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RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 38 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 23, 2012

Thanks for all the feedback! I thought I'd write the last chapter... Here it is! Chapter 39 and a preveiw of the sequel!

Chapter 39:

And that's the end. Just as quickly as it started, it ended. I'm a little sad about ending it, but I'll always look back to it. Thank you guys so much for reading and supporting me through my tough times. Smile Here's the preview for my next story:

Beyblade: The Knights of the Elements

I've decided to change Fan's bey to Theif Phoenic E230GCF because it fits her more. You'll see why later in the new story.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 23, 2012

...

*starts applauding*

Great. Just...great. Words...cannot describe how amazing that ending finished the story. And that preview...Oh my god, why do you add more suspense to me??? Can't wait...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - King of Misfits - Jul. 23, 2012

You are a great writer ChinaBlade.
Great Ending!
I look toward to your next story!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Clefairy - Jul. 24, 2012

OMGOMGOMG! That was an epic ending! What happened to Jake? He's a loner? I don't remember putting that into my request of Jake.... Who cares!??!!? Great job Chinablade! *sobs* I'm so sad it has to end. Unhappy


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

I really didn't want it to end either, guys. Unhappy I started crying when I got to the last paragraph. Atleast I can still come back and read it. My next story should be as awesome, or if we're lucky, awesomer! Thank you for all the nice comments and support. It really means a lot to me! I'll try drawing some of the characters for y'all to see! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Nearr - Jul. 24, 2012

Best. Ending. Ever. All there is to say.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Bladerstormybob - Jul. 24, 2012

So for the "sneak peek" for your new story, it doesn't mention who Zeit's mother is. I assume it's Taylor?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  6:24 AM)Stormybob Wrote: So for the "sneak peek" for your new story, it doesn't mention who Zeit's mother is. I assume it's Taylor?

Yes. It's pretty obvious in the last chapter...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - sarabscientist - Jul. 24, 2012

Umm, sorry to say this. But the title is really bugging me. "Throughout" is one wordLips_sealed

Nice story, epykness all the way.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  5:17 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Umm, sorry to say this. But the title is really bugging me. "Throughout" is one wordLips_sealed

Nice story, epykness all the way.

Oops....
My mom lied. She said it was Through out.
I will get talk to her later.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Sparta - Jul. 24, 2012

He's correct. It has to be one word, otherwise it is assumed to be in the past tense, and a completely different meaning (I.E. Threw out).

Little cliché (Again, but I think I'm just oversensitive about that), and kinda convenient all sorts of couples suddenly happened...but not a lot of mechanical errors other than what I mentioned. So otherwise, well done. Glad to see someone on here actually has the ability to finish a story, haha.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - sarabscientist - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  6:27 PM)Sparta Wrote: He's correct.

Indeed XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  6:29 PM)Insomniac Wrote:
(Jul. 24, 2012  6:27 PM)Sparta Wrote: He's correct.

Indeed XD

.... XD And I'll fix the title


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Sparta - Jul. 24, 2012

Wait, @Insomniac are you a girl? Holy carp, sorry! It's just that your gender is marked as disclosed and I had no other way of knowing...sorry!




RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Clefairy - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  7:58 PM)Sparta Wrote: Wait, @Insomniac are you a girl? Holy carp, sorry! It's just that your gender is marked as disclosed and I had no other way of knowing...sorry!

Insomniac is *********. You should know her from PenPad and PenPad's FB group.




RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Sparta - Jul. 24, 2012

Oh...this is awkward.

in any case, Chinablade are you going to write the next story on this same thread or make a new one? Just bringing this up because it might help save clutter if you made it on this one.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 24, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  8:17 PM)Sparta Wrote: Oh...this is awkward.

in any case, Chinablade are you going to write the next story on this same thread or make a new one? Just bringing this up because it might help save clutter if you made it on this one.

I already wrote it on another thread...
Oops. Pinching_eyes_2


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - sarabscientist - Jul. 25, 2012

(Jul. 24, 2012  8:00 PM)Emperor Wrote: Insomniac is ********. You should know her from PenPad and PenPad's FB group.

Way to reveal my identity Pinching_eyes_2

Better edit the post quick! So I will too!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Clefairy - Jul. 25, 2012

My bad Insomniac.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - Driger Kai - Jul. 26, 2012

Wow, thats probably the best ending to a series I've ever seen! And I FINALLY finished this story.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - sarabscientist - Aug. 06, 2012

Oh god, 219 replies? This is incredible! I don't think another story ever got as many replies as this.

Keep up the excellent work, CB!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - thelegISlAtive - Nov. 04, 2012

that was the best story ive read so far on wbo just great great


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Nov. 04, 2012

(Nov. 04, 2012  2:30 PM)isa Wrote: that was the best story ive read so far on wbo just great great

Haha, thanks! It's nice knowing people are still reading this. Smile


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Throughout The World! (Chapter 39 Added) - SilverChronos - Nov. 05, 2012

Fun story, and really like how it describes stuff. Ahem, other writers, ahem.