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RE: [story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 11 is up) - bladeshredder02 - Dec. 13, 2012
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I don't mean to be rude but were you in a rush when you neared the end because you misspelled some words.
RE: [story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 is finally up!) - Eternal-E - May. 24, 2013
EDIT: after realizing what the shortest chapters are, i've combined chapters 11 and 12.
RE: [story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 is finally up!) - Samurai_Ifraid1 - May. 24, 2013
Good story. Just a couple of grammar mistakes but the main problem is that...... IT'S TOO SHORT!! This is an awesome story please make it longer
RE: [story] Legend of the Bleeding Bey's. (chapter 12 and 11 are merged) - Eternal-E - Oct. 12, 2013
Well, the real chapter 12 is up, but I don't wanna call it finished yet. One problem is that I can't think of what else to put in it!