(Nov. 28, 2017  12:14 AM)MWF Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  12:12 AM)dt1000 Wrote: I want Snowy's team to do well too though.

Snowy's team will make it to the semi finals. Loses in an all out match against Dragunix's team.

(Nov. 28, 2017  1:02 AM)dt1000 Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  12:14 AM)MWF Wrote: Snowy's team will make it to the semi finals. Loses in an all out match against Dragunix's team.

Aw man ;(

(Nov. 28, 2017  1:14 AM)MWF Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  1:02 AM)dt1000 Wrote: Aw man ;(

I will make it neck and neck.

(Nov. 28, 2017  1:15 AM)dt1000 Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  1:14 AM)MWF Wrote: I will make it neck and neck.

What if we make an odd number of teams and have the finals a battle between three teams?

(Nov. 28, 2017  3:23 AM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  2:47 AM)AwesomeKid20094 Wrote: How about Hyper's
I feel like he should be between first or second. He will definitely rival Arashi or Rykos sooo

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Check it out MWF

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SYJJpnIGh9oDjMXkAXIPD-VRHKYjLrJc_uL0TkvV4EY/edit

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Chapter 5 (NOT FINAL THING)

“Ugh what a day” I sighed. I sat on the bench right outside of his school. I took out Horungium. It gleamed, as if saying Don’t worry, amazing things await your presence. Horungium was my go-to pal, even if he didn’t really speak. I got up and began walking, but I heard the ever-present chant of a battle. 


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” someone yelled from a distant location. I heard it coming from the bey park. I ran to check on the action. I saw two boys clashing, who were focusing all their energy into the battle. “Go, Dragoon!” The boy with the spiky white hair yelled. “Go, Susanoo!” The other boy called out. BAM! Both beys clashed for a while,before a double burst. Then they noticed me.


“Umm, hello,” The white haired one said. The other boy offered me his hand for a handshake.


“Hi, I'm Arashi Shimizu, what’s yours?” He offered his hand for me to shake it.


“Hi my name is Hyper, nice to meet you,” I replied, shaking his hand.


“Hi my name is Rykos Azuki, nice to meet you, Hyper,” the azure-eyed blader spoke.
“Well, I like how you guys battled. Would you mind me joining in?” I asked.


Rykos gave Arashi a kind of “should we” look. Arashi nodded.


“Sure Hyper, you can battle with us.” Arashi answered me. Hyper walked over to the stadium.


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” everyone yelled. As soon as Horungium launched, both bladers looked wide-eyed at it. Rykos was about to say something but Arashi interrupted him with his special move.


“Susanoo! Go for it! Gale Boost!” Rykos also used his technique.


“Dragoon! Nova Storm!” Rykos shouted. It was time for my turn.


“Horungium! Striking Driver!” Horungium tilted the slightest bit, then, the wheel on its driver spun really quickly and it made Horungium fly out of the stadium, straight into the air.


Meanwhile, Susanoo and Dragoon was clashing in the center, both doing their special moves. Horungium did his move. Arashi and Rykos looked at Horungium, wide-eyed again. Horungium dived in the center, entering the clash but hitting Dragoon’s and Susanoo’s layers! Every bey was near their last click, and the bladers pushed harder.


“Horungium! Don’t let me down!” I pushed.


“Susanoo! Don’t give up!” Arashi yelled.


“Break through it, Dragoon!” Rykos shouted. At that instant, all three beys went to their last click and bursted, pieces spreading everywhere. The bladers lied down on the concrete floor, exhausted from that epic battle.


“That...was…-” Rykos started. Arashi and I interrupted.


“EPIC!” They both said simultaneously.


“Wow Hyper, how did you make Horungium do that? That was amazing!” Arashi exclaimed, admiring Horungium’s special move.


“Well, you really just need the right calculations x=b squared…” I explained while making Arashi bored.


Rykos seemed to understand it, he seemed to think that battle as a joke, even though he liked it. I saw the look in his eyes, seeing potential in him waiting to be harnessed. “See you later Rykos and Arashi!” I replied, while saying good bye. I started walking home.


When I got home, i was very startled seeing my mom right on the front door, looking very angry.  


“HYPER!” My mom yelled while rushing to hug me. I tried to resist but she didn’t let me. “Oh my goodness! Don't you know what time it is?” She started flooding me with questions and I could not get out of it.



made some format edits. 

and if he and his team will rival rykos, then you'll need to provide a legit reason for that...because it seems that Double Threat and Heavenly Trigram will be the ones in the finals so far

(Nov. 28, 2017  3:23 AM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  2:47 AM)AwesomeKid20094 Wrote: How about Hyper's
I feel like he should be between first or second. He will definitely rival Arashi or Rykos sooo

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Check it out MWF

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SYJJpnIGh9oDjMXkAXIPD-VRHKYjLrJc_uL0TkvV4EY/edit

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Chapter 5 (NOT FINAL THING)

“Ugh what a day” I sighed. I sat on the bench right outside of his school. I took out Horungium. It gleamed, as if saying Don’t worry, amazing things await your presence. Horungium was my go-to pal, even if he didn’t really speak. I got up and began walking, but I heard the ever-present chant of a battle. 


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” someone yelled from a distant location. I heard it coming from the bey park. I ran to check on the action. I saw two boys clashing, who were focusing all their energy into the battle. “Go, Dragoon!” The boy with the spiky white hair yelled. “Go, Susanoo!” The other boy called out. BAM! Both beys clashed for a while,before a double burst. Then they noticed me.


“Umm, hello,” The white haired one said. The other boy offered me his hand for a handshake.


“Hi, I'm Arashi Shimizu, what’s yours?” He offered his hand for me to shake it.


“Hi my name is Hyper, nice to meet you,” I replied, shaking his hand.


“Hi my name is Rykos Azuki, nice to meet you, Hyper,” the azure-eyed blader spoke.
“Well, I like how you guys battled. Would you mind me joining in?” I asked.


Rykos gave Arashi a kind of “should we” look. Arashi nodded.


“Sure Hyper, you can battle with us.” Arashi answered me. Hyper walked over to the stadium.


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” everyone yelled. As soon as Horungium launched, both bladers looked wide-eyed at it. Rykos was about to say something but Arashi interrupted him with his special move.


“Susanoo! Go for it! Gale Boost!” Rykos also used his technique.


“Dragoon! Nova Storm!” Rykos shouted. It was time for my turn.


“Horungium! Striking Driver!” Horungium tilted the slightest bit, then, the wheel on its driver spun really quickly and it made Horungium fly out of the stadium, straight into the air.


Meanwhile, Susanoo and Dragoon was clashing in the center, both doing their special moves. Horungium did his move. Arashi and Rykos looked at Horungium, wide-eyed again. Horungium dived in the center, entering the clash but hitting Dragoon’s and Susanoo’s layers! Every bey was near their last click, and the bladers pushed harder.


“Horungium! Don’t let me down!” I pushed.


“Susanoo! Don’t give up!” Arashi yelled.


“Break through it, Dragoon!” Rykos shouted. At that instant, all three beys went to their last click and bursted, pieces spreading everywhere. The bladers lied down on the concrete floor, exhausted from that epic battle.


“That...was…-” Rykos started. Arashi and I interrupted.


“EPIC!” They both said simultaneously.


“Wow Hyper, how did you make Horungium do that? That was amazing!” Arashi exclaimed, admiring Horungium’s special move.


“Well, you really just need the right calculations x=b squared…” I explained while making Arashi bored.


Rykos seemed to understand it, he seemed to think that battle as a joke, even though he liked it. I saw the look in his eyes, seeing potential in him waiting to be harnessed. “See you later Rykos and Arashi!” I replied, while saying good bye. I started walking home.


When I got home, i was very startled seeing my mom right on the front door, looking very angry.  


“HYPER!” My mom yelled while rushing to hug me. I tried to resist but she didn’t let me. “Oh my goodness! Don't you know what time it is?” She started flooding me with questions and I could not get out of it.



made some format edits. 

and if he and his team will rival rykos, then you'll need to provide a legit reason for that...because it seems that Double Threat and Heavenly Trigram will be the ones in the finals so far

(Nov. 28, 2017  12:33 PM)MWF Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  3:23 AM)Dragunix Wrote: “Ugh what a day” I sighed. I sat on the bench right outside of his school. I took out Horungium. It gleamed, as if saying Don’t worry, amazing things await your presence. Horungium was my go-to pal, even if he didn’t really speak. I got up and began walking, but I heard the ever-present chant of a battle. 


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” someone yelled from a distant location. I heard it coming from the bey park. I ran to check on the action. I saw two boys clashing, who were focusing all their energy into the battle. “Go, Dragoon!” The boy with the spiky white hair yelled. “Go, Susanoo!” The other boy called out. BAM! Both beys clashed for a while,before a double burst. Then they noticed me.


“Umm, hello,” The white haired one said. The other boy offered me his hand for a handshake.


“Hi, I'm Arashi Shimizu, what’s yours?” He offered his hand for me to shake it.


“Hi my name is Hyper, nice to meet you,” I replied, shaking his hand.


“Hi my name is Rykos Azuki, nice to meet you, Hyper,” the azure-eyed blader spoke.
“Well, I like how you guys battled. Would you mind me joining in?” I asked.


Rykos gave Arashi a kind of “should we” look. Arashi nodded.


“Sure Hyper, you can battle with us.” Arashi answered me. Hyper walked over to the stadium.


“3...2...1...GO SHOOT!” everyone yelled. As soon as Horungium launched, both bladers looked wide-eyed at it. Rykos was about to say something but Arashi interrupted him with his special move.


“Susanoo! Go for it! Gale Boost!” Rykos also used his technique.


“Dragoon! Nova Storm!” Rykos shouted. It was time for my turn.


“Horungium! Striking Driver!” Horungium tilted the slightest bit, then, the wheel on its driver spun really quickly and it made Horungium fly out of the stadium, straight into the air.


Meanwhile, Susanoo and Dragoon was clashing in the center, both doing their special moves. Horungium did his move. Arashi and Rykos looked at Horungium, wide-eyed again. Horungium dived in the center, entering the clash but hitting Dragoon’s and Susanoo’s layers! Every bey was near their last click, and the bladers pushed harder.


“Horungium! Don’t let me down!” I pushed.


“Susanoo! Don’t give up!” Arashi yelled.


“Break through it, Dragoon!” Rykos shouted. At that instant, all three beys went to their last click and bursted, pieces spreading everywhere. The bladers lied down on the concrete floor, exhausted from that epic battle.


“That...was…-” Rykos started. Arashi and I interrupted.


“EPIC!” They both said simultaneously.


“Wow Hyper, how did you make Horungium do that? That was amazing!” Arashi exclaimed, admiring Horungium’s special move.


“Well, you really just need the right calculations x=b squared…” I explained while making Arashi bored.


Rykos seemed to understand it, he seemed to think that battle as a joke, even though he liked it. I saw the look in his eyes, seeing potential in him waiting to be harnessed. “See you later Rykos and Arashi!” I replied, while saying good bye. I started walking home.


When I got home, i was very startled seeing my mom right on the front door, looking very angry.  


“HYPER!” My mom yelled while rushing to hug me. I tried to resist but she didn’t let me. “Oh my goodness! Don't you know what time it is?” She started flooding me with questions and I could not get out of it.



made some format edits. 

and if he and his team will rival rykos, then you'll need to provide a legit reason for that...because it seems that Double Threat and Heavenly Trigram will be the ones in the finals so far

hyper's team will make it to the semi finals and lose to Double Threat and lose to Snowy's team in the third place match.

(Nov. 28, 2017  3:31 AM)Dragunix Wrote: first off, the wheel wouldn't allow it to go aggressive due to physics---its like running on an oily surface---you'd just stay in place. A concept like Unite would work more effectively.

and if you mean the team name, maybe??? I really don't like the name too much IMO, but if you want that name, keep it. If not, ask for some help on it...

(Nov. 30, 2017  1:41 AM)AwesomeKid20094 Wrote:

(Nov. 28, 2017  12:33 PM)MWF Wrote: hyper's team will make it to the semi finals and lose to Double Threat and lose to Snowy's team in the third place match.

So 4th place ._.

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(Nov. 28, 2017  3:31 AM)Dragunix Wrote: first off, the wheel wouldn't allow it to go aggressive due to physics---its like running on an oily surface---you'd just stay in place. A concept like Unite would work more effectively.

and if you mean the team name, maybe??? I really don't like the name too much IMO, but if you want that name, keep it. If not, ask for some help on it...

the wheel is metal tho. Also, basically all beyblade moves defy the laws of physics. Also, I got another move. So, Hyper basically has to tilt launch it really steep. When he launches it, the wheel will start spinning. When it touches the stadium, it will hit the layer, making it click once, then it will flip everytime a bey attacks and land on top of it, first flies up, then lands on the bey.

(Nov. 30, 2017  6:00 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Sounds like my first version of Infinite for Rebirth/Phoenix Tiamat lol

(Nov. 30, 2017  1:46 PM)dt1000 Wrote:

(Nov. 30, 2017  6:00 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Sounds like my first version of Infinite for Rebirth/Phoenix Tiamat lol

You mean the metal unite with POM instead of rubber.

(Nov. 30, 2017  2:13 PM)Dragunix Wrote: No, the current idea is a metal flat with  a bearing around it that wobbles like hold,  @[MWF]

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It's  on Kage's bio.

(Nov. 30, 2017  7:36 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Kinda...but Tiamat was an attack type so it didn't fit

(Dec. 12, 2017  11:03 PM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Dec. 04, 2017  3:49 PM)MWF Wrote: This thread will never die

Vis vs Jin

The two bladers walk up to the stadium. Jin walks up with a weird stride and almost keep tipping over. The two bladers get ready and launch. Vis does a test launch and Sonar rolls into the center. Jorgmungand tries to take the center from Sonar but gets bounced back. The cycle driver gets it back upright and it tries again. To no prevail. Jorgmungand stops spinning. "Sonar wins by survivor finish," Said the referee, "the score is one to zero."

Jin noticed how Vis has his eyes closed and yells, "Take this seriously. Open your eyes." Vis complies and with a piercing glare and a unnerving grin he says, "Your right, I didn't take that last battle seriously. But I got what I need now," Vis sets up an Echo Boost, "Your spirits won't save you now." The two Launch and Jorgmungand is launched and hits the light that Jin set up to mess with his opponents, causing it to flash and get everyone's attention. The beyblade bursts on impact leaving the layer in the light. The light gains a blue tint as the heat of the lamp starts to melt the outer edge of the layer. Jin is scared and asks, "h-h-how d-did you not g-get affected? This was my win." Vis responds with, "Next time do some research on your opponent," He turns around and says as he is walking away, "That is if there is a next time."

I don't remember Jin being the one who set the light up. I thought it was Naoki or whoever the geek dude was...

(Dec. 12, 2017  11:03 PM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Dec. 04, 2017  3:49 PM)MWF Wrote: This thread will never die

Vis vs Jin

The two bladers walk up to the stadium. Jin walks up with a weird stride and almost keep tipping over. The two bladers get ready and launch. Vis does a test launch and Sonar rolls into the center. Jorgmungand tries to take the center from Sonar but gets bounced back. The cycle driver gets it back upright and it tries again. To no prevail. Jorgmungand stops spinning. "Sonar wins by survivor finish," Said the referee, "the score is one to zero."

Jin noticed how Vis has his eyes closed and yells, "Take this seriously. Open your eyes." Vis complies and with a piercing glare and a unnerving grin he says, "Your right, I didn't take that last battle seriously. But I got what I need now," Vis sets up an Echo Boost, "Your spirits won't save you now." The two Launch and Jorgmungand is launched and hits the light that Jin set up to mess with his opponents, causing it to flash and get everyone's attention. The beyblade bursts on impact leaving the layer in the light. The light gains a blue tint as the heat of the lamp starts to melt the outer edge of the layer. Jin is scared and asks, "h-h-how d-did you not g-get affected? This was my win." Vis responds with, "Next time do some research on your opponent," He turns around and says as he is walking away, "That is if there is a next time."

I don't remember Jin being the one who set the light up. I thought it was Naoki or whoever the geek dude was...