RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 12, 2021
Yo Chapter 12 Is ACTUALLY here so enjoy  ! Bruh this took days….
Chapter 12: Wicked Battle! Ryu Vs Boa!
~In Me and Haru's Dorm~
Haru: So what's your battle plan?
Ryu: Go in for an all attack!
Haru: Just go with your Minus gear!
(I start to attach the Minus Gear)
Ryu: Done!
Haru: Now, what do we know about Balkesh so far?
Ryu: Heavy Attack?
Haru: NO! Demon Balkesh A Clockwise spinning attack type It has five blades 1 is plastic 2 of the blades are metal and another 2 blades are rubber so I'm guessing it can absorb and has heavy attack! The Forge Disc has this button that turns on when it gets hit the 5th time 1 blade comes out! Now the driver has metal with clay so metal with clay!
Ryu: Dang, we just saw that thing in action and you already know everything about it! So What's its weak point?
Haru: Your probably gonna have to break its driver!
Ryu: As long as I don't break the whole bey I'm good!
Haru: K, let's get training!
~At The Bulls Gym~
Haru & Ryu: 3! 2! 1! Let It Rip!!!!!
(Me and Haru do AMAZING Storm launches)
Haru: Roar Launch!
Ryu: Storm Launch!
*Hydra And Remix start hitting with a barrage of attacks, then Hydra attacks with a clash of attacks*
Ryu: Storm Flash!
*Remix leans on its driver and speeds up*
Haru: Hydra! Hyper Roar!
*Hydra Roars Like A Lion And Sends Remix Flying*
Ryu: *Gasp* Storm flare!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Remix becomes like a red Jet)
Haru: Roar Geyser!
Ryu: Storm Upper!!
*Both Beys Collide, And A Huge Explosion Appears*
*Remix Sends Hydra Flying, And Hydra Burst*
Haru: *Gasp* GG! You are ready for your match!
Ryu: Let's go!
~With Boa~
Boa: So you showed up?
Ryu: Believe It!
Locus: Welcome back folks, we have another exciting match for you! We have our king of the streets! Boa Alcazaba! Then we have our music prince! Ryu Hoai!
Ryu: Remix is taking you!
Boa: I'd like to see you try!
Referee: First to 2 wins! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Boa & Ryu: Let it... RIP!!!
(Me and Boa do amazing Storm launches)
Ryu: Let's speed up! Storm boost!
|Remix Leans On It's Driver And Speeds Up|
Boa: Balkesh! Demon speed!
|Balkesh Also Leans On Its Driver|
Locus: Both beys are speeding at each other!
Ryu: Storm flare!!
|Remix glows into a red light|
Boa: Demon whip!
|Balkesh zooms past Remix, the Balkesh comes back and attacks from the back|
Ryu: *Gasp* Get out of there, Storm boost!
|Remix speeds up|
Locus: Wowza! Boa is going for the attack, can Ryu keep up?
Ryu: Of course I can!
Boa: Finish this, Demon Smite!
|Balkesh zooms into Remix and sends Remix flying, out of the stadium|
Ryu: *Gasp* (I Pick Up Remix) you're going down!
Boa: Says the person who just lost.
Ryu: Grr.
Referee: Second battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
|I through my launcher in the air|
Ryu: Let!
|I catch my launcher on my left side|
Boa: It!
|I launch my beyblade|
Boa & Ryu: RIP!!!
|Me and Boa do powerful Storm launches|
Locus: Amazing launching!!!
Boa: Now, I've had fun playing with you but let's end it here!
Ryu: *Shocked*
Boa: Demon Claw!
|A huge claw comes out sending Remix flying and burst it in the air|
Locus: ... Oh. My. BEYBLADE!!!??! DID BOA JUST END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!!!
Boa: Ove had fun battling you, now train more then you'll be on my level.
|Boa starts walking away|
Ryu: What just happened...
Bam: You got whipped, and he wasn't kidding you need to train more!
Haru: Bam's right that move Boa pulled off was out of nowhere, we should have made a plan from the unpredictable.
Ryu: I guess...
|I run off|
Bam: I sense a long trail of training.
Haru: Yeah...
[TO BE CONTINUED]
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 12, 2021
(Aug. 12, 2021 6:45 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yo Chapter 12 Is ACTUALLY here so enjoy ! Bruh this took days….
Chapter 12: Wicked Battle! Ryu Vs Boa!
~In Me and Haru's Dorm~
Haru: So what's your battle plan?
Ryu: Go in for an all attack!
Haru: Just go with your Minus gear!
(I start to attach the Minus Gear)
Ryu: Done!
Haru: Now, what do we know about Balkesh so far?
Ryu: Heavy Attack?
Haru: NO! Demon Balkesh A Clockwise spinning attack type It has five blades 1 is plastic 2 of the blades are metal and another 2 blades are rubber so I'm guessing it can absorb and has heavy attack! The Forge Disc has this button that turns on when it gets hit the 5th time 1 blade comes out! Now the driver has metal with clay so metal with clay!
Ryu: Dang, we just saw that thing in action and you already know everything about it! So What's its weak point?
Haru: Your probably gonna have to break its driver!
Ryu: As long as I don't break the whole bey I'm good!
Haru: K, let's get training!
~At The Bulls Gym~
Haru & Ryu: 3! 2! 1! Let It Rip!!!!!
(Me and Haru do AMAZING Storm launches)
Haru: Roar Launch!
Ryu: Storm Launch!
*Hydra And Remix start hitting with a barrage of attacks, then Hydra attacks with a clash of attacks*
Ryu: Storm Flash!
*Remix leans on its driver and speeds up*
Haru: Hydra! Hyper Roar!
*Hydra Roars Like A Lion And Sends Remix Flying*
Ryu: *Gasp* Storm flare!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Remix becomes like a red Jet)
Haru: Roar Geyser!
Ryu: Storm Upper!!
*Both Beys Collide, And A Huge Explosion Appears*
*Remix Sends Hydra Flying, And Hydra Burst*
Haru: *Gasp* GG! You are ready for your match!
Ryu: Let's go!
~With Boa~
Boa: So you showed up?
Ryu: Believe It!
Locus: Welcome back folks, we have another exciting match for you! We have our king of the streets! Boa Alcazaba! Then we have our music prince! Ryu Hoai!
Ryu: Remix is taking you!
Boa: I'd like to see you try!
Referee: First to 2 wins! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Boa & Ryu: Let it... RIP!!!
(Me and Boa do amazing Storm launches)
Ryu: Let's speed up! Storm boost!
|Remix Leans On It's Driver And Speeds Up|
Boa: Balkesh! Demon speed!
|Balkesh Also Leans On Its Driver|
Locus: Both beys are speeding at each other!
Ryu: Storm flare!!
|Remix glows into a red light|
Boa: Demon whip!
|Balkesh zooms past Remix, the Balkesh comes back and attacks from the back|
Ryu: *Gasp* Get out of there, Storm boost!
|Remix speeds up|
Locus: Wowza! Boa is going for the attack, can Ryu keep up?
Ryu: Of course I can!
Boa: Finish this, Demon Smite!
|Balkesh zooms into Remix and sends Remix flying, out of the stadium|
Ryu: *Gasp* (I Pick Up Remix) you're going down!
Boa: Says the person who just lost.
Ryu: Grr.
Referee: Second battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
|I through my launcher in the air|
Ryu: Let!
|I catch my launcher on my left side|
Boa: It!
|I launch my beyblade|
Boa & Ryu: RIP!!!
|Me and Boa do powerful Storm launches|
Locus: Amazing launching!!!
Boa: Now, I've had fun playing with you but let's end it here!
Ryu: *Shocked*
Boa: Demon Claw!
|A huge claw comes out sending Remix flying and burst it in the air|
Locus: ... Oh. My. BEYBLADE!!!??! DID BOA JUST END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!!!
Boa: Ove had fun battling you, now train more then you'll be on my level.
|Boa starts walking away|
Ryu: What just happened...
Bam: You got whipped, and he wasn't kidding you need to train more!
Haru: Bam's right that move Boa pulled off was out of nowhere, we should have made a plan from the unpredictable.
Ryu: I guess...
|I run off|
Bam: I sense a long trail of training.
Haru: Yeah...
[TO BE CONTINUED]
I'll rate soon, but not now.
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 12, 2021
(Aug. 12, 2021 6:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 12, 2021 6:45 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yo Chapter 12 Is ACTUALLY here so enjoy ! Bruh this took days….
Chapter 12: Wicked Battle! Ryu Vs Boa!
~In Me and Haru's Dorm~
Haru: So what's your battle plan?
Ryu: Go in for an all attack!
Haru: Just go with your Minus gear!
(I start to attach the Minus Gear)
Ryu: Done!
Haru: Now, what do we know about Balkesh so far?
Ryu: Heavy Attack?
Haru: NO! Demon Balkesh A Clockwise spinning attack type It has five blades 1 is plastic 2 of the blades are metal and another 2 blades are rubber so I'm guessing it can absorb and has heavy attack! The Forge Disc has this button that turns on when it gets hit the 5th time 1 blade comes out! Now the driver has metal with clay so metal with clay!
Ryu: Dang, we just saw that thing in action and you already know everything about it! So What's its weak point?
Haru: Your probably gonna have to break its driver!
Ryu: As long as I don't break the whole bey I'm good!
Haru: K, let's get training!
~At The Bulls Gym~
Haru & Ryu: 3! 2! 1! Let It Rip!!!!!
(Me and Haru do AMAZING Storm launches)
Haru: Roar Launch!
Ryu: Storm Launch!
*Hydra And Remix start hitting with a barrage of attacks, then Hydra attacks with a clash of attacks*
Ryu: Storm Flash!
*Remix leans on its driver and speeds up*
Haru: Hydra! Hyper Roar!
*Hydra Roars Like A Lion And Sends Remix Flying*
Ryu: *Gasp* Storm flare!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Remix becomes like a red Jet)
Haru: Roar Geyser!
Ryu: Storm Upper!!
*Both Beys Collide, And A Huge Explosion Appears*
*Remix Sends Hydra Flying, And Hydra Burst*
Haru: *Gasp* GG! You are ready for your match!
Ryu: Let's go!
~With Boa~
Boa: So you showed up?
Ryu: Believe It!
Locus: Welcome back folks, we have another exciting match for you! We have our king of the streets! Boa Alcazaba! Then we have our music prince! Ryu Hoai!
Ryu: Remix is taking you!
Boa: I'd like to see you try!
Referee: First to 2 wins! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Boa & Ryu: Let it... RIP!!!
(Me and Boa do amazing Storm launches)
Ryu: Let's speed up! Storm boost!
|Remix Leans On It's Driver And Speeds Up|
Boa: Balkesh! Demon speed!
|Balkesh Also Leans On Its Driver|
Locus: Both beys are speeding at each other!
Ryu: Storm flare!!
|Remix glows into a red light|
Boa: Demon whip!
|Balkesh zooms past Remix, the Balkesh comes back and attacks from the back|
Ryu: *Gasp* Get out of there, Storm boost!
|Remix speeds up|
Locus: Wowza! Boa is going for the attack, can Ryu keep up?
Ryu: Of course I can!
Boa: Finish this, Demon Smite!
|Balkesh zooms into Remix and sends Remix flying, out of the stadium|
Ryu: *Gasp* (I Pick Up Remix) you're going down!
Boa: Says the person who just lost.
Ryu: Grr.
Referee: Second battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
|I through my launcher in the air|
Ryu: Let!
|I catch my launcher on my left side|
Boa: It!
|I launch my beyblade|
Boa & Ryu: RIP!!!
|Me and Boa do powerful Storm launches|
Locus: Amazing launching!!!
Boa: Now, I've had fun playing with you but let's end it here!
Ryu: *Shocked*
Boa: Demon Claw!
|A huge claw comes out sending Remix flying and burst it in the air|
Locus: ... Oh. My. BEYBLADE!!!??! DID BOA JUST END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!!!
Boa: Ove had fun battling you, now train more then you'll be on my level.
|Boa starts walking away|
Ryu: What just happened...
Bam: You got whipped, and he wasn't kidding you need to train more!
Haru: Bam's right that move Boa pulled off was out of nowhere, we should have made a plan from the unpredictable.
Ryu: I guess...
|I run off|
Bam: I sense a long trail of training.
Haru: Yeah...
[TO BE CONTINUED]
I'll rate soon, but not now.
Okay 👍🏾!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 12, 2021
nice episode man!!!! i love it!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 12, 2021
(Aug. 12, 2021 6:45 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yo Chapter 12 Is ACTUALLY here so enjoy ! Bruh this took days….
Chapter 12: Wicked Battle! Ryu Vs Boa!
~In Me and Haru's Dorm~
Haru: So what's your battle plan?
Ryu: Go in for an all attack!
Haru: Just go with your Minus gear!
(I start to attach the Minus Gear)
Ryu: Done!
Haru: Now, what do we know about Balkesh so far?
Ryu: Heavy Attack?
Haru: NO! Demon Balkesh A Clockwise spinning attack type It has five blades 1 is plastic 2 of the blades are metal and another 2 blades are rubber so I'm guessing it can absorb and has heavy attack! The Forge Disc has this button that turns on when it gets hit the 5th time 1 blade comes out! Now the driver has metal with clay so metal with clay!
Ryu: Dang, we just saw that thing in action and you already know everything about it! So What's its weak point?
Haru: Your probably gonna have to break its driver!
Ryu: As long as I don't break the whole bey I'm good!
Haru: K, let's get training!
~At The Bulls Gym~
Haru & Ryu: 3! 2! 1! Let It Rip!!!!!
(Me and Haru do AMAZING Storm launches)
Haru: Roar Launch!
Ryu: Storm Launch!
*Hydra And Remix start hitting with a barrage of attacks, then Hydra attacks with a clash of attacks*
Ryu: Storm Flash!
*Remix leans on its driver and speeds up*
Haru: Hydra! Hyper Roar!
*Hydra Roars Like A Lion And Sends Remix Flying*
Ryu: *Gasp* Storm flare!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Remix becomes like a red Jet)
Haru: Roar Geyser!
Ryu: Storm Upper!!
*Both Beys Collide, And A Huge Explosion Appears*
*Remix Sends Hydra Flying, And Hydra Burst*
Haru: *Gasp* GG! You are ready for your match!
Ryu: Let's go!
~With Boa~
Boa: So you showed up?
Ryu: Believe It!
Locus: Welcome back folks, we have another exciting match for you! We have our king of the streets! Boa Alcazaba! Then we have our music prince! Ryu Hoai!
Ryu: Remix is taking you!
Boa: I'd like to see you try!
Referee: First to 2 wins! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Boa & Ryu: Let it... RIP!!!
(Me and Boa do amazing Storm launches)
Ryu: Let's speed up! Storm boost!
|Remix Leans On It's Driver And Speeds Up|
Boa: Balkesh! Demon speed!
|Balkesh Also Leans On Its Driver|
Locus: Both beys are speeding at each other!
Ryu: Storm flare!!
|Remix glows into a red light|
Boa: Demon whip!
|Balkesh zooms past Remix, the Balkesh comes back and attacks from the back|
Ryu: *Gasp* Get out of there, Storm boost!
|Remix speeds up|
Locus: Wowza! Boa is going for the attack, can Ryu keep up?
Ryu: Of course I can!
Boa: Finish this, Demon Smite!
|Balkesh zooms into Remix and sends Remix flying, out of the stadium|
Ryu: *Gasp* (I Pick Up Remix) you're going down!
Boa: Says the person who just lost.
Ryu: Grr.
Referee: Second battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
|I through my launcher in the air|
Ryu: Let!
|I catch my launcher on my left side|
Boa: It!
|I launch my beyblade|
Boa & Ryu: RIP!!!
|Me and Boa do powerful Storm launches|
Locus: Amazing launching!!!
Boa: Now, I've had fun playing with you but let's end it here!
Ryu: *Shocked*
Boa: Demon Claw!
|A huge claw comes out sending Remix flying and burst it in the air|
Locus: ... Oh. My. BEYBLADE!!!??! DID BOA JUST END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!!!
Boa: Ove had fun battling you, now train more then you'll be on my level.
|Boa starts walking away|
Ryu: What just happened...
Bam: You got whipped, and he wasn't kidding you need to train more!
Haru: Bam's right that move Boa pulled off was out of nowhere, we should have made a plan from the unpredictable.
Ryu: I guess...
|I run off|
Bam: I sense a long trail of training.
Haru: Yeah...
[TO BE CONTINUED]
Yeah so, this wasn't your best chapter (Btw: Breaking a Driver is just as bad as breaking a Layer)
Plot: 2.5/5: It wasn't really clear and educated well, in fact, the plot was very confusing and unclear. Also, A Defense Type using a whip move? First: I'm pretty sure only attack types and Balance types can use whip moves, Second: Why would Boa attack? Bahamut's a Defense Type so it should be defending like seen in real life and in the anime, putting a Bey out of its comfort zone is never a good idea, you should've made Balkesh counterattack.
Grammar: 4.5/5: Saw very little and common mistakes.
Length: 3/5: It was a bit short, if you made this longer, you could've made the battle way better.
Character: 3/5: Not much to say, they just felt, dead.
Dialogue: 2/5: As I stated in Characters it felt very plain and talking just for talking
Overall: 15.5/25: Yeah, not your best chapter, you can improve, you just really need to try hard!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 12, 2021
Balkesh being attack? Dang it I meant for it to be Balance anyways Thanks so much for telling my I’ll probably never bring boa in a chapter again lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Dread hades12 - Aug. 12, 2021
Nooooo I need Boa😭
If he's not in the anime you have to have him in your storyline!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 12, 2021
(Aug. 12, 2021 7:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Balkesh being attack? Dang it I meant for it to be Balance anyways Thanks so much for telling my I’ll probably never bring boa in a chapter again lol It protec and it attac
It felt a bit off compared to the others, but it could be because of a writer block.
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 13, 2021
(Aug. 12, 2021 11:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 12, 2021 7:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Balkesh being attack? Dang it I meant for it to be Balance anyways Thanks so much for telling my I’ll probably never bring boa in a chapter again lol It protec and it attac
It felt a bit off compared to the others, but it could be because of a writer block.
Yeah I have a bad case of Writers block I’m gonna try and take a break
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 13, 2021
(Aug. 13, 2021 12:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Aug. 12, 2021 11:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: It protec and it attac
It felt a bit off compared to the others, but it could be because of a writer block.
Yeah I have a bad case of Writers block I’m gonna try and take a break
I've written freaking 5 fanfictions and currently writing 3 at a time, writer's block is common, give yourself time to rest, when you rest ideas actually start poping up in your head
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 13, 2021
(Aug. 13, 2021 12:29 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 13, 2021 12:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah I have a bad case of Writers block I’m gonna try and take a break
I've written freaking 5 fanfictions and currently writing 3 at a time, writer's block is common, give yourself time to rest, when you rest ideas actually start poping up in your head
Thanks for the advice!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 13, 2021
yeah that happens sometimes
take some time, do your prime!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 19, 2021
Chapter 13 IS GONNA BE WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! MORE BETTER! Shu's back from his vacation in this chapter and a lot of things go down for instance 2 people start fighting for Bam lol the name of the chapter is:
Friend Or Enemy?!
Cast:
Ryu
Haru
Fubuki
Ari
Bam
Shu
And more
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 12:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 13 IS GONNA BE WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! MORE BETTER! Shu's back from his vacation in this chapter and a lot of things go down for instance 2 people start fighting for Bam lol the name of the chapter is:
Friend Or Enemy?!
Cast:
Ryu
Haru
Fubuki
Ari
Bam
Shu
And more oh nuts does bam have some charm behind that cockiness?! lets find out lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 12:30 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 12:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 13 IS GONNA BE WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! MORE BETTER! Shu's back from his vacation in this chapter and a lot of things go down for instance 2 people start fighting for Bam lol the name of the chapter is:
Friend Or Enemy?!
Cast:
Ryu
Haru
Fubuki
Ari
Bam
Shu
And more oh nuts does bam have some charm behind that cockiness?! lets find out lol
You’ll see lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 12:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 13 IS GONNA BE WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! MORE BETTER! Shu's back from his vacation in this chapter and a lot of things go down for instance 2 people start fighting for Bam lol the name of the chapter is:
Friend Or Enemy?!
Cast:
Ryu
Haru
Fubuki
Ari
Bam
Shu
And more
Why is Shu even on Vacation?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 1:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 12:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Chapter 13 IS GONNA BE WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! MORE BETTER! Shu's back from his vacation in this chapter and a lot of things go down for instance 2 people start fighting for Bam lol the name of the chapter is:
Friend Or Enemy?!
Cast:
Ryu
Haru
Fubuki
Ari
Bam
Shu
And more
Why is Shu even on Vacation?
Being the owner of one of the biggest teams in the world can be tiring + He went there for business
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 1:24 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 1:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Why is Shu even on Vacation?
Being the owner of one of the biggest teams in the world can be tiring + He went there for business
We literally barely saw Kris in evolution actually doing work. When you think about it she just supported Bladers and told Theodore Glass to buzz off an occasions but never actually did work, but, I guess your right
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 1:27 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 1:24 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Being the owner of one of the biggest teams in the world can be tiring + He went there for business
We literally barely saw Kris in evolution actually doing work. When you think about it she just supported Bladers and told Theodore Glass to buzz off an occasions but never actually did work, but, I guess your right
Yeah here’s how it went down
Manager: Mr. Kurenai Your going on Vacation.
Shu: Really? I haven’t had a Vacation in months!
Manager: For Business.
Shu: This makes more sense, I guess I’ll pack my bags.
Me: Shu can never catch a break lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 1:30 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 1:27 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: We literally barely saw Kris in evolution actually doing work. When you think about it she just supported Bladers and told Theodore Glass to buzz off an occasions but never actually did work, but, I guess your right
Yeah here’s how it went down
Manager: Mr. Kurenai Your going on Vacation.
Shu: Really? I haven’t had a Vacation in months!
Manager: For Business.
Shu: This makes more sense, I guess I’ll pack my bags.
Me: Shu can never catch a break lol
Manger: You've just gotta fill out this--
*Shu runs out the door*
Manager: Wow, he really needed a vacation!
~A Day Later~
*Shu lays on a beach chair siping soda*
Shu: Why have I only done this once?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 1:33 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 1:30 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yeah here’s how it went down
Manager: Mr. Kurenai Your going on Vacation.
Shu: Really? I haven’t had a Vacation in months!
Manager: For Business.
Shu: This makes more sense, I guess I’ll pack my bags.
Me: Shu can never catch a break lol
Manger: You've just gotta fill out this--
*Shu runs out the door*
Manager: Wow, he really needed a vacation!
~A Day Later~
*Shu lays on a beach chair siping soda*
Shu: Why have I only done this once?
He really needed it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 26, 2021
At school my homeroom teacher is the reading teacher so my grammar and writing has improved More BETTER chapters will be uploaded tomorrow!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 27, 2021
SS's Antag has changed here is the Antag's name: Reva Horifying
His bey:
Vl. Rz Tr Eg+ Fr
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 27, 2021
(Aug. 27, 2021 10:04 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: SS's Antag has changed here is the Antag's name: Reva Horifying
His bey:
Vl. Rz Tr Eg+ Fr
dang that name its pretty poggers👌
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 28, 2021
I’m going to be Switching to the Sub cause I like it
GenesisBlader Heads up if your gonna read chapter 13 The beginning is pretty rushed
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