Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - Lucha Burst - Apr. 06, 2022
Welcome to Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary. Welcome to the Xtraordinary beyblade world, This series centers around young Jona Chano, A student who transfers to an american school he is introduced to the american blading scene, He picks up new hobbies and pursues his love of blading, He quickly find however that this is nothing like the world of beyblade in japan, he must fight to learn and adapt to this new style of american battling.
System:
Chip - A GT like chip that snaps into the Wheel
Wheel - The main part of the layer, the wheel holds the beys chip and connects to the blade, there are 3 types of wheels. to put the chip onto the bey you have to twist the chip into the slots which pushes out tabs that grab and hold the blade on
Clear - A like clearish wheel, the lightest wheel and has a thick outer ring and thinner inner portion giving it fairly good stamina.
Slash Wheel - A wheel with a thick solid design with 4 holes in it to keep the weight around the same and not give it a heavy advantage
Bound wheel - A wheel with a bound outer edge that makes the bey have a bound gimmick
Stone Wheel - The Stone wheel has holes that channel air and pull the layer into the stadium, this greatly improves the abilities of defense and attack types and when paired with free spin drivers it does extremely well ans has great abilities on attack types. however it is rather light.
Blade - The blade holds all the contact points ans clips under the wheel.
Disc - a normal disc.
Driver - Normal Driver.
Chapter 1:
*A school building with the name "Beigoma Academy: American Division" could be seen*
Jona: This place doesn't really live up to the reviews and hype I heard in japan;
*The bell would ring loudly and children would flood out of the doors*
Jona: Tomorrow, tomorrow I will make a outstanding first impression, prove that i do deserve to be here.
*A kid would bump into Jona*
???: Hey watch it, oh great don't tell me your the transfer student? I was right your another undeserving hopeful.
Jona: Your right.
???: Oh dont pull that on me, I dont pity losers.
Jona: Your right, I'm not deserving, I do not belong here, I am not "one of you" but one thing I am is a fighter, so battle me and i'll prove my worth.
???: Your not worth my time? What rank are you even?
Jona: 8.5
???(Shocked):WHAT- No way your an 8.5, I,m barely a 6.5.
Jona: Do you accept or not?
???: Challenge accepted.
*they would walk over to the stadium*
???: My name is Ash and I fight with Infinite Achilles
Jona: I'm Jona, I fight with Swarm Jaculus. Let's get this started.
*A crowd had formed around them, chanting for Ash*
Ash/Jona: 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!
*Achilles and Jaculus landed in the stadium, Jaculus would take off immediately around the stadium with great speed*
Ash: Infinite Attack!
Jona: Swarming Destroyer.
*Jaculus would speed around the stadium as Achilles made its way for Jaculus, last second Jaculus moved out of the way and smashed Achilles from behind into the wall. As achilles wobbled away from the wall Jaculus' height dropped and Jaculus would strike a devastating upper strike, Bursting Achilles.
Ash(Astonished): N- No way, it can't be, theres no way a bey can move like that.
*Jona would walk away*
Crowd: Battle again!
Jona: No, I've proved my point already.
*Back at Jona's "bey lab"*
Jona: Your doing good Jaculus, but lets make you better. Let's fix the flaws in your timing. 3, 2, 1, Let it rip!
*Jaculus would land in the stadium, leaning slightly and speeding around*
Jona: Swarming Drop!
*Jaculus's height would drop down to a lower stance*
Jona: I guess you don't really need my help anymore.
*At the beigoma acadamies bey lab*
Ash: He won't embaress me like that tomorrow, I'm not the best for now, that's about to change, isn't it Aries.
*A loud thud would be heard on the door*
???: Open up.
Ash: Do you have what I ordered?
???: Yes I have the...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - Anime Blader - Apr. 07, 2022
(Apr. 06, 2022 2:37 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Welcome to Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary. Welcome to the Xtraordinary beyblade world, This series centers around young Jona Chano, A student who transfers to an american school he is introduced to the american blading scene, He picks up new hobbies and pursues his love of blading, He quickly find however that this is nothing like the world of beyblade in japan, he must fight to learn and adapt to this new style of american battling.
System:
Chip - A GT like chip that snaps into the Wheel
Wheel - The main part of the layer, the wheel holds the beys chip and connects to the blade, there are 3 types of wheels. to put the chip onto the bey you have to twist the chip into the slots which pushes out tabs that grab and hold the blade on
Clear - A like clearish wheel, the lightest wheel and has a thick outer ring and thinner inner portion giving it fairly good stamina.
Slash Wheel - A wheel with a thick solid design with 4 holes in it to keep the weight around the same and not give it a heavy advantage
Bound wheel - A wheel with a bound outer edge that makes the bey have a bound gimmick
Stone Wheel - The Stone wheel has holes that channel air and pull the layer into the stadium, this greatly improves the abilities of defense and attack types and when paired with free spin drivers it does extremely well ans has great abilities on attack types. however it is rather light.
Blade - The blade holds all the contact points ans clips under the wheel.
Disc - a normal disc.
Driver - Normal Driver.
Chapter 1:
*A school building with the name "Beigoma Academy: American Division" could be seen*
Jona: This place doesn't really live up to the reviews and hype I heard in japan;
*The bell would ring loudly and children would flood out of the doors*
Jona: Tomorrow, tomorrow I will make a outstanding first impression, prove that i do deserve to be here.
*A kid would bump into Jona*
???: Hey watch it, oh great don't tell me your the transfer student? I was right your another undeserving hopeful.
Jona: Your right.
???: Oh dont pull that on me, I dont pity losers.
Jona: Your right, I'm not deserving, I do not belong here, I am not "one of you" but one thing I am is a fighter, so battle me and i'll prove my worth.
???: Your not worth my time? What rank are you even?
Jona: 8.5
???(Shocked):WHAT- No way your an 8.5, I,m barely a 6.5.
Jona: Do you accept or not?
???: Challenge accepted.
*they would walk over to the stadium*
???: My name is Ash and I fight with Infinite Achilles
Jona: I'm Jona, I fight with Swarm Jaculus. Let's get this started.
*A crowd had formed around them, chanting for Ash*
Ash/Jona: 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!
*Achilles and Jaculus landed in the stadium, Jaculus would take off immediately around the stadium with great speed*
Ash: Infinite Attack!
Jona: Swarming Destroyer.
*Jaculus would speed around the stadium as Achilles made its way for Jaculus, last second Jaculus moved out of the way and smashed Achilles from behind into the wall. As achilles wobbled away from the wall Jaculus' height dropped and Jaculus would strike a devastating upper strike, Bursting Achilles.
Ash(Astonished): N- No way, it can't be, theres no way a bey can move like that.
*Jona would walk away*
Crowd: Battle again!
Jona: No, I've proved my point already.
*Back at Jona's "bey lab"*
Jona: Your doing good Jaculus, but lets make you better. Let's fix the flaws in your timing. 3, 2, 1, Let it rip!
*Jaculus would land in the stadium, leaning slightly and speeding around*
Jona: Swarming Drop!
*Jaculus's height would drop down to a lower stance*
Jona: I guess you don't really need my help anymore.
*At the beigoma acadamies bey lab*
Ash: He won't embaress me like that tomorrow, I'm not the best for now, that's about to change, isn't it Aries.
*A loud thud would be heard on the door*
???: Open up.
Ash: Do you have what I ordered?
???: Yes I have the... What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - UnseenBurst - Apr. 07, 2022
(Apr. 06, 2022 2:37 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Welcome to Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary. Welcome to the Xtraordinary beyblade world, This series centers around young Jona Chano, A student who transfers to an american school he is introduced to the american blading scene, He picks up new hobbies and pursues his love of blading, He quickly find however that this is nothing like the world of beyblade in japan, he must fight to learn and adapt to this new style of american battling.
System:
Chip - A GT like chip that snaps into the Wheel
Wheel - The main part of the layer, the wheel holds the beys chip and connects to the blade, there are 3 types of wheels. to put the chip onto the bey you have to twist the chip into the slots which pushes out tabs that grab and hold the blade on
Clear - A like clearish wheel, the lightest wheel and has a thick outer ring and thinner inner portion giving it fairly good stamina.
Slash Wheel - A wheel with a thick solid design with 4 holes in it to keep the weight around the same and not give it a heavy advantage
Bound wheel - A wheel with a bound outer edge that makes the bey have a bound gimmick
Stone Wheel - The Stone wheel has holes that channel air and pull the layer into the stadium, this greatly improves the abilities of defense and attack types and when paired with free spin drivers it does extremely well ans has great abilities on attack types. however it is rather light.
Blade - The blade holds all the contact points ans clips under the wheel.
Disc - a normal disc.
Driver - Normal Driver.
Chapter 1:
*A school building with the name "Beigoma Academy: American Division" could be seen*
Jona: This place doesn't really live up to the reviews and hype I heard in japan;
*The bell would ring loudly and children would flood out of the doors*
Jona: Tomorrow, tomorrow I will make a outstanding first impression, prove that i do deserve to be here.
*A kid would bump into Jona*
???: Hey watch it, oh great don't tell me your the transfer student? I was right your another undeserving hopeful.
Jona: Your right.
???: Oh dont pull that on me, I dont pity losers.
Jona: Your right, I'm not deserving, I do not belong here, I am not "one of you" but one thing I am is a fighter, so battle me and i'll prove my worth.
???: Your not worth my time? What rank are you even?
Jona: 8.5
???(Shocked):WHAT- No way your an 8.5, I,m barely a 6.5.
Jona: Do you accept or not?
???: Challenge accepted.
*they would walk over to the stadium*
???: My name is Ash and I fight with Infinite Achilles
Jona: I'm Jona, I fight with Swarm Jaculus. Let's get this started.
*A crowd had formed around them, chanting for Ash*
Ash/Jona: 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!
*Achilles and Jaculus landed in the stadium, Jaculus would take off immediately around the stadium with great speed*
Ash: Infinite Attack!
Jona: Swarming Destroyer.
*Jaculus would speed around the stadium as Achilles made its way for Jaculus, last second Jaculus moved out of the way and smashed Achilles from behind into the wall. As achilles wobbled away from the wall Jaculus' height dropped and Jaculus would strike a devastating upper strike, Bursting Achilles.
Ash(Astonished): N- No way, it can't be, theres no way a bey can move like that.
*Jona would walk away*
Crowd: Battle again!
Jona: No, I've proved my point already.
*Back at Jona's "bey lab"*
Jona: Your doing good Jaculus, but lets make you better. Let's fix the flaws in your timing. 3, 2, 1, Let it rip!
*Jaculus would land in the stadium, leaning slightly and speeding around*
Jona: Swarming Drop!
*Jaculus's height would drop down to a lower stance*
Jona: I guess you don't really need my help anymore.
*At the beigoma acadamies bey lab*
Ash: He won't embaress me like that tomorrow, I'm not the best for now, that's about to change, isn't it Aries.
*A loud thud would be heard on the door*
???: Open up.
Ash: Do you have what I ordered?
???: Yes I have the...
Nice fanfic, Lucha Burst. It's nice to see you back. I'm very excited to see where you go with this Fanfic. I'll definitely be following this fanfic and seeing how it'll improve and evolve through the Series. I wish you luck with this Fanfic and you have my full confidence that you'll be able to make this Fanfic one of the best here!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - Lucha Burst - Apr. 07, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: (Apr. 06, 2022 2:37 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Welcome to Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary. Welcome to the Xtraordinary beyblade world, This series centers around young Jona Chano, A student who transfers to an american school he is introduced to the american blading scene, He picks up new hobbies and pursues his love of blading, He quickly find however that this is nothing like the world of beyblade in japan, he must fight to learn and adapt to this new style of american battling.
System:
Chip - A GT like chip that snaps into the Wheel
Wheel - The main part of the layer, the wheel holds the beys chip and connects to the blade, there are 3 types of wheels. to put the chip onto the bey you have to twist the chip into the slots which pushes out tabs that grab and hold the blade on
Clear - A like clearish wheel, the lightest wheel and has a thick outer ring and thinner inner portion giving it fairly good stamina.
Slash Wheel - A wheel with a thick solid design with 4 holes in it to keep the weight around the same and not give it a heavy advantage
Bound wheel - A wheel with a bound outer edge that makes the bey have a bound gimmick
Stone Wheel - The Stone wheel has holes that channel air and pull the layer into the stadium, this greatly improves the abilities of defense and attack types and when paired with free spin drivers it does extremely well ans has great abilities on attack types. however it is rather light.
Blade - The blade holds all the contact points ans clips under the wheel.
Disc - a normal disc.
Driver - Normal Driver.
Chapter 1:
*A school building with the name "Beigoma Academy: American Division" could be seen*
Jona: This place doesn't really live up to the reviews and hype I heard in japan;
*The bell would ring loudly and children would flood out of the doors*
Jona: Tomorrow, tomorrow I will make a outstanding first impression, prove that i do deserve to be here.
*A kid would bump into Jona*
???: Hey watch it, oh great don't tell me your the transfer student? I was right your another undeserving hopeful.
Jona: Your right.
???: Oh dont pull that on me, I dont pity losers.
Jona: Your right, I'm not deserving, I do not belong here, I am not "one of you" but one thing I am is a fighter, so battle me and i'll prove my worth.
???: Your not worth my time? What rank are you even?
Jona: 8.5
???(Shocked):WHAT- No way your an 8.5, I,m barely a 6.5.
Jona: Do you accept or not?
???: Challenge accepted.
*they would walk over to the stadium*
???: My name is Ash and I fight with Infinite Achilles
Jona: I'm Jona, I fight with Swarm Jaculus. Let's get this started.
*A crowd had formed around them, chanting for Ash*
Ash/Jona: 3, 2, 1, Let It Rip!
*Achilles and Jaculus landed in the stadium, Jaculus would take off immediately around the stadium with great speed*
Ash: Infinite Attack!
Jona: Swarming Destroyer.
*Jaculus would speed around the stadium as Achilles made its way for Jaculus, last second Jaculus moved out of the way and smashed Achilles from behind into the wall. As achilles wobbled away from the wall Jaculus' height dropped and Jaculus would strike a devastating upper strike, Bursting Achilles.
Ash(Astonished): N- No way, it can't be, theres no way a bey can move like that.
*Jona would walk away*
Crowd: Battle again!
Jona: No, I've proved my point already.
*Back at Jona's "bey lab"*
Jona: Your doing good Jaculus, but lets make you better. Let's fix the flaws in your timing. 3, 2, 1, Let it rip!
*Jaculus would land in the stadium, leaning slightly and speeding around*
Jona: Swarming Drop!
*Jaculus's height would drop down to a lower stance*
Jona: I guess you don't really need my help anymore.
*At the beigoma academies bey lab*
Ash: He won't embarrass me like that tomorrow, I'm not the best for now, that's about to change, isn't it Aries.
*A loud thud would be heard on the door*
???: Open up.
Ash: Do you have what I ordered?
???: Yes I have the... What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - beansworth - Apr. 08, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic Oh, I have two I want to vote for, but I'll vote for Spriggan. Btw, this fanfic is pretty good ngl, good job!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - LegendJustice - Apr. 11, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(1 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
Hmm phoenix for me.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - UnseenBurst - Apr. 11, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
I'm gonna vote for Spriggan since it is such a Cool Balance Type.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - DJCAT8608 - Apr. 11, 2022
I vote for Spriggan
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - UnknownIfirit - Apr. 12, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
I vote Longinus! I feel it would be a necessity to have a kind of intimidating, strong beyblade in a beyblade fanfic.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - Anime Blader - Apr. 12, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 1:55 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: What's different? Has rubber been banned in America for beys? Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
Spriggan
(Apr. 12, 2022 12:52 AM)UnknownIfirit Wrote: (Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Mainly whats different is the ways of battling and the beys, a lot of new beys not really seen before as well, also theirs the american ranking system as well, which was seen in the the chapter above.
Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic
I vote Longinus! I feel it would be a necessity to have a kind of intimidating, strong beyblade in a beyblade fanfic.
I would deem Spriggan as a intimidating and strong beyblade
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nx98O7fLPRQ&t=14s
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - Hollowmind13 - Apr. 12, 2022
(Apr. 07, 2022 8:07 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Which Japanese bey should be included in the fanfic?
Hercules(0 Votes)
Longinus(0 Votes)
Phoenix(0 votes)
Kerbeus(0 Votes)
Hades(0 Votes)
Ragnarok(0 Votes)
Spriggan(0 Votes)
Odin(0 Votes)
Top 2 will go into the fanfic .
Ok so I'll do a deep analysis on this to see which one is the most likely in universe and the 2nd most likely too. Remember, I'm making these decisions based on the beys. Anyone can make an attack type Ragnarok, so the motif isn't disqualified, only the bey adaptation.
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First off, let's see which ones are less likely. Odin, Hercules and Ragnarok are eliminated. Odin isn't much famous to have the jap ver. Hercules was a good bey but few would actually do an evo of such (lacks popularity per say). Ragnarok is just weak, you aren't going to make a Ragnarok unless you like tornadoes, you like the jap ver a lot, or you're going to make it good. (Between Valkyrie and Ragnarok, most would choose Valkyrie, that shows it just got eliminated because it gets outshined by other famous jap beys.)
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Kerbeus and Hades also fall behind. Kerbeus loses mostly because it doesn't have that much fame even though the motif would surely be used. Same for Hades, I could 100% see someone using an Hades but it wouldn't be the Hades we are used to see.
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Now for what's left: Spriggan, Phoenix and Longinus
Spriggan easily takes 1st spot because Shu went to America and became a top tier blader there. So spriggan is an easy 1st.
As for 2nd, Phoenix has an incredible gimmick that everyone would simp for + fame thanks to Cho-z + Cool motif.
Longinus also has *le cool* gimmick (metal dragons) that everyone would also simp for + It looks sick, more than Phoenix imo + Very powerful Attack type.
These factors, when compared, makes them evenly matched. Longinus motif is pretty weak compared to Phoenix, but the bey compensates for that. Only thing Phoenix 1UPs is christian family-friendly-ness, other than that they are even in terms of more likely to do a cameo in america.
TL;DR: Spriggan is first and then a tie between Phoenix and Longinus for 2nd. I personally vote for Longinus because Spriggan will prob win, so Longinus isn't bad.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Xtraordinary - MasterofDerp - Apr. 16, 2022
Ngl I’m gonna vote Phoenix, but I’d honestly keep the main 4 in(Valkyrie, Spriggan, Fafnir, Longinus). It allows for a strong core base to keep a foundation. I would LOVE to see a Hades tho, but Phoenix is the bey I prefer.
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