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[Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 06, 2012

NOTE: This Story has a public poll, so do not vote unless you have an explanation as to why, and don't say things like, "LOL I was trolling". That's a stupid excuse...

So, this is my 4th, and final, story in my series. After this, I will retire from writing. So, here it is, another story starring Miles and the gang!!

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6 (WARNING: Some blood.)
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12

I will update the OP with chapters at least once a week or two. Feedback is appreciated, and REQUIRED when voting...


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 06, 2012

Oh no!
First the final season of iCarly, and then this?!
Unhappy I'll miss your stories.
To be honest, I believe my stories have gone dry.
I might retire, too.
Anyways, good luck!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Dual - Oct. 07, 2012

Wait, whats dylan doing there? Didnt he move to australia? And i think r dev needs to seek psychological help XD i really hope you keep writing and this story is turning out great!
Edit: And chinablade might retire too? Nooooo! Whos stories am i gonna read?


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - MexaMaster - Oct. 07, 2012

(Oct. 07, 2012  1:35 AM)Beyniac Wrote: Wait, whats dylan doing there? Didnt he move to australia? And i think r dev needs to seek psychological help XD i really hope you keep writing and this story is turning out great!
Edit: And chinablade might retire too? Nooooo! Whos stories am i gonna read?
Everyone elses....there are plenty of stories here




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Duck - Oct. 07, 2012

@Beyniac - I started writing a story! DefStamina88 says that I'm his successor. Tongue_out_wink


Noooooooooo!!! Crying I'm gonna cry. Crying *bawls* O-Okay, I'll stop now. Woah, what?! R-Dev is evil again?! Oh no.

Sotries? Chocked_2


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Dual - Oct. 07, 2012

(Oct. 07, 2012  4:06 AM)MexaMaster Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2012  1:35 AM)Beyniac Wrote: Wait, whats dylan doing there? Didnt he move to australia? And i think r dev needs to seek psychological help XD i really hope you keep writing and this story is turning out great!
Edit: And chinablade might retire too? Nooooo! Whos stories am i gonna read?
Everyone elses....there are plenty of stories here
And my question to you is, how many are as good as defstaminas and chinablades?
Duck of Hades Oh yah! I almost forgot XD Ok, so there are some other amazing writers but still, I will miss defstamina and chinablade.
Anyway, back on topic, I'm really excited for chapter 1!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 07, 2012

I am handling the issue about kyoya321 voting the last option...

Anyways, Chapter 1!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - sarabscientist - Oct. 07, 2012

(Oct. 07, 2012  3:30 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I am handling the issue about kyoya321 voting the last option...

In a diplomatic fashion, I presume? No harassment.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 07, 2012

(Oct. 07, 2012  3:37 PM)Insomniac. Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2012  3:30 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I am handling the issue about kyoya321 voting the last option...

In a diplomatic fashion, I presume? No harassment.

In a very diplomatic fashion~


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - sarabscientist - Oct. 08, 2012

(Oct. 07, 2012  11:32 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: In a very diplomatic fashion~

Good to hear. Its the new trend I'm forcing on to everybody Cute




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 08, 2012

Here's Chapter 2!!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Dual - Oct. 08, 2012

Ooh cool. New character! Great chapter!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - SilverChronos - Oct. 10, 2012

i love this story. @ china and defstamina, why??!!!?? I need you guys to keep writing! I'm only gonna have duck to rely on! and who can afford that? there are almost no good stories out there anymore. [mainly because i'm a grammar nazi, but don't post it.] by the way, I like where you're going with this new character idea! c: (<- CUTEST SMILEY FACE EVER!!!!)


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Duck - Oct. 10, 2012

@Everyone other than DefStamima88 and ChinaBladeâ„¢ - I feel so pressured! Cute


Ah, another great chapter. Needless to say, great job!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 10, 2012

Here's Chapter 3!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Syco - Oct. 10, 2012

Can't wait for da next chapter I have a feeling it will end up a tragic love story.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - NenMrix - Oct. 10, 2012

OOooohhh Bri has some love now. Good luck getting over her, Miles Wink


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Kujikato - Oct. 11, 2012

I voted the 2nd option cause well, I never really 'loved' your stories, they were good, but well, not spectacular, you get my flow? Your writing will still be missed as a show of quality.

KIU man, we'll be missing you...
(That being said, I wonder if I should continue with my novel, derp)


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Duck - Oct. 12, 2012

Bri has found love! I wonder how it'll turn out...

Wonderful cliff-hanger. Tired


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 13, 2012

Here's Chapter 4!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Duck - Oct. 14, 2012

Great chapter!!! I don't really like Kira as a character, though. It almost seemed like Bri was showing off to him. Eee


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 16, 2012

Here's Chapter 5!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 16, 2012

Aww~!
That is so cute!
Great chapter, and go Kira! Grin


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - SilverChronos - Oct. 16, 2012

Eh... Kira isn't my fave. I love this story though!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - Duck - Oct. 17, 2012

I still have a feeling that Kira/Bri is going to end tragically. Unhappy Amazing chapter, anyhow! Wink