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(Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Printable Version

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(Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Katniss - Jul. 07, 2012

I'm going to continue this hopefully. (Fidio = Vi-di-o)

Comic and cover.

Chapter one
Chapter Two



RE: (Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Fantomu - Jul. 07, 2012

This is wayyyyy too short to be a chapter. You should make chapters longer.


RE: (Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Katniss - Jul. 13, 2012

Chapter one is complete!


RE: (Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Katniss - Jul. 16, 2012

I've drawn and editid a cover and a little comic * , can you tell me what you think of them please?

*Not exact same story


RE: (Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Duck - Jul. 17, 2012

Hm... This is very interesting! I'm excited to read what happens next, but you should try to make the chapters a bit longer! I love your drawings!


RE: (Story)When time stops (Taking charecter requests) - Nitrohammer - Jul. 17, 2012

Well i like the story, but im upset that it goes into the big plot changes so quick. Take things slow.