RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 27, 2021
(Jul. 27, 2021 6:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Theme song coming soon I JUST NEED INSPIRATION!?
dont worry spark through and do it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 27, 2021
Okay just need to think of something
Chapter 9 is waiting to be read!
Forever Together! Champion Valtryak!!!
~At BC Sol ~
???: Valt!
Valt: Hey Kit!
Kit: I saw your battle with Shu on the news, I'm sorry!
Valt: Its all good!!!! Shu was gotten way stronger, this just means I need to train more!
Kit: That's the spirt!
Raul: Welcome back Valt!
Valt: Hey Raul! So I need your help!!
Raul: Come and will talk...
~At Raul Can~
Raul: So, what do you wanna talk about?
Valt: I wanna evolve Valtryak into a SS bey!
Raul: I knew you would come sooner or later, Well let's get started!
Valt: So I want the blades to have rubber and be bright red with blue!!
(Raul pulls up a design on the computer)
~Few Hours Later~
Valt: Its done! Champion Valtryak!
Raul: Then let's go ahead and test it out!
(Raul picks up his phone and dials a number)
??? (In Phone): Hello who is this?
Raul: Rantaro, Get over to my van!!!
(Just then Rantaro burst through the door)
Rantaro: Oh, Valt your back!
Valt: Hey Honcho!l!!
Rantaro: So why was I called here?
Valt: I made a new bey, and Raul thought it be a good idea to test it on you!!!
Honcho: Well then! Burster Roktavor is taking you down!!!
Raul: Well then it's settled Valt Vs Rantaro! ANTON!!
Anton: Yes?
Raul: Can you ref Valt and Rantaros match?
Anton: Sure!
Honcho (Mind): Wait where did Anton come from? Oh well it's just have been the UNICORNS!!!!
~They head to the garden stadium~
Anton: First to 2 points. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt & Honcho: Let it .... Rip!!
(Both Bladers pull of powerful SS launches)
Honcho: Roktavor! Take the center!!!
(Roktavor takes the center)
Valt: Lets go! Rush launch!!!
(Valtryak starts hitting with a barrage of attacks, and also absorbs)
Honcho: *Gasp* Stand your grounds!
Valt: Hyper Trail!!!
(Valtryak starts speeding over and over again surrounding Roktavor)
Honcho (Mind): I'm trapped?!! I gotta go in on the offensive!
Honcho: Side Tornado!
(Roktavor sends Valtryak flying cause of the wind)
Valt: Go in for another one! Hyper Trail!
(Valtryak goes speeding around Roktavor surrounding it)
Honcho: Dual wind!
(Roktavor starts spinning crazy and creates a cyclone the blows Valtryak away)
Valt: Valtryak!!!! Absorb it all!
(Valtryak blazes out of its bey)
Honcho: Roktavor!!!!!!!!!!
(Roktavkr blazes out of its bey)
(A huge explosion appears and Roktavor burst)
Honcho: *Gasp* GG Valt! That new bey of yours is amazing!!!!
Valt: You too Honcho!
Anton: With a burst finish Half Aoi is the winner!
~At The Bulls~
Haru: What do you think Valt is doing?
Me: I don't know, and I guess will never know
StoryTeller: Its just the beginning as our heros endure countless adventures as the journey continues!
UnseenBurst Can you rate I'll rate yours @BladeKingX you too, are you free to rate?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/BZcErUf7S_8 Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
(A picture if Ryu pops up)
Ryu starts running up to the screen.
Ryu and his friends start letting it rip!
A picture of valt pops up! Then Shu and Free!
A dark red villian pops up, Ryu jumps off a building and lets it rip!
Haru, Bam and Ari start rising like legends!
Then Vere pops up with Valor!
Ryu starts resonating with Remix!
Ryu runs up to the screen with his friends and they past legends!
Then they all jump into the sky!
(Then the hole thing happens again)
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 7:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/BZcErUf7S_8 Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
(A picture if Ryu pops up)
Ryu starts running up to the screen.
Ryu and his friends start letting it rip!
A picture of valt pops up! Then Shu and Free!
A dark red villian pops up, Ryu jumps off a building and lets it rip!
Haru, Bam and Ari start rising like legends!
Then Vere pops up with Valor!
Ryu starts resonating with Remix!
Ryu runs up to the screen with his friends and they past legends!
Then they all jump into the sky!
(Then the hole thing happens again)
It's obviously a rickroll
Edit: Nevermind it's just the song Rise
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 7:47 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 7:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
(A picture if Ryu pops up)
Ryu starts running up to the screen.
Ryu and his friends start letting it rip!
A picture of valt pops up! Then Shu and Free!
A dark red villian pops up, Ryu jumps off a building and lets it rip!
Haru, Bam and Ari start rising like legends!
Then Vere pops up with Valor!
Ryu starts resonating with Remix!
Ryu runs up to the screen with his friends and they past legends!
Then they all jump into the sky!
(Then the hole thing happens again)
It's obviously a rickroll
Edit: Nevermind it's just the song Rise Are you sure?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 7:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU
No one will fall to that one once they click the video
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 7:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU
No one will fall to that one once they click the video
To bad...
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:06 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 8:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: No one will fall to that one once they click the video
To bad...
rick roll?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 8:06 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: To bad...
rick roll?!
Alright let's not get of topic!
@HollowMind8 are you free to give stars?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 8:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: rick roll?!
Alright let's not get of topic!
HollowMind8 are you free to give stars?
For the intro?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:46 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 8:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Alright let's not get of topic!
HollowMind8 are you free to give stars?
For the intro?
Nah my recent chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2021 8:46 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: For the intro?
Nah my recent chapter I've saw some mistakes, for example "Valtryak". It was just a battle chapter showing the power of the might "Champion Valtryek" so I don't blame you for being a short chapter, but it will take out 1 star.
I think it's 7,6/10 (mostly because of the reasons above), which falls into the "good" category
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 28, 2021
Thanks I will work on that!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 28, 2021
(Jul. 28, 2021 9:08 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Thanks I will work on that!
I cut off a whole point because I think you can do better, with this it should be 8.6/10
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 29, 2021
Meet The Blader!
Bam Ako!
Meet The Blader Bam Ako! Bam is a dedicated blader he was born in March the 23rd and it was also the day his father died every since then Bam blames himself one of his fake friends got him into beyblade he thus started battling with Varsity Roktavor Then after it was destroyed he vowed to never loose again so he created Wicked Batik! He turned himself into a bully until he met Ryu and Haru and thus an upcoming star is born
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
For those of you who did not see the post were I explained the system this is the system!
The SS System is made out of 5 main parts! Storm Blade! Seven Core Forge disc and performance tip, and Slayer Gear!
Storm Blade: The storm blade is very thick like the DB blade all blades have 4 blades but if you modify it it can have more!
Seven Core: Its shaped in a circle for other purposes in only has one small little blade that fits in terms Storm Blade so when you resonate 1 small blade pops up!
Forge Disc: A regular Forge Disc
Performance Tip: The upper part is a square shape and the bottem part is Round like a ball the reason the Sqaure is on the upper part is because to just add something sharp to attack the other persons performance tip ( I like blades okay)
Slayer Gear: You attach it to your Firge Disc or Blade and it speeds it up or gives more weight ( I don't know just use your imagination)
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Jul. 31, 2021
Deleated post
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
What I wanted Apex to look like
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - Demon Belial - Aug. 01, 2021
Looks good!
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
Thanks! I'll try and make it more better
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 4:04 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What I wanted Apex to look like
better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 01, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 5:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2021 4:04 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: What I wanted Apex to look like
better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that
Thanks lol!
Next Chapter will come in an hour Promise!
@BladeKingX can you rate my recent chapter?
UnseenBurst I’m about to post a chapter can you rate it?
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 02, 2021
(Aug. 01, 2021 5:28 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2021 5:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that
Thanks lol!
Next Chapter will come in an hour Promise!
@BladeKingX can you rate my recent chapter?
UnseenBurst I’m about to post a chapter can you rate it?
I'll give it a summary rating
RE: Beyblade Burst Storm Seven! - LegendJustice - Aug. 02, 2021
Chapter 10
Hard Power!
~At America~
Ryu: Gotta get training!
(Ryu head getting out of bed)
(I get changed and then head to the gym)
(I get on the Launcher machine)
Ryu: Let it Rip!! Let it Rip! Let it Rip! Let it Rip! *sigh* Gotta keep going!
(I start doing Push-Ups)
(30 minutes later)
Ryu: 501 502 503 504!
(Little did I know that Trad was watching)
Trad (Mind): He reminds me of Rantaro.
(Ryu has a flashback)
Bam: Wicked Saber!
(Remix Burst)
(End of flashback)
Ryu: 505 506 507 508 509 510.
Ryu: I'm tired.
(Lots of people start walking in Like Boa and Joshua)
(people start circling Boa and Joshua)
Ryu: What's happening there?
(I walk up to the crowd)
Boa: I'll show you I'm the strongest!
Joshua: In my Hollywood dreams!
Referee: First to 2 points. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Boa & Joshua: Let it RIP!!
(both bladers pull of wicked Storm launches)
Boa: Balkesh! Wisdom Teeth!
(Balkesh goes in for the attack)
Joshua: Jinnius! Take the center!
(Joshua says while snapping his fingers, Jinnius blocks all of Balkesh's attacks)
Boa: Despite Launch!!
(Balkesh starts attacking with a flurry of attacks)
(Just then Locus pops up)
Locus: SORRY EVERYONE I WAS SERVING THE BREAKFAST, BUT IM HERE NOW!!!!!! It seems like are Rising Star Joshua Burns! Is going up to our street boy Boa Alcazaba! Now it seems like Balkesh just hit with a flurry of attacks!
Joshua: Jinnius, Jynx Star!
(Jinnius sends an echo throughout the whole stadium, Balkesh starts to wobble)
Boa: Balkesh!!!!!! Despite Saber!
(Balkesh goes in and starts attacking Jinnius, then Jinnius bursts)
Joshua: *Gasp* I'll get you next time Boa!
Boa: I'd like to see you try!
Ryu (Mind): Boa is so strong!!!
Locus: And there you have it, folks! Balkesh just burst Jinnius to the next century!!
~Later in the afternoon~
Haru: Hydra!
(Haru's Resonance Aura flares up, Hydra blazes out of its bey)
Bam: Wicked Saber!
(Hydra Burst)
Bam: Ha! I knew you would lose!
Haru: GG! Even tho I thought you cheated! Yo Ryu! You there?
Ryu: Sorry, I was looking for a way to train!
Haru: Training is all you think about now!
Bam: I hate to agree with Haru hear but I agree!
(Just then Boa walks up to me)
Boa: Ryu Hoai, I challenge you to a battle!
(Boa said while holding up Balkesh)
Ryu: Wait what?!!
Boa: Since you are one of the weakest but strong I challenge you to battle!
Ryu: I'll show you who's weak!
Haru: I'll be a referee!
Locus: And I'll be your announcer!!
Locus: Hello everybody, today we have an exciting match! We have our Rookie blader! Ryu Hoai! Facing him is our street king! Boa Alcazaba!
Haru: First to 2 points wins! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryu & Boa: Let it RIP!!
(Me and Boa pull of amazing launches)
Locus: Amazing launches from both bladers!!
Ryu: Storm Launch!
Boa: Despite Launch!
(Balkesh comes in for a flurry of attacks, Remix starts attacking with a clash of attacks)
Boa: Get out of there!
(Balkesh leaves and goes on the motorized rim)
Locus: Balkesh just caught a ride on the motorized bus!
Boa: Despite fall!
(Balkesh goes in for an attack)
Ryu: Remix!!! Dodge that!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Remix doges the attack)
Ryu: Now we're talking!
Boa: Don't be so sure! Maximus Supreme!!
(Balkesh storms around the stadium then starts attacking Remix!
Ryu: *Roars* Storm Reboot!!!
(My Resonance Aura Starts turning diamond, Remix leans on its driver and speeds around Balkesh then burst it)
Referee: It's a burst finish with a score of 2-0 Ryu Hoai wins!
Ryu: Let's go!!
Locus: AMAZING WE JUST SAW THE MATCH OF A DECADE!!!
Boa: You May have beat me, but you're far from being a Legend!!
Ryu: I'll get there one day! With Remix!
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