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Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Printable Version

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Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Bladerstormybob - Dec. 01, 2012

Ok, this is my frist story and probably my only. I will be updating chapters when I can.

Chapter 1: The Poisonous Bite


Chapter 2: A New Pegasus


Chapter 3: James' Story


Chapter 4: The Power of Zurafa




RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - C-Dub - Dec. 02, 2012

nice story keep goin


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Dual - Dec. 02, 2012

Chapters should be longer and dialogue should be like this-
"I'm a monkey" Curious George said.
"No, really?" The man with the yellow hat said sarcastically.


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Bladerstormybob - Dec. 03, 2012

(Dec. 02, 2012  11:03 PM)Curious George Wrote: Chapters should be longer and dialogue should be like this-
"I'm a monkey" Curious George said.
"No, really?" The man with the yellow hat said sarcastically.

I'll try to keep the dialog thing in mind, and chapter 1 was short simply because the mysterious figure will be revealed in the next chapter.




RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Thunder Dome - Dec. 03, 2012

Meh... The story is okay. I agree with Curious George. Look at other peoples stories to get ideas how to type it.


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Bladerstormybob - Dec. 03, 2012

(Dec. 03, 2012  2:03 AM)Thunder Dome Wrote: Meh... The story is okay. I agree with Curious George. Look at other peoples stories to get ideas how to type it.
Sorry I'm just not a very good writer. I have writer's block a lot so I put down ideas in a Word document before writing a chapter. Like I said, this is my first story, and probably my only. You should check my reply to Curious George if you haven't yet.




RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Bladerstormybob - Dec. 27, 2012

Here are the list of everyones launchers:

Alex: Launcher Grip and Ripcord launcher

Tony: Launcher Grip, String Launcher, and Angle Compass

James: Launcher Grip and String Launcher

Everyone has a BeyPointer


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Raiyanblader - May. 15, 2015

I have an idea for a new special move for Alex Blazing hurricane!!!!!!!


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Favourite - May. 15, 2015

Seriously, do not worry at all. All he meant to say was that your grammar was lust a bit bad. Otherwise, you are an awesome writer.


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Dual - May. 15, 2015

Guys, this thread hasn't been posted in for three years. Try not to bump inactive topics.


RE: Beyblade Story: The Venomous Sperpent - Favourite - May. 16, 2015

OH MY GOD! Thanks, I can not express my feelings of awe and shock! I am speechless.