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Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 08, 2021
I'll work on this fanfic after Destruction
Probably you'll be surprised
RE: Beyblade Burst: United - UnseenBurst - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 6:36 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: I'll work on this fanfic after Destruction
Probably you'll be surprised
You probably shouldn't open a thread on a Fanfic that will start on a long time, but hey, that's just me.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 08, 2021
Chapter 1 Part 1
Bey of Chaos!!! Chaos Storm.
Hanami: Hello beyfans!!! Today we'll have a battle in the dynamite drive stadium.
Hanami: First is Valt Aoi!!!.
Valt: Let's do this!!!.
Hanami: And next is Bell!!!.
Bell: You won't beat me, The Demon King.
Valt: Yeah i will!!!.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
(Belial goes near the center.)
Hanami: Belial is kinda doing the Rush Shoot.
Valt: Attack him Valkyrie!!!.
Bell: Belial Counter it, Dynamite Counter.
Valt: Attack!!!.
(Belial and Valkyrie are hitting each other in a flurry of attacks.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Both avatars appear.)
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
(Belial gets ringed out.)
Ref: It's Savior Valkyrie with over finish Valt wins.
Valt: Yes!!!.
Bell: I'll get you next round.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
Valt: Rush Shoot!!!.
Bell: Venture Shoot!!!.
(They hit each other again in a flurry of attacks.)
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Valkyrie's avatar appears.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
(Belial's avatar appears.)
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
(Valkyrie bursts.)
Ref: It's Dynamite Belial with burst finish bell wins the match.
Kenny: Watching TV was good, now time to create a beyblade!!!.
(Kenny finishes.)
Kenny: It's done!!! Chaos Storm.
Preview:
Kenny: I'm going to battle.
???: I'll battle with you.
Kenny: Alright!!!
Next Time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moments
Kenny vs ???.
Kenny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - LegendJustice - Aug. 08, 2021
Nice grammar but there was No periods work on that!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 08, 2021
I'll edit it
I added periods
and the opening
Let's fight till we get tired.
We'll believe in our beys.
This will be your final moment (Moment!!!)
Let's fight in a revolution!!!
Bring the evil to your side (pure evil)
Battle at your max (max)
Now bring the evil down
Beyblade, beyblade, fight for your reward (reward)
Take a journey (to the top)
Now let's finish this off
Beyblade Burst: Final Moment
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - GenesisBlader - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 7:05 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Chapter 1 Part 1
Bey of Chaos!!! Chaos Storm.
Hanami: Hello beyfans!!! Today we'll have a battle in the dynamite drive stadium.
Hanami: First is Valt Aoi!!!.
Valt: Let's do this!!!.
Hanami: And next is Bell!!!.
Bell: You won't beat me, The Demon King.
Valt: Yeah i will!!!.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
(Belial goes near the center.)
Hanami: Belial is kinda doing the Rush Shoot.
Valt: Attack him Valkyrie!!!.
Bell: Belial Counter it, Dynamite Counter.
Valt: Attack!!!.
(Belial and Valkyrie are hitting each other in a flurry of attacks.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Both avatars appear.)
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
(Belial gets ringed out.)
Ref: It's Savior Valkyrie with over finish Valt wins.
Valt: Yes!!!.
Bell: I'll get you next round.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
Valt: Rush Shoot!!!.
Bell: Venture Shoot!!!.
(They hit each other again in a flurry of attacks.)
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Valkyrie's avatar appears.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
(Belial's avatar appears.)
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
(Valkyrie bursts.)
Ref: It's Dynamite Belial with burst finish bell wins the match.
Kenny: Watching TV was good, now time to create a beyblade!!!.
(Kenny finishes.)
Kenny: It's done!!! Chaos Storm.
Preview:
Kenny: I'm going to battle.
???: I'll battle with you.
Kenny: Alright!!!
Next Time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moments
Kenny vs ???.
Kenny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
wow this kinda looks like episode 1 for beyblade burst destiny but hey thats just me
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dread hades12 - Aug. 09, 2021
I feel that in beyblade burst: Final moments Phi and Hyde will reappear and have revealed to have trained the antagonist.
They should get their own beys as well
Infernal Phoenix and imprisoned Hades
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
maybe I'll do that
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dread hades12 - Aug. 09, 2021
I have a lot of ideas so if that one won't work I'll come up with something else.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
Chapter 1 Part 2
Kenny vs ???
Kenny: I'll have my first battle!!!
Hanami on TV: Hello beyfans!!! want to get in your first battle, come to the Rainbow Tree Arena for your first battle.
Kenny: Ok, I will.
(Kenny comes to the arena)
Hanami: Kid your first battle is against Renzo Kiyama.
Renzo: You little kid is my first battle alright.
Kenny: Yes I get to battle!!!.
Ref: Ready, and set
Kenny and Renzo: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
(Tornado Ragnaruk goes to the center)
Kenny: Storm!!! go attack Ragnaruk!!!
Kenny: Chaos Attack!!!
Renzo: Stamina Tornado!!!
(Storm gets flown into the air after the tornado)
Kenny: STORM!!!
(Storm's avatar appears)
Renzo: RAGNARUK!!!
(Ragnaruk's avatar appears)
Kenny: Chaos Sword!!!
Renzo: Double Wing Cyclone
(Storm gets ringed out)
Ref: It's Tornado Ragnaruk with over finish Renzo wins
Renzo: I'll beat you again
Kenny: No you won't.
Ref: Ready, and set
Kenny and Renzo: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
Kenny: Storm!!! Chaos Launch
Renzo: Max Tornado!!!
(Storm hits Ragnaruk in a flurry of attacks and Ragnaruk bursts)
Ref: Chaos Storm wins with burst finish, Kenny wins the match.
Kenny: Yes!!! I won my first battle
Preview:
Kenny: I'll battle my friend!!!
Danny: Ok, battle me now.
Kenny: Ooh!!! This battle is getting interested.
Kenny: Next time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moment
Kenny battles Danny
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
(Aug. 09, 2021 12:09 AM)Dread hades12 Wrote: I feel that in beyblade burst: Final moments Phi and Hyde will reappear and have revealed to have trained the antagonist.
They should get their own beys as well
Infernal Phoenix and imprisoned Hades
I thought of a name for pheonix
Inferno Phoenix'
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dread hades12 - Aug. 09, 2021
That's a perfect name
And then it could evolve into Extinct phoenix
And THEN phi would turn evil
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
let's not talk more about the thing so we'll continue in pm's
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Demon Belial - Aug. 09, 2021
ngl there's so little detail, But I believe you'll improve.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
I'm changing the name for chapter 2 part 1 from Kenny battles danny to
System Battle!!! DynaSpark vs Flare
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - GenesisBlader - Aug. 09, 2021
ayo man wassup
so uh who is danny?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
When I made my first fanfic the main character's name was Danny
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - GenesisBlader - Aug. 09, 2021
(Aug. 09, 2021 3:49 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: When I made my first fanfic the main character's name was Danny
ohhh he's returning! nice
so his bey must be kitsune
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 09, 2021
yes it is kitsune
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment (Character Contest) - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 25, 2021
also danny will be e______ his bey.
Chapter 2 Part 1
System Battle!!! DynaSpark vs Flare
Kenny: Yay!!! I won!!!
Renzo: You're just lucky, but next time I'm going to win, and I will make sure that I do by training myself with power and launching 1,000 times!!!
Kenny: That will be too much to handle, and instead of launching 1,000 times, do it 500 times.
Renzo: Ok.
(Kenny goes back home)
Kenny: That battle was amazing!!!
(A few hours later)
(Somebody comes in)
Kenny: Hello?
Danny: It's me, Danny
Kenny: Phew, I thought you were a ghost for a second there.
Danny: Are you scared of ghosts?
Kenny: Yes, and don't make fun of me for it!!!
Danny: Alright, but I came here for something else.
Kenny: For what?
Danny: A beybattle of course, and battle my Flame Kitsune!!!
Kenny: You created a new bey hmm.
Danny: No I created it before you!!!
Kenny: Meet Chaos Storm!!!
(Danny in his thoughts)
Danny: Ok, the bey has three blades that will have harder impact when they are awakened.
(Danny goes back to real life)
Kenny: Let's battle now!!!
Danny: Alright.
Kenny: It's first to 2 points, alright.
Danny: Ok.
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
Danny: Flame Defense!!!
Kenny: Chaos Launch!!!
(Kitsune is deflecting Storm's barrage of attacks)
(later in the battle)
Danny: KITSUNE!!!
(Kitsune is shiny and glowing like fire, Kitsune activates Shiny Fire-Flux)
Kenny: STORM!!!
(Storm's avatar happens, and Storm is glowing purple and blue, Storm activates Flare-Flux)
Danny: Shining Upper!!!
Kenny: Flare of the Cosmos!!!
(Kitsune and Storm are hitting each other and they keep hitting in different directions)
Danny and Kenny: AHHHHHHH!!!
(Storm bursts)
Kenny: Ahh man!!!
Danny: You did good though.
Kenny: I did!!!
Danny: Yes you did!!!
Kenny: Good job on winning.
Danny: Thanks Kenny!!!
Kenny: Your welcome.
Preview:
Kenny: What!!! Dante Koryu is here!!!
Danny: I'll stay here then for a few days.
Kenny: Yay Danny!!!
Next time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moment
Chapter 2 Part 2
The Dragon Tamer!!! Dante Koryu
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
For this character contest I'll be accepting 10 people and when the contest is over there is going to be top 4
1. (Blank)
2. Lucha Burst
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Sep. 11, 2021
wow nothing
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 12:44 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: wow nothing
I'll come up with something, but now I need to sleep.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
idk about a character, i'll post one tomorrow
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Sep. 11, 2021
ok I was just checking after a week of not being here
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - Dragon Blader Z - Sep. 11, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 10:34 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2021 7:05 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Chapter 1 Part 1
Bey of Chaos!!! Chaos Storm.
Hanami: Hello beyfans!!! Today we'll have a battle in the dynamite drive stadium.
Hanami: First is Valt Aoi!!!.
Valt: Let's do this!!!.
Hanami: And next is Bell!!!.
Bell: You won't beat me, The Demon King.
Valt: Yeah i will!!!.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
(Belial goes near the center.)
Hanami: Belial is kinda doing the Rush Shoot.
Valt: Attack him Valkyrie!!!.
Bell: Belial Counter it, Dynamite Counter.
Valt: Attack!!!.
(Belial and Valkyrie are hitting each other in a flurry of attacks.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Both avatars appear.)
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
(Belial gets ringed out.)
Ref: It's Savior Valkyrie with over finish Valt wins.
Valt: Yes!!!.
Bell: I'll get you next round.
Ref: Ready, and set.
Bell and Valt: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
Valt: Rush Shoot!!!.
Bell: Venture Shoot!!!.
(They hit each other again in a flurry of attacks.)
Valt: VALKYRIE!!!.
(Valkyrie's avatar appears.)
Bell: BELIAL!!!.
(Belial's avatar appears.)
Valt: Shot Upper!!!.
Bell: Dynamite Bomber!!!.
(Valkyrie bursts.)
Ref: It's Dynamite Belial with burst finish bell wins the match.
Kenny: Watching TV was good, now time to create a beyblade!!!.
(Kenny finishes.)
Kenny: It's done!!! Chaos Storm.
Preview:
Kenny: I'm going to battle.
???: I'll battle with you.
Kenny: Alright!!!
Next Time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moments
Kenny vs ???.
Kenny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!.
wow this kinda looks like episode 1 for beyblade burst destiny but hey thats just me
Just a warning I did not copy you I made this up myself 100%
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - LegendJustice - Sep. 11, 2021
This whole thing feels rushed take your time to go into detail I felt no emotion, No offense it’s just that you need to make the characters more life like probably put spoilers for when your making a chapter and make it long! Add some more plot, and The Dialogue is clear but DRUM IS COMING SO SOON? I suggest take some time!