The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 4.5 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Dec. 10, 2013
This is the sequel to my older story by the name of " The Last King. " I will still be accepting character requests. If you haven't read the first one it may be hard to understand some parts of the story. Dont be afraid to give suggestions for plots (IN PM),
If you liked, please comment! Being told what you liked, what you hated, what I'm doing good is always a huge inspiration to me! Thanks 
Introduction Warning, very short.) The horn of the boat crescendos into the bright blue day sky. Christian and Shoren stop their beyblades in the middle of their battle to look out into the misty air, seeing how the night seems to be giving messages to them; telling them that the ship has stopped. Team Flare Universe has finally arrived at America... but something tells them that they may want to keep an eye open. For not all good things are as good as they may seem...
chapter 1: The United States of Death
Emma, Ace, Shoren and I stand flat footed at the ocean dock. We say not one word, for the sound of eagles chirping and whales moaning is too amazing of a sound to interrupt. Emma puts her arm over her shoulder, embracing the awesomeness of victory that surrounds us all. " We did it Christian... " she realized.
I look towards Emma and smile," Yeah... I guess we did make it to America didn't we! " We started to walk off of the dock in a group, laughing and conversing along the way. I pulled out my Iphone 5 and checked Google Earth for the nearest hotel, and instantly feasted my eyes on a map full of 5 star hotels on every single street. " Wow! That is a whole lot of hotels Christian! How are we going to see them all?!" Emma exclaimed directly inside my small cat like ears.
Shortly after Emma said that, our team began walking towards the end of the dock, only to find our self standing face to face to an awfully intimidating man whose mighty flare was so horrifying you could feel the essence of his anger an entire mile away. " Where do you kids think your going?!" He scolded. Ace walked up to the man in a cocky fashion, yet keeping a nice clean smile so he doesn't upset the man. " Excuse us, but incase you are mistaken we are team Flame Universe, the bladers representing America. See I'm Ace and this is-" The interrupted with a rude push, you just knew this wasn't going to end well.
(WARNING, THE NARRORATOR OF THE STORY CHANGES HERE!!!) Five years before, I was a 12 year old dare devil in the City of Clan, a city that still tries to promote mid-evil times; thus the leaders of our cities are elders. When you live in Clan, you never expect or are expected to be a blader, you usually don't even try to be. Though Clan is a very small city it has a decent amount of population- some will hate you for it of course; though some will admire you like a hero. I never had a name until that fateful day I met my partner beyblade, Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault. L-Drago was like the brother I never had, I loved everything about it. Battling, playing, looking, none of it would be the same with another bey... One day though- something changed.
My friends started to run in absolute fear as I approached their reach, my enemies had reached a level of hatred so high by the look at me that they started attacking as I near, I simply watched in confusion as they fell back in pain- though I never touched them. The elders of the city claimed that I had " An essence of danger which struck fear in the hearts of citizens " and that I and any one who was was to be related to me had been banned from ever coming back to the City of Clan for the rest of my life.
I never had a home, my family was all the way in the state of Missouri- nowhere out of my reach. I have no map or phone- so day by day I walk down a straight path- hoping it will have me end up back in my home state. When you don't do anything but walk down a straight path you will eventually notice how easy it is to know how many days it has been, and because I counted every time that the sun went down I estimate it has been about five years sense I have left Clan- and somewhere in between that time there was a moment where I named myself Draco- because of the special move my L-Drago has. Five years starts to feel like your entire life after a couple days into it, It doesn't matter though because I know I still just got to keep on trucking.
I always knew my love for my beyblade was great, but I never even guessed it had gone to such extreme limits until I met my friend Joseph. I remember the day Joseph showed up into my life like it was yesterday, Dark brown skin, brown eyes, semi-long pitch black hair that slightly covers his left eye, puffy white shirt he tucked under his slick grey vest, even a pair of metallic black boots... If you were to see him right now- you'd think he was the silliest man on Earth due to his dress apparel, but the look in his eye has a essence of adventure and action- as if he was waiting every second to strike.
chapter 2: MindWipe
(WARNING:Narrorator goes back to normal but story is third person.)
"Excuse us, but incase you are mistaken we are team Flame Universe, the bladers representing America. See I'm Ace and this is-" The man interrupted with a rude push, the man then held up a golden badge exclaiming " I don't give a wild goose leg who you are! I'm a police officer and my orders are to keep all citizens out of here until this oil spill is fixed up! " As Christian helped the fallen Ace back up to his feet he took a moment to observe and realise something that was vitally important. Something that could save the life's of millions. He has seen it before- and it had always been there, but Christian hadn't put much thought into it until but Ace was unlawfully pushed. He had realized something absolutely horrible. He now understood that there was a boy out in the city who needed help, a boy who seemed my height and age was standing on the top of a bell tower; watching us like an eagle. The boys facial expression was that of a baby after it got its hide tanned- pure sorrow; it knew with the city being blocked off and no one was there to save him, he was in trouble.we were arguing with had a small beyblade attached to his waist: and to someone like Christian a thing like this was garrulously the start of an ordeal. His teammates turned to see the grin on his face and instantly could see that by his naughty smile that he is surely going to enjoy this. " Watch this..." He faintly whispered to Shoren.
"Hey, police man. Let's make a deal. " Christian started to constantly negotiate with the impaitent police man, who surprisingly listened to the boy. " Judged by that mighty beautiful Fury Capricorn you got on your utillity belt, your a blader right? " The man rolled his eyes in frustraition, " What do you want, kid?! " Christian started to reminince all of the sucsessful trade battles in his time, walking slowly around the police officer as if he was going to corner him. "If I beat you in a beyblade battle... you give us 30 minutes to go down there and do what we want. If I lose... you get to have my Leon!" Christian was so ready to battle this guy, before the man could even blink he had his Leon on his launcher, ready to decimate every living part of this police mans bey. The man thought for a while as the crowd started to talk within them self and ask questions like " Is that boy crazy? " And " Is he seriously going to risk the condition of his bey right before the World Tournament even starts? " The police man had a confused smirk on his face which obviously let you know he was enjoying what he saw.
By the time the man could get the word "Well..." out of his mouth, Christian had lost his ability to wait much longer. He launched his bey blade at the mans Capricorn, commanding it to do Hurricando Sliate. The police officer fell to his butt, paralyzed in pain, you knew he was almost about to cry. Christian looked back at his team mates and screamed " Go, go, go! " The four of them darted straight toward the large bell tower, civilians behind us taking videos and pictures of the event.
At the door of the bell tower, a strange conversation could be heard; seemingly coming from upstairs. The words said couldn't be made out, but it sounded like some sort of argument. " Quiet! " Christian whispered crackly, as they then carefully tip toed into the door and checked the surroundings. It didn't take long for them to realise that the voices were coming from upstairs, where the person who was stuck up there was obviously standing at. Inside of the tower was endless stairs, the walls filled with clocks ticking on every corner.
They traveled endlessly up the stairs as if they were a gateway to another universe. Ace and Emma fell down panting, as they were 50 feet in the air and out of breath. Shoren and Christian however keep climbing the stairs at maximum speed. It had took the boy a very long time, but he had finally seen the light at the end of the tunnel; the opening to the bell tower's bell stood before them. As they could finally see what was going up there as well as hear it better, they ducked down and became silent as a mouse. As Ace and Emma finally caught up, we shushed them loudly.
There was a man dressed in all blue with pale skin and flaky white hair. If he hadn't had such flaky hair and pale skin, I would've thought he was Ryuga. He was yelling at some kid dressed like a pirate up there, I would've thought that the pirate guy had killed his grandma if I didn't know what he was saying. " You don't understand, Joseph! You never got me! Your just a traitor just like the Gan Gan Galaxy aren't you! " Joseph looked pissed at the Flaky haired boy. " Come on dude! Don't act like this is true! You were built for greatness, the world needs you! What you have done is something that should never be done! " "Dude? Dude?! How dare you call me out of my name Joseph! All of you people are the same, you care nothing of me! You have always treated me like carp! Well I'm not that stupid kid on the street anymore, Joseph Thomas. I am not that nameless kid! I will make a name for myself! " The nameless kid's eyes started to glow, and a mysterious wind broke loose in the tower. " You are mistaken, Draco! You have always had a name, I will always respect you for who you are! This isn't how it has to end!" Draco's flaky hair fell down on his eyes, covering his tears like a shade." I... I never had a name until that fateful day I met my partner beyblade, Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault. L-Drago was like the brother I never had, I loved everything about it. No man ever respected me but it! There is no more Battling, saying, looking, none of it would be the same with beyblade anymore.. One day though- something will change. You'll all get what you deserve"
The wind intensified, and Draco spread his arms out wide like a bird. The wind carried him off of the 50 story tower, causing him to blast backward 30 feet at the speed of light. Christian ran up onto the top of the bell tower, falling onto his knees as Draco flew away. " No! " he screamed. It was then that something mysterious happened, Draco's skin turned blue and scaley like fish, his stomach gre 30 feet tall, his head was that of a lions.... it was unbelievable. I knew bit beasts existed... but this was insane. Draco had transformed... into the bit beast of his bey, Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault. The sunny daytime sky turned black, lightning bolts struck like base drums. Draco, now an eastern dragon, continues to fly in circles, eventually stopping and looking at us. It's sinister face striking fear into the hearts of all, many of us not even knowing what to do. The dragon's dark corrupted voice chuckled as it leaned in closer to the Bell Tower, opening its wide mouth.
Chapter 3: Suck them tears up
The sunny daytime sky turned black, lightning bolts struck like base drums. Draco, now an eastern dragon, continues to fly in circles, eventually stopping and looking at us. It's sinister face striking fear into the hearts of all, many of us not even knowing what to do. The dragon's dark corrupted voice chuckled as it leaned in closer to the Bell Tower, opening its wide mouth. Emma grabbed onto Christians arm and cried. " It's all over......"
The massive jaw of L-Drago, or as it now is Draco seemed to be open just wide enough for Draco to eat us all in one bite. Every last of the five bladers (including Joseph) were able to do nothing but watch in fear and awe. Christian stopped thinking... he has been here enough times to not know that he had just entered the flashback zone. In the flashback zone, it's as if time doesn't even fade much more than 5 seconds. Christian can remember hours, but the real time is always just a flash.
In the memory, a masked man revealed his face, and before we could notice who it was he launched his beyblade into the stadium. " Huh?!? Is that?! " The man threw a facebolt at Jade Jupiter which luckily landed straight on Austins bey and screwed back in before Leone could break Jupiter into 5 peices. " It's Ryuga everyone! Can you beleive it, the legendary blader Ryuga has come for backup and seems to be the surprise he has called for the match! Oh no, Christian is in trouble. He's got to come up with some sort of plan, because the great defence type combo Death Jupiter and the attack type Gaurdian L-Drago may just be enough to put him out for good! "
Christian's flashback started to strengthen into ultimate reality. It was if he time traveled and had lived the exact moment. A giant ball of light soaked the entire city as if it was a sun growing out of the earth for a quick second. As the light went away, the entire stadium was destroyed to the point that it was nothing but dirt, the two beys were still spinning for a second... but then suddenly, they both stopped spinning. The entire crowd, announcers, and bladers stood in shock. Before anyone could say a word, both beyblades made a huge " Pop! " sound, and they were equally torn to shreds. The only parts that remained were the energy rings. " Leone! " He screamed and ran up to it.
The flash back ended. Christian had gotten into the flashback so badly that he had actually moved in real life as if he was in the flash back. He was holding Leone, his eyes squinted, green energy flying everywhere from his Bey-Spirit. " Leone!!! " he screamed, just like in the flashback. He opened to eyes to see that the dragon was burning us in fire... he had realised that; he just accidentally saved Team Universes's life. Leon's perfect defense power was just enough to block Draco's wrath, causing Draco's flames to not burn him or the things behind it. He looked back at Emma, Shonnen, Joseph and Ace and hollered " Well, RUN! "
As they were too scared to the four didn't even dare move. The flames stopped, causing us to all check and see if the dragon is still there, but there was no sign if it nearby. "It's interesting how your always five steps behind me, Christian. " Christian quickly turned to see who it was that said that... he never would've guessed it. It was something you'd see in only the worst nightmares... sitting on top of the bell was Austin Pritt. The foe from Bey blade Camp. Austin smirked at how much his being upset Christian, trying to make Christian attack. " Wha-... what are you doing here Austin?! "
" Nothing much, friend. Just wanted to go see you get beat by the SECOND bit blader... but, seems you haven't heard about it huh? " Austin was very serious, but his expression made it seem like he was joking." Everyone but Joseph looked as confused as could be after Austin said that. " Oh... you don't know what that is do you? I'd expect a loser like you to not know. It's only the new generation of blading.... yes, thats right. A new generation; because blading isn't a game anymore. Professor Slime is the owner of Clate, an anti-blader organization that plans to take over the world. After years of realizing that Beyblaades were of course the only weapon that can take over this world, he let out a sonic wave that fixed every single beyblade in the world to allow it's trainers to reach maximum potential. Though, idiots like you will never find out how to, I guess I'll just make my Jupiter kill you now... "
Austin threw his Jupiter into the air, then putting all of his beyspirit in his heart; he had transformed into the Roman god Jupiter, god of lightning and the skies. He was the same size as I was, but I knew his power was unlimited. Emma thought the dragon was their end... but Austin is just powerful enough for this Bit Battling stage to kill them.
Chapter 4, part 1: There Is One Among Us
The god Jupiter stood before them, his long grey beard and ghostly white robe seemingly staring out the bane of our souls roots more than his godly light blue glowing yet eyes. The dark purple energy that silently flow around Austin's Bit Battle form was darker than every one of their worst nightmares combined- even small puppies with rabies (Don't ask.)
Austin stared every last one of them in the eyes, trying to scan how much intimidation they can take untill we break down in fear. Emma already had fallen onto her knees into a pool of her own fear. judging by the bizarre look on his eyes, the team had no choice but to try to shake their heads in disapproval at Christians decision.
" Run. Now!... I trust you, Shonen." Christian than busted himself into max speed, charging straight through the lone door as if he was a prized stallion. With a flick of a wrist, you could hear Christians scream erupting out of the atmosphere, as Austins hand flung him across the Earth like a cannonball. A small pool of footstep like blood was the last of his remains....
10 days pass...
if you want to make a character request it must be done as shown in the following spoiler ----v-----v
Name:
Bey name:
Character name:
Character Gender:
Personality:
Bio:
Alignment(Such as good evil neutral):
Extra Info:
Appearance(Do this your best, it WILL be used in story if your character is accepted):
Special moves and description:
Bey description:
Bey Parts(Specific part types if wanted):
Extra info (such as spin steal or mode switch):
check out the original too! http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-Last-King-A-beyblade-story-Accepting-character-requests
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 10, 2013
An Sequel I can't. Wait so good so far.
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Ryukiba - Dec. 10, 2013
Yes! A sequel!! can't wait for the rest of chapter 1 and so on!!
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Dec. 10, 2013
(Dec. 10, 2013 12:24 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote: [quote='XKai_DranzerX' pid='1179271' dateline='1386653910']
This is the sequel to my older story by the name of " The Last King. " I will still be accepting character requests. If you haven't read the first one it may be hard to understand some parts of the story. All character requests shall be done like this Name: Joseph Thomas
Bey name:
Character name:
Character Gender:
Personality:
Bio:
Alignment(Such as good evil neutral):
Extra Info:
Appearance(Do this your best, it WILL be used in story if your character is accepted):
Special moves and description:
Bey description:
Bey Parts(Specific part types if wanted):
Extra info (such as spin steal or mode switch):
Intro (Warning, very short.)
The horn of the boat crescendos into the bright blue day sky. Christian and Shoren stop their beyblades in the middle of their battle to look out into the misty air, seeing how the night seems to be giving messages to them; telling them that the ship has stopped. Team Flare Universe has finally arrived at America... but something tells them that they may want to keep an eye open.
chapter 1: The United States of Death (unfinished)
Emma, Ace, Shoren and I stand flat footed at the ocean dock. We say not one word, for the sound of eagles chirping and whales moaning is too amazing of a sound to interrupt. Emma puts her arm over her shoulder, embracing the awesomeness of victory that surrounds us all. " We did it Christian... " she realized.
I look towards Emma and smile," Yeah... I guess we did make it to America didn't we! " We started to walk off of the dock in a group, laughing and conversing along the way. I pulled out my Iphone 5 and checked Google Earth for the nearest hotel, and instantly feasted my eyes on a map full of 5 star hotels on every single street. " Wow! That is a whole lot of hotels Christian! How are we going to see them all?!" Emma exclaimed directly inside my small cat like ears, though we simply just ignored her.
Shortly after Emma said that, our team began walking towards the end of the dock, only to find ourself standing face to face to an awfully intimidating man whose mighty flare was so horrifying you could feel the essence of his anger an entire mile away.
(Dec. 10, 2013 5:06 PM)ryukiba Wrote: Yes! A sequel!! can't wait for the rest of chapter 1 and so on!!
Thank you so much for supporting me! It will be a definite goal for me to post at least once a day, and I will try to finish the first chapter by today as well!
This is the sequel to my older story by the name of " The Last King. " I will still be accepting character requests. If you haven't read the first one it may be hard to understand some parts of the story.
Intro (Warning, very short.)
The horn of the boat crescendos into the bright blue day sky. Christian and Shoren stop their beyblades in the middle of their battle to look out into the misty air, seeing how the night seems to be giving messages to them; telling them that the ship has stopped. Team Flare Universe has finally arrived at America... but something tells them that they may want to keep an eye open.
chapter 1: The United States of Death (unfinished)
[spoiler] Emma, Ace, Shoren and I stand flat footed at the ocean dock. We say not one word, for the sound of eagles chirping and whales moaning is too amazing of a sound to interrupt. Emma puts her arm over her shoulder, embracing the awesomeness of victory that surrounds us all. " We did it Christian... " she realized.
I look towards Emma and smile," Yeah... I guess we did make it to America didn't we! " We started to walk off of the dock in a group, laughing and conversing along the way. I pulled out my Iphone 5 and checked Google Earth for the nearest hotel, and instantly feasted my eyes on a map full of 5 star hotels on every single street. " Wow! That is a whole lot of hotels Christian! How are we going to see them all?!" Emma exclaimed directly inside my small cat like ears, though we simply just ignored her.
Shortly after Emma said that, our team began walking towards the end of the dock, only to find ourself standing face to face to an awfully intimidating man whose mighty flare was so horrifying you could feel the essence of his anger an entire mile away.
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Resonated_ - Dec. 14, 2013
Read the first one and I am excited about the sequel, please don't rush to get my character in.
Name: Joseph Thomas
Bey: Pirate Letus SA150D (not zero-g that is just the name)
Gender: Male
Personality adistic, not exactly nice but a fair person, he wouldn't spare a person if they have wronged him or anyone who could help him.
Bio: His Dad was a pirate, one day he went off on a voyage and never came back now Joseph sails the seas as his father did, doesn't like to talk about his past
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Other info: Owns a pirate ship (A crew of about 25), always carries a standard rapier and flintlock pistol. When annoyed by some one he often pushes that person into a body of water. When frustrated his eyes tun black and dark smoke envelopes his body when he is in this state he often blows things up, often his opponents bey.
Appearance: Dark brown skin, brown eyes, semi-long pitch black hair that slightly covers his left eye,wears puffy white shirt under a grey vest, blue jeans, and black boots.
Special moves: Seven Seas Slash, the area is flooded with water Letus rides a wave and crashes into his opponent(the recoil reduces spin speed) Shark Bait, the area is flooded with water and Letus duplicates him self into 3 beys and they all attack his opponent.
Bey description:
Face bolt: the sail of a Pirate ship with a scull on it
Clear ring: Black with grey pirate sculls forming a ring on it
Metal Wheel: has two modes, Mode one has several indents in the spaces where there are not indents there are pistols, the indents act like.. you guessed it, pistols and fire air like, again, a pistol in this mode close range attack and defense are decreased. Mode two is bumpy and has swords imprinted on the sides in this mode attack and defense are increased.
Spin Track: Ship Armor very wide and smooth decreases speed but boosts defense
Performance tip: Nothing Special
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Zack A - Dec. 16, 2013
I though the first one was amazing and I think this one will be too. Keep up withthe good work dude. Can you PM me when your new chapters come out please?
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Dec. 18, 2013
Chapter 1 is finished Emma, Ace, Shoren and I stand flat footed at the ocean dock. We say not one word, for the sound of eagles chirping and whales moaning is too amazing of a sound to interrupt. Emma puts her arm over her shoulder, embracing the awesomeness of victory that surrounds us all. " We did it Christian... " she realized.
I look towards Emma and smile," Yeah... I guess we did make it to America didn't we! " We started to walk off of the dock in a group, laughing and conversing along the way. I pulled out my Iphone 5 and checked Google Earth for the nearest hotel, and instantly feasted my eyes on a map full of 5 star hotels on every single street. " Wow! That is a whole lot of hotels Christian! How are we going to see them all?!" Emma exclaimed directly inside my small cat like ears.
Shortly after Emma said that, our team began walking towards the end of the dock, only to find our self standing face to face to an awfully intimidating man whose mighty flare was so horrifying you could feel the essence of his anger an entire mile away. " Where do you kids think your going?!" He scolded. Ace walked up to the man in a cocky fashion, yet keeping a nice clean smile so he doesn't upset the man. " Excuse us, but incase you are mistaken we are team Flame Universe, the bladers representing America. See I'm Ace and this is-" The interrupted with a rude push, you just knew this wasn't going to end well.
When your a 12 year old dare devil in the City of Clan, you never expect to be stressful, you usually don't even try to be. Though Clan is a very small city it has a decent amount of population- some will hate you for it of course; though some will admire you like a hero. I never had a name until that fateful day I met my partner beyblade, Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault. L-Drago was like the brother I never had, I loved everything about it. Battling, playing, looking, none of it would be the same with another bey... One day though- something changed.
My friends started to run in absolute fear as I approached their reach, my enemies had reached a level of hatred so high by the look at me that they started attacking as I near, I simply watched in confusion as they fell back in pain- though I never touched them. The elders of the city claimed that I had " An essence of danger which struck fear in the hearts of citizens " and that I and any one who was was to be related to me had been banned from ever coming back to the City of Clan for the rest of my life.
I never had a home, my family was all the way in the state of Missouri- nowhere out of my reach. I have no map or phone- so day by day I walk down a straight path- hoping it will have me end up back in my home state. When you don't do anything but walk down a straight path you will eventually notice how easy it is to know how many days it has been, and because I counted every time that the sun went down I estimate it has been about five years sense I have left Clan- and somewhere in between that time there was a moment where I named myself Plasma- because of the special move my L-Drago has. Five years starts to feel like your entire life after a couple days into it, It doesn't matter though because I know I still just got to keep on trucking.
I always knew my love for my beyblade was great, but I never even guessed it had gone to such extreme limits until I met my friend Joseph. I remember the day Joseph showed up into my life like it was yesterday, Dark brown skin, brown eyes, semi-long pitch black hair that slightly covers his left eye, puffy white shirt he tucked under his slick grey vest, even a pair of metallic black boots... If you were to see him right now- you'd think he was the silliest man on Earth due to his dress apparel, but the look in his eye has a essence of adventure and action- as if he was waiting every second to strike.
Sorry for taking this long to finish the first chapter. Chapters are planned to be uploaded much faster from now on.
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Chapter 1 up, Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Dec. 18, 2013
THERE WILL BE ATLEAST ONE CHAPTER A DAY FROM THIS POINT ON.
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story (Chapter 1 up, Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 18, 2013
Omg I'm going to READ DAILY OMG HECK YES HECK YES -Faints-
RE: The Last King *2*- A beyblade story - Themeeny7 - Dec. 23, 2013
NOTE TO ALL READERS: I am so sorry for the missed updates. I plan to continue writing tomorrow or on Christmas. Pm me for details.
RE: The Last King 2:A beyblade story (Chapter 2 is up, accepting character requests) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 08, 2014
Chapter 2 is up! Sorry for the delay! You can expect a lot more where this came from though! Spoiler alert This chapter is fairly awesome, but trust me, you haven't seen anything yet
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 2 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 09, 2014
Chapter 3 is halfway done. Plan to continue when more people read chapter 2.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 2 is up, accepting characters) - Airus - Jan. 09, 2014
Hey this RULLLLLLES
I HAV A CHAR REQUEST:
Name: Jake Hagane
Bey name: Bandit Ifrit ED145UB (Ultimate Ball) or Ninja Susanow A230BWD
Character name: Jake Hagane
Character Gender: Male
Personality: Very short tempered, but calm when studying. When in a dramatic moment sheds alot of tears. Hates breakups with girls. Hates to be betrayed.
Bio: Gingka's son. Was abandoned by Gingka as he went on a training journey. Jake was left with his sister Alice and his mother Hikaru. Very strong. In search of his lost father and since this story takes place in the US, the US is Jake's next search location.
Alignment(Such as good evil neutral): Good
Extra Info: N/A
Appearance(Do this your best, it WILL be used in story if your character is accepted): Medium black hair with grey jacket. Black gloves and wears a belt similar to Gingka's, and wears blue jeans with black boots.
Special moves and description: Special moves: Bandit Crusher, (sends opponent flying, sends it back to the center of the stadium, then sends a barrage of attacks) Reversal Blade, (jumps in the air and thrashes at the opponent, lights up and explodes, causing HUGE damage)
Just note Reversal Blade is only used in the biggest battles.
Bey description: A regular Bandit Ifrit with the ED145 track and a made up tip UB, meaning Ultimate Ball. UB is a wide ball as wide as WB. The Ifrit wheel is silver and the Bandit wheel is purple. The ED145 track is clear purple and UB is clear purple. The face is purple.
Bey Parts(Specific part types if wanted): ???
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 2 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 09, 2014
(Jan. 09, 2014 1:06 AM)Jake Hagane Wrote: Hey this RULLLLLLES
I HAV A CHAR REQUEST:
Name: Jake Hagane
Bey name: Bandit Ifrit ED145UB (Ultimate Ball) or Ninja Susanow A230BWD
Character name: Jake Hagane
Character Gender: Male
Personality: Very short tempered, but calm when studying. When in a dramatic moment sheds alot of tears. Hates breakups with girls. Hates to be betrayed.
Bio: Gingka's son. Was abandoned by Gingka as he went on a training journey. Jake was left with his sister Alice and his mother Hikaru. Very strong. In search of his lost father and since this story takes place in the US, the US is Jake's next search location.
Alignment(Such as good evil neutral): Good
Extra Info: N/A
Appearance(Do this your best, it WILL be used in story if your character is accepted): Medium black hair with grey jacket. Black gloves and wears a belt similar to Gingka's, and wears blue jeans with black boots.
Special moves and description: Special moves: Bandit Crusher, (sends opponent flying, sends it back to the center of the stadium, then sends a barrage of attacks) Reversal Blade, (jumps in the air and thrashes at the opponent, lights up and explodes, causing HUGE damage)
Just note Reversal Blade is only used in the biggest battles.
Bey description: A regular Bandit Ifrit with the ED145 track and a made up tip UB, meaning Ultimate Ball. UB is a wide ball as wide as WB. The Ifrit wheel is silver and the Bandit wheel is purple. The ED145 track is clear purple and UB is clear purple. The face is purple.
Bey Parts(Specific part types if wanted): ???
Thank you! It makes me really happy when I hear people like my stories. Oh, and I have to say wow! That character seems very interesting! I might have to think about how he comes in, but trust me he is going into this story.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 2 is up, accepting characters) - Airus - Jan. 09, 2014
(Jan. 09, 2014 1:53 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote: (Jan. 09, 2014 1:06 AM)Jake Hagane Wrote: Hey this RULLLLLLES
I HAV A CHAR REQUEST:
Name: Jake Hagane
Bey name: Bandit Ifrit ED145UB (Ultimate Ball) or Ninja Susanow A230BWD
Character name: Jake Hagane
Character Gender: Male
Personality: Very short tempered, but calm when studying. When in a dramatic moment sheds alot of tears. Hates breakups with girls. Hates to be betrayed.
Bio: Gingka's son. Was abandoned by Gingka as he went on a training journey. Jake was left with his sister Alice and his mother Hikaru. Very strong. In search of his lost father and since this story takes place in the US, the US is Jake's next search location.
Alignment(Such as good evil neutral): Good
Extra Info: N/A
Appearance(Do this your best, it WILL be used in story if your character is accepted): Medium black hair with grey jacket. Black gloves and wears a belt similar to Gingka's, and wears blue jeans with black boots.
Special moves and description: Special moves: Bandit Crusher, (sends opponent flying, sends it back to the center of the stadium, then sends a barrage of attacks) Reversal Blade, (jumps in the air and thrashes at the opponent, lights up and explodes, causing HUGE damage)
Just note Reversal Blade is only used in the biggest battles.
Bey description: A regular Bandit Ifrit with the ED145 track and a made up tip UB, meaning Ultimate Ball. UB is a wide ball as wide as WB. The Ifrit wheel is silver and the Bandit wheel is purple. The ED145 track is clear purple and UB is clear purple. The face is purple.
Bey Parts(Specific part types if wanted): ???
Thank you! It makes me really happy when I hear people like my stories. Oh, and I have to say wow! That character seems very interesting! I might have to think about how he comes in, but trust me he is going into this story.
Well np! This story is truly awesum even tho i only had time for chapter one cuz of homework and emotional moments that cost me time. I'm expecting alot of amazing stuff from u!
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 09, 2014
Chapter 3 is up
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Dual - Jan. 09, 2014
It's pretty good, but a few grammatical errors are present. Also, in chapter one when the narrator changed, I thought he was in the sme city and when you mention elders I was like "what?" The environment development was pretty good, just make sure to include things appealing to various senses.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 09, 2014
(Jan. 09, 2014 2:44 AM)Ultramarine Wrote: It's pretty good, but a few grammatical errors are present. Also, in chapter one when the narrator changed, I thought he was in the sme city and when you mention elders I was like "what?" The environment development was pretty good, just make sure to include things appealing to various senses.
Fixed up the character change thing.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 11, 2014
Epic story bro I like the bit battling thing very creative and everything i would have never thought of the person turning into the actual bey its crazy crazy crazy and i love it alot keep writing so i can keep reading onward with the story because i wanna see whats going to happen next
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 11, 2014
I have a character request ^.^
Bey name divine poseidon r145rs
Character name Alexander royall(spelled witu 2 L's)
Character gender: male
Pesonality:Stuck up, thinks he is better than everyone else, when defied gets a little scary and will lash out at that person. Cruel
Bio: Born and raised in Greece with lots of money, one day someone slaughtered his parents and the rest of his family in greece because of money. One day in a ruin finds divine poseidon. And enters the dark world of beyblade.
Extra info: sometimes recites poetry but its somewhat mean.
alignment: bad very bad no good in him!
Apperance: dark blue hair like kings, constantly wheres a purple toga, wears a crown on his head, with sandless.
Also carries a all purple staff(can his staff be like his launcher like he would hook his bey then like move the staff and it would launch)
Special moves: legendary tide smash: like as he charges forward the water travela with himand he smashes his opponents bey and it sends em flying. Trident of a god: an ariel attack where if he is knocked up high the wieght would come down and be sliced or slammed by the 3 rings. Final rage whirlpool: absolute last resort whirlpool spins out ingulfing his opponent and its K.O less you counter which is only weakspot.
Everything on it is black and blue divine wheel spin track blue ane black the rubber sharp too.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Jan. 23, 2014
(Jan. 11, 2014 7:05 AM)thelegISlAtive Wrote: Epic story bro I like the bit battling thing very creative and everything i would have never thought of the person turning into the actual bey its crazy crazy crazy and i love it alot keep writing so i can keep reading onward with the story because i wanna see whats going to happen next
Thanks for your time, thought, and overall support! With so many non-bey blade stories I enjoy writing AND bey blade stories, plus school video games etc. I can't write as often as I did in the original, but I will try and make updates as soon as I can.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Feb. 11, 2014
I am planning on continuing this story. However, I'm not doing anything without knowing anyone's reading. I'll start up chapter 4, but comment if you want more!
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Resonated_ - Feb. 11, 2014
I wan't to see more, please don't stop.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Themeeny7 - Feb. 11, 2014
(Feb. 11, 2014 3:13 AM)Resonated_ Wrote: I wan't to see more, please don't stop.
Don't worry man, I love my writing. I just felt like no one was there, ya know? Really though, I just need one reader to keep going; so thanks man. You just inspired me.
RE: The Last King 2: A beyblade story (Chapter 3 is up, accepting characters) - Classik - Feb. 15, 2014
THIS IS WICKED COOL! Right More!
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