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BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Classik - Mar. 19, 2014

Prologue
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1-Welcome to Cerocaline Magic Academy
Spoiler (Click to View)


RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - The Ninja - Mar. 19, 2014

Looks good. Is this the prologue? You may want to paste it into MS Word to check grammar/ spelling errors. Keep it up!

RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - Airus - Mar. 19, 2014

Yes, Xaos is right. Try using MS word to fix any errors. You need some capitalizing for names and dates, spacing between periods and new sentences, and you MAY want to fix your spoiler, haha!
Other than that, this seems interesting!

RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - Dual - Mar. 19, 2014

If this isn't a prologue, it should be much larger. Also you may want to fix the spacing, spelling, and grammar, as well as the spoiler.

RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - Classik - Mar. 20, 2014

Thanx i might need to close it down Unhappy

RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - Airus - Mar. 21, 2014

(Mar. 20, 2014  4:13 AM)ImperialBrave Wrote: Thanx i might need to close it down Unhappy

And why would that be Imperial?

RE: Undivided [A Beyblade Story] - Elite Projects - Mar. 29, 2014

CLOSE IT DOWN?This is a great story and you should write more.

RE: BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Classik - May. 27, 2014

New chapter updated!

RE: BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Elite Projects - May. 27, 2014

(Mar. 29, 2014  4:55 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote: CLOSE IT DOWN?This is a great story and you should write more.
^What the...I didn't write that!I would never write anythig that corny!THAT DOESN'T EVEN SOUND LIKE ME!!!!

RE: BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Pokemo - May. 27, 2014

(May. 27, 2014  8:54 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote:
(Mar. 29, 2014  4:55 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote: CLOSE IT DOWN?This is a great story and you should write more.
^What the...I didn't write that!I would never write anythig that corny!THAT DOESN'T EVEN SOUND LIKE ME!!!!
then how is it posted as you?!

RE: BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Elite Projects - May. 27, 2014

(May. 27, 2014  9:43 PM)Pokemo Wrote:
(May. 27, 2014  8:54 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote:
(Mar. 29, 2014  4:55 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote: CLOSE IT DOWN?This is a great story and you should write more.
^What the...I didn't write that!I would never write anythig that corny!THAT DOESN'T EVEN SOUND LIKE ME!!!!
then how is it posted as you?!

I have no freakin idea!I would write this:
I like this story,keep going!

RE: BladeSoul [A Fantasy Story] - Pokemo - May. 27, 2014

(May. 27, 2014  10:17 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote:
(May. 27, 2014  9:43 PM)Pokemo Wrote:
(May. 27, 2014  8:54 PM)King E.Emperor Wrote: ^What the...I didn't write that!I would never write anythig that corny!THAT DOESN'T EVEN SOUND LIKE ME!!!!
then how is it posted as you?!

I have no freakin idea!I would write this:
I like this story,keep going!
I agree, and DusKIfraid. you should make a poll Smile