World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Printable Version

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MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8



RE: MY 4D STORY - Tech - Jul. 24, 2012

I like it, but you should add more description and maybe make it longer.

Also, PD is a real tip, (Polish Defense) just pointing that out Smile


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

I will I was just trying to get it rolling with chapter 1


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

Chapter 2
I hope you liked that chapter more and thought it was legend wait for it dary... Legendary. Cute durp hahahah


RE: MY 4D STORY - Tech - Jul. 24, 2012

The story line is good, but you need longer chapters, more description and details, and better grammar.


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

I would like more people to vote and comment to help improve my story


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

Chapter 3
please give me feedback guys please and thank you


RE: MY 4D STORY - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

Needs better grammer... Other than that, it seems interesting.


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012

This one Is for sure better than my last story (it really really sucked) well thanks for the positive feedback I'll keep writing


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012

Chapter 4
hope everybody liked it please comment and vote thank you for reading guys. Ill have up the next chapter soon.



RE: MY 4D STORY - Crona - Jul. 25, 2012

StupidIts setanly is interesting my friend and i make our own bey stories too.


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012

What do you say that made no sense bald eagle


RE: MY 4D STORY - Crona - Jul. 25, 2012

StupidStupidOops i ment it is setarnly interesting, my friend and i make our own bey stories too.


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012

Chapter 5
thank you for reading. PEOPLE PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE


RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012

Chapter 6



RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" - Voltage - Jul. 27, 2012

Anybody got some ideas for bladers from other country's for the world tournament in the story


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Kye#4 - Jul. 27, 2012

I have another character for you
Name : Kye
Age:11
BeyGrineath Quetzaqoatle BGrin
appearence:Brown hair, white glasses, yellow t-shirt, white hoodie,dark blue shorts


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 02, 2012

Sorry i haven't made a new chapter in a while i'v been a bit busy but here i go.
Chapter 7
Hope you liked it. Sorry it took so long to get out this chapter iv been very busy lately. Please comment vote and leave character ideas thanks!!!!!!!!!!


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - flippy4212 - Aug. 06, 2012

MAKE MORE IT WAS REALLY GOOD


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 06, 2012

Thanks no one really reads it so I don't really bother anymore


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - flippy4212 - Aug. 08, 2012

i still read it


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 08, 2012

Chapter 8 is up in the OP


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 10, 2012

Does anyone have a better idea for the title of this story???


RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 19, 2012

Seriously does anyone read or care about this story I want to know before I keep writing please tell me if yo do