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Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (Rewritten) - Dark red - Jul. 21, 2021

I going to write a Burst fanfiction that takes place 8 years after the DB era. I might not be able to finish this fanfic but I'll do my best. 


Synopsis:

Eight years after the DB era, a ray of shooting stars landing on across the globe, bringing a new generation of Beys into the world: Cosmic Beys. These beys possess an unique power compared to manmade Beys which intrigued many young bladers, giving birth to the new generation known as the Cosmic Bladers. The majority of bladers own a Cosmic Bey, except for our main character, Negi Mizuchi, a blader who gets clowned for being the weakest blader in his school. However, that changes when he discovered the Dark Star Dragon Bey, Wrath Niddhogg, transforming him into a strong blader who aims for the top. Will Negi wipe out every blader in his way and become Number #1?
Characters & Beys (for now):

Negi Mizuchi & Wrath Nidhogg. Blaze
Agito Sumeragi & Gladiator Ares. Zeta
Reji Tategami & Divine Roc. Twist
Ahan Yuuki & Queen Athena. Morph
Shin Yumiya & Crossbow Sagittarius. Eternal Metal

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 21, 2021

(Jul. 21, 2021  4:44 AM)Dark red Wrote: I going to write a Burst fanfiction that takes place 8 years after the DB era. I might not be able to finish this fanfic but I'll do my best. 


Synopsis:

Eight years after the DB era, a ray of shooting stars landing on across the globe, bringing a new generation of Beys into the world: Cosmic beys. These beys possess an unique power compared to manmade Beys which intrigue many young bladers, birthing the new generation known as the Cosmic Bladers. The majority of bladers own a Cosmic Bey, except for our main character, Negi Mizuchi, a blader who gets clowned for being the weakest blader in his school. However, that changes when he discovered the Black Star Dragon Bey, Wrath Niddhogg, transforming him into a strong blader who aims for the top. Will Negi wipe out every blader in his way and become Number #1?
Characters & Beys (for now):
Negi Mizuchi  &  Wrath Nidhogg. Reversal. Blaze
Agito Sumeragi  &  Gladiator Ares. Armor. Stance
Baki Fuchigami  &  Thunder Bellerophon. Strike. Turbo
Sakura  Homura  &  Majestic Suzaku. Crown. Morph

nice! i look forward to this, especially the fact that you wrote a better character than me, i know you can pull this off!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Jul. 21, 2021

(Jul. 21, 2021  12:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 21, 2021  4:44 AM)Dark red Wrote: I going to write a Burst fanfiction that takes place 8 years after the DB era. I might not be able to finish this fanfic but I'll do my best. 


Synopsis:

Eight years after the DB era, a ray of shooting stars landing on across the globe, bringing a new generation of Beys into the world: Cosmic beys. These beys possess an unique power compared to manmade Beys which intrigue many young bladers, birthing the new generation known as the Cosmic Bladers. The majority of bladers own a Cosmic Bey, except for our main character, Negi Mizuchi, a blader who gets clowned for being the weakest blader in his school. However, that changes when he discovered the Black Star Dragon Bey, Wrath Niddhogg, transforming him into a strong blader who aims for the top. Will Negi wipe out every blader in his way and become Number #1?
Characters & Beys (for now):
Negi Mizuchi  &  Wrath Nidhogg. Reversal. Blaze
Agito Sumeragi  &  Gladiator Ares. Armor. Stance
Baki Fuchigami  &  Thunder Bellerophon. Strike. Turbo
Sakura Homura  &  Majestic Suzaku. Crown. Morph

nice! i look forward to this, especially the fact that you wrote a better character than me, i know you can pull this off!
Thank you! I'll try my best with this fanfic.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 21, 2021

I'll be following

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RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Demon Belial - Jul. 21, 2021

So the system will be Cosmic?

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - PinkRose - Jul. 21, 2021

This looks...interesting, I suppose. Has this MFB-ish feeling to it, but I don’t know if that’s a good thing or not as I’m not the biggest fan of that saga. Still, I might end up following this, so I’ll stick around for the first couple chapters.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Mooingjoker - Jul. 21, 2021

cool i would love to join!!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Jul. 21, 2021

(Jul. 21, 2021  6:20 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: So the system will be Cosmic?
Yes, the Beyblade System is the Cosmic System, I'll give a somewhat brief description of it.

Description of the Cosmic System:

Cosmic Beys are made up of three parts: The Cosmic Wheel, the Cosmic Chassis, and Driver

The Cosmic Wheel is the metal component of the Cosmic Beyblade that reflects the avatar it's representing  ( similar to the Sparking layer but with no chip) and it can be rotated to change modes of a Beyblade. The Cosmic Chassis is the second component of the Cosmic Layer, some of which can be plastic or metal-like. This part also plays an important role in Cosmic Beys since, without it, mode changes would be impossible. It is similar to the Chassis from Sparking but it is more detailed. 

Cosmic Beys are able to change modes by separating the two wheels and rotating the Avatar Wheel to a certain number of degrees.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Jul. 22, 2021

I’ll stick around to see what’s up

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 30, 2021

So when are you planning to start it?

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Jul. 30, 2021

(Jul. 30, 2021  8:49 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So when are you planning to start it?
Sorry, I'll start the fanfic within 3 days. I apologize for the wait, I had to finish school.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 30, 2021

(Jul. 30, 2021  8:52 PM)Dark red Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021  8:49 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So when are you planning to start it?
Sorry, I'll start the fanfic within 3 days. I apologize for the wait, I had to finish school.

oh no worries

school is an impending "fork in the road" for us too when we're trying to get fanfics done

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Jul. 30, 2021

Hm so it's coming out in 3 days?

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Jul. 30, 2021

(Jul. 30, 2021  8:53 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Hm so it's coming out in 3 days?
I going to try my best to get the first chapter out tomorrow or Sunday.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Jul. 30, 2021

(Jul. 30, 2021  8:54 PM)Dark red Wrote:
(Jul. 30, 2021  8:53 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Hm so it's coming out in 3 days?
I going to try my best to get the first chapter out tomorrow or Sunday.
Take your time!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Aug. 01, 2021

Here's the first part of Chapter One:
https://www.wattpad.com/1108032449-beyblade-burst-cosmic-fight-enter-black-star

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021

Nice chapter!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:30 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter!
You read it already?

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:31 PM)Dark red Wrote:
(Aug. 01, 2021  11:30 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter!
You read it already?

Yeah it was kinda short and I'm a fast reader!
I SAID KINDA SHORT NOT SHORT!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 01, 2021  11:31 PM)Dark red Wrote: You read it already?

Yeah it was kinda short and I'm a fast reader!
I SAID KINDA SHORT NOT SHORT!
Oh, thanks. I decided to go a different approach for starting a Burst series.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021  11:34 PM)Dark red Wrote:
(Aug. 01, 2021  11:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah it was kinda short and I'm a fast reader!
I SAID KINDA SHORT NOT SHORT!
Oh, thanks. I decided to go a different approach for starting a Burst series.

K!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Aug. 03, 2021

Here's part 2 of Chapter 1:
https://www.wattpad.com/1108499067-beyblade-burst-cosmic-fight-enter-black-star
Give me your feedback about this new approach to starting a Burst series.

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021

DANG!!!! I love the detail!!!!!!! and Noddhogr seems evil...

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 03, 2021

OH MY GOD THIS EPISODE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU'RE STARTING SO GOOD!!

I LOVE THE PLOT!!

RE: Beyblade Burst Cosmic Fight (fanfiction) - Dark red - Aug. 03, 2021

(Aug. 03, 2021  2:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: DANG!!!! I love the detail!!!!!!! and Noddhogr seems evil...

Thanks!!!!! Btw, Niddhogr's personality is similar to Diabolos's but is focused on consuming Negi's hatred and rage for power.
(Aug. 03, 2021  2:12 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: OH MY GOD THIS EPISODE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU'RE STARTING SO GOOD!!

I LOVE THE PLOT!!

Thanks, I appreciate it!!!!