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[story] the other side. Chapter 12 up! (Rated PG-LV) - Printable Version

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[story] the other side. Chapter 12 up! (Rated PG-LV) - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

please share this if you like it and vote on the poll. Thank you!
chapter 1 (Click to View)
Chapter 2 (Click to View)
Chapter 3 (Click to View)
Chapter 4 (Click to View)
Chapter 5 (Click to View)
Chapter 6 (Click to View)
Chapter 7 (Click to View)
Chapter 8 (Click to View)
Chapter 9 (Click to View)
Chapter 10 (Click to View)
Chapter 11 (Click to View)
Chapter 12 (Click to View)



RE: [story] the other side. accepting character requests! - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 16, 2012

There are several grammar and spelling mistakes. Plus the chapter is kinda short. Also, try to make up your own charcters. That will help with future writings. It's... Okay. KIU.


RE: [story] the other side. accepting character requests! - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

My bad about the grammar. I don't have grammar check on my 3ds, which is what I wrote the first chapter on. Plus, it was like the middle of the night.


RE: [story] the other side. accepting character requests! - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 16, 2012

(Oct. 16, 2012  9:36 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: My bad about the grammar. I don't have grammar check on my 3ds, which is what I wrote the first chapter on. Plus, it was like the middle of the night.

If I were you, I'd write during the day. And on a computer, ha.
Otherwise, you should really try to work on that.
KIU.


RE: [story] the other side. - Driger Kai - Oct. 16, 2012

To be honest, its actually pretty good, other then the grammar mistakes and short chapters, fix those and it'd be a pretty good story.


RE: [story] the other side. - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

The grammar is updated. Plus, here's a long and interesting chapter for you, DrigerKai. Chapter 2 up!!! Please vote!!!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 3 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 17, 2012

Chapter 3 up!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 3 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 17, 2012

Chapter 4 up!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 5 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 22, 2012

Chapter 5 up! Chapter six coming really soon!
Chapter 6 up! Also, I added some description.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 7 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 22, 2012

Wow, I posted this WAY after it was up, but chapter 7 up!!!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 8 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 23, 2012

Chaptah 8 beez up!!!!!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 9 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 23, 2012

Chaptah 9, peoples!!! Also, please tell me if I missed any grammar mess-ups. I just edited it.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 9 up! - moksh123 - Oct. 24, 2012

You're awesome, dude.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 9 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 24, 2012

That really helps, moksh123. I'm glad to see someone is actually reading my stories. My homework took up most of the day, so I can't get chapter 10 up yet.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 9 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 26, 2012

Chapter 10 up, peoples!!!!
I would really appreciate comments when you vote as to why you voted that way.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 10 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 28, 2012

Sorry for no chapter earlier this weekend, I had a Boy Scout campout.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 10 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 29, 2012

Chapter 11 up!!! Everything changes in this chapter, so I expect it to be the best yet!!!


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 11 up! - SilverChronos - Oct. 30, 2012

Chapter 12 up!!! This chapter's ending is not meant for little children.


RE: [story] the other side. Chapter 11 up! (Rated PG-LV) - SilverChronos - Oct. 30, 2012

Well, it turns out my Narcolepsy has worsened. I've been falling asleep a lot lately, even during this sentence. I hate it. Whatever. I'll live.