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RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 17, 2012

Team Fan!
First romance in the story! (I think)
I LIEK IT!
"NOOOOOOO, Aru!"
I hope Yao survives the blast Unhappy


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - F.l.A.S.H - Aug. 18, 2012

Team Fan


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - Clefairy - Aug. 18, 2012

Team ANCA! Just like Twilight but instead of two boys it's two girls.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - Dual - Aug. 18, 2012

If i had to choose...Team Anca! Great chapter, cant wait for the next one!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 18, 2012

Welp, I have a karate test today...
I'm still gonna write the chapter.
I don't care how much pain I'll be in later.
As for Yao...
Anyways, here's chapter 26!

Chapter 26 is told from Fan's point of view
Chapter 26:

Alright, it's shorter than normal, but I'm in a lot of pain. I wrote the first chapter before I left and the second half when I got back. I'm in as much pain as poor Yao is now.
Oh, and I thought I'd tell you the reasoning behind some of the character's names:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 25 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 18, 2012

SO EMOTIONAL!
I really liked this chapter.
Most epic line: "The sun will rise again, aru"


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 26 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 19, 2012

I got excited. XD
Here's the next chapter!

Still told from Fan's P.O.V
Chapter 27:

This had to be the most epyk battle I have ever typed. That and Shawn vs Ivan. And some other ones. But this one makes the top. XD Anyways, I hope you guys liked this chapter!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 27 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 19, 2012

@Post #155 No love for Saika?

Anyways, great chapter, I couldn't read 26/7 until now because when it was released, I was at a Vanguard tournament.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 27 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 20, 2012

Sorry for no chapter yesterday! I was stuck in my bed. :\ I hate getting hurt. Anyways, here's chapter 28!

Chapter 28 is told from Feliks' point of view.
Chapter 28:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - King of Misfits - Aug. 20, 2012

Dead? Woah, that's deep stuff.
Kewl Chapter


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012

You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012

(Aug. 21, 2012  12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!

You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012

(Aug. 21, 2012  12:21 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Aug. 21, 2012  12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!

You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD

Heck yeah, your work is better than some books I've read. And I'm probably going to call you that all the time. ( I probably will, Bey K. Rowling.)


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012

(Aug. 21, 2012  12:26 AM)Akio314 Wrote:
(Aug. 21, 2012  12:21 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Aug. 21, 2012  12:10 AM)Akio314 Wrote: You are like the J.K. Rowling of beyblade, Bey K. Rowling. Hahaha!

You think so? She's one of my "idol writers" XD

Heck yeah, your work is better than some books I've read. And I'm probably every time post as a reply to you're posts ( I probably will, Bey K. Rowling.)

"I see what you did there."



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - akio314 - Aug. 21, 2012

Bad pun, eh (I'm a stereotypical Canadian) I posted that nickname on my new story.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - Ezik²#5# - Aug. 21, 2012

Dude I'm sorry actually I want to vote the second option but before I want to Vote it my connection was error and I don't know what's happened to my computer after refreshed it I Voted for the last option sorry!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 21, 2012

"Astron shoots out a blast of energy that hits both of them and drains their energy. They fall to the ground, dead."

Ahh, you kept your promise, I commend you for that. But you put in in a way similar to "I sent them to the Shadow Realm!", more than "ripped him to pieces with my bey."


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 28 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012

Welp, I'm going on vacation tomorrow, so...
I thought I'd get in the next two chapters early. Please post after this one. XD
Anyways, here it is! Chapter 29!

Chapter 29:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Bladerstormybob - Aug. 21, 2012

Why so many deaths? Not to mention Saika cursing! Also, how old is Z in this story?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012

This story got 5x more mature, awwww yeah


I should start writing again...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - Hitsugiya - Aug. 21, 2012

"her new arm shatters"

Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood Lan Fan reference?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 22, 2012

(Aug. 21, 2012  11:48 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: "her new arm shatters"

Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood Lan Fan reference?

.....
Possibly.
No, it isn't. I swear. Lol.

I thought I'd give you a preview of the next story's characters. Cute
I hope you like these guys! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 26, 2012

I am back from vacation!
But school starts tomorrow...
Expect chapters after 3:00 pm EST.
Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - wtater888 - Aug. 27, 2012

Can't wait!!!!!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Ch 29 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 31, 2012

Whew! It's been awhile! Sorry guys! I've started school and I'm on the track team (I do shockput, discus, and hammer throw. I'm the strongest. Cute). Anyways, here's the next chapter! Grin

Chapter 30:
I realize this is kinda short... :\