(Aug. 13, 2021  2:06 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: decided to push the date to today, and the winners are in...

3rd: LegendJustice!

2nd: LJ-Blader!

1st: UnseenBurst!

good job to everyone who joined, and LJ, LJB and UB your characters will be in Destiny!

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:06 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:06 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: decided to push the date to today, and the winners are in...

3rd: LegendJustice!

2nd: LJ-Blader!

1st: UnseenBurst!

good job to everyone who joined, and LJ, LJB and UB your characters will be in Destiny!

Does victory dance GG Everyone and I'm so glad you liked my character!

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:08 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [VICTORY ROYALE] GG I had fun! Also LJ-Blader UnseenBurst y'alls character are going doan

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:08 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [VICTORY ROYALE] GG I had fun! Also LJ-Blader UnseenBurst y'alls character are going doan

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Wait I'm 3rd?

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:16 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Gaelem VS Kestrel? YES

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:14 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: here's the episodes your characters will be debuting in! this is the third arc!

Episode 20: King Hit! Colossal Titan!

Episode 21: Fight With All You Have! 

Episode 22: Conquest! Gaelem Vs. Kestrel!

Episode 23: Extreme Flare! Sparking Kraken!

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:41 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:14 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: here's the episodes your characters will be debuting in! this is the third arc!

Episode 20: King Hit! Colossal Titan!

Episode 21: Fight With All You Have! 

Episode 22: Conquest! Gaelem Vs. Kestrel!

Episode 23: Extreme Flare! Sparking Kraken!

Tristen Akio, you better beat whoever you battle in your episode, also, when's episode 20 coming?

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:41 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 13, 2021  2:14 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: here's the episodes your characters will be debuting in! this is the third arc!

Episode 20: King Hit! Colossal Titan!

Episode 21: Fight With All You Have! 

Episode 22: Conquest! Gaelem Vs. Kestrel!

Episode 23: Extreme Flare! Sparking Kraken!

Tristen Akio, you better beat whoever you battle in your episode, also, when's episode 20 coming?

(Aug. 13, 2021  3:18 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 10 has ventured to Florida! (Warning: Intense Filler Up Ahead. Read if you Dare.)

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
                 Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
                            Episode 10
                   The Grand Trip to Spain!


Gaele: Mom... please? I promise I'll be on my best behavior in Spain! And plus, Valt's taking me!

Mom: No way, Gaele. Your gonna get yourself hurt out there!

Gaele: C'mon Mom! They have a super huge hotel with a bunch of food and beds, please?

Dad: Yeah, I think you should let 'em go, dear.

Mom: *sigh*

(Mom would have a memory of a battle she watched as a teen)

Aiger: BlOW 'EM AWAY!! Z WHIP!!

(The bey Achilles was battling, which was Valkyrie, suddenly started forming cracks, then completely burst open as it shattered into pieces)

Valt: *Gasps*

Aiger: YEAHH!!!

Yuu (Gaele's Mom): *Gasps* 

(Back to the present)

Dad: Hello? You there?

Mom: Oh, yeah. You guys can head out.

Gaele: Alright Mom, we're off! (He'd say as he'd carry two of his bags)

Mom: Take care, Gaele!

(They'd leave from out of the door)

Mom (Mind): Be safe, Gaele.

(After half an hour, they'd finally reach the airport, where Suji, Hazel, and Valt were waiting for them.)

Dad: Alright Gaele, be safe out there, and do us proud!

Gaele: Alright, Dad! I'll totally defeat every legend in Spain!

Suji: No, I'll defeat them first!

Hazel: No, I will!

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Grr!!

Valt: Don't worry, Mr. Reiasu! I'll be sure to take care of them!

Dad: Alright! Well, I'll be going back home, so you all do good!

Gaele, Suji, Hazel and Valt: Gotcha!

(Dad would leave the airport, driving off into the distance)

Valt: Alright then, you guys ready? 

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Totally!

Valt: Then lets go!

(They'd head on the plane)

Gaele: So... Valt. How long will it take to get to Spain?

Valt: Hmm... I'd say about 7 hours or more.

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: SEVEN HOURS?!

Valt: Don't worry! To pass the time, look out the window and picture the adventures your gonna have!

Gaele: Ok... (He'd look out the window)

(Gaele's Daydream...)

Hanami: It's 2-1, folks! How will the Lord of Light, Gaele Reiasu make a comeback?!

Gaele: Don't worry, Free! I'll make a comeback and totally burst you like crazy!

Free: Oh really? We'll see then.

(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Free would switch to High Mode)

Referee: Third Battle! Ready? Set!

Everyone: Three! Two! One!

Gaele and Free: Let it... RIP!!

(Gaele would pull off a Destiny Shoot)

(Gaelem would go speeding towards Fafnir)

Gaele: Now GO!! RECLUX DRIVE!!

(Gaelem would strike right through Fafnir, bursting it on impact)

(The daydream would end)

Gaele: Ahhh...

Suji: Lemme try!

(Suji's Daydream...)

Suji: C'mon! Saturn!

Gaele: Let's go! Gaelem!

Hazel: Hespera! 

(They'd all clash, sending each other flying out of the stadium ring)

Gaele, and Hazel: Good battle!

(They'd all put their hands in the middle)

(The daydream would end)

Suji: Mhm!

Hazel: Now it's my turn!

(Hazel's Daydream)

Hazel: Go Hespera! Loyalty Spin!

Gaele: Not again! Gaelem!

(Hespera and Gaelem would clash, sending Gaelem high up into the air and bursting)

Gaele: Aw man... your so strong! I'll stop messing with you and Suji...

Hazel: That's right!

Suji: Hey Hazel, you wanna battle? 

Hazel: Sure thing!

Hazel and Suji: Three! Two! One!

???: Let it... RIP!

(??? bey would enter)

Hazel: WHAT?!

(The daydream would end)

Hazel: *Sigh*

(A few minutes later, they would all pass out)

(Valt would chuckle)









(Finally, after 7+ hours, they finally made it.)

Gaele: FINALLY! We're here!

Suji: Whoa! Spain is so awesome!

Hazel: I know, right?

Valt (Mind): Feels great to be here again...

Gaele: So, where do we start?! Oh, maybe over here! (He'd say, running of towards a nearby forest)

Suji: Gaele, where are you going?!

Hazel: Oh no, he's gonna get lost-

Valt: GAELE! WAIT UP! (He'd say, running after him)

Suji: Should we follow them?

Hazel: Of course, numbskull?! What, we're just gonna stay here without anyone watching us?! (She'd say, then she'd grab Suji's arm and run after Valt. The chase was truely on!)




(Meanwhile, at the forest that Gaele ran off to...)

Gaele: Dang, I shouldn't have ran off without them... now I'm lost! (He'd say, walking through the mysterious woods)

(After walking for a whooping 15 minutes, he'd finally see some sort of... ancient thing?)

Gaele: WHOA! What is this thing...?

(Suddenly, someone would peek out from a nearby bush)

???: Huh? What brings you here?

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Episode 11 Preview!

Gaele: Hold on, Free De La Hoya?!

Gaele: Wow! I can't believe it! He actually knows me!

Gaele: He has a Destiny Bey too?!

Gaele: We'll try our best against the Lone Wolf!

Gaele: Time to burst 'em like crazy, Gaelem!

Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!

Golden Spectre! Phantasm Fafnir!

Gaele: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!

I'll totally be the best there is!

(Aug. 13, 2021  3:18 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 10 has ventured to Florida! (Warning: Intense Filler Up Ahead. Read if you Dare.)

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
                 Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
                            Episode 10
                   The Grand Trip to Spain!


Gaele: Mom... please? I promise I'll be on my best behavior in Spain! And plus, Valt's taking me!

Mom: No way, Gaele. Your gonna get yourself hurt out there!

Gaele: C'mon Mom! They have a super huge hotel with a bunch of food and beds, please?

Dad: Yeah, I think you should let 'em go, dear.

Mom: *sigh*

(Mom would have a memory of a battle she watched as a teen)

Aiger: BlOW 'EM AWAY!! Z WHIP!!

(The bey Achilles was battling, which was Valkyrie, suddenly started forming cracks, then completely burst open as it shattered into pieces)

Valt: *Gasps*

Aiger: YEAHH!!!

Yuu (Gaele's Mom): *Gasps* 

(Back to the present)

Dad: Hello? You there?

Mom: Oh, yeah. You guys can head out.

Gaele: Alright Mom, we're off! (He'd say as he'd carry two of his bags)

Mom: Take care, Gaele!

(They'd leave from out of the door)

Mom (Mind): Be safe, Gaele.

(After half an hour, they'd finally reach the airport, where Suji, Hazel, and Valt were waiting for them.)

Dad: Alright Gaele, be safe out there, and do us proud!

Gaele: Alright, Dad! I'll totally defeat every legend in Spain!

Suji: No, I'll defeat them first!

Hazel: No, I will!

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Grr!!

Valt: Don't worry, Mr. Reiasu! I'll be sure to take care of them!

Dad: Alright! Well, I'll be going back home, so you all do good!

Gaele, Suji, Hazel and Valt: Gotcha!

(Dad would leave the airport, driving off into the distance)

Valt: Alright then, you guys ready? 

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Totally!

Valt: Then lets go!

(They'd head on the plane)

Gaele: So... Valt. How long will it take to get to Spain?

Valt: Hmm... I'd say about 7 hours or more.

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: SEVEN HOURS?!

Valt: Don't worry! To pass the time, look out the window and picture the adventures your gonna have!

Gaele: Ok... (He'd look out the window)

(Gaele's Daydream...)

Hanami: It's 2-1, folks! How will the Lord of Light, Gaele Reiasu make a comeback?!

Gaele: Don't worry, Free! I'll make a comeback and totally burst you like crazy!

Free: Oh really? We'll see then.

(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Free would switch to High Mode)

Referee: Third Battle! Ready? Set!

Everyone: Three! Two! One!

Gaele and Free: Let it... RIP!!

(Gaele would pull off a Destiny Shoot)

(Gaelem would go speeding towards Fafnir)

Gaele: Now GO!! RECLUX DRIVE!!

(Gaelem would strike right through Fafnir, bursting it on impact)

(The daydream would end)

Gaele: Ahhh...

Suji: Lemme try!

(Suji's Daydream...)

Suji: C'mon! Saturn!

Gaele: Let's go! Gaelem!

Hazel: Hespera! 

(They'd all clash, sending each other flying out of the stadium ring)

Gaele, and Hazel: Good battle!

(They'd all put their hands in the middle)

(The daydream would end)

Suji: Mhm!

Hazel: Now it's my turn!

(Hazel's Daydream)

Hazel: Go Hespera! Loyalty Spin!

Gaele: Not again! Gaelem!

(Hespera and Gaelem would clash, sending Gaelem high up into the air and bursting)

Gaele: Aw man... your so strong! I'll stop messing with you and Suji...

Hazel: That's right!

Suji: Hey Hazel, you wanna battle? 

Hazel: Sure thing!

Hazel and Suji: Three! Two! One!

???: Let it... RIP!

(??? bey would enter)

Hazel: WHAT?!

(The daydream would end)

Hazel: *Sigh*

(A few minutes later, they would all pass out)

(Valt would chuckle)









(Finally, after 7+ hours, they finally made it.)

Gaele: FINALLY! We're here!

Suji: Whoa! Spain is so awesome!

Hazel: I know, right?

Valt (Mind): Feels great to be here again...

Gaele: So, where do we start?! Oh, maybe over here! (He'd say, running of towards a nearby forest)

Suji: Gaele, where are you going?!

Hazel: Oh no, he's gonna get lost-

Valt: GAELE! WAIT UP! (He'd say, running after him)

Suji: Should we follow them?

Hazel: Of course, numbskull?! What, we're just gonna stay here without anyone watching us?! (She'd say, then she'd grab Suji's arm and run after Valt. The chase was truely on!)




(Meanwhile, at the forest that Gaele ran off to...)

Gaele: Dang, I shouldn't have ran off without them... now I'm lost! (He'd say, walking through the mysterious woods)

(After walking for a whooping 15 minutes, he'd finally see some sort of... ancient thing?)

Gaele: WHOA! What is this thing...?

(Suddenly, someone would peek out from a nearby bush)

???: Huh? What brings you here?

---

Episode 11 Preview!

Gaele: Hold on, Free De La Hoya?!

Gaele: Wow! I can't believe it! He actually knows me!

Gaele: He has a Destiny Bey too?!

Gaele: We'll try our best against the Lone Wolf!

Gaele: Time to burst 'em like crazy, Gaelem!

Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!

Golden Spectre! Phantasm Fafnir!

Gaele: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!

I'll totally be the best there is!

(Aug. 13, 2021  4:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 13, 2021  3:18 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 10 has ventured to Florida! (Warning: Intense Filler Up Ahead. Read if you Dare.)

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
                 Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
                            Episode 10
                   The Grand Trip to Spain!


Gaele: Mom... please? I promise I'll be on my best behavior in Spain! And plus, Valt's taking me!

Mom: No way, Gaele. Your gonna get yourself hurt out there!

Gaele: C'mon Mom! They have a super huge hotel with a bunch of food and beds, please?

Dad: Yeah, I think you should let 'em go, dear.

Mom: *sigh*

(Mom would have a memory of a battle she watched as a teen)

Aiger: BlOW 'EM AWAY!! Z WHIP!!

(The bey Achilles was battling, which was Valkyrie, suddenly started forming cracks, then completely burst open as it shattered into pieces)

Valt: *Gasps*

Aiger: YEAHH!!!

Yuu (Gaele's Mom): *Gasps* 

(Back to the present)

Dad: Hello? You there?

Mom: Oh, yeah. You guys can head out.

Gaele: Alright Mom, we're off! (He'd say as he'd carry two of his bags)

Mom: Take care, Gaele!

(They'd leave from out of the door)

Mom (Mind): Be safe, Gaele.

(After half an hour, they'd finally reach the airport, where Suji, Hazel, and Valt were waiting for them.)

Dad: Alright Gaele, be safe out there, and do us proud!

Gaele: Alright, Dad! I'll totally defeat every legend in Spain!

Suji: No, I'll defeat them first!

Hazel: No, I will!

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Grr!!

Valt: Don't worry, Mr. Reiasu! I'll be sure to take care of them!

Dad: Alright! Well, I'll be going back home, so you all do good!

Gaele, Suji, Hazel and Valt: Gotcha!

(Dad would leave the airport, driving off into the distance)

Valt: Alright then, you guys ready? 

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Totally!

Valt: Then lets go!

(They'd head on the plane)

Gaele: So... Valt. How long will it take to get to Spain?

Valt: Hmm... I'd say about 7 hours or more.

Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: SEVEN HOURS?!

Valt: Don't worry! To pass the time, look out the window and picture the adventures your gonna have!

Gaele: Ok... (He'd look out the window)

(Gaele's Daydream...)

Hanami: It's 2-1, folks! How will the Lord of Light, Gaele Reiasu make a comeback?!

Gaele: Don't worry, Free! I'll make a comeback and totally burst you like crazy!

Free: Oh really? We'll see then.

(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Free would switch to High Mode)

Referee: Third Battle! Ready? Set!

Everyone: Three! Two! One!

Gaele and Free: Let it... RIP!!

(Gaele would pull off a Destiny Shoot)

(Gaelem would go speeding towards Fafnir)

Gaele: Now GO!! RECLUX DRIVE!!

(Gaelem would strike right through Fafnir, bursting it on impact)

(The daydream would end)

Gaele: Ahhh...

Suji: Lemme try!

(Suji's Daydream...)

Suji: C'mon! Saturn!

Gaele: Let's go! Gaelem!

Hazel: Hespera! 

(They'd all clash, sending each other flying out of the stadium ring)

Gaele, and Hazel: Good battle!

(They'd all put their hands in the middle)

(The daydream would end)

Suji: Mhm!

Hazel: Now it's my turn!

(Hazel's Daydream)

Hazel: Go Hespera! Loyalty Spin!

Gaele: Not again! Gaelem!

(Hespera and Gaelem would clash, sending Gaelem high up into the air and bursting)

Gaele: Aw man... your so strong! I'll stop messing with you and Suji...

Hazel: That's right!

Suji: Hey Hazel, you wanna battle? 

Hazel: Sure thing!

Hazel and Suji: Three! Two! One!

???: Let it... RIP!

(??? bey would enter)

Hazel: WHAT?!

(The daydream would end)

Hazel: *Sigh*

(A few minutes later, they would all pass out)

(Valt would chuckle)









(Finally, after 7+ hours, they finally made it.)

Gaele: FINALLY! We're here!

Suji: Whoa! Spain is so awesome!

Hazel: I know, right?

Valt (Mind): Feels great to be here again...

Gaele: So, where do we start?! Oh, maybe over here! (He'd say, running of towards a nearby forest)

Suji: Gaele, where are you going?!

Hazel: Oh no, he's gonna get lost-

Valt: GAELE! WAIT UP! (He'd say, running after him)

Suji: Should we follow them?

Hazel: Of course, numbskull?! What, we're just gonna stay here without anyone watching us?! (She'd say, then she'd grab Suji's arm and run after Valt. The chase was truely on!)




(Meanwhile, at the forest that Gaele ran off to...)

Gaele: Dang, I shouldn't have ran off without them... now I'm lost! (He'd say, walking through the mysterious woods)

(After walking for a whooping 15 minutes, he'd finally see some sort of... ancient thing?)

Gaele: WHOA! What is this thing...?

(Suddenly, someone would peek out from a nearby bush)

???: Huh? What brings you here?

---

Episode 11 Preview!

Gaele: Hold on, Free De La Hoya?!

Gaele: Wow! I can't believe it! He actually knows me!

Gaele: He has a Destiny Bey too?!

Gaele: We'll try our best against the Lone Wolf!

Gaele: Time to burst 'em like crazy, Gaelem!

Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!

Golden Spectre! Phantasm Fafnir!

Gaele: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!

I'll totally be the best there is!

Yeah, you could've combined the episode into meeting/battling Free but whatever it was a good chapter

(Aug. 14, 2021  5:48 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: sorry if it feels like spam at this point, but for some reason I don't know how to quench myself with my impeccable thirst for a fanfic that fits me

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i'll reveal the characters sooner or later, im striving for this to be my best fanfic

(Aug. 14, 2021  10:35 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 14, 2021  5:48 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: sorry if it feels like spam at this point, but for some reason I don't know how to quench myself with my impeccable thirst for a fanfic that fits me

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i'll reveal the characters sooner or later, im striving for this to be my best fanfic

And I hope so. (Also, you changed the name to Z-Genesis, cool ig). It doesn't fell like spam for me.

I'd say it's better if you imagine a story line (a sketch) and then write on this "sketch". Adding details here and there. So, do I need to expect a sudden change on your write style?