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RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 01, 2021
Don't really wanna say anything about Chapter 34 all I will say is that the battle will be Bionic (Bionic is a greater meaning for Awesome) oops did I just give you a hint? *winks*
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jun. 02, 2021
(Jun. 01, 2021 11:18 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Don't really wanna say anything about Chapter 34 all I will say is that the battle will be Bionic (Bionic is a greater meaning for Awesome) oops did I just give you a hint? *winks*
*confused* on ok 👌
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - Dragon Blader Z - Jun. 02, 2021
(Jun. 01, 2021 11:18 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Don't really wanna say anything about Chapter 34 all I will say is that the battle will be Bionic (Bionic is a greater meaning for Awesome) oops did I just give you a hint? *winks*
so technically this fanfic would be called beyblade burst awesome batle
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - Hollowmind13 - Jun. 02, 2021
That's why his bey is bionic appolo and chapter 29 has bionic on it's title
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 02, 2021
Chapter 34 is Awesomely out
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Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 34
A Bionic Battle!!!
Rantaro: Alright, let’s get to making a strategy!
Me: Sad you won’t make it to the Semi Finals.
Rantaro: Too bad, so sad for me.
Me: *Gasps*
Rantaro: I know you're going to win the tournament! So it doesn't matter to me!!
Me: Ok I’m gonna win Honcho!!
(I blink in excitement)
Rantaro: What?
Me: I’ve got the perfect strategy but we’ve got to pull it off no matter what!!
(I whisper into Honcho’s ear)
Rantaro: This could work!!
(Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Rantaro: Let’s go win this!!
Announcer: Ok everyone this will be our last Tag Battle before the Semi Finals!! It’s Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki!! Vs Harry Tanaka and Silas Karsile!!
Rantaro: Don’t you fret!!
Me: Don’t make bets!!
Me/Rantaro: Because you're not winning this yet!!
(Harry rolls his eyes)
Silas: You're not winning this anytime soon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Harry! I’m taking you down!!
Harry: It’s time Apollo was destroyed once and for all!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
Me/Rantaro/Harry/Silas: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Roktavor and Apollo climb up the slope)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Recoil!!!
(I launch Roktavor down the slope, Roktavor picks up a huge amount of speed)
Announcer: Apollo launches Roktavor at Hermes with incredible force!!
Rantaro/Me: Gale Impact!!
Silas: Oh no you don’t!! Jynx Drift!!
Announcer: Silas opposes Roktavor and tries stopping it from getting to Hermes!!
Rantaro/Me: Not gonna stop us!!
Announcer: The tornado behind Roktavor is helping it pick up serious speed!!
Silas: *Gasps*
(Satomb bursts)
Announcer: Satomb is outta there!!
Harry: *Gasps*
(Roktavor and Hermes start intensely clashing, Hermes barrier gets pushed in)
Harry: Hermes!!
(Harry enters Corrupted Dark Resonance)
(The armor comes flying off outta the stadium)
Harry: Corrupting Blast!!
(Roktavor bursts and Apollo comes out of Roktavor’s parts)
Harry: *Gasps*
Me: Nexus Whip!!
(Hermes gets sent flying in the air)
Announcer: This is what Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki were after!!!
Harry: Ultimate Corrupted Launch!!
Me: Nexus Force!!
Announcer: Wow!! Hermes and Apollo are clashing all around the stadium in a fierce showdown!!
(I jump in the air and thrust my arm forward)
Me: Go Apollo!!!
(Harry’s Thoughts): Why do I feel so weird?
(Hermes shimmers gold for a millisecond)
Shu: *Gasps*
(Apollo and Hermes starts clashing hard)
Me/Harry: Go!!
(Electricity starts coming out of the huge explosion)
Announcer: They are locked in for a huge showdown!!
(Apollo and Hermes start wobbling Hermes stops spinning after Apollo)
(I start breathing hard)
(I jump in the air with excitement)
Me: I won!!
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! Team Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki win!!
Announcer: After a fierce fight Asher Suzuki pulls off a win in the tag battle!!
(Crowd goes wild)
Harry: Grr!!
(Harry walks away)
Announcer: I just got news who are semi finalists will be!!
(Justin’s Thoughts): Please be Asher!!
Announcer: Valt Aoi!! Shu Kurnai!! Harry Tanaka!! And!!
(I tighten my fist)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki!!
Me: Sweet candy!!
Justin: HE DID IT!!
(The crowd starts chanting my name)
Robbie/Oliva: That’s our big bro!!
(Shu smiles)
Valt: Congrats dude!
Announcer: Our semi-final matches will be!! Harry Tanaka Vs Shu Kurenai!!
Justin: That means he’s facing!!
Announcer: And after that, it will be Valt Aoi Vs Asher Suzuki!!
Me: *Gasps*
Announcer: We’ve got some awesome matches tomorrow so set your alarms and get ready to rock!!
Me/Harry: No matter what!!
Valt/Shu: I’m winning this battle!!
Chapter 35
Spoiler (Click to View)
Ultimate Rematch! Harry Vs Shu!!
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Win it, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Ultimate Finale Going All Out!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jun. 02, 2021
(Jun. 02, 2021 9:35 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 34 is Awesomely outthis is shorter than my other chapters because it only really focuses on this battle plz rate someoneSpoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 34
A Bionic Battle!!!
Rantaro: Alright, let’s get to making a strategy!
Me: Sad you won’t make it to the Semi Finals.
Rantaro: Too bad, so sad for me.
Me: *Gasps*
Rantaro: I know you're going to win the tournament! So it doesn't matter to me!!
Me: Ok I’m gonna win Honcho!!
(I blink in excitement)
Rantaro: What?
Me: I’ve got the perfect strategy but we’ve got to pull it off no matter what!!
(I whisper into Honcho’s ear)
Rantaro: This could work!!
(Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Rantaro: Let’s go win this!!
Announcer: Ok everyone this will be our last Tag Battle before the Semi Finals!! It’s Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki!! Vs Harry Tanaka and Silas Karsile!!
Rantaro: Don’t you fret!!
Me: Don’t make bets!!
Me/Rantaro: Because you're not winning this yet!!
(Harry rolls his eyes)
Silas: You're not winning this anytime soon!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Harry! I’m taking you down!!
Harry: It’s time Apollo was destroyed once and for all!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
Me/Rantaro/Harry/Silas: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Roktavor and Apollo climb up the slope)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Recoil!!!
(I launch Roktavor down the slope, Roktavor picks up a huge amount of speed)
Announcer: Apollo launches Roktavor at Hermes with incredible force!!
Rantaro/Me: Gale Impact!!
Silas: Oh no you don’t!! Jynx Drift!!
Announcer: Silas opposes Roktavor and tries stopping it from getting to Hermes!!
Rantaro/Me: Not gonna stop us!!
Announcer: The tornado behind Roktavor is helping it pick up serious speed!!
Silas: *Gasps*
(Satomb bursts)
Announcer: Satomb is outta there!!
Harry: *Gasps*
(Roktavor and Hermes start intensely clashing, Hermes barrier gets pushed in)
Harry: Hermes!!
(Harry enters Corrupted Dark Resonance)
(The armor comes flying off outta the stadium)
Harry: Corrupting Blast!!
(Roktavor bursts and Apollo comes out of Roktavor’s parts)
Harry: *Gasps*
Me: Nexus Whip!!
(Hermes gets sent flying in the air)
Announcer: This is what Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki were after!!!
Harry: Ultimate Corrupted Launch!!
Me: Nexus Force!!
Announcer: Wow!! Hermes and Apollo are clashing all around the stadium in a fierce showdown!!
(I jump in the air and thrust my arm forward)
Me: Go Apollo!!!
(Harry’s Thoughts): Why do I feel so weird?
(Hermes shimmers gold for a millisecond)
Shu: *Gasps*
(Apollo and Hermes starts clashing hard)
Me/Harry: Go!!
(Electricity starts coming out of the huge explosion)
Announcer: They are locked in for a huge showdown!!
(Apollo and Hermes start wobbling Hermes stops spinning after Apollo)
(I start breathing hard)
(I jump in the air with excitement)
Me: I won!!
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! Team Rantaro Kiyama and Asher Suzuki win!!
Announcer: After a fierce fight Asher Suzuki pulls off a win in the tag battle!!
(Crowd goes wild)
Harry: Grr!!
(Harry walks away)
Announcer: I just got news who are semi finalists will be!!
(Justin’s Thoughts): Please be Asher!!
Announcer: Valt Aoi!! Shu Kurnai!! Harry Tanaka!! And!!
(I tighten my fist)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki!!
Me: Sweet candy!!
Justin: HE DID IT!!
(The crowd starts chanting my name)
Robbie/Oliva: That’s our big bro!!
(Shu smiles)
Valt: Congrats dude!
Announcer: Our semi-final matches will be!! Harry Tanaka Vs Shu Kurenai!!
Justin: That means he’s facing!!
Announcer: And after that, it will be Valt Aoi Vs Asher Suzuki!!
Me: *Gasps*
Announcer: We’ve got some awesome matches tomorrow so set your alarms and get ready to rock!!
Me/Harry: No matter what!!
Valt/Shu: I’m winning this battle!!
Chapter 35Chapter 36Spoiler (Click to View)Ultimate Rematch! Harry Vs Shu!!Chapter 37Spoiler (Click to View)Win it, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!!@Jjustice the final chapter will be chapter 37Spoiler (Click to View)Ultimate Finale Going All Out!!
*cri* the end of a good fanfic 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 08, 2021
Chapter 35 is out!!
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Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 25
Ultimate Rematch Shu Vs Harry
Shu: Let it rip!!
(Shu’s eyes glow bright red)
(Shu’s Thoughts): I’ve got to win no matter what!!
(I walk-in)
Me: Hey!
(Shu’s scar stops glowing)
Shu: Hey Asher.
Justin: Get back here you need to train!!
(Justin slips)
Me: See ya next fall.
Justin: Asher this is serious you gotta train!!
Me: I’ve got time!! I’m just wishing Shu good luck!!
(Justin starts pulling me by the hood)
Me: Good luck Shu!!
(Shu quietly laughs)
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today we’ve got a battle of titans!! Shu Kurenai Vs Harry Tanaka!!!
Harry: Who knew I would be facing you here.
Shu: You thought it was going to be Asher, didn’t you?
Harry: Grr!!
Reff: First battle!! Ready set!!
(Shu puts his launcher behind his back)
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Harry: *Gasps*
Harry/Shu: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Spryzen is speeding around the stadium like a sport’s car!!
(Hermes gets sent flying in the air, Hermes barrier goes in)
Harry: *Groans*
(My Thoughts): Every time Hermes gets hit that’s doubled right back to Harry!!
Shu: Counter Break!!
Announcer: Shu Kurenai is going all out!!
(Spryzen hits Hermes hard it starts wobbling, the armor comes flying off)
Harry: Corrupted Pulse!!
Shu: Magnum Upper Launch!!
Announcer: Hermes is blocking all of Spryzen’s attacks back one by one!!
(Wind blows Shu’s jacket behind him)
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)
Announcer: Spryzen makes a bee line to the swirling pit!!
(Spryzen picks up speed and power, Spryzen jumps in the air)
(Shu thrusts his hand forward)
Shu: Magnum Whip!!
(Spryzen pushes in Hermes button, Hermes gets sent flying in the air)
Harry: *Gasps*
(Shu puts his hand in the air then closes it, Hermes bursts)
Harry: What!!!
Reff: It’s Magnum Spryzen with a burst finish. Shu Kurenai claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Spryzen wrecks the competition and blows Hermes out of the water!! If this was a 2 point battle it would’ve already been over!!
Shu: That was true resonance.
Harry: Don’t tell me how to blade!!!
(Shu’s Thoughts): He’s not stopping anytime soon!! I will have to end this quickly!!
Reff: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Harry/Shu: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Spryzwn picks up speed and goes around the stadium like a rocket!! But Hermes is right behind Spryzen!!
Shu: *Gasps*
Harry: Go Hermes!!
(Hermes keeps pushing Spryzen off balance with it’s barrier)
Announcer: Wow Hermes just won’t stop anytime soon!!
(Spryzen gets sent flying)
Shu: I’m not done yet!!
(Spryzen lands in the swirling pit)
Announcer: And Spryzen recovers and heads straight for Hermes!!
Shu: Ha!! Counter Break!!
(Shu twists his leg forward)
(Hermes armor comes flying off)
Harry: You lose! Hermes!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
(Harry’s evil aura flares up all around him)
Shu: *Gasps*
Harry: Corrupted Cannon!!!
(Hermes his the armor at Spryzen Spryzen gets knocked out)
Harry/Shu: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a ring out finish!! Harry Tanaka claims 1 point!!
Harry: You were supposed to burst!!!
Shu: You can’t beat me that easily!!
(Harry dark flare flares up)
Harry: You're gonna burst.
Shu: *Gasps* Harry?
Harry: You’re gonna burst.
(Shu backs up)
Harry: YOU’RE GOING TO BURST!!!
Reff: Third battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Shu/Harry: LET IT RIP!!!
(Spryzen jumps into the air when it hits the stadium)
Announcer: And Spryzen flies up in the air!!
(Hermes his the wall and flies up in the air too)
Announcer: And Hermes joins it in the air!!
(Shu flings his arm around his chest)
Shu: Magnum Whip!!
Harry: Corrupted Impulse!!
(Spryzen and Hermes clash huge explosion happens, the barriar comes in)
Shu/Harry: HAAAAA!!!
(Shu’s scar glows bright red)
Shu: SPRYZEN!!!
(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)
(Harry’s eyes glow purple)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
(Hermes and Spryzen land on the stadium)
Announcer: After a fierce clash Spryzen and Hermes are back on the stadium floor!!
(Shu’s eyes glow bright red with his scar)
Shu: Upper Launch!!!
Harry: Corrupt Impulse!!
(Hermes and Spryzen hit each other all around the stadium)
(Shu’s jacket gets blown clean off)
Announcer: Hermes and Spryzen are giving it their all but who will prevail!!
Hermes: It’s time to end this!!
Harry: CORRUPTING GRAVITY!!!!
(Hermes armor comes off. Hermes trap Spryzen in a vortex and the armor keeps on hitting it)
Shu: HANG IN THERE!!!
Announcer: Spryzen is completely trapped and is getting the daylight pummeled right out of it!!
(Harry’s jacket blows up)
Harry: DOUBLE CORRUPTED CRUSH!!!
(Sprzen gets crushed by both sides)
(Enormous explosion happens, Shu gets blown away)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Spryzen is sent flying right into Shu’s face but right before Spryzen hits Shu Spryzen bursts)
Shu: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a burst finish. Harry Tanaka wins and advances to the finals.
Harry: YES!!!
Announcer: Spryzen has been obliterated.
(Shu’s hair covers his face, Shu picks up Spryzen)
Harry: YOU’VE JUST BEEN DESTROYED BY MY ULTIMATE POWER!!!
Valt: Shu.
Me: I’ve got to take Harry down in the finals!!
(Justin’s Thoughts): Do it for all the Legends Asher!!
(In Shu’s locker room)
Valt: Hey.
Shu: ….
Valt: You did awesome out there!!
(Shu quietly chuckles)
Shu: I didn’t do good enough.
Valt: Don’t worry I’ll beat him in the finals!! See ya!!
(Valt runs out)
Shu: It’s pretty obvious who’s winning this.
Chapter 25
Ultimate Rematch Shu Vs Harry
Shu: Let it rip!!
(Shu’s eyes glow bright red)
(Shu’s Thoughts): I’ve got to win no matter what!!
(I walk-in)
Me: Hey!
(Shu’s scar stops glowing)
Shu: Hey Asher.
Justin: Get back here you need to train!!
(Justin slips)
Me: See ya next fall.
Justin: Asher this is serious you gotta train!!
Me: I’ve got time!! I’m just wishing Shu good luck!!
(Justin starts pulling me by the hood)
Me: Good luck Shu!!
(Shu quietly laughs)
(At the Arena)
Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today we’ve got a battle of titans!! Shu Kurenai Vs Harry Tanaka!!!
Harry: Who knew I would be facing you here.
Shu: You thought it was going to be Asher, didn’t you?
Harry: Grr!!
Reff: First battle!! Ready set!!
(Shu puts his launcher behind his back)
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Harry: *Gasps*
Harry/Shu: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Spryzen is speeding around the stadium like a sport’s car!!
(Hermes gets sent flying in the air, Hermes barrier goes in)
Harry: *Groans*
(My Thoughts): Every time Hermes gets hit that’s doubled right back to Harry!!
Shu: Counter Break!!
Announcer: Shu Kurenai is going all out!!
(Spryzen hits Hermes hard it starts wobbling, the armor comes flying off)
Harry: Corrupted Pulse!!
Shu: Magnum Upper Launch!!
Announcer: Hermes is blocking all of Spryzen’s attacks back one by one!!
(Wind blows Shu’s jacket behind him)
Shu: Spryzen!!
(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)
Announcer: Spryzen makes a bee line to the swirling pit!!
(Spryzen picks up speed and power, Spryzen jumps in the air)
(Shu thrusts his hand forward)
Shu: Magnum Whip!!
(Spryzen pushes in Hermes button, Hermes gets sent flying in the air)
Harry: *Gasps*
(Shu puts his hand in the air then closes it, Hermes bursts)
Harry: What!!!
Reff: It’s Magnum Spryzen with a burst finish. Shu Kurenai claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Spryzen wrecks the competition and blows Hermes out of the water!! If this was a 2 point battle it would’ve already been over!!
Shu: That was true resonance.
Harry: Don’t tell me how to blade!!!
(Shu’s Thoughts): He’s not stopping anytime soon!! I will have to end this quickly!!
Reff: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Harry/Shu: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Spryzwn picks up speed and goes around the stadium like a rocket!! But Hermes is right behind Spryzen!!
Shu: *Gasps*
Harry: Go Hermes!!
(Hermes keeps pushing Spryzen off balance with it’s barrier)
Announcer: Wow Hermes just won’t stop anytime soon!!
(Spryzen gets sent flying)
Shu: I’m not done yet!!
(Spryzen lands in the swirling pit)
Announcer: And Spryzen recovers and heads straight for Hermes!!
Shu: Ha!! Counter Break!!
(Shu twists his leg forward)
(Hermes armor comes flying off)
Harry: You lose! Hermes!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
(Harry’s evil aura flares up all around him)
Shu: *Gasps*
Harry: Corrupted Cannon!!!
(Hermes his the armor at Spryzen Spryzen gets knocked out)
Harry/Shu: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a ring out finish!! Harry Tanaka claims 1 point!!
Harry: You were supposed to burst!!!
Shu: You can’t beat me that easily!!
(Harry dark flare flares up)
Harry: You're gonna burst.
Shu: *Gasps* Harry?
Harry: You’re gonna burst.
(Shu backs up)
Harry: YOU’RE GOING TO BURST!!!
Reff: Third battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Shu jumps into the air and does Crux Boost)
Shu/Harry: LET IT RIP!!!
(Spryzen jumps into the air when it hits the stadium)
Announcer: And Spryzen flies up in the air!!
(Hermes his the wall and flies up in the air too)
Announcer: And Hermes joins it in the air!!
(Shu flings his arm around his chest)
Shu: Magnum Whip!!
Harry: Corrupted Impulse!!
(Spryzen and Hermes clash huge explosion happens, the barriar comes in)
Shu/Harry: HAAAAA!!!
(Shu’s scar glows bright red)
Shu: SPRYZEN!!!
(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)
(Harry’s eyes glow purple)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
(Hermes and Spryzen land on the stadium)
Announcer: After a fierce clash Spryzen and Hermes are back on the stadium floor!!
(Shu’s eyes glow bright red with his scar)
Shu: Upper Launch!!!
Harry: Corrupt Impulse!!
(Hermes and Spryzen hit each other all around the stadium)
(Shu’s jacket gets blown clean off)
Announcer: Hermes and Spryzen are giving it their all but who will prevail!!
Hermes: It’s time to end this!!
Harry: CORRUPTING GRAVITY!!!!
(Hermes armor comes off. Hermes trap Spryzen in a vortex and the armor keeps on hitting it)
Shu: HANG IN THERE!!!
Announcer: Spryzen is completely trapped and is getting the daylight pummeled right out of it!!
(Harry’s jacket blows up)
Harry: DOUBLE CORRUPTED CRUSH!!!
(Sprzen gets crushed by both sides)
(Enormous explosion happens, Shu gets blown away)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Spryzen is sent flying right into Shu’s face but right before Spryzen hits Shu Spryzen bursts)
Shu: *Gasps*
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a burst finish. Harry Tanaka wins and advances to the finals.
Harry: YES!!!
Announcer: Spryzen has been obliterated.
(Shu’s hair covers his face, Shu picks up Spryzen)
Harry: YOU’VE JUST BEEN DESTROYED BY MY ULTIMATE POWER!!!
Valt: Shu.
Me: I’ve got to take Harry down in the finals!!
(Justin’s Thoughts): Do it for all the Legends Asher!!
(In Shu’s locker room)
Valt: Hey.
Shu: ….
Valt: You did awesome out there!!
(Shu quietly chuckles)
Shu: I didn’t do good enough.
Valt: Don’t worry I’ll beat him in the finals!! See ya!!
(Valt runs out)
Shu: It’s pretty obvious who’s winning this.
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 11, 2021
Best Chapter Ever
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - JCE_13 - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Best Chapter Ever@Strikegamerv6, I read it and it was amazing. 5/5. The only things I noticed were that in the third battle, it says Valtryek landed after Apollo. That means Valtryek won, but everyone makes little hiccups, especially in writing dialogue.
@Jjustice USN you guys will love this trust meSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
Dialogue: 5/5 (The only thing I noticed here was that you used a ton of exclamation points. I guess the dialogue was really intense!)
Characters: 5/5. You really did a good job bringing out the essence in your characters and their beys.
Battles: 6/5. Amazing
Overall: 16/15
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 7:33 PM)JCE_13 Wrote:(Jun. 11, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Best Chapter Ever@Strikegamerv6, I read it and it was amazing. 5/5. The only things I noticed were that in the third battle, it says Valtryek landed after Apollo. That means Valtryek won, but everyone makes little hiccups, especially in writing dialogue.
@Jjustice USN you guys will love this trust meSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
Dialogue: 5/5 (The only thing I noticed here was that you used a ton of exclamation points. I guess the dialogue was really intense!)
Characters: 5/5. You really did a good job bringing out the essence in your characters and their beys.
Battles: 6/5. Amazing
Overall: 16/15 :P
Omg thanks so much :) (Only click this if you've finished the chapter spoilers)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Just because Valt lost this battle does not mean Asher is directly stronger than Valt because he didn't beat Valt with brute strength he actually just timed it perfectly but he kinda did it like basically how Valt wins against Shu he won on instinct so Apollo just waited to use Nexus Force just wanted to point out
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - USN - Jun. 11, 2021
I haven't been reading Fan-fics lately. I will binge read all the chapters I missed.
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - JCE_13 - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 8:26 PM)USN Wrote: I haven't been reading Fan-fics lately. I will binge read all the chapters I missed.
Me too.
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 11, 2021
Thanks, guys the Finale is coming out soon!!
Asher Vs Harry Who Will Win The Ultimate Finale Battle The Blading World Rests On This Match
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - USN - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Best Chapter Ever
@Jjustice USN you guys will love this trust meSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
I ain't gonna lie, I think it's good but chapter 35 is just out of the park. Try to give us a bit more plot though. Do something unexpected.
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Best Chapter Ever
@Jjustice USN you guys will love this trust meSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
...... 3 words: I LOVE IT
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 9:06 PM)JJustice Wrote:(Jun. 11, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Best Chapter Ever
@Jjustice USN you guys will love this trust meSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 36
Win It, Asher! Valt Vs Asher!!
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
(Apollo starts speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Strike!!
Justin: Solar Defense!!
(Apollo and Janus get shot out of the stadium)
Me: I’m so winning this!!
Justin: If you can’t beat me, you don’t stand a chance!!
Me: Can too!!
Justin: Then show me!!
Me/Justin: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
(Apollo goes straight to the swirling pit)
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Apollo and Janus start clashing, Janus gets sent flying)
Justin: That’s what I’m talking about!!
(Asher Suzuki your match is starting)
Me: Wish me luck!
(I run-up to the stage)
Announcer: Hello, everyone!! Today we’ll be deciding who will be going to the finals and becoming The Ultimate Legends Champion!!! First up our Overpowered Wonder Boy Valt Aoi!!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: Hey everyone!! Are you ready for an awesome battle!!
(The Crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: And we’ve got our Fire hot Underdog Asher Suzuki!!
(I run-up to the stage but I trip)
Me: Ouch!!
(Crowd goes silent)
Valt: Um, so Asher you are you ready!?
Me: I’m as ready as I’ll ever be!!
Announcer: Will Valt Aoi show the Underdog some tricks!! Or will the underdog show the big dog up!! Let’s get started!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo lands speeding around the stadium)
Me: Nailed the launch!!
Valt: Rush Launch!!
Announcer: While Apollo is breaking the speed limits, Valtryek’s on the chase and rushing attacks at Apollo!!!
Me: Hang in there!!
(Apollo gets sent flying and lands in the swirling pit)
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Nexus Whip!!
Valt: Valtryek!!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Valt: Send them flying!! Hero Sword!!!
Announcer: They put the furious in fast and furious!!!
(A huge golden explosion occurs, Apollo comes out bursting)
(I gasp with my eyes widening)
Ref: It's Hero Valtryek with a burst finish!! Valt Aoi claims 2 points!!
Announcer: Valtryek slices Apollo in two with that awesome sword!!
(I pick up Apollo’s parts)
Apollo: Asher!!
Me: I tried beating him with everything I got but I failed!!
Apollo: You’ve almost beaten Valt before, don’t you remember?
Me: Yeah, but how did I do it?
Apollo: You ultimately found your center of peace and you were able to concentrate!!
Me: What is my center of peace?
Apollo: Only you can answer that question!!
(I start flashing back)
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Asher Suzuki is completely silent!! Is this a sign of fear?
Me/Apollo: Valt!! We’ve found our center of peace!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Ref: Second battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds up faster than normal)
Valt: No way!!
Me: Nexus Sword!!
(Valtryek gets shot out of the stadium)
(Everyone goes completely silent)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Announcer: After a surprising turn of events Asher pulls off a ring-out finish against Valt!!
Valt: Nice moves, but you can only get lucky once!!
Me/Apollo: We’ll see about that!!
Ref: Third Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start flying up in the air)
Announcer: After 2 strong moves Valtryek and Apollo are sent in the air!!
(Valtryek and Apollo keep going higher)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
(The beys start falling to the ground)
Announcer: Gravity is finally in effect!!
(Valtryek lands after Apollo)
Valt: What the!?
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring-out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Announcer: The score is now 2-2 Asher Suzuki is catching up to Valt Aoi!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Valt: Asher, keep it up this is so fun!!
Me/Apollo: Don’t worry we’ve got way more in our tank!!
Ref: Fourth Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Everything turns white)
Me/Valt: Let it rip!!
(Valtryek speeds up after Apollo)
Valt: Rush Launch!!
(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtryek enters Hyper Flare)
Me: Ultimate Nexus Launch!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Valtryek and Apollo start clashing all around the stadium, Apollo is sent flying in the air)
Announcer: Apollo is shot into space!!
Me: No.
Apollo: Don’t give up!!
Me: Who said I was giving up!!
(I turn golden and blasting ahead)
Me: Haa!!
(Apollo hits the wall and heads straight for Valtryek)
Announcer: Apollo comes down safely and is about to make the final move!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
Valt: Hero Sword!!
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Announcer: Who will win!!
(The Announcer gets blown out of his seat)
Announcer: Not again!!
(Valtryek and Apollo start wobbling very slowly)
Me/Valt: No!!
(The Announcer gets up)
Announcer: Valtryek and Apollo are on their last legs!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo’s driver activates and out spins Valtryek)
All: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a survivor finish!! With a score of 3-2, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!
Justin/Noah/Emma/Jake: You go, bionic boy!!!
(Confetti pops out)
Me: What just happened?
Apollo: You just won!!
Me: Apollo you're the best.
(Apollo’s eyes glow in response)
Valt: Nice job!! I could really see your bond with Apollo!!
Me: Thanks Valt!!
(I smile)
Valt: But you gotta do one thing for me!!
Me: What?
Valt: Win the finals!!
Me: Piece of cake!!
Harry: I will destroy Apollo. no matter what.
...... 3 words: I LOVE IT
Thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jun. 11, 2021
(Jun. 11, 2021 9:10 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:(Jun. 11, 2021 9:06 PM)JJustice Wrote: ...... 3 words: I LOVE IT
Thanks :)
idk why you are not famous
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 14, 2021
The Final Chapter will actually be the 38th Chapter. Chapter 37 will be a throw back to a couple recent seasons
Chapter 37 is out the Finale is almost here!!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 37
The Ultimate Blow!! Nexus Bomb!!
Harry: Hermes, how should we win this?
Hermes: You mean how I will win this.
Harry: What do you mean?
(Dark tentacles come out from Hermes and start wrapping around Harry)
Harry: *Gasps*
Hermes: I will be taking over!!
(Harry’s eyes turn bright purple)
Harry: *Screams*
(Shu walks past)
Shu: Harry, we need to--
Harry: Harry is no longer here. Only Hermes!!
Shu: *Gasps* Harry no!!
Harry: Get out!!
(Shu walks away)
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Janus gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Justin: You’ve gotten stronger!!
Me: I need to master Nexus Bomb!! That’s the only way I will be able to beat Harry’s barrier!!
(Shu walks inside)
Justin: How did it go with Harry?
Shu: He’s… gone.
Me: What do you mean gone?
Shu: He’s been completely taken over by his bey. I fear there is no way to bring him back.
Valt: Hold your horses!
Shu/Me/Justin: *Gasps*
(Valt walks in)
Valt: He can come back!!
Justin: How do you know?
Valt: Because Shu went through the same thing!!
Shu: He’s right.
Me: Can you tell us more!!
Shu: After I lost to Free De La Hoya, Theodore Glass convinced me to hide my true self away to get stronger.
Me: No way!
Shu: After that, I went around challenging bladers and beating them, but then I lost to Lui Shirosagi, so I created Spryzen Requiem. I thought power came from destroying beys but then Valt showed me a different way.
Valt: Yup that’s how I became the former World Champion!!
Justin: Former?
Valt: Yup Aiger challenged me to a title match and he won!!
(Aiger runs in the room)
Aiger: You talking about me?
Valt: I was just telling them about our title match!!
Aiger: Oh yeah that!!
Me: How did you become so strong?
Aiger: I battled so many people and learned from each one of them!!
Shu: Yeah, I remember how hot-headed you were.
Aiger: What do you mean “hot-headed”
(Shu and Aiger laugh)
Justin: Wow you guys were so strong!!
(Dante slips past us)
Me: You good bro?
Dante: Yeah, I was just looking for Lui!!
Justin: Tell us about your journey to becoming a legend!!
Dante: Well, I moved to Japan after seeing Valt’s Gamma Bey!! Then I created Dragon, I competed in the Bey Festival and I won, then I challenged Arthur Peregrin to a battle then he broke Dragon, so I made Command Dragon and challenged him again and beat him!! Then he wanted to take over Beyblade again so Me, Araman, and Delta beat him!!
Me: That’s so awesome!!
Valt: We all have our own stories of how we became stronger!!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: So it’s time for you to end your story!!
Me: Got it!!
(Asher Suzuki please come up to the stage)
Justin/Shu/Aiger/Dante/Valt: You’ve got this!! Give it everything you got!!
(My eyes start tearing up)
Me: I promise I’m gonna win!!
(I wipe off the tears and runoff)
(I run into Harry)
Me: Sorry I--
Harry: Move out of my way!!
Apollo: Watch it!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Harry walks away while I start walking)
Me: Apollo, what just happened?
Apollo: That is not Harry, that is Hermes he has corrupted Harry!!
Me: That’s what Shu was talking about.
Apollo: Hurry up!! We don’t wanna miss the match!!
(I run to the stadium)
Announcer: Hello. Everyone today is the final match, everything has been leading up to this. So let's get right into this!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the Space Newcomer Asher Suzuki!!
Me: Don’t worry everyone I’m giving this battle 100%!!
(The crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: We’ve got the Dark Blader from the shadows!! Harry Tanaka!!
(Harry walks up to the stadium)
Announcer: I’m quaking in my boots who will win this!!
Me: Harry, it doesn't have to be this way!! Let’s battle the fun way!!
Harry: I TOLD YOU HARRY IS GONE!!!
Me: Then I’m gonna bring him back!!
Reff: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: After a successful launch Apollo is speeding around the stadium!!
Me: Nexus Launch!!
(Apollo starts hitting Hermes with a flurry of attacks)
(Harry gets tossed left and right groaning)
Harry: Decent attack!! Corrupting Wall!!!
(Apollo gets sent flying)
Announcer: Hermes bulks up its defense and sends Apollo flying!!
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Apollo lands in the swirling pit and picks up speed)
Announcer: Apollo puts the pedal to the metal and picks up speed!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes blows up and its barrier comes in)
Announcer: Boom goes the dynamite!! Apollo just blew up the unbreakable wall!!
(Hermes hits the wall)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Harry: Corrupting Sword!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Apollo gets sent flying up in the air, Apollo bursts)
Me: No!!
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a burst finish!! Harry Tanaka claims two points!!
Announcer: Hermes just crushed Apollo like a bug!!
(Hermes’ avatar looks down at me growling)
Chapter 37
The Ultimate Blow!! Nexus Bomb!!
Harry: Hermes, how should we win this?
Hermes: You mean how I will win this.
Harry: What do you mean?
(Dark tentacles come out from Hermes and start wrapping around Harry)
Harry: *Gasps*
Hermes: I will be taking over!!
(Harry’s eyes turn bright purple)
Harry: *Screams*
(Shu walks past)
Shu: Harry, we need to--
Harry: Harry is no longer here. Only Hermes!!
Shu: *Gasps* Harry no!!
Harry: Get out!!
(Shu walks away)
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Janus gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Justin: You’ve gotten stronger!!
Me: I need to master Nexus Bomb!! That’s the only way I will be able to beat Harry’s barrier!!
(Shu walks inside)
Justin: How did it go with Harry?
Shu: He’s… gone.
Me: What do you mean gone?
Shu: He’s been completely taken over by his bey. I fear there is no way to bring him back.
Valt: Hold your horses!
Shu/Me/Justin: *Gasps*
(Valt walks in)
Valt: He can come back!!
Justin: How do you know?
Valt: Because Shu went through the same thing!!
Shu: He’s right.
Me: Can you tell us more!!
Shu: After I lost to Free De La Hoya, Theodore Glass convinced me to hide my true self away to get stronger.
Me: No way!
Shu: After that, I went around challenging bladers and beating them, but then I lost to Lui Shirosagi, so I created Spryzen Requiem. I thought power came from destroying beys but then Valt showed me a different way.
Valt: Yup that’s how I became the former World Champion!!
Justin: Former?
Valt: Yup Aiger challenged me to a title match and he won!!
(Aiger runs in the room)
Aiger: You talking about me?
Valt: I was just telling them about our title match!!
Aiger: Oh yeah that!!
Me: How did you become so strong?
Aiger: I battled so many people and learned from each one of them!!
Shu: Yeah, I remember how hot-headed you were.
Aiger: What do you mean “hot-headed”
(Shu and Aiger laugh)
Justin: Wow you guys were so strong!!
(Dante slips past us)
Me: You good bro?
Dante: Yeah, I was just looking for Lui!!
Justin: Tell us about your journey to becoming a legend!!
Dante: Well, I moved to Japan after seeing Valt’s Gamma Bey!! Then I created Dragon, I competed in the Bey Festival and I won, then I challenged Arthur Peregrin to a battle then he broke Dragon, so I made Command Dragon and challenged him again and beat him!! Then he wanted to take over Beyblade again so Me, Araman, and Delta beat him!!
Me: That’s so awesome!!
Valt: We all have our own stories of how we became stronger!!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: So it’s time for you to end your story!!
Me: Got it!!
(Asher Suzuki please come up to the stage)
Justin/Shu/Aiger/Dante/Valt: You’ve got this!! Give it everything you got!!
(My eyes start tearing up)
Me: I promise I’m gonna win!!
(I wipe off the tears and runoff)
(I run into Harry)
Me: Sorry I--
Harry: Move out of my way!!
Apollo: Watch it!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Harry walks away while I start walking)
Me: Apollo, what just happened?
Apollo: That is not Harry, that is Hermes he has corrupted Harry!!
Me: That’s what Shu was talking about.
Apollo: Hurry up!! We don’t wanna miss the match!!
(I run to the stadium)
Announcer: Hello. Everyone today is the final match, everything has been leading up to this. So let's get right into this!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the Space Newcomer Asher Suzuki!!
Me: Don’t worry everyone I’m giving this battle 100%!!
(The crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: We’ve got the Dark Blader from the shadows!! Harry Tanaka!!
(Harry walks up to the stadium)
Announcer: I’m quaking in my boots who will win this!!
Me: Harry, it doesn't have to be this way!! Let’s battle the fun way!!
Harry: I TOLD YOU HARRY IS GONE!!!
Me: Then I’m gonna bring him back!!
Reff: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: After a successful launch Apollo is speeding around the stadium!!
Me: Nexus Launch!!
(Apollo starts hitting Hermes with a flurry of attacks)
(Harry gets tossed left and right groaning)
Harry: Decent attack!! Corrupting Wall!!!
(Apollo gets sent flying)
Announcer: Hermes bulks up its defense and sends Apollo flying!!
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Apollo lands in the swirling pit and picks up speed)
Announcer: Apollo puts the pedal to the metal and picks up speed!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes blows up and its barrier comes in)
Announcer: Boom goes the dynamite!! Apollo just blew up the unbreakable wall!!
(Hermes hits the wall)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Harry: Corrupting Sword!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Apollo gets sent flying up in the air, Apollo bursts)
Me: No!!
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a burst finish!! Harry Tanaka claims two points!!
Announcer: Hermes just crushed Apollo like a bug!!
(Hermes’ avatar looks down at me growling)
The Finale...
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 38
Going All Out!!
Me: *Shudders*
Hermes: What’s wrong, are you scared?!
(Apollo’s avatar jumps right behind me)
Apollo: Asher! I’m right behind you, don’t be intimidated!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Apollo glows a bright gold in my hand)
Announcer: With the score being 2-0 both bladers stare each other down I wonder what’s going on!!
Me: Hermes!! My friends, my family and Apollo are all right behind me so give it your best shot!!
Robbie/Oliva: You tell him!!
Harry: Don’t worry, once I destroy you, you’ll never blade again!!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher, Apollo’s avatar title’s it back up)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Force!!
Announcer: Apollo’s moving so fast that the human eye can’t keep up with it!!
Me: Now!!
(Apollo goes on the swirling pit and picks up even more speed)
Harry: *Gasps*
Dante: What’s he doing?
Shu: He’s trying to pick up enough speed to push in the barrier!!
(Apollo catches onto the rim)
Me: Nexus Flash!!
Announcer: Apollo’s a blur my eyes can’t keep up!!
(I hit Hermes and push In the barrier)
Me: Yes!!
Harry: Hermes!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Me: With all my friends behind me I will defeat you!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating gold everywhere)
Announcer: Asher and Harry are putting in everything they’ve got!!
Me: GO!!
(My eyes start glowing)
Me: All!!
(My hair flares up)
Me: Out!!!
(I turn golden and head straight for Hermes)
Me: You’ve got way more power!! SHOW EM’!!
(Apollo turns rainbow)
All: *Gasps*
Announcer: Asher has just unleashed his true potential!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Recoil!!!
(Hermes and Apollo start an enormous clash)
(I enter a dark room)
Me: Where am I?
Harry: In a place I belong.
Me: Harry is that you?
Harry: Yep. I was wrong, I turned Hermes into this monster and now he’s gonna destroy everything.
(I light up with Rainbow)
Me: They’re still time to change!
Harry: I can’t.
Me: Then I’ll help! I’ll keep on fighting until you can get out of here and stop Hermes!!
Harry: After everything I’ve done?
Me: Yep.
(I send Hermes flying out of the stadium)
Reff: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Me/Apollo: Yes!
Harry: Grr!!
Announcer: After achieving his ultimate potential Hermes was sent flying out of the stadium!!
Rantaro: Thata boy!!
Harry: Asher, I can’t fight it for much longer please win this!!
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Don’t worry Harry I’ve got you!!
Harry: Harry is gone!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Gold)
(Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up Purple)
Announcer: Will the third battle decide our victor? I can’t wait to find out so let’s get into this!!
(Everything turns white, And I turn into a golden tornado)
Harry: Nice try!!
(Harry turns into a Purple Tornado)
(Me and Harry get sent flying)
Reff: Third battle!! Ready set!!
(I glow Gold, Harry glows purple)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Hermes is quick to the center but Apollo is speeding around like a sport’s car!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Whip!!
(Hermes Barrier goes in, Hermes is sent flying up in the air)
Announcer: Hermes is sent flying!!
Harry: I will not let you break Apollo Hermes!!
Hermes: Oh, yes I will!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
Me: Apollo fly!!
(Apollo goes in the air and attacks Hermes, Hermes’s armor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Harry, I’m giving it all I’ve got!! Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes gets sent flying down to the ground)
Me: HAAA!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating Rainbow Flare)
(The Rainbow washes away the Corrupt Resonance)
Hermes: No!!!!
Harry: Thanks Hermes but I’m taking over!!
(Hermes enters Redemption Flare)
Shu: Finally he’s understood what blading really is!
(Hermes hits Apollo into the wall, Apollo starts wobbling dangerously)
Announcer: After a crushing blow Apollo is barely hanging in they’re!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo picks up speed and catches onto the rim)
Harry: *Gasps*
Me: Ultimate Nexus Flash!!!
(Apollo speeds up around the stadium)
Me: Ultimate Justice Sword!!!
(Apollo’s avatar slashes at Hermes, Apollo pushes in Hermes button, Hermes bursts)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a burst finish!!! Asher Suzuki wins with the score of 3-2!! The Ultimate Legends Champion is Asher Suzuki!!
(Confetti pops up)
Announcer: Our space cadet did it!! He beat the dark lord!!
Me: I did it!!
Harry: Congrats Champ!!
(In the hallway)
All The Legends: Congratulations!!
Me: Thanks!! I couldn't have done it without you!!
Silas: Obviously.
Harry: Hey, everyone. I just wanted to say that I’m truly sorry for what I did.
(Harry bows down)
(Shu softly punches Harry)
Shu: It’s about time!!
Valt: We’re gonna throw a huge party!!!
Me: Let’s go!!
(I start chewing pizza)
Me: This tastes so good!!
(I battle Valt)
Me: Aw man you got me!!
(The next day)
Me: Well I’ve got my bags packed ready to go!!
Valt: You're free to visit anytime we’re just up the hill!!
Justin: Try stopping us.
Rantaro: We’re gonna miss you.
???: Hold on a minute!
Me/Justin: *Gasps* Kristina Kuroda?!
Kris: Yup, that’s me!! I want you to join BC Sol!!
Me/Justin: Really?!
Kris: Yup, Do you accept?
Me/Justin: Of course!!
Me: Apollo!! We’ll keep getting stronger and become the best in the world!!!
Chapter 38
Going All Out!!
Me: *Shudders*
Hermes: What’s wrong, are you scared?!
(Apollo’s avatar jumps right behind me)
Apollo: Asher! I’m right behind you, don’t be intimidated!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Apollo glows a bright gold in my hand)
Announcer: With the score being 2-0 both bladers stare each other down I wonder what’s going on!!
Me: Hermes!! My friends, my family and Apollo are all right behind me so give it your best shot!!
Robbie/Oliva: You tell him!!
Harry: Don’t worry, once I destroy you, you’ll never blade again!!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher, Apollo’s avatar title’s it back up)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Force!!
Announcer: Apollo’s moving so fast that the human eye can’t keep up with it!!
Me: Now!!
(Apollo goes on the swirling pit and picks up even more speed)
Harry: *Gasps*
Dante: What’s he doing?
Shu: He’s trying to pick up enough speed to push in the barrier!!
(Apollo catches onto the rim)
Me: Nexus Flash!!
Announcer: Apollo’s a blur my eyes can’t keep up!!
(I hit Hermes and push In the barrier)
Me: Yes!!
Harry: Hermes!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Me: With all my friends behind me I will defeat you!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating gold everywhere)
Announcer: Asher and Harry are putting in everything they’ve got!!
Me: GO!!
(My eyes start glowing)
Me: All!!
(My hair flares up)
Me: Out!!!
(I turn golden and head straight for Hermes)
Me: You’ve got way more power!! SHOW EM’!!
(Apollo turns rainbow)
All: *Gasps*
Announcer: Asher has just unleashed his true potential!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Recoil!!!
(Hermes and Apollo start an enormous clash)
(I enter a dark room)
Me: Where am I?
Harry: In a place I belong.
Me: Harry is that you?
Harry: Yep. I was wrong, I turned Hermes into this monster and now he’s gonna destroy everything.
(I light up with Rainbow)
Me: They’re still time to change!
Harry: I can’t.
Me: Then I’ll help! I’ll keep on fighting until you can get out of here and stop Hermes!!
Harry: After everything I’ve done?
Me: Yep.
(I send Hermes flying out of the stadium)
Reff: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Me/Apollo: Yes!
Harry: Grr!!
Announcer: After achieving his ultimate potential Hermes was sent flying out of the stadium!!
Rantaro: Thata boy!!
Harry: Asher, I can’t fight it for much longer please win this!!
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Don’t worry Harry I’ve got you!!
Harry: Harry is gone!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Gold)
(Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up Purple)
Announcer: Will the third battle decide our victor? I can’t wait to find out so let’s get into this!!
(Everything turns white, And I turn into a golden tornado)
Harry: Nice try!!
(Harry turns into a Purple Tornado)
(Me and Harry get sent flying)
Reff: Third battle!! Ready set!!
(I glow Gold, Harry glows purple)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Hermes is quick to the center but Apollo is speeding around like a sport’s car!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Whip!!
(Hermes Barrier goes in, Hermes is sent flying up in the air)
Announcer: Hermes is sent flying!!
Harry: I will not let you break Apollo Hermes!!
Hermes: Oh, yes I will!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
Me: Apollo fly!!
(Apollo goes in the air and attacks Hermes, Hermes’s armor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Harry, I’m giving it all I’ve got!! Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes gets sent flying down to the ground)
Me: HAAA!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating Rainbow Flare)
(The Rainbow washes away the Corrupt Resonance)
Hermes: No!!!!
Harry: Thanks Hermes but I’m taking over!!
(Hermes enters Redemption Flare)
Shu: Finally he’s understood what blading really is!
(Hermes hits Apollo into the wall, Apollo starts wobbling dangerously)
Announcer: After a crushing blow Apollo is barely hanging in they’re!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo picks up speed and catches onto the rim)
Harry: *Gasps*
Me: Ultimate Nexus Flash!!!
(Apollo speeds up around the stadium)
Me: Ultimate Justice Sword!!!
(Apollo’s avatar slashes at Hermes, Apollo pushes in Hermes button, Hermes bursts)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a burst finish!!! Asher Suzuki wins with the score of 3-2!! The Ultimate Legends Champion is Asher Suzuki!!
(Confetti pops up)
Announcer: Our space cadet did it!! He beat the dark lord!!
Me: I did it!!
Harry: Congrats Champ!!
(In the hallway)
All The Legends: Congratulations!!
Me: Thanks!! I couldn't have done it without you!!
Silas: Obviously.
Harry: Hey, everyone. I just wanted to say that I’m truly sorry for what I did.
(Harry bows down)
(Shu softly punches Harry)
Shu: It’s about time!!
Valt: We’re gonna throw a huge party!!!
Me: Let’s go!!
(I start chewing pizza)
Me: This tastes so good!!
(I battle Valt)
Me: Aw man you got me!!
(The next day)
Me: Well I’ve got my bags packed ready to go!!
Valt: You're free to visit anytime we’re just up the hill!!
Justin: Try stopping us.
Rantaro: We’re gonna miss you.
???: Hold on a minute!
Me/Justin: *Gasps* Kristina Kuroda?!
Kris: Yup, that’s me!! I want you to join BC Sol!!
Me/Justin: Really?!
Kris: Yup, Do you accept?
Me/Justin: Of course!!
Me: Apollo!! We’ll keep getting stronger and become the best in the world!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jun. 14, 2021
(Jun. 14, 2021 5:02 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: The Final Chapter will actually be the 38th Chapter. Chapter 37 will be a throw back to a couple recent seasonsNo so good
Chapter 37 is out the Finale is almost here!!
@Jjustice feedback?Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 37
The Ultimate Blow!! Nexus Bomb!!
Harry: Hermes, how should we win this?
Hermes: You mean how I will win this.
Harry: What do you mean?
(Dark tentacles come out from Hermes and start wrapping around Harry)
Harry: *Gasps*
Hermes: I will be taking over!!
(Harry’s eyes turn bright purple)
Harry: *Screams*
(Shu walks past)
Shu: Harry, we need to--
Harry: Harry is no longer here. Only Hermes!!
Shu: *Gasps* Harry no!!
Harry: Get out!!
(Shu walks away)
Me/Justin: Let it rip!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Janus gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Justin: You’ve gotten stronger!!
Me: I need to master Nexus Bomb!! That’s the only way I will be able to beat Harry’s barrier!!
(Shu walks inside)
Justin: How did it go with Harry?
Shu: He’s… gone.
Me: What do you mean gone?
Shu: He’s been completely taken over by his bey. I fear there is no way to bring him back.
Valt: Hold your horses!
Shu/Me/Justin: *Gasps*
(Valt walks in)
Valt: He can come back!!
Justin: How do you know?
Valt: Because Shu went through the same thing!!
Shu: He’s right.
Me: Can you tell us more!!
Shu: After I lost to Free De La Hoya, Theodore Glass convinced me to hide my true self away to get stronger.
Me: No way!
Shu: After that, I went around challenging bladers and beating them, but then I lost to Lui Shirosagi, so I created Spryzen Requiem. I thought power came from destroying beys but then Valt showed me a different way.
Valt: Yup that’s how I became the former World Champion!!
Justin: Former?
Valt: Yup Aiger challenged me to a title match and he won!!
(Aiger runs in the room)
Aiger: You talking about me?
Valt: I was just telling them about our title match!!
Aiger: Oh yeah that!!
Me: How did you become so strong?
Aiger: I battled so many people and learned from each one of them!!
Shu: Yeah, I remember how hot-headed you were.
Aiger: What do you mean “hot-headed”
(Shu and Aiger laugh)
Justin: Wow you guys were so strong!!
(Dante slips past us)
Me: You good bro?
Dante: Yeah, I was just looking for Lui!!
Justin: Tell us about your journey to becoming a legend!!
Dante: Well, I moved to Japan after seeing Valt’s Gamma Bey!! Then I created Dragon, I competed in the Bey Festival and I won, then I challenged Arthur Peregrin to a battle then he broke Dragon, so I made Command Dragon and challenged him again and beat him!! Then he wanted to take over Beyblade again so Me, Araman, and Delta beat him!!
Me: That’s so awesome!!
Valt: We all have our own stories of how we became stronger!!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: So it’s time for you to end your story!!
Me: Got it!!
(Asher Suzuki please come up to the stage)
Justin/Shu/Aiger/Dante/Valt: You’ve got this!! Give it everything you got!!
(My eyes start tearing up)
Me: I promise I’m gonna win!!
(I wipe off the tears and runoff)
(I run into Harry)
Me: Sorry I--
Harry: Move out of my way!!
Apollo: Watch it!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Harry walks away while I start walking)
Me: Apollo, what just happened?
Apollo: That is not Harry, that is Hermes he has corrupted Harry!!
Me: That’s what Shu was talking about.
Apollo: Hurry up!! We don’t wanna miss the match!!
(I run to the stadium)
Announcer: Hello. Everyone today is the final match, everything has been leading up to this. So let's get right into this!! In the blue corner, we’ve got the Space Newcomer Asher Suzuki!!
Me: Don’t worry everyone I’m giving this battle 100%!!
(The crowd starts screaming)
Announcer: We’ve got the Dark Blader from the shadows!! Harry Tanaka!!
(Harry walks up to the stadium)
Announcer: I’m quaking in my boots who will win this!!
Me: Harry, it doesn't have to be this way!! Let’s battle the fun way!!
Harry: I TOLD YOU HARRY IS GONE!!!
Me: Then I’m gonna bring him back!!
Reff: First battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: After a successful launch Apollo is speeding around the stadium!!
Me: Nexus Launch!!
(Apollo starts hitting Hermes with a flurry of attacks)
(Harry gets tossed left and right groaning)
Harry: Decent attack!! Corrupting Wall!!!
(Apollo gets sent flying)
Announcer: Hermes bulks up its defense and sends Apollo flying!!
Me: Apollo!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
(Apollo lands in the swirling pit and picks up speed)
Announcer: Apollo puts the pedal to the metal and picks up speed!!
Me: Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes blows up and its barrier comes in)
Announcer: Boom goes the dynamite!! Apollo just blew up the unbreakable wall!!
(Hermes hits the wall)
Harry: HERMES!!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Harry: Corrupting Sword!!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Apollo gets sent flying up in the air, Apollo bursts)
Me: No!!
Reff: It’s Corrupt Hermes with a burst finish!! Harry Tanaka claims two points!!
Announcer: Hermes just crushed Apollo like a bug!!
(Hermes’ avatar looks down at me growling)
The Finale...
USN JCE_13 I hope you enjoy thisSpoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 38
Going All Out!!
Me: *Shudders*
Hermes: What’s wrong, are you scared?!
(Apollo’s avatar jumps right behind me)
Apollo: Asher! I’m right behind you, don’t be intimidated!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up, Apollo glows a bright gold in my hand)
Announcer: With the score being 2-0 both bladers stare each other down I wonder what’s going on!!
Me: Hermes!! My friends, my family and Apollo are all right behind me so give it your best shot!!
Robbie/Oliva: You tell him!!
Harry: Don’t worry, once I destroy you, you’ll never blade again!!
Ref: Second Battle!! Ready set!!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I tilt my launcher, Apollo’s avatar title’s it back up)
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
(Apollo speeds around the stadium)
Me: Nexus Force!!
Announcer: Apollo’s moving so fast that the human eye can’t keep up with it!!
Me: Now!!
(Apollo goes on the swirling pit and picks up even more speed)
Harry: *Gasps*
Dante: What’s he doing?
Shu: He’s trying to pick up enough speed to push in the barrier!!
(Apollo catches onto the rim)
Me: Nexus Flash!!
Announcer: Apollo’s a blur my eyes can’t keep up!!
(I hit Hermes and push In the barrier)
Me: Yes!!
Harry: Hermes!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupted Flare)
Me: With all my friends behind me I will defeat you!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating gold everywhere)
Announcer: Asher and Harry are putting in everything they’ve got!!
Me: GO!!
(My eyes start glowing)
Me: All!!
(My hair flares up)
Me: Out!!!
(I turn golden and head straight for Hermes)
Me: You’ve got way more power!! SHOW EM’!!
(Apollo turns rainbow)
All: *Gasps*
Announcer: Asher has just unleashed his true potential!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Recoil!!!
(Hermes and Apollo start an enormous clash)
(I enter a dark room)
Me: Where am I?
Harry: In a place I belong.
Me: Harry is that you?
Harry: Yep. I was wrong, I turned Hermes into this monster and now he’s gonna destroy everything.
(I light up with Rainbow)
Me: They’re still time to change!
Harry: I can’t.
Me: Then I’ll help! I’ll keep on fighting until you can get out of here and stop Hermes!!
Harry: After everything I’ve done?
Me: Yep.
(I send Hermes flying out of the stadium)
Reff: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a ring out finish!! Asher Suzuki claims 1 point!!
Me/Apollo: Yes!
Harry: Grr!!
Announcer: After achieving his ultimate potential Hermes was sent flying out of the stadium!!
Rantaro: Thata boy!!
Harry: Asher, I can’t fight it for much longer please win this!!
Shu: *Gasps*
Me: Don’t worry Harry I’ve got you!!
Harry: Harry is gone!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Gold)
(Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up Purple)
Announcer: Will the third battle decide our victor? I can’t wait to find out so let’s get into this!!
(Everything turns white, And I turn into a golden tornado)
Harry: Nice try!!
(Harry turns into a Purple Tornado)
(Me and Harry get sent flying)
Reff: Third battle!! Ready set!!
(I glow Gold, Harry glows purple)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Harry: Let it rip!!
Announcer: Hermes is quick to the center but Apollo is speeding around like a sport’s car!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Whip!!
(Hermes Barrier goes in, Hermes is sent flying up in the air)
Announcer: Hermes is sent flying!!
Harry: I will not let you break Apollo Hermes!!
Hermes: Oh, yes I will!!
(Harry enters Corrupt Resonance, Hermes enters Corrupt Flare)
Me: Apollo fly!!
(Apollo goes in the air and attacks Hermes, Hermes’s armor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Harry, I’m giving it all I’ve got!! Ultimate Nexus Bomb!!
(Hermes gets sent flying down to the ground)
Me: HAAA!! Apollo!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo starts radiating Rainbow Flare)
(The Rainbow washes away the Corrupt Resonance)
Hermes: No!!!!
Harry: Thanks Hermes but I’m taking over!!
(Hermes enters Redemption Flare)
Shu: Finally he’s understood what blading really is!
(Hermes hits Apollo into the wall, Apollo starts wobbling dangerously)
Announcer: After a crushing blow Apollo is barely hanging in they’re!!
Me: Ultimate Nexus Force!!
(Apollo picks up speed and catches onto the rim)
Harry: *Gasps*
Me: Ultimate Nexus Flash!!!
(Apollo speeds up around the stadium)
Me: Ultimate Justice Sword!!!
(Apollo’s avatar slashes at Hermes, Apollo pushes in Hermes button, Hermes bursts)
Ref: It’s Phoebus Apollo with a burst finish!!! Asher Suzuki wins with the score of 3-2!! The Ultimate Legends Champion is Asher Suzuki!!
(Confetti pops up)
Announcer: Our space cadet did it!! He beat the dark lord!!
Me: I did it!!
Harry: Congrats Champ!!
(In the hallway)
All The Legends: Congratulations!!
Me: Thanks!! I couldn't have done it without you!!
Silas: Obviously.
Harry: Hey, everyone. I just wanted to say that I’m truly sorry for what I did.
(Harry bows down)
(Shu softly punches Harry)
Shu: It’s about time!!
Valt: We’re gonna throw a huge party!!!
Me: Let’s go!!
(I start chewing pizza)
Me: This tastes so good!!
(I battle Valt)
Me: Aw man you got me!!
(The next day)
Me: Well I’ve got my bags packed ready to go!!
Valt: You're free to visit anytime we’re just up the hill!!
Justin: Try stopping us.
Rantaro: We’re gonna miss you.
???: Hold on a minute!
Me/Justin: *Gasps* Kristina Kuroda?!
Kris: Yup, that’s me!! I want you to join BC Sol!!
Me/Justin: Really?!
Kris: Yup, Do you accept?
Me/Justin: Of course!!
Me: Apollo!! We’ll keep getting stronger and become the best in the world!!!
Why didbjt have ro end
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jun. 14, 2021
Sorry but I am making a spin-off called Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu so u should check that out
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
Such a good fan fic……..
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 11:26 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Such a good fan fic……..
I'm glad you liked it (Btw Asher and Justin became legends and became 2 of the best bladers in the world and harry went on a mission with Shu to regain a good resonance with Hermes)
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 11:30 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 11:26 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Such a good fan fic……..
I'm glad you liked it (Btw Asher and Justin became legends and became 2 of the best bladers in the world and harry went on a mission with Shu to regain a good resonance with Hermes)
If you ever make season 2 please quote me lol good to know!
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - UnseenBurst - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 11:33 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:(Jul. 03, 2021 11:30 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm glad you liked it (Btw Asher and Justin became legends and became 2 of the best bladers in the world and harry went on a mission with Shu to regain a good resonance with Hermes)
If you ever make season 2 please quote me lol good to know!
I might...
RE: Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle - LegendJustice - Jul. 03, 2021
(Jul. 03, 2021 11:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:...... Really?!!!!!!!!!!!!(Jul. 03, 2021 11:33 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: If you ever make season 2 please quote me lol good to know!
I might...