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beyblade the warrior within ep 1 prologue - soccerxman96 - Oct. 31, 2010
here is my series
Chad: Great Job Pegasus, (Pegasus jumps back to chads hand) now your ready for the battle cup!
???: What a bunch of carp!!!
Chad:
Who is there?( strange character leaps off a roof and lands right in front of chad)
Zack: My name is Zack and I am the best blader in the city.
Chad: Yeah right, my pegasus can beat you any time! XD
Zack: how bout now ( pulls out dark bull)
Chad: you got it!!
Zack: ready to lose?
Chad: never
together: 3,2,1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!!!!!1
both beys launched onto the black top and clashed together like to bell hitting each other
(pegasus circles bull for a straight attack)
Zack: Bull Horn THrust!!!!
Chad: What?!
Zack: Try to escape my massive attack Go Bull
( bull grabs pegasus with its horns and throws it up in the air)
Chad: to himself (yes now is a perfect chance for my special move) pegusus storm strike
(pegasus moves sideways and spins so fast that fire is swinging around the hot metal ring)
Chad:
Zack:
(smoke is covering the battle field,after two minutes pegasus is spinning but bull is smashed into the ground)
Zack: NOOOOOOO bull!!!
Chad: Ha that is another win
Zack: You won now but you won't beat me in the battle cup
Chad: fine see you there
END
RE: beyblade the warrior within ep 1 prologue - Dan - Oct. 31, 2010
This is more of a script, less like a story.
RE: beyblade the warrior within ep 1 prologue - galaxy epic - Oct. 31, 2010
the battle was a little to short.its more of a script.the story should describe the battle a little something like: The beys clashed together.The sound of clashing metal rang in my ears. "Go Bull! Horn Thrust!!!!"yells Zack.
Other than that,great story!
RE: beyblade the warrior within ep 1 prologue - soccerxman96 - Oct. 31, 2010
(Oct. 31, 2010 4:15 AM)galaxy epic Wrote: the battle was a little to short.its more of a script.the story should describe the battle a little something like: The beys clashed together.The sound of clashing metal rang in my ears. "Go Bull! Horn Thrust!!!!"yells Zack.
Other than that,great story!
thanks here I am going to edit it
here you guys is the pre-edited version