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MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 chapter 1 Spoiler (Click to View) i made up entirely new parts for my main characters beyblade so i thought i would describe them here so i don't have to take time out of the story for them energy ring sphinximilar to horuseus or anubis just larger and heavier with a brick like pattern on it. fusion wheel barrier: It has a rounded shape like rock but is larger and heavier which a brick like pattern on. It has a piece to be placed on bottom or top to switch between attack and defense mode. track wd230 (weight disk): Like a thicker bd145 made of metal on a 230 scale boost mode only works with barrier. tip pd (pyramid defense) It is wide defense just with a more triangular design 1: search for the best As soon as i woke on the bright sunny day I grabbed my bey barrier sphinx, put on my black skinny jeans, my DubStep shirt, and my favorite pair of black adidas' and my skull candy mixmasters and ran to the kitchen and grabbed a piece of toast. "Where are you going" My mom asked as I ran out the door. "The beyblade world championship Dayton qualifiers are today!" I yelled back slamming the door shut and running for my bike. my best friend Ty was outside waiting for me. he was wearing usual purple shirt with black shorts and this week he had his hair died purple to match his shirt. "Sonny your so lazy it's like 12 o'clock and the tournament starts at twelve thirty." Ty said speeding of on his bike without me. "Hey wait up" I said going as fast as i could to catch up with him. Ten minutes later we where at the BeyPark. "See we are twenty minutes early." i said sticking out my tongue at him. five minutes later we were signed up and ready to battle. We met with our friend Max who was polishing his death hades ad145rdf. Ty pulled out his blitz pegasus III F and joined Max in polishing Beys. "Sit down and relax Sonny" max said "I can't, I'm to hyper." i said jogging in place. " cant wait for my first match." I was up first out of the three of us I was up against this little ten year old I have beaten countless times he readys his rock eagle and I ready my sphinx "3.2.1. Go shoot" we both yell launching our beys both sphinxes fusion wheel and spin track are in attack mode. I yell "crush him Sphinx" and in one move it's over with his eagle knocked out of the stadium. "nice job sphinx" I say as my bet flys into my hand Spoiler (Click to View) "Ty Miller." the announcer called. Max and I watched him walk down to the stadium. His opponent is a long time rival if all of us. His name was Jason and he was a tall muscular guy with a buzz cut whereing all camo. It was the ultimate power battle Ty being the strongest one of us with his huge biceps. He watched as Jason redied his diablo Capricorn df145mf. Ty put his Pegasus on his launche, they both look intensely at each other and yell "3.2.1. Go shoot!!!!!!!!!!". The two beys clash at the center of the stadium which causes a huge shockwave Pegasus recoils but rebounds back at Capricorn "go Pegasus barrage mode" Ty yells pegasus' wheel changes and he charges Capricorn hitting it countless ted do fast it is nearly invisible. It is really taking a toll on Capricorn untill Jason yells "Go Capricorn, dark steel horn". Capricorn becomes surrounded by a black aura and takes to the sky and comes back down in a black twister. "Intercept it Pegasus, blitz tornado blast"!!! Ty yells. Pegasus is engulfed in a giant whirlwind blast heading twords Capricorn. When the attacks meet there is a huge explosion and they are both flung against the wall. When the smoke clears Capricorn has stoped spinning and Pegasus is wobbleing like crazy. Ty and Pegasus collapse and we have to rush him to the hospital. Sense he has been injured so bad they decide to postpone the rest if the tournament till tommorow so he can be their for the matches. In the meantime me and Max decide to train. Spoiler (Click to View) The next morning i woke up at 5am, brush my medium length black hair out of my eyes, put on my grey skinny jeans, skrillex mothership tour shirt, my red adidas' and my hat and headphones and ran down stairs. I grabbed a protein shake, wore a note to my parents that said i was at the beypark training and ran out side and hoped on my bike. Max as usual was the first one their and Ty wasn't being released from the hospital till 9am. We decided to get training."You ready to battle Max." I said. "You bet" he announced readying his hades. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!!!! We both shout. Our beys clash in midair shooting out a huge shockwave. The two beys slam the ground with extreme force cracking the stadium. "go Sphinx". I shout. Sphinx hits Hades with extreme force but the defense type Hades is not moved at all. "nice try Sonny but that week attack won't work on me". Max shouts. "Fine then how about this, Sphinx barrage attack" I shout. Sphinx unleashes a super fast and powerful barrage of hits that Hades can't block or dodge. "Hades counter attack". Max says as hades veers of and slams into the attacking Sphinx. I guess ill have to finish this with a special move I think. " Go special move, Sphinx sand storm" I yell as chunks of stadium are ripped up by the winds from Sphinx and crushed into sand. "counter it Hades, Special move death god flames"!!!!! Max shouts as Hades bursts into a pillar of flame and clashes into Sphinx. There is a massive explosion and when the smoke clears both beys have disappeared and they both fall from the sky. they crash at their owners feet not spinning. "Wow you have gotten a lot stronger, I can't believe it was a tie" I say excitedly to Max. "Yea i really can't wait for my match now man. hahaha" Spoiler (Click to View) Max Evans the ref calls. "Well your up buddy, you better win this match" Me and Ty say cheerfully. As he walks into the arena we see his opponent. "Who is that"? Ty says. "I don't know" I say looking at the man in the long black cloak. He pulls out his bey a diablo kerbecs bd145rs. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!! Max yells, but the cloaked man remains silent. The mans bey settles at the center of the stadium. Max's bey keeps clashing into the kerbecs but it doesn't do a thing. "That rubber sharp tip is making it impossible to move" Max says with a worried look on his face. "Special move, death gods flame"!!!!! Max yells. His bey bursts into flame and clashes into kerbecs. there is a huge explosion and when the smoke clears kerbecs is spinning perfectly unscratched. The cloaked man punches at the air and his bey releases a black electrified shock wave. The wave slams into Hades. "no Hades"!!! Max yells. The shockwave settles and hades is wobbling like crazy. "poor every last bit of your power into this last attack Hades!!!!! Go special move, hell's soul inferno" Max bellows as fireballs start raining from the sky and the stadium begins to spew magma. The cloaked man punches the air again with both fists and his bey released a huge beam of black fire and lightning like energy. A huge shockwave is released in the clash. The shockwave is so large it starts knocking over people in the audience. Max flies back against the wall and the wall cracks on impact. somehow the cloaked man remains completely still. When all The smoke clears Max's bey had stopped spinning and the cloaked mans bey was spinning perfectly. Spoiler (Click to View) "OH MY GOD DUDE I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LOST" Me and Ty said stunned. "It's ok guys I didn't think I would win the tournament anyway" Max said sadly. 30 minutes later "Sonny Parker" the ref calls. "Well looks like I'm up guys" I say "Good luck". They both say. My opponent is Luke Bell, a kid a bit taller than me about 6ft with huge muscles and long brown hair, we have been friends for a long time and iv never beat him but I have gotten stronger sense last time. "Ready Luke" I say "You bet". He says readying his basalt byxis 230wd. "3.2.1. GO SHOOT"!!!!! We both yell. Byxis lands in the center of the stadium. "End it quick Sphinx". I yell as Sphinx unleashes a furious barrage attack. Byxis doges the attack and sends back his own barrage. "Nice attack Luke". I say heading for the center of the stadium. "Go Sphinx, pyramid defense. A wall of sand rises up around sphinx an solidifies into a brick wall. Byxis unleashes a powerful attack and breaks down the wall. Byxis slams Sphinx and pushes it out of the center. "Go Byxis, Destiny armageddon" Luke chants. Byxis is surrounded in magnetic energy drawing in Sphinx. Just as Byxis and Sphinx make contact Byxis releases a huge shockwave. When the smoke clears Sphinx is wobbling. "Fine i guess i have to use a new special move just for if i had to fight you Luke, Sphinx special move, Ancient explosion"!!!!!!!!! I yell. The stadium literally explodes in a blast of sand. When the smoke settles Byxis is laying at Luke's feet. I won I thought Im moving on to the finals Spoiler (Click to View) "Ty Miller". The ref calls. "Im so nervous". Ty says. "Its ok man you got this" I said obviously lying. Ty walks out to the stadium to meet the man in the cloak. "Time to get revenge for max". Ty mumbles. readying his pegasus. The man readies his kerbecs and Ty yells. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!! The two beys clash in midair releasing a shockwave then slam to the ground. "Go assault mode pegasus" Ty shouts. Pegasus goes at kerbecs with extreme speed and power. The man punches the air with both hands and lets out a huge bellow. A three headed dog emerges from the bey bellowing black flame. Before pegasus gets a chance to counter it is hit by a ball of fire. There is explosion after explosion but when the smoke clears kerbecs is spinning perfectly and pegasus is shattered in tiny pieces at Ty's feet. Ty collapses crying because of the shattered pegasus. "How could you". he shouts. "Sonny is going to get you back" he yelled. "he'll blow your bey to pieces". And as soon as he said that i knew i had to win for both Ty and Max's sake. "Im going to rip you limb from limb". I yell at the man who just chuckles and walks away. THE NEXT DAY I had trained till 3am the night before and now i was up at 5am to train more. The cite finals are today. I was ready for this match. Sense yesterday my rip tower had doubled and my control over my bey had increased 10X and I had a fiery BeySpirit to match. When i got to the stadium there was a huge crowd waiting i stepped up to the stadium where the cloaked man was already waiting. "Are you ready to lose". i said with a confident grin. "Ready!!!!!!!! 3!2!1! GO!!!!!! SHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!" Spoiler (Click to View) The two beys clash at full force. I have felt weaker shockwaves coming from two special moves clashing thats when i finally realized what i was up against. He had added a cs tip to his kerbecs instead of rs. Good thing i put Sphinx's fusion wheel in defense mode and his track in boost mode. I think. Thanks to kerbecs new tip the masked man unleashes a powerful barrage attack, but it barely phases my Sphinx. "Pyramid wave" i shout as a huge wall of sand is fired out by Sphinx. The man punches the air and his bey is surrounded by a black aura and he slams into the wall of sand and easily blows through it and slams into Sphinx. "I won't let you win that easily" I shout as Sphinx pushes Kerbecs back. "Send him flying Sphinx" I yell. The man hesitates i can tell he's not used to people being able to match his power. "If you haven't noticed yet, i have gotten a lot stronger sense yesterday" I say with a smile. "Sorry but you are going to actually have to try to beat me." I say as Sphinx throws Kerbecs into the wall of the stadium. The man lets out a grunt and Kerbecs unleashes a barrage of powerful attacks on Sphinx. I was defenseless the attacks were so fast and so powerful that i was unable to defend against them. The only way i would win this is if i went all out using my new special move. "Special move sand cha..." i start to say but am cut of buy another huge attack that releases a powerful shockwave. I keep trying to use my special move but the furious barrage attacks and the insane shockwaves are preventing me from doing so. He is actually trying against me, he's unstoppable I think. I try to get in a defensive stance or counter the barrage but i am unsuccessful at both as the barrage continues. Just as i am about to give up i remember my promise to win against the man. I can feel the bladers spirit building up inside of me. As the power swells up inside of me i release a loud bellow. Myself and my beyblade are both surrounded in a golden aura. Now all of Kerbecs' attacks are just bouncing off of Sphinx. I roar loudly and Sphinx charges forward knocking Kerbecs out of its attack pattern. "GO SPHINX, SAND CHAMBER CRUSH!!!!!!!!!" I yell as sand starts to surround the stadium. The sand forms a large twister around Sphinx who then smashes into Kerbecs. As the two beys make contact the sand starts to solidify and gravitate towards Kerbecs. The sand starts to form a pyramid shape . Finally the pyramid fully solidified around Kerbecs and spinning atop the pyramid is Sphinx. The pyramid then collapses and i see Kerbecs in the center of the stadium covered completely in sand. "I won!!!!!!" I yell choking back tears. I turn to the crowd and yell it again. As i turn back around Sphinx flies into my hand. I look to the other side of the stadium to tell the cloaked man "Good game" but as i look to the other side i see he has disappeared. I shrug and continue out of the Beypark and as i leave i think This is only the beginning. Next states tournament here i come. Spoiler (Click to View) "Sooonnnnnnnyy!!!!!!" I hear my mom yell. "You going to be late for the tournament if you don't wake up now." My eyes shoot open. "Thats an hour away, How will we make it." I yell to her downstairs. I slide into my black skinny jeans, Through on an adidas shirt, Put on my adidas shoes, and a black hoodie then run out the door. One hour later "I can't believe i made it on time." I say running to the back room to ready for my match. When i walk in Ty and max are waiting for me. "How did you guys get back here" I say with a surprised look on my face. "They let us back here. They said your mom got us backstage passes". "Awesome guys, Now you can watch me become state champion!!!!!!" I say with a smile. "Well i better get out there my match will start soon. When i get to the entrance to the arena i see there are four different colored stadiums. "Why are there a yellow, red, blue and a green stadium???" I ask one of the security guards confused. "We will dill divide into four groups and have four battle royals at the same time." He responds. Just as he says this a voice says to look up at the screens and it shows the groups. "Im in red block." I say. I walk to the stadium. The ref walks up and says. "Are you bladders ready??? 3.2.1. GO SHOOT." "Trash, them all Sphinx!!!!!!" I yell as my bey knocks out three other beys. Awesome. I think Just 22 to go "Go again, Charge." I yell as Sphinx knocks out five more beys. Across the stadium I see a kid about my age a little shorter than me who is yelling. "Go phantom Cygnus take them down!!!!!" He yells as his Cygnus knocks out 7 beys. Wow he's strong. I think. A couple of the others manage to knock out one or two beys but soon enough me and the kid with the Cygnus are the last ones standing. "Charge Sphinx." I yell. Sphinx smashes Cygnus at full force and sends it flying. When Cygnus lands though it appears perfectly unharmed. "How did y..." I start to say then i realize that it has a w145 track and an EWD tip. The beys stamina was so great that the attack barely harmed it. No way. I think. "I'll finish this with a special move, Go Sphinx, sand chamber crush." I yell as the pyramid surounds Cygnus. As the pyramid explodes Cygnus has stopped spinning. I one. I think. "Semifinals here i come!!!!!" RE: MY 4D STORY - Tech - Jul. 24, 2012 I like it, but you should add more description and maybe make it longer. Also, PD is a real tip, (Polish Defense) just pointing that out RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 I will I was just trying to get it rolling with chapter 1 RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 Chapter 2 Spoiler (Click to View) "Ty Miller." the announcer called. Max and I watched him walk down to the stadium. His opponent is a long time rival if all of us. His name was Jason and he was a tall muscular guy with a buzz cut whereing all camo. It was the ultimate power battle Ty being the strongest one of us with his huge biceps. He watched as Jason redied his diablo Capricorn df145mf. Ty put his Pegasus on his launche, they both look intensely at each other and yell "3.2.1. Go shoot!!!!!!!!!!". The two beys clash at the center of the stadium which causes a huge shockwave Pegasus recoils but rebounds back at Capricorn "go Pegasus barrage mode" Ty yells pegasus' wheel changes and he charges Capricorn hitting it countless ted do fast it is nearly invisible. It is really taking a toll on Capricorn untill Jason yells "Go Capricorn, dark steel horn". Capricorn becomes surrounded by a black aura and takes to the sky and comes back down in a black twister. "Intercept it Pegasus, blitz tornado blast"!!! Ty yells. Pegasus is engulfed in a giant whirlwind blast heading twords Capricorn. When the attacks meet there is a huge explosion and they are both flung against the wall. When the smoke clears Capricorn has stoped spinning and Pegasus is wobbleing like crazy. Ty and Pegasus collapse and we have to rush him to the hospital. Sense he has been injured so bad they decide to postpone the rest if the tournament till tommorow so he can be their for the matches. In the meantime me and Max decide to train. RE: MY 4D STORY - Tech - Jul. 24, 2012 The story line is good, but you need longer chapters, more description and details, and better grammar. RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 I would like more people to vote and comment to help improve my story RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 Chapter 3 Spoiler (Click to View) The next morning i woke up at 5am, brush my medium length black hair out of my eyes, put on my grey skinny jeans, skrillex mothership tour shirt, my red adidas' and my hat and headphones and ran down stairs. I grabbed a protein shake, wore a note to my parents that said i was at the beypark training and ran out side and hoped on my bike. Max as usual was the first one their and Ty wasn't being released from the hospital till 9am. We decided to get training."You ready to battle Max." I said. "You bet" he announced readying his hades. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!!!! We both shout. Our beys clash in midair shooting out a huge shockwave. The two beys slam the ground with extreme force cracking the stadium. "go Sphinx". I shout. Sphinx hits Hades with extreme force but the defense type Hades is not moved at all. "nice try Sonny but that week attack won't work on me". Max shouts. "Fine then how about this, Sphinx barrage attack" I shout. Sphinx unleashes a super fast and powerful barrage of hits that Hades can't block or dodge. "Hades counter attack". Max says as hades veers of and slams into the attacking Sphinx. I guess ill have to finish this with a special move I think. " Go special move, Sphinx sand storm" I yell as chunks of stadium are ripped up by the winds from Sphinx and crushed into sand. "counter it Hades, Special move death god flames"!!!!! Max shouts as Hades bursts into a pillar of flame and clashes into Sphinx. There is a massive explosion and when the smoke clears both beys have disappeared and they both fall from the sky. they crash at their owners feet not spinning. "Wow you have gotten a lot stronger, I can't believe it was a tie" I say excitedly to Max. "Yea i really can't wait for my match now man. hahaha" RE: MY 4D STORY - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012 Needs better grammer... Other than that, it seems interesting. RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 24, 2012 This one Is for sure better than my last story (it really really sucked) well thanks for the positive feedback I'll keep writing RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012 Chapter 4 Spoiler (Click to View) Max Evans the ref calls. "Well your up buddy, you better win this match" Me and Ty say cheerfully. As he walks into the arena we see his opponent. "Who is that"? Ty says. "I don't know" I say looking at the man in the long black cloak. He pulls out his bey a diablo kerbecs bd145rs. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!! Max yells, but the cloaked man remains silent. The mans bey settles at the center of the stadium. Max's bey keeps clashing into the kerbecs but it doesn't do a thing. "That rubber sharp tip is making it impossible to move" Max says with a worried look on his face. "Special move, death gods flame"!!!!! Max yells. His bey bursts into flame and clashes into kerbecs. there is a huge explosion and when the smoke clears kerbecs is spinning perfectly unscratched. The cloaked man punches at the air and his bey releases a black electrified shock wave. The wave slams into Hades. "no Hades"!!! Max yells. The shockwave settles and hades is wobbling like crazy. "poor every last bit of your power into this last attack Hades!!!!! Go special move, hell's soul inferno" Max bellows as fireballs start raining from the sky and the stadium begins to spew magma. The cloaked man punches the air again with both fists and his bey released a huge beam of black fire and lightning like energy. A huge shockwave is released in the clash. The shockwave is so large it starts knocking over people in the audience. Max flies back against the wall and the wall cracks on impact. somehow the cloaked man remains completely still. When all The smoke clears Max's bey had stopped spinning and the cloaked mans bey was spinning perfectly. RE: MY 4D STORY - Crona - Jul. 25, 2012 Its setanly is interesting my friend and i make our own bey stories too. RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012 What do you say that made no sense bald eagle RE: MY 4D STORY - Crona - Jul. 25, 2012 Oops i ment it is setarnly interesting, my friend and i make our own bey stories too. RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012 Chapter 5 Spoiler (Click to View) "OH MY GOD DUDE I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LOST" Me and Ty said stunned. "It's ok guys I didn't think I would win the tournament anyway" Max said sadly. 30 minutes later "Sonny Parker" the ref calls. "Well looks like I'm up guys" I say "Good luck". They both say. My opponent is Luke Bell, a kid a bit taller than me about 6ft with huge muscles and long brown hair, we have been friends for a long time and iv never beat him but I have gotten stronger sense last time. "Ready Luke" I say "You bet". He says readying his basalt byxis 230wd. "3.2.1. GO SHOOT"!!!!! We both yell. Byxis lands in the center of the stadium. "End it quick Sphinx". I yell as Sphinx unleashes a furious barrage attack. Byxis doges the attack and sends back his own barrage. "Nice attack Luke". I say heading for the center of the stadium. "Go Sphinx, pyramid defense. A wall of sand rises up around sphinx an solidifies into a brick wall. Byxis unleashes a powerful attack and breaks down the wall. Byxis slams Sphinx and pushes it out of the center. "Go Byxis, Destiny armageddon" Luke chants. Byxis is surrounded in magnetic energy drawing in Sphinx. Just as Byxis and Sphinx make contact Byxis releases a huge shockwave. When the smoke clears Sphinx is wobbling. "Fine i guess i have to use a new special move just for if i had to fight you Luke, Sphinx special move, Ancient explosion"!!!!!!!!! I yell. The stadium literally explodes in a blast of sand. When the smoke settles Byxis is laying at Luke's feet. I won I thought Im moving on to the finals RE: MY 4D STORY - Voltage - Jul. 25, 2012 Chapter 6 Spoiler (Click to View) "Ty Miller". The ref calls. "Im so nervous". Ty says. "Its ok man you got this" I said obviously lying. Ty walks out to the stadium to meet the man in the cloak. "Time to get revenge for max". Ty mumbles. readying his pegasus. The man readies his kerbecs and Ty yells. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT"!!!!!!!! The two beys clash in midair releasing a shockwave then slam to the ground. "Go assault mode pegasus" Ty shouts. Pegasus goes at kerbecs with extreme speed and power. The man punches the air with both hands and lets out a huge bellow. A three headed dog emerges from the bey bellowing black flame. Before pegasus gets a chance to counter it is hit by a ball of fire. There is explosion after explosion but when the smoke clears kerbecs is spinning perfectly and pegasus is shattered in tiny pieces at Ty's feet. Ty collapses crying because of the shattered pegasus. "How could you". he shouts. "Sonny is going to get you back" he yelled. "he'll blow your bey to pieces". And as soon as he said that i knew i had to win for both Ty and Max's sake. "Im going to rip you limb from limb". I yell at the man who just chuckles and walks away. THE NEXT DAY I had trained till 3am the night before and now i was up at 5am to train more. The cite finals are today. I was ready for this match. Sense yesterday my rip tower had doubled and my control over my bey had increased 10X and I had a fiery BeySpirit to match. When i got to the stadium there was a huge crowd waiting i stepped up to the stadium where the cloaked man was already waiting. "Are you ready to lose". i said with a confident grin. "Ready!!!!!!!! 3!2!1! GO!!!!!! SHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!" RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" - Voltage - Jul. 27, 2012 Anybody got some ideas for bladers from other country's for the world tournament in the story RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Kye#4 - Jul. 27, 2012 I have another character for you Name : Kye Age:11 Beyeath Quetzaqoatle B appearence:Brown hair, white glasses, yellow t-shirt, white hoodie,dark blue shorts RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 02, 2012 Sorry i haven't made a new chapter in a while i'v been a bit busy but here i go. Chapter 7 Spoiler (Click to View) The two beys clash at full force. I have felt weaker shockwaves coming from two special moves clashing thats when i finally realized what i was up against. He had added a cs tip to his kerbecs instead of rs. Good thing i put Sphinx's fusion wheel in defense mode and his track in boost mode. I think. Thanks to kerbecs new tip the masked man unleashes a powerful barrage attack, but it barely phases my Sphinx. "Pyramid wave" i shout as a huge wall of sand is fired out by Sphinx. The man punches the air and his bey is surrounded by a black aura and he slams into the wall of sand and easily blows through it and slams into Sphinx. "I won't let you win that easily" I shout as Sphinx pushes Kerbecs back. "Send him flying Sphinx" I yell. The man hesitates i can tell he's not used to people being able to match his power. "If you haven't noticed yet, i have gotten a lot stronger sense yesterday" I say with a smile. "Sorry but you are going to actually have to try to beat me." I say as Sphinx throws Kerbecs into the wall of the stadium. The man lets out a grunt and Kerbecs unleashes a barrage of powerful attacks on Sphinx. I was defenseless the attacks were so fast and so powerful that i was unable to defend against them. The only way i would win this is if i went all out using my new special move. "Special move sand cha..." i start to say but am cut of buy another huge attack that releases a powerful shockwave. I keep trying to use my special move but the furious barrage attacks and the insane shockwaves are preventing me from doing so. He is actually trying against me, he's unstoppable I think. I try to get in a defensive stance or counter the barrage but i am unsuccessful at both as the barrage continues. Just as i am about to give up i remember my promise to win against the man. I can feel the bladers spirit building up inside of me. As the power swells up inside of me i release a loud bellow. Myself and my beyblade are both surrounded in a golden aura. Now all of Kerbecs' attacks are just bouncing off of Sphinx. I roar loudly and Sphinx charges forward knocking Kerbecs out of its attack pattern. "GO SPHINX, SAND CHAMBER CRUSH!!!!!!!!!" I yell as sand starts to surround the stadium. The sand forms a large twister around Sphinx who then smashes into Kerbecs. As the two beys make contact the sand starts to solidify and gravitate towards Kerbecs. The sand starts to form a pyramid shape . Finally the pyramid fully solidified around Kerbecs and spinning atop the pyramid is Sphinx. The pyramid then collapses and i see Kerbecs in the center of the stadium covered completely in sand. "I won!!!!!!" I yell choking back tears. I turn to the crowd and yell it again. As i turn back around Sphinx flies into my hand. I look to the other side of the stadium to tell the cloaked man "Good game" but as i look to the other side i see he has disappeared. I shrug and continue out of the Beypark and as i leave i think This is only the beginning. Next states tournament here i come. RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - flippy4212 - Aug. 06, 2012 MAKE MORE IT WAS REALLY GOOD RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 06, 2012 Thanks no one really reads it so I don't really bother anymore RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - flippy4212 - Aug. 08, 2012 i still read it RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 08, 2012 Chapter 8 is up in the OP RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 10, 2012 Does anyone have a better idea for the title of this story??? RE: MY 4D STORY "RISE TO THE TOP" [accepting requests] - Voltage - Aug. 19, 2012 Seriously does anyone read or care about this story I want to know before I keep writing please tell me if yo do |