RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Dec. 30, 2018
(Dec. 30, 2018 10:26 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Dec. 30, 2018 10:23 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: That was AMAZING!!!
Who won in the end Revenge or Drake
but just so you know his name is Roan not Rian
It said Rian in your first post, and it’s one of those story’s where the reader decides
1. No it doesn’t
2. Who won Revenge or Drake
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Dec. 30, 2018
(Dec. 30, 2018 10:27 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Dec. 30, 2018 10:26 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: It said Rian in your first post, and it’s one of those story’s where the reader decides
1. No it doesn’t
2. Who won Revenge or Drake
It’s one of those story’s where the reader decides. Also, I misread it, sorry
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - #Fafnir - Dec. 30, 2018
That was amazing! How many special chapters will there be?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Dec. 30, 2018
(Dec. 30, 2018 10:51 PM)#Fafnir Wrote: That was amazing! How many special chapters will there be?
Idk, 10 or something?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Dec. 30, 2018
(Dec. 30, 2018 11:00 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Dec. 30, 2018 10:51 PM)#Fafnir Wrote: That was amazing! How many special chapters will there be?
Idk, 10 or something?
10! Yes!!!!
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Dec. 30, 2018 10:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Special Chapter 1: A Bad Case of Freezer Burn!
“Tsk tsk. What’s taking them so long?” A young boy wondered out loud. He wore a zipped up deep blue coat, darker blue jeans, and black shoes, and was sitting on a long bench with a faded blue paint job that may have once been pretty.
He checked a small watch on his wrist and saw it was 1:12 pm. They were supposed to arrive at 1:00. Bored, the boy began to twirl his curly brown hair.
Suddenly, a figure bounded past to a stadium, followed by a walking girl. “Alright, where’s this Rian guy?”
“Patience, idiot."
“Hey! That’s rude!”
She grinned.
“I’m this Rian guy! What took you two so long?”
The girl looked at him. She wore a thin white jacket over an ice blue shirt and plain black jeans and sneakers. The boy was finally still enough for Rian to see him. He wore a thin black jacket over a deep maroon shirt, long black pants, and dark red boots.
“You’re younger than I thought, kid. Your bey probably can’t handle Drake! Go home.” The girl, who he realized was Misuki, began to walk away.
Misuku jumped and flipped over Misuki and landed in front of her. “Don’t leave yet! He might be a good Blader!”
“As if.” She began to step around him, but he reached out and blocked her.
“Wait, don’t leave yet!” Rian called to her. “Another Blader will come too and he’s older than me!”
A freezing cold wind seemed to pass through as Misuki turned around, her eyes glowing a bright shade of blood red. “You mean a 2 on 2?” An evil grin spread across her face.
“Alright! When’s this other person coming?” Misuku asked.
“He seems late like you too were.”
“We weren’t late, we were just, um, not here in time.” It came out more like a question.
Suddenly, somebody jumped down from a tree. “Hello! My name is Colin and I’m here to battle you!"
“Is this the other guy?”
“Probably.” Rian responded.
“Alright! Let’s begin this battle!”
They all stood around the stadium, Misuki and Misuku on a team against Colin and Rian. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Drake began to shoot around the stadium, while Draco quickly locked down the center. “Burning Fortress! Go!” Misuki roared, eyes a vibrant red that matched her glowing Beyblade. The bottom of the driver glowed as red cracks spread through the stadium like a spider’s web coming from Draco’s tip.
Colin’s Crusher Beyblade was spinning extremely fast and circling the stadium, clearly in its stamina mode. “Go! Ultimate Launch!” A tornado began to form around Crusher as it began to glide towards Draco. Crusher struck Draco, causing more and more cracks to spread throughout the stadium.
“Inferno Fortress!” The stadium suddenly exploded, sending every bey into the air. The stadium had become a dark red color with bright lava flowing over it. Rian grinned. His Beyblade, Revenge, which had quietly been circling the stadium ridge, was sent flying higher than all of theirs. “Go! Revenge Smash!” Revenge turned and smashed on top of Drake, bursting it. Revenge’s momentum caused it to crash into the stadium, where it quickly began to circle the stadium. When Draco landed, it perfectly took the center.
Crusher was falling very slowly because of it’s personal tornado.
“Crusher! Use Ultra Zeta Shift!” It’s Zeta driver quickly changed modes into Attack. It’s tornado disintegrated. It struck the stadium and bounced into the air. “Go! Ultimate Slash!” The beyblade landed so that the underside of the layer hit the side of Draco. “Revenge Strike!” Revenge shot towards Draco and quickly attacked its other side.
The three beys kept clashing. “Draco! Fortress Counter!” Draco’s fortress side glowed as it spun. Suddenly, Revenge and Crusher were both flung into the air. Misuku grinned. “Drake! Frozen Revive!” Crusher burst midair, while Revenge struck the stadium. The parts of Drake were flung into the air by the impact, and they landed directly on top of each other. The parts glowed as the beyblade began to wobble back upright before speeding up. “Drake! Dragonic Whip!” Drake struck Revenge, flinging it up into the air. Rian’s eyes glowed a bright shade of blood red as Revenge’s beast appeared around him.
It was a large Warrior with glowing red skin and dark maroon armor. Revenge wielded a long golden-edged red broadsword. Both Revenge and Rian slashed their arms down as though swinging a sword and they together roared, “Ultra Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed on top of Draco, using it’s angled driver like a hammer, before bouncing onto Drake, and then bouncing back. It continued the rapid attack, both Drake and Draco losing stamina from the attacks and shifting to their last clicks. Then Revenge dropped between the two, striking them both rapidly, eventually bursting Draco. It was just Drake against Revenge.
“Let’s go! Frostbite Blast!” Drake shot towards Revenge and struck it with it’s jagged edge, sending Revenge shooting into a wall, knocking Revenge onto it’s last click. Misuku grinned as Drake’s beast formed around him. Drake was a long blue dragon with white eyes, and long white wings. It reared back, claws ready for attack. “Now, Drake! Frozen Claw!” Drake shot towards Revenge for a final attack. “Go! Revenge Counter!” The two beyblades clashed for a long time, before both of them burst. Colin and Misuki both had opposing reactions. Colin seemed sad, while Misuki grinned. “Drake won! That means our team won!”
Misuku and Rian both looked at their teammates oddly. “No, Revenge won!” They both said in unison.
Misuki raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“His bey burst after mine just slightly!”
Misuki rolled her eyes and her and Misuku both began to walk away. “Well, that was a fun match!” Misuki’s eye glowed brightly. “Perfect.”
Is Chapter 2 ready yet?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 3:21 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Dec. 30, 2018 10:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Special Chapter 1: A Bad Case of Freezer Burn!
“Tsk tsk. What’s taking them so long?” A young boy wondered out loud. He wore a zipped up deep blue coat, darker blue jeans, and black shoes, and was sitting on a long bench with a faded blue paint job that may have once been pretty.
He checked a small watch on his wrist and saw it was 1:12 pm. They were supposed to arrive at 1:00. Bored, the boy began to twirl his curly brown hair.
Suddenly, a figure bounded past to a stadium, followed by a walking girl. “Alright, where’s this Rian guy?”
“Patience, idiot."
“Hey! That’s rude!”
She grinned.
“I’m this Rian guy! What took you two so long?”
The girl looked at him. She wore a thin white jacket over an ice blue shirt and plain black jeans and sneakers. The boy was finally still enough for Rian to see him. He wore a thin black jacket over a deep maroon shirt, long black pants, and dark red boots.
“You’re younger than I thought, kid. Your bey probably can’t handle Drake! Go home.” The girl, who he realized was Misuki, began to walk away.
Misuku jumped and flipped over Misuki and landed in front of her. “Don’t leave yet! He might be a good Blader!”
“As if.” She began to step around him, but he reached out and blocked her.
“Wait, don’t leave yet!” Rian called to her. “Another Blader will come too and he’s older than me!”
A freezing cold wind seemed to pass through as Misuki turned around, her eyes glowing a bright shade of blood red. “You mean a 2 on 2?” An evil grin spread across her face.
“Alright! When’s this other person coming?” Misuku asked.
“He seems late like you too were.”
“We weren’t late, we were just, um, not here in time.” It came out more like a question.
Suddenly, somebody jumped down from a tree. “Hello! My name is Colin and I’m here to battle you!"
“Is this the other guy?”
“Probably.” Rian responded.
“Alright! Let’s begin this battle!”
They all stood around the stadium, Misuki and Misuku on a team against Colin and Rian. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Drake began to shoot around the stadium, while Draco quickly locked down the center. “Burning Fortress! Go!” Misuki roared, eyes a vibrant red that matched her glowing Beyblade. The bottom of the driver glowed as red cracks spread through the stadium like a spider’s web coming from Draco’s tip.
Colin’s Crusher Beyblade was spinning extremely fast and circling the stadium, clearly in its stamina mode. “Go! Ultimate Launch!” A tornado began to form around Crusher as it began to glide towards Draco. Crusher struck Draco, causing more and more cracks to spread throughout the stadium.
“Inferno Fortress!” The stadium suddenly exploded, sending every bey into the air. The stadium had become a dark red color with bright lava flowing over it. Rian grinned. His Beyblade, Revenge, which had quietly been circling the stadium ridge, was sent flying higher than all of theirs. “Go! Revenge Smash!” Revenge turned and smashed on top of Drake, bursting it. Revenge’s momentum caused it to crash into the stadium, where it quickly began to circle the stadium. When Draco landed, it perfectly took the center.
Crusher was falling very slowly because of it’s personal tornado.
“Crusher! Use Ultra Zeta Shift!” It’s Zeta driver quickly changed modes into Attack. It’s tornado disintegrated. It struck the stadium and bounced into the air. “Go! Ultimate Slash!” The beyblade landed so that the underside of the layer hit the side of Draco. “Revenge Strike!” Revenge shot towards Draco and quickly attacked its other side.
The three beys kept clashing. “Draco! Fortress Counter!” Draco’s fortress side glowed as it spun. Suddenly, Revenge and Crusher were both flung into the air. Misuku grinned. “Drake! Frozen Revive!” Crusher burst midair, while Revenge struck the stadium. The parts of Drake were flung into the air by the impact, and they landed directly on top of each other. The parts glowed as the beyblade began to wobble back upright before speeding up. “Drake! Dragonic Whip!” Drake struck Revenge, flinging it up into the air. Rian’s eyes glowed a bright shade of blood red as Revenge’s beast appeared around him.
It was a large Warrior with glowing red skin and dark maroon armor. Revenge wielded a long golden-edged red broadsword. Both Revenge and Rian slashed their arms down as though swinging a sword and they together roared, “Ultra Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed on top of Draco, using it’s angled driver like a hammer, before bouncing onto Drake, and then bouncing back. It continued the rapid attack, both Drake and Draco losing stamina from the attacks and shifting to their last clicks. Then Revenge dropped between the two, striking them both rapidly, eventually bursting Draco. It was just Drake against Revenge.
“Let’s go! Frostbite Blast!” Drake shot towards Revenge and struck it with it’s jagged edge, sending Revenge shooting into a wall, knocking Revenge onto it’s last click. Misuku grinned as Drake’s beast formed around him. Drake was a long blue dragon with white eyes, and long white wings. It reared back, claws ready for attack. “Now, Drake! Frozen Claw!” Drake shot towards Revenge for a final attack. “Go! Revenge Counter!” The two beyblades clashed for a long time, before both of them burst. Colin and Misuki both had opposing reactions. Colin seemed sad, while Misuki grinned. “Drake won! That means our team won!”
Misuku and Rian both looked at their teammates oddly. “No, Revenge won!” They both said in unison.
Misuki raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“His bey burst after mine just slightly!”
Misuki rolled her eyes and her and Misuku both began to walk away. “Well, that was a fun match!” Misuki’s eye glowed brightly. “Perfect.”
Is Chapter 2 ready yet?
I’m at a friends house, so no new chapters yet, and I’m doing a special chapter for every five chapters or so.
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:07 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 3:21 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Is Chapter 2 ready yet?
I’m at a friends house, so no new chapters yet, and I’m doing a special chapter for every five chapters or so.
Ok I will be waiting
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:09 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:07 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: I’m at a friends house, so no new chapters yet, and I’m doing a special chapter for every five chapters or so.
Ok I will be waiting
You could read the other chapters and be prepared for the next few
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:09 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:09 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Ok I will be waiting
You could read the other chapters and be prepared for the next few I already read all of them
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:10 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:09 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: You could read the other chapters and be prepared for the next few I already read all of them
Oh, I guess just read another story?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:11 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:10 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I already read all of them
Oh, I guess just read another story?
Other story?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:12 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:11 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Oh, I guess just read another story?
Other story?
Idk, try reading all of MWF’s 30 parts or my Count Knight Series
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:13 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:12 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Other story?
Idk, try reading all of MWF’s 30 parts or my Count Knight Series
Where are those
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 4:13 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:13 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Idk, try reading all of MWF’s 30 parts or my Count Knight Series
Where are those
The Write your own stories thread, and I have a dead thread with Count Knigh in it
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 9:14 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 4:13 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Where are those
The Write your own stories thread, and I have a dead thread with Count Knigh in it
Why is it dead it’s really good!
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 02, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 9:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 9:14 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: The Write your own stories thread, and I have a dead thread with Count Knigh in it
Why is it dead it’s really good!
Thanks, and it’s dead because nobody has posted in a while.
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - CheetoBlader - Jan. 03, 2019
(Jan. 02, 2019 11:14 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 02, 2019 9:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Why is it dead it’s really good!
Thanks, and it’s dead because nobody has posted in a while.
Not anymore!
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
Chapter 6: The Flying Reptile! Screech Cockatris
“Go, Cockatris! Screeching Bolt!” Cockatris struck Trident and easily burst it. “Hahaha! It looks like I will fight against Blair Pai!”
“Noooo, Trident!” Toko cried as Trident disintegrated in his hand. Then the world began to spin and get blurry...
Toko woke up in a cold sweat. “Oh jeez, that was a bad dream. You’re still alive, right Tri- Noooooo!” He looked to his left and saw an urn that said Trident on a white label.
Toko woke up again in a cold sweat. “Man, that was a bad dream. This time, you’re alive, right Trident?” He looked to the side and saw Trident sitting there. “What time is it?” He looked beside Trident at his clock, which said in bright blue lettering that it was 3:14 am.
“Ugh.” He rolled to his side and tried to go back to sleep. Toko couldn’t get back to sleep for a while and eventually gave up on the prospect, at which point it was 3:52 am. He rolled out of bed and quietly left the house with Trident and his launcher.
Toko carefully crept across the lawn to the nearest stadium, preparing to practice. “Three! Two! One! Let it... Rip!” Trident glided towards the center. “Again! Let it... Rip!” Trident took the center again. “Stronger! Rip!” Trident took the center again.
“Faster! Rip!” Trident took the center.
“Haaaah! Let it... Rip!” Trident shot towards the center with extreme speed. “Whoa! What is that power?!” Trident glowed a deep blue. “Amazing.” He murmured. “If I can harness that power against Corey, I can easily win!”
He noticed the sun was rising and quickly yet still stealthily, he crept home to his room and fell asleep. “Beep! Beep! Beep!” The alarm clock chirped. Toko yawned as he got up.
An hour or so later, he was at the tournament, prepared for a heated battle. And he was going to get one.
Corey and Toko both stepped up to the stadium. “Alright! Let’s begin this battle, Corey!”
Corey grinned. “Okay, let’s! But be warned, because you will not leave with a victory! Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko had played it safe with an angled launch, sending Trident into a tight circle around the center, while Cockatris began to glide around the stadium in a wide circle. “Go! Screeching Bolt!”
A spike on Cockatris’s driver hit the stadium, causing it to instantly change direction and speed up. Then it struck Trident with it’s jagged green side. “Counter that attack, Trident! Use our Hydro Twist!” Trident’s wave-like protrusions glowed Blue. Then each wave seemed to shift, repelling the attack. However, Cockatris was too strong and Trident burst.
“Whoa, look at that power! How is your bey that strong?”
Corey grinned. “It’s called skill, child. You should get some. Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Toko went for a steeper angled launch, causing Trident to quickly pull into the center. “Trident, lock down the center with our Hydro Twist!” Trident’s Wave-like protrusions glowed blue. “Cockatris, use Screeching Bolt!” Cockatris quickly changed direction and sped up, attacking Trident and being repelled. Then it quickly looped back in for another attack, and another, and another, until it was nearly out of stamina. “Hang on, Trident!” Trident barely managed to wobble longer than Cockatris, meaning Trident won. “Phew, I barely won that.”
Corey’s eyes, which were usually a pale green, quickly turned to a white eye and a bright green eye. “You aren’t going to win this.” Cockatris formed around him, a vicious green dragon covered in white feathers.
“I will.” Toko said simply, his own eyes turning golden as Trident formed around him, a golden armored warrior wielding a long golden staff with three long blades at the end. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Corey gave a sudden cry of pain as his launchers’ string snapped and whipped his shoulder from the strength of his launch. Cockatris began to form a tornado when it touched the stadium from it’s high spin speed. Trident zoomed into the stadium with high speed at an angle, moving like an attack type. “Let’s unleash our full potential, Cockatris! Use Tornado Eye!”
Cockatris directly attacked Trident with it’s blunted beak-like blade, sending Trident into the air. “Trident, use Tsunami Shot!” Toko jumped into the air, slashing his fist down as if he was holding a sword. Trident struck Cockatris from above, and they clashed for a long time, Trident barely managing to stay on top and clash without being sent flying away by the tornado. “Send it away, Cockatris!”
“End this, Trident! Full power!” They clashed, and in a sudden explosion of energy, Cockatris burst, cracks spreading throughout the stadium, destroying it. “After that explosive battle, it looks like our stadium is destroyed, and Toko moves on! The tournament will have to be postponed until tomorrow!”
Corey was frozen with an expression of surprise on his face. Toko grabbed Cockatris’ parts and carried them over to Corey, breaking him out of his trance. “You aren’t that bad, kid. How about you join my Bey Club?” Toko grinned. “What Bey Club?”
“We’re BC Sol International!” Toko smiled. “My brother was actually in that group 2 years ago! I’d be glad to check it out! Aren’t they in Spain though?”
Corey smiled. “I’m the leader of the A-Team in the Japan division! I think you could be a great addition to our team!”
“Alright, I’m in!”
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - MWF - Jan. 04, 2019
(Dec. 30, 2018 10:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Special Chapter 1: A Bad Case of Freezer Burn!
“Tsk tsk. What’s taking them so long?” A young boy wondered out loud. He wore a zipped up deep blue coat, darker blue jeans, and black shoes, and was sitting on a long bench with a faded blue paint job that may have once been pretty.
He checked a small watch on his wrist and saw it was 1:12 pm. They were supposed to arrive at 1:00. Bored, the boy began to twirl his curly brown hair.
Suddenly, a figure bounded past to a stadium, followed by a walking girl. “Alright, where’s this Rian guy?”
“Patience, idiot."
“Hey! That’s rude!”
She grinned.
“I’m this Rian guy! What took you two so long?”
The girl looked at him. She wore a thin white jacket over an ice blue shirt and plain black jeans and sneakers. The boy was finally still enough for Rian to see him. He wore a thin black jacket over a deep maroon shirt, long black pants, and dark red boots.
“You’re younger than I thought, kid. Your bey probably can’t handle Drake! Go home.” The girl, who he realized was Misuki, began to walk away.
Misuku jumped and flipped over Misuki and landed in front of her. “Don’t leave yet! He might be a good Blader!”
“As if.” She began to step around him, but he reached out and blocked her.
“Wait, don’t leave yet!” Rian called to her. “Another Blader will come too and he’s older than me!”
A freezing cold wind seemed to pass through as Misuki turned around, her eyes glowing a bright shade of blood red. “You mean a 2 on 2?” An evil grin spread across her face.
“Alright! When’s this other person coming?” Misuku asked.
“He seems late like you too were.”
“We weren’t late, we were just, um, not here in time.” It came out more like a question.
Suddenly, somebody jumped down from a tree. “Hello! My name is Colin and I’m here to battle you!"
“Is this the other guy?”
“Probably.” Rian responded.
“Alright! Let’s begin this battle!”
They all stood around the stadium, Misuki and Misuku on a team against Colin and Rian. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Drake began to shoot around the stadium, while Draco quickly locked down the center. “Burning Fortress! Go!” Misuki roared, eyes a vibrant red that matched her glowing Beyblade. The bottom of the driver glowed as red cracks spread through the stadium like a spider’s web coming from Draco’s tip.
Colin’s Crusher Beyblade was spinning extremely fast and circling the stadium, clearly in its stamina mode. “Go! Ultimate Launch!” A tornado began to form around Crusher as it began to glide towards Draco. Crusher struck Draco, causing more and more cracks to spread throughout the stadium.
“Inferno Fortress!” The stadium suddenly exploded, sending every bey into the air. The stadium had become a dark red color with bright lava flowing over it. Rian grinned. His Beyblade, Revenge, which had quietly been circling the stadium ridge, was sent flying higher than all of theirs. “Go! Revenge Smash!” Revenge turned and smashed on top of Drake, bursting it. Revenge’s momentum caused it to crash into the stadium, where it quickly began to circle the stadium. When Draco landed, it perfectly took the center.
Crusher was falling very slowly because of it’s personal tornado.
“Crusher! Use Ultra Zeta Shift!” It’s Zeta driver quickly changed modes into Attack. It’s tornado disintegrated. It struck the stadium and bounced into the air. “Go! Ultimate Slash!” The beyblade landed so that the underside of the layer hit the side of Draco. “Revenge Strike!” Revenge shot towards Draco and quickly attacked its other side.
The three beys kept clashing. “Draco! Fortress Counter!” Draco’s fortress side glowed as it spun. Suddenly, Revenge and Crusher were both flung into the air. Misuku grinned. “Drake! Frozen Revive!” Crusher burst midair, while Revenge struck the stadium. The parts of Drake were flung into the air by the impact, and they landed directly on top of each other. The parts glowed as the beyblade began to wobble back upright before speeding up. “Drake! Dragonic Whip!” Drake struck Revenge, flinging it up into the air. Rian’s eyes glowed a bright shade of blood red as Revenge’s beast appeared around him.
It was a large Warrior with glowing red skin and dark maroon armor. Revenge wielded a long golden-edged red broadsword. Both Revenge and Rian slashed their arms down as though swinging a sword and they together roared, “Ultra Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed on top of Draco, using it’s angled driver like a hammer, before bouncing onto Drake, and then bouncing back. It continued the rapid attack, both Drake and Draco losing stamina from the attacks and shifting to their last clicks. Then Revenge dropped between the two, striking them both rapidly, eventually bursting Draco. It was just Drake against Revenge.
“Let’s go! Frostbite Blast!” Drake shot towards Revenge and struck it with it’s jagged edge, sending Revenge shooting into a wall, knocking Revenge onto it’s last click. Misuku grinned as Drake’s beast formed around him. Drake was a long blue dragon with white eyes, and long white wings. It reared back, claws ready for attack. “Now, Drake! Frozen Claw!” Drake shot towards Revenge for a final attack. “Go! Revenge Counter!” The two beyblades clashed for a long time, before both of them burst. Colin and Misuki both had opposing reactions. Colin seemed sad, while Misuki grinned. “Drake won! That means our team won!”
Misuku and Rian both looked at their teammates oddly. “No, Revenge won!” They both said in unison.
Misuki raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“His bey burst after mine just slightly!”
Misuki rolled her eyes and her and Misuku both began to walk away. “Well, that was a fun match!” Misuki’s eye glowed brightly. “Perfect.”
Pretty good. Just a little clarification.
Misuku uses Drake.
Misuki uses Draco.
The original design was a little confusing.
To fit the system better, here are the evolutions:
Frost drake: The two sides have strong contact points designed after glaciers. The leading edge in left spin is flat and the side of the wing is jaggy for barrage impacts. uses 7B.Dm
Burning Draco: The two sides have large defensive walls uses 00B.Dm
when combined:
Burning Drake: Uses the Drake core. The contact points lead to strong impacts. Uses 00B.Dm
Frost Draco: Uses the Draco core. The contact points deflect attacks. Uses 7B.Dm
Special moves:
Frost Drake: Glacial Impact. A barrage of small attacks that lead into a powerful impact.
Burning Draco: Blazing guard. A defensive guard that uses its driver to roll around attacks.
Burning Drake: Infernal Counter. Uses the rough contact surface of the wall to catch impacts before hitting with the glacial wall.
Frost Draco: Frozen Shield. Uses the wall to block before deflecting with the glacial wall.
Mind if I write a chapter?
Could you give me some detail on Trident and Nyke separate and fused? I have an idea.
Frost Drake and Burning Draco vs Hydro Trident and Victor Nyke
then Burning Drake and Frost Draco vs Victor Trident and Hydro Nyke
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 6:45 PM)MWF Wrote: (Dec. 30, 2018 10:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Special Chapter 1: A Bad Case of Freezer Burn!
“Tsk tsk. What’s taking them so long?” A young boy wondered out loud. He wore a zipped up deep blue coat, darker blue jeans, and black shoes, and was sitting on a long bench with a faded blue paint job that may have once been pretty.
He checked a small watch on his wrist and saw it was 1:12 pm. They were supposed to arrive at 1:00. Bored, the boy began to twirl his curly brown hair.
Suddenly, a figure bounded past to a stadium, followed by a walking girl. “Alright, where’s this Rian guy?”
“Patience, idiot."
“Hey! That’s rude!”
She grinned.
“I’m this Rian guy! What took you two so long?”
The girl looked at him. She wore a thin white jacket over an ice blue shirt and plain black jeans and sneakers. The boy was finally still enough for Rian to see him. He wore a thin black jacket over a deep maroon shirt, long black pants, and dark red boots.
“You’re younger than I thought, kid. Your bey probably can’t handle Drake! Go home.” The girl, who he realized was Misuki, began to walk away.
Misuku jumped and flipped over Misuki and landed in front of her. “Don’t leave yet! He might be a good Blader!”
“As if.” She began to step around him, but he reached out and blocked her.
“Wait, don’t leave yet!” Rian called to her. “Another Blader will come too and he’s older than me!”
A freezing cold wind seemed to pass through as Misuki turned around, her eyes glowing a bright shade of blood red. “You mean a 2 on 2?” An evil grin spread across her face.
“Alright! When’s this other person coming?” Misuku asked.
“He seems late like you too were.”
“We weren’t late, we were just, um, not here in time.” It came out more like a question.
Suddenly, somebody jumped down from a tree. “Hello! My name is Colin and I’m here to battle you!"
“Is this the other guy?”
“Probably.” Rian responded.
“Alright! Let’s begin this battle!”
They all stood around the stadium, Misuki and Misuku on a team against Colin and Rian. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Drake began to shoot around the stadium, while Draco quickly locked down the center. “Burning Fortress! Go!” Misuki roared, eyes a vibrant red that matched her glowing Beyblade. The bottom of the driver glowed as red cracks spread through the stadium like a spider’s web coming from Draco’s tip.
Colin’s Crusher Beyblade was spinning extremely fast and circling the stadium, clearly in its stamina mode. “Go! Ultimate Launch!” A tornado began to form around Crusher as it began to glide towards Draco. Crusher struck Draco, causing more and more cracks to spread throughout the stadium.
“Inferno Fortress!” The stadium suddenly exploded, sending every bey into the air. The stadium had become a dark red color with bright lava flowing over it. Rian grinned. His Beyblade, Revenge, which had quietly been circling the stadium ridge, was sent flying higher than all of theirs. “Go! Revenge Smash!” Revenge turned and smashed on top of Drake, bursting it. Revenge’s momentum caused it to crash into the stadium, where it quickly began to circle the stadium. When Draco landed, it perfectly took the center.
Crusher was falling very slowly because of it’s personal tornado.
“Crusher! Use Ultra Zeta Shift!” It’s Zeta driver quickly changed modes into Attack. It’s tornado disintegrated. It struck the stadium and bounced into the air. “Go! Ultimate Slash!” The beyblade landed so that the underside of the layer hit the side of Draco. “Revenge Strike!” Revenge shot towards Draco and quickly attacked its other side.
The three beys kept clashing. “Draco! Fortress Counter!” Draco’s fortress side glowed as it spun. Suddenly, Revenge and Crusher were both flung into the air. Misuku grinned. “Drake! Frozen Revive!” Crusher burst midair, while Revenge struck the stadium. The parts of Drake were flung into the air by the impact, and they landed directly on top of each other. The parts glowed as the beyblade began to wobble back upright before speeding up. “Drake! Dragonic Whip!” Drake struck Revenge, flinging it up into the air. Rian’s eyes glowed a bright shade of blood red as Revenge’s beast appeared around him.
It was a large Warrior with glowing red skin and dark maroon armor. Revenge wielded a long golden-edged red broadsword. Both Revenge and Rian slashed their arms down as though swinging a sword and they together roared, “Ultra Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed on top of Draco, using it’s angled driver like a hammer, before bouncing onto Drake, and then bouncing back. It continued the rapid attack, both Drake and Draco losing stamina from the attacks and shifting to their last clicks. Then Revenge dropped between the two, striking them both rapidly, eventually bursting Draco. It was just Drake against Revenge.
“Let’s go! Frostbite Blast!” Drake shot towards Revenge and struck it with it’s jagged edge, sending Revenge shooting into a wall, knocking Revenge onto it’s last click. Misuku grinned as Drake’s beast formed around him. Drake was a long blue dragon with white eyes, and long white wings. It reared back, claws ready for attack. “Now, Drake! Frozen Claw!” Drake shot towards Revenge for a final attack. “Go! Revenge Counter!” The two beyblades clashed for a long time, before both of them burst. Colin and Misuki both had opposing reactions. Colin seemed sad, while Misuki grinned. “Drake won! That means our team won!”
Misuku and Rian both looked at their teammates oddly. “No, Revenge won!” They both said in unison.
Misuki raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“His bey burst after mine just slightly!”
Misuki rolled her eyes and her and Misuku both began to walk away. “Well, that was a fun match!” Misuki’s eye glowed brightly. “Perfect.”
Pretty good. Just a little clarification.
Misuku uses Drake.
Misuki uses Draco.
The original design was a little confusing.
To fit the system better, here are the evolutions:
Frost drake: The two sides have strong contact points designed after glaciers. The leading edge in left spin is flat and the side of the wing is jaggy for barrage impacts. uses 7B.Dm
Burning Draco: The two sides have large defensive walls uses 00B.Dm
when combined:
Burning Drake: Uses the Drake core. The contact points lead to strong impacts. Uses 00B.Dm
Frost Draco: Uses the Draco core. The contact points deflect attacks. Uses 7B.Dm
Special moves:
Frost Drake: Glacial Impact. A barrage of small attacks that lead into a powerful impact.
Burning Draco: Blazing guard. A defensive guard that uses its driver to roll around attacks.
Burning Drake: Infernal Counter. Uses the rough contact surface of the wall to catch impacts before hitting with the glacial wall.
Frost Draco: Frozen Shield. Uses the wall to block before deflecting with the glacial wall.
Mind if I write a chapter?
Could you give me some detail on Trident and Nyke separate and fused? I have an idea.
Frost Drake and Burning Draco vs Hydro Trident and Victor Nyke
then Burning Drake and Frost Draco vs Victor Trident and Hydro Nyke
Hydro Trident features a three bladed design like Screw Trident, with wave-shaped blades between each one that is designed to be able to swing back and forth. Because of the design, each bey doesn’t split into perfect halves, so the larger part of Trident would have two of the blades and two of the waves, while the smaller half would have one blade and one wave.
Victor Nyke also features a three pointed design, but the three main blades are more aggressive and are each spring loaded. Instead of having a shifting outer ring like Genesis Valtryek, they each spring in and then back out.
When two beyblades fuse, they switch tips, so Victor Trident would have the attack type tip of Nyke, and Hydro Nyke would have the stamina tip of Victor Trident.
Victor Nyke’s Driver is a rubber tip slightly smaller than the fully worn tip on Variable. Hydro Trident’s Driver is essentially a Wide Defense tip from MFB but made out of POM, like a wider Yielding.
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - MWF - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 7:10 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 04, 2019 6:45 PM)MWF Wrote: Pretty good. Just a little clarification.
Misuku uses Drake.
Misuki uses Draco.
The original design was a little confusing.
To fit the system better, here are the evolutions:
Frost drake: The two sides have strong contact points designed after glaciers. The leading edge in left spin is flat and the side of the wing is jaggy for barrage impacts. uses 7B.Dm
Burning Draco: The two sides have large defensive walls uses 00B.Dm
when combined:
Burning Drake: Uses the Drake core. The contact points lead to strong impacts. Uses 00B.Dm
Frost Draco: Uses the Draco core. The contact points deflect attacks. Uses 7B.Dm
Special moves:
Frost Drake: Glacial Impact. A barrage of small attacks that lead into a powerful impact.
Burning Draco: Blazing guard. A defensive guard that uses its driver to roll around attacks.
Burning Drake: Infernal Counter. Uses the rough contact surface of the wall to catch impacts before hitting with the glacial wall.
Frost Draco: Frozen Shield. Uses the wall to block before deflecting with the glacial wall.
Mind if I write a chapter?
Could you give me some detail on Trident and Nyke separate and fused? I have an idea.
Frost Drake and Burning Draco vs Hydro Trident and Victor Nyke
then Burning Drake and Frost Draco vs Victor Trident and Hydro Nyke
Hydro Trident features a three bladed design like Screw Trident, with wave-shaped blades between each one that is designed to be able to swing back and forth. Because of the design, each bey doesn’t split into perfect halves, so the larger part of Trident would have two of the blades and two of the waves, while the smaller half would have one blade and one wave.
Victor Nyke also features a three pointed design, but the three main blades are more aggressive and are each spring loaded. Instead of having a shifting outer ring like Genesis Valtryek, they each spring in and then back out.
When two beyblades fuse, they switch tips, so Victor Trident would have the attack type tip of Nyke, and Hydro Nyke would have the stamina tip of Victor Trident.
Victor Nyke’s Driver is a rubber tip slightly smaller than the fully worn tip on Variable. Hydro Trident’s Driver is essentially a Wide Defense tip from MFB but made out of POM, like a wider Yielding.
Ok. So Hydro Nyke has two waves and one blade while victor Trident has two blades and one wave?
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 7:17 PM)MWF Wrote: (Jan. 04, 2019 7:10 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Hydro Trident features a three bladed design like Screw Trident, with wave-shaped blades between each one that is designed to be able to swing back and forth. Because of the design, each bey doesn’t split into perfect halves, so the larger part of Trident would have two of the blades and two of the waves, while the smaller half would have one blade and one wave.
Victor Nyke also features a three pointed design, but the three main blades are more aggressive and are each spring loaded. Instead of having a shifting outer ring like Genesis Valtryek, they each spring in and then back out.
When two beyblades fuse, they switch tips, so Victor Trident would have the attack type tip of Nyke, and Hydro Nyke would have the stamina tip of Victor Trident.
Victor Nyke’s Driver is a rubber tip slightly smaller than the fully worn tip on Variable. Hydro Trident’s Driver is essentially a Wide Defense tip from MFB but made out of POM, like a wider Yielding.
Ok. So Hydro Nyke has two waves and one blade while victor Trident has two blades and one wave?
If by blade you mean spring-loaded Wing, yes
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - MWF - Jan. 04, 2019
ok should I post it here? Also sense this takes place 2 years after ChouZ Misuku is 19 while Misuki is 20.
RE: Alternative story to beyblade burst god - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 8:14 PM)MWF Wrote: ok should I post it here? Also sense this takes place 2 years after ChouZ Misuku is 19 while Misuki is 20.
Put it in the Write Your Own Stories thread
Chapter 7: Going International with BC Sol!
Corey began to lead Toko to BC Sol’s Japanese headquarters. “Follow me.” He lead Toko through the front door.
Standing in the front room was a boy with spiky black hair, wearing a thin blue jacket over a black tee-shirt and black pants. “Ooh, a new Blader! You found more talent for us!” A cockatoo flew off his shoulder and grabbed his beyblade, before tossing it into the air.
“Carl, give it back! Whoa, that’s a nice bey!” The boy jumped into the air, grabbed Trident from Carl’s beak, and tossed it to Toko. “Thanks, but who are you?”
“My name’s Cuza, Cuza Ackermann! Who are you?”
“Toko Aoi, and that’s my bey, Trident!”
Cuza looked at him curiously. “Where do I know Aoi from? Oh, are you related to Valt?”
Toko grinned. “He’s my big bro! I just beat Corey in the Primal Cup and he invited me here!”
Cuza looked at Corey. “Did you tell him about the test?”
Corey smiled sheepishly. “Um, no.”
Toko looked at them both. “What test? Will there be math?”
Cuza and Corey both laughed. “No, everybody wanting to get in battles in a tournament-type deal.”
“Alright, I think I’m ready for this ‘test’.”
“Luckily for you, we have one every month, and it happens in about 10 minutes, so be prepared!”
Roughly 10 minutes later, he was escorted into a large room with 16 stadiums. “This is usually where we train, but it’s perfect for the test.” The room filled up with 31 other people, and then the test began. It started off easy, and Toko was paired against a young Blader who was using a Garuda G3 7Meteor Atomic.
Toko launched at an angle, and used the Hydro Launch to easily outspin their bey, meaning he moved on. At that point there were only 16 bladers left (including him).
He was paired against another Blader who used a Guardian Kerbeus 4Star Orbit combo. The Guardian Kerbeus bey took the center while Toko used Hydro Twist to repeatedly knock the Kerbeus off balance without taking any damage.
Kerbeus kept scraping, unable to right itself before it was attacked again, and it quickly ran out of spin, meaning Toko moved on again.
His next opponent used Drain Fafnir 0Bump Atomic. They used a weak launch to steal spin, but Toko used his Hydro Twist to prevent it from stealing spin, and the Fafnir combo easily was knocked to the side, meaning that Toko moved on again.
Now there were only 4 bladers left. He was battling against a Blader who used Legend Spriggan 7Star Xtreme. Toko used Hydro Launch to take the center quickly, while the opponent tried to rapidly attack Trident.
Toko quickly switched to the Hydro Twist, allowing it to prevent itself from taking damage from Spriggan‘s rapid attacks. Spriggan, unable to deal damage, ran out of stamina quickly, meaning Toko moved on to the final battle.
Corey walked over. “I know I’m supposed to be unbiased and fair, but you are almost there! I believe in you!”
Toko found himself standing in front of Drake Allen. “Well, it looks like we meet again!”
“Ugh, you. Let’s just begin this battle so I can join BC Sol like my brother. Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” “Trident, lock down the center with the Hydro Launch!” Trident took the center, while Deathscyther rocketed around the stadium. “Assassin Boost!” Deathscyther instantly changed direction and increased it’s speed exponentially. “Now, hit him with the Assassin Strike!”
Deathscyther struck Trident, flinging it into the air. “Haha, it looks like I won already!”
“It isn’t over yet! Hit Deathscyther with our Tsunami Shot!” Trident smashed down on top of Deathscyther, bursting it in one hit. Toko grabbed Trident and jumped up. “Yes! I’m joining BC Sol International!”
Drake glared at him, his eyes solid black. “I don’t want to join whatever terrible group accepts terrible bladers like him!” He stormed out of the building.
Corey grinned as he walked over. “Man, what a sore loser! He takes salty to a new level! Anyways, let’s go to the main room, where all the bladers hang out. Let me just grab something first,” he rushed over to a desk and grabbed a megaphone. “Alright, let’s go in there!”
Corey lead Toko into the room, before holding the megaphone to his mouth and then speaking into it. “Hello, bladers! Please welcome our newest Blader! His name is Toko Aoi and he uses a Stamina-type named Trident! There was no nepotism involved! Well, mostly none!”
There were a few quiet laughs at his joke. “It’s a good thing I’m not a comedian.” He whispered to Toko.
Toko stepped into the room and smiled. He was going to love being a member of BC Sol.
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