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[Closed]Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 02, 2012
Sorry guys I think this is kinda a waste of my time so I'm ending it
Story
Chapter 1: The team challenge
One day a blader was sitting in his bedroom asleep preparing for the tournament to see who will be on team burn star. His name was Wing and his blade was Earth pegasus 125 WB.
"I'm late for the tournament" screamed Wing. He rushed down the stairs and ran out the door. When he arrived at the arena his friend Jiro just beat a blader.
"Jiro moves to round 2" said blader DJ
Jiro used Lightning L-Drago WA130 RF.
"Next bladers are Wing and Drahgun" yelled blader DJ
"3,2,1 go shoot" said the bladers.
Drahgun's blade Diablo dragonis 90 CS hit Earth pegasus sending him in the air. The battle was so close but in the end Wing used his move feather defense and stopped Drahgun attack and knocked it out
"Wing wins" said blader DJ
Chapter 2: A final fight
The tournament was almost over the final bladers were Wing, Jiro, Galater and Flare
There blades were
Wing: Earth pegasus 125 WB
Jiro: Lightning L-Drago WA130 RF
Galater: Flash pegasus R145 R2F
Flare: Flame dragonis 105 F
Wing was going to fight Jiro.
"Go shoot" yelled the bladers
Earth pegasus was defending the attacks. L-Drago used all his might but easily got knocked out. Glater was already fighting Flare. Flare attacked hard but had equal strength to Flash pegasus. Smoke came and in the end the last one standing was Flare. He out spun Galater.
Chapter 3: Galater vs Jiro part 1
It was midnight. Jiro was laying in his bed. Galater busted threw the window.
"I challenge you to a beybattle" said Galater
"But we fight tomorrow to see who gets to be 3rd on the team and loser is a replacement" said a sleepy Jiro
But Galater forced Jiro outside to battle.
"3,2,1 go shoot" yelled the bladers
Both blades had super strong attacks. But Galater used his move Water Flash Strike and knocked him out the arena.
"I guess I will win" said Galater
Chapter 4: Galater vs Jiro part 2
"Welcome bey fans this decides who will be 3rd on the team and loser is the replacement member" said blader DJ
Jiro knew he had to beat Galater but he didn't know how.
"3,2,1 go shoot" yelled the bladers
Flash pegasus was attacking hard but so was L-Drago. Jiro was losing. L-Drago did not have enough strength to keep fighting.
"Special move dragon flames" said Jiro
The move missed and Galater attacked and knocked him out.
"Galater wins" said blader DJ
Chapter 5: Team finals
"This is the final battle Wing vs Flare" said blader DJ
"3,2,1 go shoot" yelled the bladers.
The blades landed in the stadium. Each waiting for the other to strike. Flame dragonis went down and hit Earth pegasus hard.
"Go pegasus" yelled Wing
Wing used his special move feather defense, but that did not stop Dragonis at all.
"Special move bursting bite blast" said Flare
It almost knocked Pegasus out but he stayed in. Wing did not know what to do to beat Flare. Pegasus charged at Dragonis and blasted him in the air. Dragonis came and crashed down on pegasus. Pegasus was low on spin.
"You can do this Pegasus, special move feather defense" said Wing
Flare's blade was knocked out the arena.
"Wing wins" said blader DJ
Far away from the arena a man was watching the tournament.
"Bravo Wing, bravo" said the man
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Driger Kai - Jun. 02, 2012
Cool. I hope it goes good! Heres a character.
Name: Jiro
Age: 12
Beyblade: Lightning L-Drago WA130RF
strength: 5
Desc. Black short hair, blue eyes, red hoodie.
Move: Dragon flames
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 02, 2012
Here is mine
Name: Wing
Age: 13
Beyblade: Earth Pegasus 125 WB
Strength: 7
Looks: Black jacket, red eyes, red hair.
Move: Feather defense
Sorry I didn't put looks in the op
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Driger Kai - Jun. 02, 2012
You should've. One question, I'm guessing yours is the main character?
RE: Beyblade metal universe - pyrus10000 - Jun. 02, 2012
My turn to the party
Name: Drahgun Flamiyuti (Pronouncation of Dragon in Japanese0
Age: 11
Beyblade: Diablo Dragonis 90CS
Strength: 6
Looks: Grey Thin Jacket Unzipped, white T-Shirt under the Grey thin jacket, tall spiky hair, brown eyes, black hair, Jeans, red and white sneakers
Desc: (Good Guy) "Legend says that Drahgun will be the warrior of dragons. He goes along side (insert good guy character name here) and trys to obtain the legendary, Omega Dragonis 85XF"
Move: Dragonis Winged Strike, Dragonis Claw Flight, and Dragonis Absorb Destruction* (*Works against left spins only)
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Tri - Jun. 02, 2012
I think this will get closed if you don't actually post the story . . . .
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Kaneki - Jun. 02, 2012
Here is mine
Name: Galater
Age: 12
Beyblade: Flash Pegasis R145 R2F
Strenght: 10
Looks: Dark Blue Top, Blue Eyes, Light and Dark Blue Tall Spikey Hair, White sneakers, Jeans, Blue and White
Move: Water Flash Strike, Galaxy Ice Blast and Element Galicesh Attack
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Gravity Brave - Jun. 02, 2012
Name: Karan Brar
Age:12
Strength: 7
Bey: Meteo L-Drago LW105LF
Special Moves: Dragon Soaring Rage, Ultimate Roaring Dragon Blast
Appearance: Short Black Hair, a natural tan, a red and orange hat with a picture of a yellow L-Drago on it, Red sports jacket with a black shirt underneath, black skinny jeans, and some red Jordans
RE: Beyblade metal universe - TakasuMouce - Jun. 02, 2012
Is this an RPG? Because RPGs are not allowed on these forums...
Edit: Sorry. I thought it was an rpg because of the character requests with no story... oops!
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 02, 2012 11:52 PM)Yukio Wrote: Is this an RPG? Because RPGs are not allowed on these forums...What are RPG's
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Driger Kai - Jun. 03, 2012
A role playing game
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
This is not a RPG
Pyrus10000 your character will come back later
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Mercury.Anubis - Jun. 03, 2012
Name: Xion
Age: 13
Beyblade: Fang Leone
Move: True King Lion Tearing Blast, True Lion Wild Wind Fang Dance, King Lion Reverse Wind Strike, King Lion Furious Blast Shot
Strength: 8
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
Gravity Brave
Fangs.of.Death
Your characters will be in chapters 6 or 7
You can now make 2 characters if you want
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Kaneki - Jun. 03, 2012
Here is a other Character.
Name: DR (Rest of the Name will be soon)
Age: 48
Strenght: (To Come Soon)
Beyblade: Hell Wolf X : D
Looks: Black Red Mask, Real Fire Jacket, Real Fire Jeans, Real Darkness Sneakers.
Moves: Hell Killer Blast, Evil Hell Blast, Evil Darkness Fire Blast.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
Cool but you will have to wait a while for him
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Mercury.Anubis - Jun. 03, 2012
I changed my bey and moves
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
You can choose what the teams name is
Team names
Fire-X 2
Black beak
Revolution 1
Surge-X
Please vote
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Gravity Brave - Jun. 03, 2012
Fire-X, please
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Kaneki - Jun. 03, 2012
Ok. Thanks that is how i whanted my Character to be. when will the Next Chapter
be out. Fire-X for Sure the Name is so Cool
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
The numbers on them mean how many votes
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Mercury.Anubis - Jun. 03, 2012
Revolution
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 4:05 PM)galaxy blade Wrote: Ok. Thanks that is how i whanted my Character to be. when will the Next ChapterLater today I will make the next chapter. During the week I will make them late at night until Friday.
be out. Fire-X for Sure the Name is so Cool
RE: Beyblade metal universe - BattleBlader357 - Jun. 03, 2012
I'd like to submit a character:
Name:Tai Shin Lee
Age:15
Look:a red t-shirt,a blue blader belt with white highlights,jeans,and red tenna shoes with black highlights
Bey:Guardian Ifraid SW145SB
Moves
torm Breaker and Shockwave StabLevel:6
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 5:39 PM)BattleBlader357 Wrote: I'd like to submit a character:He will be in it in chapter 8 or 9 okay
Name:Tai Shin Lee
Age:15
Look:a red t-shirt,a blue blader belt with white highlights,jeans,and red tenna shoes with black highlights
Bey:Guardian Ifraid SW145SB
Moves
Level:6