RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 15, 2021
(Aug. 15, 2021 5:27 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice! But is Destiny gonna continue?
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - Dread hades12 - Aug. 15, 2021
😑🤨🤔🤨😑🤨🤔🤨😐😡😫😫😵💫🤯
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 15, 2021
(Aug. 15, 2021 5:30 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: We need season two!
You could start it off with a legend festival but with ALL of the legends returning
But if Phi returns then we all know Hyde has to as well This didn't even started yet.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 15, 2021
GenesisBlader would like to ping @"Hollowmind8", UnseenBurst, LegendJustice, and Kiryu Kazuma!
Name: Takeo Gushikan
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 4'9
H/C: Green/Purple
E/C: Dark Red
AKA:
The Roaring Beast
Dimwit (Katsuro)
Big Bro (Chishino)
Appearance:
Takao is a medium height boy with green hair and a purple/green ponytail. He has dark red eyes, and a purple fire kanji symbol on his right cheek.
His Z-Genesis attire features of a dark purple jacket with blue and yellow outlines, a green shirt that says "TG", with the T being purple and the G being red. He also has a purple fingerless glove with red accents on his left hand. He also has black pants with white outlines that go all the way to his shins, and green top shoes with red, magenta, and yellow outlines.
Personality:
TBA
Relationships:
Chishino Gushikan: TBA
Katsuro Tamotsu: TBA
Akari Gushikan: TBA
Hiroto Gushikan: TBA
Valt Aoi: TBA
Beyblade: Firestorm Typhaon+Blaze Retro Thrash
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 15, 2021
(Aug. 15, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: GenesisBlader would like to ping
"Hollow, aka. myself", "UnseenBurst", "LegendJustice", and "Kiryu Kazuma"!
Name: Takeo Gushikan
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 4'9
H/C: Green/Purple
E/C: Dark Red
AKA:
The Roaring Beast
Dimwit (Katsuro)
Big Bro (Chishino)
Appearance:
Takao is a medium height boy with green hair and a purple/green ponytail. He has dark red eyes, and a purple fire kanji symbol on his right cheek.
His Z-Genesis attire features of a dark purple jacket with blue and yellow outlines, a green shirt that says "TG", with the T being purple and the G being red. He also has a purple fingerless glove with red accents on his left hand. He also has black pants with white outlines that go all the way to his shins, and green top shoes with red, magenta, and yellow outlines.
Personality:
TBA
Relationships:
Chishino Gushikan: TBA
Katsuro Tamotsu: TBA
Akari Gushikan: TBA
Hiroto Gushikan: TBA
Valt Aoi: TBA
Beyblade: Firestorm Typhaon+Blaze Retro Thrash
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
Is it a protag? I can't comment very much, as only his appearance (and minor details) is present. But it's nice.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 15, 2021
(Aug. 15, 2021 10:32 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 15, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: GenesisBlader would like to ping
"Hollow, aka. myself", "UnseenBurst", "LegendJustice", and "Kiryu Kazuma"!
Name: Takeo Gushikan
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 4'9
H/C: Green/Purple
E/C: Dark Red
AKA:
The Roaring Beast
Dimwit (Katsuro)
Big Bro (Chishino)
Appearance:
Takao is a medium height boy with green hair and a purple/green ponytail. He has dark red eyes, and a purple fire kanji symbol on his right cheek.
His Z-Genesis attire features of a dark purple jacket with blue and yellow outlines, a green shirt that says "TG", with the T being purple and the G being red. He also has a purple fingerless glove with red accents on his left hand. He also has black pants with white outlines that go all the way to his shins, and green top shoes with red, magenta, and yellow outlines.
Personality:
TBA
Relationships:
Chishino Gushikan: TBA
Katsuro Tamotsu: TBA
Akari Gushikan: TBA
Hiroto Gushikan: TBA
Valt Aoi: TBA
Beyblade: Firestorm Typhaon+Blaze Retro Thrash
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
Is it a protag? I can't comment very much, as only his appearance (and minor details) is present. oh im sorry
yeah he's the protag
(Aug. 14, 2021 3:03 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 14, 2021 10:35 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: And I hope so. (Also, you changed the name to Z-Genesis, cool ig). It doesn't fell like spam for me.
I'd say it's better if you imagine a story line (a sketch) and then write on this "sketch". Adding details here and there. So, do I need to expect a sudden change on your write style? yeah
might start switching to the more detailed side
Summary:
Inspired by an exhibition match featuring the new class of beys, called "Genesis Beys", 11 year old rookie blader Takeo Gushikan decides to level up into these "Genesis Beys" and strives to defeat Valt. However, the new generation isn't holding back on Takeo! He will meet new friends, rivals, and even enemies!
Will Takeo dominate the beyblade world? Find out on... Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis!
Characters for the first arc:
Takeo Gushikan (Main Protagonist)
Katsuro Tamotsu (Main Rival, Deuteragonist)
Valt Aoi (Number 1, Legend)
Masaaki Danuja (Arc 1 Antagonist)
Yoshi Sato (Masaaki's Assistant)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - LegendJustice - Aug. 15, 2021
Nice work!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 15, 2021
(Aug. 15, 2021 10:36 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 15, 2021 10:32 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Is it a protag? I can't comment very much, as only his appearance (and minor details) is present. oh im sorry
yeah he's the protag
(Aug. 14, 2021 3:03 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yeah
might start switching to the more detailed side
Summary:
Inspired by an exhibition match featuring the new class of beys, called "Genesis Beys", 11 year old rookie blader Takeo Gushikan decides to level up into these "Genesis Beys" and strives to defeat Valt. However, the new generation isn't holding back on Takeo! He will meet new friends, rivals, and even enemies!
Will Takeo dominate the beyblade world? Find out on... Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis!
Characters for the first arc:
Takeo Gushikan (Main Protagonist)
Katsuro Tamotsu (Main Rival, Deuteragonist)
Valt Aoi (Number 1, Legend)
Masaaki Danuja (Arc 1 Antagonist)
Yoshi Sato (Masaaki's Assistant)
Name: Katsuro Tamotsu
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 5'2
H/C: Blue
E/C: Black
AKA:
Gramps (Takeo)
Birthday: July 14
Characteristics: Katsuro is a tall person for his age, and he is also slightly skinny. He has blue spiky hair, and black eyes.
He dons a dark blue shirt with a black kilt that has green outlines. He also has brown, thin pants that go to his ankles, and black boots with a blue base.
Personality: Katsuro is quite arrogant, as he doesn't care about how others feel and isn't afraid to voice his opinions on someone. However, he does have a soft side to him, but is rarely shown. Sometimes he can be encouraging and motivating at times when his friends or even other bladers are feeling down.
Beyblade: Mage Kitsune+Enchant Warp Mystic
Type: Defense
Spin Direction: Right
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 16, 2021
hey guys, back from school, which was absolutely horrible. i'm gonna post 5 of the chapters now.
Episode 1: Beastly Awakening! Holocaust Typhaon!
Episode 2: Mystical Flare! Mage Kitsune!
Episode 3: Power Up! The Super Blaze Gear!
Episode 4: Typhaon Vs. Kitsune!
Episode 5: Master The Legendary Genesis Shoot!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021
holy nuts i've been on the bus for a long time
Chapter 2 Summary: Enraged after his loss to Takeo, Katsuki creates a Genesis bey of his own, called Mage Kitsune! Afterwards, Katsuki goes to Takeo for an epic rematch!
Chapter 3 Summary: *also enraged after his loss* Takeo decides to give his bey an upgrade, called the Blaze Gear! He then tests it out on Valt, then goes to Katsuki for a rematch, again!
Masaaki Danuja's Bey is... Conqueror Midas-Hammer Dual Imperial
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - LegendJustice - Aug. 18, 2021
Katsuki? Is that a MHA Reference?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021
(Aug. 18, 2021 12:17 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Katsuki? Is that a MHA Reference?
*gulp* no, i definitely didn't run out of names so i just took a name from an anime!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - LegendJustice - Aug. 18, 2021
(Aug. 18, 2021 12:18 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 18, 2021 12:17 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Katsuki? Is that a MHA Reference?
*gulp* no, i definitely didn't run out of names so i just took a name from an anime!
Katsuki Bakugou would like to know your Location
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021
ur lookin real sussy
GenesisBlader would like to know if your the imposter. (!)
Episode 6: King of Greed! Conquerer Midas!
Episode 7: The Ancient Maze of Doom!
Episode 8: Heating Up! Holocaust Slash!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - PinkRose - Aug. 18, 2021
Hmm, so you rebooted this one? You know, if I were you, I’d hold off on writing stuff for this until I have a concrete plotline from start to finish, so as to not find it hard to continue the story halfway through.
That aside though, I’m kind of interested in the new work, Z-Genesis is actually a nice pun (assuming I’m right about it being a different spelling of The Genesis, Gwynn would be proud).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 18, 2021
(Aug. 18, 2021 10:57 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Hmm, so you rebooted this one? You know, if I were you, I’d hold off on writing stuff for this until I have a concrete plotline from start to finish, so as to not find it hard to continue the story halfway through.
That aside though, I’m kind of interested in the new work, Z-Genesis is actually a nice pun (assuming I’m right about it being a different spelling of The Genesis, Gwynn would be proud).
i already figured those parts of the story out after some big brain thinking
Lol i like genesis for some reason now
also i might not write this until november/december or i may start writing this in extremely late august
i'll list all of the episodes after some galaxy brain thinking, in about 2 weeks
maybe 1
i'll take the advise i make too much fanfics and don't even finish them but now its all gonna change
after i finish matrix i'll be hitting the ground running
here are some of the chapters:
Episode 9: Flaming Sword! Divine Xcalibur!
Episode 10: Xhaka's Test!
Episode 11: Ice Cold! Frostbite Boreas!
Episode 12: Battle of the Ages! Boreas Vs. Kitsune!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 19, 2021
change of plans, there will be a new protagonist, and this fanfic will officially come out on christmas break, or fall break, or halloween break, or late september
rival will be the same tho 😏👌
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 10:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: change of plans, there will be a new protagonist, and this fanfic will officially come out on christmas break, or fall break, or halloween break, or late september
rival will be the same tho 😏👌
Fair enough, I'm just hoping this build-up is not wasted
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 19, 2021
(Aug. 19, 2021 10:07 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 19, 2021 10:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: change of plans, there will be a new protagonist, and this fanfic will officially come out on christmas break, or fall break, or halloween break, or late september
rival will be the same tho 😏👌
Fair enough, I'm just hoping this build-up is not wasted
dont worry it wont
Name: Hiro Tagechi
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 4'5
H/C: Blue/Dark Blue
E/C: Green
Role: Main Protagonist
AKA:
The Blue Blur
Hand Profession: Right
Characteristics:
Hiro is a short boy with Blue hair tucked in a bun, with said blue hair having a dark blue streak going from the top of his head to the middle of his nose. He also has green eyes.
His Z-Genesis attire pertains of a firework explosion-like green face painting on his left cheek. He also has a dark blue short-sleeved jacket that has a light blue lightning symbol/emblem going across the middle, and green being the base, and dark blue being the sleeves color. He also has black shorts, and black top shoes with a blue base, and dark blue outlines with a light blue lightning symbol going on the tip of the shoes.
Personality:
Hiro is a very outgoing person (something I wish I was), tending to make friends easily almost wherever he goes. He also likes to blade, as he calls it his "Favorite thing in the world", similar to Valt. However, he can start getting cocky and start to underestimate the opponent, leading to his downfalls in battles. However (again), he can be highly strategical, making sure to make strategies before his battles (sometimes).
Beyblade: Gallant Hermodur-Wield Saber Velocity
Type: Balance
Spin Direction: Right
Parts:
Genesis Blade: Gallant - Gallant is a blade with 4 jagged blades, being able to piece right through the opponent. However, if the Gallant Blade is turned upside-down, it will reveal a more defensive side, with the 4 jagged blades becoming rounder and more close together, giving it great defense.
Z Core: Hermodur - The motif is the heroic norse god, Hermodur. It features an armored head with green armor, blue eyes, and blue skin. The color of the actual chip is light blue/cyan.
Forge Disc: Saber - A disc with 4 green, rubber contact points, aligning with the Gallant Blade. This forge disc is large and can deal massive damage to the opponent, but also gives it intense recoil (the rubber is retractable).
Performance Tip: Velocity - A performance tip with a rubber flat tip, being able to pick up high speeds.
Z Excess: Thunder - TBA
Special Moves:
TBA
Relationships:
Episodes:
Episode 1 Part A: Enter The Blading World! Part B: Beyblade's Next Hero! Gallant Hermodur!
Episode 2 Part A: Ace It! Beigoma's New Star! Part B: Deafening Roar! Savage Manticore!
Episode 3: Assert Dominance! Hiro Vs. Masaru! Part B: Break Through! Gallant Strike!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 20, 2021
GenesisBlader would... lol idk, I just wanna post something.
Episode 1A: Let's Go! Into The World Of Beyblade!
Episode 1B: Beyblade's Next Hero! Gallant Hermodur!
Episode 2A: Ace It! Beigoma's New Star!
Episode 2B: Deafening Roar! Savage Manticore!
Episode 3A: Assert Dominace! Hiro Vs. Masaru!
Episode 3B: Break Through! Gallant Strike!
Episode 4A: Heavenly Sword! Celestial Valkyrie!
Episode 4B: Power Up! The Thunder Gear!
Episode 5A: Ultimate Torrent! Deluge Forneus!
Episode 5B: The Most Epic Tag Team Battle!
Episode 6A: Dragonic Phantasm! Eidolon Fafnir!
Episode 6B: The Rainbow's Glimmer! Crescent Iris!
Episode 7A: Warfare! Raid BC Sol!
Episode 7B: Eternal Curse! Hex Satan!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 21, 2021
Oh noes! Episode 1A has become a sussy baka! Will you join him too? 😏
Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis!
Episode 1A!
Enter The World Of Beyblade!
Hiro: AAAAAAAAAAUGH!!! I'M GONNA BE LATEEE!!
(This, my friends, is Halo Tagechi. He is an ecstatic 11 year old boy who aims to- well, simply give it his all in battles and have a great time. However, he doesn't have a beyblade... anymore. However, he's not aware that the path he's going on will lead him to the top of the blading world!)
Hiro: C'mon! Just a little longer!! (He'd say, checking his watch)
Reed: Why are you so serious about this?!? (He'd yell, also running)
Hiro: Well- you see, I've been wanting to join Beigoma ever since...
(He'd have a flashback)
(In a Battle Arena)
Hanami: And Beigoma Academy Beyclub takes the win!!
Valt: Yeah! We did it!
Wakiya: Not bad!
(On the stands)
Hiro (Young): WHOA! SO AWESOME... I GOTTA JOIN FOR MYSELF, SO I CAN BE THE BEST OUT THERE! (He'd say, jumping up and down, quite frantically)
(The flashback would end)
Reed: Ok...
Hiro: So c'mon! Let's hurry up, Beigoma's about to close up for try-outs!
Reed: I guess...
(They'd run over to the Beigoma Academy Beyclub, the place where Valt became one of the strongest out there...)
Hiro: AW YEAH! WE'RE HERE!
Reed: Whatever, can we get this over with?
Hiro: Reed, you should cheer up! We're at THE Beigoma Academy Beyclub!!
Reed: Touche... let's go in.
Hiro: Right!
(They'd head in to the BAB (Beigoma Academy Beyclub), but as they walked in, they would see a load of people letting it rip, left and right)
Hiro: WOW! So much people... can't wait to join in-
Reed: Hold your horses. (He'd say, grabbing him by his jacket) You don't even have a beyblade...
Hiro: Oh... I guess I don't... (He'd say as he'd frown, then he'd run outside of Beigoma)
Reed: Hiro, wait- *sigh* I guess I'll stay here for a while... (He'd say, going over to the desk where people would get signed up for BAB)
(Hiro would then stop by a local Bey Park)
Hiro: *sigh* When can I get a beyblade... (He'd say, sitting down on a bench)
(A mysterious person would walk over to him.)
???: Hey- what's wrong? You seem sad.
Hiro: Ya think?
???: Well, what's the matter?
Hiro: *sigh* It's just- I can't get myself a beyblade... I really wanted to join Beigoma Academy...
??? (Mind): Beigoma Academy...?
???: Well, you can just make yourself a beyblade... (He'd say, taking out his bey) Ask Valkyrie! (He'd say, holding out Valkyrie towards him)
(The word "Valkyrie" would ring in Hiro's head... it's like he'd heard of that bey before...)
Hiro: VALKYRIE?! That must mean you're...
Valt: Valt Aoi, yep!
Hiro: WHOA! I CAN't BELIEVE IT- IT'S ACTUALLY YOU?!
Valt *whispers*: Yeah, but don't say it too loud; you might attract a whole crowd over here.
Hiro *whispers*: Got it!
Hiro: So- what's your bey called? It looks different from Savior Valkyrie...
Valt: Oh yeah, this is called Celestial Valkyrie!
Hiro: WHOA- REALLY?! IT LOOKS LIKE A WHOLE NEW SYSTEM!
Valt: Yep- It's called the Z-Genesis system! Raul helped create it-
Hiro: OH YEAH! I'M GONNA GO AND MAKE ME A GENESIS BEY OF MY OWN! THAT WAY, I CAN FINALLY HAVE A BEY!
Valt: Well if you want, I can help you-
Hiro: Oh- no worries, I can make one myself. Gramps taught me all about how to make a bey!
Valt: Oh- ok!
Hiro: Alright! Seeya Valt, after I get my newly evolved bey, the Blading World is gonna think different about me! (He'd say, rushing out to his house)
Valt: *Sigh* Good luck!
(After a good 2 minutes, Hiro would reach his house)
Hiro: Yo! Gramps, you here?
Grandpa: Yes, and hello there Hiro! What brings you here so quick? You're usually tired out by this time of the day.
Hiro: Well- I've come to make myself a Z-Genesis beyblade!
Grandpa: Z-Genesis beyblade... ah, yes, I recall seeing Valt use a Z-Genesis bey in his champion title match!
Hiro: Cool! So, could I use the 3D printer?
Grandpa: Of course, just don't go messin' up the entire garage!
Hiro: *Laughs* Don't worry, I won't! (He'd say, running towards the garage, where the 3D printer was located)
Grandpa: *Chuckles* With that determination, he could very well rival Valt Aoi! In the future, of course. (He'd say, laying back in his recliner chair)
(At the Garage)
Hiro: Alright then, let's do this thing! (He'd say, putting on goggles)
(He'd sit down in the chair beside the 3D printer)
(Entirely by memory, Hiro would create a Z-Genesis bey)
Hiro (Mind): I got it! It'll be a wicked balance type that can both defend and attack! By moving the layer upside-down, you'll be able to put it in defense mode! This'll be the best bey ever!
(Hiro would then enter the avatar would, quite strangely. Then, he would see a colossal, armored figure that seems to have a blue and green motif.)
Hiro: AGH!! WHO ARE YOU!?!
???: I am your bey's spirit...
Hiro: There's no way that's possible... I thought Valt was bluffing about all that calamity Aiga had with his bey...
???: Apparently he wasn't. Anyways, if you are my true blader... you must have to be brave and courageous enough to wield my mighty blades.
Hiro: Awesome... don't worry, mysterious voice in my head! I'll be sure to wield your mighty blades!
(He'd exit the avatar world)
Hiro: Wow... I must've been dreaming!
Hiro (Mind): Brave.. courageous... I know just what to name my bey!
(As Hiro would create his bey, his bey's avatar would loom over him)
(After a great deal of time, Hiro was finally complete!)
Hiro: ALRIGHT! This looks so awesome, I'll totally dominate the beyblade world with my new bey!
(He'd throw his bey up in the air, catch it, then he'd hold out his bey)
Hiro: BEYBADE WORLD, SAY HELLO TO GALLANT HERMODUR!
(Hermodur would shine)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - LegendJustice - Aug. 21, 2021
This is one of the best chapters I have EVER read I'm looking forward to knew episodes!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 22, 2021
Episode 1B... has joined class 1B?!
Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis!
Episode 1B!
Beyblade's New Hero! Gallant Hermodur!
(Previously, last episode...)
Hiro: BEYBLADE WORLD! SAY HELLO TO GALLANT HERMODUR!!
(Hermodur would shine)
(Back to the present...)
Hiro: Alright! Now I can totally join Beigoma! It's so cool having a beyblade that I can battle with- huh, what's this? (He'd say, opening an old box with a green and gold launcher, and a launcher grip.)
Hiro: Wait, launcher equipment? Awesome! (He'd say, grabbing the launcher and grip) This'll be useful!
(He'd head out the door of the garage)
Hiro: Alright, Gramps! I'm off to Beigoma Academy!
Gramps: Alright then, good luck out there with that new bey of yours!
Hiro: Ok! Thanks Gramps! (He'd say, running out the door)
(He'd be running on the sidewalk)
Valt: Oh, hey Hir-
(Hiro would run right past him, not even noticing him)
Valt: *sigh*
(Hiro would reach Beigoma Academy)
Hiro: *huff* I'm finally here!
Reed: Oh, hey Hiro! What's up?
Hiro: REED?! You've actually joined? I thought you didn't like the place-
Reed: Oh kid me not, I didn't like the place. But now that I've made some new friends, it's a pretty cool place to chill out!
???: Yo, Reed! Who's that person over there?
Reed: Oh- my apologies Fubuki, he's my brother! He wants to join the club.
Fubuki: Huh. So, new person, you'd like to join the club, is that correct-
Hiro: WHOA! FUBUKI SUMIYE?! Aren't you one of Aiga's rivals?!?
Fubuki: (So I'm known for that now, huh) Yes, and I'm the captain of Beigoma Academy!
Hiro: Awesome, and I'm Hiro Tagechi! So, would you allow me to join the club?
Fubuki: Of course. But, you'll be battling someone as a test to see if you should join.
Reed: And that'll be me!
Hiro: WOW! I'm battling Reed! This'll be so fun!
(Hermodur would shine, catching the eyes of Fubuki)
Fubuki (Mind): Wait, I've seen that before...
(Hiro, and Reed would go over to a nearby stadium, while one of the members, named Quebec, would ref)
Hiro: Get ready Reed, 'cause I'm totally winning this with Gallant Hermodur!
Reed: Hermodur, huh... Well, that won't matter, little bro, because I'm the one that's gonna come out on top! (He'd say, readying his launcher)
Random Member: Wow, this'll be one heck of a battle! Who do you think's gonna win?
???: Obviously Reed. A reckless dimwit like him wouldn't be able to defeat Reed in his wildest dreams...
Quebec: Alright then, inspect your opponent's beys!
(They'd hand each other their bey's)
Reed (Mind): Gallant Hermodur... a balance type with 2 modes: Attack and Defense. Whichever mode he's using has 4 blades. His driver looks like it can pick up high speeds with it's thin rubber ring around the tip, and it can also defend when it needs to. Even though he has a new bey, I'll be coming out on top!
Hiro (Mind): My first bey battle... I don't really know how to defeat Reed, or how to even pull off a stable launch... me and Hermodur are just gonna have to go all out and win it!
(They'd hand each other back their bey's)
Fubuki (Mind): Hiro Tagechi... don't disappoint me.
Quebec: First Battle! Ready? Set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Hiro and Reed: Let it... RIP!!!
(Reed would pull off an intensely stable launch, but on the contrary, Hiro would pull off an intensely destabilized launch)
Reed: Heh! Looks like you tanked the launch!
???: Tch! A person who doesn't even know how to launch isn't even gonna stand a chance against Reed! This is pointless, Fubuki!
Fubuki: Calm down, Masaru. We haven't seen enough of how he blades.
Masaru: *sigh* Your right, Fubuki...
Reed: Let's go! Take the center!
Hiro: Alright Hermodur! ATTACK!
(Hermodur would crash into the wall)
Hiro: *gulp*
Masaru: Tsk, tsk, tsk... he shouldn't even deserve the right to join this team... he doesn't even know how to control his bey!
Hiro: HEY! I DO KNOW HOW!
Fubuki: *sigh*
Reed: Alright, now it's a true stamina battle!
Hiro: Once more... attack!
(Hermodur would crash into the wall again)
Hiro: WHAT?!?!
Reed: This match is mine!
(Hermodur would run out of steam)
Quebec: Vanish Longinus, survivor finish! Point standings 1-0!
(The entirety of Beigoma would laugh and bellow at Hiro, due to him not even knowing how to control his bey, or launch for that matter... Poor Hiro.)
Hiro: HEY! STOP LAUGHING! I CAN TOTALLY MAKE A COMEBACK!
Masaru: Yeah right... the only comeback you'll be making is to your home after you lose! Haha!
(Everyone would laugh even harder, but...)
Fubuki: EVERYONE, STOP!
(Everyone would stop almost as fast as they started. Fubuki was not very fond of members who would laugh at other members for their battle experience)
Hiro: F-Fubuki...
Reed: Yo, Hiro. Focus on the match!
Hiro: G-Got it!
Reed (Mind): Maybe when I win I'll finally prove to Fubuki how strong I am!
Hiro (Mind): *Sigh* I don't know what to do... if I lose again, it's all over for me...
(Suddenly, Hiro would be transported to the avatar world)
Hiro: H-Hermodur... I-I'm sorry.
Hermodur: That was pathetic.
Hiro: *Sigh* (He'd start to tear up)
Hermodur: You're more than a person that hides his true self. You're the wielder of my dual blades.
Hiro: I thought you were bluffing... what's that supposed to mean?
Hermodur: It means you have to give it your all and earn yourself that spot on Beigoma Academy. I know you have what it takes to wield my true power.
Hiro: R-Really?
Hermodur: Yes. Now let's win this match!
Hiro: (He'd wipe the tears from his face, then he'd grin) Yeah! We'll totally go all out and win it together, Hermodur!
Hermodur: Right!
(Hiro and Hermodur would fist bump)
(Hiro would then exit the avatar world)
Reed: Yo? Hiro, you ok?
Hiro: Y-Yeah! I'm good, let's keep going!
Fubuki (Mind): Strange... he's reminding me a lot like Aiga...
Hiro: Hermodur, let's go!
Hermodur: Right!
Reed: Who is he talking to-
(Hiro's battle aura would intensify, blazing up intensely fast as Hermodur would stand behind him, getting ready for an epic brawl)
Reed: Whoa... this is getting intense quickly, but I'll still win it!
Masaru: Talking to his bey won't help in the slightest...
Fubuki: Maybe you should take some notes, 'cause he does things that you don't, like focusing on the battle in front of you.
Masaru: Grr... (He'd say, taking out his notepad and a pencil)
Hiro: We totally got this in the bag, Hermodur!
Quebec: Second battle! Ready, set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Hiro and Reed: Let it... RIP!!
(Hiro would pull off... a Genesis Shoot?!)
Masaru: *Gasps* A Genesis Shoot?! No way...
Fubuki: He's in the zone... wait, what?
(Forneus would shine)
Fubuki: Maybe he is interesting...
Reed: Once again, take the center!!
Hiro: Not this time! Hermodur, attack!
(Hermodur would attack Longinus, sending it flying towards the wall)
Reed: *Gasps*
Masaru: Wow, he learns fast...
Reed: W-We can still do this! Longinus, take the center!
Hiro: Once again, attack!
(Hermodur would strike again, sending it towards the wall once again)
Reed: *Gasps*
Hiro: Rrrrr....RAAAAAAAAHHHHH!
(Hermodur would burst out of it's beyblade, becoming engulfed in a sublime green aura)
Hiro: Let's burst 'em like crazy! GALLANT SURGE!!!
(Hermodur would lean on it's Velocity driver, thrusting towards Longinus with intense speed)
Fubuki, and Masaru: *Gasps*
Hiro and Hermodur: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!
(Hermodur would then slash right through Longinus, bursting it on impact)
Hiro: YEAH! Aced it! (He'd say as his bey would hit the wall, then he would catch it)
Reed: W-What?!
Quebec: G-Gallant Hermodur, with a burst finish! Hiro Tagechi is the winner!
Reed: Whoa, where'd you get all that power from?!
Hiro: Well, it was the power of me and Hermodur at full speed! (He'd say, holding out his bey as it would shine)
Reed: Awesome...
Fubuki: Hiro... I'm glad to announce that you are now a member of Beigoma Academy Beyclub! That battle showed me all I needed!
Hiro: R-REALLY?!?! Thanks a lot, Fubuki!
Masaru: This-this is outrageous! A nuisance like you, waltzing in and defeating Reed?! That battle must've been pure luck!
Hiro: No- it was pure bonding! (He'd say, grinning)
Masaru: Tch! How about you battle me and let's see if you really deserve to be apart of this team!
Hiro: Alright then, let's go! Just a warning though: Me and Hermodur aren't backing down!
Fubuki: Masaru, calm dow-
Masaru: And me and Roar Fafnir aren't planning on backing down either!
Fubuki: *sigh*
(An intense rivalry had now been boiled between the two... so, who will win the brawl of wits?!)
Episode 2A/B Preview!
Hiro: We'll totally wipe that smirk clean off of his face and win it, right Hermodur!
Hiro: Huh? He's planning on making a new bey?
Hiro: Savage Manticore?!
Hiro: We'll just have to break through that defense! C'mon Hermodur!
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis!
2A: Ace It! Beigoma's New Star! + 2B: Deafening Roar! Savage Manticore!
Three, Two, One!
Let it... RIP!
I'll totally become the best there is!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - PinkRose - Aug. 22, 2021
Hermodur seems a bit salty about Hiro acting like a noob in the first battle...I like this guy.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Z-Genesis! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 22, 2021
Nice chapter (I suppose 1A and 1B are the same chapter, but cut in half, which is a good way to make long chapters.)
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