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Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - NPB - Apr. 21, 2012

Chapter 1, Jake Toshiko is here!

Chapter 2, Jake VS Peter.

Chapter 3, Beyblade Park Tournament part 1
Chapter 4, Beyblade Park Tournament 2

Chapter 5, Beyblade Park Tournament 3

Chapter 6, Beyblade Park Tournament 4
Chapter 7, Beyblade Park Tournament 5





RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - Duck - Apr. 21, 2012

Nice job! Remember to capitalize names and "I". It would make the story easier to read if you put spaces in-between lines. Also, make sure that you give your characters personalities, or the story will become boring.


RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - bladestriker99 - Apr. 22, 2012

Eh a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes


RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - Cookie Bouquets - Apr. 22, 2012

more description please? Nice story otherwise.


RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - NPB - Apr. 22, 2012

Im Finnish so the english MS Word is hard to use, because i don't always get the things...
New chapter!


RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - Cookie Bouquets - Apr. 22, 2012

ahhhh,
heres a tip

[ spoiler ] don't put spaces in between the half boxes

[ /spoiler ]

should be like this




RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - NPB - Apr. 22, 2012

(Apr. 22, 2012  1:40 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: ahhhh,
heres a tip

[ spoiler ] don't put spaces in between the half boxes

[ /spoiler ]

should be like this

Okay! I used it Smile



RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - LUIBurnGasher - Apr. 23, 2012

Awesome, mai frend!
We had awesome battle today!
Only stypid in that was i losed it!



RE: Beyblade Metal Warriors (Story) - NPB - Apr. 27, 2012

Chapter 4 is out!