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Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Ryuuga BB Ruler - Nov. 14, 2008

Sphere Master Lyric
They say u can’t win but I said I can
Because I got friends, strength and power
So be ready to lose my friend
I will fly my way though the top
And nothing will stop me from winning
And becoming master of sphere
So my friends let go together and win this

Character profile
Name: Yoshi Donto

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Skin color: White

First name meaning- Better,Best

Name: Kiyoshi Sasaki

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Skin Color: White

First name meaning-Quiet
Note: rest of the character profiles will be up soon


I am thinking of doing a live action series instead doing chapters or if I can't do a live action series I will do chapters


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Blitz - Nov. 14, 2008

Live action series would be sooo much cooler!!!


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Ryuuga BB Ruler - Nov. 14, 2008

(Nov. 14, 2008  8:25 PM)Blitz Wrote: Live action series would be sooo much cooler!!!

I mybe will go around the mall or something and give ramdom kids papers


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - NAP - Nov. 14, 2008

Screw Bakugan I've got Sphere Masters!
Let the mayhem commence!!


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Pikachao - Nov. 14, 2008

Quote:Because I got friends

AHAHAHAHAHAHA. Sorry.

This is a cool new series. Write more soon please, I like how yoshi means best. What if he loses and isn't the best? That would be funny. o.o


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Shake.junt95 - Nov. 14, 2008

oooooo chould this be the new fighting animals ooo the tension


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Pikachao - Nov. 14, 2008

(Nov. 14, 2008  10:24 PM)darkbladerx200 Wrote: oooooo chould this be the new fighting animals ooo the tension

This will never be able to replace the awesomeness of fighting animals. =O

NEVER. Except at the end of time. Q.Q


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Kei - Nov. 14, 2008

This has potential


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Grey - Nov. 15, 2008

The first thing I thought of was Lucario

(Nov. 14, 2008  8:15 PM)Leo Aggressive Wrote:
Sphere Master Lyric
They say u can’t win but I said I can
Because I got friends, strength and power
So be ready to lose my friend
I will fly my way though the top
And nothing will stop me from winning
And becoming master of sphere
So my friends let go together and win this

When will this be on iTunes, I want it


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - To - Nov. 15, 2008

Spin Masters makes Bakugan, no relations at all...


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - NAP - Nov. 15, 2008

(Nov. 14, 2008  9:24 PM)shikamaru526 Wrote: Screw Bakugan I've got Sphere Masters!



RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Aikemi - Nov. 16, 2008

This is AWESOME. When will next chapter be up?


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Bey Brad - Nov. 16, 2008

ironically loving kenny's awful stories has gotten old guys


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - MuchWow - Nov. 16, 2008

no they are all really good so loving them wont get old
check out my sig Smile


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Ryuuga BB Ruler - Nov. 16, 2008

I am making chapter 1 and chapter 1 will be called A Sphere Master is born and will be done later today or tommorrow


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - NAP - Nov. 16, 2008

You should ask anchored to sing the theme song!


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - MuchWow - Nov. 16, 2008

(Nov. 16, 2008  6:04 PM)shikamaru526 Wrote: You should ask anchored to sing the theme song!
ya and ask him to make u a logo like the FA TEB one(it was kool)


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Ryuuga BB Ruler - Nov. 16, 2008

Chapter 1: A Sphere Master is born
My name is Yoshi Donto, I am a teenage boy and go to school at Sphere Academy. Yes it a school where all the boys and girls go to play Sphere Master, it a battle game where u need to make all the gates turn to green in all 5 floor but it hard because the gate can turn red and u lose -2 point for every gate that turn red and if all gates turn red in all 5 floor then your point goes to 0 and u lose the game. For me my points are at 200 which is bad but I ain’t worry about it because someday I will become Sphere Master just like my dad, now u know so let me get back to what I doing,
Kiyoshi: u better hurry Yoshi or u will lose again like always.
Yoshi: shooting. That Kiyoshi Sasaki, he the school bully who always takes other players spheres so he can be the best, he also quiet which is why I don’t know why he a bully but oh well, time to get back into game.
Yoshi: carp, it turns red but not to worry I still have points left, grab his sphere and shoot it.
Kiyoshi: what a loser, u can’t even make any of the gates green.
Yoshi: Grab his last sphere and shoot it, suddenly the sphere turn to fire and all of the gates expect for the 2 gates that turn red turn all green. Yoshi then look at his point bar and look up and say wow.
Kiyoshi: he fell to the ground and start crying
Yoshi: walk over to Kiyoshi and said, hand over the bag of spheres so I can give them back to the owners.
Kiyoshi: Never, he ran away from Yoshi and while he was running he trip and fell down on the ground and the bag of spheres went everywhere.
Yoshi: Serve you right Kiyoshi.
Yoshi left Kiyoshi and went home, the next day Yoshi got up and went downstairs and then he notice the tv is still on so he went and turn off the tv but when he was about to turn off the tv a commercial pop up and said want to be a sphere master then come on down and enter and then Yoshi turn off the tv and say, this is my chance to become sphere master.

make sure u comment after reading this first chapter of Sphere Master


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Pikachao - Nov. 16, 2008

I don't understand the concept as to how the game works. Does he run through gates and they either turn green or red?

EDIT: What's the "sphere master" thing about? Is there a ranking system in this story or something?


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Bey Brad - Nov. 17, 2008

what the hell


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Kei - Nov. 17, 2008

carp, this is awesome

I need a better explanation of how the game works though


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Aikemi - Nov. 17, 2008

Didn`t the TV thing already happen in FA?

and this a -58,963.8/10 aside from everything, I loved it and cant wait to see more!

But seriously, do you show this to like anyone to like grammar check and stuff before you post it,or do you read over your it yourself? And how does the game work, do they just throw marbles at eachother until a gate turns green?


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - ChozenBlader - Nov. 17, 2008

I think you should type this out in MS Word first. It will correct errors in grammar + spelling. The game confuses me also


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Ryuuga BB Ruler - Nov. 17, 2008

1.Sphere Master is like King Of Game in Yugioh and the name of the game
2. They throw marbles at the gates and if all the gates turn red then your point goes to 0 and u lose the game, for example if two gates turn red and u have 300points u will have 297points due to the decrease -2 points so if the two gates turn red u use the two decrease -2 to decrease your points

I am sorry if I diden't explain the game enough


RE: Sphere Master( New Story I made) - Aikemi - Nov. 17, 2008

....thats it...throwing marbles at gates....