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English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - I Love Apples - Sep. 23, 2010
Ginga: Metal Bey City is a great place for battling *hyoma appears*
Hyoma: Ginga, i want a rematch when u defeated me the last time
Ginga: Sure thing, ur gunna lose
Hyoma: *Gets out his Clay Aries* so u think so? ive been training
Ginga: *puts Pegasis on launcher*
Hyoma: *puts Aries on launcher*
Ginga & Hyoma: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Hyoma: Go Aries!
Ginga: Pegasis, Go! *Kenta appears*
Kenta: *looks at sagittario* Wat are u doing ginga?
Ginga: Kenta? is that? oh it is u! are u watching?
Kenta: Wat?
Ginga: Go Pegasis!
Hyoma: Aries, Sheep horn throw!
Kenta: *goes to B-Pit and calls madoka* MADOKA!!!
*Dark Nebula Castle*
Doji: Merci, have u located where ginga is?
Merci: Master, We are going to check out Storm Pegasis's Secret *Ryuuga Apears*
Doji: Ryuuga! wat are u doing here?
Ryuuga: so, picking up data from ginga eh? perfect, absultutaly Perfect
*B-Pit*
Kenta: can u do some matenince on Sagittario?
Madoka: Sure thing kenta, *puts sagittario on scanner* sagittario has some scratches, not big, but bad, very very bad.
Kenta: I hope sagittario does get fixed
*5 minutes later*
Madoka: Kenta! im done!
Kenta: *gets sagittario* wow! its just like sagittario was new, thanks madoka!
Madoka: no problem kenta.
*Battle*
Ginga: Pegasis, Shooting star attack!
Clay Aries: *Moves away from pegasis*
Hyoma: Aries, Sheep horn throw!
Clay Aries: *Hits pegasis on clear wheel and throws pegasis back up*
Ginga: Wat?
Storm Pegasis: lands on ground with low stamina
Ginga: Thats impossible!
Hyoma: time to finish this off, Aries, Go low!
Clay Aries: *Goes fast, hits pegasis in track*
Ginga: Wat????
Kenta: Wat??? u lost aganst hyoma? *kenta automaticly launches sagittario* Sagittario, Flame Claw!
Hyoma: Wat is that, Kenta? is that u?
Kenta: thats right, im kenta
Hyoma: where?
Kenta: im up here
Hyoma: Aries, Sheep horn throw!
Kenta: Sagittario, Flame Claw!
Sagittario & Clay Aries: *Explosion*
Hyoma: i dont stand a chance against this stamina
Clay Aries: *Loses*
Hyoma: *Picks Up Aries* wat? *Tsubasa appears*
Tsubasa: i work for the WBBA and i am in dark nebula to see wat they are up to.
*at WBBA*
Blader DJ: time to see this battle! be hold, Hikaru Hasama *People Cheer* Versues Kyoya Tategami! *People Cheer again*
Hikaru: 3
Kyoya: 2
Hikaru: 1
Kyoya & Hikaru: Go Shoot!
Hikaru: Go Aquario! Infinity Assult!
Kyoya: Go Leone!
Wind Aquario & Rock Leone: *hits sooo hard that it makes a big explosion and explosion blows dust everywhere*
Kyoya: Go leone, Lion gale force wall!
Hikaru: Aquario! *loses*
Kyoya: *catches leone* i win.
Benkei: *Cheers the most* Kyoya Won, Kyoya Won! *Goes to bey park*
*At bey park*
Kenta: Sagittario! Flame claw!
Benkei: Dark Bull, Bull Upper!
*Dark bull defeated*
Kenta: Alright! defeated ur dark bull in 1 hit!
*Resturant*
Ginga: 1 tripple beef burger please!
Worker: heres your order sir
Ginga: *takes burger* thanks! *eats burger* that was delichious
*dark nebula castle*
Doji: alright we have all of pegasis's secret
Merci: alright.
End of comic
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - Annoying-Fork - Sep. 23, 2010
This.... Is a script. (No duh)
Why can't you DRAW this comic before calling it so?
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - Pimpju - Sep. 25, 2010
Also, it's pretty horrid. Might want to change the dialogue. Also spellcheck.
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - Night - Oct. 21, 2010
Not enough story, just battles everywhere. I found it odd how Tsubasa appeared out of nowhere and told them his plans.
Sorry.
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - ArtBladerMarx - Nov. 11, 2010
Night is right. There are too many battles and the places keep shifting. Nice try to make a story, though. I kind of like it.
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - earthleone234 - Nov. 12, 2010
Whos Merci? Is it the guy that has Poison serpent?
RE: English Metal Fight Beyblade Comic, explosion battles, the dark nebula & pegasis - Night - Nov. 12, 2010
(Nov. 12, 2010 9:32 PM)earthleone234 Wrote: Whos Merci? Is it the guy that has Poison serpent?
FacePalm...
Daidoji/Doji's Computer. You don't watch the anime, do you?