger. Suoh flipped his hair so it covered his right eye instead of his left, revealing a dark red mark on his face. It was glowing with an unearthly light. “Salamander, use Corrupted Flame Boost!”
Salamander used the friction from the rubber on the driver to create a tornado of flames around it. Then it slashed inwards at a steep angle to attack Trident, who was holding down the center. Salamander sent Trident up the stadium into the wall. “Roan, his attack is too strong!”
Roan smirked. “Let’s see about his defense. Go, Revenge Crush!” Revenge, who had just bounced high into the air, slashed down on Salamander. “Block it! Use Berserk Blaze Wall!” The force from Revenge’s attack switched Salamander into defense mode.
A red bubble formed around it, keeping Revenge from even slightly harming it. Revenge kept bouncing on top of Salamander, Roan desperately hoping it would do damage. “I cannot get through its defense either! It’s a monster!”
Lui’s face lit up. “Suoh can’t defend and attack at the same time! It’ll have to compromise, allowing us to defeat it!”
Roan and Toko both looked at Lui in surprise. “I thought you were on his team!"
Lui shrugged. “He’s trying to drain my power. I’d rather be on your team for the time being.”
“Alright, that makes since, but how do we make him try to defend and attack?” Toko asked, confused.
Roan’s face lit up as he realized what Lui had meant. “If Longinus and Revenge both attack while forcing Salamander to attack Trident-“
Toko interrupted, realizing what they meant, “then Salamander won’t be able to defend the attacks!”
Lui rolled his eyes. “Now you get it. Longinus, use Dragonic Spiral!” Longinus slammed into Salamander, pushing it against Trident. “Trident, use Hydro Twist!” Salamander was sent straight up into the air. “Revenge, deliver the coup de grace! Revenge Strike!”
Revenge struck Salamander midair. For a moment, they were hovering and clashing against each other, and then Salamander and Revenge burst at the same time. “Now Longinus! Draco Spiral!” Longinus quickly sped into Trident and burst it. Lui laughed. “So easy! Now leave our stadium!” Toko’s eyes widened as he realized their deal. “B-but you were-“
Lui posed so that his foot was hovering over Trident, a manic grin across his pale face. “Go away!
Now!” Lui’s foot swung down and Toko lunged, grabbing Trident and getting his finger stepped on instead. Toko and Lui both howled, Toko howling in pain and Lui laughing, his laugh like a hyena’s. Toko shook his pink finger as him and Roan sadly left.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 25, 2019
Chapter 15: The Sibling Showdown! Part 2!
Toko stared at Trident. ‘With that kind of power, how can we defeat Nika?’ He wondered to Trident. Trident did not respond.
Toko sighed as he prepared for battle. Suddenly, he got an idea. Valt sometimes ran up to the stadium for extra power and speed. Valt called that his ‘Sprint Boost’. What if Toko did that but spun around at the end?
That could give him added spin speed and allow him to lock down the center easier. So, Toko walked six steps back from the stadium. “Three!” Toko leapt forward. “Two!” Toko leapt again. “One!” Toko jumped to the stadium, spinning midair. “Let it...
Rip!” Toko hit the ground and launched at the same time, sending Trident to the center with extreme speed. Nyke was a blur around the stadium, both beys spinning at full speed. “Nyke, use Ultra Victory Annihilation!” Nyke became a shrinking circle around the stadium until it was constantly grinding against Trident.
“Neutralize the attack! Use Spiral Tsunami Twist!” Trident’s perimeter glowed blue. Trident had managed to mostly absorb the attack, and they both remained spinning strong. However, Trident had lost its massive spin boost and was spinning at its normal rate. “If he absorbed that attack, he won’t be able to handle this one! Ultra Victory Slash!”
One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it slammed into Trident, flinging Trident into the air. “Trident, hit her with the Tsunami Shot!” Trident fell directly on top of Nyke, sending them both flying out of the stadium. Toko grinned. “Looks like our new move worked well! If I can add just a smidge more power I should be able to beat her!”
Toko picked up Trident and stepped back six steps. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. This time, he managed to launch full power, straining his arm to far. Toko’s arm burned, but he ignored it, set on defeating Nika. Trident was spinning at full force. “Trident, disrupt Nyke’s speed with our new Spiral Tsunami Shield!” Three glowing blue shields formed around Trident as it rolled up the stadium. Nyke, who was a golden blur, slammed into one of the shields, and instantly all of its velocity caught up to it as all of its force and momentum was turned on itself.
Nika realized her grave error a moment too late, and Nyke burst, its parts being sent flying out of the stadium. “Haha, sis! It looks like we are tied! One more win and bam! you’re defeated!”
Nika smirked. “I don’t think you realize that I have two points too! I just need one more win and I will defeat you instead!”
Toko’s eyes widened as he realized that they were tied. “You’re right, but I will get the victory! Now let’s do this battle! Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. Nyke was a blur, but Nika had used a differently angled launch to send Nyke in a star-like pattern. Toko launched Trident so that it moved in a circle around the stadium. “Trident, use Spiral Boost!” Trident sped up, forming a circle around the center.
“Nyke, use Ultra Victory Star Launch!” Nyke glowed as it formed a star in the stadium. However, it could not create a perfect star pattern because Trident’s rapid motion formed essentially a circular wall that blocked Nyke’s attacks.
“Hold on, Trident! Knock Nyke out of the stadium!”
“Nyke, break through it! Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it struck Trident with full power. They both clashed, and then they were both flung into the air from the power of their attacks. “Nyke, attack him in midair!”
Nyke struck Trident, a spring loaded wing flinging Trident sideways, over the edge of the stadium. “Yes!” Nika cried out happily. Suddenly, she heard the sound of a burst and a clink almost simultaneously. Nika opened her eyes to see Trident on the ground and Nyke’s parts in the stadium. The ref thought about what had happened before deciding who won. “Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Because of burst priority, Toko wins with a burst finish 4-2! Toko won the Primal Cup and will challenge Blair Pai!”
Toko grinned as he pumped his fist into the air. “Yes! I won!” Nika quickly picked up Nyke and ran out of the room at full speed. Olivia quickly hopped over the fence keeping the audience from the stadium and gave him a hug. Then she pulled away and grinned.
“See you later!” Olivia said, and she was gone. Meanwhile, Toko’s friends had been coming over the fence too. Corey waved him over. “Good job! You won!” After that, everything was a blur.
Toko vaguely remembered getting many pats on the back and fist-bumps. He showed everyone his Beyblade, easily beat generic bladers, and slowly made his way home. Dinner was another blur, filled with food from all of his neighbors and friends that had accumulated. Full, Toko went to bed.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - CheetoBlader - Jan. 25, 2019
(Jan. 25, 2019 4:36 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 15: The Sibling Showdown! Part 2!
Toko stared at Trident. ‘With that kind of power, how can we defeat Nika?’ He wondered to Trident. Trident did not respond.
Toko sighed as he prepared for battle. Suddenly, he got an idea. Valt sometimes ran up to the stadium for extra power and speed. Valt called that his ‘Sprint Boost’. What if Toko did that but spun around at the end?
That could give him added spin speed and allow him to lock down the center easier. So, Toko walked six steps back from the stadium. “Three!” Toko leapt forward. “Two!” Toko leapt again. “One!” Toko jumped to the stadium, spinning midair. “Let it...
Rip!” Toko hit the ground and launched at the same time, sending Trident to the center with extreme speed. Nyke was a blur around the stadium, both beys spinning at full speed. “Nyke, use Ultra Victory Annihilation!” Nyke became a shrinking circle around the stadium until it was constantly grinding against Trident.
“Neutralize the attack! Use Spiral Tsunami Twist!” Trident’s perimeter glowed blue. Trident had managed to mostly absorb the attack, and they both remained spinning strong. However, Trident had lost its massive spin boost and was spinning at its normal rate. “If he absorbed that attack, he won’t be able to handle this one! Ultra Victory Slash!”
One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it slammed into Trident, flinging Trident into the air. “Trident, hit her with the Tsunami Shot!” Trident fell directly on top of Nyke, sending them both flying out of the stadium. Toko grinned. “Looks like our new move worked well! If I can add just a smidge more power I should be able to beat her!”
Toko picked up Trident and stepped back six steps. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. This time, he managed to launch full power, straining his arm to far. Toko’s arm burned, but he ignored it, set on defeating Nika. Trident was spinning at full force. “Trident, disrupt Nyke’s speed with our new Spiral Tsunami Shield!” Three glowing blue shields formed around Trident as it rolled up the stadium. Nyke, who was a golden blur, slammed into one of the shields, and instantly all of its velocity caught up to it as all of its force and momentum was turned on itself.
Nika realized her grave error a moment too late, and Nyke burst, its parts being sent flying out of the stadium. “Haha, sis! It looks like we are tied! One more win and bam! you’re defeated!”
Nika smirked. “I don’t think you realize that I have two points too! I just need one more win and I will defeat you instead!”
Toko’s eyes widened as he realized that they were tied. “You’re right, but I will get the victory! Now let’s do this battle! Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. Nyke was a blur, but Nika had used a differently angled launch to send Nyke in a star-like pattern. Toko launched Trident so that it moved in a circle around the stadium. “Trident, use Spiral Boost!” Trident sped up, forming a circle around the center.
“Nyke, use Ultra Victory Star Launch!” Nyke glowed as it formed a star in the stadium. However, it could not create a perfect star pattern because Trident’s rapid motion formed essentially a circular wall that blocked Nyke’s attacks.
“Hold on, Trident! Knock Nyke out of the stadium!”
“Nyke, break through it! Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it struck Trident with full power. They both clashed, and then they were both flung into the air from the power of their attacks. “Nyke, attack him in midair!”
Nyke struck Trident, a spring loaded wing flinging Trident sideways, over the edge of the stadium. “Yes!” Nika cried out happily. Suddenly, she heard the sound of a burst and a clink almost simultaneously. Nika opened her eyes to see Trident on the ground and Nyke’s parts in the stadium. The ref thought about what had happened before deciding who won. “Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Because of burst priority, Toko wins with a burst finish 4-2! Toko won the Primal Cup and will challenge Blair Pai!”
Toko grinned as he pumped his fist into the air. “Yes! I won!” Nika quickly picked up Nyke and ran out of the room at full speed. Olivia quickly hopped over the fence keeping the audience from the stadium and gave him a hug. Then she pulled away and grinned.
“See you later!” Olivia said, and she was gone. Meanwhile, Toko’s friends had been coming over the fence too. Corey waved him over. “Good job! You won!” After that, everything was a blur.
Toko vaguely remembered getting many pats on the back and fist-bumps. He showed everyone his Beyblade, easily beat generic bladers, and slowly made his way home. Dinner was another blur, filled with food from all of his neighbors and friends that had accumulated. Full, Toko went to bed. Amazing!
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 25, 2019
(Jan. 25, 2019 4:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 25, 2019 4:36 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 15: The Sibling Showdown! Part 2!
Toko stared at Trident. ‘With that kind of power, how can we defeat Nika?’ He wondered to Trident. Trident did not respond.
Toko sighed as he prepared for battle. Suddenly, he got an idea. Valt sometimes ran up to the stadium for extra power and speed. Valt called that his ‘Sprint Boost’. What if Toko did that but spun around at the end?
That could give him added spin speed and allow him to lock down the center easier. So, Toko walked six steps back from the stadium. “Three!” Toko leapt forward. “Two!” Toko leapt again. “One!” Toko jumped to the stadium, spinning midair. “Let it...
Rip!” Toko hit the ground and launched at the same time, sending Trident to the center with extreme speed. Nyke was a blur around the stadium, both beys spinning at full speed. “Nyke, use Ultra Victory Annihilation!” Nyke became a shrinking circle around the stadium until it was constantly grinding against Trident.
“Neutralize the attack! Use Spiral Tsunami Twist!” Trident’s perimeter glowed blue. Trident had managed to mostly absorb the attack, and they both remained spinning strong. However, Trident had lost its massive spin boost and was spinning at its normal rate. “If he absorbed that attack, he won’t be able to handle this one! Ultra Victory Slash!”
One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it slammed into Trident, flinging Trident into the air. “Trident, hit her with the Tsunami Shot!” Trident fell directly on top of Nyke, sending them both flying out of the stadium. Toko grinned. “Looks like our new move worked well! If I can add just a smidge more power I should be able to beat her!”
Toko picked up Trident and stepped back six steps. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. This time, he managed to launch full power, straining his arm to far. Toko’s arm burned, but he ignored it, set on defeating Nika. Trident was spinning at full force. “Trident, disrupt Nyke’s speed with our new Spiral Tsunami Shield!” Three glowing blue shields formed around Trident as it rolled up the stadium. Nyke, who was a golden blur, slammed into one of the shields, and instantly all of its velocity caught up to it as all of its force and momentum was turned on itself.
Nika realized her grave error a moment too late, and Nyke burst, its parts being sent flying out of the stadium. “Haha, sis! It looks like we are tied! One more win and bam! you’re defeated!”
Nika smirked. “I don’t think you realize that I have two points too! I just need one more win and I will defeat you instead!”
Toko’s eyes widened as he realized that they were tied. “You’re right, but I will get the victory! Now let’s do this battle! Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko used his special launch again. Nyke was a blur, but Nika had used a differently angled launch to send Nyke in a star-like pattern. Toko launched Trident so that it moved in a circle around the stadium. “Trident, use Spiral Boost!” Trident sped up, forming a circle around the center.
“Nyke, use Ultra Victory Star Launch!” Nyke glowed as it formed a star in the stadium. However, it could not create a perfect star pattern because Trident’s rapid motion formed essentially a circular wall that blocked Nyke’s attacks.
“Hold on, Trident! Knock Nyke out of the stadium!”
“Nyke, break through it! Ultra Victory Slash!” One of Nyke’s wings glowed golden as it struck Trident with full power. They both clashed, and then they were both flung into the air from the power of their attacks. “Nyke, attack him in midair!”
Nyke struck Trident, a spring loaded wing flinging Trident sideways, over the edge of the stadium. “Yes!” Nika cried out happily. Suddenly, she heard the sound of a burst and a clink almost simultaneously. Nika opened her eyes to see Trident on the ground and Nyke’s parts in the stadium. The ref thought about what had happened before deciding who won. “Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Because of burst priority, Toko wins with a burst finish 4-2! Toko won the Primal Cup and will challenge Blair Pai!”
Toko grinned as he pumped his fist into the air. “Yes! I won!” Nika quickly picked up Nyke and ran out of the room at full speed. Olivia quickly hopped over the fence keeping the audience from the stadium and gave him a hug. Then she pulled away and grinned.
“See you later!” Olivia said, and she was gone. Meanwhile, Toko’s friends had been coming over the fence too. Corey waved him over. “Good job! You won!” After that, everything was a blur.
Toko vaguely remembered getting many pats on the back and fist-bumps. He showed everyone his Beyblade, easily beat generic bladers, and slowly made his way home. Dinner was another blur, filled with food from all of his neighbors and friends that had accumulated. Full, Toko went to bed. Amazing!
Thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 29, 2019
The first Meta Chapter has been created! Basically, it’s a series of chapters based off the meta, starting from the very beginning.
Meta Chapter 1: Valkyrie
In the beginning there was nothing. One day four beings came into existence. The first was a powerful knight named Valkyrie. The second was a red-skinned demon-like creature with a large mane named Spriggan. The third was a flaming demon-like creature named Ragnaruk. The final being was a three-headed dog named Kerbeus.
Valkyrie, knowing it was the strongest, quickly challenged Ragnaruk to assert its dominance and become ruler over them. Valkyrie noticed Ragnaruk had strong armor (Heavy) and Ragnaruk wanted Valkyrie’s sword (Accel). So, they made a deal and began the fight.
Ragnaruk knew the sword was very sharp and strong, so he would have to go defensive and use his armor to block the attacks. Valkyrie slashed at Ragnaruk, only to be deflected. Ragnaruk used the armor on its arm to deflect attacks as it ran towards him, smashing into Valkyrie, knocking Valkyrie into the air.
The wind was knocked out of Valkyrie, leaving Ragnaruk sneering over it. Valkyrie groaned as she forced herself upright and then began to attack Ragnaruk again. This time, Valkyrie slashed against Ragnaruk’s leg, knocking it down. Ragnaruk roared as it stood up and decided to go on the offensive.
It engulfed its arms in flames and then through a punch towards Valkyrie, who dodged it. While Ragnaruk was off-balance, Valkyrie quickly hit Ragnaruk in the head with the hilt of the sword, knocking it to the ground. Then she planted a foot firmly on Ragnaruk’s chest, pointing a blade at its head.
Ragnaruk frowned as it realized it had lost and then gave her the armor, being left with her light-weight armor (Wing). The new armor quickly changed shape to fit Valkyrie, and stronger than before, Valkyrie went to challenge Kerbeus.
Valkyrie slashed her sword against Kerbeus, but it’s hide was like armor, and Valkyrie couldn’t get through. Valkyrie attacked again, and this time, Kerbeus swung a paw at her, sending her flying into a wall.
Valkyrie stood up, dizzy. Her older armor wouldn’t have been able to take that attack and she would’ve lost, but Ragnaruk’s armor was much stronger and heavier than her old armor, and she began attacking again. Her sword was unable to pierce the hide no matter how many times she attacked, and Valkyrie was unable to find a weak point until it roared. It’s gaping maw was not as strong as iron, and she could get through.
She slashed her sword into its mouth, sending black-green blood out. It collapsed. Suddenly, it’s mouth wound healed and Kerbeus walked away. Valkyrie realized that any damage sustained during battle heals instantly as soon as a battle ends.
Valkyrie just needed to defeat Spriggan and then she could be the champion and rule over them all. So, she challenged Spriggan to a battle. Valkyrie made a deal with the other four. If she defeated Spriggan than she would become the ruler over them all.
Valkyrie slashed her sword upwards against Spriggan’s axe, the force from the attack knocking them both backwards. They both ran towards the center to attack again.
Valkyrie leapt into the air, slashing the sword down on Spriggan’s chest, knocking it down. Valkyrie landed on top of Spriggan, pointing the sword at its head. Spriggan swung the axe upwards, knocking Valkyrie off, and then it struggled upright. Spriggan began to wildly swing its axe, keeping Valkyrie from coming near it.
Valkyrie spun around and seemed to run to the nearest wall, using its momentum to run up the wall a few steps, and then it sprang off the wall, sending it flying over Spriggan’s head. Valkyrie smashed the hilt of its sword on Spriggan, knocking it unconscious.
Valkyrie stood tall and strong as the others bowed down, including Spriggan who had instantly healed. Valkyrie sat down upon a throne happily, as it was the strongest and controlling the Meta.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - BurningSands - Jan. 29, 2019
I like the description of the action and the fighting!! It was really enjoyable to read
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Grimlock_Ollie - Jan. 29, 2019
(Jan. 23, 2019 1:57 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 23, 2019 9:11 AM)Grimlock_Ollie Wrote: Man, that reminds me, I have a story of my own that me and my friend are adding onto... it starts off RIGHT after BC Sol wins the world tornement. I put myself into the story to make valt not know who Red Eye was, but my friend asked to be in it.
We made our own bey combo to simulate our imagination and rekt every god bey exept for Balkesh and Nemesis upper (We did not have Appolo, Artimes, Eclipse; any turbo beys at the time (they weren't made yet); Gardian Kerbeus; Spiral Treptune; Drain Fafnir (oh, i got giest one day and our beys wiped the title of him clean off); Legend Spryzen (But we had requium. Imagine requium vs Valtriek but with valtriek as single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and the Orlialcums) I had single layer Caynox, 1, Gyro (with the inner plastic cut off because it was broken) and my friend had Krusher Doomsisor, 8V, Atomic. When we faced off, I kept using the edges of the stadium like the sling shock and won 2-1 (Survivor for me, tie, tie, ring out for my friend, ring out for me)
That sounds like fun!
Collab Chapter 4 w/ @[CheetoBlader]: The Beast’s Burning Attack! Corrupted Salamander!
Suoh’s eye glowed as it turned red. “Salamander, drain Lui’s power!” Salamander was wrapped in a dark purple-red aura as it struck Longinus.
Longinus’ blue aura seemed to weaken as Salamander’s grew stronger. Suoh flipped his hair so it covered his right eye instead of his left, revealing a dark red mark on his face. It was glowing with an unearthly light. “Salamander, use Corrupted Flame Boost!”
Salamander used the friction from the rubber on the driver to create a tornado of flames around it. Then it slashed inwards at a steep angle to attack Trident, who was holding down the center. Salamander sent Trident up the stadium into the wall. “Roan, his attack is too strong!”
Roan smirked. “Let’s see about his defense. Go, Revenge Crush!” Revenge, who had just bounced high into the air, slashed down on Salamander. “Block it! Use Berserk Blaze Wall!” The force from Revenge’s attack switched Salamander into defense mode.
A red bubble formed around it, keeping Revenge from even slightly harming it. Revenge kept bouncing on top of Salamander, Roan desperately hoping it would do damage. “I cannot get through its defense either! It’s a monster!”
Lui’s face lit up. “Suoh can’t defend and attack at the same time! It’ll have to compromise, allowing us to defeat it!”
Roan and Toko both looked at Lui in surprise. “I thought you were on his team!"
Lui shrugged. “He’s trying to drain my power. I’d rather be on your team for the time being.”
“Alright, that makes since, but how do we make him try to defend and attack?” Toko asked, confused.
Roan’s face lit up as he realized what Lui had meant. “If Longinus and Revenge both attack while forcing Salamander to attack Trident-“
Toko interrupted, realizing what they meant, “then Salamander won’t be able to defend the attacks!”
Lui rolled his eyes. “Now you get it. Longinus, use Dragonic Spiral!” Longinus slammed into Salamander, pushing it against Trident. “Trident, use Hydro Twist!” Salamander was sent straight up into the air. “Revenge, deliver the coup de grace! Revenge Strike!”
Revenge struck Salamander midair. For a moment, they were hovering and clashing against each other, and then Salamander and Revenge burst at the same time. “Now Longinus! Draco Spiral!” Longinus quickly sped into Trident and burst it. Lui laughed. “So easy! Now leave our stadium!” Toko’s eyes widened as he realized their deal. “B-but you were-“
Lui posed so that his foot was hovering over Trident, a manic grin across his pale face. “Go away!
Now!” Lui’s foot swung down and Toko lunged, grabbing Trident and getting his finger stepped on instead. Toko and Lui both howled, Toko howling in pain and Lui laughing, his laugh like a hyena’s. Toko shook his pink finger as him and Roan sadly left. Re-visiting this post, This kinda motovates me to post MY story... I know the critics will attack any time soon, but here's a quick summary (No dailoge, just the events) of my solo work (All the way to the turbo era; This whole story summary is full of spoilers, so i'm hiding it .-.)
Before it goes on, the japaneese name is saying that they switched to left spin (Which I gave only a hand full of bladers the ability)
So, Basically Jinn Awzana (owner of Jumbo Jormuntor) has a cousin named Ollie Hasashi (Which is me).
Ollie lost his parrents when they were looking for ainchant beys from the metal saga, while age 8 Ollie was at home, chilling and found out that his parrents were lost on that very mission... poor young Ollie. Onto the current timeline, Jinn lost and the beyblade channel shows that BC Sol won. Grimlock HATED that he didn't have a legacy, so at age 12 and 3/4 (aka my age when I began the whole story) moved out to Spain
Naoki found him lurking around in the airport, so he tested his bey power to see if he even deserves a spot in spain... he HORRIBLY failed, thus re-birthing his bey into Loutish Oxian/Reptilian Oxio (Visuals of this bey is found in https://youtu.be/GXUxGn3Je18 ). He told him the coodanates of BC Sol and he went to a clothing store in which he wears all black and a bowler hat with a red ribbon around it (My profile pic) Calling himself "Grimlock"
Now that him and his bey are reborn, it was off he went!... to bey park to practice After a while of legit stalker form waiting underneath a tree's shadow, he sees that Rantaro and Rickson arrive to train there. He launches his bey out of the shadows and into the stadium they are training in... He somehow burst both of them with that infamous cosdom middle he made. Once it is revealed that he is in presence; Grimlock calls out for his bey, it flies to his hand and he sees Valt in the distance. Trying to scare Valt away with his eeriyness, Valt asks who he was. Grimlock then proceades to tell them a theory that Red Eye was Shu and Valt notices that "Grimlock" Is the name of a famous bey that tied with Fafnir in a never-ending battle.
Grimlock takes off, THIS time leaving a LOT of pictures that show Shu's hair and Red-Eye's hair, Shu's bey styleand Red-Eye'sbey style, etc. They fallow a bus that Grimlock got on, only to faint of being tired an hour later. Cuza stumbles across them and Valt contacts Wakiya to find him and take him to BC Sol. This sucseeds and Grimlock instantly challenges each blader to a battle. If anyb ody gains ONE point, he must leave; If all the volunteers lose, he is a member. A WHOLE LOT of bladers accept, with the main characters being Valt, Sailus, Cuza and even side-characters like Shasa, Kit and Honey Guten. The bladers all go inside of the infinity stadium room with the infinity part powered off. Grimlock obviously wins a lot of battles, bursting satomb twice in a row. He then gets boredand departs
(This is when my friend joins and when we make just a few more characters to temporarily progress the plot)
He meets another blader in bey park named Chatoru (My friend) and his bey is Caniving Codebreaker (His imagination made the bey basically Maximum Garuda but with the outside being metal, 4Flow, Atomic {later switched to Yard when Forneus was released} ). The battles went:
Oxian wins a burst 2-0
Codebreaker wins 2-2
Tie
Tie
Nearly tie, but Codebreaker 3-2
And Grimlock storms off.
Grimlock later finds a blader named "Saravan" (I don't wanna spoil who he is just yet) and he challenges Grimlock to a battle. Saravan and his bey, Supirior Striker (Strike Valkerie, 6, Jaggy) bursts Oxian in the first match. This channels Grimlock to use a move he kept in secret called "Oxian Overdrive Typhoon" which is a move that Oxian's arrow-dynamic layer would guide the bey to fly up, flip upside-down and strike the opponent bey when they hit the center (Refrencing Thermal Picies from Metal Fusion) Christina finds Grimlock and is mad that he left off because it reminded her of Free. Grimlock appoligises and is now an official member of BC Sol.
Then, he realizes that Chatoru fallowed him. Grimlock is so angary that he uses Overdrive Typhoon on Codebreaker... which everyone knows would burst an avarage god bey, but doesn't with Codebreaker. Chatoru is offered a spot in BC Sol, but he gives the spot to Ranmeru (My friend's character who is the evil brother of Chatoru) Grimlock sees Ranmeru and Ranmeru sees Grimlock in a strange realization that they both will get along well (seeing that both their beys are a balance type) Ranmeru shows Grimlock Reality Reaper (Raneru's bey which is EXACTALY Krusher Doomsisor, 8V with Vortex being blue, Atomic) Grimlock suggusts that Vortex should be Star, but Ranmeru realizes that Raul told him as he was in the gateway they need to be in BC Sol together. He rushes to make the phone call and he eventually exepts.
Grimlock is offered a spot in the world solo tornement along with Ranerru Chatoru and Free (who enters the room) via envintation. They all exept, with only Grimlock noticing Free. He fallows him out to the woods and sees Free practicing. Free thinks he wants to battle, but Grimlock says he doesn't want to battle, but wants to know what he is up to. Free simpily takes a look at Oxian and offers Grimlocka battle. Grimlock flips his cosdom metalupside down (KKinda referencing Poison serpent) and it is found out that he is dual rotation. Oxian wins, Free faints, and then it's onto the tornement.
The battles are Saravan vs Grimlock, Chatoru vs Ranmeru and a blader called "Ogaga" vs Kurt.
Plot twist: Sarava, when Grimlock and he were kids, was turning to the dark power... HE was the one that sent his parrents out on an expadition to find the beys from the metal saga... (if you haven't figured it out yet, He's Grimlock's brother) Grimlock doesn't carethough, he defeats Saravan and Chatoru beats Ranmeru.
Onaga is Kurtz' cousin and they battle... I ran out of ideas here, so the next time I visit my friend, I'll edit this post... until then, this is where it ends so far
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 30, 2019
Meta Chapter 2: Deathscyther
For a while, Valkyrie was the happy ruler over the others, who had created small huts, and everybody was fine. One day, someone new showed up in a burst of dark energy. It was a warrior wearing a skull helmet and a black cloak, wielding two long scythes.
“I am Deathscyther!” It growled in a low voice. “And I challenge the ruler to a battle!”
Valkyrie left her little hut when she heard this commotion. Deathscyther looked at Valkyrie’s armor (still Heavy) and decided that he needed the armor, so he challenged Valkyrie to the battle. The winner would get Valkyrie’s armor.
Deathscyther quickly slashed its scythes at Valkyrie, who dodged them and then jumped behind it to slash her sword against its back, knocking Deathscyther to the ground. Deathscyther rolled to the side and knocked Valkyrie over, before hopping upright.
Valkyrie stood up, an aura of blue flames blazing into existence around her. Deathscyther gave an evil grin under its mask as an aura of dark energy flowed into existence around it. Then it dropped both of its scythes and then created a ball of black and purple flames.
Deathscyther hurled the ball of fire at Valkyrie, who didn’t dodge in time and was blasted backwards in an explosion. Valkyrie stumbled upright, not willing to give up that easily.
Deathscyther threw two more dark fireballs, which Valkyrie knew would defeat it, so after wrapping the sword in its blue flaming aura, Valkyrie threw it straight at the black fireballs, which met in the center.
Everything was silent for a moment as time seemed to freeze. Valkyrie could see Deathscyther clearly, and both of their flaming projectiles had disappeared.
And then a wave of dark blue energy blasted out from the center, sending them both flying against the walls, unconscious.
The two both instantly woke up and realized that they had tied. Therefore, Valkyrie remained the ruler and kept its armor, and Deathscyther left to challenge Spriggan. Deathscyther noticed Spriggan’s Armor (Spread) was almost as strong as Valkyrie’s and challenged Spriggan for it.
Deathscyther started by quickly slashing a scythe at Spriggan, who swung its axe and sent Deathscyther flying back. Deathscyther quickly landed and then sped towards Spriggan, before jumping over Spriggan and doing a flip, positioning its scythes so that they hooked onto the axe as it flipped.
Deathscyther sent the axe flying away, where it buried itself in a wall. Then Deathscyther began to slash its scythes in X’s while pushing Spriggan back towards a wall.
Deathscyther’s aura flared to life around it as it created two dark fireballs. Then it flung the fireballs at Spriggan, which hit and in a massive shockwave, Spriggan was sent headfirst into a wall, knocking it unconscious. The axe returned to Spriggan as it became conscious, since the battle was over, and Deathscyther took its armor.
Deathscyther decided to challenge Ragnaruk for it’s gauntlets (Survive), knowing that if it won it would be able to defeat Valkyrie with its dark power.
Ragnaruk accepted and the fight began. Deathscyther quickly formed a massive black fireball and sent it towards Ragnaruk, noting it was stronger than when he had battled Spriggan.
Ragnaruk easily sidestepped, but the force of the shockwave knocked it into the air. It collapsed, and Deathscyther took the gauntlets. However, Deathscyther knew they would tie again if he challenged Valkyrie. Instead, Deathscyther decided to wait for someone to come who could defeat Valkyrie. Then Deathscyther would only have to beat them.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - BurningSands - Jan. 30, 2019
I find it pretty interesting how theyre just fighting for armor and stuff, rather than something serious like power 
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 30, 2019
(Jan. 30, 2019 1:27 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: I find it pretty interesting how theyre just fighting for armor and stuff, rather than something serious like power
The armor gives them power, and Valkyrie is the ruler
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - BurningSands - Jan. 30, 2019
(Jan. 30, 2019 2:58 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 30, 2019 1:27 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: I find it pretty interesting how theyre just fighting for armor and stuff, rather than something serious like power
The armor gives them power, and Valkyrie is the ruler
Ah, that explains it!! Thanks. This seems interesting so keep up the good work with these stories
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Jan. 30, 2019
(Jan. 30, 2019 3:06 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: (Jan. 30, 2019 2:58 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: The armor gives them power, and Valkyrie is the ruler
Ah, that explains it!! Thanks. This seems interesting so keep up the good work with these stories
Thanks
What I meant by that is that the right parts on a combo can make it better, so Deathscyther Spread Survive makes Deathscyther as strong as it could be
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - UltimateMaster - Jan. 30, 2019
Cool story!
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Feb. 01, 2019
Chapter 16: Into the Shadows!
“Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Burst priority means that Toko wins, 4-2!”
Nika’s eyes widened as Nyke’s parts went flying towards her. Tears sprang to her eyes as she picked up Nyke’s parts and ran.
Nika eventually found herself at a stadium long worn down from battling. The pillars surrounding it and holding up the ceiling were overgrown in vines and moss. She sat down next to it so that she wouldn’t be visible to anybody unless they were at the stadium, and then she began to cry.
Nika was sitting there for a long time until she felt as if she had no tears left in her body to cry. Just as she was wiping off her face, someone was walking by. “Nika!” They called out.
She stood up and saw that the person was presumably a boy, but she was not 100% sure since he wore a black mask. “I’m Nika! Do I know you?” They had a familiar voice, but she couldn’t place where it was from.
The boy turned to her. “Ah, there you are! My name is Stealth Eye, and I saw you lose to Toko! I’m from the Shadow Organization and I’m here to invite you to join the group!” Stealth Eye spoke in a polite tone, yet Nika could tell he clearly didn’t want to be here.
“Shadow Organization? What’s that? It sounds dark.”
Stealth Eye seemed to think about the answer before finally deciding to explain it as, “the Shadow Organization is a group of bladers lead by a man named Dark. Our goal is to take in anybody who needs training and help them become stronger!”
Nika thought about it for a minute, before deciding. “Take me to this Dark person.” The eyes on Stealth Eyes mask (which were made of a dark grey glass) gleamed.
He led her to a tall building. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization!” He said grandly, his arms wide as if he was presenting the contents of the building.
Nika was about to reply when the words got stuck in her throat at the amazing sight before her. She was surrounded in stadiums and people all battling, some masked like Stealth Eye and some not. Stray Beyblades went flying as parts were scattered from burst finishes. Nika finally managed to choke out a “Whoa”, and even Stealth Eye seemed pleased at the sight before them.
“Isn’t it amazing,” He said happily, before leading her to an elevator in the back, constantly telling her to be careful, and that they would be mad if she broke one of their beys.
The elevator was rather large, considering the amount of people that she had seen. Stealth Eye pushed a button labeled as D. “The D stands for the Dorms. People only use the dorms if they feel as if they have no home to return to. Dark’s office is also on this floor. Be warned, it’s very dimly lit, so you’ll only be able to see his silhouette.”
There was a loud ding as the elevator stopped and the doors slid open. Stealth Eye led her through the dark hallway to an office and slid the door open. Somebody else was in the room, and was having a heated argument with Dark. “Isn’t going to work!” They were saying in a tired voice. Someone else in the room angrily responded, “Yes it will! It worked before on-“
A third person in the room calmly interrupted in a smooth voice, “Calm down, brother. Two guests just entered the room. I’d recommend for you two to leave.”
The first one responded, “Fine, but when it fails, you’ll have hell to pay. Don’t say I didn’t warn you.” Someone bumped into Nika and quickly said, “Sorry,” as they left the room. Nika looked out the open door to see the silhouette of two people. One was tall and had spiky hair. The other was slightly shorter and had longer hair which she could vaguely see as lavender. Then the elevator doors closed and they were gone.
Nika turned around in surprise as the man spoke. Her eyes had finally adjusted, and the man sitting in front of her was tall with long hair.
“I presume you must be Nika. Welcome to the Shadow Organization. May I see your bey?”
Nika slid Nyke onto the desk. Dark picked it up and seemed to investigate it. “Ah, an attack type. Very overused. However, it has some ability there. Spring attacks. Almost like God Valkyrie. Lots of potential.” He slid it back across the table to Nika.
“You have officially joined the C-Team. If you can prove yourself, you can rise to the B-Team, and then to the A-Team, and from there you can reach the Elite Squad, which entitles you to an evolution of your bey.”
Nika grinned. “Now go, and train with the others.”
She was about to leave with Stealth Eye when Dark called something else. “Oh, I almost forgot. You have one more decision to make. Do you want to become anonymous like Stealth Eye or the others?”
Nika spun around, realizing that being anonymous might be a good idea. “Sure!”
Dark stood up and tossed her a small object. It was a black mask. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization, Golden Eye.”
The small glass eyes on the mask were golden colored, yet when she put them on, her sight did not become golden. Under the mask, she felt powerful.
Nika was going to- scratch that, Golden Eye was going to make her mark on the world.
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - CheetoBlader - Feb. 01, 2019
(Feb. 01, 2019 1:16 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 16: Into the Shadows!
“Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Burst priority means that Toko wins, 4-2!”
Nika’s eyes widened as Nyke’s parts went flying towards her. Tears sprang to her eyes as she picked up Nyke’s parts and ran.
Nika eventually found herself at a stadium long worn down from battling. The pillars surrounding it and holding up the ceiling were overgrown in vines and moss. She sat down next to it so that she wouldn’t be visible to anybody unless they were at the stadium, and then she began to cry.
Nika was sitting there for a long time until she felt as if she had no tears left in her body to cry. Just as she was wiping off her face, someone was walking by. “Nika!” They called out.
She stood up and saw that the person was presumably a boy, but she was not 100% sure since he wore a black mask. “I’m Nika! Do I know you?” They had a familiar voice, but she couldn’t place where it was from.
The boy turned to her. “Ah, there you are! My name is Stealth Eye, and I saw you lose to Toko! I’m from the Shadow Organization and I’m here to invite you to join the group!” Stealth Eye spoke in a polite tone, yet Nika could tell he clearly didn’t want to be here.
“Shadow Organization? What’s that? It sounds dark.”
Stealth Eye seemed to think about the answer before finally deciding to explain it as, “the Shadow Organization is a group of bladers lead by a man named Dark. Our goal is to take in anybody who needs training and help them become stronger!”
Nika thought about it for a minute, before deciding. “Take me to this Dark person.” The eyes on Stealth Eyes mask (which were made of a dark grey glass) gleamed.
He led her to a tall building. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization!” He said grandly, his arms wide as if he was presenting the contents of the building.
Nika was about to reply when the words got stuck in her throat at the amazing sight before her. She was surrounded in stadiums and people all battling, some masked like Stealth Eye and some not. Stray Beyblades went flying as parts were scattered from burst finishes. Nika finally managed to choke out a “Whoa”, and even Stealth Eye seemed pleased at the sight before them.
“Isn’t it amazing,” He said happily, before leading her to an elevator in the back, constantly telling her to be careful, and that they would be mad if she broke one of their beys.
The elevator was rather large, considering the amount of people that she had seen. Stealth Eye pushed a button labeled as D. “The D stands for the Dorms. People only use the dorms if they feel as if they have no home to return to. Dark’s office is also on this floor. Be warned, it’s very dimly lit, so you’ll only be able to see his silhouette.”
There was a loud ding as the elevator stopped and the doors slid open. Stealth Eye led her through the dark hallway to an office and slid the door open. Somebody else was in the room, and was having a heated argument with Dark. “Isn’t going to work!” They were saying in a tired voice. Someone else in the room angrily responded, “Yes it will! It worked before on-“
A third person in the room calmly interrupted in a smooth voice, “Calm down, brother. Two guests just entered the room. I’d recommend for you two to leave.”
The first one responded, “Fine, but when it fails, you’ll have hell to pay. Don’t say I didn’t warn you.” Someone bumped into Nika and quickly said, “Sorry,” as they left the room. Nika looked out the open door to see the silhouette of two people. One was tall and had spiky hair. The other was slightly shorter and had longer hair which she could vaguely see as lavender. Then the elevator doors closed and they were gone.
Nika turned around in surprise as the man spoke. Her eyes had finally adjusted, and the man sitting in front of her was tall with long hair.
“I presume you must be Nika. Welcome to the Shadow Organization. May I see your bey?”
Nika slid Nyke onto the desk. Dark picked it up and seemed to investigate it. “Ah, an attack type. Very overused. However, it has some ability there. Spring attacks. Almost like God Valkyrie. Lots of potential.” He slid it back across the table to Nika.
“You have officially joined the C-Team. If you can prove yourself, you can rise to the B-Team, and then to the A-Team, and from there you can reach the Elite Squad, which entitles you to an evolution of your bey.”
Nika grinned. “Now go, and train with the others.”
She was about to leave with Stealth Eye when Dark called something else. “Oh, I almost forgot. You have one more decision to make. Do you want to become anonymous like Stealth Eye or the others?”
Nika spun around, realizing that being anonymous might be a good idea. “Sure!”
Dark stood up and tossed her a small object. It was a black mask. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization, Golden Eye.”
The small glass eyes on the mask were golden colored, yet when she put them on, her sight did not become golden. Under the mask, she felt powerful.
Nika was going to- scratch that, Golden Eye was going to make her mark on the world. *Deleted*
RE: Beyblade Burst Fusion - Dt20000 - Feb. 01, 2019
(Feb. 01, 2019 1:30 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Feb. 01, 2019 1:16 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Chapter 16: Into the Shadows!
“Simultaneous burst and ring out finishes! Burst priority means that Toko wins, 4-2!”
Nika’s eyes widened as Nyke’s parts went flying towards her. Tears sprang to her eyes as she picked up Nyke’s parts and ran.
Nika eventually found herself at a stadium long worn down from battling. The pillars surrounding it and holding up the ceiling were overgrown in vines and moss. She sat down next to it so that she wouldn’t be visible to anybody unless they were at the stadium, and then she began to cry.
Nika was sitting there for a long time until she felt as if she had no tears left in her body to cry. Just as she was wiping off her face, someone was walking by. “Nika!” They called out.
She stood up and saw that the person was presumably a boy, but she was not 100% sure since he wore a black mask. “I’m Nika! Do I know you?” They had a familiar voice, but she couldn’t place where it was from.
The boy turned to her. “Ah, there you are! My name is Stealth Eye, and I saw you lose to Toko! I’m from the Shadow Organization and I’m here to invite you to join the group!” Stealth Eye spoke in a polite tone, yet Nika could tell he clearly didn’t want to be here.
“Shadow Organization? What’s that? It sounds dark.”
Stealth Eye seemed to think about the answer before finally deciding to explain it as, “the Shadow Organization is a group of bladers lead by a man named Dark. Our goal is to take in anybody who needs training and help them become stronger!”
Nika thought about it for a minute, before deciding. “Take me to this Dark person.” The eyes on Stealth Eyes mask (which were made of a dark grey glass) gleamed.
He led her to a tall building. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization!” He said grandly, his arms wide as if he was presenting the contents of the building.
Nika was about to reply when the words got stuck in her throat at the amazing sight before her. She was surrounded in stadiums and people all battling, some masked like Stealth Eye and some not. Stray Beyblades went flying as parts were scattered from burst finishes. Nika finally managed to choke out a “Whoa”, and even Stealth Eye seemed pleased at the sight before them.
“Isn’t it amazing,” He said happily, before leading her to an elevator in the back, constantly telling her to be careful, and that they would be mad if she broke one of their beys.
The elevator was rather large, considering the amount of people that she had seen. Stealth Eye pushed a button labeled as D. “The D stands for the Dorms. People only use the dorms if they feel as if they have no home to return to. Dark’s office is also on this floor. Be warned, it’s very dimly lit, so you’ll only be able to see his silhouette.”
There was a loud ding as the elevator stopped and the doors slid open. Stealth Eye led her through the dark hallway to an office and slid the door open. Somebody else was in the room, and was having a heated argument with Dark. “Isn’t going to work!” They were saying in a tired voice. Someone else in the room angrily responded, “Yes it will! It worked before on-“
A third person in the room calmly interrupted in a smooth voice, “Calm down, brother. Two guests just entered the room. I’d recommend for you two to leave.”
The first one responded, “Fine, but when it fails, you’ll have hell to pay. Don’t say I didn’t warn you.” Someone bumped into Nika and quickly said, “Sorry,” as they left the room. Nika looked out the open door to see the silhouette of two people. One was tall and had spiky hair. The other was slightly shorter and had longer hair which she could vaguely see as lavender. Then the elevator doors closed and they were gone.
Nika turned around in surprise as the man spoke. Her eyes had finally adjusted, and the man sitting in front of her was tall with long hair.
“I presume you must be Nika. Welcome to the Shadow Organization. May I see your bey?”
Nika slid Nyke onto the desk. Dark picked it up and seemed to investigate it. “Ah, an attack type. Very overused. However, it has some ability there. Spring attacks. Almost like God Valkyrie. Lots of potential.” He slid it back across the table to Nika.
“You have officially joined the C-Team. If you can prove yourself, you can rise to the B-Team, and then to the A-Team, and from there you can reach the Elite Squad, which entitles you to an evolution of your bey.”
Nika grinned. “Now go, and train with the others.”
She was about to leave with Stealth Eye when Dark called something else. “Oh, I almost forgot. You have one more decision to make. Do you want to become anonymous like Stealth Eye or the others?”
Nika spun around, realizing that being anonymous might be a good idea. “Sure!”
Dark stood up and tossed her a small object. It was a black mask. “Welcome to the Shadow Organization, Golden Eye.”
The small glass eyes on the mask were golden colored, yet when she put them on, her sight did not become golden. Under the mask, she felt powerful.
Nika was going to- scratch that, Golden Eye was going to make her mark on the world. Nika is evil!? This won’t end well
I never said that
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