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RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 10, 2011

where?? maybe I would've done that.... by mistake as on keyboard, z &s are quite near...
when you had cyberpegasus98 avatar, your whole signature was flashing like a traffic light! also, that effect of your username was not working...

EDIT: Yeah, thanks!! I found that in waz in the first sentence... btw, how 'waz' Tongue_out the chapter?


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Kadoya - Mar. 10, 2011

Not bad, keep trying


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 10, 2011

Thanks Kadoya!!! I'll try to improve... but do keep up your suggestions about improvements


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Kujikato - Mar. 11, 2011

you spelt izuma wrong its Izuma not Izoma


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 11, 2011

Sorry, Draco....
Also, sorry I'd to make him a villain in my story... but that's only for this one chapter....


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Kujikato - Mar. 11, 2011

It's ok, i like an odd twist


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 11, 2011

Thanks a lot!! Its like Tsubasa joining the Dark Nebula. He did such disastrous things as a villain! But in the end, he turns out to be a good character...


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Kujikato - Mar. 11, 2011

thats the point, lol, oh yeah can you read my story and vote on the poll, you can add a character if u want


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 12, 2011

sure! Even I wanted to make a poll for this, but I forgot....


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 19, 2011

Sorry friends..... I know each chapter is taking tooooooooo long, but I am quite busy with exams.... I come to the site frequently and post quite a lot.... But to write a story, it takes a hell lot of time!!


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Mar. 22, 2011

Chapter 5- Izuma? Izuma who?



RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Kujikato - Apr. 08, 2011

that was EPICLY AWESOME, thx for the ad in the story i like the way you described the "legendary forbidden Level-X move"


RE: Beyblade: Journey from the local parks to international level.(Story)(need characters!!! PLEASE!) - Janstarblast - Apr. 09, 2011

Oh! Thanks a lot! I took some inspiration from your story! Also, I had completely forgotten I was writing this story. I am shocked by the date of the Chapter 5 post. Not only coz it was long back, but the very next day, my final tests began! Those tests completely made me forget about this story.... So now, Harry's adventures will continue.


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 12, 2011

CHAPTER 6: Power of Aquios.
So this is the end of chapter 6!! I hope Ventus reads this and likes it. After all, I finally introduced his character!


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Kujikato - Apr. 12, 2011

cool chapter, keep writing!


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Justaway - Apr. 12, 2011

Great story! I liked it a lot..BTW if it is about how an Indian blader goes to international level...then maybe you can take some inspiration from Inazuma 11 which has a similar plot but different sport.


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Synth - Apr. 12, 2011

cool!i like how you introduce you-,err,my character!its soo cool,ill give you a 10/10 perfectness!


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 12, 2011

(Apr. 12, 2011  11:26 AM)SAMKUL95 Wrote: Great story! I liked it a lot..BTW if it is about how an Indian blader goes to international level...then maybe you can take some inspiration from Inazuma 11 which has a similar plot but different sport.

What is that? Is that a story around the forum? Or is it about some great personality? Sorry, I don't know anything about it.Confused


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Justaway - Apr. 12, 2011

Inazuma 11 is a cartoon series with the same plot..a soccer team which wants to be the best and does so even at the international level....that is similar to the main plot of your story as well isnt it?...google it and see..


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 12, 2011

I'll check it right away!
Ventus and dracovianauis and Samkul- Thanx a lot for that appreciation.
Ventus- I luved introducing your character. I loved writing the line-
"Its not to demonstrate my strength, its to show you your weakness".


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Synth - Apr. 12, 2011

yeah,that's the best line i ever read about this story!


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 12, 2011

thanks! next chapter will be up soon!


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Black Ghost - Apr. 12, 2011

Name: Ginta
Beyblade: Marble Pegasis RW105RF (Rubber Wing 105 Rubber Flat)
Description: Ginga's brother.

EDIT: The Marble wheel is Galaxy but with 4 projections.


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 12, 2011

Thanks Ryuuga, I won't keep him Ginga's bro, coz Ginga and all other characters will remain anime characters ONLY. I mentioned in first chap, that Harry was watching the last episode of MFB season 1. Character accepted.

I DO NOT NEED ANY MORE CHARACTERS. ALL THIS WHILE, I HAVE CREATED A FEW NEW CHARACTERS MYSELF.


RE: Beyblade: The BIG BANG ORGANIZATION TOURNAMENT (Story) - Janstarblast - Apr. 13, 2011

Chapter 7:
To be continued...