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Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
I know it's short but i'll update it soon.
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RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - AxBlader - May. 01, 2011
This is pretty interesting so far.
I like the warning in the title.
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
Should I continue?
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - AxBlader - May. 01, 2011
In My opinion Yes you should otherwise this was a waste of like 30 seconds of my life.
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
AGES 10+
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RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
Is it a good story?
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - NoodooSoup - May. 01, 2011
The writing is okay, but the chapters are tooo short. Also, the idea seems exaggerated... I mean, shooting people for spinning tops? Plus, where do these kids get these guns? They're not exactly easy to get when you're, you know... 13 years old.
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
There are No Adults anywhere there all dead!
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - NoodooSoup - May. 01, 2011
(May. 01, 2011 5:30 AM)Hope Wrote: There are No Adults anywhere there all dead!
Yeah, but still, where did they get the guns? So, a bunch of kids and teens just unleashed their fury and killed all the adults?
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - Hope - May. 01, 2011
More will be explained later in the story but it's set in america where some people can carry firearms.
RE: Beystory Life's Hard, Ages 10+ - NoodooSoup - May. 01, 2011
(May. 01, 2011 5:34 AM)Hope Wrote: More will be explained later in the story but it's set in america where some people can carry firearms.
I know that some people can carry firearms in America, but that gives all the more reason for the adults to be skilled in handling one. Which means, the kids would stand no chance. But whatever, I'll just wait to the next chapter.