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RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 30 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 10, 2012

Double post. Sorry. I'm sad to say that I will be closing this story for a bit. Those bullies have gotten to me, yet again. They've pushed me back into depression. I'm sorry guys. Confusedmith:


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Closed) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 10, 2012

Damn. Am I gonna have to run up to Hope Mills and actually tell these people to back off?


Sure feels like it...


I just want to see this story finish. It's come so far, and the bullies are ruining it! Angry


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Closed) - King of Misfits - Jul. 11, 2012

And I reallywanted to see the USA vs Russia battle...
But! More importantly...
WHY WON'T THESE CARPIN DERPS BACK OFF!!!!!!
* Super Saiyan Mode*
I will put an end to this...
nuff' said


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Closed) - *Converse* - Jul. 13, 2012

Man, do i need to call ghost rider and burn the freakin carp out of those bullies???!!!!

What a Drag......

but nice story so far...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Closed) - F.l.A.S.H - Jul. 13, 2012

Frickin Awesome!
I can't wait for the next chapter


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Closed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 13, 2012

I'm back guys! I had a crazy time at my grandma's, lol. I couldn't write on my laptop. Unhappy Anyways, here's the next chapter:

Chapter 31:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 30 Added) - Clefairy - Jul. 13, 2012

(Jul. 06, 2012  8:57 PM)Emperor Wrote: Epic chapter 31! GO JAKE! So like when USA wins... Or lose, that's the end of this story? Maybe a sequel? And those guys, GRRRR. Why you? You don't deserve to be treated like that. I want to read more of this story and if they do it again, I'll just want to punch them! Well great job!


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RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (I'm Back!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 15, 2012

Hey guys! Sorry for the lack of chapters! Chapter 32 shoud be up later today or early tomorrow! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (I'm Back!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 16, 2012

Double post. Sorry. Lol, I thought I'd give you a preveiw my next story's main characters:


So that's basiclly the good guys. I'm coming up with the bad guys, as I type this. I hope you guys are excited! Grin
P.S. They use Zero G beys! This is based years after the World Championships! Grin


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (I'm Back!) - Duck - Jul. 17, 2012

Wow, this story was amazing! A lot has happened since I left for California! I can't wait for the next story! Clockwork Tempus? That is just too amazing...!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (I'm Back!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 17, 2012

Sorry for the lack of chapters! Unhappy Anyways, here's chapter 32!

Chapter 32:

[Edit] Post your favorite character! I'd love to know! Mine is Shawn, of course. Then Yao, Alfred, Karan, and Roderich. XD

[Edit 2} I've come up with some of the villans for my next story! My friend is coming up with the main villan, so he's not listed at the moment. Sorry about that. Anyways, here they are!



RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 17, 2012

I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - King of Misfits - Jul. 17, 2012

Nooooooooooo!
Not Karan!
Shawn will kick your butt Jake.
Great Chapter!
Alfred is my favorite


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 17, 2012

(Jul. 17, 2012  12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???

He was dragged to hell. Sadly.

(Jul. 17, 2012  12:17 PM)Death Bro Wrote: Nooooooooooo!
Not Karan!
Shawn will kick your butt Jake.
Great Chapter!
Alfred is my favorite

Thanks and I like Alfred A LOT. My best friend inspired me to make him. So he's baised off of him. XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 17, 2012

(Jul. 17, 2012  12:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2012  12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???

He was dragged to hell. Sadly.

Oh, I know he's coming back, otherwise you wouldn't have given me his character to use for my story! XD

But I like that concept of that. Makes it suspenseful, and surprisingly realistic! Good idea!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 17, 2012

(Jul. 17, 2012  12:29 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2012  12:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2012  12:16 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I liked pretty much the entire Chinese team, TBH... And i liked Chapter 32 by the way! Whoa, what the hell happened to Karan???

He was dragged to hell. Sadly.

Oh, I know he's coming back, otherwise you wouldn't have given me his character to use for my story! XD

But I like that concept of that. Makes it suspenseful, and surprisingly realistic! Good idea!

Yup! And thanks! Oh, how do you like the new villans? Smile


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 17, 2012

I favor Anca over Vash right now...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 17, 2012

(Jul. 17, 2012  1:00 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I favor Anca over Vash right now...

Same. I forgot she was inspired by my 6th grade reading teacher. She was from Romania and everyone thought she was a vampire. XD


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - Clefairy - Jul. 17, 2012

Pretty epic. And isn't the Gate of Hades an illusion? My favorite chapter is eith Chapter 32/33 even though it hasn't come out yet!


(Jul. 17, 2012  12:17 PM)Death Bro Wrote: Nooooooooooo!
Not Karan!
Jake will kick your butt Shawn
Great Chapter!
Alfred is my favorite

lol. No. Jake. Will. Rise.

Not really...


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - Bladerstormybob - Jul. 18, 2012

It's awesome! For the final battle (Ivan vs. Shawn), I think Ivan should be the one who wins. Everyone goes home, and Karan and the others who "died" were just in a coma. Shawn keep blaming himself for losing, and thinks Taylor wants to dump him. That's why he keeps denying her calls thinking it ws to break up. Taylor finally leaves him a voice mail saying that even though he lost, she knows he did his best, and says she still loves him. The final battle should be 2 chapters long and the part about going home and Shawn blaming himself and all the phone calls should be the Epilogue.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 18, 2012

(Jul. 18, 2012  6:40 AM)Stormybob Wrote: It's awesome! For the final battle (Ivan vs. Shawn), I think Ivan should be the one who wins. Everyone goes home, and Karan and the others who "died" were just in a coma. Shawn keep blaming himself for losing, and thinks Taylor wants to dump him. That's why he keeps denying her calls thinking it ws to break up. Taylor finally leaves him a voice mail saying that even though he lost, she knows he did his best, and says she still loves him. The final battle should be 2 chapters long and the part about going home and Shawn blaming himself and all the phone calls should be the Epilogue.

While that might sound like a good idea, you really should take that to PM's, because people might disagree...

Also, the creator might have different plans...

But good thought though!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 18, 2012

(Jul. 18, 2012  12:57 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote:
(Jul. 18, 2012  6:40 AM)Stormybob Wrote: It's awesome! For the final battle (Ivan vs. Shawn), I think Ivan should be the one who wins. Everyone goes home, and Karan and the others who "died" were just in a coma. Shawn keep blaming himself for losing, and thinks Taylor wants to dump him. That's why he keeps denying her calls thinking it ws to break up. Taylor finally leaves him a voice mail saying that even though he lost, she knows he did his best, and says she still loves him. The final battle should be 2 chapters long and the part about going home and Shawn blaming himself and all the phone calls should be the Epilogue.

While that might sound like a good idea, you really should take that to PM's, because people might disagree...

Also, the creator might have different plans...

But good thought though!
I like his idea, but I have other plans...

BIG plans...




RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 18, 2012

Double post... Oops. Anyways, here's chapter 33!
(Told from Karan's point of view)

Chapter 33:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 32 Added) - DefStamina88 - Jul. 18, 2012

Oh damn, everything just got serious!

LOVED that chapter!!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: Through Out The World! (Chapter 33 Added) - King of Misfits - Jul. 18, 2012

Brofist?
Hahahaha
Power of Bro
Super EPIC chapter
And Brotastic