the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
as I said before,My last story is the last,but i got SOOOOO bored,so i decided to make another story to take my boredom away.so,lets begin!
''why am i like this.........?''
''is it,because of you.......?''
Prologue:
Leif was walking in a crowded place.he was searching for his friends,but it seems he can't find them.''Where could they be?''questioned Leif to himself.Then,he was surrounded by people,wearing a black jacket,long black gloves,and wore a handkerchief over their head.''W-What do you want from me?''asked Leif,who was nervous.''We just want to get all your points and break your itty-bitty bey''said a tall man.''What should I do?''questioned Leif to himself.''here we go!3!''the man said.''ERR!''growled Leif,placing his bey in his launcher."2!''the man placed his bey in his launcher.''1!''everyone chanted.''Let it RIIIP!''both of them shouted.
to be continued............
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Hope - Apr. 14, 2011
Pretty good story.
I enjoyed it, whens the next chapter.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Janstarblast - Apr. 14, 2011
Woah! And Mr. Ventus strikes back! The prologue- Awesome sauce. When is chapter 1 coming? I'll make a character request this evening.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
thanks!i still kinda bored,so another chapter!
chapter 1:Rise,Apollo!
Both beys landed on the floor.''GO!crush his bey,great Bear!''shouted the man.its charged at Leif's Bey,but Apollo ED145WD was too fast,and dodged it.''NOW APOLLO!''shouted Leif.Apollo jumped in the air,smashing Bear while in mid-flight.''NO!bear,smash him!''said the man.Bear broke free,then circled around Apollo, hitting its track while doing so.''ERR!NOW APOLLO!KING EAGLE SMASH KING!''shouted Leif at the top of his voice.Apollo landed smoothly in the floor,then jumped at great height,Hitting Bear when it dropped down at amazing speed.''w-wha-WHAT?!''said the man,for he was surprised.Apollo landed,while Bear lost its spin entirely.''Alright!''said Leif excitingly.''this isn't over!''said the man,running out of sight with his group.Then,Leif saw his friends,running towards him.''are you Ok?''asked Arnold,his bestfriend.''did they hurt you?''asked Denise,also his bestfriend.''yeah im alright,i guess''replied Leif.
To be continued...........
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Janstarblast - Apr. 14, 2011
A stamina type combo... Interesting! Great story!
btw, I just can't think of a character right now.... Maybe I'll give you one which has been in my story's list of characters(didn't I tell you that I've made a few characters myself. I'll give you one from that)
Character- Ozuma Otaru
Beyblade- Tech(think of an atomic structure) Maniac A100M (Atom 100 Molecule)
Special move-
Sci-Fi= The bey circles the stadium, takes aim, calculates everything, Tech metal wheel glows and ATTACK!(very slow move)
Research= The beyblade glows, collects info about the opponent bey, figures out weak point and ATTACK!(quite fast)
Experiment= A suicidal move, attacks head on without knowing the results. Attack can be anything, a full force smash, a jump attack, etc. (immediate attack)
Level X move-
Atomic blast (can be used only once)- The beyblade explodes, devastating everything that's around it(like an atom bomb)(instant move)
About Ozuma- An intelligent nerd, talks in technical language only, a boring person to hang out with...
Looks- A supernerd from any Pokemon game...
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
now this,is the most weirdest character that i'm going to use i this story
oh,and if you guys are wondering about the start,just before the prologue,it is linked to the entire plot(this will change every plot id changed)
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Janstarblast - Apr. 14, 2011
yep, I made it in reference to Draco's story. Hope you'll like this character. I am in no hurry of watching him in your story, coz he is just...BORING! LOL!
Hope you like it, best friend (kaihitwari/venkai/beystorms style! I am not him though.) Read about it in your sig shop, where another person is kaihitwari, but says he is not kaihitwari.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
man,why cant i make my boredom go away???
chapter 2:science isn't everything
Leif and his friends were wondering around,eventually ending up to their hide-out.''Man!why is it every time i get a lot of points,those guys shows up''asked Leif.''of course they wont let you go away!you got the highest points here in this city!''said Denise,polishing her Bey,Hyper Beafowl 105RF.''your like,the coolest blader around!''also replied Arnold,looking at his bey,Destiny Pegasis T145MS.''probably,you reckon those guys will get back for revenge?''asked Leif.''Well,that if they want to battle you again.HAH!maybe their crying right now!''said Arnold.they all laughed.
then,at the park,there is this kid named Ozuma,he is pretty much a nerd-looking dude,looking at the flowers with a magnifying glass.''hmmm,interesting,must get some sample's of this!''he said,getting his tools for experimenting.all people was looking at him."gee,this guy is sooo totally a nerd''said one boy.''lets get out of hear''said the other.at around that time,Leif and his friends were walking by,noticing the boy.''hey,look!he has a launcher!''said Arnold.''Indeed!I am Ozuma,want to battle?!''asked Ozuma.''I'll battle this guy!''said denise
to be continued.......
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Janstarblast - Apr. 14, 2011
not trying to be mean, but it would be great if you always remain bored. I hope you know the reason.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
i know entirely the reason(you want me to make more chapters,right?)
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - kai kai kai - Apr. 14, 2011
ventus,bbp9 awesome.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
"why........?"
"why do we want power.......?"
Chapter 3:the experiment
"3!"Denise placed her bey in her launcher."2!"Ozuma places his bey in his launcher(geekly places his bey)."1!"they all chanted."let it RIIIIP!"
"go,tech!!"shouted Ozuma.his bey moved was faster than beafowl,but it gave a weird sound."go beafowl!"shouted Denise.her bey glowed purple,and charges at tech.KABOOM!beafowl was still spinning,but when they saw Ozuma's bey,it was still spinning."i-impossible!no bey couldnt survive that!"shouted Denise,who was surprised."i tell you,ITS THE POWER OF SCIENCE!!!now,tech,attack!!!!"shoute Ozuma.tech sped around around the stadium with blinding speed.Then,hits beafowl with incredible strenght."n-no.....i must win!i must win!!!"shouted Denise
To be continued.....
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - BeybladerPotter - Apr. 14, 2011
Great! Feel free to use any of my characters in my story!
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
THanks!dont worry,im goin to use one of them.......
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - BeybladerPotter - Apr. 14, 2011
Ok..
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - hunterowl - Apr. 14, 2011
AWESOME! I was thinking... Can I make a character for your story Ventus98?
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - BeybladerPotter - Apr. 14, 2011
hunterowl: I'm sure he won't mind but just to make sure, wait for tomorrow. Its nighttime already here in the Philippines.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
and are you sure that im not offline?anyways,yeah you may give me character requests
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
chapter 4:the Geekiest battle ever
beafowl has suffered a lot.it has a lot of dents,cracks,and broken pieces,but it is still spinning.''B-beafowl...''cried Denise."hahaha!dont underestimate the power of science!''shouted Ozuma.
''dont quit!''
''huh?''said Denise.her friends were cheering for her.''dont just stand there,USE IT!''shouted Leif.''YEAH!use it,then this will be over!c'mon,USE IT!''shouted Arnold.Denise wiped her tears.''thanks guys,now BEAFOWL!''shouted Denise.''heh''said Ozuma.''WHAT?!"screamed Denise.''Now tech,ATOMIC BLAST!'' shouted Ozuma.his bey Exploded.his bey was still spinning,but where was Beafowl.''HAHAHA!our bey is now vaporized!i win!''said Ozuma.''heh,you think it over so soon?''asked Denise.''wha-what are you talking about?i vaporized your bey,right?''asked Ozuma.''lets see.NOW BEAFOWL!CLAW BREAKER!''shouted Denise.
her bey was falling from the sky with blinding speed.then,ignited with purple flames,it hits Tach with tons of damage,breaking its metal wheel.''now that's what i call the ultimate death move!''said Leif.''no,this cant be''said Ozuma,falling in his knees.''hah!thanks guys!"said Denise.
to be continued
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - X1 - Apr. 14, 2011
Hah, battle changed, good story.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
thanks dude!
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Kujikato - Apr. 14, 2011
hey, can you put my characters in?
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strikeâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011 Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Blaze: A wider, thicker, more defensive version of Hell, it is just 10 mm wider (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
MBD145: a metal version of Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind†(possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 14, 2011
yeah,sure,but expect them to be in chapter 7 or 8.
''this dreams......''
''are they real........or not?''
chapter 5:The tournament,Part 1
''guys!guys!''shouted Arnold,running towards Leif and Denise.''yeah?what is it?''said Leif.''t-there's a tourney at t-the b-pit tom!''replied Arnold,panting.''hey!i got a good idea!how about if we join that tourney!it will be great for us!''said Denise.''hmmm,then its settled,nut we need a group name,something powerful...something really good to say....like..?''asked Leif.''TACOS!Team tacos!''said Arnold.Denise gave him a Karate chop so hard.''we are serious here!''exclaimed Denise.''owwww...that hurts!''said Arnold,holding his head with pain.''i got an idea!
how about team alpha?its good to hear,right?''asked Leif.''thats a good one!''said Denise.''awww,i was hoping for tacos''said Arnold.Denise gave him another karate chop.''Dont make me VERY MAD!!''said Denise.everyone laughed.
the next day,they all met in the b-pit,where a lot of bladers were readying for the tourney.''i cant wait!!!''said Arnold in excitement.''let's sign up!''said Leif.they all signed up,and were at the waiting area.''i cant wait to see who are we going to battle!''said Arnold.
to be continued......
p.s.:draco,im just going to use 3 of your charaters
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Synth - Apr. 15, 2011
chapter 5:tournament,part 2
''ok,guys!we will start in 5 min.please wait momentarily for this exciting event!''shouted Blader-Dj.at the backroom,the instructor is giving the list of battles.''hmm,it seems that i will battle this guy named Feir.what about yours?''asked Leif.''well,my battle is with this gal named Aurora,she's been a great blader in her town''said Denise.
''im Going to battle this Harry guy,he looks strong,too''said Arnold.''Ok!lets gather!you three(pointing at Leif and his friends),what's your team named?''asked the Instructor.''its Team ta-''.''team Alpha!''said Leif and Denise.''ok,so you will be first batch,ok?''asked the instructor.''OK!''said all three of them.''awww,why did-''.''DENISE CHOPPERRRRR!''shouted Denise,smashing Arnold's head.''GACKKKK!''screamed Arnold.
''ok beyblade FANS!we will now start the tourney!!!''shouted Blader-DJ with excitement.the crowds roared with cheers,and Leif was nervous.''OK!lets start!the first game will be....Leif vs Feir!!!!''shouted Blader-DJ.''good luck!''said Denise.''remember what we'd practice,ok?''said Arnold.''ok,thanks''replied Leif.
''3!''Leif places his bey in his launcher.''2!''Feir places his bey in his launcher.''1!''everyone chanted.''LET IT RIIIIP!!!!"
to be continued.........
RE: the ultimate Battle (accepting characters) - Janstarblast - Apr. 15, 2011
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT STORY (Blader DJ style!) Is that Harry, Harry Little from my story!?
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