(Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -FINAL CHAPTER TYPED AND POSTED!- (12/2/12) - beycrafter01 - Jun. 29, 2012
We all know how the first Metal Fight series went, Gingka had finally won the Beyblade Championships, and was finally titled the Best Blader in the World. What you DON'T know is the story that happened EXACTLY AFTER THAT (SUSPENSE!)!!!
(Saga Story:1) The Bey From the Dark Unkown
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Chapter 1: The Mysterious Murderer When Gingka had arrived home from the championship tournament, he found a little note in what appeared to be ransom letters on his front door:
"MeEt Me In ThE cHaMpIoNsHiP aReNa DuRiNg ClOsEd HoUrS aRoUnD 12:00 mIdNiGhT. CoMe AlOnE.
sIgNeD,
cHaLlEnGeR."
Who was this guy? Why did he leave this note? Was Gingka really going to show up at midnight on a night of New Moon? I don't know. Probably to challenge Gingka. For whatever reason, OF COURSE HE WAS!
It was midnight, Gingka arrived at the championship arena. He was surprised to find that the doors were unlocked. He pushed through, and saw that the arena was filled with pitch darkness. All was dark, except 1 beystadium. He steadily walked toward the stadium, thinking that he should just turn back, and not have agreed to show up. Just as he was about to turn back and run home, he heard a voice:
"I've been expecting you,...GINGKA."
"How do you know my name? Who are you? What do you want? Show yourself!"
"Does my mysteriousness frighten you, Gingka? Is the #1 Blader in the World scared of the silent dark?"
"I'M NOT SCARED! SHOW YOURSELF IF YOU'RE NOT EITHER!"
"Hmm hmm hmm, your confusion amuses me."
"RRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!"
"Don't hurt yourself, I only challenge you to a mere battle is all. And I KNOW you can't say no to an addictive opportunity to battle such as this."
"So THAT'S what this is all about! A shy guy who likes to give a little kick to battle requests, huh? HAHA! WELL BRING IT ON!"
"Slow your roll, eager beaver. I intend to add a little more "kick" to the battle. A deal, if you're up to it."
"A deal? What exactly do you have in mind?"
"If I win, I get half of your Galaxy Pegasus' energy."
"SAY WHAAAA!?!?!?! WHY WOULD I AGREE TO THAT!?!?!?!?!?1"
"If you win, I'll give you all of my energy, and your Galaxy Pegasus will evolve 2 FORMS!!!!"
"2 forms, you say?!?! Pegasus, you think it's worth it?"
(Galaxy Pegasus flashes in flaming energy for a "yes")
"ALRIGHT, GUY! IT'S A DEAL!"
"Shall we battle then?"
Gingka readies Galaxy Pegasus, and awaits for the mysterious challenger to start counting down.
Challenger: "3!"
Gingka: "2!"
Both: "1! LET IT RRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIP!"
Pegasus soars into the beystadium, as Gingka is surprised to see a beyblade he has never seen in his life slingshot from the darkness, into the illuminated stadium. It has a spiked energy ring on top of a cosmic black spiraling fusion wheel, with spiral spikes facing clockwise. He can peek at the track and tip, a wide 130 track with a wall of rubber surrounding the middle of the track, and the tip being a fat version of Metal Ball. The right-spinning bey has a facebolt with a ninjastar on it.
"WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THAT!?!?!"
Pegasus and the never-before-seen beyblade circle each other, the opponent following and catching up to Pegasus from behind.
"PSYCH ATTACK, PEGASUS!"
Pegasus makes a millisecond stop and charges backwards at the other. The attack backs off the bey, but then it speeds towards Pegasus and clashes repeatedly at a steady, but fast rate. Constant jabs in the gaps of Pegasus' wheel that are normally impossible to mark specifically.
"What the? How is that POSSIBLE?!?"
Pegasus is knocked into the middle of the stadium. The bey makes a few steady circles around the stadium, and then comes charging into the middle. Gingka notices some air is circling around the bey's wheel. The bey then circles around Pegasus closely. Pegasus starts to follow the pattern of spinning with the bey, while staying in the center spot of the stadium. Pegasus seems to be pulled with the force of the other bey, like being pulled in by a strong force. The bey, then, closes in, jumps, and hits straight on the edge of Pegasus' wheel, sending Pegasus up into the air, flipping like a coin. The bey claims the center of the stadium, and starts to accelerate in spin, but stays in place. The bey's going so fast, it could almost drill right through, all the way to the center of the Earth. Wind clutters and is pulled from all over inside the arena towards the bey. A voice bursts in the middle of the action:
"OBDUCTION VORTEX, NOW!"
A force bursts from the center of the bey and moves through the gathered wind. The wind darkens, and turns into a gigantic BLACK WHOLE that fills the ENTIRE BOTTOM HALF OF THE STADIUM!!!!! Pegasus finally "bothers to drop in ( HA )" and starts falling into the black whole. Pegasus is caught into the spin of the black whole, and is circling through the current of the black whole, like water draining from the sink.
"WHAT IN THE NAME OF HADES KERBECS IS GOING ON!?!?!?!?! PEGASUS, GET OUT OF THERE!!!!!!"
Pegasus finally arrives to the middle of the black whole, and is shot straight up into the air by a beam of shadow shards. As Pegasus is jabbed on his way up, the black whole is absorbed into the bey. Then, the bey skyrockets at the airborn Pegasus, and throws a whole bunch of grenades of attacking in every molecular corner and way and inch possible, AND MORE!!! Gingka, and even Pegasus himself, are flabbergasted that Pegasus didn't explode like he was hit by 5 atmoic nuclear bombs, which is exactly how it looked. Pegasus was lucky to come out with deep dents and scrapes. Meanwhile, after that whole chaos, the murderous bey is spinning as clean as a freshly-scrubbed window, like it was just launched into the stadium.
"THAT THING IS A MONSTROUSITY!!! IT HAS TO BE POWER INJECTED!!! A SCIENTIFIC PROJECT GONE WRONG!!! SOMETHING!!!"
The bey flings itself back into the darkness.
"Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB is the name. The perfect, unbeatable beyblade in the entire universe. Well, this was fun and all, but we had a deal."
"WHAT!?!?! THAT THING ALMOST DECINIGRATED GALAXY PEGASUS, US, AND THE ENTIRE ARENA EVEN!!!"
"Well what do you expect from a sinister looking bey that you have no knowledge about? Did you think when you saw it, it would be as weak as paper? Now, we had a deal."
"I'M NOT HANDING OVER ANY OF PEGASUS' ENERGY!! AND I'M SURE HE WO...."
(Pegasus lights up in blue, flaming energy and hovers in the middle of the stadium)
"Pegasus? PEGASUS?!?"
"You sure yell a lot. I can't believe your lungs and voice are so efficient like that. Or at least, in your case, decently tuned (snicker)."
(The energy starts flowing from Pegasus into the dark side, where the opponent is.)
"PEGASUS!!! NO!!!"
(Pegasus' flaming energy is less illuminated, and Pegasus falls into the stadium)
"Pleasure doing business with you. So much for #1 Blader. I've seen more of a fight given from even the lowest class of champions, and even 3rd Place bladers.
"YOU GET OVER HERE YOU LITTLE MURDERER!! WHO EXACTLY DO YOU THINK YOU....."
(Ginkga rushes over to the opponent's side, but he does not sense anyone, or any beyblade, there anymore, or in/near the stadium or arena, like... no one was ever there.
"Are???"
Gingka, mixed with emotions: fury, sorrow, puzzlingness, rushes to the energy-deprived, dented Galaxy Pegasus, picks him up, and hurries home.
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Chapter 2: The Discovery When Gingka arrived home, he was in utter disbelief and dispare. He couldn't believe what had happened. His life could have been taken before his very eyes in the confusion. Pegasus had lost the will to battle again for a while. He was shaking so much, his parts were loosening. Gingka put Pegasus on a warm towel to relax him, and Gingka put one on his head. Maybe they could have possibly imagined it all. A very vivd and physical imagination. They stayed in Gingka's room for days, trying to relax from what they had experienced. Gingka would come out rarely for snacks now and then, but was unseen when he had, giving the appearance that he never stepped foot out of his room to others. After almost half a month, Madoka arrived.
"Gingka?!? Gingka are you home?!?! Are you dead or something?!?!?!"
(Gingka only gives silence)
(Madoka is worried, and automatically goes for the key under the mat, and opens the door.)"Gingka!?!?! Where ARE you?!?!?!?"(She heres a weak voice, almost relating to Gingka's)
"How did you get in?"
"The key. Is that you Gingka? Where are you?"
"My bedroom."
(Madoka hurries to his room)
"Gingka, you look like you've seen a planet load of ghosts!"
"I think I've experience something like that, too."
"What do you mean?"
"I went to the championship arena at midnight, and accepted a battle with some guy, I didn't see who he was, or even catch a name. But look what he did to Pegasus. (Points to the dented bey, almost falling to pieces)"
"PEGASUS!!! OH MY!! I'VE NEVER SEEN AS MANY DENTS AND AS BAD SCRAPES AS THESE ON ANY BEY!!! WHAT HAPPENED?!?!?"
"Has it ever occured to you that we might have the habit of emphasizing excitement with yelling a lot?"
"So? We're kids. Our voices are young enough to go on with all the yelling. We yell during competitions and things all the time, and we can still sing. Well, those of us that can/do sing, anyways."
"I guess you're right on that one. Anyways, he had this out-of-this-world bey that I've never seen in my entire life. I don't think anyone has."
"What did it look like?"
"It was very sinister. It had a bladed-design for a energy ring, like a ninja star, only with 2x the spikes than an actual ninja star. It had a fusion wheel with a cosmic black coloring, and looked like a black whole, or vortex. The track was as wide as AD145, but looked like a normal 130. It had a sheild of rubber rapped around it. The tip was as wide as WD, but looked like MB. He called it Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB."
"Woah, that's a lot for a bey name."
"Do you think you could look it up in the portable computer?"
"I can try."(Madoka types in Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB)"There isn't any detail of it whatsoever."
"Not even a constellation?"
"There isn't a constellation of it, no."
"Hmmmmmm...."
"Hmmmmmm...."
"WAIT! I have a theory, is there a setting for beys from space?"
"Are you kidding? Why would there be a setting for...HEY! Would you look at that, a SPACE search!! Who would've thought?"
"Try typing it in that search, Madoka."
"Ok."(Types)"Look, here it is! It says here that Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB has attack, stamina, and defense?"
"Didn't look like defense to me."
"Apparently it has 2 MODES!"
"2 MODES!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS?!?!? THAT THING ISN'T A MONSTER ENOUGH WITH JUST 1 MODE?!?!!?"
"It is a Right + Left Spin bey. On right, the clockwise extendants jab at the opponent, and unleash deathly attacks. On left, since the extendants, or "vortex", are facing clockwise, counter clockwise movement deflects and pushes away the opponent, while adding some minor jabbing into the mix."
"THAT'S WILD!!"
"I'M NOT DONE YET!!"
"OK, OK, go on! Geez."
"Annnyywaaaaaysss, Vortex Ninjastar's track means "Heavy Rubber Support", meaning the growing wideness from bottom to top is for supporting the extending width of the wheel. The heavy rubber acts as a sheild for the track, deflecting any and every attack. Also, the heaviness on the track helps for defense. The tip means "Wide Metal Ball", being a wider version of metal ball, as the name implies, and giving more defense and stamina."
"Wow, a stable mix of defense, stamina, and attack???? That thing is OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!"
"Literally, at that. It says it comes directly from the dark matter of a BLACK WHOLE!!!"
"Should've seen that coming."
"Well, what are we going to do, Gingka?"
"Pegasus obviously still can't fight. I don't know if he'll ever be able to fight AGAIN!"
"Well, we have to do SOMETHING! THERE'S A MURDEROUS BLACK WHOLE RUNNING AROUND ON EARTH!!!"
"Gather up Ryuga and Masamune. I have a plan to get this guy, whoever, or even whatever he is."
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Chapter 3: Searching in the Dark Gingka, Madoka, Ryuga, and Masamune meet up at central park. What exactly is Gingka's plan? After the horror fest he and Pegasus went through, he's actually trying to hunt this guy down? And bring his friends down with him? I sure hope he knows what he's doing.
Masamune and Ryuga: "Gingka, what is it?"
Gingka: "Hey guys, I asked you guys to meet me here to help me catch an unknown blader that might possibly murder beys for their energy all over the city, the state, the WORLD possibly!"
Masamune: "Are you sure you're not over-reacting with this one? You sometimes do that."
Ryuga: "I've gotta agree with unicorno boy on this one. There isn't any bey in the universe that could crush me, nor L-Drago."
Masamune: "I'm flattered that you agree, but watch it with the unicorno boy thing, dragon breathe."
Ryuga: "Oh, like I haven't heard that one before."
Madoka: "QUIT ARGUING YOU BUNCH OF CHILDREN! THIS IS SERIOUS!"
Masamune and Ryuga: "OK, OK! SORRY!"
Gingka: "Thanks....Madoka....Um, anyways. this bey is a literal destructor from the dark. Show them the stats, Madoka."
(Madoka hands them the portable computer)
Masamune: "SWEET MOTHER OF STRIKER THAT'S A BAD-NEWS BEY!!"
Ryuga: "This thing's made up of pure dark matter straight from inside a black whole? Out of all the things that could form out of a black whole, I mean honestly. This is kind of weak for a black whole itself."
Gingka: "Though true, that's not the point. It crushed Galaxy Pegasus pretty badly." (Pulls out the roughed-up beyblade) "I didn't think he would make it. I thought all the energy would be bodyslammed out of him."
Masamune: "GEEZ! And if this is the least it can do, let's hope no bey has to experience what above worse it is that it can do."
Gingka: "That's why I'm going to find him, and I need your guys' help."
Madoka: "Whatever you need us for, Gingka, we got your back."
Ryuga: "Plus, it could rise my boss level over the top, even though it's already above above-average. Unicorno boy, on the other hand...(snicker)"
Masamune: "Grrrrrrrr......"
Gingka: "GUYS!! You can settle your little feud later. Right now, we need to find this guy and bey before too much damage spreads."
Masamune: "Fine. So what is it exactly that you need us to do?"
Gingka: "I want you guys to grab friends and connections, and spread out in every present tournament there is. But only the REAL special ones. He has to be there to soak up more energy from star-class bladers. Look for a shadowy figure, or a blader that does what he can to avoid as much high sunlight, or even any bright light, as possible."
Ryuga: "You got all of that from a quick terrorizing take-down? Wow."
Madoka: "What about you? What are you going to do?"
Gingka: "He'll probably most likely go to tournaments I'm heading to, watching my every move. He could be at this very moment. Which is exactly why, Masamune, I need your striker twin. It's the closest relation of bey to Pegasus."
Masamune: "Ok. I don't use Striker II all that much. I don't get the same energy bond with it than original Striker."
So the 4 split up, and attend the biggest battles. From rich downtown, to popular midtown. From "Masters Meet-Up" to "Spark 'Till It Burns". All the action-packed, popular, and mega top-teir battles they could attend to. From cage battles to obstacle battles, underwater to high-elevation. No sign of the mysterious blader for miles. Then, Gingka was invited to the "Champions' Blade-Off". Every known champion from around the world was going to be there. And what better place to find the perfect energy source from a champion than in a battle like that. A battle Gingka knew the mysterious blader would be drawn to. And the other ironic part is, it's being held at the CHAMPIONSHIP ARENA!!! Gingka knew the guy probably wouldn't show up if he had his friends, so he didn't give them any notice about it. He tried giving Pegasus some start-ups, and tried to train him for the next few days, up to the big tournament. Will Pegasus pull through? Will Gingka find the mysterious blader? Is finding him even worth it? We'll find out soon enough. --------------------------------(END OF CHAPTER 3)--------------------------------------------
Chapter 4: Spot the Dot Through Hade's Gate Remember when Metal Masters came out, and nearing the end Damian came out to play? Well, here's something ELSE you don't know: DAMIAN WAS MET BEFORE METAL MASTERS!!!!
It was the night of the "Champions' Blade-Off" tournament, and Gingka wasn't too positive on his plan. What was his plan, anyways? Is Pegasus truly good-to-go? Gingka continued inside the championship arena with caution, and keeping an eye out for the man from dark space.
Announcer: "WELCOOOOOOME CHAAAMPIOOOOONNSSS!!!! ARE YOU READY TO COMPETE WITH THE TRUE BEST-OF-THE-BEST?!?!?! GOOOOOOD!!!! HERE IS HOW THE FIRST ROUND WILL GO: DAMIAN VERSUS SHOMAN, GINGKA VERSUS TIMSU, MARKEL VERSUS MEELO, SHITAKA VERSUS FEFE, AND MORONA VERSUS MIDUKO!!! READY YOUR BEYS!! 3! 2! 1! LET IT RRRIIIIIIPPPPP!!!!!"
After many intense clashing in all the stadiums, beys being smashed to the ground, blown through the wall, and forever launched into the heavens, it finally came to the final 2 champs to claim the title of being the Overruling Champ.
"WELL FELLAS AND LADY-FELLAS, WE HAVE FINALLY COME TO THE FINAL 2!!! FIRST, WE HAVE DAMIAN FROM HADES CITY!!! DAMIAN, TELL US ABOUT YOU AND YOUR BEY!!!!"
"Well, Mr. Announcer, I am the representative of Hades City, even before I was crowned champion,...again. My bey here, Hell Kerbecs BD145DS, is the city bey, representing Hades City in every detail possible. It was specifically designed with the appearance, meaning, and power of the inspiring city."
"FASCINATING!!!! AND ON THE OTHER SIDE, WE HAVE THE FAMOUSLY FAVORED GINGKA, THE REPRESENTATIVE FOR RIGHT WHERE WE ARE STANDING!!!! GINGKA, SINCE WE KNOW PLENTY ABOUT YOU, TELL US ABOUT YOUR BEY THERE!! IT LOOKS AWFULLY DIFFERENT, YES?!?!?"
Mr. Announcer was right, something was different about Galaxy Pegasus, like it wasn't completely Galaxy Pegasus. OR EVEN PEGASUS!!!
"Yes, Mr Announcer, my usual Galaxy Pegasus was badly destructed, so I had to take matters into my own hands to improve this and be able to battle in the Champions' Blade-Off. I had been borrowing a bey from a friend of mine as temporary replacement until Pegasus was restored, but it didn't seem like he would soon, so I "editted" him."
"EDITTED HIM?!?!?! WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!?!?!?!"
"For this tournament, Galaxy Pegasus W105R2F is now Galaxy StrikerII W105CS."
"AMAAAAZING!!!! YOU COMBINED 2 RELATIVES OF THE HORSE-RELATED CONSTELLATION BEYS, INTO 1 WHOLE BEY!!!!! WELL, IT'S MADE IT THIS FAR, LET'S SEE IF IT CAN PULL OFF THIS BATTLE FOR THE CONCLUDING WIN!!!!"
Can a combined horse bey really stand up to a city-crafted bey from the devil's flames? Well we're about to find out.
Damian: "3!"
Gingka: "2!"
Damian and Gingka: "1! LET IT RRRRIIIIIIIIPPPP!!!!"
Galaxy Striker is steadily circling the stadium while Hell Kerbecs spirals closer to the middle.
"KERBECS! RELEASE THE HOUNDS!"
"STRIKER! STATIC WING STRIKE!"
Kerbecs lets loose a pack of 3-headed, flaming, fire-breathing hounds around the stadium, watching Striker's every move, while Striker does a combined strike at Kerbecs of Striker's static strike and Peg's winged strike, knocking Kerbecs away from the stadium's center. After confliction with Kerbecs, the hounds start sending flaming bark waves at Striker, knocking him around in different directions.
"ACCELERATED STRIKE!"
Striker makes a quick move out of the center towards Kerbecs, causing the waves to hit each other and send back towards their senders, eliminating all the hounds.
"OPEN THE FLOORING GATE!!"
Kerbecs lights up in orange flame and a giant gate appears, covering the floor of the bottom half.
"KERBECS!! NOW ,......(Damian pauses)......SOUL LEVITATION!!"
Kerbecs' flames darken to a purple-ish black, and beam at Galaxy Striker. Striker, surrounded by a shadowy orb, starts hovering over the gate.
"DRILL FROM THE HEAVENS, DOWN TO HELL!!!"
Kerbecs flings himself high into the air, and uses his energy to form a black and purple shadow of 6 paws. Kerbecs rushes down, leaving a trail of fire behind in the air, and rushing so fast you could almost here rabid barking. Kerbecs claws Striker straight into a cosmic tornado within the gate, and the gate disappears, with both beys missing.
(An on-the-edge-of-your-seat gasp fills the silence)
Suddenly, a bey crashes from the ceiling and into the stadium, breaking through the floor in dark flames and bits of stars surrounding it. IT'S GALAXY STRIKER!!! But, where is Kerbecs?
"HAHAHAHAHAAaaaaaa...haha..uhhhhhhhh.... (Damian feints to the ground)
After everyone rushed to see what was happening by the stadium when the paramedics arrived, Damian had awakened, and asked where Kerbecs was, like he had no idea what had just happened.
Gingka: "Something didn't seem right about the ending of that battle. Damian and Kerbecs had a more dark energy coming from them during that giant conclusion. WAIT A MINUTE!!:
-Sudden arrival and exit of dark energy
-No memory of what had happened
-Giant kaboom-finish with no mercy
-Bey left looking like scrap
COULD IT BE!?!?!?!?!?!"
Chapter 5: The Champions' Aftermath After the public fright at the Champions' Blade-Off, news channels were reporting the story for days. They had quotes from witnesses, pictures, videos, even some samples of the damage done at the scene. And Unfortunately for Gingka, Galaxy StrikerII was in worse shape than the first time Vortex Ninjastar had struck. And his friends were watching the news when they found out Gingka had been there that night.
*knock knock knock*
Gingka: Yes?
Madoka: (Slaps Gingka across face) YOU SURE DO HAVE THE NERVE!!! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO GET PEGASUS AND YOURSELF KILLED!!!! LIKE ONE EXPERIENCE WASN'T ENOUGH!!!!
Masamune and Ryuga: YEAH, MAN!!!! WHAT THE HECK!!! HEY, STOP TALKING LIKE WE'RE IN-SYNC!! STOP IT!! STOP IT!!!
Madoka: SHUT UP FOR ONCE GUYS!!!!!
Masamune: OK OK!
Ryuga: Fine.
Gingka: Ooooooookkkkkkk, annnyyywaaayyyss I know you guys are mad, worried, and betrayed. But hear me out, I had it planned out like that on purpose. I figured he wouldn't show up as easily if I had back-up. I had to go alone.
Madoka: Well I'm guessing you found and confronted him then?
Gingka: Well, um, not exactly.
Madoka:THEN WHAT GOOD DID IT DO, HUH!?!?!?!?!
Gingka: GET OUT OF MY FACE AND CHILL, MADOKA!!!! I'M NOT FINISHED!!!! Man, that guy was right. We seriously need to break this yelling habit. Gets kind of irritating once you notice it. Now as I was saying, He still showed up. I think he took over Damian and his bey somehow.
Masamune: You think he possessed a blader AND his bey!?!?!? Either you need some serious rest or there's some "freaky-friday" business goin' on.
Ryuga: "Freaky-friday"? Really? Wow. Only you would say that.
Masamune:Grrrrrr......
Gingka: Ok, unless you guys are going to go look up some good marriage counselors, I'm going to continue. I saw a dark energy randomly appear in Damian and Hades Kerbecs. And the reckage that was caused was relative enough to what I had experienced. And then when Damian came from being unconscious, he had no idea what happened.
Masamune: Maybe Damian just got overloaded with power, like Tsubasa and his Earth Eagle whenever he's on the verge of losing. Pretty epic stuff, I must say.
Ryuga: No, Gingka's right. When I was first trying to control LDrago, it took over me. I was being controlled by my bey. But this is a higher extreme than that.
Gingka: Yeah, and I fear that he drained both their energy as well. If we're gonna get this guy, I might need you beside me to defeat him, Ryuga.
Ryuga: Eh, why not. I could use some training. In order to keep up my reputation, I need to battle someone who could actually reach my standards.
Masamune:Whatever, lizard boy.
Ryuga: LDRAGO ISN'T A LIZARD!! That's Lacerta, who is pretty weak compared to every other bey. But every bey is weaker than LDrago.
Madoka: THAT'S IT!!! I'VE HAD IT!!! (Madoka kicks both boys in the cranberries)
Ryuga and Masamune *whimper whimper* Ok Ok, we get your point.
Gingka: Nice work, Madoka. Now, lets go recruit and map out our plan.
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Chapter 6: Preparation for the End
So the 4 of them went around recruiting strong bladers and bladers who've delt with possessive beys themselves. Gingka called a plan meeting at an abandoned arena on the far side of town after 2 weeks of recruiting. Over 60 recruits showed up.
Gingka: Ok everyone, I have called you all to this location to discuss our plan to trap this murderous pair before they absorb all of the city's bladers, and possibly the world's. This guy is so powerful, his bey could probably cause any bey to fly into the Earth's core with just a tap of the fusion wheel! I know it seems like Mission: Impossible, but if we don't do this, no blader or bey is safe. Think of how he could use his stolen power against the lives of everyone and everything. Even on Time-and-Space!
Madoka: I think they get it, Gingka. Don't psych them out too much. Anyways, this bey, as you can see in this projection on the wall, has high energy levels, unbelievable abilities, and is made up of pure dark matter. But as we know, it takes a greater light to vanquish a powerful darkness.
Shen-Rhun: Wait, if this thing is so powerful, wouldn't he be able to wipe out our beys like dusting off his shoulder?
Sumona: Yeah! What good is the destruction on our beys gonna do against this monstrousity? It's not like it'll wear out. It probably, like a Black Hole, could continue for Eternity.
Ryuga: With the help from the experienced possessed bladers in this group, we have been forming a special weapon that will put an end to this dark one, and return any energy he's stolen to their proper owners.
Mysterious Voice TOO BAD YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO USE IT!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
(A crowd of nervous gasps fills the room)
Gingka: WHO ARE YOU?!!?!?!?
Mysterious Voice: Why, Ginkga. You already know the answer to that.
Gingka: WHAT!?!?!? HOW?!?!?! WHEN?!?!?! WHAAAA?!?!?!
Mysterious Voice: Honestly, Gingka. Did you actually think you could hide in a dark, abandoned arena and NOT expect me to be near? That's disappointing on many levels. However, I should thank you. I didn't get enough energy from the competitors at the Blade-Off, and you brought so many strong bladers to help me make up for my loss. How thoughtful.
Gingka: I DON'T THINK SO! WE MIGHT NOT BE COMPLETELY PREPARED, BUT YOUR END IS NOW!!!
(An unclassified boy walks up to Gingka from the crowd and speaks in the mysterious voice)
Mysterious Voice: Is it really mine, Gingka? Or is it the world's?
(The boy glows in red and black flames)
Gingka: YOU TOOK OVER THIS INNOCENT BOY?!?!?!?! YOU FEIND!!!
Mysterious Voice: Hmmhmmhmmm. This next part should be amusing. BEHOOOOOOLLLLLDDD!!!! (The boy turns into a red orb of light and shrinks down to the form of VORTEX NINJASTAR!!!) I have no owner. I AM MY OWN MIND!!!!!
-------------------TO BE CONTINUED------------------
Chapter 7: The Last Stand
In the last chapter, the group assembled to stop the dark menace was caught by him. He then made a surprise revealing that Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB doesn't HAVE a blader, but is a FREE-THINKING CREATURE!!!! Will this humongous group be able to provide enough force to end this higher-power?
Mysterious Voice: Hmmhmmhmmm. This next part should be even more amusing. BEHOOOOOOLLLLLDDD!!!! (The boy turns into a red orb of light and shrinks down to the form of VORTEX NINJASTAR!!!) I have no owner. I AM MY OWN MIND!!!!!
(Many gasps of terror appear throughout the room)
Gingka: (expressions)
Madoka: Um, Gingka? Gingka? OH GREAT!!! NOW YOU'VE FREAKED HIM OUT!!! EVERYONE! READY YOUR BLADES! NOW!!
Masamune: Uuuuuhhhhh, Madoka..... shouldn't you think this through fir...
Madoka: WUSS UP AND RIP IT, MASAMUNE!!!
Masamune *whimper* ok, ok! *whimper whimper*
Group: 3!
Vortex Ninjastar: 2!
Group: 1!
Everyone: LET IT RRRIII...
Vortex Ninjastar: Oh, wait. This isn't a proper place to blade. Let me take you to my favorite arena,...hehehehe.......
(Vortex Ninjastar glows brightly, and suddenly everyone begins to levitate)
Ren: WITCHCRAFT!!!!
(Everyone is ported to another REALM of ome sort, with an arena that looks into the stars below them)
Vortex Ninjastar: Welcome to my Astral Arena. A more proper location for a rivalry battle. Now, 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIIIIPPP!!!
(Everyone quickly rips their beys spiraling in the stadium)
Damian: KERBECS! HOWLING WINDS!!!
(A gust of wings start booming from Kerbecs. They bash at Vortex Ninjastar and leave some severe-looking scratches.)
Vortex Ninjastar: Ha. It isn't that easy to wear me down. And I see you've trained Kerbecs to recognize its allies, considering I'm the only one that took any damage. Now it's my turn. SPEED EVAPORATION!
(Vortex Ninjastar accelerates at top speed and bashes through Kerbecs. Suddenly, Kerbecs DISAPPEARS on impact!)
Damian: KERBECS!!!! WHERE DID HE GO?!?!?!
(Vortex Ninjastar goes a bit over maximum speed and crashes through 3-5 more beys, causing them to "evaporate" as well as Kerbecs had.)
Vortex Ninjastar: Your mere beys can't comprehend my high-level power, and vanished in thin air as a result of the maximum damage. But don't worry, I'm not a one-trick pony. I've got plenty tricks up my sleeve.
Many beys charge and collide with Vortex Ninjastar, and some have even damaged him a bit. But they've either been combusted from overpowered collision or being knocked into the trigger spoken of earlier. It goes on for hours, but it feels like multiple eternities speeding by. Out of 80 bladers, there are now 23 bladers left VS Vortex Ninjastar.
Gingka: Woah, what happened? I had this wacked-out dream. That dark pair found us and it turned out the beyblade we've been planing against didn't have a bla......wait.....where are we?
Madoka: Gingka! You're awake! We need you. I've been able to speed up the repairs on Galaxy Pegasus and made some modifications to its power so we have a higher advantage then usual.
Gingka: Woah, woah, woah. What's going on? Who're we against?
Madoka: Vortex Ninjastar.
Gingka: WHAAAAAAT!?!?! I WASN'T DREAMIN'!?!?!?!?!
Madoka: Calm down! We need you, we're down to 20 bladers (A few shouts of greif sound to a flash in the stadium) Uhhhh,...make that 16.
Gingka: OUT OF 80?!?!?!?!?!?! ARE MASAMUNE AND RYUGA STILL IN?!?!?!?!
Madoka: Don't worry, we've been able to score some big hits on him. And yeah, they're still in, and some of the former-possesed bladers we gathered.
Gingka: What's up with Pegasus?
Madoka: Say hello to Galactium Pegasus SWB115RMF. The custom "Galactium" wheel has sharper points on each wing, which have been modified for better resistance and damage. The SwitchBlade115 has powerful blades on the track that can switch height between 115, 143, and 180. The Right Metal Flat gives high speed and controlled stamina because of the metal's weight. Don't worry, anything you want reversed can be.
Gingka: That's some pretty big modification. IT'S AWESOME!!!!
(Gingka takes the pumped-up Pegasus and joins the battle) FLY PEGASUS!!
Vortex Ninjastar: So, Gingka, you've finally bothered to join us. Pegasus seems well. Too bad his long recovery will only have lasted him a short time.
(Pegasus glows in blue fire and stampedes Vortex towards the middle of the stadium)
Vortex Ninjastar: SILENT SPACE! (the moment freezes in time as Vortex Ninjastar eases down right next to the trigger) Hmhmhmhmhmm, almost had me there. Looks like this pony's got a temper. (Time is unfrozen)
Gingka: GRRRRR!!!! We have to weaken him.
Ryuga: Gingka, might I make a suggestion? *wink*
Gingka: Oh right! You know what to do, fellas?
(The remaining bladers nod)
Gingka: Alright then, let's do this
Gingka, Ryuga, and the remaining bladers: IN-SYNC SPIN!! (The beys start spinning around the stadium one behind the other at an increasing speed.)
Vortex Ninjastar: Are you performing a dance routine, now? No matter what you do, you can't defeat me!
Gingka: (Thinks to self) Almost,......almost,......... (Pegasus and LDrago reach half-point on either side of the stadium)
Ryuga and Gingka: SPIRIT ENSLAVEMENT!!!
(Pegasus and LDrago shoot beams of flames, blue VS red, at Vortex Ninjastar, keeping him in place)
Vortex Ninjastar: You can't HONESTLY believe this will keep me down. SPLITTING DAR.....
(Before he can finish, the remaining bladers of the resisting group send off a Back-Up Barackade, increasing the power of Pegasus and LDrago's beams and decreasing Ninjastar's escaping capabilities.)
Vortex Ninjastar: Ok, I'll admit, you surprised me there. You've though of everything........or should I say ALMOST EVERYTHING!!!! (Vortex sends a black flames around Pegasus and LDrago's beams) You've made your attempt, now time for me to finish this thing. (Vortex causes the beams and barackade to backfire, sending negative reactions towards the opposing beys)
Gingka: PEGASUS!!!!!
Ryuga: LDRAGO!!!!!
(All of the beys are levitated above the middle of the stadium, ready to be dropped on the trigger)
Vortex Ninjastar: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! IT TAKES TRUE DARKNESS TO OVERPOWER LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! LET THIS BE A LESSON TO YOU ALL!!!!
--------------------Now here's where it gets freaky.------------------------
(Out of the blue, a bright portal opens up behind Madoka)
Madoka: WHAT THE?!?!?!?!
(Out of the portal flies a metallic bey and into the stadium, knocking Vortex Ninjastar forward from behind and into the trigger - A giant vortex appears and sucks in Vortex Ninjastar while the mysterious bey flies into another portal across the stadium.)
Vortex Ninjastar: WHAT!?!?!?! NOOOOO!!!! THIS ISNT OVER!!! WE'LL MEET AGAIN,.. YOU'LL SEEE EEEE...........
(The vortex closes before the levitated blades make a somewhat wobbly landing into the stadium)
Gingka: OOOOoooooo KAAAAAAyyyyyyy.... Well, at least all that craziness is over. And the world of blading is saved. Now how do we get out of here?
(They then are automatically ported from the stadium to the abandoned arena on Earth.)
Gingka: Oh, I guess that's how. Well, I don't know 'bout you guys, but that was plenty excitement to last a while.
Masamune: You said it.
Madoka: Yeah.
Ryuga: Hmmmm,...there was something off about that beyblade that ported in and out like that.
Gingka: Wel,, yeah. Did you get a good glimps of it, Ryuga?
Ryuga: Barely, but sort of. Its track wasn't like one 've seen. It had an octagonal bolt with an unfirmiliar face.
Madoka: An OCTAGONAL facebolt? Are you sure? Maybe you didn't see the shape correctly from the speed it was going.
Ryuga: Say what you will, but I'm certain of what I saw.
Gingka: As far as I'm concerned, all I saw today was a bunch of nonsense that is IMPOSSIBLE to explain to anyone else. But I also saw that monster get kicked into the vortex, trapped in the eternity from it once came. And that's good enough for me. And I think this victory calls for some CORNDOGS!!!!
Madoka: MMMMMM, I'm with you on that.
Masamune: FOR SURE!
Ryuga: Fine, whatever.
And they all lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER.......................................for now...................
RE: The Bey From the Dark Unkown - sarabscientist - Jun. 29, 2012
That's more like it!
Better than your other thread, lol
RE: The Bey From the Dark Unkown - beycrafter01 - Jun. 29, 2012
I know it looks long, but that's because the different lines for who's speaking are more seperate. It is better for knowing who is different. I came up with this story from a beyblade design I'm working on.
RE: The Bey From the Dark Unkown (WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE) - DefStamina88 - Jun. 29, 2012
Hmmm... A little sloppy, but it's pretty interesting, and I like the description of the battle you did...
Now when you start adding more Chapters, it'll be more organized if you place the individual chapters in spoilers and placing the chapters in the first post...
Just a hint, but a fairly good story!
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE- - beycrafter01 - Jun. 29, 2012
I'm not exactly sure how to turn them into spoilers
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE- - sarabscientist - Jun. 29, 2012
(Jun. 29, 2012 2:18 AM)beycrafter01 Wrote: I'm not exactly sure how to turn them into spoilers
Code: [spoiler] TEXT [/spoiler]
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE- - Tri - Jun. 29, 2012
Like this...
Code: [spoiler]Your text here[/spoiler]
EDIT, Ninja'd...
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE- - beycrafter01 - Jun. 29, 2012
OOOOHHHH!!!! Thanks. How did you like it, TriSix?
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY BETTER THAN LAST ONE- - Tri - Jun. 29, 2012
I like pretty well. You did very well I think describing the battles.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - Sparta - Jun. 29, 2012
Your descriptions are okay, but at least you have them there. I'm not sure what that "CaPiToLiZiNg EvErY oThEr LeTtEr" thing was all about, but I don't think it was necessary.
I think that's about it. Everything else was not bad.
-Oh yeah, try to keep your ego in check...I don't think "I'M AWESOME AT WRITING THE BEST STORY EVER" is something that's gonna draw a crowd...let your readers say that for you, if you feel that's the case.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - beycrafter01 - Jun. 29, 2012
The letters were in ransom note form. it says right there. And I put the "I'M AWESOME AT WRITING AN INTENSE STORY" thing as sarcasm. I mean, I do have my moments, but that was just a sarcastic use of words is all. I dont have an ego,unlike Eminem (just an FYI on what a true ego is). And I dont even express one in that sentence.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - Sparta - Jun. 29, 2012
Listen carefully, my friend. That wasn't a "diss" or something, so no need to be defensive or whatever. Just trying to offer helpful tips. That's all. You don't need to use m avatar and signature to "get back at me" I'm just trying to help you. This is a positive environment.
Like I said, your story isn't bad at all. I think just working on clarifying the descriptions and maybe spacing everything apart a bit more so it's less cluttered would work well.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - Driger Kai - Jun. 29, 2012
Wow, it is long. Good luck on your story. I'll read it sometime when I'm not busy
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - DefStamina88 - Jun. 29, 2012
I really like Chapter 2! More interesting than the first!!
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - pranzdiv123 - Jun. 29, 2012
Good job on the story
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - beycrafter01 - Jun. 30, 2012
I know a lot of parts in the story are really specific in detailing, but I do that to make sure parts I'm not too sure people will get will get them with the detailing is all.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - pranzdiv123 - Jun. 30, 2012
(Jun. 30, 2012 3:07 AM)beycrafter01 Wrote: I know a lot of parts in the story are really specific in detailing, but I do that to make sure parts I'm not too sure people will get will get them with the detailing is all.
you write good it was entertaining
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- - beycrafter01 - Jun. 30, 2012
People, please check back here every once in a while each day. There is always at least 1-2 chapters added to the story each and every day. You can even send PMs on ideas for next chapters. I sometimes get writer's block because I want to keep the story a long, intense journey for Gingka, his friends, you guys, and myself. ONLY SEND IDEAS THROUGH PM'S
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- (UPDATED 7/2/12) - beycrafter01 - Jul. 04, 2012
Readers, the Bey From the Dark Unknown will be ending soon. It might possibly go on up to Chapter 5 or 7. But, I have decided to make it a WHOLE SAGA!! I don't exactly know when the next story of the saga will begin, or what it will be about, but that is where you guys come in. Send me PMs of characters and storylines, made-up or not, to be a part of the new story. The only condition is the story must include Gingka, Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB, and Madoka. Those stories that I choose to use for the next story, I will make sure credit is given to those who gave me the ideas. The next story will be in a new thread, but it will show the sneek peek of it first, and then evolve into the story. If you'd like a sneek on what will happen with Vortex Ninjastar, check out the thread: Create your own Beyblade MFB character!, and look for my post. You will get all the info on Vortex Ninjastar. There is info about it in there that will hint you on what will happen next.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- (UPDATED 7/2/12) - goten17 - Jul. 05, 2012
Good story bro
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -WAAAAY INTEEEEEENSE!- (UPDATED 7/2/12) - beycrafter01 - Jul. 05, 2012
THIS JUST IN!!!: A breif sneak peek has just been released about the new story of the The Bey From the Dark Unknown Saga. Story 2 of the recently started story series will be titled: The Bey From the Dark Unknown: The Family Tree. Here is the introduction to Chapter 1 of the story:
- After Vortex Ninjastar had failed to protect his plan from being discovered, and vanished with no trace left behind, Gingka, Madoka, Ryuga, and Masamune believe to be experiencing some happenings that could result in Vortex Ninjastar HRS130WMB coming out from hiding, but even stronger than anyone could ever think possible. While the group tries to find out what's exactly going on, they find even MORE info on "The Bey From the Dark Unknown", and believe a new plan is being unfolded that could be completely INVINCIBLE!!!!!! -
Sounds enduring, right? Well, that is all that can be given as a sneak peek at the story. But you never know, some more bladers, beys, and forbidden secrets could be introduced.
NOTE: THIS INTRODUCTION TO The Family Tree WILL BE EDITED UPON STORY'S ARRIVAL TO FIT HOW The Bey from the Dark Unknown ENDED. - (This note was updated: 12/23/12)
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -BACK IN BUSINESS- (11/26/12) - beycrafter01 - Nov. 27, 2012
Hello WBO. The mind of the Dark Unknown saga has returned and will be updating the "thought-to-be-lost" chapters of the first story. And I promise, it won't be as innapropriately wordy this time. I have made proper corrections to the sneak-peek at the intro of the next story: The Family Tree.
RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -CHAPTER 5 TYPED AND POSTED!- (11/27/12) - beycrafter01 - Nov. 28, 2012
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RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -CHAPTER 6 TYPED AND POSTED!- (12/8/12) - beycrafter01 - Dec. 09, 2012
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RE: (Story) The Bey From the Dark Unkown Saga -CHAPTER 6 TYPED AND POSTED!- (12/8/12) - beycrafter01 - Dec. 23, 2012
It might not be the end of the world, but the end of the 1st story in the Bey from the Dark Unknown story saga has FINALLY COME!! It is a promising thrill as we finally find out who will prevail from the last stand between the good that is Gingka, Madoka, Masamune, and Ryuga VS the evil of the bey of dark matter. Read Chapter 7: The Last Stand and find out how it ends........(supposedly)
IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE LAST FEW UPDATED CHAPTERS/ANY OF THE CHAPTERS, IT IS SUGGESTED YOU DO SO TO GET THE FULL RIDE OF THE WHOLE STORY
NOTE: The Bey from the Dark Unknown: The Family Tree should be posted around March or earlier.
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