(Nov. 13, 2020  9:30 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 13, 2020  9:27 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: okay

ya!

(Nov. 13, 2020  9:32 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 13, 2020  9:30 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: ya!

lol

(Nov. 13, 2020  8:44 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 13, 2020  8:42 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: He had been battling for all eternity. He had lost count for how long he had fighting this mysterious and powerful blader. He knew that this was the end for the mysterious blader. He had no energy left. He fell dead to the floor when Cyronis's bey spirit crushed the blader's bey. He absorbed all the blader's powers, feeling power growing in his veins. Then he saw the void crack and dissemble. He was free. His servants were waiting for him. He would punish Nemesis for not being able to destroy the world and create a new one. He would not fail this time.

Ryuga left and traveled many places, seeking bladers that were powerful enough, that he could grow stronger and stronger. He knew that he had to find sakyo. It had already been over 2 months since he had battled Gingka. Gingka had promised him not to tell anyone else that he had returned. Ryuga saw red hair, similiar to the hair he had. He looked more closely and that blader turned out to be, His chosen one, Sakyo.

Sakyo emitted a powerful aura, one that told him that he had improved. Then he went up to Sakyo and said,"I challenge you to fight me with your sychrome partner!
Let's see how weak you really are!."

That twisted Sakyo's face as Sakyo's anger exploded. \

"You think you can beat me and takanosuke's sychrome? You are not even worthy of that! My dragoon alone could destroy you!"

"Not so sure about that, and I don't have time to waste so hurry up and get your synchrome bey ready!,"said Ryuga.

"I will crush you!"

His sychrome partner, takanosuke, gave him his warrior wheel and he made Griffin Dragoon, one of the most powerful beys.

"Whatever Blader you are, I WILL CRUSH YOU, With THIS griffin DRAGOON!"

"Three, Two, One, LET IT RIP!"

"Griffin Dragoon! Crush that bey to pieces!"

It attacked head on with l drago, attacking without stopping.

"If that's what you got, then you won't even scratch L drago!"

"L drago? NO WAY! Is that........the DRAGON EMEPEROR?,"said Takanosuke with intense fear.

Ryuga took of his cloak.

"Its been a long time, Sakyo! Lets see if you are worthy of standing at the top of Beyblade!"

Sakyo said, "Yes, master, I will not lose! I will prove myself!"

Dragoon started to spin faster, faster and faster. His burning bey spirit shone in the light, as he said,"Break Through, DRAGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!"

Dragoon pounced on L drago, sending L drago flying in the air.

Sakyo said,"I did it!"

Ryuga said ,"Are you sure you are done?"

L drago started to spin faster and faster in mid air.

"This is the end for you now, sakyo"

"Dragoon, pierce throuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"


Griffin Dragoon went flying in mid air as it met with l drago's attack.

"Don't Mess with me! DRAGON EMEPEROR SUPREME FLIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!"

The beys clashed with incredible force, the winner couldn't be predicted.

Then he saw Griffin Dragoon on the floor, a stadium out!"




"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DRAGOOOOOOOOOOON??"

"You still don't understand what you need to. Become one with dragoon."

Then Ryuga walked away because he knew that Sakyo would not follow him. He would go to the top of beyblade with takanosuke.

nice chapter

(Nov. 16, 2020  4:57 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 13, 2020  8:44 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: nice chapter

King with Masuname, were planning to join the WORLD BEYBLADE TOURNAMENT! Bladers from all over the world would come and fight. This time, King, Masuname, Ren , and Kenta were all in one team.

"We must win. We need to prove that the Beylin Fist is the best of them all. We will crush Dashan and his team of cockroaches!," said Aguma.

"Yes pal. We will rise to the top of beyblade,"said Bao.

"Hey, focuse more on beyblalde other than your beylin Fist," remarked Kyoya with a annoyed voice.

Kyoya, Bao, Benkei, and Aguma were all in one single, powerful team.

There were 3 more teams. The other team was, Sakyo, Takanosuke, Kite, and Eight.

"Sakyo, we will crush everyone! We will win this championship together and prove that we are the strongest!

"It is a disgrace we have kite and eight in our team," said Sakyo.

Sakyo kept thinking about Ryuga. The way he had said that he needed to be one with Dragoon.

"WHAT?! I am the famous and powerful KITE Unabara. I will show you that soon."

There was one blader, that had denied, to be in any team. He demanded that he could battle in the World Beyblade Championship alone. The people had no choice other than to allow him to do that.

The second team was, Gingka, Zyro, Shinobi, and Kira!

"We will show everyone our burning bey spirit," said Kira

"Of course, we will!", exclaimed Zyro.

Gingka smiled.

Gingka felt something. Something rising from the deeps. He knew something would happen. This is the same feeling when he felt the energy Nemesis Radiated.

But he knew to look at the exciting WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP! Beyblade finally had a new championship. Gingka would win and once again become a blader!

(Nov. 16, 2020  4:59 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  4:57 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: King with Masuname, were planning to join the WORLD BEYBLADE TOURNAMENT! Bladers from all over the world would come and fight. This time, King, Masuname, Ren , and Kenta were all in one team.

"We must win. We need to prove that the Beylin Fist is the best of them all. We will crush Dashan and his team of cockroaches!," said Aguma.

"Yes pal. We will rise to the top of beyblade,"said Bao.

"Hey, focuse more on beyblalde other than your beylin Fist," remarked Kyoya with a annoyed voice.

Kyoya, Bao, Benkei, and Aguma were all in one single, powerful team.

There were 3 more teams. The other team was, Sakyo, Takanosuke, Kite, and Eight.

"Sakyo, we will crush everyone! We will win this championship together and prove that we are the strongest!

"It is a disgrace we have kite and eight in our team," said Sakyo.

Sakyo kept thinking about Ryuga. The way he had said that he needed to be one with Dragoon.

"WHAT?! I am the famous and powerful KITE Unabara. I will show you that soon."

There was one blader, that had denied, to be in any team. He demanded that he could battle in the World Beyblade Championship alone. The people had no choice other than to allow him to do that.

The second team was, Gingka, Zyro, Shinobi, and Kira!

"We will show everyone our burning bey spirit," said Kira

"Of course, we will!", exclaimed Zyro.

Gingka smiled.

Gingka felt something. Something rising from the deeps. He knew something would happen. This is the same feeling when he felt the energy Nemesis Radiated.

But he knew to look at the exciting WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP! Beyblade finally had a new championship. Gingka would win and once again become a blader!

Pretty nice chapter. Also for the 1st team you meant King not Kyoya

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:22 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  4:59 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Pretty nice chapter. Also for the 1st team you meant King not Kyoya

ya. thanks a lot

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:24 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:22 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: ya. thanks a lot

np

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:25 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:24 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: np

any ideas that I can add? ANy bad things i can fix

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:27 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:25 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: any ideas that I can add? ANy bad things i can fix

You should add Team Excalibur for the world championship

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:28 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:27 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: You should add Team Excalibur for the world championship

they would get defeated by every team........they are weak,,,,,....but I might add them

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:28 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:28 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: they would get defeated by every team........they are weak,,,,,....but I might add them

ok. Ooh Ooh! Add Team Starbreaker

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:31 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:28 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: ok. Ooh Ooh! Add Team Starbreaker

idk,,,,,,,,,,I won't because Damian is mentall broken......

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:31 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: idk,,,,,,,,,,I won't because Damian is mentall broken......

But you got Faust there

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:33 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:31 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: But you got Faust there

AH! I have a really good idea now! Thanks a lot,

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:33 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: AH! I have a really good idea now! Thanks a lot,

Np

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Np

who would win, Faust vrs Aiga?

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Np

who would win, Faust vrs Aiga?

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:18 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: who would win, Faust vrs Aiga?

Faust would whoop Aiga in .05 seconds

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:19 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:18 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Faust would whoop Aiga in .05 seconds

yeet I am making a fan fic of shogun steel season 2

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:19 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: yeet I am making a fan fic of shogun steel season 2

Nani?

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Nani?

yes

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:19 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: yeet I am making a fan fic of shogun steel season 2

Nani?

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Gingka: Im the greatest
Everyone else: You wanna say that again
Gingka eats his hamburger

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:52 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Gingka: Im the greatest
Everyone else: You wanna say that again
Gingka eats his hamburger

lol. Imagine if RYuga pops out in the middle