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Lucid (M) - Debut Title- - The Writer - Sep. 15, 2012

A story I found rooting around at the back of a file from a few months back. I think I did this shortly after seeing Inception - one line intrigued me ("The dream has become their reality"). Again, I've added a lot, taken bits out, etc, etc, etc, for extension. Some day I might do an extended story, but for now I'll stick with this short story instead.

PROLOGUE

PART ONE

PART TWO

PART THREE

PART FOUR

EPILOGUE

Hope You Enjoyed It. Wink


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

awesome really good but that guy lucas is crazy


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 15, 2012

Haha. Yeah, well some people are really like that. My mum had a friend who lived with REM and out of body experiences all her life. She said it was scary sometimes. Maybe when i get right nice and bored i'll write a scary book about it.


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

awesome your a good writer


RE: Lucid (M) - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Its really good so far! Try using spoilers. I'm pretty sure there is a thread for MyCodes. You can find out how to make spoilers there. Wink


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

its in insomniacs sig


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 15, 2012

Thanks, but um... thats it. It's just a short story.


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

yeah but here people make 15 chapter storys


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 15, 2012

I will make a long series but for now i thought i'd just start with a short one.


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

oh than nevermind and sorry


RE: Lucid (M) - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

You still may want to put it into spoilers and split paragraphs into groups, it makes it much easier.


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 15, 2012

Done.


RE: Lucid (M) - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012

better and now easier for people


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 22, 2012

yeah but it was specifically written to be without spoilers...


RE: Lucid (M) - Dual - Sep. 22, 2012

That was an amazing story!


RE: Lucid (M) - sarabscientist - Sep. 22, 2012

Jaw-dropping spectacular :o

I cannot believe I missed this. But I'm glad that I read it. The prolougue is exceptional. I can see promise in you, haha. Keep up the good work. You've chosen an appropriate username xD

Mmm, the power of the human mind ...


RE: Lucid (M) - The Writer - Sep. 22, 2012

Thanks guys. Writing a story so dont be alarmed if i dont post for a month


RE: Lucid (M) - Debut Title- - The Writer - Mar. 03, 2013

okay sorry for the necro but i will be posting a new story sometime this month!


RE: Lucid (M) - Debut Title- - Dual - Mar. 03, 2013

Can't wait! And get rid of that user title. It should read "Master Author" or something of the sorts.


RE: Lucid (M) - Debut Title- - The Writer - Mar. 03, 2013

hahahahaha... okay i will try to post soon.


RE: Lucid (M) - superiorblader - Mar. 03, 2013

(Sep. 15, 2012  6:17 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: awesome really good but that guy lucas is crazy
gotta agree but he reminds me of my 3rd cousin