RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 17, 2012
Team Fan!
First romance in the story! (I think)
I LIEK IT!
"NOOOOOOO, Aru!"
I hope Yao survives the blast
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - F.l.A.S.H - Aug. 18, 2012
Team Fan
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - Clefairy - Aug. 18, 2012
Team ANCA! Just like Twilight but instead of two boys it's two girls.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - Dual - Aug. 18, 2012
If i had to choose...Team Anca! Great chapter, cant wait for the next one!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 18, 2012
Welp, I have a karate test today...
I'm still gonna write the chapter.
I don't care how much pain I'll be in later.
As for Yao...
Anyways, here's chapter 26!
Chapter 26 is told from Fan's point of view
Chapter 26:
The New Fire Master
I looked over my shoulder. My father appeared in front of the blast. "Dad!" I shout right as he got blasted in the back. "No!" Everyone screams. My father falls to the ground. I stop and run over to him. "Dad!" I exclaim. I get down to his side. There's a long cut down his back where Anca shot him at. I help him sit up. "This..." He starts. "Is the worst pain... I've ever felt..." I could tell. He was shivering.
Z gets down to his side. "You'll be okay Yao..." He says. My father shakes his head. "I've felt other pain..." He starts. "But this is the worst..." I feel tears forming in my eyes. My father looks up to me. "Don't cry, princess..." He says. I look at him. "But..." I say. He smile and wipes the tears off my cheeks. "Just remember..." He starts. "The sun will always rise again, aru." He takes my hand. I nod.
"I'm always with you." He says. His hand starts going cold. He smiles and falls over in his side. Alfred manages to get over. He feels for a pulse. "He's got a pulse..." He says. "But it's not normal." I get up and look to Anca. "What the hell where you doing?!" I scream at her. She seems to be back to normal.
"I'm sorry!" She says. "Sorry?!" I scream. "You think sorry cuts it?! You almost killed the only person I had left! You should just go back to those people you called friends!" Toris whimpers. I look to him. "Not you Toris..." I say. He smiles and nods. I go back to yelling at Anca. "Just leave!" I yell. I have an orange aura surrounding me. "Just get lost!" I scream. That tears it. I unleash all my power.
"GET AWAY!" I scream. Anca starts crying. "DON'T CRY NOW! YOU'RE WORTHLESS!!!" Someone grabs my arm. I look back to see who it belongs to. It's Z. "Please calm down..." He says. I look back to see my father holding on to Alfred for support. He nods. I look back to Z. He hugs me. I start to calm down.
"Thanks..." I say. Z smiles. "You're welcome." He responds. But then he goes silent and stares at something. I look to the others, who are staring, too. I turn around and see Tat, Saika, and Vash standing with Anca. Tat sneers. I feel the power rising in me again. Feliks, Lilly, Peter, and Toris walk up to us. They power up. Tat laughs.
"Come one more step and he gets it." Tat says. He moves and Ivan is standing behind him. Covered in scars and bruises, but he's still fighting. He smiles. "Hey." He says. I look to Z, who has a white aura surrounding him. Vash smiles. "Power up any more and he gets it." He says and steps away. Shawn is standing there in the same condition as Ivan. He looks up to Z. Z powers down and smiles. "Welcome to the final battle!" Tat says and laughs.
We ready our beys. Vash and Saika ready theirs. Lilly and Feliks step in front of me. "We've got this." They say. "GO SHOOT!" They all call and launch their beys. Golem hits Dragooon and Gryph hits ArchDragon. "Go!" Lilly and Feliks shout. Auras of green, purple, red, and yellow fly everywhere. I look to Anca, who is frowning.
I ready Phoenic. She looks up and readies Vulpimancer. We both launch our beys. They collide and send out blasts of energy. "Go!" We shout. Our beys collide and fly back. Someone puts their hand on my shoulder. I turn to see my father standing there. "You are the new fire master." He says. I nod and turn to Anca. "Time to heat this battle up!" I say. I power up with my orange aura. "Let's go, Phoenic!" I shout.
Alright, it's shorter than normal, but I'm in a lot of pain. I wrote the first chapter before I left and the second half when I got back. I'm in as much pain as poor Yao is now.
Oh, and I thought I'd tell you the reasoning behind some of the character's names:
Alfred: My best friend from school loves this name for some reason. She came up with the character design and name.
Ludwig: I named his after the famous German composer, Ludwig Van Beethoven.
Roderich: A referance to "Republik Österreich", meaning The Republic of Austria.
Elizabeta: An allusion to Empress Elisabeth of Bavaria, who was the Empress of Austria and Queen of Hungary.
Feliciano: The first part of his name, "Felice" means happy one. This has reflected on his attitude.
Lovino: Rovino exists as an Italian word, and derives from a tense of the word "rovinare", which means to "collapse" or to "wreck", thus the name literally means "I ruin". This reflects of him usually not winning in battle.
Yao: Yao litterally translates to "brightly shining", hence him being "Blader of the Sun" and "Master of Fire".
Daiyu: I've already explained her name in my other story. XD
Kiku: His name is an allusion to Nihon-koku meaning "The State of Japan". (His name in it's true form, Honda Kiku)
Ivan: His name comes from Ivan the Terrible or, equally as likely, Ivan The Great. Both are very feared people in Russian history.
Zeit (Z): Zeit litterally means "time" in German.
Peter: His name means rock, but this is a referance to his strength. Plus, he can crack under tons of pressure.
Feliks: This translates to "lucky boy", hence him being lucky enough to escape Poland.
Fan: Her name means "crimson" in Chinese. This is a referance to her being "The New Fire Master" and her being the Protector of Fire.
Spatium (Tat): His name means "Space Corruption" in Greek.
Anca: Her name translates to "talented one" in Romanian. Hence her being able to go out in the sun and be a vampire.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 18, 2012
SO EMOTIONAL!
I really liked this chapter.
Most epic line: "The sun will rise again, aru"
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 26 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 19, 2012
I got excited. XD
Here's the next chapter!
Still told from Fan's P.O.V
Chapter 27:
Fan vs. Anca
"3! 2! 1! GO SHOOT!" Anca and I shouted as we launched our beys. They collided, sending out a burst of energy. My father is standing behind me. "I am the new fire master..." I think. Phoenic is attacking Vulpimancer. "Both beys are attack types..." I think. "Anca relies on Vulpimancer’s speed, as shown in her special move. But why?" Then it hits me. I stare at the tip of Vulpimancer. "LWF!" I think. "Left Wide Flat! The best tip for left-spinning attack types, like Vulpimancer!"
"Go Phoenic!" I shout. Phoenic smashes into Vulpimancer. Anca says nothing and shows no emotion. "She's definitely hiding something..." I think. I see her eyes widen. "Vulpimancer!" She shouts. Vulpimancer blows Phoenic away. Vulpimancer powers up and is surrounded by a blood red aura. "The is revenge for what you said to me!" Anca shouts. "Vulpimancer! Vampire's Rage!"
Phoenic is spinning at my feet. "Uh oh." I say. Vulpimancer starts spinning aura me and Phoenic, draining our energy. It creates a red barrier around us. I fall to my knees and hold my neck. I can't breathe. I look up. Anca throws her head back and laughs. "Stop... It..." I say and black out.
I wake up in a dark void. I sit up and look around. "Am I dead?" I say into the darkness. "No." A familiar voice says. I get up and turn around to see my father. I run up to him and hug him. The cut on his back was gone. "You're healed!" I say. "Not in real life..." He responds. I frown. "Cheer up." He says. I nod.
"I'm here to give you something you should have been given a long time ago." He opens his right hand. Nothing is in it. Then suddenly, a small flame appears. It turns into a fireball. "This is the family power that I was given with when I was born. It's yours now." He says and smiles. I open my hand. He puts it into mine and an orange glow surrounds me, but it then disappears. The flame does, too.
He closes my hand. "Guard this with your life." He says and smiles. I nod. "You are Fan Wang. The Crimson Warrior. Heir to the Wang family power." He says. I nod. "Now go show that Romanian how the Chinese fight." I smile and bow to him. "Thank you, Fire Master." I say. He smiles and pets me on the head. He has an orange aura surround him and then he starts to fade away. "Don't go..." I say, but it's too late.
I open my eyes again and look to Anca. She's still laughing. It's like time didn't pass. My father's words echoed through my head. "The Crimson Warrior." I turned and look to him. He nods. I stand up and unleash the power. It makes the special move stop and I am surrounded by an orange aura. Vulpimancer goes back to Anca's side.
Everyone stops what they are doing and watches us battle. "How?!" Anca exclaims. "My secret." I respond and smile. Phoenic powers up. "GO!" I exclaim. Phoenic smashes into Vulpimancer and pushes it back. "No!" Anca shouts. Vulpimancer powers up and pushes Phoenic back.
Both of us are surrounded by are auras. Our beys are clashing and smashing into each other. Vulpimancer pushes Phoenic back more. "NOW!" Anca shouts. Vulpimancer pushes up and sends Phoenic flying. Everyone gasps. "Ha! You lost!" Anca says and laughs. "Not so fast!" I shout. "Huh!?" Anca exclaims. "Phoenic is still spinning!" She looks up and Phoenic is floating in the air. "How!?" She exclaims.
"That's a secret, too!" I say and smile. "Now!" I shout. I take a fighting stance and do a spinning tornado kick. I land on my feet and put my hand to the air. "Special Move!" I shout. "Flaming Destroyer!" An orange flame appears in my hand. Phoenic sets on fire and comes down. I throw the fire at Phoenic and she powers up even more. "NO!" Anca screams. "Vampire's Rage!" Vulpimancer powers up, but it's too late. Phoenic smashes right onto of Vulpimancer.
A burst of energy is sent out. Both of us are sent into the black void. "Where am I?!" Anca exclaims while franticly looking around. "It doesn't matter." I say. She looks to me with cold eyes. I walk up to her and put my hand out. "I'm sorry." I say. She stares at my hand. "I never act like that... What happened just got me so mad... I knew you didn't mean it." I say. Anca looks to me.
"Are you serious?" She asks. "Huh?" I ask. "After everything I did to you..." She starts. "You still want to be my friend?" I nod and smile. "I'm forgiving." I say. Anca smiles. "We friends?" I ask. She nods and shakes my hand. We go back to the regular world and are standing above our beys, still shaking hands.
I look down to see Phoenic still spinning, but Vulpimancer is smashed into the ground. Anca gets down on her knees and picks up Vulpimancer. "Thanks Fan." She says. "And thank you, Vulpimancer." I smile. I catch Phoenic and smoke comes out of my hand. I look down to Phoenic. "Thank you, Phoenic." I think. I turn to Z and my father. My father winks. "It's your turn, Z." I say. We look to Tat. The look in his eyes was unforgettable. "Bring it on, Tat!" Z shouts.
This had to be the most epyk battle I have ever typed. That and Shawn vs Ivan. And some other ones. But this one makes the top. XD Anyways, I hope you guys liked this chapter!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 27 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 19, 2012
@Post #155 No love for Saika?
Anyways, great chapter, I couldn't read 26/7 until now because when it was released, I was at a Vanguard tournament.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 27 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 20, 2012
Sorry for no chapter yesterday! I was stuck in my bed. :\ I hate getting hurt. Anyways, here's chapter 28!
Chapter 28 is told from Feliks' point of view.
Chapter 28:
Earth and Wind
I stood there watching Fan's battle. "Wow..." I mumbled as the battle came to an end. I turned back to Saika and Vash. I look to Lilly and she nods. "Go!" We both shout. Our beys collide with theirs. Our beys get sent flying. "Golem!" I shout. "Gryph!" Lilly shouts. Both beys come back down. Golem smashes into Dragooon. Gryph smashes into ArchDragon. Vash and Saika look at each other. They then burst out laughing.
"Dragooon!" Vash calls. "ArchDragon!" Saika calls. Their beys send out bursts of energy and we get sent flying. Saika laughs. "Let's play a game of toss the weaklings!" He says. "Five points to both of us!" Vash laughs and nods. Lilly and I get up and brush our clothes off. We walk back over. Our beys are still spinning at full speed.
"Go!" We both shout. Our beys attack theirs, but they don't budge an inch. "You're getting annoying." Saika says. "Let's finish you off." ArchDragon is surrounded by a black aura, and so is Saika. "Special Move!" He calls. "Endless Darkness!" A huge dragon comes out of ArchDragon. It roars and shoots black flames at me. "Golem!" I shout. A huge Golem warrior appears and protects me from the move.
The move is canceled out and both beasts disappear. Both beys are still spinning strongly. "Damn!" Saika exclaims. Vash steps in front of him. "My turn!" He says. "Special Move!" He calls. Both him and Dragooon are surrounded by a yellow aura. "Dark Knight Crusher!" An armored dragon appears and roars. It sends out shocks of lightning that come straight for me.
"Gryph!" Lilly calls. Gryph comes right between Golem and Dragooon. "No!" I shout. Lilly doesn't budge. "Special Move!" She shouts. "Tornado Clawing Assault!" I see Gryph's C145 track activate and send out it's claws. A huge tornado bursts out of nowhere and blocks the special move. "Nice!" I tell Lilly. She nods. "Thanks." She says then turns back to the battle. "Gryph!" She shouts. Gryph sends the tornado at ArchDragon and Dragooon. Both beys are swallowed up and thrown into the air.
Saika and Vash laugh. The winds clear and both beys are floating in mid-air. "How?!" Lilly exclaims. My mouth hangs open. "Fools!" Saika says. "You've fallen for our trap!" Both beys power up. "Double Special Move!" Vash and Saika shout. "Ultimate Raging Dragon Assault!" Both beys are surrounded by their auras. Darkness has surrounded ArchDragon. Lightning has surrounded Dragooon. They both come down and land a hit on our beys. It sends out a blast of energy and Lilly and I go flying.
"Lilly!" Peter shouts. "Feliks!" Toris shouts. Everything happens in what seems like slow motion. I fly through the air and see Saika and Vash laughing their butts off. That tears it. I feel rage rising in me. I land on my feet and catch Lilly. I set her down. I then look to Saika and Vash. "That's it!" I shout. They stop laughing and stare at me. "I can't take it anymore! You call us weak! You call us by the sins! You are wrong!" I stomp my foot and something magical happens.
The earth shoots up and sends Vash and Saika flying. They land on their backs. "GOLEM!" I shout. "SPECIAL MOVE!" Golem is surrounded by a light green aura. "EARTHERN SMASH!" The ground shook under Golem. It started cracking. The cracks headed straight for ArchDragon and Dragooon. A huge Golem warrior arrises from the cracks and slams his axe down on both beys, crushing them. A huge light fills the surrounding area.
The light dies down. Only one bey is still spinning. It's Golem. Gryph had been knocked out by Saika and Vash's special move. Lilly picked up Gryph and runs over to me. "That was awesome!" She says as I catch Golem. Vash and Saika get up. Tat looks to them. "You two have failed me for the last time!" He says. He readies Astron and launches it. "No!" Saika shouts. They start running, but it's too late. "ASTRON!" Tat shouts. Astron shoots out a blast of energy that hits both of them and drains their energy. They fall to the ground, dead.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 20, 2012
Dead? Woah, that's deep stuff.
Kewl Chapter
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012
You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!
You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 12:21 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!
You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD
Heck yeah, your work is better than some books I've read. And I'm probably going to call you that all the time. ( I probably will, Bey K. Rowling.)
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 12:26 AM)Akio314 Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 12:21 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!
You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD
Heck yeah, your work is better than some books I've read. And I'm probably every time post as a reply to you're posts ( I probably will, Bey K. Rowling.)
"I see what you did there."
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012
Bad pun, eh (I'm a stereotypical Canadian) I posted that nickname on my new story.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - Ezik²#5# - Aug. 21, 2012
Dude I'm sorry actually I want to vote the second option but before I want to Vote it my connection was error and I don't know what's happened to my computer after refreshed it I Voted for the last option sorry!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 21, 2012
"Astron shoots out a blast of energy that hits both of them and drains their energy. They fall to the ground, dead."
Ahh, you kept your promise, I commend you for that. But you put in in a way similar to "I sent them to the Shadow Realm!", more than "ripped him to pieces with my bey."
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
Welp, I'm going on vacation tomorrow, so...
I thought I'd get in the next two chapters early. Please post after this one. XD
Anyways, here it is! Chapter 29!
Chapter 29:
Orojya vs. Astron
I watched Saika and Vash fall to the ground. I looked to Elizabeta and Roderich. Elizabeta was buried in Roderich's chest, crying. Roderich held her but tried holding in his emotions. I looked to Lilly. She was stunned. "Big brother..." She said. She took a few steps up to his dead body. Tat smirked. "Astron." He said. "Get her." Astron glowed with a dark blue aura and then shot at Lilly. "Lilly!" Peter shouted. She looked up and saw the bey flying at her. She screamed, but someone shot in their bey and smacked Astron away.
It was Orojya. We all stepped away. Peter stepped up. "Peter..." I say. "Be careful." He looks back and nods. He then turns back to Tat. "Don't you ever try to hurt Lilly." He says. Orojya comes back to his side. I look across to where Ivan and my father were sitting. My father looks up to me. He smiles. I smile back and then look back to Peter, who is about to start battling with Tat.
"Bring it on, Tat!" He says. "Weak." Tat responds. Both beys clash. Orojya gets thrown back. "Again!" Peter shouts. Orojya attacks again, but Orojya is still thrown back. Tat laughs. Astron sends out a blast of energy and Peter is thrown back. Tat laughs even harder. "You little fool!" He says to Peter. "Challenging me! You're weak! I don't know how you managed to beat Saika!" Peter sits up and gets up. "I won because I don't give up." Peter says. "OROJYA!" He shouts.
Orojya powers up and heads full-speed at Astron. Orojya starts pushing Astron back. "GO!" Peter shouts. "Weak." Tat says. Astron blasts Orojya back. This causes a gust of wind to throw Peter back. He lands on his back and lays there. "Peter!" I shout. "Get up, Peter!" Alfred shouts. Peter just lays there. Tat laughs. "Why don't you give up! Like your dad did to the darkness!" I look up to Alfred. He growls.
I can tell that's it for Peter. Peter gets up and is surrounded by a blue aura. "NEVER SAY THAT!" Peter shouts. "You're dad's weak." Tat says with a smile. "THAT'S IT." Peter shouts. Orojya powers up. Peter powers up. "OROJYA!" He shouts. I've never seen Peter this mad. Tat looks concerned for his safety.
"SPECIAL MOVE!" Peter shouts. Orojya is surrounded by water. "OCEAN BLADE CRUSHER!" Water starts forming around Orojya. Soon, and ocean forms and swallows up Astron. "Yeah!" Peter shouts. Tat smirks. "Not so fast." He says. Astron busts out of the water. "Oh no." Peter says. "Special Move!" Tat shouts. Astron is surrounded by a blue aura. A black hole begins to form under Peter and Orojya.
"Space Corruption Blaster!" Tat shouts. "Peter!" We all shout. Then suddenly, someone jumps in and saves Peter. It's Anca. She takes the blast for Peter and her new arm shatters. "Anca!" We all shout. Peter looks up from where he landed. "No!" He shouts and puts his hand out. But it's too late. The ocean fades away. Orojya stops spinning. Anca falls to her knees and then to the ground.
Peter gets up. Me and him run over to her. "Anca!" I say. She smiles. "That was for Peter saving me from what Saika did..." She mumbles. "Thanks..." She says and shuts her eyes. I feel tears forming in my eyes. She's gone.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Bladerstormybob - Aug. 21, 2012
Why so many deaths? Not to mention Saika cursing! Also, how old is Z in this story?
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
This story got 5x more mature, awwww yeah
I should start writing again...
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 21, 2012
"her new arm shatters"
Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood Lan Fan reference?
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 22, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:48 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: "her new arm shatters"
Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood Lan Fan reference?
.....
Possibly.
No, it isn't. I swear. Lol.
I thought I'd give you a preview of the next story's characters.
Name: Louis Bonnefoy
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Beyblade: MF-H Duo Lynx 230MB
Special Move: Mega Claw Slicing Assault
Appearance: He has shoulder-length, platnum blonde hair, pulled back into a pony tail and sparkling blue eyes. He wears a with dress shirt with the buttons undone, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes.
Personality: He's a layed back person who enjoys Beyblade, school, hanging with friends, cooking, and painting. He is a big fan of cats. He is the best in New Orleans and the best in Louisianna. He is the coolest kid in school and is a straight A student. He even battled the famous Z Faircloth and almost won.
Country: America
Name: Francis Bonnefoy
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Beyblade: MF-H Phantom Wolf 145WD
Special Move: Darkness Destruction Blast
Appearance: He has shoulder-length blond hair and deep blue eyes. He wears a long blue coat and matching capelet, red pants, and brown boots. He also carries around a rose in his hand. (He throws this into the air when he readies Wolf.)
Personality: He's a very flirtatious person, who enjoys Beyblade, letting the power go to his head, winning in battle, being rich, being around girls, and playing outside. He has a very small temper for new bladers. He gets ticked off easily. He has to have other people do his things for him.
Country: France
Name: Im "Iggy" Yong Soo
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Beyblade: MF Flash Crown CH120R2F
Special Move: Crimson Blaze
Appearance: He has short black-brown hair, with a flyaway curl on the right side of his head, and brown eyes. Inside the curl is a little face. He says it represents his "Korean Spirit". (He swears it talks to him.) He wears a black and white stripped tank top, a black "Michael Jackson type" of jacket, black jeans, and black converses.
Personality: He is a typical class clown. He loves Beyblade, claiming that everything originated in Korea, pranking his friends, annoying the teachers, and singing. He loves to teach new bladers the ropes. He is Louis' best friend. He is a "goofy goober". (He claims Spongebob is from Korea.)
Country: South Korea
I hope you like these guys!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 26, 2012
I am back from vacation!
But school starts tomorrow...
Expect chapters after 3:00 pm EST.
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - wtater888 - Aug. 27, 2012
Can't wait!!!!!
RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 31, 2012
Whew! It's been awhile! Sorry guys! I've started school and I'm on the track team (I do shockput, discus, and hammer throw. I'm the strongest. ). Anyways, here's the next chapter!
Chapter 30:
Toris' Final Stand
I held a cold Anca in my arms. I feel tears streaming down my cheeks. Someone comes up behind me. I look up to see Toris. He looks terrified. His eyes start filling with tears. "Is she really gone?" He asks. I nod. He flinches. Tears start pouring down from his eyes. "She.... She can't be!" He says. He gets down on his knees. His puts his hand to her cheek. "Cold..." He mumbles. He gets up and looks to Tat.
"You insane murderer!" He shouts. Tat smiles. "You killed the person who was like a sister to me!" A dark aura surrounds Toris. Peter runs to him and grabs his shoulder. "No Toris!" He says. Toris yanks away his shoulder. "Get away!" Toris shouts. Peter backs up. Toris growls and the aura gets bigger. He readies Akuma.
"I'll get back at you for Anca!" He shouts. I look to my father. He hides his face. I then look to Ivan, who has a funny expression on his face. No clue why. I go back to the battle that's about to commence. Astron is still spinning. "GO SHOOT!" Toris shouts and launches his bey. Akuma smashes right into Astron and pushes it back. Tat then looks concerned. "AKUMA!" Toris shouts as Akuma powers up.
They clash several times. "Ugh! I can't take wimps toda-" "THAT. IS. IT!" Toris shouts, cutting off Tat. Tat looks scared. "I AM FRICKING TIRED OF YOU. YOU... INSANE LITTLE.... UGH I CAN'T SAY THAT WORD." Toris shouts. I've never seen him like this. "Why..." I think. "Is he acting that way?!" Toris takes off his jacket and undershirt. Long scars cover his back. He turns his back towards Tat.
"YOU SEE THESE SCARS!?" He asks. "IT'S YOUR FRICKING FAULT!!!" He turns back around. "YOU TOOK MY DREAMS AND CRUSHED THEM!!! I HATE YOU!!!" Tat backs away. Toris puts his hands together. A deep green orb forms between them. Tat looks scared for a second, but then retaliates. Astron is surrounded by a black aura. "SPECIAL MOVE!" Toris shouts. "POISON GENOCIDE!"
He launches the orb at Akuma. Akuma absorbs it and heads straight for Astron. "SPECIAL MOVE!" Tat shouts. "SPACE CORRUPTION BLASTER!" Both beys collide and a burst of energy is sent out. It swallows Toris. It then clears and Toris falls to his knees. I run over. "TORIS!" I shout. "Crushed... Dreams..." He mumbles. He then closes his eyes. He's gone, too.
"TAT!" I scream and stand up. "I'LL DESTROY YOU!" Tat smiles. "Are you sure you'll kill me?" He asks. "I'll kill you first. But I may not be the one to kill you." I take a step back. "What?!" I exclaim. Then suddenly, Ivan jumps over Tat, knife in hand, insane look on his face. He lands behind me and puts the knife to my neck. He forces me to turn to my friends. "Take one step, and the boy's dead." He says. Fan starts crying. Everyone gasps. Ivan laughs. Then I suddenly feel a stinging in my neck and everything goes black.
I realize this is kinda short... :\
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