Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 24, 2021
So. A few things to keep in mind: 1. I have never written any of these Fan Fiction things. 2. This happens BEFORE DB AFTER sparking. 3. Some beys will not have been upgraded yet. 4. You can enter a bey but I might not accept it.
(ACTUAL) 2ND CHAPTER: JULY 1st EST
(Some bey names)
Aiger Akabane - Warrior Achilles
Valt Aoi - Heroic Valtryek
Shu Kurenai - Spryzen Crimson
Lane Valhalla - Lucifer The End - Roaring Lucifer
Hizashi Twins - Helios Volcano - Outlet Helios & Hyperion Burn - Scorching Hyperion
Dante Koryu - Storm Dragon
Hector Rockwell - Blazing Huracan
Rantaro & Ranjiro - Drift Roktavor
Xander Shakadera - Hunter Xcalibur
(MORE LATER)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - LegendJustice - Jun. 24, 2021
Cool 👍 I look to see some good work
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - GenesisBlader - Jun. 24, 2021
same this lookin awesome
also the reason why i was so late to comment is because i just finished with episode 1 of my fanfic
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
Info on the main character:
Name: Hector Rockwell
Age: 14
Personality: Happy, Determined, Courageous
Debut: Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
Bey: Blazing Huracan
Moves: Blazing Storm.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - GenesisBlader - Jun. 25, 2021
kewl beans
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
Blazing Huracan
Blazing Appearance: Three Blades that kind of look like Death Diabolos blades (Except all dark red)
Huracan Appearance: Kind of looks like Solomon but brown and it looks like instead of a crown its this broken up tomb looking thing on his head
Avatar: https://yucatanliving.com/site/assets/files/72666/dios_maya_hurakan_240x400.jpg
Debut: Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
You guys can also suggest a bey for an existing character...
Titles:
Ep 1
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
The Sun and the Moon! Hizashi Twins!
The Will To Win! Lane Valhalla!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 26, 2021
First chapter in progress!
Alright its done! It's going to be 2 parts since I made it kind of long...
Ep 1 1/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
**The blader world had just been taken by surprise by the battle known as The Last Spark...**
The Crowd was speechless... It broke out with a HUGE round of applause..
Hector: Alright! That. Was. EPIC!
**Hector stayed in the colosseum after everyone left.**
Hector: That was great. We should have battles just like that.. Right Curse Dragon?
**His bey did absolutely nothing**
Hector: Don't worry. I know what you would say.
**Hector seemed down.**
???: Heya! That was an epic battle right!?
**Hector jumped out of his chair and spun around**
Hector: Aiger Akabane!?
Aiger: That's me!! Anyways wanna battle?
Hector: Of Course! But.. Nevermind.
Aiger: Okay.. Lets go!
**They went down to the stadium in the middle**
Hector: Alright Curse Dragon.. Let's go.
Hector/Aiger: Ready? Set! 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!
Dragon zoomed through the stadium...
Aiger: Infinite-
Dragon burst.
Hector: Oh.
Aiger: Hmm... Something was wrong with that battle...
**Aiger picked Dragon up and it broke instantly**
Hector: Well-
Aiger: Oh I see!! This isn't yours!
Hector: What?? I found him though!
Aiger: Where did you find him...?
**Hector fidgeted with his hands**
Hector: Well.. The garbage...
Aiger: I see. How would you like to make your own! I will help as well. Achilles has been begging for an upgrade!
Hector: A bey of my own..? Sure!!
**They left and traveled through the forest**
Aiger: Here we are!
Hector: Where..?
TO BE CONTINUED...
Ep 1 2/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
Hector: Where..?
Aiger: My home of course! Come on!
**They headed into the workshop**
Aiger: Okay so-
Naru: Aiger!!! How dare you come home and not tell me??
Aiger: Uh-
Naru: Whos your friend?
Aiger: This is- Uh-
Hector: I'm Hector! **He smiled**
Aiger: Anyway, Hector needs help making a Beyblade. And I was on my way to upgrade Achilles so I thought I'd bring him!
Naru: Upgrade Achilles?? There is no new system out stupid!
Aiger: I'll just make my own!
Naru: WHAT?! You crazy? Being away from home fry your brain??
Aiger: Can't be that hard. **He grabbed a sheet of paper** Just a bit of this, and that, and BAM! **He drew a picture of a new Achilles**
Naru: What's the difference between this and a sparking bey?
Hector: Uh- Excuse me-
Aiger: Everything! Look you see this? **He put his drawing in the computer and it showed Union Achilles**
Nary: See? That's Union Achilles!
Hector: Hey!! LOOK! **He had a drawing of a new type of Beyblade** THIS. Is my idea. See this? **He put it in the computer**
Aiger: ?
Naru: ?
**On the computer was a special Beyblade. It had an extra chip that you could put in the tip for stamina, the middle for defense and the top for attack.
Hector: See? And all others beys can have different types of gimmicks!
Aiger: I see!
**Naru had drawn a new Achilles and put it in the computer. It had blades like union Achilles that could come off, but it was split in half and you could put it on either side to change the attack and weight.**
Naru: How's that Aiger?
Aiger: That's great! Can we print them?
Naru: Yep!
**A few more hours**
Hector: They are done! Meet Blazing Huracan!
Aiger: Meet.. Warrior Achilles!
Hector: What should we call this system?
Aiger: The Blaze Beys
Naru: Sounds great! Now here are parts for them. Aiger, 00 and Xtend+ for you.. And Hector.. 10 and Unite Dash!
**They put their beys together**
Hector: Lets test them!
**Naru rolled the stadium in**
Hectors Head: Hmm Lets try this!
**He put the chip to the top**
**Aiger left his extra blades off**
Naru: Ready? SET!
All: 3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!
Huracan sped up as soon as it hit the stadium
Hector: Huracan! ATTACK!
Aiger: Thought so. ACHILLES!**His aura burned up** WARRIOR SHIELD!
Achilles sped to the middle and went on defense
Hector: BREAK THROUGH IT! **His aura burned up as well** HURACAN!! BLAZING STORM!
They clashed in the center. They both flew in the air... Huracan burst, Achilles landed back in the stadium.
Hector: Well. I lost.. BUT THAT WAS AWESOME!
Aiger: That was a good match!
Naru: Woah...
Hector: Anyways, its getting late. I should head home.
Aiger/Naru: Alright cya!
**Hector headed home**
Hector: I'm Back!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - LegendJustice - Jun. 27, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 2:36 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: First chapter in progress!
Alright its done! It's going to be 2 parts since I made it kind of long...
Ep 1 1/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
**The blader world had just been taken by surprise by the battle known as The Last Spark...**
The Crowd was speechless... It broke out with a HUGE round of applause..
Hector: Alright! That. Was. EPIC!
**Hector stayed in the colosseum after everyone left.**
Hector: That was great. We should have battles just like that.. Right Curse Dragon?
**His bey did absolutely nothing**
Hector: Don't worry. I know what you would say.
**Hector seemed down.**
???: Heya! That was an epic battle right!?
**Hector jumped out of his chair and spun around**
Hector: Aiger Akabane!?
Aiger: That's me!! Anyways wanna battle?
Hector: Of Course! But.. Nevermind.
Aiger: Okay.. Lets go!
**They went down to the stadium in the middle**
Hector: Alright Curse Dragon.. Let's go.
Hector/Aiger: Ready? Set! 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!
Dragon zoomed through the stadium...
Aiger: Infinite-
Dragon burst.
Hector: Oh.
Aiger: Hmm... Something was wrong with that battle...
**Aiger picked Dragon up and it broke instantly**
Hector: Well-
Aiger: Oh I see!! This isn't yours!
Hector: What?? I found him though!
Aiger: Where did you find him...?
**Hector fidgeted with his hands**
Hector: Well.. The garbage...
Aiger: I see. How would you like to make your own! I will help as well. Achilles has been begging for an upgrade!
Hector: A bey of my own..? Sure!!
**They left and traveled through the forest**
Aiger: Here we are!
Hector: Where..?
TO BE CONTINUED...
Ep 1 2/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
Hector: Where..?
Aiger: My home of course! Come on!
**They headed into the workshop**
Aiger: Okay so-
Naru: Aiger!!! How dare you come home and not tell me??
Aiger: Uh-
Naru: Whos your friend?
Aiger: This is- Uh-
Hector: I'm Hector! **He smiled**
Aiger: Anyway, Hector needs help making a Beyblade. And I was on my way to upgrade Achilles so I thought I'd bring him!
Naru: Upgrade Achilles?? There is no new system out stupid!
Aiger: I'll just make my own!
Naru: WHAT?! You crazy? Being away from home fry your brain??
Aiger: Can't be that hard. **He grabbed a sheet of paper** Just a bit of this, and that, and BAM! **He drew a picture of a new Achilles**
Naru: What's the difference between this and a sparking bey?
Hector: Uh- Excuse me-
Aiger: Everything! Look you see this? **He put his drawing in the computer and it showed Union Achilles**
Nary: See? That's Union Achilles!
Hector: Hey!! LOOK! **He had a drawing of a new type of Beyblade** THIS. Is my idea. See this? **He put it in the computer**
Aiger: ?
Naru: ?
**On the computer was a special Beyblade. It had an extra chip that you could put in the tip for stamina, the middle for defense and the top for attack.
Hector: See? And all others beys can have different types of gimmicks!
Aiger: I see!
**Naru had drawn a new Achilles and put it in the computer. It had blades like union Achilles that could come off, but it was split in half and you could put it on either side to change the attack and weight.**
Naru: How's that Aiger?
Aiger: That's great! Can we print them?
Naru: Yep!
**A few more hours**
Hector: They are done! Meet Blazing Huracan!
Aiger: Meet.. Warrior Achilles!
Hector: What should we call this system?
Aiger: The Blaze Beys
Naru: Sounds great! Now here are parts for them. Aiger, 00 and Xtend+ for you.. And Hector.. 10 and Unite Dash!
**They put their beys together**
Hector: Lets test them!
**Naru rolled the stadium in**
Hectors Head: Hmm Lets try this!
**He put the chip to the top**
**Aiger left his extra blades off**
Naru: Ready? SET!
All: 3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!
Huracan sped up as soon as it hit the stadium
Hector: Huracan! ATTACK!
Aiger: Thought so. ACHILLES!**His aura burned up** WARRIOR SHIELD!
Achilles sped to the middle and went on defense
Hector: BREAK THROUGH IT! **His aura burned up as well** HURACAN!! BLAZING STORM!
They clashed in the center. They both flew in the air... Huracan burst, Achilles landed back in the stadium.
Hector: Well. I lost.. BUT THAT WAS AWESOME!
Aiger: That was a good match!
Naru: Woah...
Hector: Anyways, its getting late. I should head home.
Aiger/Naru: Alright cya!
**Hector headed home**
Hector: I'm Back!
Length: 4/5 It’s average long
Characters:4/5 They felt emotionanless like try adding some Like this:
Hector: Anyways, It’s getting late. **heater said tired** I should head home.
Grammar: 4/5 Are you using grammarly cause this is great! I like it but you did forget to use period marks in some of them
Plot: 3/5 lots of random things happened I don’t even know what match in the story happened but beside that it’s great!
15/20 it’s good just needs some work!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 28, 2021
(Jun. 27, 2021 11:55 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 26, 2021 2:36 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: First chapter in progress!
Alright its done! It's going to be 2 parts since I made it kind of long...
Ep 1 1/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
**The blader world had just been taken by surprise by the battle known as The Last Spark...**
The Crowd was speechless... It broke out with a HUGE round of applause..
Hector: Alright! That. Was. EPIC!
**Hector stayed in the colosseum after everyone left.**
Hector: That was great. We should have battles just like that.. Right Curse Dragon?
**His bey did absolutely nothing**
Hector: Don't worry. I know what you would say.
**Hector seemed down.**
???: Heya! That was an epic battle right!?
**Hector jumped out of his chair and spun around**
Hector: Aiger Akabane!?
Aiger: That's me!! Anyways wanna battle?
Hector: Of Course! But.. Nevermind.
Aiger: Okay.. Lets go!
**They went down to the stadium in the middle**
Hector: Alright Curse Dragon.. Let's go.
Hector/Aiger: Ready? Set! 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!
Dragon zoomed through the stadium...
Aiger: Infinite-
Dragon burst.
Hector: Oh.
Aiger: Hmm... Something was wrong with that battle...
**Aiger picked Dragon up and it broke instantly**
Hector: Well-
Aiger: Oh I see!! This isn't yours!
Hector: What?? I found him though!
Aiger: Where did you find him...?
**Hector fidgeted with his hands**
Hector: Well.. The garbage...
Aiger: I see. How would you like to make your own! I will help as well. Achilles has been begging for an upgrade!
Hector: A bey of my own..? Sure!!
**They left and traveled through the forest**
Aiger: Here we are!
Hector: Where..?
TO BE CONTINUED...
Ep 1 2/2
Together We Stand! Blazing Huracan!
Hector: Where..?
Aiger: My home of course! Come on!
**They headed into the workshop**
Aiger: Okay so-
Naru: Aiger!!! How dare you come home and not tell me??
Aiger: Uh-
Naru: Whos your friend?
Aiger: This is- Uh-
Hector: I'm Hector! **He smiled**
Aiger: Anyway, Hector needs help making a Beyblade. And I was on my way to upgrade Achilles so I thought I'd bring him!
Naru: Upgrade Achilles?? There is no new system out stupid!
Aiger: I'll just make my own!
Naru: WHAT?! You crazy? Being away from home fry your brain??
Aiger: Can't be that hard. **He grabbed a sheet of paper** Just a bit of this, and that, and BAM! **He drew a picture of a new Achilles**
Naru: What's the difference between this and a sparking bey?
Hector: Uh- Excuse me-
Aiger: Everything! Look you see this? **He put his drawing in the computer and it showed Union Achilles**
Nary: See? That's Union Achilles!
Hector: Hey!! LOOK! **He had a drawing of a new type of Beyblade** THIS. Is my idea. See this? **He put it in the computer**
Aiger: ?
Naru: ?
**On the computer was a special Beyblade. It had an extra chip that you could put in the tip for stamina, the middle for defense and the top for attack.
Hector: See? And all others beys can have different types of gimmicks!
Aiger: I see!
**Naru had drawn a new Achilles and put it in the computer. It had blades like union Achilles that could come off, but it was split in half and you could put it on either side to change the attack and weight.**
Naru: How's that Aiger?
Aiger: That's great! Can we print them?
Naru: Yep!
**A few more hours**
Hector: They are done! Meet Blazing Huracan!
Aiger: Meet.. Warrior Achilles!
Hector: What should we call this system?
Aiger: The Blaze Beys
Naru: Sounds great! Now here are parts for them. Aiger, 00 and Xtend+ for you.. And Hector.. 10 and Unite Dash!
**They put their beys together**
Hector: Lets test them!
**Naru rolled the stadium in**
Hectors Head: Hmm Lets try this!
**He put the chip to the top**
**Aiger left his extra blades off**
Naru: Ready? SET!
All: 3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!
Huracan sped up as soon as it hit the stadium
Hector: Huracan! ATTACK!
Aiger: Thought so. ACHILLES!**His aura burned up** WARRIOR SHIELD!
Achilles sped to the middle and went on defense
Hector: BREAK THROUGH IT! **His aura burned up as well** HURACAN!! BLAZING STORM!
They clashed in the center. They both flew in the air... Huracan burst, Achilles landed back in the stadium.
Hector: Well. I lost.. BUT THAT WAS AWESOME!
Aiger: That was a good match!
Naru: Woah...
Hector: Anyways, its getting late. I should head home.
Aiger/Naru: Alright cya!
**Hector headed home**
Hector: I'm Back!
Length: 4/5 It’s average long
Characters:4/5 They felt emotionanless like try adding some Like this:
Hector: Anyways, It’s getting late. **heater said tired** I should head home.
Grammar: 4/5 Are you using grammarly cause this is great! I like it but you did forget to use period marks in some of them
Plot: 3/5 lots of random things happened I don’t even know what match in the story happened but beside that it’s great!
15/20 it’s good just needs some work!
Thx
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 29, 2021
Alright. SO the next chapter is officially finished. BUT I wrote it in a different format. So.. Tell me which one you like more.
Ep 1½
(I'm going to try writing this in a different format)
Ignite your destiny! Valiant Mercury!
(THIS IS A BONUS/FILLER EPISODE!)
"I'm home!" called Hector. Mom came around the corner "Hector? Great! Run up, get your sister and tell her to come down for dinner and we can talk about our days!" she said. "Alright! Can't wait to tell you about my day, it was awesome!" Hector exclaimed. "Can't wait to hear it!" Mom said with a smile. Hector ran upstairs. "MADELINE!! DINNER!!" He called. He went into her room. Madeline was under her covers looking at something. Hector removed the blanket. Madeline had a prototype sparking bey in her hand. "What's this?" Hector asked. "It's my new prototype bey!" Madeline said, "Brilliant Mercury!" she exclaimed. "Nice-" "AND!" she interrupted "I won the challenge... I got my bey first!" she said. "Actually-" "KIDS! YOUR DINNER IS GETTING COLD!" Mom called, annoyed. The third time getting interrupted today, he thought. "COMING MOM!" The two kids yelled at the same time. They ran downstairs and sat at the table, mom handed out plates and sat down. "So, Days?" Mom asked. Madeline brought out her bey. "Meet Brilliant Mercury!" She said. "That's cool!" Mom said. "I also won the challenge between me and Hec-" she started. "Actually what I was trying to say upstairs is that I won." He brought out Huracan. "WHAT?!?! IT'S NOT EVEN A SPARKING BEY! CHEATER!!" Madeline exclaimed, annoyed. "Well, this is a blaze bey!" he said, proud "Aiger and I made them... With the help of his loud sister.." he said. "YOU HAVE TO HELP ME MAKE ONE!!" she shouted. "Yep. My day was great too," said Mom. "Alright! Let's go!" Hector said. They ran into Dad's workshop. "First, we test out that prototype of yours." They got ready next to the stadium. "3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!" They launched. "HURACAN! BLAZING STORM!" Huracan's contact points glowed and it charged at Mercury who had taken the center. "MERCURY! DON'T BACK DOWN... BRAVERY SHIELD!" Mercury defended with all its power. "Hang in there Mercury!" Madeline called. "C'mon Huracan! Breakthrough!!" He yelled. His Aura flared up, it wasn't that big though. "MERCURY KEEP UP THE DEFENCES!" She yelled. "HAA!!" The beys were in a fierce clash, Huracan burst through Mercury. "AGGHH!!" She yelled. "I never win." "That's alright," Hector said. "Let's get to your Blaze bey. I can already tell it's a defense type." He said. "Riiight.." Madeline said. They got started. After 4 hours it was finally done... "Alright! Valliant Mercury is finished!" Madeline said. "Battle me again!" "Deal!" said Hector. They went to the stadium. Hector switched Huracan's chip to the bottom, stamina. "3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!" They yelled. Huracan and Mercury battled it out for the center. "Mercury!! Put it in its place! Valliant Counter!" Mercury leaned on its driver and knocked Huracan away. "What?!" Hector exclaimed. "No matter... HURACAN!" His small aura flared. "BLAZING... STORM!" He yelled. Huracan charged. "THIS TIME WE WON'T LOSE!! MERCURY!" A small aura appeared around her as well. "Alright! VALIENT STRIKE!" she called. Huracan almost hit Mercury but Mercury dodged the attack and burst through Huracan. "What?!" Hector exclaimed. "YES!!! I. WIN." Madeline yelled. "Aw... Dang, it!" Hector complained. "HA. HA." Madeline teased."KIDS! BEDTIME!" Mom called. "Darn it," they said at the same time. Hector left his room. "Well, good night!" he said. "Night." said his sister. Hector went to bed. "Another night means another day which equals a new adventure!" said Hector. Until next time! Cya!
Next episode preview:
Alright! Looks like Valt has an announcement!
A Beyblade journey?
What is this a video game??
Find out next time on:
Beyblade Burst: Blaze!
LegendJustice Episode one and a half lol
(Jun. 29, 2021 9:59 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Alright. SO the next chapter is officially finished. BUT I wrote it in a different format. So.. Tell me which one you like more.
Ep 1½
(I'm going to try writing this in a different format)
Ignite your destiny! Valiant Mercury!
(THIS IS A BONUS/FILLER EPISODE!)
"I'm home!" called Hector. Mom came around the corner "Hector? Great! Run up, get your sister and tell her to come down for dinner and we can talk about our days!" she said. "Alright! Can't wait to tell you about my day, it was awesome!" Hector exclaimed. "Can't wait to hear it!" Mom said with a smile. Hector ran upstairs. "MADELINE!! DINNER!!" He called. He went into her room. Madeline was under her covers looking at something. Hector removed the blanket. Madeline had a prototype sparking bey in her hand. "What's this?" Hector asked. "It's my new prototype bey!" Madeline said, "Brilliant Mercury!" she exclaimed. "Nice-" "AND!" she interrupted "I won the challenge... I got my bey first!" she said. "Actually-" "KIDS! YOUR DINNER IS GETTING COLD!" Mom called, annoyed. The third time getting interrupted today, he thought. "COMING MOM!" The two kids yelled at the same time. They ran downstairs and sat at the table, mom handed out plates and sat down. "So, Days?" Mom asked. Madeline brought out her bey. "Meet Brilliant Mercury!" She said. "That's cool!" Mom said. "I also won the challenge between me and Hec-" she started. "Actually what I was trying to say upstairs is that I won." He brought out Huracan. "WHAT?!?! IT'S NOT EVEN A SPARKING BEY! CHEATER!!" Madeline exclaimed, annoyed. "Well, this is a blaze bey!" he said, proud "Aiger and I made them... With the help of his loud sister.." he said. "YOU HAVE TO HELP ME MAKE ONE!!" she shouted. "Yep. My day was great too," said Mom. "Alright! Let's go!" Hector said. They ran into Dad's workshop. "First, we test out that prototype of yours." They got ready next to the stadium. "3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!" They launched. "HURACAN! BLAZING STORM!" Huracan's contact points glowed and it charged at Mercury who had taken the center. "MERCURY! DON'T BACK DOWN... BRAVERY SHIELD!" Mercury defended with all its power. "Hang in there Mercury!" Madeline called. "C'mon Huracan! Breakthrough!!" He yelled. His Aura flared up, it wasn't that big though. "MERCURY KEEP UP THE DEFENCES!" She yelled. "HAA!!" The beys were in a fierce clash, Huracan burst through Mercury. "AGGHH!!" She yelled. "I never win." "That's alright," Hector said. "Let's get to your Blaze bey. I can already tell it's a defense type." He said. "Riiight.." Madeline said. They got started. After 4 hours it was finally done... "Alright! Valliant Mercury is finished!" Madeline said. "Battle me again!" "Deal!" said Hector. They went to the stadium. Hector switched Huracan's chip to the bottom, stamina. "3! 2! 1! LET IT... RIP!" They yelled. Huracan and Mercury battled it out for the center. "Mercury!! Put it in its place! Valliant Counter!" Mercury leaned on its driver and knocked Huracan away. "What?!" Hector exclaimed. "No matter... HURACAN!" His small aura flared. "BLAZING... STORM!" He yelled. Huracan charged. "THIS TIME WE WON'T LOSE!! MERCURY!" A small aura appeared around her as well. "Alright! VALIENT STRIKE!" she called. Huracan almost hit Mercury but Mercury dodged the attack and burst through Huracan. "What?!" Hector exclaimed. "YES!!! I. WIN." Madeline yelled. "Aw... Dang, it!" Hector complained. "HA. HA." Madeline teased."KIDS! BEDTIME!" Mom called. "Darn it," they said at the same time. Hector left his room. "Well, good night!" he said. "Night." said his sister. Hector went to bed. "Another night means another day which equals a new adventure!" said Hector. Until next time! Cya!
Next episode preview:
Alright! Looks like Valt has an announcement!
A Beyblade journey?
What is this a video game??
Find out next time on:
Beyblade Burst: Blaze!
LegendJustice Episode one and a half lol
UnseenBurst would you like to rate this as well?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 01, 2021
Due to IRL stuff, no chapter today.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - GenesisBlader - Jul. 01, 2021
(Jul. 01, 2021 8:10 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Due to IRL stuff, no chapter today.
alright i feel you
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 05, 2021
Ep 2
The Quest for Greatness!
"HECTOR!!!" Madeline boomed. Hector woke up. "Oh, what is it..?" He asked, sleepily. "IT'S VALT!! HE- HE-" She stuttered. "He- he- he what??" Hector mocked. "JUST LOOK!!" Madeline stuffed a tablet in his face. "Hey all you bladers!" said Hanami. "As promised, VALT AOI!" He said. "Hey, guys!" Valt said, He ran to the stadium and tripped into the stadium. "I.. Meant to do that..!" He said, embarrassed. "Anyway..! We have a special guest giving this announcement!" He said quickly. The crowd murmured. "Who do you think it is?" Madeline asked. "How am I supposed to know?" Hector responded. "Hey, guys!" Aiger flipped over to the stadium, Achilles in hand. "Meet Warrior Achilles! A Blaze Bey!" Aiger announced. The crowd roared in approval. "A friend, sister, and I made them!" he said. Valt held up a new Valtryek. "He made one?!" Hector exclaimed. "I guess they are making Blaze public." Madeline said. "Meet Heroic Valtryek!" Valt said. Aiger and Valt walked over to the Sparking stadium. The floor opened up and swallowed the Sparking stadium, And out came a new stadium. It had one motor close to a stadium wall for the right spin beys, and one on the other side for the left. It had rails to ride on that had speed pads in front of each one like Xavier's stadium. "And this... Is the newest stadium, the Speed Core Stadium... It's for Blaze beys!" said Aiger. "The Speedcore stadium?!" Hector and Madeline said at the same time. "Now... To test it out!" said Hanami. Valt and Aiger got in launch position. "3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!" they yelled. As they launched, Red flames engulfed Aiger and Blue around Valt. "What?!" Hector exclaimed. "OH!! EPIC BLAZE LAUNCHES!" Hanami exclaimed. "ACHILLES! TAKE THE CENTER!" Achilles raced to the center, Valtryek intercepted. "Wh-" Aiger started. "So predictable Aiger. GO FOR IT! HEROIC SWORD!" Valtryek's contact pointed glowed. It hit Achilles with a crushing blow. "DON'T BACK DOWN ACHILLES!" Achilles flew into the wall but hit the motor and sped up. "What?!" Valt exclaimed. "Did you forget?? ACHILLES!!" Aiger's Red Blaze flared up. "ATTACK!! WARRIOR BREAKER!!" Achilles also got engulfed in Red Blaze. It sped up into the rails and charged at Valtryek. "WE WON'T BACK DOWN!" Valt yelled. He and Valtryek got engulfed in Blue Blaze. "HEROIC FLASH LAUNCH!" Valt called. Achilles and Valtryek got locked in a fierce clash. They both roared. Achilles' stamina fizzled out, but before he stopped Valtryek burst. "Achilles with a burst finish, Aiger wins!" said the ref. "ALRIGHT!!" Aiger roared. "That was fun!" said Valt. He gave Aiger a High Five. They walked off. In walked Kris. "Hello!" she said. "I came to announce the start of the new Blaze Advancement!" She said. "People from all across the world will battle each other and move up the ranks!" she continued. "A new Advance phone will drop all around and with it, you can challenge each other! With the Advance phone you will move up the ranks!" she announced. "Good luck... And let it rip!" she finished and walked off. "Alri-" The tablet died. "Woah..." Hector said. There was a knock at the door. "I got it!" He called. Hector opened the door to two small packages on the ground. "Advance phones!" He said, excited. He ran back into the room. "Advance phones?" Madeline asked. "Yep!" Hector said. They each opened one... "They look... Weird." Madeline said. "Like iPhone and Android mixed." she finished. "Eh." Hector said. The phones turned on. "Hello, Hector!" Said the phone. "I have been graced to be your lovely assistant... Rover!" It said. "Recognising..." It repeated that over and over. "Got it! Your bey is Blazing Huracan!" Rover said. "Am I correct?" Rover asked. "Yup," Hector said. "We should test this out outside.." Madeline said...Your right... Let's go!" Hector said. They ran outside. They immediately got requests. "You have a battle request!" said Rover. Two kids ran over. "Let's battle!" They said. "Sure!" Hector and Madeline said. They walked over to a normal Stadium. "3! 2! 1! Let it.. RIP!" All four yelled. (No, they are not in the same stadium.) "Burst through Huracan!" Hector called. "Let's go, Mercury!" Madeline yelled. They both burst through their opponents. "Alright!" They yelled... "Break! Break! Breakthrough your limits!" Someone said from a different stadium.
Episode 3 spoiler
Breakthrough our limits..?
Wait you're telling me to ask my bey??
These two are crazy.
Wanna know what happens? Find out on...
Beyblade Burst! Blaze!
I made this episode longer since I didn't post it on the 1st.
LegendJustice can you rate these?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - ColdFlames13 - Jul. 18, 2021
Alright so... I am no longer going to be writing Blaze. Because: 1. Nobody really reads this. 2. Time (I feel like that speaks for itself) 3. Motivation. Yep.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Blaze - LegendJustice - Jul. 18, 2021
(Jul. 18, 2021 9:53 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Alright so... I am no longer going to be writing Blaze. Because: 1. Nobody really reads this. 2. Time (I feel like that speaks for itself) 3. Motivation. Yep.
… if this is what you want then okay!
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