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RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Dan - Sep. 24, 2011 A gimmick of a gimmick..? Dranzer F went to SF though, not WB. I don't think it needs to be mentioned though? RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 24, 2011 No i dont think it needs to be .I was going to add it but i specifically left it out. Like you said, It's not the same bottoms and I don't even know if the gimmick works the exact same way. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Sep. 24, 2011 I decided to add reall mostly everything SSJ dide add, found some formatting mistakes, but. Will post these as soon as possible, however. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 24, 2011 Wait, I don't understand that post? Where did you add what I wrote then found mistakes? RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Dan - Sep. 24, 2011 He said he added them, then he said he would add them. In that case assume he'll post it later. Somewhere. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Sep. 25, 2011 [quote='Dan' pid='794009' dateline='1316746687'] [quote] Face: Ares The Face on this Beyblade depicts Ares, the Greek God of War. Metal Wheel: VariAres • Weight: 43.6 grams VariAres is the second Metal Fight Beyblade Metal Wheel available with the gimmick of spinning in both directions: Left and Right. VariAres is a relatively thick and heavy wheel, with three outward protrusions, it produces massive recoil. The center indent is the largest and most exposed, There are six indents on VariAres, they are exposed enough to provide additional Spike Attack. Between each of these 'wings' are large gaps which work in tandem <- ? with the aforementioned indents to create powerful Smash Attack, but also cause significant recoil. Between each of the three metal protrusions is a yellow PC Frame, shaped as triangles that protrude outwards as far as the Metal Frame. [/quote] About the Gravity Perseus, normally, it is not mentioned another bey in one article. If you could, also please take a look at mine, it'd really help. I'm taking a lot of SSJ's edits in too, as <3 told me we have our own viewpoints and Kai-V was fine with that. Thanks! RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 25, 2011 So that's both your's and Dan's combined? There's a couple of things I specifically edited out that are in there though. I'll show you: (Sep. 25, 2011 1:55 AM)BeybladeStation Wrote: Metal Wheel: VariAresI purposely mixed these two sentences, it was too much of a "it can spin in 2 directions. It is thick and heavy". That's too choppy. Plus with the end of the sentence (next quote), it is a really weird sentence, and I don't think it's even a grammatically proper sentence. Quote:[...] it produces massive recoil.purposely put that somewhere else. Quote: The center indent is the largest and most exposed, There are six indents on VariAres, they are exposed enough to provide additional Spike Attack.I think it's good to put that the middle one is the largest. Quote: Between each of these 'wings' are large gaps which work in tandem <- ? with the aforementioned indents to create powerful Smash Attack, but also cause significant recoil.in tandem with basically means they work together. Quote:Between each of the three metal protrusions is a yellow PC Frame, shaped as triangles that protrude outwards as far as the Metal Frame.Hmm, outwards protrusions? I like wings better. Outwards protrusions could mean a lot more things than wings. I kinda like my edit better... But not in an arrogant way. Not my choice though. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Sep. 25, 2011 Okay, well hopefully Dan can look at it, thanks. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 25, 2011 Oh hey, how about "outward, winged shaped protrusions" ! RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Sep. 25, 2011 I do not think "wing" makes sense. Metal protrusions, yes, wing? Sure, if it was actually a wing.. I would still call it "outward, indented metal protrusions" ! RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Dan - Sep. 25, 2011 IDK I actually like where it is right now. Dual spin is very specific, and not common so I think bringing up Gravity is fine. It's not like I call out every single right spinning bey because Vari can right-spin or vice-versa. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Hov - Sep. 25, 2011 I dont see BD145 in attack customization... RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - tehfez - Sep. 25, 2011 (Sep. 23, 2011 3:58 AM)Dan Wrote: D:D is of a round shape with a translucent black colour, and is the approximate size of 145WD Perhaps approximate height of 145WD would be more accurate? RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - MetalZoroark21 - Sep. 25, 2011 The "Red and Blue" Corocoro Limited is called Variares Mars Red Ver. and Variares Phantom Blue Ver. I believe. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Phoenix Inferno - Sep. 25, 2011 (Sep. 25, 2011 3:46 PM)MetalZoroark21 Wrote: The "Red and Blue" Corocoro Limited is called Variares Mars Red Ver. and Variares Phantom Blue Ver. I believe. Yes that is right Dan add it to the draft you're all set almost RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Dan - Sep. 25, 2011 Thanks MetalZoroark, but it is already in there! :V TehFez, you're right, that sounds better! (Sep. 25, 2011 12:35 PM)® Wrote: I dont see BD145 in attack customization...Oh-ho! You're a perceptive one, are you?! JSHOCK: Yeah, it isn't haha. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kei - Sep. 28, 2011 Quote: Made some huge edits content and formatting wise, but this was already really well done as a whole. Good job everyone! This should be ready to go as long as no one else finds any mistakes or any questionable statements. I may have made some mistakes, so please do read over it. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Sep. 28, 2011 I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part. Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes. And if you really want to go with listing all the WBBA recolours for everything, it is available in a silver recolour with purple wings and transparent red D:D in some Japanese tournaments. Oddly, it cannot be seen on TAKARA-TOMY's site though. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 28, 2011 (Sep. 28, 2011 6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part.hmm, this is what I've gone by the whole time : http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-114-VariAres-D-D?pid=711706#pid711706 Quote:Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes.I think that could be simply added in the overall section? I don't think it'd fit anywhere else. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Sep. 28, 2011 (Sep. 28, 2011 3:31 PM)Shabalabadoo Wrote:(Sep. 28, 2011 6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part.hmm, this is what I've gone by the whole time : Hm, so I forgot about that. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kei - Sep. 28, 2011 (Sep. 28, 2011 6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes. Good idea. It would also be worth mentioning that it came with the L3R. Did that recolour have a specific name? RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Sep. 28, 2011 WBBA event recolours never really have any special names. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Dan - Sep. 28, 2011 Okay, I've added it. My first time with the whole formatting so take a look over it to see if I've made any mistakes! Edit: My god Smash attack is mentioned so much, should I bother providing link to smash attack article for every single mention of it? RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Phoenix Inferno - Sep. 28, 2011 (Sep. 28, 2011 9:44 PM)Dan Wrote: Okay, I've added it. My first time with the whole formatting so take a look over it to see if I've made any mistakes! You have it on beywiki Great! Now if only Kei would look at mine, but you deserved it. RE: Dan's BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Hov - Sep. 28, 2011 LOL Dan thanks for adding in the Dranzer part I suggested |