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(Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Final Ch Up!) - Printable Version

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(Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Final Ch Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 14, 2012

Yup! Time for my third-ish story! I plan to keep this one going for awhile! And also, that means I'm not retiring! Yup! You heard me! I won't be retiring for awhile! Anyways, I have found out that I do have dyslexia, which will make writing this a bit harder. (So far, it's only heavily affecting me in my Algebra 1 class. Sometimes in reading.) Anyways, here it is!

Prolouge:
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Chapter 11:
Chapter 12:
Chapter 13
Chapter 14:
Chapter 15: (Told From Sofia's Point Of View!)
Chapter 16:
Chapter 17:
Chapter 18:
Chapter 19:
Chapter 20:
Chapter 21:
Chapter 22:
Chapter 23:
Chapter 24:
Chapter 25:
Chapter 26:
Chapter 27:
Chapter 28:
Chapter 29:
Epilogue:

I will update chapters whenever I can! Thanks for reading! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - Dual - Oct. 14, 2012

Cool! Im so glad you're not retiring! I can tell this story will be awesome!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - UltimateOrion - Oct. 14, 2012

good story


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 14, 2012

(Oct. 14, 2012  3:59 PM)UltimiteOrion Wrote: good story

Thank you!
(Oct. 14, 2012  3:53 PM)Beyniac Wrote: Cool! Im so glad you're not retiring! I can tell this story will be awesome!

Thanks, and yeah. I just can't leave. XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - beybladefoever - Oct. 14, 2012

Good story, I like how you use Greek and Roman Myths. This story is amazing as always


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - Eternal-E - Oct. 14, 2012

Athens? That's two steps up from Sparta! Awesome story China. Awesome.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - DefStamina88 - Oct. 14, 2012

Remarkable story. Miracle in the making!!

Unfortunately, it is more certain I will retire, but I do have my partner in crime and successor's to back me up. Good job!!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - Rush - Oct. 15, 2012

Epicness right there. I read one of your other stories, but you stopped it at the prologue... Anyways, nice work!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 15, 2012

Thanks for all the nice comments, guys! Unfortunately, I have hurt my shoulder... And the entire right side of my body. (Like seriously, I can't bend my knee without pain.) But! I will be continuing with this story, just for you guys. Here's Chapter 2~! Grin

Chapter 2:

Yes. Scan cards. I thought it would be cool to bring Beyblade to a whole new level. Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012

By card do you mean beypoint card? Awesome chapter by the way! Hope you get better.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - Eternal-E - Oct. 15, 2012

I think it's more like a spirit card or something... A way you can controll the bey...?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 15, 2012

(Oct. 15, 2012  9:35 PM)Beyniac Wrote: By card do you mean beypoint card? Awesome chapter by the way! Hope you get better.

It's what activates the launcher. But, it does keep track of points, as well.
And thanks.
(Oct. 15, 2012  9:37 PM)Eternal-E Wrote: I think it's more like a spirit card or something... A way you can controll the bey...?

No, it's just a way to activate the launcher. And, it also keeps track of your points.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - Eternal-E - Oct. 15, 2012

what if someone loses their card?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 15, 2012

(Oct. 15, 2012  9:45 PM)Eternal-E Wrote: what if someone loses their card?

We'll just have to see what happens.
I'm not going to be revealing anything yet.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012

They screwed! Nah I bet they can get another one. But I'll let china answer that.
Edit: I have been beaten and will humbly surrender Smithicide


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - Duck - Oct. 15, 2012

This is really great! I like it a lot! Grin Mythology FTW!!!

Keep up the amazing writing!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - F.l.A.S.H - Oct. 16, 2012

Great story China!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 2 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 16, 2012

Thanks, again, for all the nice comments! My shoulder is still bothering me a bit, but, nonetheless, I shall still be writing. Here's chapter 3!

Chapter 3:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

I find it interesting that you use Greek names such as Zeus and Hephaestus (for all you not-fans of mythology- pronounced Heff-est-us), and roman god names for them too, as in vulcan and jupiter. I also like how the forms are greek, and the beys are roman, because that depicts the attributes of the gods, as in the fact that roman gods tended to be more strict. It was okay, but it was too soon after the Curse Of Athena in the Heroes of olympus series.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 16, 2012

(Oct. 16, 2012  11:19 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: I find it interesting that you use Greek names such as Zeus and Hephaestus (for all you not-fans of mythology- pronounced Heff-est-us), and roman god names for them too, as in vulcan and jupiter. I also like how the forms are greek, and the beys are roman, because that depicts the attributes of the gods, as in the fact that roman gods tended to be more strict. It was okay, but it was too soon after the Curse Of Athena in the Heroes of olympus series.

... I don't even read the Heros of Olympus series... And I've only read one or two books of the Percy Jackson series.... I don't know what your saying...
Wait.
So your saying...
That because I wrote this after a book I've never read and/or care about realeased a little while ago... You don't like this?....
Okay then?....


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

Sorry, not like that, it's just that it was too close after heroes of olympus series books came out for another mythology book. I've gotten tired, because one of my electives in school is greek/roman mythology, and I know everything there is to know about it right about now. Plus, could you enter Hera? that would be cool, having the queen of the gods in there too.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 17, 2012

(Oct. 16, 2012  11:58 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: Sorry, not like that, it's just that it was too close after heroes of olympus series books came out for another mythology book. I've gotten tired, because one of my electives in school is greek/roman mythology, and I know everything there is to know about it right about now. Plus, could you enter Hera? that would be cool, having the queen of the gods in there too.

Sorry, no requests.
Also, I'm not telling about any of the characters and/or their beys.
You'll just have to wait.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - F.l.A.S.H - Oct. 17, 2012

Great chapter


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - F.l.A.S.H - Oct. 18, 2012

@ChinaBlade: are you stop writing again?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 3 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 18, 2012

@ F.l.A.S.H: I didn't have time to write yesterday because I had a track meet... Please don't just assume if I didn't write for one day. Speechless


Sorry for no chapter yesterday! I had a track meet! (We came in second, placed first in discus. Grin) Here's Chapter 4!

Chapter 4:

Warning: It's LONG.