RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Dark red - Jun. 24, 2021
(Jun. 24, 2021 10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 24, 2021 9:19 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: oh god i am so sorry i didnt mean to ask alot i just thought you was already going to add him to that oh no aiden is very evil and we cant really stop him arc but its ok you can add him in whenever you want you dont have to live up to my expectations, lol
No no It's my job to make u guys happy with ur characters so don't worry about it just wanted to tell u advanced You're doing a great job especially with my character, Ryuji Kiyama. I like the interaction you made between him and Adam, bickering with each other.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 24, 2021
ima get to working on Episode 2 of Beyblade Burst: Matrix
yeah lol it makes him unique from rantaro ranjiro and ranzo
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 24, 2021
(Jun. 24, 2021 10:45 PM)Dark red Wrote: (Jun. 24, 2021 10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: No no It's my job to make u guys happy with ur characters so don't worry about it just wanted to tell u advanced You're doing a great job especially with my character, Ryuji Kiyama. I like the interaction you made between him and Adam, bickering with each other.
Thx
(Jun. 24, 2021 10:44 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jun. 24, 2021 10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: No no It's my job to make u guys happy with ur characters so don't worry about it just wanted to tell u advanced
oh ok just making sure
also i really dont mean to rush but when's the next chapter, or when do you think ur gonna get it out?
So my chapter release schedule is 2 chapters on Beyjitzu and 2 chapters on Dynachi I'm starting the 2 chapters on Dynachi now so maybe in a bit
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 24, 2021
alright awesome sauce
cool beans
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 25, 2021
Chapter 20 is out
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 20
Heroic Rematch!! Daniel Vs Vlad!!!
(Zeutron bursts)
Announcer: And Sebastian Kurenai makes quick work of Zafary and Zeutron!!
Zafary: Are you kidding me?
(Zafary punches his fist into the hand)
Sebastian: That was easy.
(Sebastian walked away)
Me: That was awesome!!
Adam: Hey Vlad, your match is coming up!!
Ryuji: Yeah, you better win!
(Ryuji mocks me)
Me: Says the person who’s on a losing streak!
(I stick my tongue out)
Adam: Touche.
(Ryuji crosses his arm)
Brooke: We should probably practice for tomorrow.
(Brooke pulled out his launcher and bey)
~On The Top Of The Cruise~
Me/Ryuji/Brooke/Adam: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up behind Ashindra)
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek knocks Ashindra out of the stadium)
Adam: Gosh Darnit!!
(Valtryek head straight for the center)
Me: Valient Spring Attack!!
(Roktavor gets hit hard by Valtryek, Roktavor stopped spinning)
Ryuji: Now way!!
(Valtyrek starts chasing Belarix)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek starts wobbling and stops spinning)
Me: Yo, what happened?
Brooke: Apparently Heroic Reboot failed.
(Brooke picks up Belarix)
Ryuji: You can’t go into this match with a move failing!!
Adam: For once he’s right, if Heroic Reboot fails in this match it’s over!!
Me: It only happened once! I bet I can pull it off!!
~In The Middle Of The Battle~
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek starts wobbling and stops spinning)
Me: Give me one more chance!!
~50 Battles Later~
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek starts wobbling and stops spinning)
(Me, Brooke, Adam, and Ryuji fall to the ground)
Adam: We couldn’t nail the move!
Ryuji: Just don’t use the move tomorrow.
Me: I don’t have a choice! When Valtryek loses speed that’s when the move quicks in!!
Brooke: I guess we have to just have hope!
Me: Don’t worry I’ll win!!
Adam: Let’s hope.
~The Next Day~
Announcer: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’ll be having one of the best matches on our cruise!! First, in the blue corner, he’s the famous Valt Aoi’s nephew Vlad Aoi!!
(I walk up to the stage)
Me (Thoughts): I’ve got to have hope I know I can do this!!
Announcer: Next up we’ve got our new Dragon Tamer!! Daniel Koryu!!
(Daniel runs up to the stage)
Daniel: I’m gonna rise up and win this bout!!
Announcer: Alright folks!! Let’s see who’s going to win this super battle!!
Will it be Vlad or Daniel?! I can’t wait so let’s dive right in!!
Me/Daniel (Thoughts): I’ve got to do this, I believe in my bey I know we can do it!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(Daniel puts Dragon’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Daniel: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek and Dragon start speeding up around the stadium)
Me: Rush Launch!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Valtryek and Dragon start hitting each other with strong blows)
Announcer: Valtryek and Dragon start giving each other the beat down!!
Daniel: Right there!! Royal Recoil!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Valtryek and Dragon send each other flying)
Announcer: They both intercept their attacks and get sent flying!!
Brooke: This isn’t good.
Ryuji; What do you mean?
Brooke: Vlad’s barely holding off f Dragon’s strong attack eventually it won’t be able to counter anymore!!
Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!
(Dragon crashes into the wall hard)
Daniel: Winged Recoil!!
(Valtryek and Dragon start clashing)
(Dragon starts clicking)
Announcer: Wow, they’re really going at it!!
(Dragon’s bound blades get stuck out)
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: *Gasps*
Daniel: End this!! Royal Break!!
(Dragon speeds up and shoots Valtryek up in the air)
(My eyes widen while I gasp)
Ryuji/Adam: No!!
(Valtryek blazes up into a blue fire)
Valtryek: Are you giving up?
Me: No.
Valtryek: Then like you said we must have faith!!
Me: You're right!! Valtryek!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
(Valtryek hits the wall and picks up speed)
Announcer: Woah, Valtryek just survived!!
(Valtryek’s reboot tip stick comes in)
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(I start speeding up like crazy)
Adam: He nailed it!!
Brooke: He’s never gone that fast!
Announcer: Valtryek puts the pedal to the metal!!
Daniel: One last time!! Royal Break!!
Me: End this!! Heroic Spring Attack!!!
(Valtryek and Dragon slam into each other, the whole stadium explodes)
(Valtryek and Dragon get sent flying in the air, Dragon bursts)
Drone: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a burst finish!! Vlad Aoi is the winner!!
(I catch Valtryek from the air)
Me: Boo-ya!!
(I jump in the air)
Announcer: Wow, when the odds stacked against Vlad he showed destiny that he wasn’t taking loss as an answer!!
Ryuji: That was pretty decent.
Adam: Don’t listen to him, you were solid!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): Looks like I need to get training, Vlad’s getting stronger!!
Daniel: Hey man, that was a great match!!
Me: Yeah it really was!!
Announcer: Attention!! Since we are arriving sooner than we thought at our last destination, the finals will have to be pushed to tomorrow!! Since Aiden Peregrin and Sebastian Kurenai have the highest ranks and winning streaks the finals will be between them so just wait till tomorrow!!
Me: Aw man I wanted to battle more!!
Aiden (Thoughts): I get to destroy Sebastian Kurenai right before his eyes!! I have been waiting for this day for a long time!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): This is a battle I need to win. The blading world depends on it!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 25, 2021
nice episode!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 1:33 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice episode!
Thx. What was ur fave part?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 25, 2021
my fave part was when vlad entered the resonance with his beyblade and came back and won against daniel! i loved the vlad vs daniel rematch as a whole but that was my fav part
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 1:44 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 25, 2021 1:33 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice episode!
Thx. What was ur fave part?
The fighting lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
Always the fights
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 1:35 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Always the fights
As thanks I put a lot of effort into this for you guys
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 25, 2021
I honestly love it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 25, 2021
My fave part was when Vlad learned how to use Heroic Reboot after 51 failed attempts
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 4:09 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: My fave part was when Vlad learned how to use Heroic Reboot after 51 failed attempts
I think I wouldve liked that part a lot more if he didnt know how to use it and then he accidently used it in a battle AND THEN he tries perfecting it.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 4:22 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (Jun. 25, 2021 4:09 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: My fave part was when Vlad learned how to use Heroic Reboot after 51 failed attempts
I think I wouldve liked that part a lot more if he didnt know how to use it and then he accidently used it in a battle AND THEN he tries perfecting it.
That has happened earlier in the story this is when he tries perfecting it
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 4:24 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 25, 2021 4:22 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: I think I wouldve liked that part a lot more if he didnt know how to use it and then he accidently used it in a battle AND THEN he tries perfecting it.
That has happened earlier in the story this is when he tries perfecting it
Oh Okay
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 26, 2021
Chapter 21 is out 
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 21
The Epic Finale!! Aiden Vs Sebastian!!!
(A shadowy bey flies past me fast)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
???: The ultimate bey.
Me: Huh? Who are you?
???: The bey that will end the darkness.
(The shadowy bey turns bright golden, another bey comes in and it shines with darkness)
Me: *Gasps*
(The bey shining with darkness comes straight at me)
Me: AH!!
(The golden bey bursts the dark Beyblade)
Me: So cool!!
???: Vlad Aoi, creator of the ultimate bey!!
(I wake up suddenly)
Adam: You're finally awake.
Me: Wait where is it?!
(I fall off my bed)
Adam: Where is what?
Me: I saw a golden bey that defeated the dark bey!!
Adam: I know what it’s called!!
Me: What?!
(Adam throws a pillow at my face)
Adam: A dream.
Me: It felt so real, I swear!!
Adam: Whatever, let’s meet up with Brooke and Ryuji.
Me (Thoughts): What is the ultimate bey?
(Outside the rear of the ship)
Me (Thoughts): What did they mean to create the ultimate bey, and will it be able to defeat Aiden? Is that what they meant?
Adam: VLAD!!
Me: Ah!!
Ryuji: Have you been listening?
Me: If I’m being completely honest, no.
Ryuji: What’s more important than mastering your bey!!
Me: Well.
(I explain my dream to them)
Ryuji: Maybe my bey is the ultimate bey!
Adam: In your dreams!!
Ryuji: Excuse me?
Adam: I bet 5 dollars that you’d get squashed like a bug!!
Ryuji: I’m too rich to accept a messy crumbly 5 bucks!
Adam: More like too stuck up!!
Adam/Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Guys chill. What did the golden bey look like?
Me: It was too bright for me to see!
Adam: Guess we don’t really need to worry about it, It’s probably just a dream.
Me: Let’s go watch the match, it’s almost time!!
Ryuji: I still think the golden bey is Roktavor!!
Adam: It’s just a dream!!
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the ultimate finals of the BattleShip Cruise!! Our strongest bladers Aiden Peregrin Vs Sebastian Kurenai!!
(Sebastian and Aiden walk up to the stage)
Aiden: I’ve been waiting a long time to break you!!
(Aiden looks down at Sebastian)
Sebastian: When I’m done with you, your breaking days will be over!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen in counterclockwise attack mode)
Me (Thoughts): You tell them, Sebastian.
Announcer: They’re both serious about winning so let’s get right into this!!
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse’s Reboot tip stick comes out)
(Apocalypse and Spryzen start speeding up)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse with a barrage of strikes)
Announcer: Sprzyen hits Apocalypse from all sides with a speedy rush!!
Aiden: Now!! Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse’s reboot tip stick comes in, Apocalypse speeds up like crazy)
Announcer: No way!! Aiden stole a page from Valtryek’s playbook!!
Me: How did he do that?!
Adam: No good thief!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen off-balance, Spryzen start wobbling)
Sebastian: *Gasps*
Aiden: End this!! Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse blasts Spryzen out of the stadium)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Apocalypse sends Spryzen flying out of the stadium!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): He’s strong I’m going to have to amp up my launch!!
Me: That was way too close!!
Brooke: Aiden’s got raw power, and unbelievable attack power, Sebastian’s gotta give way more if he wants to win.
Ryuji: Come on, show us some guts!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch it up!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Aiden (Thoughts): He’s not beating me anytime soon.
(Aiden puts Apocalypse weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start hitting each other with a barrage of attacks)
Sebastian: I’m taking you down!!
Aiden: We’ll see about that!!
Announcer: They’re pushing at each other with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen up the stadium slope)
Sebastian: Spryzen!!
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Counter Break!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse hard)
Sebastian: This is true resonance!!
Aiden: APOCALYPSE!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse speeds up and heads straight for Spryzen)
Sebastian: Barberic Whip!!
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium, Spryzen gets sent up in the air)
(Apocalypse hits the ground, Spryzen bursts)
Drone: It’s Barbaric Spryzen one point for the ring-out finish!!
Announcer: Spryzen barely hung in there, but luckily Apocalypse hit the ground a mere second before Spryzen burst!!
Me: Wicked, keep your winning streak up!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares around him as a Purple Fire)
Aiden: You’ve seen the bare surface of my power!!
Possessed Aiden: You’ll break in this battle!!
(Sebastian walks away in shock)
Announcer: I can’t believe it!! Aiden is seriously serious about breaking Spryzen!! Let’s find out if his hopes come true!!
Drone: Third Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
Sebastian: I’m gonna send you flying!! Spryzen!!
(Sebastian's eyes turn red)
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Possessed Aiden: Your blading career will shatter right before you!! Apocalypse!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Barbaric Upper Launch!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen continuously hit each other hard)
Announcer: They’re hitting each other with everything they’ve got and more!! But how long will they keep this up!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen send each other on the rails)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Sebastian: Barbaric Counter Break!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start clashing, Red and Purple electricity grind against each other)
Announcer: They’ve taken the battle to the skies!!
(Spryzen’s ax and Apocalypse's tail grind against each other)
(Spryzen and Apocalypse land on the stadium floor, they speed up and aim right at each other)
Sebastian: Barbaric Whip!!
(Aiden’s Purple Fire Resonance turns into a creepy smile)
Possessed Aiden: Disaster Blast!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
(Wind starts flying in every direction)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it all they’ve got but who will win?!
AHH!!
(The Announcer gets blown away)
(My hair blows with the wind)
(Spryzen appears out of the explosion, Spryzen starts cracking then breaks)
Sebastian: *Huge Gasp*
(One of Spryzen’s fragments slash Sebastian’s eye, Sebastian immediately covers it)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin wins with a score of 3-1!!
(Apocalypse hits the drone)
Drone: OH NO!!
(The drone breaks)
Announcer: I can’t believe it. Spryzen has just been… Apparently, that’s the sad ending to the battleship cruise. We’ll see you on the big stage.
(Sebastian runs off)
Possessed Aiden: RUN AWAY AND NEVER BLADE AGAIN!!!
Me: Grr!!
Ryuji: I’m at a loss for words.
Adam: At this point, I can’t even insult you.
Brooke: So this is what blading means to him.
~In Sebastian’s Room~
Sebastian: Spryzen.
Spryzen: That was pathetic.
Sebastian: How do I become stronger.
(Sebastian’s scar glows evilly)
Spryzen: Let me do it for you!!
(Red tentacles come out from Spryzen and grab Sebastian and ties him up)
Sebastian: I am Spryzen now.
(I run into Sebastian’s room)
Me: Sebastian, are you ok?
Sebastian: I have no need for your petty concern.
Me: Just because you lost doesn't mean you have to be all grumpy about it.
Sebastian: I was foolish then.
Me: Are you ok Sebastian?
Sebastian: I’M NOT SEBASTIAN!! I AM SPRYZEN!!!
Me: Yo, chill. Oh, no looks like the part scared your face.
Sebastian: GET OUT!!!
(Spryzen’s fragments glow fiercely)
(I run out of his room)
~Outside The Rear Of The Ship~
Adam: Is he ok?
Ryuji: He lost pretty badly.
Me: Something’s up with him.
Brooke: What do you mean?
Me: He said he was Spryzen and he acted differently.
Brooke: This isn’t good.
Me: What do you mean?
Brooke: Everybody reacts differently to loss but him, he’s gone down the dark road seeking revenge.
Me: Will he be ok?
Brooke: I don’t know.
~After we finish packing~
Valt: Hey guys!!
(We all look sadly at Valt)
Valt: Yo, what's up?
(None of us say anything)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?
(We looks sadly at each other)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?!
Me: He’s gone.
(Tears drip down my face)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 21 is out
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 21
The Epic Finale!! Aiden Vs Sebastian!!!
(A shadowy bey flies past me fast)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
???: The ultimate bey.
Me: Huh? Who are you?
???: The bey that will end the darkness.
(The shadowy bey turns bright golden, another bey comes in and it shines with darkness)
Me: *Gasps*
(The bey shining with darkness comes straight at me)
Me: AH!!
(The golden bey bursts the dark Beyblade)
Me: So cool!!
???: Vlad Aoi, creator of the ultimate bey!!
(I wake up suddenly)
Adam: You're finally awake.
Me: Wait where is it?!
(I fall off my bed)
Adam: Where is what?
Me: I saw a golden bey that defeated the dark bey!!
Adam: I know what it’s called!!
Me: What?!
(Adam throws a pillow at my face)
Adam: A dream.
Me: It felt so real, I swear!!
Adam: Whatever, let’s meet up with Brooke and Ryuji.
Me (Thoughts): What is the ultimate bey?
(Outside the rear of the ship)
Me (Thoughts): What did they mean to create the ultimate bey, and will it be able to defeat Aiden? Is that what they meant?
Adam: VLAD!!
Me: Ah!!
Ryuji: Have you been listening?
Me: If I’m being completely honest, no.
Ryuji: What’s more important than mastering your bey!!
Me: Well.
(I explain my dream to them)
Ryuji: Maybe my bey is the ultimate bey!
Adam: In your dreams!!
Ryuji: Excuse me?
Adam: I bet 5 dollars that you’d get squashed like a bug!!
Ryuji: I’m too rich to accept a messy crumbly 5 bucks!
Adam: More like too stuck up!!
Adam/Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Guys chill. What did the golden bey look like?
Me: It was too bright for me to see!
Adam: Guess we don’t really need to worry about it, It’s probably just a dream.
Me: Let’s go watch the match, it’s almost time!!
Ryuji: I still think the golden bey is Roktavor!!
Adam: It’s just a dream!!
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the ultimate finals of the BattleShip Cruise!! Our strongest bladers Aiden Peregrin Vs Sebastian Kurenai!!
(Sebastian and Aiden walk up to the stage)
Aiden: I’ve been waiting a long time to break you!!
(Aiden looks down at Sebastian)
Sebastian: When I’m done with you, your breaking days will be over!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen in counterclockwise attack mode)
Me (Thoughts): You tell them, Sebastian.
Announcer: They’re both serious about winning so let’s get right into this!!
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse’s Reboot tip stick comes out)
(Apocalypse and Spryzen start speeding up)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse with a barrage of strikes)
Announcer: Sprzyen hits Apocalypse from all sides with a speedy rush!!
Aiden: Now!! Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse’s reboot tip stick comes in, Apocalypse speeds up like crazy)
Announcer: No way!! Aiden stole a page from Valtryek’s playbook!!
Me: How did he do that?!
Adam: No good thief!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen off-balance, Spryzen start wobbling)
Sebastian: *Gasps*
Aiden: End this!! Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse blasts Spryzen out of the stadium)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Apocalypse sends Spryzen flying out of the stadium!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): He’s strong I’m going to have to amp up my launch!!
Me: That was way too close!!
Brooke: Aiden’s got raw power, and unbelievable attack power, Sebastian’s gotta give way more if he wants to win.
Ryuji: Come on, show us some guts!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch it up!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Aiden (Thoughts): He’s not beating me anytime soon.
(Aiden puts Apocalypse weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start hitting each other with a barrage of attacks)
Sebastian: I’m taking you down!!
Aiden: We’ll see about that!!
Announcer: They’re pushing at each other with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen up the stadium slope)
Sebastian: Spryzen!!
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Counter Break!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse hard)
Sebastian: This is true resonance!!
Aiden: APOCALYPSE!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse speeds up and heads straight for Spryzen)
Sebastian: Barberic Whip!!
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium, Spryzen gets sent up in the air)
(Apocalypse hits the ground, Spryzen bursts)
Drone: It’s Barbaric Spryzen one point for the ring-out finish!!
Announcer: Spryzen barely hung in there, but luckily Apocalypse hit the ground a mere second before Spryzen burst!!
Me: Wicked, keep your winning streak up!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares around him as a Purple Fire)
Aiden: You’ve seen the bare surface of my power!!
Possessed Aiden: You’ll break in this battle!!
(Sebastian walks away in shock)
Announcer: I can’t believe it!! Aiden is seriously serious about breaking Spryzen!! Let’s find out if his hopes come true!!
Drone: Third Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
Sebastian: I’m gonna send you flying!! Spryzen!!
(Sebastian's eyes turn red)
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Possessed Aiden: Your blading career will shatter right before you!! Apocalypse!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Barbaric Upper Launch!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen continuously hit each other hard)
Announcer: They’re hitting each other with everything they’ve got and more!! But how long will they keep this up!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen send each other on the rails)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Sebastian: Barbaric Counter Break!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start clashing, Red and Purple electricity grind against each other)
Announcer: They’ve taken the battle to the skies!!
(Spryzen’s ax and Apocalypse's tail grind against each other)
(Spryzen and Apocalypse land on the stadium floor, they speed up and aim right at each other)
Sebastian: Barbaric Whip!!
(Aiden’s Purple Fire Resonance turns into a creepy smile)
Possessed Aiden: Disaster Blast!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
(Wind starts flying in every direction)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it all they’ve got but who will win?!
AHH!!
(The Announcer gets blown away)
(My hair blows with the wind)
(Spryzen appears out of the explosion, Spryzen starts cracking then breaks)
Sebastian: *Huge Gasp*
(One of Spryzen’s fragments slash Sebastian’s eye, Sebastian immediately covers it)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin wins with a score of 3-1!!
(Apocalypse hits the drone)
Drone: OH NO!!
(The drone breaks)
Announcer: I can’t believe it. Spryzen has just been… Apparently, that’s the sad ending to the battleship cruise. We’ll see you on the big stage.
(Sebastian runs off)
Possessed Aiden: RUN AWAY AND NEVER BLADE AGAIN!!!
Me: Grr!!
Ryuji: I’m at a loss for words.
Adam: At this point, I can’t even insult you.
Brooke: So this is what blading means to him.
~In Sebastian’s Room~
Sebastian: Spryzen.
Spryzen: That was pathetic.
Sebastian: How do I become stronger.
(Sebastian’s scar glows evilly)
Spryzen: Let me do it for you!!
(Red tentacles come out from Spryzen and grab Sebastian and ties him up)
Sebastian: I am Spryzen now.
(I run into Sebastian’s room)
Me: Sebastian, are you ok?
Sebastian: I have no need for your petty concern.
Me: Just because you lost doesn't mean you have to be all grumpy about it.
Sebastian: I was foolish then.
Me: Are you ok Sebastian?
Sebastian: I’M NOT SEBASTIAN!! I AM SPRYZEN!!!
Me: Yo, chill. Oh, no looks like the part scared your face.
Sebastian: GET OUT!!!
(Spryzen’s fragments glow fiercely)
(I run out of his room)
~Outside The Rear Of The Ship~
Adam: Is he ok?
Ryuji: He lost pretty badly.
Me: Something’s up with him.
Brooke: What do you mean?
Me: He said he was Spryzen and he acted differently.
Brooke: This isn’t good.
Me: What do you mean?
Brooke: Everybody reacts differently to loss but him, he’s gone down the dark road seeking revenge.
Me: Will he be ok?
Brooke: I don’t know.
~After we finish packing~
Valt: Hey guys!!
(We all look sadly at Valt)
Valt: Yo, what's up?
(None of us say anything)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?
(We looks sadly at each other)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?!
Me: He’s gone.
(Tears drip down my face) Sebastian is the new red eye also why are you sad?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 2:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jun. 26, 2021 2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 21 is out
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 21
The Epic Finale!! Aiden Vs Sebastian!!!
(A shadowy bey flies past me fast)
Me: Woah, awesome!!
???: The ultimate bey.
Me: Huh? Who are you?
???: The bey that will end the darkness.
(The shadowy bey turns bright golden, another bey comes in and it shines with darkness)
Me: *Gasps*
(The bey shining with darkness comes straight at me)
Me: AH!!
(The golden bey bursts the dark Beyblade)
Me: So cool!!
???: Vlad Aoi, creator of the ultimate bey!!
(I wake up suddenly)
Adam: You're finally awake.
Me: Wait where is it?!
(I fall off my bed)
Adam: Where is what?
Me: I saw a golden bey that defeated the dark bey!!
Adam: I know what it’s called!!
Me: What?!
(Adam throws a pillow at my face)
Adam: A dream.
Me: It felt so real, I swear!!
Adam: Whatever, let’s meet up with Brooke and Ryuji.
Me (Thoughts): What is the ultimate bey?
(Outside the rear of the ship)
Me (Thoughts): What did they mean to create the ultimate bey, and will it be able to defeat Aiden? Is that what they meant?
Adam: VLAD!!
Me: Ah!!
Ryuji: Have you been listening?
Me: If I’m being completely honest, no.
Ryuji: What’s more important than mastering your bey!!
Me: Well.
(I explain my dream to them)
Ryuji: Maybe my bey is the ultimate bey!
Adam: In your dreams!!
Ryuji: Excuse me?
Adam: I bet 5 dollars that you’d get squashed like a bug!!
Ryuji: I’m too rich to accept a messy crumbly 5 bucks!
Adam: More like too stuck up!!
Adam/Ryuji: Grr!!
Brooke: Guys chill. What did the golden bey look like?
Me: It was too bright for me to see!
Adam: Guess we don’t really need to worry about it, It’s probably just a dream.
Me: Let’s go watch the match, it’s almost time!!
Ryuji: I still think the golden bey is Roktavor!!
Adam: It’s just a dream!!
~In The Arena~
Announcer: Hello beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the ultimate finals of the BattleShip Cruise!! Our strongest bladers Aiden Peregrin Vs Sebastian Kurenai!!
(Sebastian and Aiden walk up to the stage)
Aiden: I’ve been waiting a long time to break you!!
(Aiden looks down at Sebastian)
Sebastian: When I’m done with you, your breaking days will be over!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen in counterclockwise attack mode)
Me (Thoughts): You tell them, Sebastian.
Announcer: They’re both serious about winning so let’s get right into this!!
Drone: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Apocalypse’s Reboot tip stick comes out)
(Apocalypse and Spryzen start speeding up)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse with a barrage of strikes)
Announcer: Sprzyen hits Apocalypse from all sides with a speedy rush!!
Aiden: Now!! Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse’s reboot tip stick comes in, Apocalypse speeds up like crazy)
Announcer: No way!! Aiden stole a page from Valtryek’s playbook!!
Me: How did he do that?!
Adam: No good thief!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen off-balance, Spryzen start wobbling)
Sebastian: *Gasps*
Aiden: End this!! Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse blasts Spryzen out of the stadium)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish!! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!!
Announcer: Apocalypse sends Spryzen flying out of the stadium!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): He’s strong I’m going to have to amp up my launch!!
Me: That was way too close!!
Brooke: Aiden’s got raw power, and unbelievable attack power, Sebastian’s gotta give way more if he wants to win.
Ryuji: Come on, show us some guts!!
Sebastian (Thoughts): I’ve gotta switch it up!!
(Sebastian puts Spryzen’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Aiden (Thoughts): He’s not beating me anytime soon.
(Aiden puts Apocalypse weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start hitting each other with a barrage of attacks)
Sebastian: I’m taking you down!!
Aiden: We’ll see about that!!
Announcer: They’re pushing at each other with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse hits Spryzen up the stadium slope)
Sebastian: Spryzen!!
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Counter Break!!
(Spryzen hits Apocalypse hard)
Sebastian: This is true resonance!!
Aiden: APOCALYPSE!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
(Apocalypse speeds up and heads straight for Spryzen)
Sebastian: Barberic Whip!!
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium, Spryzen gets sent up in the air)
(Apocalypse hits the ground, Spryzen bursts)
Drone: It’s Barbaric Spryzen one point for the ring-out finish!!
Announcer: Spryzen barely hung in there, but luckily Apocalypse hit the ground a mere second before Spryzen burst!!
Me: Wicked, keep your winning streak up!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares around him as a Purple Fire)
Aiden: You’ve seen the bare surface of my power!!
Possessed Aiden: You’ll break in this battle!!
(Sebastian walks away in shock)
Announcer: I can’t believe it!! Aiden is seriously serious about breaking Spryzen!! Let’s find out if his hopes come true!!
Drone: Third Battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Aiden/Sebastian: Let it rip!!
Sebastian: I’m gonna send you flying!! Spryzen!!
(Sebastian's eyes turn red)
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Possessed Aiden: Your blading career will shatter right before you!! Apocalypse!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Sebastian: Barbaric Upper Launch!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen continuously hit each other hard)
Announcer: They’re hitting each other with everything they’ve got and more!! But how long will they keep this up!!
(Apocalypse and Spryzen send each other on the rails)
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Sebastian: Barbaric Counter Break!!
(Spryzen and Apocalypse start clashing, Red and Purple electricity grind against each other)
Announcer: They’ve taken the battle to the skies!!
(Spryzen’s ax and Apocalypse's tail grind against each other)
(Spryzen and Apocalypse land on the stadium floor, they speed up and aim right at each other)
Sebastian: Barbaric Whip!!
(Aiden’s Purple Fire Resonance turns into a creepy smile)
Possessed Aiden: Disaster Blast!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
(Wind starts flying in every direction)
Announcer: Both beys are giving it all they’ve got but who will win?!
AHH!!
(The Announcer gets blown away)
(My hair blows with the wind)
(Spryzen appears out of the explosion, Spryzen starts cracking then breaks)
Sebastian: *Huge Gasp*
(One of Spryzen’s fragments slash Sebastian’s eye, Sebastian immediately covers it)
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a burst finish. Aiden Peregrin wins with a score of 3-1!!
(Apocalypse hits the drone)
Drone: OH NO!!
(The drone breaks)
Announcer: I can’t believe it. Spryzen has just been… Apparently, that’s the sad ending to the battleship cruise. We’ll see you on the big stage.
(Sebastian runs off)
Possessed Aiden: RUN AWAY AND NEVER BLADE AGAIN!!!
Me: Grr!!
Ryuji: I’m at a loss for words.
Adam: At this point, I can’t even insult you.
Brooke: So this is what blading means to him.
~In Sebastian’s Room~
Sebastian: Spryzen.
Spryzen: That was pathetic.
Sebastian: How do I become stronger.
(Sebastian’s scar glows evilly)
Spryzen: Let me do it for you!!
(Red tentacles come out from Spryzen and grab Sebastian and ties him up)
Sebastian: I am Spryzen now.
(I run into Sebastian’s room)
Me: Sebastian, are you ok?
Sebastian: I have no need for your petty concern.
Me: Just because you lost doesn't mean you have to be all grumpy about it.
Sebastian: I was foolish then.
Me: Are you ok Sebastian?
Sebastian: I’M NOT SEBASTIAN!! I AM SPRYZEN!!!
Me: Yo, chill. Oh, no looks like the part scared your face.
Sebastian: GET OUT!!!
(Spryzen’s fragments glow fiercely)
(I run out of his room)
~Outside The Rear Of The Ship~
Adam: Is he ok?
Ryuji: He lost pretty badly.
Me: Something’s up with him.
Brooke: What do you mean?
Me: He said he was Spryzen and he acted differently.
Brooke: This isn’t good.
Me: What do you mean?
Brooke: Everybody reacts differently to loss but him, he’s gone down the dark road seeking revenge.
Me: Will he be ok?
Brooke: I don’t know.
~After we finish packing~
Valt: Hey guys!!
(We all look sadly at Valt)
Valt: Yo, what's up?
(None of us say anything)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?
(We looks sadly at each other)
Valt: Where’s Sebastian?!
Me: He’s gone.
(Tears drip down my face) Sebastian is the new red eye also why are you sad?
I'm not sad I was just foreshadowing Sebastian's loss but thanks for the concern
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 2:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 26, 2021 2:12 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Sebastian is the new red eye also why are you sad?
I'm not sad I was just foreshadowing Sebastian's loss but thanks for the concern
Oh okay!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 26, 2021
this episode is so awesome, but i almost started to tear up at the final part lol
now sebastian is the new red eye...
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 3:14 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: this episode is so awesome, but i almost started to tear up at the final part lol
now sebastian is the new red eye...
It was meant to pull your heart strings
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 3:25 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jun. 26, 2021 3:14 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: this episode is so awesome, but i almost started to tear up at the final part lol
now sebastian is the new red eye...
It was meant to pull your heart strings
lol it worked
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - ColdFlames13 - Jun. 26, 2021
Is he DEAD?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 26, 2021
(Jun. 26, 2021 2:34 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Is he DEAD?
Nope just.possessed by Spryzen
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