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(Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force [Stopped Writing, didn't go well] - Driger Kai - Sep. 13, 2012

PM for my story plans!
Description, read this before reading or posting.
Characters:
Also, if you like Beyblade stories; here's a few (and adding more) WBO Beyblade Stories you may like also!:


Prologue:
Chapter 1; A new Beginning

Chapter Two: I almost get eaten by a Beyblade

Chapter 3; Calming Down




Chapter 4; Kay's room 10;30 p.m. Fox' Legend Revealed



Chapter 5; Looking for a friend




Chapter 6; Clash! Kay VS. Joe!


Chapter 7; The battle... With myself?




Chapter 8; Back to Blading, back to Crazy


Chapter 9; The Recurring Hero



Chapter 9; Blaze Force!




Chapter 10; My Real a State Person Try's to Destroy Us



Chapter 11; Fighting in the Hurricane of Death



Chapter 12; We Continue a Normal Life


Chapter 13 Part 1; The Beginning of the End



Chapter 13 Part 2; I've Failed

Chapter 14; Clash! Libra and Beelzeb! (Chapter told by Cole, it will make it easier)



Chapter 15 Part 1; The Escape!



15, part 2....... Told by Black



RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 13, 2012

Seems interesting...
Can't wait to read! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 13, 2012

(Sep. 13, 2012  10:33 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Seems interesting...
Can't wait to read! Grin

Thanks! I've been working harder with my stories, and have high hopes for this one.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 13, 2012

Quote:Epilogue:
Beat evil with a Burn Fox 145W2D? What stories are you listening to? Im joking im joking Wink Anyway, sound cool. I will definitely read this!




RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Sep. 13, 2012

(Sep. 13, 2012  10:34 PM)Kaizermon Wrote:
(Sep. 13, 2012  10:33 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Seems interesting...
Can't wait to read! Grin

Thanks! I've been working harder with my stories, and have high hopes for this one.

Looks like you have.
Honestly, it's better than your first story. And it's only the prolouge.
Anyways, good luck. I'll be reading. Grin



RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 13, 2012

(Sep. 13, 2012  10:36 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Sep. 13, 2012  10:34 PM)Kaizermon Wrote:
(Sep. 13, 2012  10:33 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Seems interesting...
Can't wait to read! Grin

Thanks! I've been working harder with my stories, and have high hopes for this one.

Looks like you have.
Honestly, it's better than your first story. And it's only the prolouge.
Anyways, good luck. I'll be reading. Grin
Thanks. Oh snap, you just reminded me I accidently said epilogue instead of prologue...
EDIT: Also, I don't want anyone voting until the forth chapter. Also, if any of the fans would like, I could PM you for updates on the story. Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Sorry for double posting, but I finished chapter four! People can now start voting.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Some grammar mistakes but otherwise pretty good. Keep it up!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Yeah, once every so often I read over my stories and fix everything. Fans, please send me a PM for a character request. Only PM character requests, like it said in the description Grin (Also, I really like getting PMs, XD)


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

I think i'll do a character request. Expect a pm soon! Also, all the gramar mistakes are pretty smal so overall on a scale of 1-10 with 10 as the best, i'd say 8.9463. Im not joking, i did not do some random number. I shoukd have waited a few chapters before voting though cuz writers always grow with their story. Im sure by the end, i would have voted for the first option.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Thanks! Grin Your right, the writer does mature as they write. Also, for the book scene, the creators' of Kayjin's book.... Has a secret in it.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Woah! Now i'm really excited for thr next chapter to come out. Sent my character request. Is the secret hidden in the copyright? XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

No, Cole and Black are recurring characters.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Oh yah! Mah characters in! Cool special moves for Burn Fox by the way.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Thanks. I think Nate will be in chapter 6.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Sorry, for again, double posting. I've put up the new chapters, and they're epic. A big battle, some darkness being dealt with, its all good! Also, some of the chapters will be short.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Woah. Woah. Im speechless. This is great. Like, amazing! The battles were great, the characters were great, the plot was great, the grammar was great and i only saw 2 spelling mistakes. WHY DIDNT I VOTE FOR THE FIRST OPTION, WHY!?!? Also, you did a great job of portraying my character Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Thanks! This was probably my most favorite compliment I've gotten on any of my stories. Crying


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Well keep writing like you are and your story should be flooded with compliments! Can't wait to read the next chapter.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 15, 2012

Thanks. I'll keep up the good work.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - MasterBlader-X - Sep. 16, 2012

Very nice story. This what i think about it.




RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 16, 2012

Thanks, bro. I'm now on Chapter 11. So basically, the story is in the arc of getting stronger and slowly defeating the Beelzeb Bladers to destroy the rising darkness.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Dual - Sep. 16, 2012

Just a few mistakes i saw- two chapter 9's, at one point it says black cole instead of black and cole, and YOUR STORY IS JUST TO AWESOME! I love the part when Kay asked whats up and Nate naswered the sky. That is like the exact thing i would've said XD Awesome zero g beys by the way! Cant wait for the next chapter.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force - Driger Kai - Sep. 16, 2012

Thanks, in case I haven't said this yet, sometimes I read over it and fix the mistakes.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Blaze Force [Stopped Writing, didn't go well] - Driger Kai - Sep. 22, 2012

Sorry for double posting, but I've stopped writing it, and yet again, I'm coming back with more writing tricks up my giant blue sleeves. I'll post the link for my new story, once I've started it.