Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
hey there! this is beyblade burst prime!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:13 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: Beyblade Burst: Prime!
hey guys, this is my reboot of matrix (in a way)!
Awesome!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
to not absolutely destroy my brain, I'll be posting chapters every 2 days!
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:13 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 09, 2021 12:13 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: Beyblade Burst: Prime!
hey guys, this is my reboot of matrix (in a way)!
Awesome!
lol thanks
i might be overdoing it a little, but I didn't really like how i did things in matrix, so i'll make a new story!
i'll also post the first chapter tomorrow!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - PinkRose - Jul. 09, 2021
Welp, good luck with the reboot, and take your time to think everything through so you can do it better this time. I’ll be following.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:32 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Welp, good luck with the reboot, and take your time to think everything through so you can do it better this time. I’ll be following.
alright (happy inspiration noises)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - LegendJustice - Jul. 09, 2021
After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:46 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!
lol yep
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - LegendJustice - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:51 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 09, 2021 12:46 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!
lol yep
Yes I'm still proud of my a of for Rick rolling but anyway I hope to see good stuff!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
Ness Uminachi is a blader with a strong, pure heart, determined to topple even the greatest legends. But, before him, is a new generation of bladers unleashed upon him! Within those bladers, there is a darkened, mysterious blader determined to crush even the purest of hearts. Will Ness Zoom to the top... or crash down and tumble over? Find out on Beyblade Burst Prime!!
Blader: Ness Uminachi
Gender: Male
Age: 12
E/C: Cyan
H/C: Green/Black
Characteristics: Ness is a short boy with a black faded cut and green razor sharp hair going to the back. He has fair skin, and cyan eyes.
His Prime attire features a cyan short sleeved jacket with a black base, with cyan lightning going all around the base, on top of a lime shirt with a cyan beyblade logo on it. He has a light blue fingerless glove with green accents on his left hand. He also has black pants and black boots with green accents and a base, and cyan shoelaces. He finally has a cyan N on his right cheek, and a blue cap with a green brim pushed to his left.
When he resonates with his beyblade, his hair grows even larger and starts to glow, and his eyes start to glow as well.
Personality: Ness is a very, very nice boy, prefering to spend his time helping out people, including his mom or his friends. When it comes to beyblade, he has certain added traits. For instance, he doesn't really like when people are being sore winners, and just ignores them. He also doesn't like to lose. However, he can also be very social and out going, as shown when he made friends with ??? in episode ?.
Beyblade: Plasma Nirios Whiplash Nitro-VA1
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
(I'll explain the system later)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - LegendJustice - Jul. 09, 2021
Nice your great at making names tho
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 5:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice your great at making names tho
thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - PinkRose - Jul. 09, 2021
Welp, bye Uriel, we’ll miss you. I like your naming sense btw.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 7:23 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Welp, bye Uriel, we’ll miss you. I like your naming sense btw.
lol thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 09, 2021
RIP Uriel 2021-2021 scraped by BladekingX
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 09, 2021
R.I.P Uriel 2021-2021
We lie here and he is not here anymore cause he was scrapped by @BladeKingX
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - LJ-Blader - Jul. 09, 2021
Looking good! Excited for a new system!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
How does it work, work, work?
The Prime system contains of five parts: The Primordial Chip, Primordial Blade, Forge Disc, Performance Tip, and the Verse.
Nexus Chip - The Primordial Chip is more octagon-ish in shape, making for its aggressive and intense blade. It also has teeth akin to Roar Bahamut's, but not every beyblade's teeth are made up of rubber. The locks are usually strongheld.
Primordial Blade - The Primordial Blade can have a kind of intense, or circular look, depending on the blade.
Forge Disc - The Forge disc can usually be more intense and aggressive.
Performance Tip - Regular.
Verse - The Verse is where battles get really funky! The verse can be added onto the top of a performance tip, or the top of the Primordial Blade for added defense, attack, stamina, stability, speed, or weight.
(Jul. 09, 2021 7:36 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: R.I.P Uriel 2021-2021
We lie here and he is not here anymore cause he was scrapped by @BladeKingX
can we pls get an F in the chat for Uriel, he was a good man
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 09, 2021
F for the character Uriel
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
but not to get of topic or anything, here's what all of the V's mean
VA1 - Verse Attack 1
VD1 - Verse Defense 1
VS1 - Verse Stamina 1
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 7:59 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: but not to get of topic or anything, here's what all of the V's mean
VA1 - Verse Attack 1
VD1 - Verse Defense 1
VS1 - Verse Stamina 1
Ok
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 09, 2021
and it goes even deeper!
VA1 - Categories: VA1 Speed
VD1 - Categories: VD1 Weight, VD1 Stability
VS1 - Categories: VS1 Stability
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 10, 2021
Episode 1!
Determination! Plasma Nirios!
(The Blading world is a wonderful place, where bladers battle with all they have and strive to have fun and win. Of those bladers are Legends, who have surpassed their goals and rose their status as bladers. However, there is one blader that strives to defeat the Legends and become the best, and that's Ness Uminachi! His determination roars through all of his battles, and shines while he is having fun. Ness' goal is to become a blading legend himself, and to surpass Valt Aoi! Will he achieve this accomplishment, or fall down and quit?)
(Flashback)
Ness (Young): Ooh, I wonder who's gonna win! (He'd say, while watching a recorded tag team battle. It was Valt and Rantaro Vs. Shu and Lain)
Valt (TV): Rush Launch!!
Shu (TV): Counter Break!!!
(Spryzen would run out of steam)
Referee: Survivor finish! Valt Aoi and Rantaro Kiyama wins!
Ness (Young): Amazing!!
(At Ness' house, which was in Beigoma)
Alarm Clock: Brrring! Brrring!! Brrring!!!
Ness: Ah yeah! Valt's battle is today! I better hurry!
(Ness would put on his clothes, brush his teeth, and finally eat breakfast)
(Ness' mom would come from her room)
Mom: Ness, don't you think your eating a little too fast?
Ness (Muffled): No. (He'd say as he'd proceed to eat fast)
Mom: *sigh* Something must be going on, huh?
Ness (Muffled): Yep. Valt's battle, it's gonna be SO awesome!!
Mom: Alright dear. (She'd say as she'd go over to their kitchen, then wash the dishes in the sink) Have a nice day!
Ness: (He'd finish his cereal) Alright mom, see ya! (He'd say as he'd go bolting out of the front door)
Mom: *sigh* Classic Ness...
(Ness would run as fast as he could down the sidewalk, not wanting to miss the match)
Ness: Oh no, I'm gonna miss it!! (He'd say, as he'd start running faster)
(He'd finally reach the arena)
Ness (Panting): Whew... I'm not late. (He'd say as he'd take a look at his watch, and then go to the stands and take a seat beside his friend, Enitu)
Enitu: Hey Ness, you got here just in time!
Ness (Panting): Ya don't say?
Enitu: Ness look, the match is starting!
Hanami: Alright you Bey Fans! Are you ready for a wicked battle?!
The Whole Crowd: YEAHH!!!
Hanami: Then let's get it on! First we have the Smooth Samurai, Rantaro Kiyama!!
(Rantaro would walk on stage)
Hanami: And now we have our wonder boy, the Legend of Legends, Valt Aoi!!!
(Valt would start running up to the stage)
Rantaro: It's about time I face you here, Valt!!
Valt: Yep! Same goes for you!
Rantaro: I'll be winning this, though! (He'd say, holding out his bey, Glide Roktavor)
Valt: We'll see! Me and Valtryek are gonna knock you out of the water! (He'd say, holding out his new Marvel Valtryek)
Hanami: What's that? Valt has a new bey?!
Enitu: Wow! Valt has a Prime bey, I wonder how the match will turn out!
Ness: So awesome... a Prime Bey... (He'd say, gazing at Valt's Marvel Valtryek)
Enitu: Wow! The data for this bey is incredible! See? (He'd say, pulling up data on Marvel Valtryek)
Ness: Incredible!
Enitu: It looks like it has 3 huge swords, and an additional 3 can come out, giving the beyblade fierce attack power!
Ness: I wonder how Rantaro will deal with that...
Rantaro: I see you have a Prime Bey, huh. I'll still be winning this! (He'd say, attaching his beyblade to his launcher)
Valt: No chance, we're winning this! (He'd say as he'd attach his beyblade to his launcher, with his battle aura flaring up wildly)
Ness: Amazing!!
Referee: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Valt and Rantaro: Let it... RIP!!
(Rantaro would do a Lightning Launch)
Hanami: And the Beys are in!
Rantaro: Roktavor! Take the center!
(Roktavor would take the center)
Valt: Now Valtryek! Hit 'em with our RUSH LAUNCH! (He say, thrusting his arm forward)
Rantaro: Not a chance, Roktavor! Glide... TORNADO!!
(Roktavor would nullify all of Valtryek's attacks)
Rantaro: How ya like that?
Hanami: Roktavor cushions all of Valtryek's attacks like they were nothing!
Valt: Heh!
(Roktavor's Glide Tornado would force Valtryek up into the air)
Hanami: Will this decide the match?!
Valt: Not a chance! Valtryek!
(Valtryek's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in a strong blue aura)
(Valtryek would hit the wall)
Valt: Marveling Bound!!
(Valtryek would bound of the wall, going straight for Roktavor. As Valtryek hit the stamina type, it would burst!)
Valt: Aw yeah!
Rantaro: Aw come on...
Referee: Burst Finish! By a score of 2-0, Valt Aoi wins!
Hanami: And Valt nails a fierce counterattack and snags the game!!
Rantaro: That wasn't bad. But next time, I'll be sure to win it!
Valt: We'll see then! (He'd run out of the arena, followed by Rantaro)
Ness: So... awesome! I gotta go create a Prime Bey! (He'd say, running out of the arena as fast as a bullet)
Enitu: Ness, wait! (He'd say as he'd come running after Ness)
Ness' Thoughts: That battle was so awesome! I gotta make my own Prime beyblade!! (He'd say, still running over to his house)
(Ness would reach his house)
(Inside the house)
Mom: Hey dear! How was the match?
Ness: It was awesome, mom! But I need a favor to ask.
Mom: What is it?
Ness: Could I use your 3D printer?
Mom: Sure, why not? It's in the garage, alright?
Ness: Alright! Thanks mom! (Ness would say as he'd go over to the 3D printing station in the garage)
Ness: Wow! This is amazing! (He'd say as he'd brush off all of the dust on the 3D printer) With this, I'll totally be able to make a Prime bey!
(He'd sit there for hours, wondering how to make a Prime bey)
Ness: Ughh, I don't know howw!! (He'd say as he'd dash out of the house to find Enitu. Maybe he could make one?)
Ness: Maybe Enitu can ma- (He'd be pausing by bumping into someone. He had blue hair, brown eyes, and a red hoodie. He was... Valt Aoi?!)
Valt: Oh, sorry! Didn't see ya there!
Ness: Are you THE Valt Aoi?!
Valt: Yep, that's me!
Ness: Wow! I'm so sorry! I just wasn't looking-
(Enitu would come behind Ness)
Enitu (Panting): I've finally found you.. wait, is that-
Ness: Yeah, it's Valt!
Enitu: Awesome!
Ness: Wait, Valt, you made a Prime bey, right?
Valt: With some help, yeah?
Ness: Cool! So you can make me a Prime bey, right?
Valt: Sure!
Ness: AWESOME! (He'd say, leading Valt to his home. He would then take him to his garage)
Valt: Alright, this is perfect! First, we need metal.
Ness: Got it! (He'd say, going into his closet and getting a metal bar)
Valt: Alright, now we can get to work! (He'd say, putting the metal in the 3D printer) What do you want you bey to look like?
Ness: Hmmm, I want it to be super strong and have 6 blades, so it can crash into the opponent like WHAM with 3 big blades, and 3 small blades!
Valt: Alright! (He'd say, as he'd give Ness goggles, then put on some goggles himself)
Enitu: You must want it to be an attack type, right?
Ness: Mhm!
Valt: Let's get to working!
Ness: Yeah!
(They'd start making the beyblade)
Valt: Give the blades a steeper angle!
Ness: Got it!
(After 2 hours, they would finally complete the beyblade)
Ness: It's finally done!
Enitu: What are you gonna name it?
Ness: Hmmm... how about Plasma Nirios!
Valt: Awesome choice!
Ness: Alright Valt, can we battle to test this out? I have a stadium in my backyard.
Valt: Sure!
(They'd all go to the backyard. Valt and Ness would line up at the stadium)
Enitu: I guess I'll be ref. (He'd say, lining up at the stadium) Inspect your opponent's beys!
Valt (Mind): Just because he started blading today, doesn't mean he'll be weak., so I shouldn't underestimate him. Nirios has 6 blades that can perform really well when it comes to smash attacks. It's driver looks like a rigged rubber flat driver, meaning that it can pull off aggressive attacks at the start of the match. Let's do this, Valtryek!
Ness (Mind): I'm actually becoming a blader, AND I'm battling Valt Aoi?! This day can't get any better!
Enitu: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Ness and Valt: Let it... RIP!!
Ness: Go Nirios! Strike 'em down!
Valt: Not before we can do anything about that! Valtryek, attack! (He'd say, thrusting his right arm forward)
(Valtryek would hit Nirios so hard, it would hit the wall)
Ness: Grr! Nirios!
(Nirios would be very unstable)
Valt: Now, VALTRYEK!!
(Valtryek would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in blue flames)
(Valtryek would hit the wall)
Valt: Marveling... BOUND!
(Valtryek would ricochet off the wall, then attack Nirios with fierce power, bursting it)
Ness: Grrr!!
Enitu: Burst finish! By a score of 2-0, Valt Aoi wins!
Valt: Wow! That was a pretty fun match!
Ness: Really?
Valt: Yeah!
Ness: Well... I'll defeat you one day Valt, and become the best of all the legends!!
Valt: We'll see! (Valt would run off into the distance)
Enitu: Wow Ness, that was rough.
Ness: It won't be next time! Me and Nirios will become stronger and win next time around! (He'd say, holding his bey off into the sunset)
Enitu: Well, alright, see you tomorrow Ness.
(Ness would go bolting into his room)
Ness: Don't worry Nirios, we'll become stronger, and one day, we'll defeat Valt!
Episode 2 Preview!
Ness: Whoa, Valt wants me to come with him to train with.. HONCHO?!
Ness: It looks like he has another student as well!
Ness: Another Roktavor?!
Next Episode On Beyblade Burst: Prime:
The Ultimate Stamina King! Roktavor!
3, 2, 1!
Let it RIP!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - LegendJustice - Jul. 12, 2021
Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 12:43 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!
lol thanks, im working on 2nd chapter rn
Episode 2!
The Ultimate Stamina King! Roktavor!!
(It was a bright, sunny morning, and Ness and Enitu were in the backyard of Ness' house, batting and practicing their launches)
Ness and Enitu: Let it RIP!!
Ness: Go Nirios!! (He'd say, thrusting his arm out)
Enitu: C'mon, we can do it!! (Enitu would say as his blue and white Curse Wyvern would strike at Nirios)
(Enitu's Beyblade would burst)
Ness: Yeah!
Enitu: Aw man...
(Valt would be running on the sidewalk, then he would come over to the backyard where Ness and Enitu were)
Valt: Hey guys!
Ness: Hey Valt! What's going on?
Valt: So after the battle we did yesterday... and the fact that it's your first time blading... I've gotten you a trainer!
Enitu: Awesome!
Ness: Yeah, who is it?
Valt: Follow me! (He'd say, running of into the distance)
(They'd finally reach the destination Valt was talking about, which was a training center Rantaro usually trained, or trained other bladers in)
Valt: We're finally here! That was a good run!
Ness and Enitu (Panting): Ya think?
(They'd enter the training center)
Rantaro: Let it RIP!
Ness: WHOA! Is it really-
Valt: Yep!
Rantaro: Oh hey Valt, this is the person you were talking about?
Valt: Uh huh! He's new, so could you show him the ropes maybe?
Rantaro: Why not?
Ness: Coolio!
Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys later, I have some exercises to do!
Ness: Ok!
(Valt would leave the training center)
(They would all sit down on a bench)
Rantaro: So your new, right?
Ness: Yeah! And we're gonna become the-
Rantaro: Alright, first we do... 500 pushups.
Ness and Enitu: 500?!
Rantaro: Yup, now get to doing them!!
Ness and Enitu: Yes sir!! (They'd say as they'd go on the ground, beginning to do pushups)
(A mystery person went towards Rantaro. He had just finished doing 1000 pushups)
???: Sir, are these the new students?
Rantaro: Yeah, why?
???: No reason. (He'd say, running off to do even more exercises)
(Back to Ness and Enitu)
Ness: 67... 68... 69... 70!
Enitu: You know we still got a lot to go, right-
Ness: AW MANNNN!!
Enitu: *sigh* Ness, maybe this is too m-
(The mysterious blader would come over to Ness, then started to do pushups)
???: Think you can keep up??
Ness: Of course!! (He'd say as he'd start to speed up his pushups) 70, 71, 72, 73, 74, 75!!
(They'd both start to speed up)
Ness and ???: HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ness and ???: 150!!
Rantaro: Wow, I think that's all we need for today!!
Ness (Panting): That was insane!!
Rantaro: Well, I think it's time to introduce the other student!! Razino, come over here!!
Razino: Yes sir! (He'd say, jogging over to Rantaro)
Rantaro: This is Razino, and he'll be practicing with you all!
Ness: Awesome!!
Enitu: Cool.
Rantaro: So, for our second session, you'll be battling me!!
Ness and Enitu: WHAT?!?!
Razino: Yep.
Rantaro: Alright Ness, you're up!!
Ness: Yeah! Nirios, we're gonna burst 'em like crazy!! (He'd say as he'd hold his bey up to his chest)
(Nirios would glimmer)
Rantaro's Thoughts: Hmm, looks like this'll be fun!
Razino's Thoughts: He may be more interesting than I thought...
(They'd line up at a stadium in the room, with Razino being excluded and instead watching the match)
Enitu: First to two points win! First battle, ready and set!!
All: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
(Rantaro would do a fierce Lightning Launch)
Enitu: And Rantaro leads things off with a fierce Lightning Launch!!
Ness: Go Nirios! Attack!!
(Nirios would completely miss Roktavor)
Ness: *gasps*
Rantaro: Roktavor! Take the center!!
(Roktavor would then take the center)
Enitu: Nirios completely misses the assault on Roktavor, then Roktavor takes the center!!
Rantaro: Let's show 'em what we're made of!! Glide Tornado!!
(Roktavor would create a tornado)
Ness: Let's go! Nirios! Plasma Launch!! (He'd say, thrusting his hand out)
(Nirios would attempt to hit Roktavor, only to be sent flying in the air.
Ness: WHAT?!
Rantaro: Now! Roktavor!!
(Roktavor's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in orange flames)
Rantaro: Mach Tornado!!
(Roktavor would zoom across the stadium, then burst Nirios!!)
Ness: *gasps*
Enitu: Glide Roktavor with a burst finish!! Rantaro Kiyama wins!!
Rantaro: Looks like I was wrong.
Ness: Grrr... one more time!! I'll totally win-
Razino: Yo dude, chill. You gotta think of a strategy. Until then, you'll keep on losing.
Rantaro: That's right, you can't charge into a battle without knowing what you're doing.
Ness: Hmmm... Ok. I'll start making strategies more often! Then I'll defeat you!!
Rantaro: Whoa whoa, hold up. This isn't it. Next, you gotta battle Razino!
Ness: Wait, Razino's a blader?
Razino: Yep. You'll battle me next!
Ness: Alright then! Me and Nirios will totally win!!
(Nirios would shine)
Razino: Looks like that talk wasn't just fake. Let's see how you fair against my Whirlwind Roktavor!!
Ness' Thoughts: He has Roktavor as well?! Welp, I guess I'll do what they said: Strategize. Whirlwind Roktavor. A clockwise spinning stamina type. It has 4 wings with a gimmick on it's forge disc where 2 blades come out, making it's stamina higher. Let's burst him like crazy!
Razino's Thoughts: Ness is probably gonna try and attack me. I'll just have to defend and wear out his stamina.
(Enitu would line up at the stadium)
Enitu: First battle! Ready, and set!
All: Three! Two! One!
Ness and Razino: Let it... RIPP!!
Enitu: And both bladers pull off amazing launches!!
Razino: Go Roktavor! Take the center!!
Ness: Not before we can do anything about it! Attack, Nirios!!
(Nirios would attack Roktavor fiercely. It would then hit the wall, then stabilized)
Razino: ...
Ness: Give 'em a taste of your Plasma Launch!! (He'd say, thrusting his hand out)
(Nirios would fiercely impact Roktavor in an epic barrage of attacks)
Enitu: Wow! Ness has Razino on a run for his money!!
(Razino would break the lolipop in his mouth)
Razino: Roktavor!!!
(Roktavor's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in orange flames)
Razino: Dual Winged Typhoon!!
(Roktavor would generate a field of wind, then would ram into Nirios. It would get sent flying out of the stadium, but before it hit the ground, it burst)
Enitu: Burst Finish!! By a score of 2-0, Razino-
Razino: Kiyama.
Enitu: Razino Kiyama wins!!
Ness: Grrrr... (He'd say, storming off)
Rantaro: What's wrong with him?
Enitu: Nothing. He normally does that.
Ness (Mind): I gotta find a way to defeat Roktavor...
Episode 3 Preview!!
Ness: Alright Nirios, we'll find a way to defeat Razino!
Ness: It'll be tough, but we can do it!
Ness: A new move?
Next Episode On Beyblade Burst Matrix:
Pull Through! Plasma Bolt!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Prime! - Demon Belial - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 12:49 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 12, 2021 12:43 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!
lol thanks, im working on 2nd chapter rn
Episode 2!
King of Tornadoes! Whirlwind Roktavor!
(It was a bright, sunny morning, and Ness and Enitu were in the backyard of Ness' house, batting and practicing their launches)
Ness and Enitu: Let it RIP!!
Ness: Go Nirios!! (He'd say, thrusting his arm out)
Enitu: C'mon, we can do it!! (Enitu would say as his blue and white Curse Wyvern would strike at Nirios)
(Enitu's Beyblade would burst)
Ness: Yeah!
Enitu: Aw man...
(Valt would be running on the sidewalk, then he would come over to the backyard where Ness and Enitu were)
Valt: Hey guys!
Ness: Hey Valt! What's going on?
Valt: So after the battle we did yesterday... and the fact that it's your first time blading... I've gotten you a trainer!
Enitu: Awesome!
Ness: Yeah, who is it?
Valt: Follow me! (He'd say, running of into the distance)
(They'd finally reach the destination Valt was talking about, which was a training center Rantaro usually trained, or trained other bladers in)
Valt: We're finally here! That was a good run!
Ness and Enitu (Panting): Ya think?
(They'd enter the training center)
Rantaro: Let it RIP!
Ness: WHOA! Is it really-
Valt: Yep!
Rantaro: Oh hey Valt, this is the person you were talking about?
Valt: Uh huh! He's new, so could you show him the ropes maybe?
Rantaro: Why not?
Ness: Coolio!
Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys later, I have some exercises to do!
Ness: Ok!
(Valt would leave the training center)
(They would all sit down on a bench)
Rantaro: So your new, right?
Ness: Yeah! And we're gonna become the-
Rantaro: Alright, first we do... 500 pushups.
Ness and Enitu: 500?!
Rantaro: Yup, now get to doing them!!
Ness and Enitu: Yes sir!! (They'd say as they'd go on the ground, beginning to do pushups)
(A mystery person went towards Rantaro. He had just finished doing 1000 pushups)
???: Sir, are these the new students?
Rantaro: Yeah, why?
???: No reason. (He'd say, running off to do even more exercises)
(Back to Ness and Enitu)
Ness: 67... 68... 69... 70!
Enitu: You know we still got a lot to go, right-
Ness: AW MANNNN!!
Enitu: *sigh* Ness, maybe this is too m-
(The mysterious blader would come over to Ness, then started to do pushups)
???: Think you can keep up??
Ness: Of course!! (He'd say as he'd start to speed up his pushups) 70, 71, 72, 73, 74, 75!!
(They'd both start to speed up)
Ness and ???: HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ness and ???: 150!!
Rantaro: Wow, I think that's all we need for today!!
Ness (Panting): That was insane!!
Rantaro: Well, I think it's time to introduce the other student!! Razino, come over here!!
Razino: Yes sir! (He'd say, jogging over to Rantaro)
Rantaro: This is Razino, and he'll be practicing with you all!
Ness: Awesome!!
Enitu: Cool.
Rantaro: So, for our second session, you'll be battling me!!
Ness and Enitu: WHAT?!?!
Razino: Yep.
Rantaro: Alright Ness, you're up!!
Ness: Yeah! Nirios, we're gonna burst 'em like crazy!! (He'd say as he'd hold his bey up to his chest)
(Nirios would glimmer)
Rantaro's Thoughts: Hmm, looks like this'll be fun!
Razino's Thoughts: He may be more interesting than I thought...
(They'd line up at a stadium in the room, with Razino being excluded and instead watching the match)
Enitu: First to two points win! First battle, ready and set!!
All: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
(Rantaro would do a fierce Lightning Launch)
Enitu: And Rantaro leads things off with a fierce Lightning Launch!!
Ness: Go Nirios! Attack!!
(Nirios would completely miss Roktavor)
Ness: *gasps*
Rantaro: Roktavor! Take the center!!
(Roktavor would then take the center)
Enitu: Nirios completely misses the assault on Roktavor, then Roktavor takes the center!!
Rantaro: Let's show 'em what we're made of!! Glide Tornado!!
(Roktavor would create a tornado)
Ness: Let's go! Nirios! Nitro Launch!! (He'd say, thrusting his hand out)
(Nirios would attempt to hit Roktavor, only to be sent flying in the air.
Ness: WHAT?!
Rantaro: Now! Roktavor!!
(Roktavor's avatar would erupt from it's beyblade, engulfed in orange flames)
Rantaro: Mach Tornado!!
(Roktavor would zoom across the stadium, then burst Nirios!!)
Ness: *gasps*
Enitu: Glide Roktavor with a burst finish!! Rantaro Kiyama wins!!
Rantaro: Looks like I was wrong.
Ness: Grrr... one more time!! I'll totally win-
Razino: Yo dude, chill. You gotta think of a strategy. Until then, you'll keep on losing.
Rantaro: That's right, you can't charge into a battle without knowing what you're doing.
Ness: Hmmm... Ok. I'll start making strategies more often! Then I'll defeat you!!
Rantaro: Whoa whoa, hold up. This isn't it. Next, you gotta battle Razino!
Ness: Wait, Razino's a blader?
Razino: Yep. You'll battle me next!
Ness: Alright then! Me and Nirios will totally win!!
(Nirios would shine)
definitely not my longest chapter, but next chapter will be much longer
Good episode waiting for the 3rd episode!
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