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[Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - Dual - Oct. 22, 2012

Ok, this is my newest story. If you vote saying my story is bad, please please please tell me what I could do to make my story better. Enjoy!

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Character Profiles-



RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 22, 2012

... New competition. Lol, just kidding.
Nice idea! I like it!
I'll be reading for sure.
KIU!



RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 22, 2012

Thanks! I actually came up with the idea of a a bunch of wolf beyblades surrounding and attacking a caribou beyblade in Latin class but had a bit of trouble thinking of a way to make that scene happen. Chapter 2 might be up later today...or it might not. It probably will be though.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 23, 2012

Sorry for the double post but chapter 2 is up!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - SilverChronos - Oct. 23, 2012

Pretty undescriptive about the main character. Otherwise, KIU!!!



RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 24, 2012

Whaddya mean descriptive? He's not gonna describe himself. Could you clarify please? Anyway, chapter 3 is up.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - kaihiwatari5673 - Oct. 24, 2012

Really awesome story, really original, super creative, a few spelling errors and didn't understand part of it at times but still awesome story.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 24, 2012

Could you point out a few of the spelling errors and tell me what you didnt understand? I want to make this story as good as it can be. Chapter 4 should be up tomorrow.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - SilverChronos - Oct. 24, 2012

Well, put yourself in the situation. If you're telling a story to someone, and they can't see you, wouldn't you describe yourself to give them a better image? (Then again, come to think of it, I should add that to my story. :3)
EDIT: a spelling/grammar error: the plural of "wolf" is not "wolfs", rather "wolves". Another: When Hailey talked in the beginning of chapter 2, she didn't have a question mark at the end of her line.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 24, 2012

Oh ok i gotcha. I wil try to do that.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Oct. 30, 2012

Chapter 4 is up.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Driger Kai - Oct. 31, 2012

Wow, I just found it, and like all of your stories its great!
I need to think of a cool idea for a Beyblade Story too...
Keep it Up!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Nov. 24, 2012

Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I've been working on my beywheelz story. Chapter 5 is up!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 09, 2012

I think it's a neat idea, just that the chapters are shorter than in the bey story. Kampala International University (KIU)! I mean Keep It Up (KIU)! Also, you probably know this, the wilderness includes many terrains, thus many species. So you could include many species, like leones and such.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Dec. 10, 2012

Well the story takes place in Wyoming. I don't think there are all that many lions in Wyoming XD


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Natural - Dec. 10, 2012

Nice I like it! >U<


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness - Dual - Dec. 13, 2012

Ugh. Sorry guys, could someone close this?


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 13, 2012

Aww, well, all you have to do is click full edit on the starting post, hit delete this post, and the whole thing dissapears... ;(


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - Luck - Dec. 13, 2012

No. A user with Mod powers needs to close it. deleting your posts without mod powers doesn't work :L.
It's a great story, why are you wanting to close the thread?


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 13, 2012

Why would you want to close the thread C.G.?


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - Driger Kai - Dec. 13, 2012

(Dec. 13, 2012  9:13 PM)DarkNinja720 Wrote: Why would you want to close the thread C.G.?

I agree. I thought this story was pretty cool.
But you probably have lots of other work, right?


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - Dual - Dec. 14, 2012

Yah. Sorry guys. Especially with high school and all this new stuff happening, im going to keep it down to one story.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 14, 2012

oh well, doesn't last forever...


RE: [Beyblade Story] Into the Wilderness CLOSE PLEASE - sarabscientist - Dec. 14, 2012

Closed on request.